Tsusuko wrote:

Hello! Mod request from my queue

[General]

1. All clear, I think

[Far Away Chaos]

1. 00:07:333 (3) Ctrl + H, so it flows better with 00:06:666 (2) Well, the flow isn't actually bad but if i do what you suggest the flow will be less good with 00:07:999 (1) so i keep it like this.
2. 00:10:333 - 00:10:666 (3,4) To make a neater alignment, perhaps you should move 00:10:333 (3) up (x: 236,y:20) and snap 00:10:666 (4) to fix the distance (x:236,y:108) Well, i didn't want the end of 00:09:166 (2) and 00:10:333 (3) to be aligned.
3. 00:22:666 - 00:23:999 (2,3) It's understandable for these notes to end on red ticks, but I don't think it really fits with the music. I think it might be better to just end them on the previous white tick (meaning 00:22:666 (2) ends at 00:23:333, and 00:23:999 (3) ends at 00:24:666) Fixed
4. 00:31:333 (3) Move to x:408, y:292 to make a nicer blanket Fixed
5. 00:34:666 (1) Move this slider down a grid so it aligns with 00:33:666 (4) and to improve the anchor, try something more like this?; Fixed
6. 00:42:666 (1) Nice shape you have here, just saying Thank you
7. 00:46:833 - 00:47:833 - Why not map through this part? Because i don't think it's needed for this diff.
8. 00:52:333 (1) Although you may disagree, for an easy diff, the spinner is rather short. It's only a suggestion, but maybe you could start a spinner at 00:50:833 and end it 00:53:333, like so;
   SPOILER

   
   The spinner isn't that short. Auto mod get 4000. Besides i haven't a lot of place to put one.
9. 01:05:333 - 01:06:666 (2,3) If you're going to do this, make sure that 01:06:666 (3)'s slider tail stacks properly onto the start 01:05:333 (2) Fixed
10. 01:14:333 (3) The music is fading away into silence, so I think it might be better to remove the finish at the end and let it be Fixed, replaeced by a clap.

[Distant Chaos]

1. 00:22:666 - 00:23:666 (1,2,3) This pattern here is rather messy
2. 00:47:166 - 00:47:833 - Same suggestion as Far Away Chaos. You can map through this instead of leaving it there. Same reason.
3. 01:14:333 (2) Same. Remove finish. Fixed with clap.
   I'm not sure I agree with the style here, but there's nothing wrong particularly. But be warned, the spinners are pretty short and may not be playable.

[Close Chaos]

1. 00:15:166 - 00:15:499 (5,1) The rhythm would sound better if you switched these two notes so it would play like so;
   SPOILER

   
   (Also, I don't think you need the NC at 00:15:333 (1) so add it at 00:15:999 (2) instead) Maybe i ear the rythm differently but i ear the note at 00:15:499 (1) hold all the length of the slider. That's why is put a NC and this slider.
2. 00:43:166 - 00:43:833 (2,3,4,5,6) I don't think I understand the pattern here Basically.... It's a jump.
3. 00:44:166 - 00:45:166 (1,2,3,4) ^ Why not move 00:45:166 (4) to x:212, y:292 so it makes a square shape? Well it's already a square shape.... But another square ^^
4. 00:47:166 - 00:47:833 - Same as others. Same a sothers.
5. 01:08:499 - 01:08:833 (5,1) Also same as the suggestion before. Switch the notes to match the rhythm. Same
6. 01:14:333 (1) Remove finish clap FTW!

[Imminent Chaos]

1. 00:15:166 - 00:15:499 (4,5) Much like my earlier suggestions for Close Chaos, switch the notes to match the rhythm. Well, i think we ear the rythm diffrently, but that's how i hear it. Sorry....
2. 01:08:499 - 01:08:833 (4,5) ^ ^
3. 01:14:333 (1) Remove finish Fixed

[Chaos]

1. 01:14:333 (1) Remove finish Fixed
   I enjoyed the steams Thank you ^^

Pretty good map. GL~

- Melody wrote:

~M4M


Far Away Chaos ;

00:52:166 (4,1) - The sudden Spinner is difficult for Beginner Actually it's not that difficult since auto gets 4000.
01:14:000 (3) - Add Clap at Slider-Ending Fixed

Distant Chaos ;

00:09:333 (1) - The Spinner-Circle overlays with 00:10:999 (2) - Place it to another pattern I'm not sure.... Maybe if someone ese suggest it.

Close Chaos ;

00:35:165 (2) - Slider-End isn't snapped Fixed
00:43:166 (2,3,4,5,6) - That is messy, do it clearer I tried to do something


~Good Luck & sorry for short Mod

Legenda wrote:

:: → Des choses inclassables: des choses à fixer
 :?: → Mes doutes de l'homme: des choses à considérer
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♥ → Des acclamations
* → seulement des commentaires: ce ne sont pas mods
Les lignes sans symboles → Les Mods

1. 00:25:333 (4) - Fixed the slider, but it makes it one tick short. You can change this if you wish. Image is below:
   
   SPOILER

   
   ^ if you make this change, add a note to 00:26:666 (lol nice numbers) like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   and maybe place it at x:144 y:252 to make a blanket combo with 00:26:999 (1), like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:40:666 (2) - Curve the slider so it makes a blanket with 00:41:333 (3)? Image below:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:21:333 (1,2) - Keep the same spacing as 00:19:999 (1,2)

1. 00:43:666 (5,6,1) - spacing is too similar. There's suppose to be some distance between (6) and (1), so the (1) should be farther apart in terms of placement.
2. 00:44:166 (1,2,3,4) - enlarge the jump so it's not similar to 00:43:666 (5,6) in terms of spacing. (A good example to follow would be 00:49:499 (1,2,3,4))

1. OD7 to avoid the OD8 glitch with the star rating since it looks like the difficulty is the hardest in the mapset, and it plays smoother imo. OD8 is acceptable, but entirely up to you. Otherwise...nice difficulty~ I look forward to playing this not really, my fingers will break trying to play this ;__;

1. 00:49:166 (1,2,3,4) - maybe fix spacing to match rhythm 00:43:832 (6,1,2,3)?

Giralda wrote:

[Cherry Blossom]

1. OD7 to avoid the OD8 glitch with the star rating since it looks like the difficulty is the hardest in the mapset, and it plays smoother imo. OD8 is acceptable, but entirely up to you. Otherwise...nice difficulty~ I look forward to playing this not really, my fingers will break trying to play this ;__; => Let me think, if 2~3 people say the same thing, i will change.

Thanks

Alarido wrote:

Bonjour^^
C'est un Free Mod
A Free Mod de Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

:: → Des choses inclassables: des choses à fixer
 :?: → Mes doutes de l'homme: des choses à considérer
 :idea: → Trucs et astuces pour rendre votre map mieux
♥ → Des acclamations
* → seulement des commentaires: ce ne sont pas mods
Les lignes sans symboles → Les Mods

* Il n'y a pas des réclamations sur des questions générales ^.^

[Far Away Chaos]
00:15:999 - Ajoutez une note ici, s'il vous plaît, au le position x:292 y:188 I'm not it's really necessary since i follow the guitar. Besides if i start to follow this logic there are a lot of other notes i should add.
00:17:333 (2,3) - Pourrait rendre ces sliders comme ça? → http://puu.sh/3ClSN.jpg ← Il peut décoller ces sliders les uns des autres (: Fixed.
01:09:333 - Ajoutez aussi une note ici, s'il vous plaît, au le position x:216 y:204 Same as before.

[Distant Chaos]
* Il n'y a pas des réclamations dans ici

[Close Chaos]
00:25:833 (3) - Déplacez le 2ème noeud par x:172 y:232 pour un parfait blanket avec 00:25:666 (2) Fixed.
00:26:166 (4) - Déplacez le 2ème noeud par x:84 Y:200 et le troisième par x:144 y:128 pour un parfait blanket avec 00:25:833 (3) Fixed.
00:31:666 (5) - Déplacez ce note par x:240 y:108 et... Fixed. But another way.
00:31:833 (6) - ...déplacez cet autre par x:292 y:32 parce que trop des overlaps rendent ces schémas très difficiles à lire et à comprendre à grande vitesse. ^
01:01:333 (1) - Déplacez le dernier noeud par x:384 y:104 par un parfait blanket avec le suivant slider. Fixed.
01:01:832 (2) - Déplacez-lui par x:340 y:176 et le 2ème noeud par x:364 y:204 et le 3ème par x:372 y:236, par un parfait blanket avec la suivante note. Fixed.
01:02:166 (3,1) - Déplacez ces notes par x:288 y:244 pour les maintenir empilées. Fixed.

[Cherry Blossom]
♥ Parfait ^.^

[Imminent Chaos]
♥ Parfait aussi ^.^

[Chaos]
♥ Parfait Symétrie ^.^

C'est fini ^^

Bonne chance pour prendre ton map classifié (Ranked)

Au revoir !!!

Giralda wrote:

Hii~ M4M from my queue (:

LEAF XCEED <333

[Far Away Chaos]

00:25:333 (4) - Fixed the slider, but it makes it one tick short. You can change this if you wish. Image is below:
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^ if you make this change, add a note to 00:26:666 (lol nice numbers) like this:
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and maybe place it at x:144 y:252 to make a blanket combo with 00:26:999 (1), like this:
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Sorry.... Your suggestion is really interestig but i can't apply it since i don't follow this rythm and follow the guitar instead.

[Distant Chaos]

00:40:666 (2) - Curve the slider so it makes a blanket with 00:41:333 (3)? Image below: It was done on purpose but now that you mention it... I prefer this. Fixed
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00:21:333 (1,2) - Keep the same spacing as 00:19:999 (1,2) Whooops. Fixed


[Close Chaos]

00:43:666 (5,6,1) - spacing is too similar. There's suppose to be some distance between (6) and (1), so the (1) should be farther apart in terms of placement.
00:44:166 (1,2,3,4) - enlarge the jump so it's not similar to 00:43:666 (5,6) in terms of spacing. (A good example to follow would be 00:49:499 (1,2,3,4))

I had a lot of complaint so i changed completly the pattern, hoping it's more readable that way.

[Imminent Chaos]

00:49:166 (1,2,3,4) - maybe fix spacing to match rhythm 00:43:832 (6,1,2,3)? I tried something.

Good difficulty. Looks perfect imo. Thank you ^^

[Chaos]
Reminds me of the Chaos diff in Kokou no Sousei. This diff looks like the stream difficulty of the mapset~ the streams here are nice and fun (: looks perfect to me. Well, in fact the name is a coincidence but anyway thank you ^^

That's all. Good luck~ and I'll give a star because LEAF XCEED and good Insane diffs (: Yay! Thank you very much ^^

Maddy wrote:

Maddy's Mod
(S) ~ Suggestion
(C) ~ Something you should change
(A) ~ Important \ Unrankable

General
S ~ Remove the "Cherry Blossom" tag since it's already the name of the diff? I'm not sure... I'll ask a BAT about this.

Far Away Chaos
C ~ 00:51:166 (2,3,4) - This was unclear to me when I played it, totally not noob friendly: you can make it a single repeat slider Idk.... Maybe if someone else suggest it i will change it but even if i agree it's a little bit hard, all the notes are really emphasize in the music and the gap between notes is huge si they have the time to see it coming and ear it coming.

Distant Chaos
C ~ 00:04:166 (1,2,3) - Hard to understand for a beginner Well, the whole map is more like a normal+ so it doesn't seems out of place to me. But if someone else siggest it i will remove it.... I don't know how but i will.
C ~ 00:15:999 (4) - You should really put a NC here to emphasize that drum (Finish) Fixed
C ~ 00:18:666 (5) - Same thing here Fixed
S ~ 00:19:666 (6) - Maybe fix this stack (1 grid right) Fixed
S ~ 00:28:999 (3) - A NC would be good here as well. Fixed
S ~ 00:33:333 (4) - ^ Fixed
S ~ 00:38:667 (4) - ^ Fixed
C ~ 00:47:333 - Try to put a beat here or add a repeat on the slider Fixed
C ~ 00:55:999 (3) - NC here instead of the next slider Fixed
C ~ 01:09:333 (4) - NC here like you did on 01:11:999 (1) - Fixed

Close Chaos
I must say that I felt a little uncomfortable playing this. Some patterns felt like an Insane so I will try to fix that for you.
C ~ 00:03:499 (3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole pattern is Waay too difficulty for a hard difficulty. Don't stack the first three notes and lower the spacing with a more flowish curve. Fixed
C ~ 00:16:333 (3) - This slider is on the wrong tick, it sounds a lot better on the next red tick. Use this rhythm here and do the same on 00:18:666 - Fixed
C ~ 00:23:833 (6,1) - This jump is not necessary and plays badly considered the AR Fixed
C ~ 00:24:333 (3,4) - Spacing is meh, change it please to correspond with the previous Distance snap Fixed
C ~ 00:30:499 (1,2,3) - They should go on the white tick Fixed
C ~ 00:43:166 (2,3,4,5,6) - Please don't do jumps on a Hard while stacking on low AR Fixed
S ~ 00:46:999 - Lack of rhythm on this hole Done on purpose because i follow the guitar.
C ~ 00:57:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again too much stacking Fixed
C ~ 01:10:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like previously, these sliders should go on the white tick Fixed

Imminent Chaos
S ~ 00:32:000 (1,2) - It would be better if the distance was x1.00 Fixed
C ~ 00:33:333 (4) - Since this is something different from before, you should NC it Fixed

Chaos
S ~ 00:24:833 (8) - NC this since you always did it before Fixed Fixed
C ~ 00:52:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can stand the zigzags but this is way too inconsistent, put more effort into it and make a nice shape, also lower the spacing to x0.9 I tried something but it would be illogical to use a spacing of x0.9. Fixed
S ~ 01:02:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is also a pretty ugly shape , I would prefer a circle Fixed

Maddy wrote:

Maddy's Mod
(S) ~ Suggestion
(C) ~ Something you should change
(A) ~ Important \ Unrankable


Cherry Blossom
The NCs are a bit a mess but whatever: if you desire to have them perfectioned contact me ingame => i will see it.
S ~ 00:24:833 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - You should fix this shape => i tried to make something better, almost fixed.
A ~ 01:03:999 - You should map to the end like in the whole mapset: no need to be lazy, it's only 10 seconds => i will see it with rezoons...
Nice map btw.

ts8zs wrote:

[Cherry Blossom]
00:09:666 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/870811 => I keep my pattern.
00:22:166 (1) - Remove NC? => Done.
>00:22:666 (1) - NC? => Done.
01:00:333 (6) - moveto160,104 => awh , Done.

