pife1 wrote:

Hi:
I hope my coordinates will be useful
In the Hard
00:25:506 (9) - New Combo
00:48:411 (1) - Move to X:200 Y:296
00:48:560 (2) - ^ X:172 Y:277
00:48:709 (3) - ^ X: 148 y: 252
00:48:857 (4) - ^ x: 126 y: 226
00:49:006 (5) - ^ x: 103 y: 199
00:49:155 (6) - ^ x: 108 y: 165
00:49:303 (7) - ^ x: 118 y: 132
00:49:452 (8) - ^ x: 135 y: 100
00:49:601 (9) - ^ x: 154 y: 71
01:07:449 (1) - ^ x: 176 y: 104
01:07:598 (2) - ^ x: 204 y: 83
01:07:747 (3) - ^ x: 235 y: 63
01:07:895 (4) - ^ x: 270 y: 53
01:08:044 (5) - ^ x: 305 y: 57
01:08:193 (6) - ^ x: 337 y: 71
01:08:342 (7) - ^ x: 366 y: 97
01:08:490 (8) - ^ x: 389 y: 124
01:08:639 (9) - ^ x: 413 y: 150

Great song

Dat Leper wrote:

Easy

00:37:107 - The big slider look good, but makes the rythm feels empty, i suggest this | I agree the rhythm is strange, I was trying to follow the vocals properly here because of the delayed voice, but in all honesty, it plays much better like you suggested.
02:18:842 - ^ Same here, big slider lacks rythm, i suggest this | Fixed, but in my own way. thanks.
02:21:222 - Add note ? | Nah, I like the space here. gives the 1/1 spam some breathing room.

Normal

00:26:398 (2,3) - Move a little to the left (just a little, like 1 grid) | sure
00:29:075 (2,3,4) - Remove clap, they sound terrible here | lowered the volume of these
00:31:753 (3) - Make it like this: and add a clap at 00:32:348 - | Not sure what you wanted me to do, but I prefer the long slider here and at the next point, because it fits.
00:34:132 (4) - ^ Same here, it feels better | ^

Hard

Im not really good at modding hards/insanes, since i have not too much experience yet, but heres something i could suggest:

00:48:411 - 00:49:601 - There are too much streams of this type on the map, why dont you change some of them for something like this | I use those reverse sliders later on in the song a couple times, no change at the moment here, thanks though.


That's all I could mod excuse me if im not that useful to you, but im on my way to become a good mapper/mod

Good luck with your map, good song

sekai-san wrote:

Hi! from my queue.

[General]
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 seconds here 00:11:525 - | These are fine as is, they actually last just under 15 seconds. This is here really just to prevent fountain spamming, but its not an unrankable issue.
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 seconds here 02:49:779 -
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 seconds here 03:08:817 -
Audio bit rate is larger than 192kbps or less than 128kbps. yup, I'm using 320kbs to be able to hear the music properly and be able to catch each drum hit as it comes. I will convert this later

[Easy]
Bcause it's easy diff, consider changing some of the sliders shapes. Easy diff is all about crazy and unique sliders though actually
02:04:266 (3) -Like here. I've done minor adjusting to all of these. Should be better
02:00:994 (1) - ^
02:44:424 (4) - ^
01:59:507 (3) - Align this with 2. Changed the sliders around
Consider elevating the volume of some notes. some notes may need minor tweaks, but I'm overall happy with the sound effects as I use full 100% volume 100% effects so it balances out.
Consider adding a break in some place. One break for a second is good enough in the middle. there isn't really anywhere else to break in this song.

[Normal]
AR : -1 I personally like the 454 system for normals since I use 676 for hard and 232 for easy. this just hits the middle point.
00:09:740 (2) - Align with 1. made changes to this area.
00:31:753 (3) - This look weird. 2nd complaint, changed.
02:49:481 - Why isn't here Kiai time? This is to make the fountain burst again, however, I put this 1/4 to far back so I changed
03:08:668 - ^ working as intended here.

[Hard]
00:54:063 (3) - Looks weird. I personally like this, it follows the vocals visually here XD
Not big problems found.
Try to split the 10 combo into 5 combo. no combo really goes above 13-14 which is about right for a Hard/insane diff, so unless people have some more suggestions for it. I'll leave as is.


I didn't find big problems.
It's a good song, I haven't listened to to in English. Thanks
Good luck and thanks for the mod I disn't expect that. (:

Heanday wrote:

Hi Tuturn !

General : Awesome work on hitsound è.è, i'll just have one tips for improve it. You never used " Whistle ". I have an idea where you can use it. 00:53:766 (6) - sonds like that came many time in this song.
I found this one who fits http://puu.sh/3TIpu.wav ( He is a bit loud but, well this is an idea, if you can reduce volume of this whistle, it can be funny ! )
Well if you like this idea, just try to found one who fits more, or - loud with me ._. umm.. maybe it'll work.. I'm not 100% sure yet, I'll look into this later.

