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Lissette
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lizbeth
Normal doesnt have hitsounds yet... i ll added soon.. ;)
ACC
great design!
notes like drawing a pattern :)

but i think “hard” like “insane”

00:05:545(3) i think it is better continue to 00:05:914
00:09:479(3) the same,continue to 00:09:848
02:08:486(8) put it to the centre?

use slider to make a big circle is not necessary to make it so complex
just draw a regular polygon

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my english is poor
maybe something wrong in my sentences, i hope it can not make you confuse :?





Topic Starter
Lissette
thanx Hillman_Q n.n

fixed all that :)
Topic Starter
Lissette
Easy added n.n
no hitsounds yet

EDIT: Lizbeth's normal hitsounds added
EDIT: Easy hitsounds added
blissfulyoshi
mostly Light modding:

BPM:122

Easy:
00:13:41 (3) - make a vertical refleciton of the green 3
00:36:03 (3) - new combo
00:55:70 (2) - stack on top of white 3
00:59:63 (2) - " "

Normal:
00:45:87 (4) - I would probably align this with 2 to continue the pattern
There seems to be quite a few alignment errors in the map such as:
00:59:63 (4) -
01:02:09 (1) -
please fix these
01:52:74 (3,4) - it feels weird for these not to be aligned with the start of 1 and 2

Hard:
I don;t like your clap spams at places such as:
01:23:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:45:61 (6,7,8,9,10) -
some of those feel excessive.
I like the patterns in this difficulty though

Nice map. Star.
tieff
Random mod.

[Easy]
00:12:43 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:32:59 (2,1) - ^
01:25:21 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:28:16 (5) - New combo.

[Lizabeth's Normal]
00:05:05 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:08:49 (5,1) - ^
00:19:31 (3) - Make vertical reflection of the 00:16:36 (1).
01:30:12 (4,1) - Spacing.
01:33:81 (6) - Whisle?
01:35:04 (1,2,3) - Jump on normal?
01:46:84 (1,1,2,3,4) - Too large spacing for normal.
01:55:20 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:06:02 (9) - New combo.

[Hard]
I love your jumps and hitsounds.
00:28:16 (7) - New combo.
00:59:63 (4,5) - Spacing.
01:36:76 (3,4,5) - ^

Star+ Kudosu star.
Topic Starter
Lissette
thnx for the help and the stars blissfulyoshi and tieff :)

tieff wrote:

00:59:63 (4,5) - Spacing.this is a jump, but i couldn't change it without ruin the shape, any idea?
01:36:76 (3,4,5) - ^.is spaced with the Distance Snap
nullPointLOL
Thanks! I forgot to post in here.
Pretty nice map, a bit hard though >.< haha. But that's great.
Star :)

edit: I forgot also the star lol
Topic Starter
Lissette

nullPointLOL wrote:

Thanks! I forgot to post in here.
Pretty nice map, a bit hard though >.< haha. But that's great.
Star :)

edit: I forgot also the star lol
Thanks a lot for the star, and glad you like it!!

cya!
tsuka
I like this song too ^ ^


hard diffi:
01:28:660(6), put it back 1/4 beat
02:03:005(10) make slider start on 02:02:964
02:05:955(10) put it forward 1/6 beat on white tick
02:06:283 add a circle
02:07:021(2,3,4)remove them and add new circle in 02:07:267
02:20:054 add a circle

I think you haven't finish the hard diffi ?

star ^ ^
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thnx for the help :), fixed

and the hard diff is finished n_nU

EDIT: I still must fix some hitsounds and timing section....
gdeath
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Topic Starter
Lissette
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mafiamaster
Easy~
00:47:59 (1) - Suggestion: Have this spinner start at 00:47:84 (Don't forget to shorten~)
01:01:61 (4) - Maybe move this right in the middle of the map.

Hard~
00:44:89 (9) - New combo?
00:45:87 (14) - ^

Imo, if things were snapped on the grid map, everything would be stacked perfectly and much more prettier.
Examples:
02:04:56 (1,2,3,4,5)
02:05:30 (6,7,8)
It's ok, don't worry about it~


Great map!
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks for modding and for the star!! :) Fixed all that.... ;)
Andrea
[Timing]

Fine.