Thanks for your mod

ts8zs wrote:

[Imminent Chaos]
00:07:666 (5,6) - put 6 on 5's position then put 5 on 00:06:666 (1) - 's position Did something else.
[Close Chaos]
Except some blanket,seems well:3 Well... Maybe you could have point them out?
[Distant Chaos]
00:14:333 (1,3) - Only one blanket:3 Other seems well Fixed
00:33:999 (3) - End Whistle 00:34:499 (4) - Whistle Fixed
These was what I could help:3

1. 00:02:666 (1,2) - Uh, why is this 1,16x? ~1,08-1,12x will make this spot look better. Also add finish to (2) to follow the instrument more accurately?
2. 00:06:666 - Also finish here?
3. 00:10:333 (3) - A finish isn't needed here, so remove it and add one at 00:10:666 instead.
4. 00:13:333 (3) - NC this to make the combo pattern consistent? (It's an NC every two stanzas usually.)
5. 00:17:333 (2) - Also add a finish here?
6. 00:26:666 - Would be better if you map this tick and add a finish. Feels pretty empty here without that.
7. 00:35:999 (2) - Start this from 00:35:833 and add finish there? Same reason as the suggestion above.
8. 01:09:333 - Same as 00:26:666.
9. 01:12:999 - Use 10% volume starting from here? This part isn't silent enough yet, IMO.

1. 00:15:333 (3,1) - Umm, why it's suddenly 0.93x here?
2. 00:15:999 (1,1) - To be honest, I think these two sliders have a random shape, but eh, no problem I suppose.
3. 00:22:666 (1) - Flipping this horizontally will create a better flow. The spacing is already looking weird though... Are you sure with this spacing?
4. 00:28:999 (1,2,3,1) - Why 1.1x at all sudden here?
5. 00:33:999 (3,4) - Uh, 0.88x?
6. 00:46:666 (2,1) - And, umm... 0.8x? Uh, this is easily avoidable right...

1. 00:04:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh, I think a 180 BPM 7-notes 1/2-beats stream is too fast even for a Hard diff. Just use sliders instead?
2. 00:06:666 - Umm, finish to follow the instrument?
3. 00:07:999 - ^
4. 00:15:499 (1,2) - Swap NC to follow the stanza and add a finish on (2)'s head?
5. 00:22:333 (1,2,3,4) - This works far better than what you have here now, IMO.
6. 00:48:832 (4) - NC this to indicate that this is the beginning of a series of jump? The jumps will be unreadable without the NC.
7. 00:58:499 (4,1,2) - This doesn't follow the music perfectly correct and feels pretty forced. 00:53:333 (1,2) does, so make this part look like that?
8. 01:01:832 (2) - Add whistles here to make the hitsound pattern consistent?
9. 01:04:999 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Similar to 00:04:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7).

1. 00:11:832 (4) - Uh, NC so the combo pattern will be consistent?
2. 00:12:833 (1,4) - Swap NC for consistency too?
3. 00:14:666 (2) - NC for consistency again?
4. 00:25:249 - I recommend to add a note there to follow the instrument.
5. 00:37:249 - ^
6. 00:37:333 - Also a whistle here, maybe?
7. 01:05:333 (5,1) - Uh, swap NC here? I think it's obvious why...
8. 01:06:666 (4) - And remove the NC here?

1. Umm, 8/5/9/8 for the difficulty setting? This is not an Extra diff, right? That kind of extreme setting is usually only used in an Extra diff. Maybe reduce HP, CS, and OD by 1 so it will actually feel like an Insane diff? Feels really crazy to be called an Insane for now, in my opinion.
2. 00:13:333 (6,1) - Swap NC to go along with the stanza?
3. 00:14:666 (6) - NC this? I don't think I need to say why.
4. 00:46:999 (1,2) - IMO, this 1/4 jump is pretty unreadable because you have to hit lots of jumps and streams before this, and suddenly this kind of jump appears...
5. 00:48:833 (3,4) - This is also unexpected because of the sudden spacing increase in the same combo.
6. 01:06:667 (6) - Same as 00:14:666 (6).

1. It's weird to have the circle size larger than the easier diff, but it's an Extra, so I'll let that slip anyway.
2. 00:16:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This follows the song's rhythm better. Also stack (2) with (3) and (4) with (5) for a better effect.
3. 00:19:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding here!


>Cherry Blossom

1. It's weird to have the circle size larger than the easier diff, but it's an Extra, so I'll let that slip anyway. => indeed but guest diffs can ignore this
2. 00:16:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This follows the song's rhythm better. Also stack (2) with (3) and (4) with (5) for a better effect. => I keep your idea in mind, but i didn't change because i want to keep the squares.
3. 00:19:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ => ^

That's it I guess.

Good luck on the way

Thanks for your mod

Cherry Blossom wrote:

=> I keep your idea in mind, but i didn't change because i want to keep the squares.

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. You know.... I always associate red with unrankable things so guess how scared i was the first time i saw your mod. XD
Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset. Well, it's especially true since i used a hitsound copyier.......

>Far Away Chaos

1. 00:02:666 (1,2) - Uh, why is this 1,16x? ~1,08-1,12x will make this spot look better. Also add finish to (2) to follow the instrument more accurately? Fixed but not the Finish. Whistle fits better imo.
2. 00:06:666 - Also finish here? Hum.... Why?
3. 00:10:333 (3) - A finish isn't needed here, so remove it and add one at 00:10:666 instead. Keep thi one and add the other one.
4. 00:13:333 (3) - NC this to make the combo pattern consistent? (It's an NC every two stanzas usually.) Fixed
5. 00:17:333 (2) - Also add a finish here? Fixed
6. 00:26:666 - Would be better if you map this tick and add a finish. Feels pretty empty here without that. Fixed
7. 00:35:999 (2) - Start this from 00:35:833 and add finish there? Same reason as the suggestion above. No, here i don't think it fits well.
8. 01:09:333 - Same as 00:26:666.Fixed
9. 01:12:999 - Use 10% volume starting from here? This part isn't silent enough yet, IMO. Fixed

>Distant Chaos

1. 00:15:333 (3,1) - Umm, why it's suddenly 0.93x here? Whoops, i move it closer without paying attention because it's in a corner.
2. 00:15:999 (1,1) - To be honest, I think these two sliders have a random shape, but eh, no problem I suppose. Obsolete because i changed the pattern.[/color]
3. 00:22:666 (1) - Flipping this horizontally will create a better flow. The spacing is already looking weird though... Are you sure with this spacing? Because of the patte... You know what, nvm. Changed completly the pattern
4. 00:28:999 (1,2,3,1) - Why 1.1x at all sudden here? whoops! Fixed.
5. 00:33:999 (3,4) - Uh, 0.88x? Double Whoops. Fixed.
6. 00:46:666 (2,1) - And, umm... 0.8x? Uh, this is easily avoidable right...Well, i think it's ok here.

>Close Chaos

1. 00:04:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh, I think a 180 BPM 7-notes 1/2-beats stream is too fast even for a Hard diff. Just use sliders instead? Actually it's a Hard+.... Must have wrote it i guess....
2. 00:06:666 - Umm, finish to follow the instrument? I don't really see a finish here.
3. 00:07:999 - ^ ^
4. 00:15:499 (1,2) - Swap NC to follow the stanza and add a finish on (2)'s head? Fixed
5. 00:22:333 (1,2,3,4) - This works far better than what you have here now, IMO. Thi Puush doesn't exist anymore.........
6. 00:48:832 (4) - NC this to indicate that this is the beginning of a series of jump? The jumps will be unreadable without the NC. Fixed
7. 00:58:499 (4,1,2) - This doesn't follow the music perfectly correct and feels pretty forced. 00:53:333 (1,2) does, so make this part look like that? Fixed
8. 01:01:832 (2) - Add whistles here to make the hitsound pattern consistent? Fixed
9. 01:04:999 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Similar to 00:04:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7).Same as before.

>Imminent Chaos
I completly forgot about your M4M so i couldn't tell you that i was remapping it so some of your mod is obsolete. Sorry.

1. 00:11:832 (4) - Uh, NC so the combo pattern will be consistent? Fixed
2. 00:12:833 (1,4) - Swap NC for consistency too? Fixed
3. 00:14:666 (2) - NC for consistency again? Here, i dont see the point.
4. 00:25:249 - I recommend to add a note there to follow the instrument. Fixed
5. 00:37:249 - ^ Obsolete
6. 00:37:333 - Also a whistle here, maybe? Fixed
7. 01:05:333 (5,1) - Uh, swap NC here? I think it's obvious why... Obsolete
8. 01:06:666 (4) - And remove the NC here?Obsolete

>Chaos

1. Umm, 8/5/9/8 for the difficulty setting? This is not an Extra diff, right? That kind of extreme setting is usually only used in an Extra diff. Maybe reduce HP, CS, and OD by 1 so it will actually feel like an Insane diff? Feels really crazy to be called an Insane for now, in my opinion. I still don't know about the CS but i recall it Extra.
2. 00:13:333 (6,1) - Swap NC to go along with the stanza? Fixed
3. 00:14:666 (6) - NC this? I don't think I need to say why. Fixed
4. 00:46:999 (1,2) - IMO, this 1/4 jump is pretty unreadable because you have to hit lots of jumps and streams before this, and suddenly this kind of jump appears... Make them closer but it's readable since i made my diff tested by people.
5. 00:48:833 (3,4) - This is also unexpected because of the sudden spacing increase in the same combo. ^
6. 01:06:667 (6) - Same as 00:14:666 (6). Fixed

That's it I guess.

Good luck on the way

Krah wrote:

Bon aller random mod (qu'a des chances de servir à rien je le sens)


[Far Away Chaos]

- 00:57:499 (3) Il déborde un peu de l'écran, remonte le un coup Mais... euh..... Fixed.


[Close Chaos]

- 00:11:666 (4) Remonte le d'un cran pour l'aligner avec 00:12:333 (8) Bien vu ^^. Fixed.

[Imminent Chaos]

Désolé mais j'étais en train de remapper cette diff... Du coup le mod de cette diff. est obsolète.....


[Chaos]

- 00:00:000 (1) Un cran à droite pour l'aligner avec 00:00:166 (3,5) Fixed
- 00:06:833 (3,4) Ya pas le même décalage en x entre ces deux notes qu'entre 00:06:666 (1,2). Du coup 00:06:916 (4) x=160,y=16 & 00:07:000 (5) x=128,y=36 Fixed
- 00:07:500 (3,4) ^ . Du coup 00:07:583 (4) x=224,y=208 , 00:07:667 (5) x=256,y=188 Fixed
- 00:22:999 (8) Je le verrais plus superposé avec 00:22:499 (5) Ca serait plus logique au niveau du pattern Meh... Je trouve ce que j'ai fait plus logique a vrai dire......

Très bonne map et musique sinon, je serais ravi d'y jouer quand elle sera rank =) Merci ^^

CDFA wrote:

OH GOD THIS TOOK WAY TOO LONG I'M SO SORRY ;A;

Imminent Chaos:
00:04:833 (5,6) - Idunno, this seems kind of cramped. I know what you're going for but like still ;A; Fixed.... I guess.... Well it's less cramped.
00:37:833 (4) - Raise the first point a few grids up, it looks flat atm Fixed
00:53:999 (4) - This point is a little bit too high right now to make a diamond Never wanted to do a diamond.
01:03:999 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Mapping fadeouts is really awkward. Idunno, I see a fadeout as something that Well, i take advice of a lot of people and nobody agree with each other so i'll keep doing this my way....

Chaos:
00:06:166 (7) - This looks really crammed where it's currently placed With AR9? Not really.
00:33:333 (1) - I know patterns and all but it'd play a lot nicer if this spacing was even with the spacing of (5,6) Tried something....
01:03:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Same as previous You know..... Besides making your mod looking bigger it doesn't have any purpose to remind me something like this twice. If i do it in one diff, i will do it in others as well.

Close Chaos:
00:05:499 (1) - This tick is so slight that it just looks like a mistake .... Not really an issue....
00:06:666 (2,3,4) - Adjust this so there's no overlap I'm not sure if the overlap really needs to be avoided.... I will wait and see other mod.
00:48:832 (4,5,6) - This jump seems odd, as there's really nothing indicating a jump should be there Fixed

Easy:
Tick Rate 1 Fixed
00:25:333 (4) - This slider looks really weird, especially the endpoint 0108 style!...... Well, i made it less weird.

uguu kawaii nyna.

Hai

Krah wrote:

[Cherry Blossom]

- 01:03:999 (1) La position du 1 me semble pas logique dans ton pattern, il devrait plus être à la même position que 01:04:166 (2) histoire d'avoir pareil pour (1,2) et (3,4) => j'ai changé la position de (1), je l'ai stack sur (2)
- 01:06:832 (2) Peut-être l'aligner avec 01:06:666 (1) => Done !

CDFA wrote:

Blossom:
00:50:499 (1,2) - Stack these probably? => let me think about it D:
01:03:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same as previous => i will see it with rezoons.

baldrace wrote:

Cherry Blossom
don't like jumps in this diff => x_x
01:07:998 (2,4) - unsnap => fixed.
00:23:833 (8,1) - really not good to jump imo,BGM here dosen't any big change ，so suggest to ctrl g 00:23:666 (7,8) - => i can, but it's my style =3
00:26:499 (7) - I think you'd better reduce its spacing with 00:26:333 (6) - and 00:26:666 (1) - => let me think D:

Thanks for modding
Updated diff : http://puu.sh/3GyDo.rar

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue
reply to m4m mod

General
0.0

Far Away Chaos
00:26:666 (1) - spacing 1.15?

Distant Chaos
00:31:999 (1) - as you do at 00:37:333 (1) - Why not.

SPOILER

01:11:333 (3) - move it down is better imo,easy to read,and looks like a star The overlap is done on purpose.... I know 99.9% of people won't see it but i let it anyway.

