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Topic Starter
Normal doesnt have hitsounds yet... i ll added soon.. 
great design!
notes like drawing a pattern
but i think “hard” like “insane”
00:05:545(3) i think it is better continue to 00:05:914
00:09:479(3) the same,continue to 00:09:848
02:08:486(8) put it to the centre？
use slider to make a big circle is not necessary to make it so complex
just draw a regular polygon
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my english is poor
maybe something wrong in my sentences, i hope it can not make you confuse
notes like drawing a pattern
but i think “hard” like “insane”
00:05:545(3) i think it is better continue to 00:05:914
00:09:479(3) the same,continue to 00:09:848
02:08:486(8) put it to the centre？
use slider to make a big circle is not necessary to make it so complex
just draw a regular polygon
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my english is poor
maybe something wrong in my sentences, i hope it can not make you confuse
Topic Starter
thanx Hillman_Q n.n
fixed all that
fixed all that
Topic Starter
Easy added n.n
no hitsounds yet
EDIT: Lizbeth's normal hitsounds added
EDIT: Easy hitsounds added
EDIT: Lizbeth's normal hitsounds added
EDIT: Easy hitsounds added
mostly Light modding:
BPM:122
Easy:
00:13:41 (3) - make a vertical refleciton of the green 3
00:36:03 (3) - new combo
00:55:70 (2) - stack on top of white 3
00:59:63 (2) - " "
Normal:
00:45:87 (4) - I would probably align this with 2 to continue the pattern
There seems to be quite a few alignment errors in the map such as:
00:59:63 (4) -
01:02:09 (1) -
please fix these
01:52:74 (3,4) - it feels weird for these not to be aligned with the start of 1 and 2
Hard:
I don;t like your clap spams at places such as:
01:23:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:45:61 (6,7,8,9,10) -
some of those feel excessive.
I like the patterns in this difficulty though
Nice map. Star.
BPM:122
Easy:
00:13:41 (3) - make a vertical refleciton of the green 3
00:36:03 (3) - new combo
00:55:70 (2) - stack on top of white 3
00:59:63 (2) - " "
Normal:
00:45:87 (4) - I would probably align this with 2 to continue the pattern
There seems to be quite a few alignment errors in the map such as:
00:59:63 (4) -
01:02:09 (1) -
please fix these
01:52:74 (3,4) - it feels weird for these not to be aligned with the start of 1 and 2
Hard:
I don;t like your clap spams at places such as:
01:23:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:45:61 (6,7,8,9,10) -
some of those feel excessive.
I like the patterns in this difficulty though
Nice map. Star.
Random mod.
[Easy]
00:12:43 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:32:59 (2,1) - ^
01:25:21 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:28:16 (5) - New combo.
[Lizabeth's Normal]
00:05:05 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:08:49 (5,1) - ^
00:19:31 (3) - Make vertical reflection of the 00:16:36 (1).
01:30:12 (4,1) - Spacing.
01:33:81 (6) - Whisle?
01:35:04 (1,2,3) - Jump on normal?
01:46:84 (1,1,2,3,4) - Too large spacing for normal.
01:55:20 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:06:02 (9) - New combo.
[Hard]
I love your jumps and hitsounds.
00:28:16 (7) - New combo.
00:59:63 (4,5) - Spacing.
01:36:76 (3,4,5) - ^
Star+ Kudosu star.
[Easy]
00:12:43 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:32:59 (2,1) - ^
01:25:21 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:28:16 (5) - New combo.
[Lizabeth's Normal]
00:05:05 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:08:49 (5,1) - ^
00:19:31 (3) - Make vertical reflection of the 00:16:36 (1).
01:30:12 (4,1) - Spacing.
01:33:81 (6) - Whisle?
01:35:04 (1,2,3) - Jump on normal?
01:46:84 (1,1,2,3,4) - Too large spacing for normal.
01:55:20 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:06:02 (9) - New combo.
[Hard]
I love your jumps and hitsounds.
00:28:16 (7) - New combo.
00:59:63 (4,5) - Spacing.
01:36:76 (3,4,5) - ^
Star+ Kudosu star.
Topic Starter
thnx for the help and the stars blissfulyoshi and tieff
tieff wrote:
00:59:63 (4,5) - Spacing.this is a jump, but i couldn't change it without ruin the shape, any idea?