[Easy]

General :

Maybe break more ? [/color]
Delete useless green line ? :d [/color]

01:03:880 (1) - Spinner ? And end it here 01:08:639 (5) - ( I know you don't like spinner but ... I think it fits, to put spinner before kiai time ) nope.. I don't like the idea of a spinner here
01:44:931 (4) - What about curve this one for symetry between the previous 2 & 3 ? changed some stuff around
01:50:285 (3) - Uhh this slid is ugly imo, can you just creates a better curve ? mk
02:05:754 (1) - remove clap early slid ? nah, I like the clap on this

Nice nice nice !

[Normal]

General : Fine [/color]


01:13:399 (1) - http://puu.sh/3TIZq.jpg and it ends up being the biggest edit to all my maps lol

Well, nothing to say ~~ sounds perfect !

[Hard]

General : I think you must more, when i played it, it was a bit unconfortable to play, here 00:30:265 (8,9) - or here 01:27:380 (8,9,10) - After long stream, i suggest to stack some circle for player recover [/color]


00:31:753 (3,4) - Blanket ! Blanket!
01:45:228 (3,4,5) - Bad flow ! Try to change it ? well.. I can try. I tried something new that I'm not used to doing XD
02:10:216 (1) - End revers finish too loud ! Cover your ears then! reduced volume.
02:25:684 (1) - I'll suggest to NC, more easy to read nah, the song is easy enough as is.
02:46:804 (4) - x92 y364 ? then stack 02:47:399 (1) - with the previous circle 2 ? I like it how it is. but I made a change with the postion of the next slider

That's all AWESOME MAP !

R e d wrote:

Great map and want this ranked
I even had some fun modding it,(watching the video at the background ground is cool) xD

But actually, There is a "no video" link download in the map page. :\ (dunno if its a bug or something but you must have that)

[Easy]

00:06:765 - add circle? Looks like a high note there, also i think helps the flow and makes it less boring. hmm don't see a reason to change this. Plays fine and looks fine.

00:09:145 (1,2) - replace this with a slider? Since voice start 00:10:335 (3) , have some difference in "circles" looks great to me Sure.

01:50:285 (1) - I would put a new combo here just for this slider, same for 02:29:551 (1) , and others diffs. But just my opinion and style. (YOu in hard diff make a NC just for that part..so) Did some NC stuff on my own. I'd rather stick to measure comboing than vocal comboing.

00:51:386 (3) - symetric with 00:50:196 (1) ? eh.. I guess. changed

01:20:241 (3) - make this slider better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1031286 Straightened it out

[Normal]

00:06:468 (3) - move to x:280 y:236 Makes spacing more neat between 00:06:468 (3) and 00:06:765 (1) Whoops.. dunno how that got so off. fixed.

00:25:208 (7) - New combo here?? why? You follow the voice almost everytime, fits better you NC style and makes consistency with the other diffs. As I mentioned in the other NC comment

02:00:994 (2) - Make the NC start here, why? Cuz you dont make that in the others same situations the the whole song. Example: 01:18:158 (1).
Also you have the higher note in 02:00:994 (2) with a whitebig tick. Special thing here, Hard does this as well. just to seperate the triple finish part here from the rest of the song. Leaving as is


[Hard]
Seems really grat to me

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi there! This is a placeholder for a mod so I can remember :3



[General thoughts]

1. Well, I'm not an expert at this but shouldn't you have widescreen support on? Not sure ._. I mentioned this above, because of the 4:3 pictures I used and zooming too much would ruin the quality a ton.
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: Fixed thanks. somehow my normal missed the last kiai fountain. There is probably a good chance I accidentally deleted it when I was playing with hitsounds last week.

[Easy]

1. 00:16:284 (1) - I think here's a small distance problem? Also, if you would make the slider more curvy it would fit better :3 Changed quite a bit here. Some shapes and all that. Should look much better now.
2. 00:51:981 (4) - Have you ever thought about doing it like this? It would make a cool blanket between 00:51:386 (3,4) - and it would fit your style well! Made some changes around this point as well. a few more return circles which should look better
3. 01:34:817 (2) - Move this sliders end few grids down to make a better blanket! Fixed this, thanks.
4. 02:33:418 (3) - How's this? it does look nice, but I wanted to somewhat try to follow the idea of 02:29:551 (5,1) - although it didn't end up. I tried shifting this around a bit more. Should be better.
5. 02:30:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is quite long compared to your other ones, I'd recommend NC'ing somewhere 02:36:392 (5) - here. oh. Yeah definitely. I NC'd at the lead-in parts such as "All the times" and "We will go"
6. 02:44:424 (4) - You should add a NC here since you added a NC 01:22:323 (1) - too? Yes, I fixed this with the mod just above this.
7. Well done! Thank you