SPOILER

Close Chaos
00:18:666 (1) - unsnap Weird... I think it's a bug of the AImod... Anyway fixed.
00:11:666 (4,5,6,7,8) - If I were you,I will make a jump here Nothing in the song say "jump" to me.....
00:42:499 (5) - move it up, a bit Fixed
00:55:166 (3) - to X 366 Y 175 Fixed

Imminent Chaos
00:03:166 (3) - move to X 376 Y 192 Fixed

since I can't play 2 insane diffs well,I think I can't do any good mod ;w; No problem ^^

Chaos
HP-1?I think od 8 can be too hard for some players pass this diff Well, it's intended to be hard.
00:34:499 (5) - ctrl g,and I think even repeat time is better here Well, i think it follows the song better this way.....
00:39:832 (4,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

that's all
good luck~

Hai !

[ Sana ] wrote:

[Cherry Blossom]
00:52:583 (6,1) - i think its too far => if someone else says it i will change the spacing.
01:09:499 (1) - i don't like spinner here. very awkward. => yeah, maybe.. and you can look at the description of the map lol x)

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi from my queue.

[Close Chaos]
00:01:999 (4) - ctrl + g Take a look at what comes next and you would see that it doesn't change anything but i understand your point.
00:05:499 (1,2) - remove circle 2 and slider starts 1/2 later. Following the song I think what i've done follow the song better. Listen the whistle.
00:14:666 (3) - ctrl + g Hum, i think it plays better this way.
00:30:999 (2) - ctrl + g That would completly kill the flow.
00:47:499 - empty? Yes

[Chaos]
00:13:333 (1) - remove reverse and add a circle Hum.... Why?


[Imminent Chaos]

why this diff is last order in your mapset? You DO know i have no control over it, right? The real order is given in the description and this one is due to the difficulty of each diff which is calculated by a broken system....... A lot of map have this problem and we can't do anything about it.


GL

Hai

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi! Here is m4m

Cherry Blossom

In every diff's name there is the word "Chaos" so I'd try to put the word "Chaos" here as well... For example Cherry Blossom's Chaos or something... => awh yeah it's true...
00:01:916 - A note here is really necessary in my opinion, change the pattern in order to add a note here => done.
01:02:833 (2,4) - Ctrl+g on both for a better flow => Done
01:05:499 (8,1) - Select these and press ctrl+g for a better flow => didn't change, if someone else suggests me the same thing i'll change.

I don't agree with some of the NCs that don't start on the downbeats, for example 00:45:166 or 00:46:499 or 00:58:499 I'd check them and remake them but it's your choice => i rechecked NCs on my diff, i've fixed many combo etc.
Another thing:
00:19:999 - This is unnatural, I don't know how to explain... In this part a different part of the song starts and this note is stacked under another note and there isn't even a NC on it, you should start a new pattern here.
Oh fuck I don't know how to explain, it's too complicated, sorry :/ Concact me in-game and I'll try to explain it better to you => i understood, yes it's true but... (i really can't explain it too x) ) well, i will consider this, but i keep this pattern.

Thanks for your mod
Updated diff : http://puu.sh/3IlbY.rar
To rezoons : si ça te dérenge pas, tu peux rename ma diff en "Cherry Blossom's chaos", merci

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi! Here is m4m

Chaos

00:30:666 - Uhm, a slider or two notes here? There is already a slider here.....
00:30:999 (9) - Nc here for consistency with previous patterns! ???????? This note doesn't exist.
00:49:166 (5,6,7,8) - This may be really random but I'd select all these notes and use ctrl+h, so the flow between 00:48:999 (4,5) will be improved without destroying the whole pattern Actually..... That's a very good idea ^^
00:56:833 (8,9) - Stack the end of these sliders properly Whoops. Fixed
01:04:666 (3) - Ctrl+g for a better flow Hum.... I'll think about it because it kills the rest of the pattern.

Far Away Chaos

00:07:999 (1) - Maybe whistle in the end? Fixed
00:20:666 (3,1) - They are too near, move (1) one grid up (turn off distance snap, it shouldn't cause any spacing problem) Fixed
00:26:999 (2) - (Nazi) - 2nd sldierpoint to 110|337 and 3rd sliderpoint to 195|332 for a better blanket Fixed
00:34:666 (1) - Finish at the beginning? (Apply this in all diffs if you haven't done it yet) Fixed
00:51:166 (2) - Nc here since you started a kiai Fixed
00:52:166 (4,1) - The spinner is too near to the note, and in easy diffs this kind of things are nearly unrankable since the spinner is unexpected for a newbie player, try maybe to turn the note+spinner into a slider I shorten the spinner so it's at the limit of the rankable spinner so idk.... But the Easy msut have a spinner.
00:53:333 - Add a finish at this point (In all diffs) Fixed. Actually it was the only diff without one XD The hitsound copyier is still in beta.
00:53:833 (1) - Move this to 00:53:999 - It soudns much better in my opinion and maybe add a clap on the beginning Actually i prefer my way.

Distant Chaos

00:15:333 (3) - Ctrl+g on this, it flows better, anyway it should have the same shape of 00:14:333 (1) - for a better-looking pattern Fixed and i can't give them the same shape because it wouls be out of the playfield.
00:40:666 (2,4) - I'd give them the same shape for a better pattern But... They are the same shape.
00:51:166 (2) - Nc because of the kiai Fixed

Another thing, maybe the spinners are a bit close to the following notes (1/1) try to shorten them because they are a bit difficult It's a Normal+ so i think it's good.

Imminent Chaos

00:10:666 (4,1,2,3) - Well, the sliders start on red ticks and they sound a bit odd, try to put 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + note instead of note + 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider, it should sound better Fixed. Actually that's what i did in the other diff. XD
00:10:666 - Also, NC here Fixed
00:20:333 (3,4) - Use ctrl+g on (3) and put (4) this way, the pattern should flow better Fixed. And very goo idea ^^

00:21:499 (3,4,5) - Okay, listen carefully, here you have the same problem that you had in 00:10:666 (4,1,2,3), so if you want to fix you have to reduce this slider 00:20:999 (1) - and make it finish in 00:21:166 or 00:21:249 and make the 1/2 sliders start in 00:21:333
It's really hard for me to explain so if you didn't understand call me in-game xD Fixed
Anyway I think you should remove the NC from 00:20:999 (1) and put it at this point: 00:21:333 Fixed
00:32:499 (4) - For a better flow press ctrl+j, then fix the spacing Actually i prefer like this.
01:03:999 (4,1,2,3) - The same as 00:10:666 (4,1,2,3) Fixed

Close Chaos

00:01:999 (4) - Ctrl+g would flow much better Actually no. I reckon that 00:01:333 (2,3,4) would flow better but you would have the same problem for 00:01:999 (4,5,1) that you don't have now.
00:22:999 (3,4) - I don't like the rhythm you used here, try to do this: put a note in 00:22:999 - then put a slider. Start it in 00:23:166 and end it in 00:23:499 - Then start another slider in 00:23:666 and end it in 00:23:833 ! Fixed
00:53:833 (2) - Look at the spacing here, fix it please. It's playable but ugly to see imo Whoops! Fixed.
01:08:499 (5) - Ctrl+g maybe? No, for the same reason as before.
01:12:499 (2) - You can make this more symmetric, I'm sure I tried something.

Cherry Blossom

In every diff's name there is the word "Chaos" so I'd try to put the word "Chaos" here as well... For example Cherry Blossom's Chaos or something...
Well... Cherry Blossom = Chaos so.... XD ok i'll do it.

____________________________________

Really epic mapset, it deserves to be ranked, seriously, good luck with it! Thank you ^^
Star

Hai !

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey


Cherry Blossom

1. 00:13:999 (3,4,5,6) - Place it perfectly in line with the 00:13:833 (2) would look much better. => Arranged with grid level 4
   
   
2. 00:14:999 (3) - Feels kind of overmapped. Replace this with a single circle perhaps. => if someone else says the same thing, i'll change.
   
   
3. 00:24:999 (11) - The music really changes on the 11 where the guitar comes in, so this stream feels strange. I suggest use smaller spacing for the 00:24:333 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) and then increase spacing on the 11 for the last five circles. If you do, add a NC on the 11. It will fit the music better.
   => Done.
   
4. 00:29:499 (2,3) - Try to increase the spacing. The small spacing here plays really strange imo. => Almost fixed
   
   
5. 00:36:999 (1,2) - I suggest put the NC on the 2 instead, it makes the strange rhythm easier to understand here, and the music changes there also. => Done !
   
   
6. 00:37:249 (2,3) - Very difficult to read 1/4 jump imo. Consider deleting the 3, it plays much better that way imo and follows the guitar sound more closely because it holds at 00:37:333 until 00:37:499. => fixed !
   
   
7. 00:42:333 (1,2) - Same point as 00:36:999 (1,2). => Done
   
   
8. 01:07:082 (4) - Follows music better if you delete this and start the stream at 01:07:166. => >Fixed
   
   
9. 01:07:832 (1) - Replace with two circles? You have a different pattern here than you do at 00:13:833 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) is that intentional? It seems to follow the music nicer if the 1/4 sliders don't start until 01:07:999 with a NC. => Fixed
   
   
10. 01:14:333 - The spinner end is kind of loud, maybe make it 5% instead. => fixed !

Thanks for your mod
Updated diff : http://puu.sh/3JJWZ.rar

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey
Sorry it took awhile.
Lets do this.

General

1. Honest opinion here: The maps feel super awkward when the music starts to fade out yet we're still playing, and spacing or note density doesn't change at all...Although I guess it can't be helped. My only suggestion would be to delete everything after 01:11:999 - and add a spinner that lasts until 01:14:333 with its volume gradually decreasing like the music. Also, it would be nice to have a spinner in the diffs that don't have one for variance in scores. Ok, everybody doesn't agree on this. Si i'll keep what i think. I will map the fade out. The note density does change but only in the Chaos diff, i'll see what can i do for others but there are map like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/158617 who does this.
   
   
   Hitsounds Suggestions
2. Your hitsounds seem kinda random. Try to place a finish on important beats such as strong downbeats, or where you hear a finish in the music. You are missing tons of finishes at spots where they would go nicely in each diff. The normal finish fits really well with this song also, so you can place a lot of them.
   Well, they are random + hitsound copyier in a beta version........ Please don't kill me. I'm bad at hitsounds.
   
3. There are lots of spots in the song with very loud claps in the music in interesting patterns, but you don't place the claps on those points in your map. Go through and listen for loud claps in the music and place your claps accordingly. For example, in the Chaos diff, 00:11:833 (5) there is loud clap here, but you placed clap at 00:11:999 (6) when there is no clap in the music.
   
   
4. If you'd like me to go through and give some detailed hitsound suggestions, catch me in game, I'd be happy to. Although I think if you do it yourself you can learn a lot more and the result will be much better.

Thank you a lot but you already did a lot in my map. I will take another look at all my hitsounds following your suggestion and see what can i do.

Chaos

1. 00:08:833 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I realize you're trying to repeat the 00:03:499 (8,9) rhythm here, but it's not working because at this part the downbeat 00:09:333 is really accented because it's starting this stream. So I suggest replace the 9 with a single circle and start the stream on the downbeat. I also suggest this because I think it would be nice to have the stream centered in symmetry on the axis. That would fit better with your mapping style here. Fixed
   
   
   
2. 00:10:333 (9) - NC to be consistent with 01:03:666 (1) perhaps? Fixed
   
   
3. 00:25:833 (3) - Move it two grids to the left. Fixed
   
   
4. 00:26:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kinda dislike this pattern, it a bit ugly and unfitting imo. I like it more sharp. See if you agree. ;3 actually...... I kinda dislike your pattern, and i find it ugly. I llike it more smooth XD
   
   
   
5. 00:30:666 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make it centered in symmetry? It would fit with the 00:27:999 (1,2,3,4) pattern much better. I think it plays better like this.
   
   
6. 00:39:332 (3) - I like it much more as two circles like 00:33:999 (3,4). It follows the music better and is more fun to play. Fixed
   
   
7. 00:40:832 (7,1) - This could benefit from larger spacing imo. Not sure.... MAybe if someone else suggest it.
   
   
8. 00:46:999 (1) - This feels overmapped to me and is hard to read since it's nothing like the previous patterns because 00:46:166 (4,5,6,7,8,9) is following guitar but the guitar doesn't hit at all on 00:47:083. Try replacing the 1 here with a single circle instead. You can also experiment with replacing the 00:47:166 (2,3) with a triplet and jump. Did something else.
   
   
   
9. 00:52:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+G is better flow imo because it continues the flow pattern from 00:51:166 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5). Fixed
   
   
10. 00:52:999 (5) - Since this part is so difficult, consider NC here to make the drain more forgiving. I'm not sure it will change that much.
    
    
11. 00:54:166 (1) - Remove NC? It's kinda weird, I figured it might be a mistake. Indeed, fixed.
    
    
12. 01:02:500 (9) - Same point as 00:08:833 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8). You could also try to rearrange the stream a bit to have the 01:03:332 (8) in the center of the grid which might be nice.Actually i'm not really sure for this one.....

Imminent Chaos

1. 00:05:166 (1,2) - Really dangerous idea having the downbeat on the end of the slider after that jump pattern. See after the 00:04:666 (4,5,6) big spacing increase, the music is pushing the player to anticipate the downbeat as a release for that tension. But they don't click for it, so it's really confusing. You can try to make a more fitting rhythm and pattern here. Try: Fixed
   
   
   
2. 00:02:166 (4,5,6,1) - Such harsh flow so early orz. Try giving it more curve and turning the sliders a bit. Fixed
   
   
   
3. 00:45:166 (4,1) - Seems much nicer if the 1 were at 00:45:333 with a triplet on it. fixed
   
   
4. 00:46:666 (4) - I suggest remove a repeat to keep consistent with similar sliders all throughout the diff, like 00:41:333 (2) for instance. I understand what you mean but the 5 notes are too "powerful" to be ignored imo.
   
   
5. 00:50:666 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try placing the star so that the 00:52:666 (1) is on the center line and is pointing upwards. Seems much more epic.^^
   YEAH!
   
   
6. 00:58:499 (4,1) - Same exact point as 00:05:166 (1,2). It's super confusing to not hit something on that downbeat after jumping. Try this:
   
   You could make the change without changing the pattern much by stacking the two singles between the sliders.Fixed

I can't really get into this diff. I feel like lots of the rhythms ignore the music and don't allow me to click on important beats because they fall on the ends of sliders and things.I don't like this diff either. It was more like a test than anything else but i don't know why i keep it. I think it's because of the difficulty spread. I will look at it and remap it i think.

