ELISA - Soba ni Iru yo (TV Size) · forum

xChippy

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-04T05:36:36+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月19日 at 2:13:19

Artist: ELISA
Title: Soba ni Iru yo (TV Size)
Source: Kakumeiki Valvrave
Tags: The Liberator ending 革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ Sunrise jonathanlfj Oyatsu
BPM: 140.45
Filesize: 15141kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.98 stars, 270 notes)
jonathanlfj's Hard (4.74 stars, 182 notes)
Normal (3.23 stars, 106 notes)
Oyatsu's Easy (1.8 stars, 82 notes)

Download: ELISA - Soba ni Iru yo (TV Size)
Download: ELISA - Soba ni Iru yo (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Second ranked map ^^
Kakumeiki Valvrave ending song~
Enjoy~~
Easy 100% by Oyatsu
Normal 100% by Me
Hard 100% by jonathanlfj
Insane 100% by me
Took the mp3 from eveless's map =w=
Thanks jonathanlfj for the BG and video ^^

Modders
popner Timing check~
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Oyatsu
Tari
Raose
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Sweet Vanilla
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Bakari
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Last edited by xChippy 2013-07-18T20:10:43+00:00, edited 39 times in total.

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-04T08:26:24+00:00

Ok, Complete my diff. Hope you enjoy! Good luck, Must will be 2nd ranked of you. ^^

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EDIT: Sorry I change loud of hitsound slidertick. So, plz update

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-04T14:13:13+00:00

Updated~
Wating for jonathanflj than.. To Pending ^^ ~

popner

osu! Alumni

2,407 posts

Joined March 2011

popner 2013-07-06T05:26:44+00:00

[Timing]

BPM: 140.445
offset: 903

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-06T07:04:25+00:00

popner wrote:
[Timing]

BPM: 140.445
offset: 903

Fixed thanks for check popner~ >w<

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-06T07:36:57+00:00

Thanks for checking bpm and offset, popner-san. Fixed!

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-06T08:31:07+00:00

Okay~ Gogo ready for mods :3

OEvil

299 posts

Joined December 2012

OEvil 2013-07-06T17:02:54+00:00

Hi~
Sorry if my mod sucks but i had to do a quick mod orz

[Oyatsu's Easy]
Edits
- 00:15:428 (1,2,3) - Make them like this: http://puu.sh/3wrPl.jpg

[Insane]
Edits
- 00:52:809 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/3wsiO.jpg
- 01:13:529 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
- 01:26:025 (14) - NC (no more than 14 combo) Or add it here 01:25:491 (1) - Better XD

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-06T19:26:33+00:00

OEvil wrote:
Hi~
Sorry if my mod sucks but i had to do a quick mod orz

[Insane]
Edits
- 00:52:809 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/3wsiO.jpg I don't really like that stack o-o
- 01:13:529 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
- 01:26:025 (14) - NC (no more than 14 combo) Or add it here 01:25:491 (1) - Better XD
Added the NC's

Thanks for the mod~

-GN

Champion Above Champions

734 posts

Joined June 2011

-GN 2013-07-06T23:31:16+00:00

Hi, I saw your M4M queue and decided I'd take you up on it. So here:
Mostly suggestions because it's a quality mapset.

[Insane]
00:04:320 (1,2,1,2) - why isn't this a square like 00:00:903 (1,2,3,4) ?
00:15:001 (1,2) - reduce spacing by half, or so? it plays nicer to me
00:17:137 (4,5) - same as above
00:20:554 (5,6) - increase spacing a bit? the patterns before the slider-circle-slider thing and after this slider are both jumps, so it'd be consistent, and anti-jumps are no fun.
00:32:516 (3) - reverse this slider?

it makes that combo a little more interesting. you do something similar a couple other spots as well.
00:56:013 (3) - this stack is a bit weird to play, why not make it a small jump by putting it on x:24 y:208 or something?
00:57:081 (8) - same as above, but x:264 y:240
01:00:072 (4) - same as above, but x:352 y:148
01:04:771 (2) - curve this slightly and change the stream after a bit?
01:13:529 (1,2,1,2) - i think you should space these a bit

[jonathanjfl's Hard]
great diff! still a couple suggestions though
00:00:903 (1,2,3,4) - flip horizontally, it flows better to me because you keep the counterclockwise momentum with 00:02:611 (1,2,3)
00:17:137 (4,1) - the way you blanket some sliders with bezier curves looks weird to me. consider changing them to normal curves instead

01:03:062 (2) - this would be cooler if it was the same slider as (1), but reversed and placed at x:388 y:300 like this:

01:03:062

01:22:500 (4,1) - this stack overlaps a bit with (3), consider spacing them a bit more or move (1)

[Normal]
Tick rate 2 like Oyatsu's Easy?
00:39:779 (2) - blanket this around (1) and move the circle to fit, like this?

00:39:779

(in the picture, (2) is 1/4 longer than it needs to be, sorry about that)

01:01:353 (2,3) - remove (3) and make the slider repeat? it plays a little weird because the circle is on the red tick
01:14:810 (2) - point it the other direction?

[Oyatsu's Easy]
woah naziblanket mod
00:17:137 (3,1) - blanket is inaccurate, put the middle slider point further down or something
00:26:963 (2,3) - ^ except left
00:29:953 (2,1) - ^ except up
00:33:371 (3,1) - ^ except diagonally down right
00:40:633 (4,5) - ^ except down
00:45:333 (1) - this is mostly correct, but move it to x:373 y:247 instead
00:53:877 (3) - wrong, move middle slider point down
00:58:149 (5) - move to x:263 y:45
00:59:858 (2) - middle slider point to x:126 y:86 and end slider point to x:148 y:40

-------------------
After this point, check every blanket in the map. when you get these right, it'll be a very nice looking easy map, but as it stands they look a bit off. D:

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-07-07T01:20:32+00:00

Ohai ~
from M4M in game

2 times use my banner /o/

General

as i mention in my other mod (ofc in ur map), soft-hitclap1 soft-sliderslide not give any effect, just remove

Easy

00:00:903 (1) - finish instead clap
00:02:184 (3) - i just want notice don't skip stanza please when stanza have vocal/high vocal. just make like http://puu.sh/3wJKZ.jpg
00:04:320 (1) - whistle instead finish
00:12:010 (2) - swap whistle to head. also 00:11:156 (1) - remove whistle in tail
00:27:817 (3) - wow this again. don't skip stanza as i mention above, try http://puu.sh/3wJUu.jpg
00:29:953 (2) - change finish with clap
00:37:643 (4) - change finish with whistle
00:44:478 (3) - no need finish imo
00:48:323 (4) - 180,264 for better flow
00:58:149 (5) - 1 grid right for more branket
00:59:858 (2) - yeah this rhythm weird to be honest. when "koko" in 01:00:712 - and you skip it

Normal

AR+1 please, different AR in Normal and Hard too much far if you use AR 3
00:00:903 (1) - you can try finish in head
00:09:447 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:26:749 (1) - i find nazi. 128,168 to make diagonal together?
00:38:497 (1) - make it more branket? http://puu.sh/3wKo7.jpg
00:44:905 (4) - nazi again 168,308 for diagonal again
01:13:102 - 01:15:665 - clap in here, i think it's weird.. try use clap custom hitsound
01:25:491 (1) - whistle tail?
i just wonder why you not use custom hitsound lol

Hard

00:12:864 (5) - how nazi, NC for consistency
00:22:690 (3) - ctrl+G? it's can make nice jump
00:12:864 (5) - in tail, change clap with finish?
00:41:061 (2) - ctrl+G? it's more fit when next slider in stanza lol
can't catch anymore, nice as usual jonathan

Insane

yeah bpm 140. AR 9 not fit here, just use AR8
00:10:728 (3) - ctrl+G in here, don't make Death jump when song still relax like this. you will kill all player :>
well, i can't mod insane orz so i will end in here

Well, nice song.. Good Luck ~

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-07T02:29:08+00:00

OEvil

- 00:15:428 (1,2,3) - Make them like this: http://puu.sh/3wrPl.jpg

Nice!

