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M4M~
only some my personal idea~ i'm noob in 7K

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NM
00:14:125 (14125|6) - - move to 3
00:14:325 (14325|6) - move to 4
00:23:325 (23325|2,23325|4) - del one?
00:23:725 - add a note at 5
00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 3
00:36:925 - add one note ?
00:52:525 (52525|3) - move to 2?
00:52:725 (52725|3) - move to 3?
01:20:925 (80925|3) - move to 5
01:21:125 (81125|4) - move to 4
01:21:325 (81325|5) - move to 3
01:21:525 (81525|3) - move to 2
01:21:725 (81725|1) - move to 3


HD
00:26:925 - add one note at 6?
nothing seems to be revised
insane
00:33:725 - add one note ?
00:52:525 - ^
00:54:925 - ^
01:15:325 (75325|3,76025|3,76125|3) - too difficult XD


very nice map
star~~ ;);)
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victorica_db wrote:

M4M~
only some my personal idea~ i'm noob in 7K

1234567
NM
00:14:125 (14125|6) - - move to 3 good idea
00:14:325 (14325|6) - move to 4 good idea
00:23:325 (23325|2,23325|4) - del one? nope
00:23:725 - add a note at 5 nope
00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 3 nope
00:36:925 - add one note ? ok!
00:52:525 (52525|3) - move to 2? reversed this with v
00:52:725 (52725|3) - move to 3? reversed this with ^
01:20:925 (80925|3) - move to 5 ]
01:21:125 (81125|4) - move to 4 ]
01:21:325 (81325|5) - move to 3 ] ----- changed to other pattern
01:21:525 (81525|3) - move to 2 ]
01:21:725 (81725|1) - move to 3 ]


HD
00:26:925 - add one note at 6? ok!
nothing seems to be revised
insane
00:33:725 - add one note ? ok!
00:52:525 - ^ ok!
00:54:925 - ^ ok!
01:15:325 (75325|3,76025|3,76125|3) - too difficult XD im evil \3:D/


very nice map
star~~ ;);)
thanks for mod aaaand staaaaaar www
posted
Rumia :3

0123456 column ;)

NM(I am a little bit confuse with some part of it)

[00:02:125 (2125|4) - ,00:03:725 (3725|4) - ,00:05:325 (5325|5) - deliberately putting them on the red line instead of blue? just confirm that you did it not by accident XDDD]

00:23:725 (23725|5) - ADD one here? I am a little not sure about this but I feel strange when two different beat meet same treatment of one note.
Another way to do this is move 00:23:625 (23625|3) - to 6 00:23:925 (23925|4) - to 3 while 00:23:725 (23725|6,23725|5) - to 2 and 4, just as what you did in 00:22:925 (22925|2,22925|4,23325|4,23325|2) - your choices XD

00:34:525 (34525|4) - move to 2, 00:34:725 (34725|2) - move to 4 and 00:34:925 (34925|4) - move to 5

00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 00:36:425 (36425|1) - . No sound in 00:36:525

00:47:725 (47725|1) - move to 00:47:625 (47625|1) - and delete 00:47:625 (47625|6) - . same reason

00:52:525 (52525|2) - delete. this is only beat appear in this period, pretty weird XD

01:02:925 (62925|5,62925|1,63325|2,63325|4,63725|4,63725|2) - hmm, this part I suggest map 1/2 timing note(white and red line) in a symmetrical pattern. your double notes are really none sense to me because no remarkable hit should be emphasize while some are just ignore. 1/2 timing note not only map out every hit but also offer a feeling of equality that every beats are the same :)

01:05:925 (65925|3) - what is this? suggest move this to 01:06:125 (66125|1) - make it becomes one member of drum layer so that you could distinguish this no-corresponding note from 01:06:125 (66125|5,66325|3,66525|2) -

01:16:025 (76025|5) - move to 6

01:23:125 (83125|6) - move to 2

01:24:125 (84125|2,84325|3,84525|4,84725|5,84925|6) - make them 65432 according to the pitch