[Normal]

1. 00:17:177 (2) - I was thinking something like this, what do you like?
   If you apply this you would need to fix some spacing erros with the next objects but it shouldn't be a problem. instead of this, I changed it around differently. Should look good now.
2. 00:36:512 (2) - Well, just a curve suggestions, see below if you like it ^^ Sure, that works good. that slider felt too straight I agree XD
3. 01:37:196 (1) - Similar suggestion as above Actually, instead of that, I went and curved it more than what I originally had. I like how it looks from this.
4. 01:42:551 (6) - You probably should NC this, I don't think it belongs to 01:41:658 (5) - this combo anymore. Big error on my part, and I know why.. I recently changed a part here, and I guess I goofed up on double checking the combos.. Fixed!
5. Great!

[Hard]

1. 01:20:241 (4,5) - Should be a better blanket? Sure, fixed this up a bit.
2. 02:10:216 (1) - I don't think this NC is really necessary. True I guess. Changed.
3. This difficulty was really well made! Thanks

I fixed one section near the end I didn't like as well.. other than that, it should be good to go and up to date.

Nice choice of music, I really enjoyed it! Gonna throw you a star to help. Hope this helped and GL for rank :3 Thank you!

YOURS wrote:

Couldn't find anything to say about your Easy and Normal difficulties.

Hard

00:07:657 I would add 1 circle here. It sounds better IMO Definitely not. There is no audible instrument here
00:10:037 and another one here. Same as above
00:27:886 ^ ^
00:35:620 ^ ^
00:45:139 ^ ^
00:55:253 ^ I don't want a note here because the vocals stand out way to much and gives off the empty feeling when there isn't any.
00:59:417 ^ ^
01:03:582 ^ ^
01:08:937 ^ This needs the spacing after the long stream.
01:18:456 ^ ^
01:25:000 ^ Vocal gap
01:56:532 ^ The way I have the 1/4 slider set up would make it strange to play, so no additions
02:10:811 ^ ^
02:47:101 ^ Breathing room to set up for the stream, and also the vocals end before this
02:54:836 ^ 1/4 slider finish
03:07:329 ^ Vocal Gap
03:18:633 ^ For the rest of these, I only follow the vocals and no drums, so I can't add anything here. This matches up with my Easy / Normal difficulties as well as I want to keep them similar.
03:18:931 ^
03:20:121 ^
03:21:311 ^

Please respect my suggestions..... Awesome map you got overall.

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

Easy

1. 00:18:961 (3) - Improve the curve a bit (Here is a code :O) Moved some stuff around here. Should be better. Made the slider after a bit nicer.
   
2. 00:34:132 (4) - ^ fixed this, and changed the previous slider a bit as well.
   
3. 02:29:551 (5,1) - Overlay out of nowhere - It looks a bit messy I like the overlay how it is, so I wanted to keep this.
   
4. 02:32:228 (2,3) - ^ Same as above.
   
   Relatively flawless easy - Can´t say much about it^^ Well done
   

Normal
Really good diff - Can´t say anything helpful - Maybe it looks a bit too pushed - Spacing +0.2 and adjust it maybe? I don't think it's neccessary. The spacing should be fine enough as is and it lets me blanket stuff nicely.

Hard

1. 00:19:556 (6,7,8) - ctrl+j and then readjust? Plays better in my opinion^^ Fixed, I agree this is much better.
    
   Awesome diff - Sliders are really nice and individual - Only thing to mention is, as I already said, maybe a bit much Kiai
   
   And because of super short and ultra useless mod - Take a Star^^
   

Moway wrote:

Wheeeeeeeee

this song is so corny i love it This was my childhood!.. Now you know how I ended being like I am =P

nazi mod coming, prepare your butt i am so sorry Nazi mods are the best mods actually, because they're useful.. I guess?

[General]

tags: Add "Heroes", "Puzzle", "League" to the tags. This song was in Pokemon Heroes as well as Pokemon Puzzle League so those tags are pretty good I think. Sure. I miss puzzle league now....