01:36:76 (3,4,5) - ^.is spaced with the Distance Snap
Thanks! I forgot to post in here.
Pretty nice map, a bit hard though >.< haha. But that's great.
Star
edit: I forgot also the star lol
Pretty nice map, a bit hard though >.< haha. But that's great.
Star
edit: I forgot also the star lol
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot for the star, and glad you like it!!nullPointLOL wrote:
Thanks! I forgot to post in here.
Pretty nice map, a bit hard though >.< haha. But that's great.
Star
edit: I forgot also the star lol
cya!
I like this song too ^ ^
hard diffi:
01:28:660(6), put it back 1/4 beat
02:03:005(10) make slider start on 02:02:964
02:05:955(10) put it forward 1/6 beat on white tick
02:06:283 add a circle
02:07:021(2,3,4)remove them and add new circle in 02:07:267
02:20:054 add a circle
I think you haven't finish the hard diffi ?
star ^ ^
hard diffi:
01:28:660(6), put it back 1/4 beat
02:03:005(10) make slider start on 02:02:964
02:05:955(10) put it forward 1/6 beat on white tick
02:06:283 add a circle
02:07:021(2,3,4)remove them and add new circle in 02:07:267
02:20:054 add a circle
I think you haven't finish the hard diffi ?
star ^ ^
Topic Starter
Thnx for the help , fixed
and the hard diff is finished n_nU
EDIT: I still must fix some hitsounds and timing section....
, fixedand the hard diff is finished n_nU
EDIT: I still must fix some hitsounds and timing section....
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Topic Starter
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Easy~
00:47:59 (1) - Suggestion: Have this spinner start at 00:47:84 (Don't forget to shorten~)
01:01:61 (4) - Maybe move this right in the middle of the map.
Hard~
00:44:89 (9) - New combo?
00:45:87 (14) - ^
Imo, if things were snapped on the grid map, everything would be stacked perfectly and much more prettier.
Examples:
02:04:56 (1,2,3,4,5)
02:05:30 (6,7,8)
It's ok, don't worry about it~
Great map!
00:47:59 (1) - Suggestion: Have this spinner start at 00:47:84 (Don't forget to shorten~)
01:01:61 (4) - Maybe move this right in the middle of the map.
Hard~
00:44:89 (9) - New combo?
00:45:87 (14) - ^
Imo, if things were snapped on the grid map, everything would be stacked perfectly and much more prettier.
Examples:
02:04:56 (1,2,3,4,5)
02:05:30 (6,7,8)
It's ok, don't worry about it~
Great map!
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding and for the star!! Fixed all that....
Fixed all that.... [Timing]
Fine.
[Easy]
01:06:52 (1) - Too hard this spinner for easy ?
02:12:18 (2) - Finish.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
Too much finish on start of the map...
00:39:97 (1,2,3,4) - Considered jumps for a normal.
[Hard]
Lower volume at start, or claps are really powerful.
00:06:03 (4,5) - Align perfectly, looks better.
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is a "nono" for me...
Like it. Star'd
Fine.
[Easy]
01:06:52 (1) - Too hard this spinner for easy ?
02:12:18 (2) - Finish.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
Too much finish on start of the map...
00:39:97 (1,2,3,4) - Considered jumps for a normal.
[Hard]
Lower volume at start, or claps are really powerful.
00:06:03 (4,5) - Align perfectly, looks better.
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is a "nono" for me...
Like it. Star'd
Topic Starter
thanks for your time and for the star:)osuplayer111 wrote:
[Easy]
01:06:52 (1) - Too hard this spinner for easy ?
02:12:18 (2) - Finish.
Fixed
[Hard]
Lower volume at start, or claps are really powerful.Fixed
00:06:03 (4,5) - Align perfectly, looks better.Fixed
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is a "nono" for me...T.T to bad
Like it. Star'd
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thanks for modding:)osuplayer111 wrote:
[Lizbeth's Normal]
Too much finish on start of the map... remove some of those
00:39:97 (1,2,3,4) - Considered jumps for a normal. fixed
thanks for ur timeanimask wrote:
[Normal]
00:13:90 (2,3) - This part feels weird.. is true, changed that part a bit
00:13:90 (x) - Maybe a circle here instead? done
00:14:39 (3) - Slider moves to here and add a repeat nice, thanks, sound a lot better
01:03:08 (2) - Move timing section(s) here to the left for people who use a different offset or click early I thought this doesnt apply for end of slider, some to confirm this plz
02:06:03 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
02:12:18 (7) - ^ ^
02:13:41 (1) - ^ ^
[Easy]
1:08:74(Break)-> Where is break?! orz
Anyways, your beatmap is great!