01:25:325 (85325|4,85325|2) - move to 4 and 6

01:32:725 (92725|4,92725|2) - hmm... what are they? consider this is the easiest diff in your map set, maybe delete them would be a better choice XDDDDD

HD
I love this diff XDDD

00:04:725 (4725|0) - move to 00:04:525 (4525|0) - (like 00:06:325 (6325|6) - )

00:06:125 (6125|5) - add

00:06:925 (6925|6) - add

00:13:125 (13125|3) - delete. redundant

00:14:325 (14325|4) - move to 3

00:15:125 (15125|1,15225|2,15325|3) - not very sure about this :o

00:34:725 (34725|0,34925|2,35125|0) - move to 1,3,5 and delete 00:35:325 (35325|2) - and move 00:36:425 (36425|6) - to 4
I think this will make election and beat more clear :)

00:48:125 (48125|4,48225|3,48325|2) - not very sure

01:01:925 (61925|4) - delete

really interesting to play :)

IN
00:12:225 (12225|5,12325|6) - a little bit uncomfortable and not necessary recommend delete

00:15:925 (15925|5) - move to 00:15:725 (15725|0) -

00:16:925 (16925|1,17125|2,17525|4) - delete and add at 00:17:325 (17325|5) - much more clear I think. Original design ignore the beat of 00:17:325 (17325|3) - while putting extra 00:17:125 (17125|2,17525|4) - which I consider not necessary XD

00:20:725 (20725|6) - add and move 00:20:925 (20925|5) - to 6

00:28:725 (28725|6) - delete

00:29:925 (29925|2) - ? maybe move to 1 and add at 00:30:125 (30125|2) - ? XD

00:34:325 (34325|4) - delete. nothing here i suppose

00:52:125 (52125|6,52225|4,52425|4) - add drum sound to them XDD or they will be really strange XDDDD

01:07:725 (67725|1) - add
In fact everything is good enough! But I just cannot make sure if those 1/4 trouble anybody who may accuse your over noting
But it is really good after all :)

Yooo~ really fun to play ;)
Good luck on this :3
posted

richardfeder wrote:

Rumia :3

0123456 column ;)

NM(I am a little bit confuse with some part of it)

[00:02:125 (2125|4) - ,00:03:725 (3725|4) - ,00:05:325 (5325|5) - deliberately putting them on the red line instead of blue? just confirm that you did it not by accident XDDD]

00:23:725 (23725|5) - ADD one here? I am a little not sure about this but I feel strange when two different beat meet same treatment of one note.
Another way to do this is move 00:23:625 (23625|3) - to 6 00:23:925 (23925|4) - to 3 while 00:23:725 (23725|6,23725|5) - to 2 and 4, just as what you did in 00:22:925 (22925|2,22925|4,23325|4,23325|2) - your choices XD

00:34:525 (34525|4) - move to 2, 00:34:725 (34725|2) - move to 4 and 00:34:925 (34925|4) - move to 5

00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 00:36:425 (36425|1) - . No sound in 00:36:525 - there is beat here

00:47:725 (47725|1) - move to 00:47:625 (47625|1) - and delete 00:47:625 (47625|6) - . same reason - there is beat here

00:52:525 (52525|2) - delete. this is only beat appear in this period, pretty weird XD - nope.

01:02:925 (62925|5,62925|1,63325|2,63325|4,63725|4,63725|2) - hmm, this part I suggest map 1/2 timing note(white and red line) in a symmetrical pattern. your double notes are really none sense to me because no remarkable hit should be emphasize while some are just ignore. 1/2 timing note not only map out every hit but also offer a feeling of equality that every beats are the same :)sure.

01:05:925 (65925|3) - what is this? suggest move this to 01:06:125 (66125|1) - make it becomes one member of drum layer so that you could distinguish this no-corresponding note from 01:06:125 (66125|5,66325|3,66525|2) - fixed

01:16:025 (76025|5) - move to 6 - its already at 6?