[Easy]

01:06:52 (1) - Too hard this spinner for easy ?
02:12:18 (2) - Finish.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

Too much finish on start of the map...

00:39:97 (1,2,3,4) - Considered jumps for a normal.

[Hard]

Lower volume at start, or claps are really powerful.

00:06:03 (4,5) - Align perfectly, looks better.
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is a "nono" for me...

Like it. Star'd
Topic Starter
Lissette

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

01:06:52 (1) - Too hard this spinner for easy ?
02:12:18 (2) - Finish.
Fixed

[Hard]

Lower volume at start, or claps are really powerful.Fixed

00:06:03 (4,5) - Align perfectly, looks better.Fixed
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is a "nono" for me...T.T to bad

Like it. Star'd
thanks for your time and for the star:)
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lizbeth

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Lizbeth's Normal]

Too much finish on start of the map... remove some of those

00:39:97 (1,2,3,4) - Considered jumps for a normal. fixed
thanks for modding:)

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:90 (2,3) - This part feels weird.. is true, changed that part a bit
00:13:90 (x) - Maybe a circle here instead? done
00:14:39 (3) - Slider moves to here and add a repeat nice, thanks, sound a lot better
01:03:08 (2) - Move timing section(s) here to the left for people who use a different offset or click early I thought this doesnt apply for end of slider, some to confirm this plz
02:06:03 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
02:12:18 (7) - ^ ^
02:13:41 (1) - ^ ^
thanks for ur time :)
minyeob
[Easy]
1:08:74(Break)-> Where is break?! orz

Anyways, your beatmap is great!
Combo-Starred.
Topic Starter
Lissette

minyeob wrote:

[Easy]
1:08:74(Break)-> Where is break?! orz Fixed

Anyways, your beatmap is great!
Combo-Starred.
Glad you like it!!
Thanks for the stars :D
Lesjuh
Easy:
01:06:52 (1) - end this spinner @ 01:07:513. This MIGHT be too hard for Easy since in goes a little fast. Use a slider instead if so. Don't forget to reinsert the break after it.

Lizbeth's Normal:
01:50:79 (1) - Copy this slider
01:52:75 (3) - Paste and replace it for this one. The spacing felt weird here.
01:56:69 (4) - Move 1 to the right to align.

Hard:
Turn op the overall diff to make it more readable. I had problems with the jumps because of this n_n
01:06:52 (6) - New combo, Reason: different spacing + stack
02:08:00 (6) - New combo for more readability.
02:21:28 (6) - New combo ^^

That's about it. Have dis star :D
DoctorToxn
Kind of late to ask, but could I map a difficulty for this song? BTW, starred
Topic Starter
Lissette

DoctorToxn wrote:

Kind of late to ask, but could I map a difficulty for this song? BTW, starred
Sure Doc, why not :)

and thanks for starrin'!! :D
DoctorToxn
Here is my first attempt at my difficulty. Comments are appreciated. Just unzip the folder and dump the contents in the song folder. The images go in there too. Do with it whatever you want. You are under no obligation to add it to your other maps if you do not want to. I just had fun mapping it.

Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi Toxn Difficulty.zip
Topic Starter
Lissette

DoctorToxn wrote:

Here is my first attempt at my difficulty. Comments are appreciated. Just unzip the folder and dump the contents in the song folder. The images go in there too. Do with it whatever you want. You are under no obligation to add it to your other maps if you do not want to. I just had fun mapping it.
Hi, nice diff!! :), but I have a problem, I can't see the SB, and I dropped the images too in to the song folder, can you tell me, what should I do?, I don't understand too much of SB stuff, n_nU, help plz.....

EDIT: Btw, how about rename your difficulty as Toxn Special ?? :P
DoctorToxn
Just uploaded with the the name change. You need to copy the actual folder labeled "Doc_Images" into the song folder. It needs to look like this:


Download: Toxn Special FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi.zip
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks, fixed n_n
Takuma
Toxn Special:
00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo.