Close Chaos

1. 00:05:499 (1) - It would fit the music a ton better if this were at 00:05:333. Fixed
   
   
2. 00:08:499 (2,3) - Make the spacing 1.2, it will look nicer. The spacing is already 1.2?
   
   
3. 00:14:666 (3,5) - Make these the same slider so that the blankets are consistent. Right now their curves are slightly different. Fixed
   
   
4. 00:15:499 (6,1) - Try to work on blanketing patterns like this. Make this blanket the same in shape as the 00:16:499 (3,1). It will look and feel really nice in play. I'm not sure i understood what you meant but i think it's fixed.
   
   
   
5. 00:25:833 (3) - Ctrl+G seems to be a more fitting flow idea for the music. Also try to rotate the 00:25:833 (3,4) more to the left so that they fit better in a pattern with the 00:25:499 (1,2).
   
   As you can see, the tail of the 3 is same distance from the 1 as the 2 is, which makes a nicer looking pattern. I'm not sure about the CTRL+G thingy but i fixed the rest.
   
   
6. 00:39:833 (5,1) - Noticeable spacing decrease and it looks kinda bad. Try rotating the 5 slightly so that you can maintain the blanket and keep 1.3 spacing. Why is it 1.3 here? Fixed with 1.2.
   
   
7. 00:47:333 - Why the pause here? It makes no sense for the hard diff to ignore the music and have a short break. ._. Fixed
   
   
8. 00:50:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be great if you could try a different placement here that didn't have all this overlap. Try to make a pattern that has the 3 and 4 blanketing the 1 and 2, or perhaps overlapping their tails instead of their slider bodies. I tried something.
   
   
9. 00:54:666 (2) - Move it down and right so that it's spaced properly from the 00:53:832 (2). Rotate it to fix spacing. Tried something.
   
   
10. 00:56:499 (2,3) - Rotate it -3 degree and fix spacing so that the 3 is centered in the blanket. Fixed
    
    
    
11. 00:57:499 (1,2) - It looks sloppy because the 1 has more of a curve than the 2. Try copying the 2 and pasting it as the 1 and then rotating it to place it the same way. It will look much nicer. Fixed but i just reduced the bending.
    
    
    
12. 01:12:499 (3) - It looks a little funky. Try remaking it in the center and using Ctrl+H to make sure it's perfect.With a little bit of math it's fixed. ^^

A bit messy placements but it's ok.I don't like the low AR here but i have to if i want a good difficulty spread.

Distant Chaos

1. 00:06:666 (1,2,3) - If you make each slider have the same exact curve, you can make a much better looking pattern.
   
   Each is rotated by 45 degrees from the last. Fixed
   
   
2. 00:52:666 (5,1,2) - Really confusing imo. It's impossible to tell whether or not the 1 is on the downbeat or not, because that's what is expected. Try to make a simple rhythm that is consistent with 00:00:000 (1,2,1). Example: Fixed
   
   
3. 01:10:666 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make a pattern with more consistent spacing between the circles. The spacing is x0.98 between every circles so i'm not sure what you mean.....
   

Nice diff. You spam new combos kinda a lot but it's not a big deal. It's because i started mapping it like a Normal but i changed to Normal+ when i saw that i couldn't do a Normal but for whatever reason i keep NCing like i did.

Far Away Chaos

1. This diff name is a little bland to me. How about something more interesting. Maybe "Future Chaos." I don't know.... I know the name i gave isn't really good but i son't like "Future Chaos" either so.... For the moment i'll keep it.
   
   
2. 00:02:666 (1,3,1) - I don't like these sliders, they look really sloppy and flow strange. I don't like forcing blankets like this, I think you could map the section differently with better sliders. It's my mapping style. Usually people love them or hate them. But well it's how i map so i'll keep them.
   
   
3. 00:15:999 - I really wish there was a circle here with a finish and NC on it... just like at 00:26:666 (1). It plays really nicer if you don't skip over this strong beat. Same at 00:18:666. Fixed
   
   
4. 00:16:333 (1,2,3) - Looks not so great imo. You don't have to force the blankets like this, try just making the 2 and 3 straight sliders or make them more similar to 00:27:999 (3,4). If you do so, do the same at 00:18:999 (1,2,3) of course. Copying the placement again is causing this weird placement/flow with the 00:20:665 (3,1). If you could do it differently, that would be great. Again. It's more my mapping style. I have no problem whatsoever with this and i kinda like it.
   
   
5. 00:51:166 (2) - NC seems nice for this unique rhythm here. Done in the previous mod.

Neato. ^^
I like this mapset, good luck getting it ranked!

sheela901 wrote:

Je connais ce jeu. L'un de mes jeux indé préféré ^^

[General]
- Ajoute plus de tags comme: game. Je ne sais pas quoi ajouter...Pourquoi faire? Mettre une tonne de tag sert a rien de mon point de vue. Je pourrais toujours rajouter "Pixel" le pseudo du créateur du jeu mais rien que ça ça me semble déja inutile.
- 00:31:999 - Ralenti le slider à 0.75x; 00:34:499 - à 1.00x; 00:37:333 - à 0.75x; 00:39:833 - à 1.00x Je préfère utiliser ce genre de ralenti lorsque la différence est plus marqué dans la musique. Je suis d'accord que c'est un peu plus calme... Mais juste "un peu". D'ailleurs si j'avais du mettre un ralenti je l'aurais plutôt mis aux différent endroit ou j'ai utilisé les soft hitsounds qu'ici.

[Faraway Chaos]
00:06:666 (2) - Ctrl + H? Pourquoi est-ce que tout le monde veut un CTRL+H ici? *soupir* je suppose que j'ai pas le choix..... Fixed
00:42:666 (1) - Je ne sais pas comment le dire mais je peux te donner le code.

SPOILER

348,56,42666,6,0,B|220:52|312:176|120:184|120:184|312:192|220:316|348:312,1,560,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Nyeh? Je vois pas de différence.... Mais bon je suppose que ce que tu voulais dire c'est "ton slider est nul" XD. Bon je l'ai amliorer un peu. C'est vrai que la blanket était pas géniale.

Désolé si ce n'est pas assez. Tu peux me PM un autre map si tu veux. Bonne Chance et kudosu! Bah.... J'ai déja eu pire comme mod XD

Xinely wrote:

from my queue

• 
  Faraway
  00:07:333 (3) - imo too much curved in this slider, make like http://puu.sh/3Ob79.jpg ? Fixed
  00:10:666 (1) - should be finish in head, i heard cymbal Fixed. And in the other diff too.
  00:14:666 (2) - remove whistle? kinda weird imo Fixed
  00:21:333 (1) - finish in head Fixed. And in the other diff too.
  00:25:333 (4) - 365,62 for more branket hum..... Not really.
  00:26:999 (2) - inconsistency here, even u make branket. keep consistency please I'm not sure i understand what you mean....
  00:45:333 (1) - ^ (just one grid left and 00:46:666 (2) - one grid left too) Fixed
  00:52:666 (1) - replace to slider better, too much fast for spin Auto gets 2000 so that's ok. Besides i need one spinner in the diff.

• 
  Distant
  00:01:333 (1,2) - since it's normal, imo it's hard to read for newbie Look at the description, it's Normal+ so i keep it.
  00:09:333 (1) - replace with slider and circle? it's so fast and bpm 180, need a rest for while after spin Who need a rest in a 1min long map?
  00:10:666 (1) - finish?
  00:21:333 (1) - inconsistency spacing also finish in head? Whoops, fixed.
  00:32:333 (2) - spacing issue Double whoops, Fixed.
  00:38:667 (1,2) - flow better if you ctrl+G this Not necessary.
  00:41:333 (3) - finish in head? I think it fits better if it's on the head of 00:39:999 (1)
  01:02:666 (1) - same as 00:52:666 (1) -in Faraway Chaos Same
  01:03:999 (1) - finish? Fixed. And in the other diff as well.
  01:06:333 (1) - it's neater if stacked in 01:03:999 (1) - Not really useful since you can't see the difference while playing.
  01:11:333 (3) - 256,296 better flow imo I prefer W-shape than U-shape.

• 
  Close
  00:03:833 (1) - why NC here? Fixed
  00:09:166 (1) - ^ Fixed
  00:20:999 (1) - finish in tail
  00:46:666 (2,1) - hard diff? it's kinda hard imo Meh, it's a Hard+, look at the description, so it's ok i guess.
  01:14:333 (1) - imo no need NC even it's last object I think i will keep it unless someone else suggest it.
  fine diff ~

• 
  Chaos
  name this Extra Chaos? i think it's insane diff lol Extra Chaos doesn't make a lot of sense compared to the name of the other diff.
  00:21:333 (9) - finish
  00:51:833 (3) - spacing issue here (0,54x) Can't really fix it. Not very important (0.54 for 0.6 is o.k. i guess)
  00:51:499 (5) - so nazi, it's better to use Normal spacing 1,00x I would have trouble with 00:53:333 (1)

• 
  Imminent
  00:11:333 (3) - ctrl+G? The flow would be weird.
  00:21:333 (1) - finish head
  01:14:333 (1) - imo no need NC even it's last object

Good Luck ~

Teara wrote:

Not modding the rest thou. I'm sorry, this song gives me a headache.

Also at the moment the mapset is E/N/L/I/L/I (L = Lunatic) So diff spread is also a issue here.

Teara wrote:

[Faraway Chaos]
Being the easiest diff in the mapset, please reduce AR by 1 Fixed

00:09:333 (2) - I'd start this on the next white tick because you need to keep things a bit more simple in a easy map. (it ends where it currently end thou) Fixed

00:34:666 (1) - End this on the prev white tick. for the same reason as above.] Well, this time it's the end of the slider not the start. And as you say later in the mod: "its fine if you let sliders end on a red or blue tick thou." Besides it's the rythm that want this. If i end it like you say it feels weird while playing.

00:39:999 (1) - This slider seems to be a little out of place, maybe improve it a bit Fixed

00:51:166 (1,2,3) - While this really fits and plays nice, its very hard for new players to do, I suggest you make a repeating slider. The problem here it's that all these sound are "powerful" and must be played imo and a reverse slider seems not interesting for this imo but i think i found a way to solve this problem. I delete 00:47:999 (1) and replace it with a spinner whic allow me to delete the smallest one "nearly rankable" and i play the "powerful" sound with 2 sliders without reverse and replace the small spinner with another slider. I even find a new original pattern that i find pretty cool ^^

00:52:666 (1) - Spinner is way to short for a Easy! see above.

00:55:999 (1,2,3) - Once again, this will catch newer players offguard. Revisit this whole section please. Try to keep circle on white ticks only for a Easy, its fine if you let sliders end on a red or blue tick thou. But i use the same rythm as 00:02:666 (1,2,3) -and you didn't said anything about it.But if you listen the music you'll see that i have no other choice here..... Anyway i didn't find any.

Apart from this, the map looks pretty nice and is fun to play. Good job.


--

Another thing to look at is hitsounds, they are to soft I can barely hear them over the music, maybe increase the volume a bit for the first 70% of the mapset. Increased by 10%

we decided to drop your map for now for the following reason

BeatofIke wrote:

On the easier difficulties, we witnessed that there are so many overlaps.

Also, some of the notes could be unreadable due to bad polarity (Distant Chaos seems to be okay though).

Lastly, some of the notes after the spinner are too sudden. In other words, there is not enough reaction time for novice players to recover.

As for the hardest difficulties (Cherry Blossom's Chaos and Chaos), We wasn't too sure about as both difficulties were beyond pur skill to play test.

If we were to check these difficulties, it would lead to biased suggestions. For those difficulties, we would recommend a higher skill player to play test the map.

We were also quite questioned about the difficulty spread.

rezoons wrote:

"for now" means "for now" or "definitely"?
We dropping it for now due to it's current state. We might recheck the map later after you received more mods.

Hum... I hate overlap and i made sure that there was as few as possible. Easy hasn't any, Neither does Normal+. So.... Do you mean stack? And what is bad in stack? Nobody mentioned any overlap in these diff in my 19 previous so i'm kinda doubtful.
Ah, whatever. I meant to say end slider stacking orz.

.... I don't understand this sentence. Sorry but what is polarity?
Sorry about that, I assume you knew what I meant. Anyways, I was referring to this video. Sorry for the misunderstanding orz.

The issue is just in the Normal+ diff. It's fixed.
Ah I see, then it should be okay then :3

I made them tested by The_badin and Cherry Blossom which can play them.
Then it should be fine. We was not able to play them so yeah.

It's Easy/Normal+/Hard+/Insane/Extra/Extra so, no major gap in the difficulties.
It's probably the order that we played them on the mapset, but why Normal+ and Hard+? Why not just Normal and Hard? ><

Well, i don't understand everything but thank you. I'll try to get more mod.
Again, sorry for the inconvenience.

BeatofIke wrote:

"for now" means "for now" or "definitely"?
We dropping it for now due to it's current state. We might recheck the map later after you received more mods.
You can dropping it definitely because i can't be very active at the moment. It was pure luck that i get your queue but i barely have time to mod myself.

Hum... I hate overlap and i made sure that there was as few as possible. Easy hasn't any, Neither does Normal+. So.... Do you mean stack? And what is bad in stack? Nobody mentioned any overlap in these diff in my 19 previous so i'm kinda doubtful.
Ah, whatever. I meant to say end slider stacking orz.
Ah, ok. I understand. But i never thought it was an issue (otherwise i wouldn't have mapped like this)

.... I don't understand this sentence. Sorry but what is polarity?
Sorry about that, I assume you knew what I meant. Anyways, I was referring to this video. Sorry for the misunderstanding orz.
Thank you for the video. I didn't know this. I'll see if i can improve the diff using it.

The issue is just in the Normal+ diff. It's fixed.
Ah I see, then it should be okay then :3
I let two white ticks between the spinner and the notes so i think it should be ok. But the 180 BPM make it really fast.

I made them tested by The_badin and Cherry Blossom which can play them.
Then it should be fine. We was not able to play them so yeah.
Both map are very jumpy and streamy and since i can't stream this fast i made them tested in order to be sure about them. I even tested myself with "Relax" for the flow of the jump.

