[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi Rumia ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal

Inside :3

00:02:825 (2825|6) - move to 4th column, move it closer to LN, more comfortable for NM fixed

00:25:725 (25725|2) - make this LN longer and continue in this way, at first - it's hard for novices, at second - this piano sound lasts longer changed to normal notes

00:28:925 (28925|6) - turn into LN, continue your previous pattern, it's good . changed to normal notes

00:36:425 (36425|5) - move to 3rd column and this one 00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 1st column, bass goes here that way fixed

00:49:525 (49525|6,49625|0) - move to 1st and 5th columns accordingly and make them closer to next chord, make some alternation ok!

00:57:725 - add note to 1st column, there's strong beat like previous ok!

01:16:725 (76725|1,76825|3) - move them to 2nd and 4th column, more suitable with your pattern here sure!

Hard

Inside :3

00:02:925 (2925|0) - move to 3rd column, good catch for your pattern here good idea!fixed

00:15:925 (15925|1) - a bit uncomfortable and there's no double sound, move to 2nd column fixed!

00:20:925 - maybe add here LN in 5th column with ending at 00:22:125 in according to the singing ok but added to 6 instead

00:36:425 (36425|6) - move to 2nd column and 00:36:525 (36525|1) - to 3rd column in according to the bass ok!

00:56:125 (56125|3) - move to 2nd column, it'll be good with your pattern here nice idea!

01:19:525 (79525|3) - move to 2nd column again, you leave it alone for a long time and there's no need to place one note after another

Insane

Inside :3

This diff seems good for me without any exception, awesome patterns for HD and good hitsounds like in previous diff.

Like this song, you've got my star...awwww >///<
Good luck :3/

ljqandylee wrote:

[General]
HP 6 → 7 → 8 ?

[Insane]
00:04:225 (4225|6) - Move to 00:04:125
00:04:325 - Add a note
00:22:825 - ^
00:45:725 (45725|2) - Begin from 00:45:525, maybe also move to 1 , this is not the voice ,there is a piano sound here and ok i move to 1

[Hard]
00:08:825 (8825|4) - Delete

Krah wrote:

Not completely sure but it seems that the title is not rankable.

t/89198
and
p/2339704

Ask a bat before but you probably need to remove the "short ver."


EDIT : It seems ok since it's a VN ... (this rule is completly wtf...)

ljqandylee wrote:

Ranked~

Spy wrote:

Congratulations!

QHideaki13 wrote:

Congrats abam Rumia!

indyinyou wrote:

gratz xD