The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!
DoctorToxn

Takuma wrote:

Toxn Special:
00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me. I actually agree here. I removed this type of spacing that early in the map.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo. This looks like a part I overlooked. :P

The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!
Uploaded changes.

Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi (Lissette) [Toxn Special].osu
Topic Starter
Lissette

DoctorToxn wrote:

Takuma wrote:

Toxn Special:
00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me. I actually agree here. I removed this type of spacing that early in the map.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo. This looks like a part I overlooked. :P

The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!
Uploaded changes.
Thanks Doc!
Uploaded :)
DoctorToxn
So BAT people, what is preventing this map from being ranked?
Takuma
Bubble repair.
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
00:29:64 (4) - whistle


[Normal]
k

[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo
00:55:21 (1) - hidden
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone?
00:58:90 (1) - hidden
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^



[toxn]
00:18:08 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds?
map is vastly lacking in hitsounds
00:51:28 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing

00:52:51 (5,7) - new combo
01:08:00 (3,4,5,6,7) - wtf no
01:15:13 (3) - not intuitive or fitting
01:53:98 (7,8,9) - wtf no

02:20:05 (4) - unintuitive bpm change
02:36:77 (9,10,11) - wtf no

03:30:66 - map this break, its in a very weird place and you have too much break
03:35:79 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - wtf no

03:57:67 - remove kiai
03:58:66 - kiai starts HERE
03:59:15 (3,4,5) -
04:03:08 (3,4,5) -
04:04:07 (8,9,10) -
04:06:28 (3) -


i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it
DoctorToxn

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:29:64 (4) - whistle


[Normal]
k

[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo
00:55:21 (1) - hidden
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone?
00:58:90 (1) - hidden
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^



[toxn]
00:18:08 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds? Agreed. Done.
map is vastly lacking in hitsounds
00:51:28 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing AKA Jump. Left alone.
00:52:51 (5,7) - new combo Agreed. Done.
01:08:00 (3,4,5,6,7) - wtf no
01:15:13 (3) - not intuitive or fitting Disagree. Leaving
01:53:98 (7,8,9) - wtf no
02:20:05 (4) - unintuitive bpm changeDisagree. Leaving
02:36:77 (9,10,11) - wtf no
03:30:66 - map this break, its in a very weird place and you have too much break. Look at the maximum points. I am trying to limit the points on the map. If you say it's ok, I would LOVE to map most all of the breaks in the map.
03:35:79 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - wtf no
03:57:67 - remove kiai
03:58:66 - kiai starts HERE Disagree. Leaving due to the drums in the BG
03:59:15 (3,4,5) -
04:03:08 (3,4,5) -
04:04:07 (8,9,10) -
04:06:28 (3) -


i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it
The map is not supposed to be easy.

Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi (Lissette) [Toxn Special].osu
Topic Starter
Lissette

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo done
00:55:21 (1) - hidden Fixed
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone? (3) is a jump, and is NOT random
00:58:90 (1) - hidden Fixed
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE That's a jump
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^
^

i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it
The jumps on this map (the ones you call inconsistent spacing), are not randomly placed. I only try to make the player dances the song with the cursor, putting jumps, where the tones are higher, that's the concept i use, I don't wanted to design a map that seems a military march.

Btw.... Don't call crap something, only 'cuz you don't understand it....

Thanks for your time....

Also agree with Toxn ''The map is not supposed to be easy''.

PS: Hope ppl can understand my bad english n_nU
nsane
Here's a star!

