00:02:825 (2825|6) - move to 4th column, move it closer to LN, more comfortable for NM
fixed00:25:725 (25725|2) - make this LN longer and continue in this way, at first - it's hard for novices, at second - this piano sound lasts longer
changed to normal notes00:28:925 (28925|6) - turn into LN, continue your previous pattern, it's good .
changed to normal notes 00:36:425 (36425|5) - move to 3rd column and this one 00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 1st column, bass goes here that way
fixed00:49:525 (49525|6,49625|0) - move to 1st and 5th columns accordingly and make them closer to next chord, make some alternation
ok!00:57:725 - add note to 1st column, there's strong beat like previous
ok!01:16:725 (76725|1,76825|3) - move them to 2nd and 4th column, more suitable with your pattern here
sure!