01:23:125 (83125|6) - move to 2 - deleted this

01:24:125 (84125|2,84325|3,84525|4,84725|5,84925|6) - make them 65432 according to the pitch - this is already according to pitch

01:25:325 (85325|4,85325|2) - move to 4 and 6 - ok!

01:32:725 (92725|4,92725|2) - hmm... what are they? consider this is the easiest diff in your map set, maybe delete them would be a better choice XDDDDD oh sure xD

HD
I love this diff XDDD

00:04:725 (4725|0) - move to 00:04:525 (4525|0) - (like 00:06:325 (6325|6) - ) fixed

00:06:125 (6125|5) - add - sure

00:06:925 (6925|6) - add - sure

00:13:125 (13125|3) - delete. redundant - fixed

00:14:325 (14325|4) - move to 3 - ok

00:15:125 (15125|1,15225|2,15325|3) - not very sure about this :o - fixed

00:34:725 (34725|0,34925|2,35125|0) - move to 1,3,5 and delete 00:35:325 (35325|2) - and move 00:36:425 (36425|6) - to 4
I think this will make election and beat more clear :)

00:48:125 (48125|4,48225|3,48325|2) - not very sure

01:01:925 (61925|4) - delete

really interesting to play :)

IN
00:12:225 (12225|5,12325|6) - a little bit uncomfortable and not necessary recommend delete - deleted 1 of em xD

00:15:925 (15925|5) - move to 00:15:725 (15725|0) - sure!

00:16:925 (16925|1,17125|2,17525|4) - delete and add at 00:17:325 (17325|5) - much more clear I think. Original design ignore the beat of 00:17:325 (17325|3) - while putting extra 00:17:125 (17125|2,17525|4) - which I consider not necessary XD - fixed

00:20:725 (20725|6) - add and move 00:20:925 (20925|5) - to 6 fixed

00:28:725 (28725|6) - delete - done.

00:29:925 (29925|2) - ? maybe move to 1 and add at 00:30:125 (30125|2) - ? XD no changes

00:34:325 (34325|4) - delete. nothing here i suppose - there is ;w;

00:52:125 (52125|6,52225|4,52425|4) - add drum sound to them XDD or they will be really strange XDDDD - fixed

01:07:725 (67725|1) - add added.
In fact everything is good enough! But I just cannot make sure if those 1/4 trouble anybody who may accuse your over noting
But it is really good after all :)
well this isnt overnote D: should be hear by headphones tho~

Yooo~ really fun to play ;)
Good luck on this :3
sankyuuu richard ~\(≧▽≦)/~
posted
turn off letterbox in hard.

The major issues are in Normal:
I'd like to call it Normal+ instead of Normal, too many holds with presses, try to limit the usage of such patterns, especially hold with 2 normal notes.

In Insane:
00:41:724 - to 00:43:324 - consider exchanging columns of notes in column 1 and 2. More comfortable to play.
posted

woc2006 wrote:

turn off letterbox in hard.

The major issues are in Normal:
I'd like to call it Normal+ instead of Normal, too many holds with presses, try to limit the usage of such patterns, especially hold with 2 normal notes.

In Insane:
00:41:724 - to 00:43:324 - consider exchanging columns of notes in column 1 and 2. More comfortable to play.
ok fixed! dat icon D:
posted
Hi Rumia ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal
00:02:825 (2825|6) - move to 4th column, move it closer to LN, more comfortable for NM

00:25:725 (25725|2) - make this LN longer and continue in this way, at first - it's hard for novices, at second - this piano sound lasts longer

00:28:925 (28925|6) - turn into LN, continue your previous pattern, it's good

00:36:425 (36425|5) - move to 3rd column and this one 00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 1st column, bass goes here that way

00:49:525 (49525|6,49625|0) - move to 1st and 5th columns accordingly and make them closer to next chord, make some alternation

00:57:725 - add note to 1st column, there's strong beat like previous

01:16:725 (76725|1,76825|3) - move them to 2nd and 4th column, more suitable with your pattern here