-GN

Unchange, sorry alot

Xinely

Easy

00:00:903 (1) - finish instead clap fixed
00:02:184 (3) - i just want notice don't skip stanza please when stanza have vocal/high vocal. just make like http://puu.sh/3wJKZ.jpg oh. I didn't hear vocal
00:04:320 (1) - whistle instead finish fixed
00:12:010 (2) - swap whistle to head. also 00:11:156 (1) - remove whistle in tail fixed
00:27:817 (3) - wow this again. don't skip stanza as i mention above, try http://puu.sh/3wJUu.jpg ok
00:29:953 (2) - change finish with clap I don't understand this
00:37:643 (4) - change finish with whistle I think finish is enough
00:44:478 (3) - no need finish imo Change into whistle
00:48:323 (4) - 180,264 for better flow fixed
00:58:149 (5) - 1 grid right for more branket ^
00:59:858 (2) - yeah this rhythm weird to be honest. when "koko" in 01:00:712 - and you skip it fixed

Almost fixed. THanks for useful mod, Xinely

Update

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63703,-100,4,2,3,40,0,1
63810,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
65412,-100,4,2,3,40,0,1
65519,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
71393,-100,4,2,3,40,0,1
71500,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
73102,-100,4,2,2,50,0,1
76092,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
88054,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,255
Combo2 : 128,0,0
Combo3 : 128,0,128

[HitObjects]
132,72,903,2,0,P|108:104|104:152,1,80.0000005960464,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,208,1757,2,0,P|124:228|184:172,1,160.000001192093,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,144,3039,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,64,3466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,76,4320,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,160,4747,2,0,P|332:184|316:224,1,80.0000005960464,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,240,5602,2,0,P|424:276|464:292,2,80.0000005960464,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,304,6883,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,252,7738,5,4,0:0:0:0:
112,184,8165,2,0,P|84:100|124:36,1,160.000001192093,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,112,9447,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,40,9874,2,0,P|256:98|228:182,1,160.000001192093,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,268,11156,6,0,P|248:312|284:336,1,80.0000005960464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,264,12010,2,0,P|380:256|404:224,1,80.0000005960464,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,12864,12,4,14573,0:0:0:0:
200,184,15428,6,0,P|212:140|244:108,2,80.0000005960464,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,248,16709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,288,17137,2,0,P|292:320|372:276,1,160.000001192093,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,236,18418,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,176,18845,2,0,P|368:132|400:100,2,80.0000005960464,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,176,20127,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,56,20982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,92,21409,6,0,B|200:120|200:160|200:160|164:184|160:232,2,160.000001192093
256,192,23331,12,4,24826,0:0:0:0:
296,228,25681,6,0,P|340:236|380:224,2,80.0000005960464,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,260,26963,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,332,27390,2,0,P|132:252|164:188,1,160.000001192093,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,116,28671,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,56,29099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,29953,2,0,P|384:112|476:168,2,160.000001192093,0|12|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,196,32089,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,264,32516,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,272,33371,2,0,P|80:256|40:184,2,160.000001192093,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,188,35507,6,0,L|188:116,1,80.0000005960464,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,36361,2,0,L|324:100,1,80.0000005960464,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,164,37216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,244,37643,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,316,38497,5,4,0:0:0:0:
200,252,38925,2,0,P|156:244|120:252,2,80.0000005960464,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,40206,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,152,40633,2,0,P|116:155|68:139,1,80.0000005960464,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,72,41488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,84,41915,6,0,B|280:60|312:104|384:80,2,160.000001192093,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,44051,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,228,44478,1,10,0:0:0:0:
372,248,45333,6,0,P|360:304|336:328,2,80.0000005960464,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,180,46614,2,0,P|344:164|292:212,1,160.000001192093,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,180,47896,1,12,0:0:0:0:
180,264,48323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48750,12,6,50459,0:0:0:0:
128,60,52168,6,0,P|104:148|132:216,1,160.000001192093,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,188,53450,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,53877,2,0,P|128:292|64:268,2,120.00000089407,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,304,55586,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,272,56013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,184,56440,2,0,L|420:104,2,80.0000005960464,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,132,57722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,48,58149,2,0,P|208:116|224:188,1,160.000001192093,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,59431,5,8,0:0:0:0:
124,168,59858,2,0,P|124:88|168:16,2,160.000001192093,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,61994,2,0,P|192:236|244:244,1,80.0000005960464,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,184,62848,6,0,P|366:161|388:100,2,120.00000089407,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,64557,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,124,64985,2,0,P|144:144|80:100,1,160.000001192093,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,66266,6,0,L|120:228,1,160.000001192093,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,304,67548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,67975,2,0,P|224:200|256:164,2,80.0000005960464,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,69257,2,0,P|344:232|380:200,1,80.0000005960464,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,152,70111,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,70538,2,0,P|320:68|400:140,1,200.000001490116,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,220,72034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,268,72461,2,0,P|304:324|260:324,1,120.00000089407,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,73529,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,188,73956,2,0,L|116:172,1,80.0000005960464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,100,74810,2,0,L|104:56,2,80.0000005960464,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76092,12,2,77801,0:0:0:0:
184,136,78655,6,0,P|252:112|336:144,1,160.000001192093,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,316,80364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,236,81219,2,0,P|120:208|92:120,2,160.000001192093,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83141,12,4,84636,0:0:0:0:
224,152,85491,6,0,P|260:140|312:148,1,80.0000005960464,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86345,12,0,88054,0:0:0:0:

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-07-07T02:47:44+00:00

-GN wrote:
[jonathanjfl's Hard]
great diff! still a couple suggestions though
00:00:903 (1,2,3,4) - flip horizontally, it flows better to me because you keep the counterclockwise momentum with 00:02:611 (1,2,3) i kust made it spin the other way
00:17:137 (4,1) - the way you blanket some sliders with bezier curves looks weird to me. consider changing them to normal curves instead its for sake of variety, ive done too many proper blankets in my life orz
01:03:062 (2) - this would be cooler if it was the same slider as (1), but reversed and placed at x:388 y:300 like this: true
01:03:062
01:22:500 (4,1) - this stack overlaps a bit with (3), consider spacing them a bit more or move (1) did manual stacking

Thanks for the mod~

Xinely wrote:
Hard
[*]00:12:864 (5) - how nazi, NC for consistency lol ok
[*]00:22:690 (3) - ctrl+G? it's can make nice jump sure i guess
[*]00:12:864 (5) - in tail, change clap with finish? i think you meant 00:38:070 (4)? yeah that was a mistake fixed xD
[*]00:41:061 (2) - ctrl+G? it's more fit when next slider in stanza lol i would like a linear flow here actually, also this is to rebound the flow on 00:40:206 (1) since there is a repeat
can't catch anymore, nice as usual jonathan

Thanks for the mod~ (wow i said it twice)
http://puu.sh/3wNOX.zip

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-07T07:19:08+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Ohai ~
from M4M in game

2 times use my banner /o/

General
as i mention in my other mod (ofc in ur map), soft-hitclap1 soft-sliderslide not give any effect, just remove

Normal
AR+1 please, different AR in Normal and Hard too much far if you use AR 3
00:00:903 (1) - you can try finish in head
00:09:447 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:26:749 (1) - i find nazi. 128,168 to make diagonal together?
00:38:497 (1) - make it more branket? http://puu.sh/3wKo7.jpg
00:44:905 (4) - nazi again 168,308 for diagonal again
01:13:102 - 01:15:665 - clap in here, i think it's weird.. try use clap custom hitsound
01:25:491 (1) - whistle tail?
i just wonder why you not use custom hitsound lol
fixed all

Insane
yeah bpm 140. AR 9 not fit here, just use AR8
00:10:728 (3) - ctrl+G in here, don't make Death jump when song still relax like this. you will kill all player :> ~~Let me kill them =w=~~Fixed lol~
well, i can't mod insane orz so i will end in here

Well, nice song.. Good Luck ~

Thanks for the mod Xinely >w<, and as for the hitsounds in normal I don't think it's needed since it's following vocal with whistles

-GN wrote:
[Insane]
00:04:320 (1,2,1,2) - why isn't this a square like 00:00:903 (1,2,3,4) ?First one is a square second triangle next one square o-o
00:15:001 (1,2) - reduce spacing by half, or so? it plays nicer to me imo is fine, so I'll keep it for now like this
00:17:137 (4,5) - same as above ^
00:20:554 (5,6) - increase spacing a bit? the patterns before the slider-circle-slider thing and after this slider are both jumps, so it'd be consistent, and anti-jumps are no fun. fixed
00:32:516 (3) - reverse this slider? it makes that combo a little more interesting. you do something similar a couple other spots as well. fixed
00:56:013 (3) - this stack is a bit weird to play, why not make it a small jump by putting it on x:24 y:208 or something? I prefer to keep it 1.00x here ><
00:57:081 (8) - same as above, but x:264 y:240
01:00:072 (4) - same as above, but x:352 y:148
01:04:771 (2) - curve this slightly and change the stream after a bit? Only changed the stream
01:13:529 (1,2,1,2) - i think you should space these a bit I'll consider

Thanks for the mod :3

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-08T11:55:19+00:00

Hi, as Oyatsu request lol xD
[Oyatsu's Easy]
Really Nice diff. I can't say anything
[Normal]
Plz more careful in hitsound : from 00:00:903 - to 00:06:883, I suggest you add hitsound (whistle), In kiai time, only use whistle Why don't clap. Kiai time is higher and famous in a song. 01:17:801 - 01:22:927 - Add whistle as rhythm. Hitsound is so simple. You are baka xD

AR+4, HP+3 as rule of Normal diff.
00:06:883 - Add whistle
00:16:282 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is difficult for poor player. Play with 1/3 rhythm. Try:
00:39:779 (2,1) - Repeat them. Circle before, slider after
00:45:333 (1) - Add finish at begin
00:47:042 (1) - Try end at 00:47:682 - . Add a slider start at 00:47:896 - and end at 00:48:323 -
01:25:491 (1) - Use normal slider is nice!. It isn't quite nice with me ><
00:02:184 (2,3,2,3) - It you are making opposite. Let try see how is place of them?
00:26:749 (1) - Vocal still appear. It isn't diffirent. Remove NC,plz
00:29:953 (1) - Remove NC
00:31:235 (3,1) - NC at (3) will be sensible
00:36:788 (1) - Remove NC. Not anything diffirent with previous NC. Why NC here?