It's Easy/Normal+/Hard+/Insane/Extra/Extra so, no major gap in the difficulties.
It's probably the order that we played them on the mapset, but why Normal+ and Hard+? Why not just Normal and Hard? ><
Yeah, the star difficulty is so broken that instead of playing the order 1/2/3/4/5/6 it plays the order 1/2/6/3/5/4 which is confusing. Even for me. But i can't really do anything about it. And about Normal+ and Hard+ it's because i had trouble mapping Normal and Hard because of the rythm of the song. I just mapped what comes the most natural.

Well, i don't understand everything but thank you. I'll try to get more mod.
Again, sorry for the inconvenience.
No problem. But thank you for the advice.

Kin wrote:

parce que MEEEEEH



CB full stream diff : Cherry Blossom's Chaos : => j'ai faim de stream

00:06:166 (8) - t'en pense quoi le fait de le move sur le 9 ? perso j'aime bien ce gros jump puis ensuite anti jump. J'trouve que ça passe bien avec la musique => c'est possible mais en faisant ça j'ai en tête l'image de BaKaNa (/me runs) ça fera un trop gros jump et je me ferais encore + détesté pour ça déjà que l'ensemble de la diff is wth with streams lol. Bref, non, je garde.
00:09:333 (1,2,3,4,1) - içi le flow ressemble à ça http://puu.sh/45SEp.jpg, mais perso je préfère faire un truc dans le genre : http://puu.sh/45SMJ.jpg
pour une simple raison, sur le pattern de base, ce sont 2 boucles différentes, du coup, ça fais une sorte de stream slider jump irrégulier, tandis que sur le 2eme screen, c'est 2 boucles identiques, donc un flow qui pour moi est + intéressant => Done.
01:03:333 (1) - fais le plutot en x2,5 ~ 3,2 ? je trouve le stream slider jump + fun si le spacing est + ou - constant => je l'ai mis en x3, done.

Kin wrote:

parce que MEEEEEH Random French Mod FTW!!!!!!!!!!

sinon si tu map jusqu'a qu'il y a plus de son, le son s'arrête içi 01:14:666 - Ouais, mais ça m’arrangeais plus de finir un beat avant. XD

Easy : Faraway Chaos :

00:22:666 (2) - il est fait exprès le whistle ? il fait bien seul Ouais, c'est le hitsound copyer qui est pas parfait. J'ai refait le pattern des whistle ici.
00:25:333 (4) - ^
00:50:666 (1,2,3) - c'est jolie et tout, mais je trouve ça vachement confus pour une easy Ouais mais c'est joli!!!!!!....... Ok, je change. R.I.P. pattern cool.

Normal : Distant Chaos :
perso je l'ai trouvé bien hard pour une Normal POURQUOI PERSONNE NE LIT LA DESCRIPTION DE A MAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! C'EST ECRIS QUE C'EST UNE NORMAL+ ABFKDHHFUNLGKHFSCI?DRGJVHHTLNGFCNCHLJQGGDSIHORQ?V
sinon j'ai rien a dire dessus lololol

Hard : Close Chaos :

00:27:166 (2,3) - perso au niveau du flow je préfère mettre les 2 en ctrl + g (séparément) Yeah! En fait j'en ai mis un en ctrl+g et l'autre en ctrl+h et ça fait vachement mieux (bon par contre j'ai du un peu remapper derrière.

Insane : Imminent Chaos :

00:08:833 (4) - fais gaff ça touche presque la petite horloge Le mot clé c'est "presque"
00:20:666 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - le spacing est ok dans l'editeur, mais en jeux avec le stack le spacing et du coup vraiment bas, je pense pas trop que ce soit intentionnel, si c'est pas le cas, mieux vaut déstack J'ai pas destacké. J'ai juste éloigné le stack pour contrecarrer cet effet et ça marche bien!
Extra : Chaos :

00:00:499 (6,7) - perso je préfère ctrl + g Pas moi. XD

Sinon j'ai pas grand chose à dire \o Ma map t'a laissé sans voix, hein!
GL

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M From modding queue

sorry for micro mod, but the mapset is nearly perfect ^^

[Imminent Chaos]

00:02:333 (4,1) - Stack Fixed
00:04:499 (3,2) - ^ Useless because they are too far apart.
00:23:166 (1) - A bit down I don't see why. Besides, it would kill the symmetry.
00:21:999 (3,3) - Stack Useless because they are too far apart.
00:36:749 (6) - Add note I don't hear any note here.

[Chaos]

00:45:833 (2,2) - Stack Useless because they are too far apart.
00:47:499 (4,5,6) - Fix stack Fixed
00:51:166 (1,2) - Spacing error? Nope
00:59:000 (4,7) - Stack They are already stack
01:04:667 (3,1) - ^ Useless because they are too far apart.

[Close Chaos]

00:01:999 (4,3) - Stack Useless because they are too far apart.
00:04:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 1 stack on 00:03:499 (3) That would kill the pattern
00:15:166 (5) - Shape a bit soft Fixed
00:32:333 (2,5) - Stack Already stacked
00:37:333 (1,2) - Make a blanket? Blanket fixed

[Cherry Blossom's Chaos]

Fix object not snapped:Baka Cherry! Fixed for him because R.I.P. his internet connexion

[Navy] wrote:

Hi~M4M


Sorry for my bad english
I'm a newbie mapper.. You mean modder?

[Faraway Chaos]

00:00:000 (1) - just my think,
extend slider to 00:00:999 ..? Nope. It's like 00:02:666 (1) it fits the music better this way.

00:58:666 (1) - ^ ^

00:10:666 (1) - one more reverse Actually i hesitate about it but decided to keep this because the note at 00:11:666 is different from the other so the arrow isn't needed. edit: Finally, i did it.

[Cherry Blossom's Chaos]
I'll apply the mod for him because R.I.P. his internet connexion
how about adding jumping instead of stack notes..? Knowing him, it's because it's harder. ^^
00:13:416 (6) - 00:13:833 (2) - circle? The sliders are here to replace two notes of 1/4. It's a pattern replacing the stacking of 2 notes then a slider.

00:50:499 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hell for meCherry Blossom's style!

[Close Chaos]

00:20:999 (1) - delete nc? There is a change in the music here so i keep it.
00:21:499 (2) - nc Fixed

00:30:999 (2) - Ctrl +G That would kill the symmetry and don't improve the flow.

[Chaos]

00:05:166 (7) - Circle instead of slider The slider follow a different sound than the circles.

00:19:666 (1,2,3,4) - change (1) to 2 circles and 00:19:999 (2,3,4) - make triangle ..? my suggest I prefer the pattern like this.

00:52:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think they are too far It's the most intense part of the song so the mapping is here to represent this even if it's that extreme!

[Imminent Chaos]

I think this diff is perfect!I like it actually it's the one i like the least XD

01:05:832 (5) - reverse Why reverse? It doesn't seem to follow the song better imo.
01:06:166 (1) - delete

Exciting map! Thank you!

Faraway Chaos

1. 00:11:666 - Here should be a hitcircle, since from 00:10:666 the strong melody starts keeps going on.
2. 00:13:333 (1) - weird slider length, exspeacially because of an non so hard difficult
   maybe like this? (bit of a better flow, or just more simple
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:25:333 (4) - Whistle on such a long slider, maybe its just my personal hate on whistle sounds on normal hitsounds, but here i dont see any need or reason to use it
4. 00:34:666 (1) - why does it have to end on an half note? its not like the slider is based on an ongoing melody, so i would just make it longer until 00:35:666
5. 01:04:999 - ^ 00:11:666

Distant Chaos

• i cant really find anything, where i would say, there is a need to change it, since its a really good timed/structured map in my opinion.
  Still there are a few points a would like to mention, which are all just based on my personal feelings.

1. im kinda confused by the point that the end when the music gets lower, the patterns are getting most likely faster, so maybe slower slider or just longer breaks beetween the placed objects would be fine. But yeah, im already feelign stupid for writing this, since the map is good who it is.
2. 00:24:666 maybe still lower the sound a bit, kinda feel like the focous could be more on music then on the spinner.

Cherry Blossom's Chaos

• just to hard for me, so i dont see how i could give a feedback on something im not able to play, deam my noob skills >.<

Close Chaos

• again its like really by far worth being ranked, but still on my personal site i feel like...

1. 00:29:333 (1) - has just an ugly shape and doesnt really make it better playing it.
2. 00:50:666 - i dont see the reason for kiai here, since its like the building up part for whats coming after it, so thats not the focus point
3. like i said before, i really dont mind these consistent use of whistle sound, on single notes it can work to make it more fluid, but i would not use it on more then one note in a row

Chaos

• again to hard for me >.<, but i would like to know why it has even to be such a small circle size. Hardrock will makes this such on overkill

Imminent Chaos

• really cant find anything, just great

ElfenLied0810 wrote:

So i would like to atleast try to mod your map, for a m4m from your modding queue.
But pls be aware that im new to modding at all, so if you you think its useless just ignore me

Faraway Chaos

1. 00:11:666 - Here should be a hitcircle, since from 00:10:666 the strong melody starts keeps going on. Well, as someone else suggested i should add an arrow of the previous slider instead so.... Fixed.
2. 00:13:333 (1) - weird slider length, exspeacially because of an non so hard difficult
   maybe like this? (bit of a better flow, or just more simple Indeed your suggestion flows better but i think what i've done follow the rythm better.
3. 00:25:333 (4) - Whistle on such a long slider, maybe its just my personal hate on whistle sounds on normal hitsounds, but here i dont see any need or reason to use it It matches the high ptiched sound of the music that this slider follow.
4. 00:34:666 (1) - why does it have to end on an half note? its not like the slider is based on an ongoing melody, so i would just make it longer until 00:35:666 Because the music is like this. There are a lot of slider like this in the diff and i can't really prevent it because that's how the rythm is. I tried my best to avoid them but well, if i ever found a better solution that folllow the rtym and avoid it i'll do it.
5. 01:04:999 - ^ 00:11:666 Fixed

Distant Chaos

• i cant really find anything, where i would say, there is a need to change it, since its a really good timed/structured map in my opinion.
  Still there are a few points a would like to mention, which are all just based on my personal feelings.

1. im kinda confused by the point that the end when the music gets lower, the patterns are getting most likely faster, so maybe slower slider or just longer breaks beetween the placed objects would be fine. But yeah, im already feelign stupid for writing this, since the map is good who it is.
   I understand what you meant and you have a good point. This end should be easier to play but i prefered doing it by putting sliders instead of notes instead of changing the SV or the spacing. In all diff you'll see that i made the map easier at this place.
2. 00:24:666 maybe still lower the sound a bit, kinda feel like the focous could be more on music then on the spinner.

hum.... There is no spinner here.

Cherry Blossom's Chaos

• just to hard for me, so i dont see how i could give a feedback on something im not able to play, deam my noob skills >.<

Close Chaos

• again its like really by far worth being ranked, but still on my personal site i feel like...

1. 00:29:333 (1) - has just an ugly shape and doesnt really make it better playing it. And the rythm used is weird..... Fixed ^^
2. 00:50:666 - i dont see the reason for kiai here, since its like the building up part for whats coming after it, so thats not the focus point Because this part is EPIC!!!!!! So, kiai time. ^^
3. like i said before, i really dont mind these consistent use of whistle sound, on single notes it can work to make it more fluid, but i would not use it on more then one note in a row I put the whistle to match the high pithced sound.

Chaos

• again to hard for me >.<, but i would like to know why it has even to be such a small circle size. Hardrock will makes this such on overkill

I just wanted the diff like this. That's it ^^ (Yes, i'm sadistic!)

Imminent Chaos

• really cant find anything, just great

So i again i want to say, that this like one of my first mods at all, so maybe its not that helpfull, but u really give you the best of luck and whishes to make this beatmap ranked

MMzz wrote:

[General]
I don't think mapping the fadeout is a very good idea, it will be an accuracy killer for most players. Why? Because it' s more difficult to ear the notes? The volume of the hitsounds decrease with the music so that shouldn't be a problem. Besides, except in the Easy/Normal+ diff the notes are closer to each other in the quiet part making it easier to play them. We could debate wheter or not i should map this part but i already had this debate and chose to do this. The song is short enough like this.

[Close Chaos]
00:46:999 (1) - Unnecessary combo. It isn't symbolizing any changes in the music. Fixed

Pretty clean set, I just disagree with the fade out music being mapped.

MMzz wrote:

[General]

[Cherry Bloosom's Chaos]
00:02:666 (3) - The combo should start here the follow the music directly. => Fixed.


Pretty clean set, I just disagree with the fade out music being mapped.

Cherry Blossom wrote:

To rezoons je sais pas si c'est de ma faute ou de la tienne, mais y''avait pas l'update de la dernière fois >.>

1. 00:10:833 (2,3,4) - Alors peut-être que c'est moi qui entend différemment mais le passage 00:10:833 à 00:10:999, ces deux notes me semblent être les mêmes que les deux suivantes: 00:11:166 à 00:11:333. Or, ici tu as un slider 1/2 pour les deux premières mais pour les autres tu as une note+le début d'un slider ce qui fait assez bizarre à jouer. Lorsque j’entends une répétition dans la musique j'aimerais une répétition du rythme dans la map.
2. 00:16:833 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Ces stack sont troublant. Normalement les jumps doivent se faire lorsque tu as les notes "puissantes" de la musique. Or ici c'est l'inverse. La musique alterne notes faibles/notes puissantes. C'est donc une bonne idée de faire des stacks mais au début de chaque stack tu devrais avoir la note puissante, pas la fiable, car c'est elle qui crée le jump!
3. 00:19:666 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 00:30:666 (1,2) - La encore le jump n'est pas sur la note puissante.
5. 00:31:333 (4,5) - ^
6. 00:35:166 - Pourquoi il n'y a pas de note ici? J'en entend clairement une dans la chanson! D'ailleurs la musique est identique qu'à 00:39:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) et tu as mis une note là-bas.
7. 00:52:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ah!!!!!!!!!!!! Le truc qui me dérange le plus et m'a toujours dérangé! Je sais que tu as déjà un bon gros stream de malade que je vais avoir du mal à ranké et que ce que je vais dire va faire empirer les chose mais POURQUOI lorsque la musique est la plus intense tu as le spacing le plus faible? C'est totalement à l'opposé de ce que j'ai fait. Je peux comprendre que tu entendes différemment la musique que moi mais là c'est pas différemment, c'est l'opposé total!
8. 01:03:999 (1,2,3,4) - Comme pour 00:10:833.