I think you'll be alright on the kiai times, maybe remove it for the fade out, but apart from that I don't think the kiai use in this song is a big problem.

dat storyboard tho <3

[Easy]

00:16:284 (1) - move the 2nd midpoint back a bit, right now I think the curve is a bit too bunched toward the slider end. Done
00:26:398 (1) - lower the 2nd red point a bit for a better blanket on that 2nd curve of the slider. Got this as well.
00:34:132 (4) - red point to (316,176) for a better blanket I think, or somewhere around there. I'm honestly writing this after I made the changes, but I know I took this one
01:06:854 (4,5) - nazi blanket fix here and this one..
01:22:323 (1) - this slider is a bit ugly to me, and it doesn't have any blanket interaction with any other sliders so I think for this one make it into a more regular S-shape, which looks nicer as a stand alone slider. haha, one ugly slider rejected.. to be honest I don't even know why I kept that one.
01:30:057 (1) - I don't think this spinner is necessary. Leave it out and let the player have a longer break. Sure, did this for all diffs as well.
01:32:437 - if you take the previous suggestion, add a circle here. ^ and added.
01:57:127 (1,2) - I think the blanket interaction between these sliders could be improved. Fine. They can hug each other better.. I made them more even so it should be better.
02:04:266 (3) - adjust the bottom curve on this one a bit so that it blankets 02:05:754 (1) a bit better. http://puu.sh/5sCN7.jpg This one is a pain.. I think I somehow got it though
02:08:133 (1,1) - There might not be enough time here between the spinner and the next object. I think you could end the spinner at 02:09:918, which is another strong beat and it would be okay. alright, sure.
02:24:197 (4) - a bit nazi here, but move this to (304,132) to be a perfect reflection of 02:23:602 (3). Symmetry can never be nazi'd, fixed.
02:24:792 (1) - (376,66) XD It was already there! =o
02:30:741 (1) - make the finish here louder, right now it is at 30% thanks to the red line Raised to 40% I think
02:34:905 (1) - remove finish from the slider head Lowered the volume of this finish.. I still kept the finish though. I love it <3
02:36:392 (2,3) - fix up this blanket a bit, this one will look much better as a perfect blanket Perfectly wrapped and tucked in now!
02:39:665 (1) - remove the finish from the slider head too, I think having them there takes away from the finish on the real strong part, which is the end. Lowered volume a bit more on this, 30 45 60 now.
02:44:424 (1) - I don't particularly like this slider, as it makes you miss mapping the strong vocal parts at 02:45:019 - 02:45:912. You should consider mapping this part out more so that these parts are played. its true.. but I wanted something long so it kind of gives a breath of air to the new players... that or I really am just lazy. I'll just pretend its the former.
02:52:456 (3) - shorten this to end at 02:53:051. I think this will be okay because you map it like this at 02:33:418 (3) and I think it is better for matching the vocal. Yes, done.
02:55:431 (1,2) - making this a blanket formation would fit well with the rest of what you are doing in this diff. I don't remember what I did here, but I think I changed this around.
03:16:254 (3) - this one you can shorten as well. Keep these consistent with the rest of the map. Yes I can, and will.

[Normal]

00:03:195 (2,3) - I actually prefer these as a slider. I think it matches that corny DJ sound better. Just for you I'll change it <3
00:15:689 (7,8) - I don't really like this stack that much in terms of game play. If we compare it to the similar parts in this section (00:20:449 (4), 00:25:208 (7,8)), this stack feels much less kinetic and flowing. I would unstack these because I think the kiai-ish sections of the song are better when they flow (unless specific musical elements dictate otherwise, which I don't think is the case here) This took a little bit of reworking, but I think I got it! Basically went anti-clockwise with it.
00:29:075 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is pretty nazi, but watch your spacing here. Even though the differences are small, I noticed them pretty instantly. Then agian, that might be because I'm weird. Regardless, might as well fix these up. see below?
00:29:968 (5,6) - I would consider making this a slider, as having all these circles in a row is not super great. eh. I liked the circles, but honestly you're right. I swapped a couple of them to 1/2 sliders.
00:48:411 (6) - you could remove the first finish here, I think it is a bit too noisy. Alternatively you could lower the volume as well, but I prefer just the clap for the slider head here. As you guessed probably, I lowered the volume a little.
01:03:880 (5) - NC here? seems to fit pretty well Done
01:30:057 (1) - I kinda feel the same way about this spinner as with the one in Easy. Sure. The extra few seconds does help.
01:59:804 (1)- this NC feels a bit unnecessary so I'd say remove it.
02:17:355 (4) - a bit of NC inconsistency here. I would say NC this one, and match the comboing pattern set with 02:11:108 (1,2,3,1).
02:22:115 (3) - NC here also. The other alternative is removing some NCs in this section to make the combos the same length. Managed to fix all this NC problems. Should be fine now.