Combo-Starred.
1:08:74(Break)-> Where is break?! orz
Anyways, your beatmap is great!
Combo-Starred.
Topic Starter
Glad you like it!!minyeob wrote:
[Easy]
1:08:74(Break)-> Where is break?! orz Fixed
Anyways, your beatmap is great!
Combo-Starred.
Thanks for the stars
Easy:
01:06:52 (1) - end this spinner @ 01:07:513. This MIGHT be too hard for Easy since in goes a little fast. Use a slider instead if so. Don't forget to reinsert the break after it.
Lizbeth's Normal:
01:50:79 (1) - Copy this slider
01:52:75 (3) - Paste and replace it for this one. The spacing felt weird here.
01:56:69 (4) - Move 1 to the right to align.
Hard:
Turn op the overall diff to make it more readable. I had problems with the jumps because of this n_n
01:06:52 (6) - New combo, Reason: different spacing + stack
02:08:00 (6) - New combo for more readability.
02:21:28 (6) - New combo ^^
That's about it. Have dis star
01:06:52 (1) - end this spinner @ 01:07:513. This MIGHT be too hard for Easy since in goes a little fast. Use a slider instead if so. Don't forget to reinsert the break after it.
Lizbeth's Normal:
01:50:79 (1) - Copy this slider
01:52:75 (3) - Paste and replace it for this one. The spacing felt weird here.
01:56:69 (4) - Move 1 to the right to align.
Hard:
Turn op the overall diff to make it more readable. I had problems with the jumps because of this n_n
01:06:52 (6) - New combo, Reason: different spacing + stack
02:08:00 (6) - New combo for more readability.
02:21:28 (6) - New combo ^^
That's about it. Have dis star
Kind of late to ask, but could I map a difficulty for this song? BTW, starred
Topic Starter
Sure Doc, why notDoctorToxn wrote:
Kind of late to ask, but could I map a difficulty for this song? BTW, starred
and thanks for starrin'!!
Here is my first attempt at my difficulty. Comments are appreciated. Just unzip the folder and dump the contents in the song folder. The images go in there too. Do with it whatever you want. You are under no obligation to add it to your other maps if you do not want to. I just had fun mapping it.
Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi Toxn Difficulty.zip
Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi Toxn Difficulty.zip
Topic Starter
Hi, nice diff!!DoctorToxn wrote:
Here is my first attempt at my difficulty. Comments are appreciated. Just unzip the folder and dump the contents in the song folder. The images go in there too. Do with it whatever you want. You are under no obligation to add it to your other maps if you do not want to. I just had fun mapping it.
, but I have a problem, I can't see the SB, and I dropped the images too in to the song folder, can you tell me, what should I do?, I don't understand too much of SB stuff, n_nU, help plz.....EDIT: Btw, how about rename your difficulty as Toxn Special ??
Just uploaded with the the name change. You need to copy the actual folder labeled "Doc_Images" into the song folder. It needs to look like this:
Download: Toxn Special FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi.zip
Download: Toxn Special FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi.zip
Topic Starter
Thanks, fixed n_n
Toxn Special:
00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo.
The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo.
The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!
Uploaded changes.Takuma wrote:
Toxn Special:00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me.I actually agree here. I removed this type of spacing that early in the map.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo. This looks like a part I overlooked.
The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!
Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi (Lissette) [Toxn Special].osu
Topic Starter
Thanks Doc!DoctorToxn wrote:
Uploaded changes.Takuma wrote:
Toxn Special:00:22:26 (3,4,5,6) - It seems to be a little random to me.I actually agree here. I removed this type of spacing that early in the map.
Okay, going further into the map I see lots of these. I think you should tone them down a bit at the least - I don't think that big of jumps fit the slow song.
00:50:91 (1,2) - Why do you do this ?_? Please move 1/4th forward, and fix the spacing for the whole combo. This looks like a part I overlooked.
The other difficulties feel fine to me. Looks bubbleable, but fix these first. XD Have a star!
Uploaded
So BAT people, what is preventing this map from being ranked?