~Big problem~
More careful in hitsound (whistle). Hitsound is so simple as I said. You honestly need make a sure way

[jona's Hard]
00:01:330 (2,4) - Try to add whistle as 00:03:039 (2,3) -
00:11:796 - Add note. Vocal doesn't disappear
00:28:885 (2) - Add whistle at begin
00:30:807 (3) - Finish instead of clap

I'm bad at Isane diff. so I'm sorry I won't mod or maybe I will give you some advice in-game. Bye~ Good luck with you, Oyatsu, jona ^^

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-08T14:19:10+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
Hi, as Oyatsu request lol xD

[Normal]
Plz more careful in hitsound : from 00:00:903 - to 00:06:883, I suggest you add hitsound (whistle), In kiai time, only use whistle Why don't clap. Kiai time is higher and famous in a song. 01:17:801 - 01:22:927 - Add whistle as rhythm. Hitsound is so simple. You are baka xD

AR+4, HP+3 as rule of Normal diff.
00:06:883 - Add whistle
00:16:282 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is difficult for poor player. Play with 1/3 rhythm. Try:
00:39:779 (2,1) - Repeat them. Circle before, slider after
00:45:333 (1) - Add finish at begin
00:47:042 (1) - Try end at 00:47:682 - . Add a slider start at 00:47:896 - and end at 00:48:323 -
01:25:491 (1) - Use normal slider is nice!. It isn't quite nice with me ><
00:02:184 (2,3,2,3) - It you are making opposite. Let try see how is place of them?
00:26:749 (1) - Vocal still appear. It isn't diffirent. Remove NC,plz
00:29:953 (1) - Remove NC
00:31:235 (3,1) - NC at (3) will be sensible
00:36:788 (1) - Remove NC. Not anything diffirent with previous NC. Why NC here?
~Big problem~
More careful in hitsound (whistle). Hitsound is so simple as I said. You honestly need make a sure way
~~orz me too lazy to put hitsound =w=~~ okay fixed =w=, fixed all except 00:16:282 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is difficult for poor player. Play with 1/3 rhythm. Try:

Thanks for mod Oyatsu =w=

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2013-07-08T17:47:30+00:00

Mod for my request :O

General

[General]

BPM is not exactly correct I think(?), You need to change from 140.445 -> 140.5 orz I'm baka

Make sure you resnap all notes and any necessary lines if you do this,( Click time tab above and find "Resnap all notes"
Combo color 2 and 3 look oddly similar, for some people it might be hard to tell them apart, and there are different colors to fit if you want dark colors. Anyways, I think you should replace combo color 3 with this dark blue color, it looks wonders to me. Two ways you can do this really, (Do to all diffs)

How to apply #1 : Go to .osu and find the [Colors] section and find Combo3 line and replace it all with this :
```
Combo3 : 128,0,128
```
How to apply #2: Go to Song Setup: "Colours" and click on "Combo 3" and replace the 6 numbers so it looks like this
```
Hue:140  Red:0
Sat:240  Green:64
Lum:60   Blue:128
```
Audio lead-in needs to be increased to 2 , I think its a bit too short, I think 3 seconds is enough to suffice though.

Oyatsu's Easy

[Oyatsu's Easy]

AR+1 (Only do if Chippy doesn't want to decrease AR in his/her diff)
00:15:428 (1) - This slider can be changed to something else, nothing wrong with it on how it is, but Its already used later in the map, try something else, possibly this I guess : http://puu.sh/3xSQG.jpg
00:21:409 (1) - Bleh, usually It would feel much,much better if you add whistles to those strong beats for example, the one in this slider end, or you can add drum finish, but its your choice, I think those ends really need to have hitsounds because they sound so loud
00:29:099 (2) - Whistle sounds better here, then in previous note, maybe remove whistle from previous and add it here? and ORZ the whistle sound should be added to strong beats like 00:26:535 - , 00:29:099 (2) -
00:45:333 (1,2,3,4) - Sorry, I don't like how this section looks, the pattern is fine, but it looks mixed in with other notes, so it kinda looks messy try this design : http://puu.sh/3xTiX.jpg http://puu.sh/3xTju.jpg
00:56:440 (3) - Add whistle to slider end, to put emphasis on the beat there.
01:02:848 (1) - ^
01:07:548 (2) - ^ Just to circle.
01:09:257 (4) - ^ to Slider start
01:13:956 (2) - ^ to end
01:07:975 (3) - Try to reposition to something like this : the slider makes overlap to above notes, and looks crowded again. Here an example you can try : http://puu.sh/3xTrx.jpg
01:18:655 (1,2,3) - Make this a symmetrical pattern? There already enough blanketing in this diff orz http://puu.sh/3xTyQ.jpg
01:25:491 (1) - Be consistent with Chippy's diff and use finish instead of clap

Normal

[Normal]