[Hard]

00:03:195 (2,3) - same suggestion as the Normal Not for this one. I like the current setup.. so no crazy dj slider
00:24:018 (5) - Maybe move this up for some more circular flow. http://puu.sh/5sE0g.jpg omg yes, thank you for this suggestion.
00:28:183 (1) - maybe put a bit more bend on this one It ends up ugly no matter how I try to adjust this.. but I think I got a good bend now.
01:30:057 (1) - same spinner suggestion yes
01:50:285 (1,2) - I kind of miss the stream here like at 01:07:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9). I actually thought I was using too many long streams, which is why I made the slider streaming here. I like how it ended up actually.
01:53:260 (3,4) - The way this is mapped sort of misses out on the theme of really-emphasized-vocals. Consider mapping it like this: http://puu.sh/5sE8U.jpg. This puts the vocal on the slider which I think matches your overall structure better. You... you're right.. How did I not see this before? Fixed, fixed and fixed the other one.
02:08:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - did you intend for the spacing to be this way? I suggest that you make these equally spaced, right now it looks a bit sloppy to me. figured the problem out.. needed to space the even notes out a bit more.
02:29:551 (1,2,3,1) - I think a bit more spacing here will give these much more impact, which is really important because this is the big climax of the song. Sure, a bit more distance can't hurt, and yeah, definitely fits.
02:34:013 (6,7,8) - Just wondering here if the 1.00x spacing was intentional. I think every other time you have a slider with 1/4 notes afterward, the spacing is 0.5 I don't remember why I actually left that one. When I mapped the first time, I had all the streams spaced normally, then ended up changing a lot of them to half. I guess this one didn't make it somehow... Time for it to move on to 0.5
02:51:564 (3,4) - Here is the same thing as 01:53:260 (3,4). The mapping solution will be the same as there. ;_; fixed.

That's all from me, just some little stuff. I think you're about ready to call dkun.

Mao wrote:

M4M Request

[Easy]

00:34:132 (4) - How about replacing the straight end with a curved one? (http://puu.sh/5sS8p.jpg) added a small curve on this. Not as much as you were suggesting though.
00:46:626 (3,4) - Blanket could be better >< Fixed.
01:03:880 (1,2) - ^ Done.
01:19:051 (2) - Make the straight part of this one longer and the curved one shorter :/ Fixed this when scrolling through the song, changed the shape completely.
01:50:285 (3,1) - Better blanket suggested ._. sure. Fixed.
02:04:266 (3) - I guess 3 grey points in the curve would be enough... The points were added from the last mod. To keep this shape I need them.
02:30:741 (1) - Move the grey point on the curve a little bit upwards. I personally like the shape it is already.
02:41:152 (2) - Try something like this http://puu.sh/5sStE.jpg here Keeping my original shape. thanks though

[Normal]

00:31:753 (3) - Try to remove the strait part at the beginning of the slider and make the curve smoother. Not positive what you're asking here, but I altered this slightly.
00:31:753 (3) - Make both sides have the same length. same spot? I'm leaving this how it is for now.
00:46:924 (4) - Try something like this http://puu.sh/5sRWL.jpg I like how mine is set up right now. it gives off the impression by looks that its a 3/4 slider. Just a personal thing I guess.
01:21:430 (6) - I guess a simple curved slider would have fit here xD who knows how I made it look like that, but it pretty much is the correct shape anyways. No need to change this
01:58:317 (4,5) - Probably it's just me, but the blanket could be better here. It should be fine how it is.
02:39:070 (7) - Hmh, I don't know if this is that well playable for a Normal player. And the look of it isn't good either... no no no.. I love this slider, and I think it fits really well with the song. No change.

As I said before, it's probably just me but I suggest rechecking your blankets here... Couple things here and there, just makes me wonder how long I actually made this difficulty. It was sometime when all I could think about was hitsounds I'm sure, and forgot about my blanketing that I had when I made Hero no Jouken

[Hard]

00:30:265 (8) - Place the NC on this one instead of 00:30:563 (1) - For consistency and my style of comboing, I prefer not to NC on a lead-in stream.
00:30:563 (1) - Try to remake this sliders using more than one grey point to get a smoother curve (Example: http://puu.sh/5sRoF.jpg&#41; I altered this a bit, didn't add any extra nodes though.
00:37:405 (3) - This slider looks a little bit "squeezed" in my opinion. You don't have to but I highly suggest reforming this one. I'll just straighten out the end then.
00:51:683 (6) - This would look way better with 2 grey points in the curve (http://puu.sh/5sRut.jpg). So it would also form a better blanket with (5) Did this my own way, but it'll be blanketed much better now.
01:13:399 (1,2) - Try to make a smoother S-shape I personally like them better than just a simple S shape. It creates more of a turning point when used sharply at the head.
01:19:646 (3,4) - Just a little suggestion here: How about let (3= overlap with (4)? Something like that http://puu.sh/5sRCv.jpg would look and flow quite nice. Figured something out here to do.
01:36:899 (7,8,1) - NC on (7) instead of (1) Same as beginning.
01:37:196 (1,2,3) - Try to get a better slider blanket with (1) and (3) :/ It was really fine how it was, but I adjusted it slightly to make the bottom curve of the (1) a little longer.
02:00:994 (3) - Place a finish on the start No finish noise in the actual music here, so not adding one.
02:03:076 (6) - Just my opinion: Replace that slider. It looks...not so nice xD It's a work of art No change.
02:32:228 (3,4) - Try to get a blanket with these 2 Jump section, so no, and it connects nicely enough anyways.
03:17:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Interesting stream. Wasn't playing that well Don't you think it's too hard for a hard diff? o: Not at all. I swap between .5 and 1. on these kinds of streams, and I think how this is laid out is pretty nice.