Bubble repair.
[Easy]
00:29:64 (4) - whistle
[Normal]
k
[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo
00:55:21 (1) - hidden
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone?
00:58:90 (1) - hidden
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^
[toxn]
00:18:08 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds?
map is vastly lacking in hitsounds
00:51:28 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:52:51 (5,7) - new combo
01:08:00 (3,4,5,6,7) - wtf no
01:15:13 (3) - not intuitive or fitting
01:53:98 (7,8,9) - wtf no
02:20:05 (4) - unintuitive bpm change
02:36:77 (9,10,11) - wtf no
03:30:66 - map this break, its in a very weird place and you have too much break
03:35:79 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - wtf no
03:57:67 - remove kiai
03:58:66 - kiai starts HERE
03:59:15 (3,4,5) -
04:03:08 (3,4,5) -
04:04:07 (8,9,10) -
04:06:28 (3) -
i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it
00:29:64 (4) - whistle
[Normal]
k
[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo
00:55:21 (1) - hidden
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone?
00:58:90 (1) - hidden
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^
[toxn]
00:18:08 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds?
map is vastly lacking in hitsounds
00:51:28 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:52:51 (5,7) - new combo
01:08:00 (3,4,5,6,7) - wtf no
01:15:13 (3) - not intuitive or fitting
01:53:98 (7,8,9) - wtf no
02:20:05 (4) - unintuitive bpm change
02:36:77 (9,10,11) - wtf no
03:30:66 - map this break, its in a very weird place and you have too much break
03:35:79 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - wtf no
03:57:67 - remove kiai
03:58:66 - kiai starts HERE
03:59:15 (3,4,5) -
04:03:08 (3,4,5) -
04:04:07 (8,9,10) -
04:06:28 (3) -
i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it
The map is not supposed to be easy.Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Easy]
00:29:64 (4) - whistle
[Normal]
k
[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo
00:55:21 (1) - hidden
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone?
00:58:90 (1) - hidden
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^
[toxn]
00:18:08 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds? Agreed. Done.
map is vastly lacking in hitsounds
00:51:28 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing AKA Jump. Left alone.
00:52:51 (5,7) - new combo Agreed. Done.
01:08:00 (3,4,5,6,7) - wtf no
01:15:13 (3) - not intuitive or fitting Disagree. Leaving
01:53:98 (7,8,9) - wtf no
02:20:05 (4) - unintuitive bpm changeDisagree. Leaving
02:36:77 (9,10,11) - wtf no
03:30:66 - map this break, its in a very weird place and you have too much break. Look at the maximum points. I am trying to limit the points on the map. If you say it's ok, I would LOVE to map most all of the breaks in the map.
03:35:79 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - wtf no
03:57:67 - remove kiai
03:58:66 - kiai starts HERE Disagree. Leaving due to the drums in the BG
03:59:15 (3,4,5) -
04:03:08 (3,4,5) -
04:04:07 (8,9,10) -
04:06:28 (3) -
i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it
Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Aikoi (Lissette) [Toxn Special].osu
Topic Starter
The jumps on this map (the ones you call inconsistent spacing), are not randomly placed. I only try to make the player dances the song with the cursor, putting jumps, where the tones are higher, that's the concept i use, I don't wanted to design a map that seems a military march.Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Hard]
00:52:51 (3) - new combo done
00:55:21 (1) - hidden Fixed
00:55:46 (2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing, anyone? (3) is a jump, and is NOT random
00:58:90 (1) - hidden Fixed
00:59:64 (4,5,6) - CONSISTENT SPACING PLEASE That's a jump
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:11:44 (6,7,8) - ^^
i really wanted to nuke this crap but decided to be merciful and just pop it
Btw.... Don't call crap something, only 'cuz you don't understand it....
Thanks for your time....
Also agree with Toxn ''The map is not supposed to be easy''.