00:02:184 (2,3,4) - Don't make it linear, its not correct with the upcoming part. try this : http://puu.sh/3xUaH.jpg , its more better flow with next combo
00:03:039 (4) - I think you miss whistle at slider end? Its not consistent with next combo
00:18:845 (1) - These kind of long sliders don't really belong in Normal orz, try to break it down into more notes, you miss alot of beats here, so I think its a good idea to break rhythm down, Maybe try this : http://puu.sh/3xVcR.jpg
00:35:080 (4,5,6) - Make symmetrical would be better, to make more cleaner map: here how it should look like : http://puu.sh/3xV8c.jpg
00:39:779 (1,2) - Orz, I don't think this follows well, either replace with one of these two things would be better for Normal :
SPOILER
00:41:061 (4) - There is something called sampleset in the left top screen : http://puu.sh/3xVpt.jpg . that being said, change sampleset of end to "Drum" it sound much better to me, Same for here 00:40:206 - and 00:47:042 (1) -
00:47:042 (1) - Move down more so the slider end stack with 00:44:478 (3) - position, whatever, here the code : "Find 172,148 in .osu file and put in"
```
172,148,47042,6,0,P|216:200|248:268,1,135,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:58:363 (2,3) - Replace hitsounds here, with finish , sounds better and more consistent

Johnny's Hard

[Johnny's Hard]

00:19:273 (6) - Eww, weird slider , It doesn't look nice with previous QAQ, maybe try different shape T_T
00:37:643 (3) - Ahhh, the slider end feels kinda weird, I think only the two vocal hits are needed to emphasize here "like "to" and "cah", but Its fine if you want to keep
00:46:614 (4) - Orz why no slider jump here QAQ, what I mean is this http://puu.sh/3xXtS.jpg
00:33:798 (2) - NOOO, There needs to be a slider instead of that reverse, The vocals need to be clicked on QAQ , what I mean is this : http://puu.sh/3xXBw.jpg
01:13:956 (5) - CURVE THESE, I see them too much, wait I just suggested you do one of those orz
01:24:636 (1,2) - These sliders need to be reverse sliders, like 01:25:491 (3) - , this part is streamy
Good Job asdizxc

Insane

[Insane]

00:04:320 (6) - Err, New combo needs to be here I believe, remove the other nc around here
00:28:885 (2,3) - , Eh try to stack 2 with 3 , usually stack notes that don't really have any emphatic beat. Here what you can do http://puu.sh/3xYmL.jpg Feels much better
00:34:225 (3) - Orz, you can add more jumps here, it feels alot better anyways, try this I guess http://puu.sh/3xYqy.jpg , This part is perfect for jumps IMO
00:35:080 (1) - Increase spacing, or possible try this pattern I suppose, http://puu.sh/3xYvG.jpg , It fits better to me again
00:53:236 (5) - Move this to the right more, its already touching the previous notes and makes the pentagon shape look overall, please fix spacing of next note if you change this http://puu.sh/3xYBA.jpg
00:57:295 (1,2) - Move both notes to the right more, so they are centered to the grid properly
01:02:208 - I think your missing note, you added it here 01:03:916 (4) - , but not here, and please I think its bad if you don't make this note jump to the next orz it plays bad
01:07:548 (1,2,3) - Try something else, this looks copy-pasted, maybe flip it vertically like this http://puu.sh/3xYM0.jpg
01:08:189 (4,5,6) - Same for this, it looks copy-pasted too try to do something else like this http://puu.sh/3xYPy.jpg
01:14:383 (1) - New combo isn't needed this is all part of 1 pattern, so patterns should have same combo
01:15:131 (5) - New pattern here, and start of stream so new combo fits here.

Last edited by Tari 2013-07-09T05:05:56+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2013-07-08T18:52:39+00:00

heyyy, trying for M4M

hope you find these helpful

[Insane]

00:04:320 (6) - NC makes more sense here because of the words and rhythm change
00:21:622 (2) - stack this on the tail of 00:20:554 (5)?
00:23:118 - finish on the end of the spinner
00:42:663 (3) - even listening at 25% i cannot here this note following anything in the music
00:45:333 (1) - remove finish from the tail
00:53:236 (5) - move to the right more, it's touching previous notes D:
01:02:208 - add a note here to better match vocals?
01:15:985 (11) - move this note to somewhere around x:196 y:332 so that the stream will look more circular
01:24:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make symmetrical

[Jonathanlasdkf's Hard]

00:22:263 (2) - remove clap from head? sounds off from your current pattern
00:47:042 (1) - how about extending this slider to 00:47:469 to better match vocals and hit that beat in the background?
00:52:809 (2) - clap on the tail sounds weird
01:22:500 (4,1) - is this incomplete stacking intentional?

[Normal]

00:35:080 (4) - add NC here?
00:39:779 (1,2) - the rhythm sounds weird here, try this?

SPOILER

00:43:197 (2) - also sounds a bit odd, maybe add a circle at 00:43:197, and move slider to 00:43:624 and shorten by 1/1?

SPOILER

00:57:295 (1,2,3) - make symmetrical?

[Oyatsu's Easy]

00:35:961 (2) - make parallel to previous slider?
01:04:557 (2) - move to x:300 y:96 for better blanketing, and adjust next few notes for distance
01:10:111 (1) - can you somehow adjust this so it's not overlapped by 01:07:975 (3)?

yaayyy goodluckk

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-08T19:03:58+00:00

Tari wrote:
Mod for my request :O
General
[General]
BPM is not exactly correct, You need to change from 140.445 -> 140.5

Make sure you resnap all notes and any necessary lines if you do this,( Click time tab above and find "Resnap all notes"
Combo color 2 and 3 look oddly similar, for some people it might be hard to tell them apart, and there are different colors to fit if you want dark colors. Anyways, I think you should replace combo color 3 with this dark blue color, it looks wonders to me. Two ways you can do this really, (Do to all diffs)

How to apply #1 : Go to .osu and find the [Colors] section and find Combo3 line and replace it all with this :
Combo3 : 128,0,128
How to apply #2: Go to Song Setup: "Colours" and click on "Combo 3" and replace the 6 numbers so it looks like this
Hue:140  Red:0
Sat:240  Green:64
Lum:60   Blue:128
Audio lead-in needs to be increased to 2 , I think its a bit too short, I think 3 seconds is enough to suffice though.
Normal
[Normal]
00:02:184 (2,3,4) - Don't make it linear, its not correct with the upcoming part. try this : http://puu.sh/3xUaH.jpg , its more better flow with next combo
00:03:039 (4) - I think you miss whistle at slider end? Its not consistent with next combo
00:18:845 (1) - These kind of long sliders don't really belong in Normal orz, try to break it down into more notes, you miss alot of beats here, so I think its a good idea to break rhythm down, Maybe try this : http://puu.sh/3xVcR.jpg
00:35:080 (4,5,6) - Make symmetrical would be better, to make more cleaner map: here how it should look like : http://puu.sh/3xV8c.jpg
00:39:779 (1,2) - Orz, I don't think this follows well, either replace with one of these two things would be better for Normal :
SPOILER

00:41:061 (4) - There is something called sampleset in the left top screen : http://puu.sh/3xVpt.jpg . that being said, change sampleset of end to "Drum" it sound much better to me, Same for here 00:40:206 - and 00:47:042 (1) -
00:47:042 (1) - Move down more so the slider end stack with 00:44:478 (3) - position, whatever, here the code : "Find 172,148 in .osu file and put in"
172,148,47042,6,0,P|216:200|248:268,1,135,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:58:363 (2,3) - Replace hitsounds here, with finish , sounds better and more consistent
Insane
[Insane]

00:04:320 (6) - Err, New combo needs to be here I believe, remove the other nc around here
00:28:885 (2,3) - , Eh try to stack 2 with 3 , usually stack notes that don't really have any emphatic beat. Here what you can do http://puu.sh/3xYmL.jpg Feels much better
00:34:225 (3) - Orz, you can add more jumps here, it feels alot better anyways, try this I guess http://puu.sh/3xYqy.jpg , This part is perfect for jumps IMO
00:35:080 (1) - Increase spacing, or possible try this pattern I suppose, http://puu.sh/3xYvG.jpg , It fits better to me again
00:53:236 (5) - Move this to the right more, its already touching the previous notes and makes the pentagon shape look overall, please fix spacing of next note if you change this http://puu.sh/3xYBA.jpg
00:57:295 (1,2) - Move both notes to the right more, so they are centered to the grid properly
01:02:208 - I think your missing note, you added it here 01:03:916 (4) - , but not here, and please I think its bad if you don't make this note jump to the next orz it plays bad
01:07:548 (1,2,3) - Try something else, this looks copy-pasted, maybe flip it vertically like this http://puu.sh/3xYM0.jpg
01:08:189 (4,5,6) - Same for this, it looks copy-pasted too try to do something else like this http://puu.sh/3xYPy.jpg
01:14:383 (1) - New combo isn't needed this is all part of 1 pattern, so patterns should have same combo
01:15:131 (5) - New pattern here, and start of stream so new combo fits here.

Okay well... fixed all =w=, Thank you very much for your mod Tari >w<

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-08T19:15:11+00:00

Raose wrote:
heyyy, trying for M4M hope you find these helpful

[Insane]

00:04:320 (6) - NC makes more sense here because of the words and rhythm change
00:21:622 (2) - stack this on the tail of 00:20:554 (5)?
00:23:118 - finish on the end of the spinner
00:42:663 (3) - even listening at 25% i cannot here this note following anything in the music
00:45:333 (1) - remove finish from the tail
00:53:236 (5) - move to the right more, it's touching previous notes D:
01:02:208 - add a note here to better match vocals?
01:15:985 (11) - move this note to somewhere around x:196 y:332 so that the stream will look more circular
01:24:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make symmetrical

[Normal]

00:35:080 (4) - add NC here?
00:39:779 (1,2) - the rhythm sounds weird here, try this?
SPOILER
00:43:197 (2) - also sounds a bit odd, maybe add a circle at 00:43:197, and move slider to 00:43:624 and shorten by 1/1?
SPOILER
00:57:295 (1,2,3) - make symmetrical?

yaayyy goodluckk

Some we're fixed in previous mod but for the rest fixed everything~! :3
Thanks for the mod Raose~ =w=

ushiromiya _maria

26 posts

Joined August 2012

ushiromiya _maria 2013-07-08T20:21:55+00:00

Hi mapper,here is the mod from the Tsumiki's Modding Queue..
Oyatsu's Easy
00:53:877 (3) - Make the slider shorter to the white bit and remove the clap, and on
00:55:159 (4) - Add a circle and add a clap here

01:02:848 (1) - The same for here
01:04:130 (2) - Add a clap here

I did not find anything else, I think it is good

Normal