Man, you seem to like symmetry xD Compared to most maps, this is nothing at all lol. Just a basic way of mapping really.

Even though the mapset looks older than it is (probably because of the lack of rotation and too much symmetry) I like it. I hope my mod helps you and of course good luck lack of rotation? and more or less not enough symmetry to be honest. The only reason why it would give off an older feel is because some of the sliders are unique and can't be found other maps, which was my goal for this project.

tellertheworld wrote:

[Hard]
01:36:304 - And 01:36:453 - move 1/4beat before 01:36:453 - is actually placed on the correct drum beat. It just sounds weird having a blank where drums are playing since I mapped directly to them, so no change.
01:41:361 (4) - move to X:336 Y:298 may be well I actually like having it a bit further away here, since it's being pushed from the (3) reverse.
02:29:998 - move 1/4beat after,And
02:29:551 - this silder add 1/4beat if you move the 02:29:998 - If you delete the notes, you can tell what sounds I was following there. No change as well here.
01:03:880 - And 01:04:326 - I feel than it is strange but i can't know how to set They match the sliders at 01:01:500 (1,2) - I personally like how they are right now.
03:24:583 - end of spinner No thanks, I'd rather end it on 'friends' instead of the earlier 'best'

timing:
150741,594.942984630639,4,2,1,30,1,1 Do not use the red line I have to use this red line to reset the metronome, otherwise each new measure would start on the middle white tick instead of the big one.
03:21:757 - end of kiai time If anywhere, it would actually be at 03:18:336 - but I prefer to end it where it is currently.

To M4M , if you like my beatmap's song
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/126489

Fatfan Kolek wrote:

Easy
01:33:032 - 01:34:222 This slider looks strange to me. I'll try a different shape then, Hopefull it doesn't look even worse XD
02:30:741 - 02:34:013 (1, 2, 3) These sliders doesn't fit to your normal mapstyle, because they're hitting each other. (Just a suggestion) Its true, I just wanted a bit more variety in my map so I decided to go with this. No changes.

Normal
00:51:683 - 00:52:576 This slider looks to angular to me. It does look a bit odd, but I personally like the way this one turned out. If more comment on this I'll change it but for now, I'd rather leave it as is.
02:03:076 - 02:03:671 It's a small bit to near to 3 compared to your other sliders. Don't know if a change there is necessary. Small nudges, should be a bit better now.
02:06:646 - 02:07:538 In my opinion you shouldn't do that square. It doesn't fit that much to your mapstyle. I would set another slider there. Actually, you are completely right. This should look much much better now. thanks!
02:20:032 - 02:20:627 ^ Like I said at first. hehe. I'll keep this one in mind as well, for now I'll leave it.
02:39:070 - 02:40:260 This slider is not exactly between (5) and (6). It's too near to (5). ^^ Nudged over correctly, thanks.

Hard
00:54:063 - 00:54:955 This slider looks strange to me. A bit too angular. I nudged a the first gray node over slightly, but the rest I kept the same. I personally like how the slider changes from a curve to sharp angles when the finish hits.
02:03:076 - 02:03:671 Change the slider. It seems different from the others. Ahh.. that's two people that don't like this slider now X_X; Tried a new shape I guess.
02:27:172 - 02:27:767 Make one curve instead of two. This is supposed to be a mini version of the upcoming stream which also had two curves. No changes.
03:17:146 - 03:18:336 I would change the stream. Make it just like all the others. Haha, Actually I really like this one. I don't plan on changing it unless more people really bug me about it.

I'm a noob at modding, but I tried my best. :< This one was actually pretty decent for the amount you've modded, keep it up!
I like this song very much and I hope it'll get ranked soon. Thank you!