PS: Hope ppl can understand my bad english n_nU
try offset 613
[easy]
no probs
[lizbeth's normal]
01:07:76 - reinsert break
[hard]
00:55:46 (2,3,4) - i don't like these jumps
00:56:44 (6,7,8) - ^
00:57:18 (9,10) - ^
00:59:39 (3,4) - out of place jump
01:00:38 (5,6) - ^
01:05:54 (2,3,4,5) - out of place jumps
01:07:76 - reinsert break
01:51:03 (3,4) - out of place jump
01:52:02 (7,8) - ^
01:58:16 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - NO
02:06:28 (11,1) - out of place jump
02:07:26 (4,5) - ^
02:08:25 (2,3) - ^
02:09:97 (2,3,4) - ^
02:11:93 (7,8) - ^
02:14:15 (4,5) - ^
02:15:13 (7,8) - ^
[toxn special]
00:55:21 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - jumps make no sense.
00:59:39 (4,5) - unintuitive
01:00:38 (1,2) - ^
01:08:25 (4,5) - ^
01:15:13 (3) - out of place speed up
02:06:28 (3,4) - out of place jump
02:10:21 (4,5) - ^
02:14:15 (4,5) - ^
02:15:13 (1,2) - ^
02:40:46 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:36:03 (5,6) - ^
03:36:52 (8,9) - ^
03:59:39 (4,5) - ^
04:00:38 (9,10) - ^
04:03:33 (4,5) - ^
04:04:80 (12,13) - ^
[easy]
no probs
[lizbeth's normal]
01:07:76 - reinsert break
[hard]
00:55:46 (2,3,4) - i don't like these jumps
00:56:44 (6,7,8) - ^
00:57:18 (9,10) - ^
00:59:39 (3,4) - out of place jump
01:00:38 (5,6) - ^
01:05:54 (2,3,4,5) - out of place jumps
01:07:76 - reinsert break
01:51:03 (3,4) - out of place jump
01:52:02 (7,8) - ^
01:58:16 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - NO
02:06:28 (11,1) - out of place jump
02:07:26 (4,5) - ^
02:08:25 (2,3) - ^
02:09:97 (2,3,4) - ^
02:11:93 (7,8) - ^
02:14:15 (4,5) - ^
02:15:13 (7,8) - ^
[toxn special]
00:55:21 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - jumps make no sense.
00:59:39 (4,5) - unintuitive
01:00:38 (1,2) - ^
01:08:25 (4,5) - ^
01:15:13 (3) - out of place speed up
02:06:28 (3,4) - out of place jump
02:10:21 (4,5) - ^
02:14:15 (4,5) - ^
02:15:13 (1,2) - ^
02:40:46 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:36:03 (5,6) - ^
03:36:52 (8,9) - ^
03:59:39 (4,5) - ^
04:00:38 (9,10) - ^
04:03:33 (4,5) - ^
04:04:80 (12,13) - ^
[Hard]
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing. If u keep this jump, (1,2),3,(4,5,6),7,(8,9),10 is good.
00:58:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing. If u keep this jump new combo will help u.
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:08:00 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:11:44 (6) - new combo. spacing changed.
00:55:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing. If u keep this jump, (1,2),3,(4,5,6),7,(8,9),10 is good.
00:58:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing. If u keep this jump new combo will help u.
01:57:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:08:00 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:11:44 (6) - new combo. spacing changed.
star~
Topic Starter
omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible
I am in the same situation right now. Sorry!Lissette wrote:
omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible
Topic Starter
Finally fixed all that, thanks for checking mrtn and ykcarrot ^^
Don't worry, i understand, fix it when you have the time n_nDoctorToxn wrote:
I am in the same situation right now. Sorry!Lissette wrote:
omg, the classes are occupying all my time, thanks for modding you guys, I will fix all that as soon as possible
cool map! nothing wrong with it really xD
here's just some stuff that i think would sound nice if you put in but none of it is really necessary
toxn
00:03:80 (6,8) - whistle?
00:47:82 (6) - maybe place this on top of where (1) is so it's a nice pentagon shape?
01:22:99 (x) - note here
02:20:03 (4) - new combo
normal
01:29:13 (3) - finish at end?
hard
00:11:43 (5) - clap at end of this slider too?
01:32:33 (x) - add note?
01:33:31 (x) - ^
01:34:30 (x) - ^
01:40:20 (10) - whistle
01:42:17 (10) - ^
here's just some stuff that i think would sound nice if you put in but none of it is really necessary
toxn
00:03:80 (6,8) - whistle?
00:47:82 (6) - maybe place this on top of where (1) is so it's a nice pentagon shape?
01:22:99 (x) - note here
02:20:03 (4) - new combo
normal
01:29:13 (3) - finish at end?
hard
00:11:43 (5) - clap at end of this slider too?