00:15:422 (1) - Move the slider a little further of the next
01:20:120 (3) - Add a circle here

jonathanlfj's Hard
00:44:034 (2) - Add a circle
00:54:817 (4) - Remove the clap, it does not sound good
01:01:650 (4) - Same here
01:23:536 (2) - Add a circle

Insane
00:58:554 (3) - Remove the clap

It is a good map and a good song i hope it get ranked Good luck
Sorry for the short and bad mod

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-09T01:31:21+00:00

Tari

[Oyatsu's Easy]

AR+1 (Only do if Chippy doesn't want to decrease AR in his/her diff) fixed
00:15:428 (1) - This slider can be changed to something else, nothing wrong with it on how it is, but Its already used later in the map, try something else, possibly this I guess : http://puu.sh/3xSQG.jpg ok
00:21:409 (1) - Bleh, usually It would feel much,much better if you add whistles to those strong beats for example, the one in this slider end, or you can add drum finish, but its your choice, I think those ends really need to have hitsounds because they sound so loud maybe I fixed. I don't understand your mean enough
00:29:099 (2) - Whistle sounds better here, then in previous note, maybe remove whistle from previous and add it here? and ORZ the whistle sound should be added to strong beats like 00:26:535 - , 00:29:099 (2) - fixed
00:45:333 (1,2,3,4) - Sorry, I don't like how this section looks, the pattern is fine, but it looks mixed in with other notes, so it kinda looks messy try this design : http://puu.sh/3xTiX.jpg http://puu.sh/3xTju.jpg first 1st link, I don't think it is nicer than me. 2nd link, new bie starts to learn way to round spin in center. Note is far from center spin
00:56:440 (3) - Add whistle to slider end, to put emphasis on the beat there. Maybe you copied the link false.
01:02:848 (1) - ^ ^
01:07:548 (2) - ^ Just to circle. ^
01:09:257 (4) - ^ to Slider start ^
01:13:956 (2) - ^ to end ^
01:07:975 (3) - Try to reposition to something like this : the slider makes overlap to above notes, and looks crowded again. Here an example you can try : http://puu.sh/3xTrx.jpg fixed
01:18:655 (1,2,3) - Make this a symmetrical pattern? There already enough blanketing in this diff orz http://puu.sh/3xTyQ.jpg fixed
01:25:491 (1) - Be consistent with Chippy's diff and use finish instead of clap I unchange. Every one make hitsound diffirent. I don't understand Why finish?

Raose

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:35:961 (2) - make parallel to previous slider?

fixed
01:04:557 (2) - move to x:300 y:96 for better blanketing, and adjust next few notes for distance

nope
01:10:111 (1) - can you somehow adjust this so it's not overlapped by 01:07:975 (3)?

ushiromiya _maria

Oyatsu's Easy
00:53:877 (3) - Make the slider shorter to the white bit and remove the clap, and on

nope. I make as vocal
00:55:159 (4) - Add a circle and add a clap here

?

01:02:848 (1) - The same for here

^
01:04:130 (2) - Add a clap here

Why? It isn't a rhythm
I did not find anything else, I think it is good

Thanks for all modders, Update my diff~

Updtae

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ELISA - Suba ni Iru yo TV Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Soba ni Iru yo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:そばにいるよ (TV Size)
Artist:ELISA
ArtistUnicode:ELISA
Creator:xChippy
Version:Oyatsu's Easy
Source:Kakumeiki Valvrave
Tags:The Liberator ending 革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ Sunrise jonathanlfj Oyatsu
BeatmapID:271197
BeatmapSetID:102681

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.800000005960464
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,500,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo2 : 128,0,0
Combo3 : 128,0,128

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jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-07-09T03:30:44+00:00

wow lots of mods

Oyatsu wrote:
[jona's Hard]
00:01:330 (2,4) - Try to add whistle as 00:03:039 (2,3) - ok
00:11:796 - Add note. Vocal doesn't disappear i would like to keep a pause here since the vocal there is relatively weak
00:28:885 (2) - Add whistle at begin sure
00:30:807 (3) - Finish instead of clap added finish here

Tari wrote:
[Johnny's Hard]
00:19:273 (6) - Eww, weird slider , It doesn't look nice with previous QAQ, maybe try different shape T_T wut this is 00:18:838 (5) rotated by 120 degrees xD
00:37:643 (3) - Ahhh, the slider end feels kinda weird, I think only the two vocal hits are needed to emphasize here "like "to" and "cah", but Its fine if you want to keep well im actually following the drums here
00:46:614 (4) - Orz why no slider jump here QAQ, what I mean is this http://puu.sh/3xXtS.jpg true
00:33:798 (2) - NOOO, There needs to be a slider instead of that reverse, The vocals need to be clicked on QAQ , what I mean is this : http://puu.sh/3xXBw.jpg sure
01:13:956 (5) - CURVE THESE, I see them too much, wait I just suggested you do one of those orz i will actually curve some others ones since i want to keep these straight
01:24:636 (1,2) - These sliders need to be reverse sliders, like 01:25:491 (3) - , this part is streamy actually im kinda mapping to the drum taps here, but let me think about this
Good Job asdizxc tyty

Raose wrote:
[Jonathanlasdkf's Hard]
00:22:263 (2) - remove clap from head? sounds off from your current pattern ok
00:47:042 (1) - how about extending this slider to 00:47:469 to better match vocals and hit that beat in the background? to me 00:47:237 sounds like a more dominant beat if you listen to the bass pattern
00:52:809 (2) - clap on the tail sounds weird im not sure which slider this is referring to since the link takes me to a circle
01:22:500 (4,1) - is this incomplete stacking intentional? yes it is to avoid stack leniency shifting 01:22:468 (4) upwards

ushiromiya _maria wrote:
jonathanlfj's Hard
00:44:034 (2) - Add a circle wanted to keep a pause here due to a rather long vocal pause
00:54:817 (4) - Remove the clap, it does not sound good ok
01:01:650 (4) - Same here yeah
01:23:536 (2) - Add a circle i would like to keep the blank as this combo is a build up for 01:24:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6)

Thanks for the mods~
http://puu.sh/3ymUF.zip

i am verifying the new bpm with BATs right now as i think 140.5 is a bit fast for this song
EDIT: Verified the correct bpm is 140.445, please revert it back ><

pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2013-07-09T05:21:22+00:00

hi, from my queue

[Timing]
offset -10, BPM 140.45?

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:21:401 (1) - add finish on end to match cymbal
01:09:230 (4) - add finish on start to match previous pattern
01:25:458 (1) - make it symmetrical plz

[Normal]
00:09:443 (3) - missing whistle on end
00:32:290 (1) - no need to NC here
00:39:764 (1) - no need to NC here

[jonathanflj's Hard]
fine

[Insane]
00:04:319 (1) - stack under end of (3) plz
00:10:725 (3,4,1) - any reason this is stacked while the other one isn't? maybe unstack would make a nice feeling with violin in music

00:36:774 (1,2) - switch NCs for spacing and rhythm change
00:38:483 (1) - confusing spacing, stack under (7) seems fine'
01:12:433 (1) - no need to put spinner here, imo add note here stack on (2) would make a nice feeling with vocals~ then continue to follow vocals would be more interesting imo

01:13:500 (1,2,3,4) - here would be a nice place for jump ~ it's an insane diff and just stay in one place here is kind of boring
01:13:500 (1,3) - remove claps, no reason to put extra claps here, the song soudns the same as before ._.//
01:22:895 (1) - man there's no need to put so many spinners here

follow violin in music here would be more fun ~

nice map, good luck

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2013-07-09T05:56:42+00:00

ahh sorry about that chippy ><

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-09T06:11:16+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
hi, from my queue

[Normal]
00:09:443 (3) - missing whistle on end
00:32:290 (1) - no need to NC here
00:39:764 (1) - no need to NC here

[Insane]
00:04:319 (1) - stack under end of (3) plz would break the spacing of the next notes >.> so no fix
00:10:725 (3,4,1) - any reason this is stacked while the other one isn't? maybe unstack would make a nice feeling with violin in music
00:36:774 (1,2) - switch NCs for spacing and rhythm change
00:38:483 (1) - confusing spacing, stack under (7) seems fine'
01:12:433 (1) - no need to put spinner here, imo add note here stack on (2) would make a nice feeling with vocals~ then continue to follow vocals would be more interesting imo
01:13:500 (1,2,3,4) - here would be a nice place for jump ~ it's an insane diff and just stay in one place here is kind of boring
01:13:500 (1,3) - remove claps, no reason to put extra claps here, the song soudns the same as before ._.// Well it sounds a little different tho o-o I hear claps every white tick there
01:22:895 (1) - man there's no need to put so many spinners here follow violin in music here would be more fun ~ I'll consider ><
Fixed the rest
nice map, good luck

ushiromiya _maria wrote:
Hi mapper,here is the mod from the Tsumiki's Modding Queue..

Normal
00:15:422 (1) - Move the slider a little further of the next fixed
01:20:120 (3) - Add a circle here theres already a circle o-o

Insane
00:58:554 (3) - Remove the clap fixed

It is a good map and a good song i hope it get ranked Good luck
Sorry for the short and bad mod

Thanks for the mod~!! >w<

Last edited by xChippy 2013-07-09T06:27:26+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-09T06:21:51+00:00

@Tari, lol it's okay =w=
anyway fixed the timing. :3

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2013-07-09T10:40:38+00:00

Hellow~~for M4M~~
Then the following are some of my personal suggestions，wish it can help you~~

speak bad english sry
[General]

IN diff,slider may be more bent,for beautiful

you can try more jump style in IN diff ,beacuse somewhere like this00:59:431 (2,3,4,5) -3,4 all together,looks bad effect and boring to hit.

[Insane]

00:26:108 (2) - Crooked

00:19:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these does not look very good

try this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856656

00:27:390 (2) - same try this

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856660

00:30:380 (2) - same try this

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856672

00:34:225 (3) - same

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856675

00:57:295 - 01:03:489 - Not the same.first one try this

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856689

01:12:888 (5,7) - these two put them to X144 Y240

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856718
[jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:19:273 (6) - here do this

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856720

00:22:263 (2) - same

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856722

good diff ~~~done well

[Normal]

01:21:432 (1,2) - these two may be replaced to a short slider

01:14:276 - here follow your map way should put like this,try

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856943
[Easy]

00:15:428 (1) - 00:53:877 (3) - change it to a long slider,here may lead to misconception

01:25:491 (1) - ....looks bad

Good song~~enjoy it ,go rank it~~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-09T13:13:30+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
Hellow~~for M4M~~
Then the following are some of my personal suggestions，wish it can help you~~
speak bad english sry
[General]
IN diff,slider may be more bent,for beautiful
you can try more jump style in IN diff ,beacuse somewhere like this00:59:431 (2,3,4,5) -3,4 all together,looks bad effect and boring to hit.
[Insane]
00:26:108 (2) - Crooked
00:19:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these does not look very good
try this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856656
00:27:390 (2) - same try this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856660
00:30:380 (2) - same try this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856672
00:34:225 (3) - same
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856675
00:57:295 - 01:03:489 - Not the same.first one try this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856689
01:12:888 (5,7) - these two put them to X144 Y240
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856718
errr don't remember which I fixed =w=, but fixed some
[Normal]
01:21:432 (1,2) - these two may be replaced to a short slider fixed
01:14:276 - here follow your map way should put like this,try I'm following the instruments here
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856943

Thanks for your mod~

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-07-09T19:01:19+00:00

request via PM
hi x)

[General]

How about Audio Lead In 1500?

[Oyatsu's Easy]

01:10:538 (2) - putting it in a blanket?
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:53:023 (2) - putting 1 grid up? to be a straight line with 00:52:168 (1,3) , if you take this, dont forget to snap them as well
00:56:867 (4,1) - make them to be a straight line?

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:07:738 (1) - make it to be parallel with 00:08:592 (2) ?
00:12:224 (3) - 1 grid up looks better
nice diff

[Insane]

00:23:118 (1) - how about put it to 00:23:224 , and put a note at 00:23:118 (5) ?
01:11:606 (2) - finish?
01:19:189 (3,4,5) - make them neater?
SPOILER
01:22:073 (4) - NC?

Shortness mod sorry

didnt find any big problem owo
have a star
Good Luck x)

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-07-09T19:20:40+00:00

sry I'm in a slump. don't expect so much lol

General

[color=#FF0040e812]Offset -8 (895). totally, Notes are slowly appear than this song.[/color]

[headinge812]Oyatsu's Easy[/heading]

[*]00:08:165 (2,4) - Makes more perfect blanket.
[*]00:24:826 - lower volume plz. like 40~50%
[*]00:51:741 - Add 1 circle?
[*]00:5640 (3) - Add finish on slider's end.
[*]01:10:111 (1) - Distance is x1.19. make it x1.1
[*]01:2591 (1) - More lengthen this slider to red tick. it will be more fit vocal's downbeat.

SPOILER

[/list]

Normal

00:16:282 (1,2,3) - Consider this rhythm. in normal diff, 1/4 circle is really hard to play.
[spoilerboxe812][imge812]http://puu.sh/3yPts.jpg[/img][/spoilerbox]
00:3897 (1) - Makes more perfect blanket.
[spoilerboxe812][imge812]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/857798[/img][/spoilerbox]
00:57:295 (1) - Change whistle to finish at slider's end.
01:01:140 (1) - Delete whistle sound.
01:13:529 (1,2,1) - Rhythm is a little strange. I recommend following vocals. like this.
SPOILER

jonathanlfj's Hard

00:07:311 (4,5) - How about change this to repeat 1/4 slider one? fit violin sound much better IMO.
SPOILER
[img]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/857788[/imge812][/spoilerboxe812]
00:33:371 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is a little strange. how about this rhythm? because, between 1~2 has downbeat sound. consult number 1~3
[spoilerbox][img]http://puu.sh/3yP9g.jpg[/imge812][/spoilerboxe812]

Insane

00:02:932 (2) - How about delete this? I don't hear any sound. players might think to awkward.
00:04:320 (1) - Add whistle. it is your pattern.
00:58:576 (3,4) - No no. this circle should be put jump. this part has high volume (like finish sound.)
[spoilerbox]

01:0512 (4) - Add clap01:13:102 (6) - ^01:13:529 (1,3) - Delete clap on slider's first.01:15:238 (2,6) - Add clap01:16:092 (1) - I don't like this spinner. because, this spinner was ignored strong finish sound. how about this?

SPOILER

That's all

GL

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-07-09T19:28:07+00:00

F**king bug =3= sry. again

Oyatsu's Easy

00:08:165 (2,4) - Makes more perfect blanket.
00:24:826 - lower volume plz. like 40~50%
00:51:741 - Add 1 circle?
00:56:440 (3) - - Add finish on slider's end.
01:10:111 (1) - Distance is x1.19. make it x1.1
01:25:491 (1) - More lengthen this slider to red tick. it will be more fit vocal's downbeat.
SPOILER

Normal

00:16:282 (1,2,3) - Consider this rhythm. in normal diff, 1/4 circle is really hard to play.
SPOILER
00:38:497 (1) - Makes more perfect blanket.
SPOILER
00:57:295 (1) - Change whistle to finish at slider's end.
01:01:140 (1) - Delete whistle sound.
01:13:529 (1,2,1) - Rhythm is a little strange. I recommend following vocals. like this.
SPOILER

jonathanlfj's Hard

00:07:311 (4,5) - How about change this to repeat 1/4 slider one? fit violin sound much better IMO.
SPOILER
00:33:371 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is a little strange. how about this rhythm? because, between 1~2 has downbeat sound. consult number 1~3
SPOILER

Insane

00:02:932 (2) - How about delete this? I don't hear any sound. players might think to awkward.
00:04:320 (1) - Add whistle. it is your pattern.
00:58:576 (3,4) - No no. this circle should be put jump. this part has high volume (like finish sound.)
SPOILER
01:05:412 (4) - Add clap
01:13:102 (6) - ^
01:13:529 (1,3) - Delete clap on slider's first.
01:15:238 (2,6) - Add clap
01:16:092 (1) - I don't like this spinner. because, this spinner was ignored strong finish sound. how about this?
SPOILER

That's all

GL

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-09T20:28:10+00:00

happy623 wrote:
request via PM
hi x)

[General]
How about Audio Lead In 1500? I'll consider
[Normal]
00:53:023 (2) - putting 1 grid up? to be a straight line with 00:52:168 (1,3) , if you take this, dont forget to snap them as well fixed
00:56:867 (4,1) - make them to be a straight line? imo it's fine now also don't want it too straight
[Insane]
00:23:118 (1) - how about put it to 00:23:224 , and put a note at 00:23:118 (5) ?
01:11:606 (2) - finish?
01:19:189 (3,4,5) - make them neater?
SPOILER
01:22:073 (4) - NC?
fixed all here~
Shortness mod sorry
didnt find any big problem owo
have a star
Good Luck x)

Thanks for the mod happy623 >w<~!

scanter wrote:
F**king bug =3= sry. again

Normal
00:16:282 (1,2,3) - Consider this rhythm. in normal diff, 1/4 circle is really hard to play.
SPOILER
00:38:497 (1) - Makes more perfect blanket.
SPOILER
00:57:295 (1) - Change whistle to finish at slider's end.
01:01:140 (1) - Delete whistle sound.
01:13:529 (1,2,1) - Rhythm is a little strange. I recommend following vocals. like this.
SPOILER
fixed all~ :3
Insane
00:02:932 (2) - How about delete this? I don't hear any sound. players might think to awkward. I hear the sss there tho o-o
00:04:320 (1) - Add whistle. it is your pattern.
00:58:576 (3,4) - No no. this circle should be put jump. this part has high volume (like finish sound.)
SPOILER
01:05:412 (4) - Add clap
01:13:102 (6) - ^
01:13:529 (1,3) - Delete clap on slider's first.
01:15:238 (2,6) - Add clap
01:16:092 (1) - I don't like this spinner. because, this spinner was ignored strong finish sound. how about this?
SPOILER
fixed all~
That's all GL

Thanks for your mod scanter >w<~!!

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-07-10T00:41:30+00:00

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Just remembering: xChippy didn't obey'd the Rule #2 of the Round! (see here) However, I accepted her request in behalf of jonathanlfj ♥ thence you should give thanks him, ok?

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on General Issues.

[Oyatsu's Easy]
01:25:491 (1) - Silencing the slider's tail is the best way for improving it, since it follows the voice.
01:25:491 (1) - Make it more symmetrical at Y-axis: move to x:216 y:152, 2nd node to x:256 y:144 and last node to x:296 y:152.
01:26:345 (1) - Silence the spinner's end to a Grand Finale.

[Normal]
01:16:092 (4) - Could drop off this note and extend the previous slider to here.
01:25:491 (1) - As of Easy diff, silencing the tail could make it feel better, since the tail's noise seems fighting bad with the voice.
01:26:345 (1) - Silence the spinner's end to a Grand Finale.

[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:14:680 (2) - this note feels a bit overmap, since has no burst sound to support it (like a floating table without feet).
♥ 00:17:030 (3) is correct.
♥ 00:18:739 (4) - ^
♥ 00:21:836 (1,2) - I LOVE THIS ^^ ~.~ The transition between these sliders (and some patterns like this) is just AMAZING ♥ so EPIC *.* (I'll try using these ones on my further maps ♥ and they are one of the main reasons why I like that starting patterns at the map Lady Gaga - Judas [Hard]. )
01:26:452 (1) - Silence the spinner's end to a Grand Finale.

[Insane]
01:01:994 (4) - Could unstack this? ....... There are two options: or making a regular triangle (x:188 y:200) ...... OR making it a bit harder (x:272 y:220).
01:26:345 (1) - Silence the spinner's end to a Grand Finale.

That's it ^^

GO GO RANKING as soon as possible!!!!!

Felt Easy and Normal may need some just a few nazi-moddings too (Hard is PERFECT). So take a

Att.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-07-10T02:25:55+00:00

reply to mods

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:19:273 (6) - here do this sure
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856720
00:22:263 (2) - same i would like to keep the stack and variation here
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/856722
good diff ~~~done well

happy623 wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:07:738 (1) - make it to be parallel with 00:08:592 (2) ? sure