1. 00:25:916 (3,4,5,6) - Le flow de ce truc est vraiment bof. J'ai vraiment eu du mal a le jouer, je trouve que tu forces a faire au joueur un mouvement désagréable et qui détruit un peu le flow. Essaye aussi de la rapprocher de 00:26:499 (7) car un si gros jump n'est pas nécessaire ici comparé à 00:26:499 (7,1) qui est bien plus justifié.
2. 00:31:333 (4) - Bouge-le à x=424 y=96 (et 00:31:666 (5) avec lui) cela fera une symétrie avec 00:30:666 (1,2,3,4,5) et ca donne un bon flow pour 00:31:333 (4,5,6).
3. 01:09:333 (7) - C'est surement l'un des plus gros jumps de ta map!!!! (Si ce n'est le plus gros) et il se trouve à la fin, la ou la musique commence à disparaitre! C'est pas logique! Il est clair qu'il faut un jump ici mais pas de cette taille. Met la note au centre et ça suffira amplement!
4. Oh! Et maintenant que tu maitrise mieux le grid level 4 ce serait cool si tu pourrais recheck toutes tes blankets et corriger celles qui sont approximatives du au grid level 3!

1. 00:00:833 (1) - Retire le NC et met-le sur la note d'après.
2. 00:03:499 (2) - Retire le NC.
3. 00:11:833 (6) - NC ici et retire celui deux notes après!
4. 00:13:416 (2) - NC ici et retire celui sur la note d'après!
5. 00:14:333 (1) - Retire le NC.
6. 00:34:333 (1) - NC ici et retire celui sur la note d'après!
7. 00:35:333 (1) - Retire le NC ici et met le sur 00:35:999 (4) à la place.
8. 00:40:499 (1) - ^
9. 01:04:999 (5) - NC ici et retire celui deux notes après!
10. 01:06:998 (1) - Retire le NC.
11. 01:07:498 (1) - ^

1. 00:03:499 (2) - Finish a la fin?
2. 00:56:833 (4) - ^

rezoons wrote:

Bon Cherry, cette fois on passe en mode sérieux! (Post a écouter avec cette musique)

On va la gagner ranker cette putain de guerre map!!!!!!
Du coup ce week-end je vais faire du relooking extreme sur le mapset car j'ai repéré certains trucs qui doivent être remappé sur mes diffs. J'en ai aussi profité pour faire un mod complet de ta diff puisqu'apremment 80% des moddeurs que j'ai eu sont incompétent il faut bien que je fasse les choses moi-même! YEAH!

Donc voilà tes devoirs pour le week-end:
(Je tiens à préciser que j'ai modder avec dans ma tête mon idée de la map, ce qui veux dire que tout ce qui est rythm/NC est fait avec ma vision des choses et est totalement subjectif. Ça ne veut pas dire que tu dois l'ignorer mais au moins le relativiser!)

[Cherry Blossom's Chaos]
Rythm

1. 00:10:833 (2,3,4) - Alors peut-être que c'est moi qui entend différemment mais le passage 00:10:833 à 00:10:999, ces deux notes me semblent être les mêmes que les deux suivantes: 00:11:166 à 00:11:333. Or, ici tu as un slider 1/2 pour les deux premières mais pour les autres tu as une note+le début d'un slider ce qui fait assez bizarre à jouer. Lorsque j’entends une répétition dans la musique j'aimerais une répétition du rythme dans la map. => I consider.
2. 00:16:833 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Ces stack sont troublant. Normalement les jumps doivent se faire lorsque tu as les notes "puissantes" de la musique. Or ici c'est l'inverse. La musique alterne notes faibles/notes puissantes. C'est donc une bonne idée de faire des stacks mais au début de chaque stack tu devrais avoir la note puissante, pas la fiable, car c'est elle qui crée le jump!
3. 00:19:666 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
   pour moi quand je stack 2 notes, c'est tout le temps la 2ème qui est la + puissante, c'est mon style de mapping wesh D:
4. 00:30:666 (1,2) - La encore le jump n'est pas sur la note puissante.
5. 00:31:333 (4,5) - ^
   hmm
6. 00:35:166 - Pourquoi il n'y a pas de note ici? J'en entend clairement une dans la chanson! D'ailleurs la musique est identique qu'à 00:39:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) et tu as mis une note là-bas.
   je verrais ça si quelqu'un d'autre dit la même chose...
7. 00:52:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ah!!!!!!!!!!!! Le truc qui me dérange le plus et m'a toujours dérangé! Je sais que tu as déjà un bon gros stream de malade que je vais avoir du mal à ranké et que ce que je vais dire va faire empirer les chose mais POURQUOI lorsque la musique est la plus intense tu as le spacing le plus faible? C'est totalement à l'opposé de ce que j'ai fait. Je peux comprendre que tu entendes différemment la musique que moi mais là c'est pas différemment, c'est l'opposé total! ah tiens je me rappelle, je m'étais inspiré de ça lol
8. 01:03:999 (1,2,3,4) - Comme pour 00:10:833. same answer

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:25:916 (3,4,5,6) - Le flow de ce truc est vraiment bof. J'ai vraiment eu du mal a le jouer, je trouve que tu forces a faire au joueur un mouvement désagréable et qui détruit un peu le flow. Essaye aussi de la rapprocher de 00:26:499 (7) car un si gros jump n'est pas nécessaire ici comparé à 00:26:499 (7,1) qui est bien plus justifié. Fixed.
2. 00:31:333 (4) - Bouge-le à x=424 y=96 (et 00:31:666 (5) avec lui) cela fera une symétrie avec 00:30:666 (1,2,3,4,5) et ca donne un bon flow pour 00:31:333 (4,5,6). Done.
3. 01:09:333 (7) - C'est surement l'un des plus gros jumps de ta map!!!! (Si ce n'est le plus gros) et il se trouve à la fin, la ou la musique commence à disparaitre! C'est pas logique! Il est clair qu'il faut un jump ici mais pas de cette taille. Met la note au centre et ça suffira amplement! fixed (je l'ai pas mis au centre baka !)
4. Oh! Et maintenant que tu maitrise mieux le grid level 4 ce serait cool si tu pourrais recheck toutes tes blankets et corriger celles qui sont approximatives du au grid level 3! la flemme /me runs

NC
Si moi je suis le random hitsound guy alors toi tu est définitivement le random NC guy!

1. 00:00:833 (1) - Retire le NC et met-le sur la note d'après.
2. 00:03:499 (2) - Retire le NC.
3. 00:11:833 (6) - NC ici et retire celui deux notes après!
4. 00:13:416 (2) - NC ici et retire celui sur la note d'après!
5. 00:14:333 (1) - Retire le NC.
6. 00:34:333 (1) - NC ici et retire celui sur la note d'après! Non, il est bien là où il est...
7. 00:35:333 (1) - Retire le NC ici et met le sur 00:35:999 (4) à la place.
8. 00:40:499 (1) - ^
9. 01:04:999 (5) - NC ici et retire celui deux notes après! no.
10. 01:06:998 (1) - Retire le NC.
11. 01:07:498 (1) - ^
    done

Hitsound

1. 00:03:499 (2) - Finish a la fin?
2. 00:56:833 (4) - ^
   both done.

En tout cas prend ton temps pour le mod. Je ne chercherais pas de moddeurs avant mon relooking général donc tu as le week-end pour le faire. Je sais que Xhoria te prends du temps en ce moment! (Tu vas le ranker! Vas-y gogo *mode pompom girl activé*)

P.S.: Et qui va me donner des kudos pour ça? XD

FGSky wrote:

Yo rez

Je sais pas si t'as remarqué mais auto peut pas SS toutes les diffs en mania ;_;

rezoons wrote:

FGSky wrote:

Yo rez

Je sais pas si t'as remarqué mais auto peut pas SS toutes les diffs en mania ;_;

C'est bizarre. En effet auto, semble louper la première note à chaque fois. J'ai fait quelques tests mais je n'ai pas réussi à résoudre le problème. Enfin, bon on peut quand même joué la note si on jour normalement donc ça ne devrait pas être un gros problème. J'en parlerais au BAT lorsque ma map se fera bubbled et on verra si c'est un problème de ma map ou du jeu en lui-même. En tout cas merci de m'avoir signalé ça. ^^

arken1015 wrote:

One and Two :3

Just 1 Kudosu Star >_>

Aldwych wrote:

Koukou chirac & cerise!

#Sandwych's extra mod queue.

[General]

Je m'auto-souhaite déja gl pour la modder, parce que c'est très la batterie.
00:50:666 : Est-ce que ces 3 seconds de kiai en valent-la peine? Je doute perso. Ben, sur une diff de 1min, 3 sec de kiai ca représente quand même 5% de la map donc c'est pas rien. Et c'est aussi les 3 secondes les plus intense donc oui ça en vaut le coup.
01:03:999 : A partir de la est-ce que ça vaut le coup de mapper... ^ Je suis d'accord que la musique diminue un peu en intensité mais quasiment que dalle donc ça passe imo.
01:09:499+ : Bon hormis pour la diff a Cherry, je vois pas l’utilité de ces "timing bar" dans le vide. whoops, ça vient de l'époque ou j'avais mapper par là.

[Faraway]

Pas mal le rapport cercles/slider, t'as une "Djpop map" à l'envers" xD J'ai déja vu des diffs ranked avec 0 notes et que des sliders ^^

- 00:00:000 : Chuis pas une ultra-fan de finir sur un 1/2 et repartir 3/2 plus tard, pourquoi pas finir 1/2 plus tot (et mettre le tout symétrique évidemment sinon c'est pas drôle)? Ouais mais après ça suit plus trop la musique. Si je l'ai fait finir sur le 1/2 c'est parce que la note puissante est ici.
- 00:04:166 : (Ultra nazi) C'est pas super bien arrondi! :< blanket améliorée.
- 00:05:333 : En fait on rencontre le même problème au niveau du son sauf que la ca fera plus symétrique, du coup ce genre de truc je te laisse voir. Comme avant.
- 00:10:666 : Je trouve que ca fait "piège" de mettre 2 reverse. Split-les en 2? C'est une Easy, on a largement le temps d'anticiper et de voir qu'il y a 2 reverse. De plus c'est le même son qui se répete 4 fois dans la musique donc c'est legit de mettre 2 reverse imo.
- 00:36:666 : (Nazi) Pas bien aligné verticalement! :< (Au pire positionne le premier près du centre, et fait le copy/paste a partir de là et bouge l'ensemble) fixed
- 00:48:166 : Je sais pas si c'est volontaire par rapport aux autres diff, mais sur celle-là ca fait bizzare! Comment ça? Le spinner suit le même son que suivait 00:42:666 (1)

J'trouve que c'est bien mappé dans l'ensemble les patterns sont différent, le rythme est régulier, bref, c'est juste une map ou on sait ce que fera -Umi- (/run). Je vois mal -umi- jouer ça XD

[Distant]

00:09:333 : Je verrais bien un whistle sur ce slider mais pas trop fort. Ici je n'ai mis de whistle que sur les sons aigus de la map donc je n'en mettrais pas ici.
00:32:333 : (Hitler), C'est très le stack pas stack. Ca n'apparait pas lorsqu'on joue la map donc c'est pas un problème.
00:51:166 : Ca peut être surprenant un changement de vitesse, et je l'ai senti sur le slider, ça peut poser des problèmes de frustations à certaines personnes. Imo osef, mais garde ça en note si d'autres personnes te le font remarquer. Ouais, mais retrospectivement mieux vaut le changer c'est vrai.
00:58:666 : Il a été un peu fait à la va-vite j'ai l’impression! :< Essaie d’augmenter l'angle formé par le slider. (wéwé). fixed.... je crois.
01:00:666 : Wéwé le stack. Encore une fois ça n'apparait pas lorsqu'on joue la map.

R.A.S Le rythme rend la map un peu bizzare à entendre. Comment ça à entendre? Tu veux dire à play?

[Cerise blossom's chaos]

01:09:499 : Ok faut départager avec un spinner mais la.. C'est trop long! :<< (J'te l'aurais bien réduit de moitié moi). C'est moi qui ai oublié de l'enlevé, woops.

[(Not even) Close]

00:30:999 : Ctrl + g? J'ai amélioré le pattern.
00:43:499 : ^ Nope.

J'aime bien cette map, ca manque un peu de jump caché, mais c'est sympas quand même. Je sais même pas ce que c'est un jump caché XD

[Chaos]

00:09:333 : Chuis pas sur que ton stream soit farpaitement symétrique. Fixed

Pas grand chose à signaler, chuis une quiche dans le mode d'insane/extra (et ça se sent sur mes diffs (/run)).

[Imminent]

00:40:499 : Les stackeurs de l'extrême! \o/ MAis ça ne se voit pas lorsqu'on joue!
01:04:333 : T'as déja vu ce genre de pattern sur mes diff, essaie d'inverser le 3e slider avec le 2nd. Random jump gratuit. Why not.

Wew!


Bref gl hl pour le rank!

yurunneram wrote:

faraway

00:10:666 (1) - try not to triple Why? I know triple can be disturbing while playing but not here because it's an easy difficulty so players have time to see the triple. Besides, the same note is repeated 4 times here so it perfectly fits the music.

00:38:667 (3,4) - how about slider first then circle? I changed the rythm differently.

00:53:833 (1) - Um... extend the tail till the white mark? But that wouldn't fit the music.

01:03:999 (1) - Same as the first

Distant

00:01:833 - Add note? I agree that there is a note here in the music, but in normal diff i can't really put a note each time there is one in the music so i only follow some of the note and this one isn't one that i follow.

00:39:833 (4) - I don't think whistle should be here, unless you do I reworked the whistle pattern

dats bout it

Close

00:13:999 (6) - Wana flip the head and tail to make a jump? DD That would make an awkward flow imo.

There are some awkward blanks where the whistle suddenly mutes unexpectedly. But whatever I reworked the whistle pattern. Basically they fits the high pitched instruments.

This is as far as I can mod ^^")7 gomen~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Aldwych wrote:

Koukou chirac & cerise!