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding your map here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

1. 00:02:006 (1,2) - Not really a problem, but I'd like to see their shape being the same; it's slightly different now lol Sure, copy pasted the (1)
2. 00:33:537 (3,4) - You can improve the blanket here by dragging that red node on (4) by one grid to the left. Alright do... wait what? I swear the previous mod asked me to move it one to the right... now to the left?.. Anyways, I left this one alone, because I think it does actually look better in its original position.
3. 00:57:930 (4,1) - Umm, spacing inconsistency? One of those "not sure how that happened" moments. Thanks, fixed.
4. 01:06:854 (4,5) - Again, the blanket here can be improved, by dragging the node on (5)'s tail by one grid down. Actually, I like it where it is currently, no change.
5. 01:22:323 (1) - Skipping the cymbal at 01:22:918 makes playing this slider awkward. Make the rhythm look like this? The repeat at 01:23:810 also follows the vocal really well, so why not? The reason for this is to create the notion that it's coming up to the ending of the kiai, so something lengthy and soft was used here. I personally like how this one turned out so I'd like to keep this. I already have SC:3 hitting the finish anyways on the tick.
6. 01:34:817 (3) - Drag the node on the tail one grid up to make the blanket better? (Yeah, sorry for ranting about really minor things.) Dragged the end up one node, and the middle node one to the right. Also I'm glad I get these kind of suggestions. One thing that I want to make sure gets done right is all the sliders look fine enough for everyone, blanketing and just overall looks. I've changed a lot and its really improving.. so keep sending those suggestions :p
7. 01:58:614 - I know you're following the vocal here, but ignoring that cymbal makes the slider uncomfortable to play. Oh well, might be just me. Yeah, I wanted to map to the cymbals as well but I decided to stick heavily to the vocals. This creates some uniqueness in the map as you already know, this map is 1/1 heavy already, so it could use a little change, and this was my answer to it. It does play well to me, but I'm still not sure to others yet.
8. 02:21:222 - You've been constantly going on a 1/1 rhythm, so why pausing it here? Map this tick too? I actually don't map this in any other diff. Just because of how awkward the vocals make it sound. I'll try to come up with a different solution maybe, but for now. I like it how it is.
9. 02:29:551 (5) - Uh, drag the last node down by two grids, again, to make the blanket better? Done
10. 02:44:424 (1) - Similar to 01:22:323 (1), except replace the "cymbal" with "strong vocal". Same reason as I mentioned earlier really. I just would rather have something here more or less to add a bit of uniqueness instead of constant 1/1 beats. This also lets newer players 'rest' up I guess? not very valid reasoning but.. I'll just say that

>Normal

1. 00:31:753 (3) - Move the very last node to (404,56) to create a nicer flow? Figured this out without changing the slider end. Moved the notes further up. I want to keep the slider how it is.
2. 00:54:360 - ...Well, I guess I'll just say that skipping cymbals with a slider makes things feel awkward, even though you want to follow the vocal. I'm sure enough this isn't just me, so... (Not gonna say if there's a similar case; would be too much~) I definitely understand what you are saying, and to me, I'd rather map it, but if I actually map it, it will create a bit of awkwardness to the player or at least in my head. | changing this up conflicts with 00:51:683 (4) - so Its necessary I follow the rhythm here. I do this a bit in the song to other spots but I have reasonings behind each one.
3. 01:11:019 - Add a note to follow the cymbal (and add a finish with a lowered volume, ofc)? It feels weird to leave one unmapped here, you know. This one is a major problem as well. It actually hits closer to 01:11:092 - area and not on the direct spot of 01:11:019 - I also skip this in my easy and hard, though my hard has it on a tick. Long story short, I don't feel comfortable mapping to it directly.
4. 01:54:450 (5) - Move to (352,296) to improve the flow? Done. Why wasn't this here earlier? >_>
5. 02:44:424 (7,8,1) - Move them two grids left AND down? This is so that (7) will be correctly placed while playing (it will be not in the place it is in the editor because of the stacks). You might need to play a bit with the spacing at 02:45:019 (1,2), though. I just changed this whole section around so I didn't have the stack.
6. 03:03:462 (1,2) - The blanket looks weird because it's wider on the left and more narrow on the right. You know what to do, right... Ever so gently... Fixed.