00:12:224 (3) - 1 grid up looks better kk
nice diff

scanter wrote:
jonathanlfj's Hard
00:07:311 (4,5) - How about change this to repeat 1/4 slider one? fit violin sound much better IMO. good idea
SPOILER
00:33:371 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is a little strange. how about this rhythm? because, between 1~2 has downbeat sound. consult number 1~3 did something similar
SPOILER

Alarido wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:14:680 (2) - this note feels a bit overmap, since has no burst sound to support it (like a floating table without feet). i feel that the violin needs some coverage here xD
♥ 00:17:030 (3) is correct.
♥ 00:18:739 (4) - ^
♥ 00:21:836 (1,2) - I LOVE THIS ^^ ~.~ The transition between these sliders (and some patterns like this) is just AMAZING ♥ so EPIC *.* (I'll try using these ones on my further maps ♥ and they are one of the main reasons why I like that starting patterns at the map Lady Gaga - Judas [Hard]. ) cool~
01:26:452 (1) - Silence the spinner's end to a Grand Finale. yes

Thanks for the mods (chippy teach me how2get mods)
http://puu.sh/3z8tJ.zip

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-10T02:35:19+00:00

pieguy1372

[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:21:401 (1) - add finish on end to match cymbal

Where is end?
01:09:230 (4) - add finish on start to match previous pattern

ok
01:25:458 (1) - make it symmetrical plz

unchange

Sweet Vanilla

Not change. Sorry alot

happy623

[Oyatsu's Easy]

01:10:538 (2) - putting it in a blanket? fixed
SPOILER

scanter

Oyatsu's Easy

00:08:165 (2,4) - Makes more perfect blanket. fixed
00:24:826 - lower volume plz. like 40~50% sorry, a big beats. Sorry unchange
00:51:741 - Add 1 circle? Not, must start with kiai time. New bie will easier
00:56:440 (3) - - Add finish on slider's end. added
01:10:111 (1) - Distance is x1.19. make it x1.1 oh importance, sorry fixed
01:25:491 (1) - More lengthen this slider to red tick. it will be more fit vocal's downbeat. fixed
SPOILER

Alarido

[Oyatsu's Easy]Unchange. Sorry alot

Update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ELISA - Suba ni Iru yo TV Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Soba ni Iru yo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:そばにいるよ (TV Size)
Artist:ELISA
ArtistUnicode:ELISA
Creator:xChippy
Version:Oyatsu's Easy
Source:Kakumeiki Valvrave
Tags:The Liberator ending 革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ Sunrise jonathanlfj Oyatsu
BeatmapID:271197
BeatmapSetID:102681

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.800000005960464
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,500,"video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2013-07-10T02:55:34+00:00

Haii ~ owo
You requested for a mod via forum pm, but the map is fine in my opinon. owo

Justs a suggestion for the easy difficulty ~
- Set slider tick rate to 1 ? owo
01:10:538 (2) - Middle point one grid up

Really nice map!
Good luck and star! >w<

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-10T04:04:14+00:00

xChippy, Plz change slider rate into 1 help me after you updated my diff. (previous post)
About middle point, because xchippy didn't update diff before you mod. Any thanks for advice

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-10T07:23:43+00:00

Alarido wrote:
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Just remembering: xChippy didn't obey'd the Rule #2 of the Round! (see here) However, I accepted ~~her~~ request in behalf of jonathanlfj ♥ thence you should give thanks him, ok? ok :3 said my thanks in-game =w=

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Issues.

[Normal]
01:16:092 (4) - Could drop off this note and extend the previous slider to here.
01:25:491 (1) - As of Easy diff, silencing the tail could make it feel better, since the tail's noise seems fighting bad with the voice.
01:26:345 (1) - Silence the spinner's end to a Grand Finale.
fixed all
[Insane]
01:01:994 (4) - Could unstack this? ....... There are two options: or making a regular triangle (x:188 y:200) ...... OR making it a bit harder (x:272 y:220).
01:26:345 (1) - Silence the spinner's end to a Grand Finale.
fixed all
That's it ^^

GO GO RANKING as soon as possible!!!!!

Felt Easy and Normal may need some just a few nazi-moddings too (Hard is PERFECT). So take a

Att.

Thanks for the mod Alarido >w<
@Oyatsu fixed it~

okamiratsu

714 posts

Joined August 2011

okamiratsu 2013-07-10T19:38:57+00:00

hi from my queue
[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:20:554 add note to keep that flow going
00:51:100 add a slider and end it at 00:51:741

[Normal]
00:16:282 remove nc
00:17:137 nc
01:16:306 end spinner at 01:17:801 and add a whistle
01:22:927 like above end at 01:24:636 and add whistle

[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:03:893 add note
00:12:864 remove nc
00:29:953 remove nc
00:31:235 nc
00:31:662 remove nc
01:05:198 move to x376 y244
01:08:509 move to x380 y288
01:13:956 move to x40 y320
01:22:927 move to x136 y300

[Insane]

Hope you find this helpful and good luck in the rankings

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-10T20:27:11+00:00

okamiratsu wrote:
hi from my queue

[Normal]
00:16:282 remove nc did my own changes
00:17:137 nc same as above
01:16:306 end spinner at 01:17:801 and add a whistle fixed
01:22:927 like above end at 01:24:636 and add whistle don't hear a whistle there so kept it as it is

[Insane]

Hope you find this helpful and good luck in the rankings

thanks for the mod~

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-11T04:10:48+00:00

okamiratsu wrote:
hi from my queue
[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:20:554 add note to keep that flow going I think mine is fine
00:51:100 add a slider and end it at 00:51:741 Change 1 weird rhythm will make hard for newbie

Unchange, Sorry. Anyway thanks for mod

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,061 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-07-12T10:32:14+00:00

yo.

[General]

100ms audio lead in would be enough. Don't make players wait for too long

[Oyatsu's Easy]

00:47:896 (3) - nazi - I think you should move (3) down to make smooth flow. It will also fit with your regular pattern better
01:09:257 (4,2) - nazi - this overlap looks really bad here, imo. So, please fix it as soon as possible and you'll get pretty rankable diff. This overlap visible during gameplay and it may stress beginners!

I don't really like your blanket sliders, they're quite messy. But that's ok for a beginner-mapper

[Normal]

Why OD3? It's betterif you use OD4, so map gets more balanced and more challenging. Try it and see that this OD fits better.
00:19:486 - I feel like you've missed a circle here. It will fit much better, try it!
00:21:409 (1,1) - second spinner is quite confusing for players. But when it appears so FAST after first spinner, it's simply unplayable for normal-players. Try to replace first or second spinner with something else.
00:26:963 (3) - it starts with one line of vocals and ends with another line. It doesn't sound nice to me. Try to remove it and place a circle on 00:26:963 - then, add a slider on 00:27:390 - so, we will emphasize vocals. example
Note: you can always poke me if you'll need this or that pattern. I'll give you a code!
00:31:235 (1,2,3) - and here we are again, this pattern breaks your awesome 1/1 and 1/2 rhythm with random gap. WE can fix it, so let's do it! Take a look at my example, and you'll see that repeat of slider hits that red tick. example
Note: it's ok to use this pattern. It's a bit hard, but right after this pattern you have a very easy pattern (00:35:080 (1,2,3,4))
00:42:342 - It's better to add this circle here. If you've applied my suggestion above -a dd a circle to emphasize music. If you haven't - keep it withot changes. So, we can make rhythm more consistent!
00:45:333 (1) - since vocals end on 00:45:760 - you should finish this slider here. As for 00:46:187 - placing a circle here will be a good idea. Try it!
00:46:187 - you forgot to add custom slider tick sound here, go ahead and do it now for consistency!
01:05:198 (2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - this is still a [Normal] diff, so be careul and don't overuse 1/2 patterns! I guess removing some circles or replacing them with sliders/longer sliders would be a good idea.

It's good, but you could make it a bit easier to keep diff spread better balanced.

[Hard]

I'd increase HP Drain by one tick , it makes more sense with your rhythm. Oh, and reduce OD by one tick, you have 1/4 beats and you can make them more enjoyable and players-friendly by reducing OD!

Nothing else to say. Good job!

[Insane]

Reduce OD. Current one is too high. Just imagine playing all these slow streams with high OD, it's painful for players. :<
00:31:235 (3,1) - nazi - I'd place a jump between these two beats to emphasize music. It will fit here really good, try it!
00:56:333 (5) - if there's no beat, but there's an object it can be considereed as overmap. Overmap doesn't make map more enjoyable, it only confuses players and ruins rhythm of the song. So, try to avoid overmapping, please!
01:24:636 (1) - what a powerful stream! WEll, try to make spinner shorter, players need some time to prepare for something THAT hard, don't you think so? D:

Pretty nice!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-12T14:01:20+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
[Oyatsu's Easy]
00:47:896 (3) - nazi - I think you should move (3) down to make smooth flow. It will also fit with your regular pattern better fixed
01:09:257 (4,2) - nazi - this overlap looks really bad here, imo. So, please fix it as soon as possible and you'll get pretty rankable diff. This overlap visible during gameplay and it may stress beginners! I will consider this when there is mod post of BAT
Thanks for mod~

Update

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Soba ni Iru yo (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:そばにいるよ (TV Size)
Artist:ELISA
ArtistUnicode:ELISA
Creator:xChippy
Version:Oyatsu's Easy
Source:Kakumeiki Valvrave
Tags:The Liberator ending 革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ Sunrise jonathanlfj Oyatsu
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304,248,69257,2,0,P|352:240|384:204,1,80.0000005960464,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,164,70111,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,70538,2,0,P|324:76|396:152,1,200.000001490116,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,228,72034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,268,72461,2,0,P|304:324|260:324,1,120.00000089407,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,240,73529,5,4,0:0:0:0:
208,188,73956,2,0,L|116:172,1,80.0000005960464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,100,74810,2,0,L|104:56,2,80.0000005960464,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76092,12,2,77801,0:0:0:0:
172,140,78655,6,0,P|240:116|324:148,1,160.000001192093,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,216,80364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,288,81219,2,0,P|252:312|168:280,2,160.000001192093,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83141,12,4,84636,0:0:0:0:
200,156,85491,6,0,P|256:136|324:160,1,120.00000089407,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86345,12,0,88054,0:0:0:0:

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-07-12T19:20:35+00:00

Hi~ from my queue
Normal mod

sorry xChippy,I'm lazy these days

General
0w0 star~

Oyatsu's Easy
00:20:554 a bit tricky..

Normal
00:21:409 (1) - end at00:22:904
00:23:118 (1) - finish' volume is a bit small,it makes whistle after it sudden
01:22:927 (1) - end at 01:24:636 and add finish?
01:25:491 (1) - shorten to 01:25:918 and make it a repeat sllider?I think it can make a felling of sudden stop，and its rhythmic

jonathanlfj's Hard
01:08:189 (2,3) - 其实这个节奏配合一个whistle我觉得很爽。。其他地方也可以加一下打到类似的效果？
01:25:918 (4,5,6) - 这个个人打起来不是很舒服，换成三个单点，或者一个单点加一个三连怎么样，我觉得节奏也不错
01:01:353 (2,3,4) - 有点别扭，先二连然后蓝线滑条？可能有点鬼畜。。不过我感觉节奏好一点
01:15:665 (6) - 最后的白线没打击感，改成1/2的折返加一个单点好

Insane
why this diff use default soft clap clap

00:16:282 (1,2) - a bit strange..
and 00:16:389 (2,3) -this 2 sliders' spacing is a different from 00:15:001 (1,2) - I think it is not very goog
00:16:709 (3,4) - this 2 sliders' spacing maybe a bit small ，considering 00:16:389 (2,3) -
00:21:836 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - may be better?

SPOILER

00:49:178 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:06:670 add a note?
00:12:651^

that's all
good luck~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-12T23:23:14+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
yo.

[General]
100ms audio lead in would be enough. Don't make players wait for too long
[Normal]
Why OD3? It's betterif you use OD4, so map gets more balanced and more challenging. Try it and see that this OD fits better.
00:19:486 - I feel like you've missed a circle here. It will fit much better, try it!
00:21:409 (1,1) - second spinner is quite confusing for players. But when it appears so FAST after first spinner, it's simply unplayable for normal-players. Try to replace first or second spinner with something else. I'll discuss this one with a BAT
00:26:963 (3) - it starts with one line of vocals and ends with another line. It doesn't sound nice to me. Try to remove it and place a circle on 00:26:963 - then, add a slider on 00:27:390 - so, we will emphasize vocals. example
Note: you can always poke me if you'll need this or that pattern. I'll give you a code!
00:31:235 (1,2,3) - and here we are again, this pattern breaks your awesome 1/1 and 1/2 rhythm with random gap. WE can fix it, so let's do it! Take a look at my example, and you'll see that repeat of slider hits that red tick. example
Note: it's ok to use this pattern. It's a bit hard, but right after this pattern you have a very easy pattern (00:35:080 (1,2,3,4))
00:42:342 - It's better to add this circle here. If you've applied my suggestion above -a dd a circle to emphasize music. If you haven't - keep it withot changes. So, we can make rhythm more consistent!
00:45:333 (1) - since vocals end on 00:45:760 - you should finish this slider here. As for 00:46:187 - placing a circle here will be a good idea. Try it!
00:46:187 - you forgot to add custom slider tick sound here, go ahead and do it now for consistency!
01:05:198 (2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - this is still a [Normal] diff, so be careul and don't overuse 1/2 patterns! I guess removing some circles or replacing them with sliders/longer sliders would be a good idea.

It's good, but you could make it a bit easier to keep diff spread better balanced.

[Insane]
Reduce OD. Current one is too high. Just imagine playing all these slow streams with high OD, it's painful for players. :<
00:31:235 (3,1) - nazi - I'd place a jump between these two beats to emphasize music. It will fit here really good, try it!
00:56:333 (5) - if there's no beat, but there's an object it can be considereed as overmap. Overmap doesn't make map more enjoyable, it only confuses players and ruins rhythm of the song. So, try to avoid overmapping, please!
01:24:636 (1) - what a powerful stream! WEll, try to make spinner shorter, players need some time to prepare for something THAT hard, don't you think so? D:

Pretty nice!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

Fixed everything but that one I mentioned above :3
Thanks you very much for the mod Bakari >w<~!!

baldrace wrote:
Hi~ from my queue
Normal mod

sorry xChippy,I'm lazy these days

General
0w0 star~

Normal
00:21:409 (1) - end at00:22:904 fixed
00:23:118 (1) - finish' volume is a bit small,it makes whistle after it sudden raised the volume
01:22:927 (1) - end at 01:24:636 and add finish? don't head finish so nope
01:25:491 (1) - shorten to 01:25:918 and make it a repeat sllider?I think it can make a felling of sudden stop，and its rhythmic I don't think it fits here since the vocal is jsut a plain one o-o

Insane
why this diff use default soft clap clap fixed
00:16:282 (1,2) - a bit strange..
and 00:16:389 (2,3) -this 2 sliders' spacing is a different from 00:15:001 (1,2) - I think it is not very goog
00:16:709 (3,4) - this 2 sliders' spacing maybe a bit small ，considering 00:16:389 (2,3) -
00:21:836 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - may be better?
SPOILER
00:49:178 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:06:670 add a note? don't hear anything o-o
00:12:651^ ^
I'd prefer to keep those streams like that and those spacing plays fine to me o-o, I'll discuss later with some people
that's all
good luck~

Thanks for the mod and star balrdrace >w<~!!

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-13T09:56:14+00:00

baldrace wrote:
Oyatsu's Easy
00:20:554 a bit tricky.. As I said in previous mod, I prefer mine

Unchange, Sorry

P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-07-13T11:19:03+00:00

hmmm here's a mod D: sry for delay x_x

[Insane]

this is almost perfect orz...
00:41:061 (4) - move to 449|158 and move tail to 324|147 for make (4)'s tail perfect stack with previous (3) and also move 00:41:701 (5) to 269|213 and move 00:40:633 (2) to 285|320 for triangle and for the balance space of this part
SPOILER
00:48:537 (7) - move to 416|320 for balance distance?
00:54:838 (5,6) - 320|80 , 284|64
01:22:287 (2) - try to move to 272|296. its more symmetry imo.
01:22:927 (1) - hmm I think this spinner not fit the song. try to add note on 4 white tick before that stream is sounds better imo.

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

omg just a little mod here x_x looks perfect
00:19:273 (6) - move to 236|328?
00:48:750 (1) - 1 grid right looks more blanket
00:57:936 (2) - ^

[Normal]

hmmm I think end the spinner on 00:21:409 (1) at 00:23:118 with finish hitsound is more fit and continue the second spinner on blue tick
00:34:225 (3) - move to 148|248
00:58:363 (2,3) - 256|380 , 340|352 for center symmetry
01:19:937 (2) - what the distance D:
01:21:432 (1) - move tail to 333|229?
01:22:927 (1) - end at 01:24:636 sounds more fit.

[Oyatsu's Easy]

00:05:602 (3) - what about this
SPOILER
00:46:614 - what about this rhythm the sound "ki" start at 00:47:042
01:10:538 (2) - the tail a bit touch with the previous (4)'s tail so move the head point to 240|128 and move 01:12:034 (3) to 440|224
01:18:655 (1,2,3) - what about this
SPOILER

that's all good luck

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-07-13T12:42:53+00:00

P A N wrote:
hmmm here's a mod D: sry for delay x_x

[Insane]
this is almost perfect orz...
00:41:061 (4) - move to 449|158 and move tail to 324|147 for make (4)'s tail perfect stack with previous (3) and also move 00:41:701 (5) to 269|213 and move 00:40:633 (2) to 285|320 for triangle and for the balance space of this part
SPOILER
00:48:537 (7) - move to 416|320 for balance distance?
00:54:838 (5,6) - 320|80 , 284|64
01:22:287 (2) - try to move to 272|296. its more symmetry imo. Actually I want to keep this huge triangle :3
01:22:927 (1) - hmm I think this spinner not fit the song. try to add note on 4 white tick before that stream is sounds better imo.Keeping it like I have for now :3
fixed the rest ^^

[Normal]
hmmm I think end the spinner on 00:21:409 (1) at 00:23:118 with finish hitsound is more fit and continue the second spinner on blue tick
00:34:225 (3) - move to 148|248
00:58:363 (2,3) - 256|380 , 340|352 for center symmetry
01:19:937 (2) - what the distance D:
01:21:432 (1) - move tail to 333|229?
01:22:927 (1) - end at 01:24:636 sounds more fit.
fixed all
that's all good luck

Thanks for the mod P A N ~ >w<

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-07-13T13:10:24+00:00

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okamiratsu wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:03:893 add note the pause was intentional
00:12:864 remove nc actually i was told to add this but i guess it looks better as one colour
00:29:953 remove nc following NC pattern here with long white line
00:31:235 nc like above
00:31:662 remove nc ^
01:05:198 move to x376 y244 this was manual stack to prevent 01:04:771 (2) from shifting
01:08:509 move to x380 y288 similar to above
01:13:956 move to x40 y320 ^
01:22:927 move to x136 y300 ^

-Bakari- wrote:
[Hard]
I'd increase HP Drain by one tick , it makes more sense with your rhythm. Oh, and reduce OD by one tick, you have 1/4 beats and you can make them more enjoyable and players-friendly by reducing OD!These are my standard settings for Hard diff at this bpm, but i will consider your suggestions. If more mod posts tells me to make these changes then i will likely apply them

Nothing else to say. Good job!

baldrace wrote:
jonathanlfj's Hard
01:08:189 (2,3) - 其实这个节奏配合一个whistle我觉得很爽。。其他地方也可以加一下打到类似的效果？爽
01:25:918 (4,5,6) - 这个个人打起来不是很舒服，换成三个单点，或者一个单点加一个三连怎么样，我觉得节奏也不错好吧
01:01:353 (2,3,4) - 有点别扭，先二连然后蓝线滑条？可能有点鬼畜。。不过我感觉节奏好一点这里的节奏就是这样。。。嘛我觉得没什么问题
01:15:665 (6) - 最后的白线没打击感，改成1/2的折返加一个单点好 ok~

P A N wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
omg just a little mod here x_x looks perfect
00:19:273 (6) - move to 236|328? nice perfection there
00:48:750 (1) - 1 grid right looks more blanket adjusted in a different way
00:57:936 (2) - ^ as above

Thanks for the mods~
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