[Cerise blossom's chaos]

00:13:999 : C'te jump + un ralentissement pendant le tout le stream... Autant régulariser le tout.
00:52:166 : Alors ici c'est pas fluide + une note de stream caché, pas sur que ca passe à l'unanimité.
je changerais si le méchant BAT me le dit !

C'est fort de café ta map! je suis horrible

Thanks anyway !

1. Consider adding Eyes of Flame Remix to the tags, it may be useful because this song is remixed and some players may look for it!
2. Move Cave Story to tags? You can't hear this song in the game, so I'd remove this from the source and move it to the tags. Anyway, I'm not familiar with the game, so it's up to you!
   
   Okay, that' sit for the [General] part. Hope I didn't miss anything important!

1. Whooaa, man, your rhythm is pretty changeable, so I'd consider reducing the OD by one tick. It'll make your mapset better-balanced and it will help beginners to understand your rhythm. You know, beginners are unable to feel the rhythm changes, so we should be gentle with them!
2. 00:10:666 (1) - there's two ways to read this lider, you know, beginners may mistakenly hit its tail. Why? Just because the tail of the slider is so close and your pattern flows this way.
   
   Take a look at the screenshots, they may help you!

   
   
   As you can see on the screenshot, beginners may read your flow in a wrong way. Try to test it and you see that your cursor "flows" to the tail of (1), and it's kinda bad for beginners. Try yourbest to re-arrange pattern here! Remember, that beginners are our future and take care of them! ♥
3. 00:10:666 (1) - well, this suggestion is based on my opinion and there's no strict rule that you should avoid such things, however, I strongly recommend you to fix it somehow - the second reverse on this slider appears too late, players have no time to see it and what's more they don't even expect the second repeat there! It appears a little bit random and really confusing for beginners, so I'm asking you to fix it as soon as possible!
4. 00:13:333 (1,2) - whoops, the tail of the slider is too close. Basically, it's kinda similar to 00:10:666 (1) because players may hit the wrong part of the slider. So, yeah, just try to make it a bit more intuitive/readable.
   Note: having troubles? Need an example? Sure thing, here's an example for you!
   Note2: Oh, and don't forget that players will probably have the same problems with many similar patterns like 00:17:333 (3,4) - , so I'm asking you to check the diff yourself and fix ALL similar mistakes. Yes, it may take some time but it'll improve your map greatly!
5. 00:17:999 (4,1) - 00:20:665 (4,1) - whoops, there're some more flow mistakes. I know, it's quite hard to discuss flow because opinions are different, but I think that it worths your attention - so, yeah, your flow is kinda hard to understand. It goes smooth and soft from (1) to (2), from (2) to (3) but the flow between (4) and (1) is kinda broken, moves of the cursor are "rude" and "unpleasant" to me, so I strongly recommend you to re-arrange this pattern!
6. 00:23:999 (3,4) - I've already mentioned the same mistakes a couple of times, you're a smart person, so I won't complain about such things again and again, you'll fix it if you want to!
7. 00:27:999 (3) - call me nazi, but I should say it, this stack isn't really enjoyable and it looks out of your regular pattern. What to do? Try to do a blanket! Blankets always work and they look awesome! Here's an example of a blanket slider you can do to make this pattern prettier. It makes your diff more understandable and cute, but it'll take some time to re-arrange your flow. Do you want it? It's up to you!p
8. 00:42:666 (1) - ouch, this overlap of two sliderticks (00:43:666 - 00:43:999) looks really messy to me and I'm sure that you can find a better shape for the slider. I've played some of your maps and as far as I remember you're pretty awesome, so show us your creativity and mapping skills! ♥
9. 00:47:333 - well, personally I would consider mapping this beat. Why? Because the sound here is loud and it seems strange that you ignore it. Don't worry, it's totally okay to place a beats BEFORE the spinner, players will have enough time to catch the spinner even if you place a circle on 00:47:333
10. 01:03:999 (1) - whoops, I've already mentioned what to do with such sliders and I hope you've got my idea. If so, please fix this one, too!
11. 01:05:332 (2,1,2) - personally, I'm not a fan of such stacks. This is the easiest diff and I expect it to be simple and understandable. As for this pattern, it may be a trouble for beginners, so I'd strongly recommend you to look for another pattern! It's not like I'm forcing you, but still..
    
    The diff itself isn't perfect and it has some things to improve, but you did a good job!

1. Oh my god, what an awesome rhythm! I'd like to see a bit more 1/2 beats during the first kiai but maybe it's just me, don't really mind it. However, this awesome rhythm doesn't fit with HP3 at all, try HP4 to make it more balanced and challenging for players!
2. 00:20:666 (2,1) - as I've already mentioned, sometimes your flow "breaks" and it's hard to "catch" the next object. It happens here and a few more times. Feel free to contact me if you'll have troubles fixing it
3. 00:46:666 (2,1) - kinda unsure about this overlap. Yes, it's readable and visible. Yes, it's pretty easy, but it looks a bit messy and doesn't fit with your regular pattern. It was kinda "unexpected", so I'd try to avoid this overlap! This is just an opinion, tho! Or maybe, it'd be better to replace this part with a spinner as it's done on the [Easy], think about it! :3
   
   Oh, wow, that diff was cool! Good job with this one! ♥

1. Awww, CS3 makes it kinda too "huge" and maybe "messy", I'd try to use CS4 here. It'll make all patterns neater + it's more common for [Hard] diffs.
2. 00:05:166 (7,8,1) - well, to be honest, that's too hard. You have like 2 Insane diff and you use 1/4 triplets even here? No way! That's too hard, at least for THIS diff, please, try to avoid any 1/4 patterns if it's possible. So, players will get well-balanced spread with an enjoyable dff for everyone!
3. 00:18:332 (5,1) - I have nothing against jumps but those are clearly overused. The DS is too huge and jump simply breaks the flow, it's impossible to play because jumps are OUT of this diff. No one expects them and they're too hard here. Please, I'm begging you, keep the DS under x2.0!
   Note: ouch, 00:28:666 (3,4) - that was eally weird. I didn't expect THIS crazy jumps here, c'mon, this is just a [Hard] diff!
4. 00:44:499 (2,3) - well, these jumps are okay, but they're unexpected because of music. You know, they don't fit here because music doesn't feel jumpy here.
   Note: same with the 00:14:666 (3,4,5) - jump here. You know, it's playable and readable, but it's out of the songs's rhythm, so during the testplay I felt like this was wrong. :<
5. 00:57:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - previously you didn't use anything like this, so this was kinda too hard. clicking 8 notes in a row on such BPM is pretty hard, but I kinda liked it. So, I'd consider replacing a couple of them with a slider, but feel free to keep it if you want to.
   
   This was cool, except for the jumps it's a nice diff. Well-mapped, interesting and a little bit messy. I still think that CS4 is the best choice for this diff, sorry.

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey, sorry about the delay. My delay was still worse XD

[General]

1. Consider adding Eyes of Flame Remix to the tags, it may be useful because this song is remixed and some players may look for it! Yeah, good idea!
2. Move Cave Story to tags? You can't hear this song in the game, so I'd remove this from the source and move it to the tags. Anyway, I'm not familiar with the game, so it's up to you! A lot of map are like this. Even if they are a remix they still put the source of the original song in "source" like: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/38316 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/55836 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110650 and a lot other don't so i guess there is no official rule about it. So, i'll keep it like this because i prefer this way
   
   Okay, that' sit for the [General] part. Hope I didn't miss anything important!

[Faraway Chaos]

1. Whooaa, man, your rhythm is pretty changeable, so I'd consider reducing the OD by one tick. It'll make your mapset better-balanced and it will help beginners to understand your rhythm. You know, beginners are unable to feel the rhythm changes, so we should be gentle with them! I agree, fixed.
2. 00:10:666 (1) - there's two ways to read this lider, you know, beginners may mistakenly hit its tail. Why? Just because the tail of the slider is so close and your pattern flows this way.
   
   As you can see on the screenshot, beginners may read your flow in a wrong way. Try to test it and you see that your cursor "flows" to the tail of (1), and it's kinda bad for beginners. Try yourbest to re-arrange pattern here! Remember, that beginners are our future and take care of them! ? Ok, fixed by changed the rythm (c.f. next suggestion)
3. 00:10:666 (1) - well, this suggestion is based on my opinion and there's no strict rule that you should avoid such things, however, I strongly recommend you to fix it somehow - the second reverse on this slider appears too late, players have no time to see it and what's more they don't even expect the second repeat there! It appears a little bit random and really confusing for beginners, so I'm asking you to fix it as soon as possible! Fixed, turned into 2 sliders which also allow me to fix the previous issue.
4. 00:13:333 (1,2) - whoops, the tail of the slider is too close. Basically, it's kinda similar to 00:10:666 (1) because players may hit the wrong part of the slider. So, yeah, just try to make it a bit more intuitive/readable.
   Note: having troubles? Need an example? Sure thing, here's an example for you! I agree when it's a one beat gap but when it's a 2 beats gap i think they have time to understand what's happening, even at 180 BPM. The AR is still low and the approach circle appear chile they are playing the slider so they have time to see the distinction between the two end of the sliders which are pretty far apart!
   Note2: Oh, and don't forget that players will probably have the same problems with many similar patterns like 00:17:333 (3,4) - , so I'm asking you to check the diff yourself and fix ALL similar mistakes. Yes, it may take some time but it'll improve your map greatly! I'm currently checking the map and i'll make a LOT of changes. I think i'll manage to fix all issue when there is a possible flow confusion but only for 1-beat gap. I'll let the 2-beat gaps unchanged.
5. 00:17:999 (4,1) - 00:20:665 (4,1) - whoops, there're some more flow mistakes. I know, it's quite hard to discuss flow because opinions are different, but I think that it worths your attention - so, yeah, your flow is kinda hard to understand. It goes smooth and soft from (1) to (2), from (2) to (3) but the flow between (4) and (1) is kinda broken, moves of the cursor are "rude" and "unpleasant" to me, so I strongly recommend you to re-arrange this pattern! Fixed
6. 00:23:999 (3,4) - I've already mentioned the same mistakes a couple of times, you're a smart person, so I won't complain about such things again and again, you'll fix it if you want to! 2 beat-gap so no changes.
7. 00:27:999 (3) - call me nazi, but I should say it, this stack isn't really enjoyable and it looks out of your regular pattern. What to do? Try to do a blanket! Blankets always work and they look awesome! Here's an example of a blanket slider you can do to make this pattern prettier. It makes your diff more understandable and cute, but it'll take some time to re-arrange your flow. Do you want it? It's up to you!p My diff is already filled with so much blanket XD Anyway, i don't reallt find any problem with the pattern. And the stack isn't really one because the two notes "stacked" are 4 beat apart. Besides, i don't really think this is "out of my regular pattern". I like to stack a lot even if i'm limited in Easy diff...
8. 00:42:666 (1) - ouch, this overlap of two sliderticks (00:43:666 - 00:43:999) looks really messy to me and I'm sure that you can find a better shape for the slider. I've played some of your maps and as far as I remember you're pretty awesome, so show us your creativity and mapping skills! ? Ok, i tried another shape. This is "old-rezoons-mapping and yeah, at the time i liked it but with some recul i agree with you. Though, In this case this is more "slider art" than "mapping skill" but i'm glad someone play one of my map.... There aren't a lot XD
9. 00:47:333 - well, personally I would consider mapping this beat. Why? Because the sound here is loud and it seems strange that you ignore it. Don't worry, it's totally okay to place a beats BEFORE the spinner, players will have enough time to catch the spinner even if you place a circle on 00:47:333 Yup, fixed. It was just because i wanted to follow only one instrument at the time (the one followed by the sliders and spinner) and not because i was afraid of the gap between notes and spinner, though.
10. 01:03:999 (1) - whoops, I've already mentioned what to do with such sliders and I hope you've got my idea. If so, please fix this one, too! Fixed
11. 01:05:332 (2,1,2) - personally, I'm not a fan of such stacks. This is the easiest diff and I expect it to be simple and understandable. As for this pattern, it may be a trouble for beginners, so I'd strongly recommend you to look for another pattern! It's not like I'm forcing you, but still..
    But i LIKE stacks....... Ok, i changed the pattern.
    
    The diff itself isn't perfect and it has some things to improve, but you did a good job!

[Distant Chaos]

1. Oh my god, what an awesome rhythm! I'd like to see a bit more 1/2 beats during the first kiai but maybe it's just me, don't really mind it. However, this awesome rhythm doesn't fit with HP3 at all, try HP4 to make it more balanced and challenging for players! I agrre, fixed. I also changed the rythm of the begining of the kiai adding more 1/2 ^^
2. 00:20:666 (2,1) - as I've already mentioned, sometimes your flow "breaks" and it's hard to "catch" the next object. It happens here and a few more times. Feel free to contact me if you'll have troubles fixing it This flow has been fixed by the changing of pattern due to the adding of 1/2. But i don't totally agree about the flow because when it's the end of a slider you can always leave the slider before the end so something like this can be played as a smooth curve.
3. 00:46:666 (2,1) - kinda unsure about this overlap. Yes, it's readable and visible. Yes, it's pretty easy, but it looks a bit messy and doesn't fit with your regular pattern. It was kinda "unexpected", so I'd try to avoid this overlap! This is just an opinion, tho! Or maybe, it'd be better to replace this part with a spinner as it's done on the [Easy], think about it! :3 I don't find it messy. I actually find it quite pretty so i'll keep it.
   