Hard
00:02:925 (2925|0) - move to 3rd column, good catch for your pattern here

00:15:925 (15925|1) - a bit uncomfortable and there's no double sound, move to 2nd column

00:20:925 - maybe add here LN in 5th column with ending at 00:22:125 in according to the singing

00:36:425 (36425|6) - move to 2nd column and 00:36:525 (36525|1) - to 3rd column in according to the bass

00:56:125 (56125|3) - move to 2nd column, it'll be good with your pattern here

01:19:525 (79525|3) - move to 2nd column again, you leave it alone for a long time and there's no need to place one note after another


Insane
This diff seems good for me without any exception, awesome patterns for HD and good hitsounds like in previous diff.


Like this song, you've got my star...awwww >///<
Good luck :3/
posted

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi Rumia ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal
00:02:825 (2825|6) - move to 4th column, move it closer to LN, more comfortable for NM fixed

00:25:725 (25725|2) - make this LN longer and continue in this way, at first - it's hard for novices, at second - this piano sound lasts longer changed to normal notes

00:28:925 (28925|6) - turn into LN, continue your previous pattern, it's good . changed to normal notes :(

00:36:425 (36425|5) - move to 3rd column and this one 00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 1st column, bass goes here that way fixed

00:49:525 (49525|6,49625|0) - move to 1st and 5th columns accordingly and make them closer to next chord, make some alternation ok!

00:57:725 - add note to 1st column, there's strong beat like previous ok!

01:16:725 (76725|1,76825|3) - move them to 2nd and 4th column, more suitable with your pattern here sure!


Hard
00:02:925 (2925|0) - move to 3rd column, good catch for your pattern here good idea!fixed

00:15:925 (15925|1) - a bit uncomfortable and there's no double sound, move to 2nd column fixed!

00:20:925 - maybe add here LN in 5th column with ending at 00:22:125 in according to the singing ok but added to 6 instead

00:36:425 (36425|6) - move to 2nd column and 00:36:525 (36525|1) - to 3rd column in according to the bass ok!

00:56:125 (56125|3) - move to 2nd column, it'll be good with your pattern here nice idea!

01:19:525 (79525|3) - move to 2nd column again, you leave it alone for a long time and there's no need to place one note after another


Insane
This diff seems good for me without any exception, awesome patterns for HD and good hitsounds like in previous diff.


Like this song, you've got my star...awwww >///<
Good luck :3/
Thx for staaaaar and mod \:D/
posted
[General]
HP 6 → 7 → 8 ?

[Insane]
00:04:225 (4225|6) - Move to 00:04:125
00:04:325 - Add a note
00:22:825 - ^
00:45:725 (45725|2) - Begin from 00:45:525, maybe also move to 1

[Hard]
00:08:825 (8825|4) - Delete
posted

ljqandylee wrote:

[General]
HP 6 → 7 → 8 ?

[Insane]
00:04:225 (4225|6) - Move to 00:04:125
00:04:325 - Add a note
00:22:825 - ^
00:45:725 (45725|2) - Begin from 00:45:525, maybe also move to 1 , this is not the voice ,there is a piano sound here and ok i move to 1

[Hard]
00:08:825 (8825|4) - Delete
all fixed accept the red one.
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Not completely sure but it seems that the title is not rankable.

t/89198
and
p/2339704

Ask a bat before but you probably need to remove the "short ver."



EDIT : It seems ok since it's a VN ... (this rule is completly wtf...)
posted

Krah wrote:

Not completely sure but it seems that the title is not rankable.

t/89198
and
p/2339704

Ask a bat before but you probably need to remove the "short ver."



EDIT : It seems ok since it's a VN ... (this rule is completly wtf...)
i lol'd
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Ranked~
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ljqandylee wrote:

Ranked~
yeaaaaaay thx ljqandylee <3
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Congratz gay Rumia!!!!
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etmia \o/
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grats :( im so bad at dis
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thxx lol
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