>Hard

1. Well, I know the song only has 100.85 beats per minute, but don't you think there's a little bit too much 1/4 streams here? Yes and no. Yes because I don't really care for 1/4s altogether, but no for the reason of being different from normal, and also to help follow all the drums better. all the 1/4s here have purpose so they definitely fit and are called for. I personally think this is a good balance how this diff turned out. I don't use as many jumps compared to most hards anyways.
2. 00:15:987 (9) - Uh, any reason why is the spacing kinda inconsistent around here? Minor jump, but I know what you mean anyways, changed to 1.22 spacing instead of odd amounts.
3. 00:42:164 (4,5,6) - Might as well make it stay 1.0x around here; will make the spacing look more consistent and thus nicer to play + it will look neater, IMO. Yep, you can keep the jump after them. I moved (4) a bit to make it 1.05 so it would build up to the 1.12. Yes, 1.05, not 1.06...
4. 00:51:683 (6,1) - Is 1.09x necessary here? Going with the normal spacing will make this pattern look tidier. Not really sure if the extra little spacing will matter since its a jump coming up, but I changed this to 1.00
5. 01:08:044 (5) - I'm sure enough the cymbal is played at 01:07:895 (4), so remove the finish here and add one at (4) instead. Oh, you're right. Sounds a bit strange now, but its better to be correct.
6. 01:43:443 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I don't like the flow here, mainly because of the movement you need and the spacing changes. Just saying. I was actually quite confident this was a good setup here. For now I want to keep it but if others mention this then I'll do something.
7. 02:33:418 (5,6) - Uh, I don't really like the flow here actually. I believe you can just use 02:32:823 (4) that is rotated by 90 degrees counter-clockwise and move it to (204,108)... or do something similar to that. I actually really like how this is. I'll keep this in mind though.
8. 03:03:462 (1) - To improve the blanket, move the middle node to (80,124) and the last one to (132,196)? done, thanks. Not sure how I missed this blanket either.

Well that's it I guess

Good luck on the way

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. For SB, the maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. I will get to this when I get back home from work. Thanks for showing me this. I didn't even realize I went out of the limits for SB dimensions. I would assume Widescreen storyboarding would have better dimensions for images now as well, but this is only a standard def one.
   please recheck Ranking Criteria
2. 03:08:817~03:25:475- at this part, it is no problem to remove Kiai-time, imo I personally like how I have the Kiai setup. I know I use it a lot, but I'd rather be consistent with it and use it during these epic parts.

[Easy]

1. For Easy-diff, you should add more break time. I think a break after 1:30 of playing for 5ish seconds is more than enough. There really isn't any other spot for a break anyways.
2. 02:00:994- finish ? No finish here. Nothing in the background music to warrant for it
3. 02:36:392 (2,3) - DS is correct? Yes, I use .7 on this map, so 6.9 is right.... =\
4. 02:54:241- finish position is 02:54:538 ? It is in the right position.

[Normal]

1. 01:17:861 (8,2) - avoid overlap Fixed, thanks.

[Hard]

1. Good!

Your SB is very wonderful! I hope to remake to suit osu's rule
Your mapping is so cool~☆
~Good Luck~

615915887 wrote:

From my queue
Sorry for my late, 'cuz i almost forget that

[General]
nice storyboard!
03:13:576 may stop at here because the volumn reduces here

[Easy]
00:06:765 (1) - blanket can be better Fixed
00:13:012 (2,3) - somehow too close ? nothing wrong with it.
00:26:398 (1) - also not beautiful blanket Somewhat fixed.. It may have ended up like it used to though XD
01:59:507 (3) - imo,change it to 1/2 slider is better than using sliderticks Not doing it in an Easy.
02:12:298 (2) - blanket can be better meant to be more symmetric with the previous slider than a blanket. leaving as is.

[Normal]
01:07:152 (4) - why no clap on this doesn't call for one. the previous three are much stronger than this. I also skip it in Hard.
01:23:810 (4) - blanket can be better Sure, tried to fix this.
02:53:348 seems that a note is missing here nah, might be just the held vocals you are thinking of. An extra note wouldn't serve any purpose.
there are some strange place where the soundeffect's volumn reduces for no reason,better change it. every part is intentional. I use the lower volume in some spots so the hitsounds don't take over.

[Hard]
add some whistles?For example 00:37:405 (3) I was stuck on if I should actually use whistles or not, in the end, I decided not to. They really stick out in the song and don't actually fit, so I decided to pass.
01:01:500 (1,2) - this is strange,there's no same music or vocal here Intentional, you can hear that one instrument in the music and it takes priority over the little tick noise, so I mapped it like this. I don't plan on changing this.
01:03:880 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:19:884 A note here might be better There isn't anything playing at this time.
02:29:551 (1,2) - really not fit,just do it as regular drums are actually played like this, so it wouldn't work to change them to simple 1/2s
02:35:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - blanket can be better wasn't trying to blanket this. the old slider is long gone by this point.
02:49:184 (4,5) - 1/4 sliders can be better(long downbeats here) After using them in a previous map of mine, I really really don't like using 1/4 sliders for streaming unless they fit. I prefer these how they are right now, and actually wish I could use them more.

Nice map Thanks
GL

Edit:Damn I forget to update ,just take my mod as advice Don't worry about it, all of your suggestions were in different spots anyways