   Oh, wow, that diff was cool! Good job with this one! ?Thanks ^^

[Close Chaos]

1. Awww, CS3 makes it kinda too "huge" and maybe "messy", I'd try to use CS4 here. It'll make all patterns neater + it's more common for [Hard] diffs. I already ranked CS3 hard but this one... yeah, the story of why i chose CS3 is more complicated and i kinda forgot it but then you mentionned it and it made me remember everything! Basically, i was an idiot when i mapped this so yeah, CS4 FTW.
2. 00:05:166 (7,8,1) - well, to be honest, that's too hard. You have like 2 Insane diff and you use 1/4 triplets even here? No way! That's too hard, at least for THIS diff, please, try to avoid any 1/4 patterns if it's possible. So, players will get well-balanced spread with an enjoyable dff for everyone! I really hesitated about these but i'll trust you. Removed! (as well as the other note in 1/4 in the diff)
3. 00:18:332 (5,1) - I have nothing against jumps but those are clearly overused. The DS is too huge and jump simply breaks the flow, it's impossible to play because jumps are OUT of this diff. No one expects them and they're too hard here. Please, I'm begging you, keep the DS under x2.0!
   Note: ouch, 00:28:666 (3,4) - that was eally weird. I didn't expect THIS crazy jumps here, c'mon, this is just a [Hard] diff! As long as it matches the song i don't consider it that surprising. Besides it's jump slider which is way easier than jump between notes. But anyway i changed the pattern reducing the jump and i rechecked all diff making changes in other big jumps.
4. 00:44:499 (2,3) - well, these jumps are okay, but they're unexpected because of music. You know, they don't fit here because music doesn't feel jumpy here.
   Note: same with the 00:14:666 (3,4,5) - jump here. You know, it's playable and readable, but it's out of the songs's rhythm, so during the testplay I felt like this was wrong. :< Yeah, i corrected these two and others as well as i mentionned before.
5. 00:57:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - previously you didn't use anything like this, so this was kinda too hard. clicking 8 notes in a row on such BPM is pretty hard, but I kinda liked it. So, I'd consider replacing a couple of them with a slider, but feel free to keep it if you want to. I also used this pattern at 00:04:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) where the music is the same and i did it on purpose because i think it maches the music. Yeah, the pattern is a little bit hard but i think the song justify this extra difficulty ^^
   
   This was cool, except for the jumps it's a nice diff. Well-mapped, interesting and a little bit messy. I still think that CS4 is the best choice for this diff, sorry. Well, thank you. I fixed some of the jump and the CS. And you don't have to apologise for anything XD

Will do the rest of the diffs soon, I hope

-Bakari- wrote:

I'm really sorry about this man, I just can't finish the mod. Anyway, I wish you best of luck.

Hollow Wings wrote:

from ur req

Imminent Chaos

1. 00:39:333 (3,4) - stackactually, even if you see it in the editor the non-stack won't be seen while playing but yeah, i can still stack them.
2. 00:39:333 (3,5) - stack This time i won't do it because it's way harder, it's impossible to see it while playing (even in the editor it's difficult to see) and i would have to change the blanket.
3. 00:51:166 (2,3,4) - nc all of them for more than 1 repeating sliders, otherwise it may confuse some players just like me Actually the NC are here to show the difference of number of reverse. The four first sliders have 4 reverses and the last one has 8. That's why there is a combo for the first four and one for the last one. If i put a NC everywhere there will be a confusion with the last slider that i prefer avoiding.
4. 00:57:499 (1,2) - ctrl+g for better ds Good idea ^^
5. lol what? i didn't find so much issues... that's what the for-rank map looks like? XD Actually this diff has some consistency issues that will force me to remap some part. But other than that, yeah like i said my map aren't very original so there are less mistakes but less originality too...

Chaos

1. 00:05:166 (7,1) - move nc for better readble composing Fixed
2. 00:21:333 (9,1) - ^, actually nc in maps like this diff should be better to set at white line, thou there're lots of stream. it helps players reading patterns even in a very important state. i wish u consider this 0,0 I agree. Fixed
3. 00:23:166 (9,1) - ^, if there's pattern like this: slider goes over the long white line, mostly it's better to set nc on the slider rather than objs follow it. I prefer the NC where it is now because it shows better the jumps.
4. 00:06:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g? too close between note 1 and the slider before here, while there're much more big jump before and after them even between streams Fixed but in another way.
5. 00:41:332 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
6. 00:47:916 (5,3) - stack perfect Fixed
7. except the nc style personally didn't work well to me, all stuff is well done enough, playble and funny. alright, shoot u 2 stars for this diff lol Well, i rechecked all the NC and made some changes. And thank you very muc for the 2 stars! I completly forgot to throw you one for the ground color is yellow but now that it's bubble it's a little bit useless..... So, I'll trow you two for your next map ^^

Close Chaos

1. alright... no stream in this diff... then it's really fine to me D:

Distant Chaos

1. 00:14:333 (1,2) - blanket perfect. sv is low and player will look at this part for a long time, they'll find this not perfect when a perfect one exist nearby yeah, fixed ^^
2. 00:19:666 (2) - stack perfect. similiar reason as above Fixed
3. lol i must say, i rarely do nazi mod, but only it should be done.But, i like nazi mod ^^

Faraway Chaos

1. 00:31:999 (1,3) - blanket perfect Fixed
2. others r fine

i used to overlooked this map but didn't mod it... coz it's quite good enough to me that time D:
sry for the poor mod, i can't do that well like u lolol Well, i'm not really an exemple to follow XD anyway, your mod still helped me ^^
good luck :3

Hollow Wings wrote:

from ur req

Cherry Blossom's Chaos

1. lots of combo counts are over 10, maybe try to add nc for redusing them and better readble composing => Fixed some combos.
2. some parts can be perfect, like 00:27:833 (8,1,2,3,4) - using regular pentagon here, and more, u can fix by urself => fixed some.
3. 00:35:166 why miss this beat? afraid of too big jumping? there's no problem to most players playing all jumping in this diff imo, so just add obj here => very hard jump imo, not changed.
4. any way, looks good, but also very difficult D:

i used to overlooked this map but didn't mod it... coz it's quite good enough to me that time D:
sry for the poor mod, i can't do that well like u lolol
good luck :3

ty for modding
Update :

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happy623 wrote:

;w; so many stars, I hope my mod is helpful Don't worry, stars doesn't mean anything XD

General

1. clean :3

Faraway Chaos

1. 00:33:999 (4) - nazi stuff here, I guess you should make this slider some grids down, in order to prevent from touching the life bar, it will be neater if you do this imo I tried to fix it the best i could. Well, it's better now... i think.
2. 00:55:999 (1) - how about a better blanket? Dont forget to copy-paste 00:57:499 (3) - if you do this You're right! Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:07:999 (2) - remove the whistle at the head maybe? It feels a bit weird because you didnt add any whistles after the kiai Yeah. Fixed.
4. nice sliders shape Thanks ^^

Distant Chaos

1. 00:47:999 (1) - I think you missed a finish here, there is a finish sound in the music so I guess it will be fit I actually missed it in a lot of diff! Thanks ^^

Close Chaos

1. 00:28:999 (4,1) - I think this blanket can be improved ;w; Fixed
2. 00:34:499 (5) - well, something personal, how about putting this with stacking 00:34:166 (4) tail or 00:34:666 (1) head? Because the music is a sudden pause, so I guess it will be fit with stacking It just like what you did in 00:39:833 (5,1) - . Anyway it just my opinion, feel free to refuse it Yeah, good idea ^^
3. 00:44:166 (1,2,3,4) - how about trying the following rhythm if you dont mind : I understand your point but i prefer keeping mine. It's not a distrubing rythm since it follows a peculiar intrument and allow player to take a short break even if i know that i miss some powerful notes.
   
   If you dont want to put too much notes, I suggest you try the following rhythm, by just adding 1 note between (3) and (4), Current one feels a little bit empty w/out that note imo
   
4. 00:47:999 (1) - finish at the head? To consist w/ what you did in 00:42:666 (1) - Fixed

Imminent Chaos

1. 00:44:166 (1,2,3,4) - As I mentioned in "Close Chaos" diff Nope!
2. 00:49:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
3. nice diff It's the diff i personally don't like but you're not the first one saying me this so thanks ^^

Chaos

1. 00:04:833 (5,6) - if I were you, I would have swap them, It is because the music is going down here, I guess it would be better if you try to put (5) below (6) , just like you placed the notes in 00:57:999 (4,5,6) - They became pretty fun imo I'm not really sure if i understood what you wanted to say but i changed the pattern. The flow was weird anyway!

I think thats all I can find, hope those can help!
Best wishes!

happy623 wrote:

;w; so many stars, I hope my mod is helpful

General

1. clean :3

Cherry Blossom's Chaos

1. 00:17:166 (5,1,2,3,4) - look, I understand what are you trying to do, but the stacking seems not to be good enough. I suggest you restack everything with the strong drum hit for the jumps, thats mean stacking 00:17:333 (1,2) and 00:17:666 (3,4) - , It should be better imo
2. 00:20:000 (1,2,3,4) - just like what I mentioned above
   changed.
   
3. 00:22:666 (1,2) - according to the music, they should be a small stream, you are trying to undermap here, however you placed streams in 00:26:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - and also 00:29:333 (1,2,3) - , so it became a little bit inconsistent. So it is would be better if you change them into a little stream
   => i prefer to keep the pattern, it's just me or not but i don't hear 1/4 notes, i didn't undermapped here i just follow the song.
4. 00:30:833 (2) - the strong beat is at the white tick, in order to make it more fit with the music, I would try to change 00:30:666 (1) - into a slider, and end it at 00:30:833 -, Then, change the slider 00:30:833 (2) - into a note and place in 00:30:999 -, I hope you like it xD if you dont understand what I mean, here is the final step pic for you to follow :
   

Changed.

I think thats all I can find, hope those can help!
Best wishes!

Thanks for modding !!
Update (i fixed hitsounds too (OMFG RANDOM HITSOUNDING)) :

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 0
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TitleUnicode:Imminent Chaos
Artist:LEAF XCEED Music Division
ArtistUnicode:LEAF XCEED Music Division
Creator:rezoons
Version:Cherry Blossom's Chaos
Source:Cave Story
Tags:Cherry Blossom Eyes of Flame Remix
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418,306,68165,2,0,L|376:328,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,216,68333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,136,68499,2,0,P|336:104|320:56,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,248,68833,2,0,P|176:280|192:328,1,95,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,328,69166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,69333,5,4,0:0:0:0:

rezoons wrote:

<3

Par contre Cherry a voulu changé le nom de sa diff (Quel boulet ce Cherry!) donc tu pourras rebubble stp? xD

Cherry Blossom wrote:

je suis un boulet qui roule et qui roule sur la pente glissante et qui finira par se taper un arbre et finira sa course dans la lac !!!
Je sais.. /me runs

Gabe wrote:

sale boulette de viande moisi.

-Bakari- wrote:

Hope to see it ranked it soon, your map deserves it.

Oh hey, I just want to get 3800 posts on the forum.

Giralda wrote:

gogogogo!

Roxas wrote:

This map is nice, congrats!

1. Might want to write down in description which is harder, Extreme or Extra. I honestly have no clue.
2. A few of these points are more or less just personal opinion, so feel free to disagree with me on those.

1. 00:08:833 (8,9) - I don't really feel this 3/4 slider + note here. They feel much better as just a 1/1 slider imo, like 00:03:499 (7) - . If you want to emphasis the drums, then a 1/2 slider works better as there's a drumbeat at 00:08:999 -
2. 01:02:166 (8,9) - Same as above^.

1. 00:11:666 (4,5,6) - These notes feel a bit close, and don't have as much power as 00:10:666 (1,2,3) - . Some kind of slightly more jumpy pattern would feel better imo.
2. 00:42:666 (1) - Well, I prefer the soft finish tbh, but you use a normal finish in every other diff here, so decide on either soft or normal I guess
3. 00:47:999 (1) - ^
4. 00:46:999 (1,2,3) - Because of the spacing at 00:45:833 (2,3,4) - , these notes feel a bit too close. Consider adding some jump pattern here? Like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1265384 or whatever else you can come up with.
5. 01:05:000 (4,5,6) - More or less the same as the first point.

1. OD +1. OD6 and AR9 is kinda... blah. (greatest explanation). OD7 also makes a more balanced spread, as Hard is OD6 and Extreme/Extra are OD8.
2. 00:09:499 (1) - The drums and the guitar begins at 00:09:333 - , so starting the repeater there feels better.
3. 00:12:166 (2,3) - Ctrl+g? I kinda like the jump to 00:12:499 (4) - with the higher pitched guitar.
4. 00:22:833 (7,8) - Ctrl+g here as well, as the pitch changes from (6)->(7)->(8), so it's a bit awkward with the (6,7) stack
5. 00:29:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Huh, why did you change the rhythm here? Similar rhythm as 00:26:999 (2,3) - works better for me, and you avoid skipping the drum and guitar.
6. 00:42:666 (2) - Soft finish as in Extreme. (or normal finish on extreme).
7. 00:48:000 (2) - ^
8. 00:52:666 (1) - I'd actually like if you split this into two repeaters, with the 2nd one starting at 00:52:999 - And possibly a note at 00:53:333 - as jonathanlfj said.
9. 01:04:999 (1,2) - Swap NC.
10. 01:08:499 (6) - Move to 277;70 for similar blanket as 01:07:999 (5) - .

1. 00:20:999 (1) - I don't really see a reason for this NC, so remove it.
2. 00:42:666 (1) - Soft finish (Oooor change Extreme to have normal finish. Whichever you prefer.)
3. 00:47:999 (1) - ^
4. 00:55:833 (5,1) - I really don't like the sudden direction change and jump here. Will probably need some rearranging of notes, but you should keep it consistent with 01:01:333 (1) - (and the same parts at the beginning of the song).

1. I'd prefer swapping to OD4, HP3, as I like the accuracy aspect of everything. Feel free to keep it as you have it though.
2. 00:16:999 (2) - While stacking isn't really that much of an issue for Normal, the beat at 00:16:999 - sounds pretty weak, so it's harder for a new player to pinpoint when to actually hit this note. I would prefer to have this stacked on 00:17:333 (1) - instead.
3. 00:19:666 (2) - Same as above, stacked on 00:19:999 (1) - makes it easier to read and generally just feels better to play for me.
4. 00:47:999 (1) - Soft finish (or normal finish on extreme).

1. Same as Normal, I'd prefer HP1, OD2 (or even HP2, OD3).
2. 00:02:666 (1) - This and in general these 5/2 sliders, because of the missing slidertick: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1265547 and low SV, feels pretty awkward to play (like really I almost let go too early a few times because I thought they were 2/1 orz.) There's not much you can do with that though, except fixing those sliders, which is probably pretty tedious, and I'm not sure if it's worth the effort (I mean, it could be just me anyway). I do prefer those patterns where you use 1/1's though, like 00:00:000 (1,2,3) - or 00:53:666 (1,2,3) - .
3. 00:42:666 (1) - Soft finish (or normal finish on Extreme).