Nuke? Why would you nuke a great map?
mrtn
try offset 613

[easy]
no probs

[lizbeth's normal]
01:07:76 - reinsert break

[hard]
00:55:46 (2,3,4) - i don't like these jumps
00:56:44 (6,7,8) - ^
00:57:18 (9,10) - ^
00:59:39 (3,4) - out of place jump
01:00:38 (5,6) - ^
01:05:54 (2,3,4,5) - out of place jumps
01:07:76 - reinsert break
01:51:03 (3,4) - out of place jump
01:52:02 (7,8) - ^
01:58:16 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - NO
02:06:28 (11,1) - out of place jump
02:07:26 (4,5) - ^
02:08:25 (2,3) - ^
02:09:97 (2,3,4) - ^
02:11:93 (7,8) - ^
02:14:15 (4,5) - ^
02:15:13 (7,8) - ^

[toxn special]
00:55:21 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - jumps make no sense.
00:59:39 (4,5) - unintuitive
01:00:38 (1,2) - ^
01:08:25 (4,5) - ^
01:15:13 (3) - out of place speed up
02:06:28 (3,4) - out of place jump
02:10:21 (4,5) - ^
02:14:15 (4,5) - ^
02:15:13 (1,2) - ^
02:40:46 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:36:03 (5,6) - ^
03:36:52 (8,9) - ^
03:59:39 (4,5) - ^
04:00:38 (9,10) - ^
04:03:33 (4,5) - ^
04:04:80 (12,13) - ^
Sure
[Hard]
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing. If u keep this jump, (1,2),3,(4,5,6),7,(8,9),10 is good.
00:58:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing. If u keep this jump new combo will help u.
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:08:00 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:11:44 (6) - new combo. spacing changed.
dkey
star~ :)
Topic Starter
Lissette
omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible
DoctorToxn

Lissette wrote:

omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible
I am in the same situation right now. Sorry!
Topic Starter
Lissette
Finally fixed all that, thanks for checking mrtn and ykcarrot ^^

DoctorToxn wrote:

Lissette wrote:

omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible
I am in the same situation right now. Sorry!
Don't worry, i understand, fix it when you have the time n_n
Yes_old
cool map! nothing wrong with it really xD
here's just some stuff that i think would sound nice if you put in but none of it is really necessary

toxn
00:03:80 (6,8) - whistle?
00:47:82 (6) - maybe place this on top of where (1) is so it's a nice pentagon shape?
01:22:99 (x) - note here
02:20:03 (4) - new combo

normal
01:29:13 (3) - finish at end?

hard
00:11:43 (5) - clap at end of this slider too?
01:32:33 (x) - add note?
01:33:31 (x) - ^
01:34:30 (x) - ^
01:40:20 (10) - whistle
01:42:17 (10) - ^
DoctorToxn
I have opted to have my difficulty removed from this pack. The requested changes would take my map in a direction that I would not like. So to go ahead and have this marvelous map ranked, I will take my map down.
eee
soo, this map is perfect, no?
I couldn't find anything
Lizbeth made a good normal, and I really like the [Hard] difficulty, I mean, it was really good

[All Difficulties]
AImod and .osu says there's no Preview Point, I'm not very certain cause the preview point I hear doesn't sound much like "-1"
just, you know, it's probably a bug

STAR!!!
Topic Starter
Lissette
thanks for modding eee ^^
Hanyuu
hi :)

remove doctor toxn from tags


Easy:

01:06:051 (1) - new combo
1:07:744 why a break this need a kiai time :D
01:38:097 (7) - maybe remove the clap. i think clap+finish is not so good

Normal:

00:06:051 (6) - nazi this a bit to the right
00:50:028 (1,2) - suggest a clap on this circle and clap on the middle of slider to make the slider sound better
01:02:008 (1) - whistle on beginning and end
01:07:049 (3) - maybe a normal finish not a soft :P what you prefer
01:36:076 (1) - maybe whistles here too and on 7? suggestion
01:44:087 (1) - i think it needs a timing section like this previous slider it sounds cool :)
02:12:017 (7) - timing section before the note
02:13:039 (1) - i think the first 2 finish sounds are not so good

Hard:


01:23:023 (1) - this part should start in normal hitsounds and soft after 01:38:097 (1) -
01:39:071 (7,7) - suggest to remove whistle
01:44:087 (1,3) - clap? maybe on (2). i like how this claps make a rhytm here
01:57:090 (1) - you should stackthe pink circle in the center. it will look very cool together with the blue. it fits perfect :)
02:02:058 (9) - suggest to remove this finish and make a stack to slider

great beatmaps! star+kudosu star :D
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