01:32:33 (x) - add note?
01:33:31 (x) - ^
01:34:30 (x) - ^
01:40:20 (10) - whistle
01:42:17 (10) - ^
I have opted to have my difficulty removed from this pack. The requested changes would take my map in a direction that I would not like. So to go ahead and have this marvelous map ranked, I will take my map down.
soo, this map is perfect, no?
I couldn't find anything
Lizbeth made a good normal, and I really like the [Hard] difficulty, I mean, it was really good
[All Difficulties]
AImod and .osu says there's no Preview Point, I'm not very certain cause the preview point I hear doesn't sound much like "-1"
just, you know, it's probably a bug
STAR!!!
I couldn't find anything
Lizbeth made a good normal, and I really like the [Hard] difficulty, I mean, it was really good
[All Difficulties]
AImod and .osu says there's no Preview Point, I'm not very certain cause the preview point I hear doesn't sound much like "-1"
just, you know, it's probably a bug
STAR!!!
Topic Starter
thanks for modding eee ^^
hi
remove doctor toxn from tags
Easy:
01:06:051 (1) - new combo
1:07:744 why a break this need a kiai time
01:38:097 (7) - maybe remove the clap. i think clap+finish is not so good
Normal:
00:06:051 (6) - nazi this a bit to the right
00:50:028 (1,2) - suggest a clap on this circle and clap on the middle of slider to make the slider sound better
01:02:008 (1) - whistle on beginning and end
01:07:049 (3) - maybe a normal finish not a soft what you prefer
01:36:076 (1) - maybe whistles here too and on 7? suggestion
01:44:087 (1) - i think it needs a timing section like this previous slider it sounds cool
02:12:017 (7) - timing section before the note
02:13:039 (1) - i think the first 2 finish sounds are not so good
Hard:
01:23:023 (1) - this part should start in normal hitsounds and soft after 01:38:097 (1) -
01:39:071 (7,7) - suggest to remove whistle
01:44:087 (1,3) - clap? maybe on (2). i like how this claps make a rhytm here
01:57:090 (1) - you should stackthe pink circle in the center. it will look very cool together with the blue. it fits perfect
02:02:058 (9) - suggest to remove this finish and make a stack to slider
great beatmaps! star+kudosu star
remove doctor toxn from tags
Easy:
01:06:051 (1) - new combo
1:07:744 why a break this need a kiai time
01:38:097 (7) - maybe remove the clap. i think clap+finish is not so good
Normal:
00:06:051 (6) - nazi this a bit to the right
00:50:028 (1,2) - suggest a clap on this circle and clap on the middle of slider to make the slider sound better
01:02:008 (1) - whistle on beginning and end
01:07:049 (3) - maybe a normal finish not a soft
what you prefer01:36:076 (1) - maybe whistles here too and on 7? suggestion
01:44:087 (1) - i think it needs a timing section like this previous slider it sounds cool
02:12:017 (7) - timing section before the note
02:13:039 (1) - i think the first 2 finish sounds are not so good
Hard:
01:23:023 (1) - this part should start in normal hitsounds and soft after 01:38:097 (1) -
01:39:071 (7,7) - suggest to remove whistle
01:44:087 (1,3) - clap? maybe on (2). i like how this claps make a rhytm here
01:57:090 (1) - you should stackthe pink circle in the center. it will look very cool together with the blue. it fits perfect
02:02:058 (9) - suggest to remove this finish and make a stack to slider
great beatmaps! star+kudosu star
Topic Starter
thanks for modding and for the stars >.<
if i stack this the pattern, in game, mess up >.<Hanyuu wrote:
hi
Hard:[/b]
01:57:090 (1) - you should stackthe pink circle in the center. it will look very cool together with the blue. it fits perfect
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
All looks great to me
have a star
have a star
Topic Starter
Thanks for starrin' and modding Crazy Jay and James2250
Mystearica
Wow, nice song. I love it.
GENERAL
From what I feel, this map could use hitsounds of soft hitnormal, normal hitnormal and normal hitclap, especially normal hitnormal, it would sound fantastic. Feel free to PM me if you need further comments on the hitsounds. Right now, I won't touch and mod hitsounds since I can see that the map is near to be ranked already, so, re-doing the whole map's hitsound might not be motivating. xD
EASY
Good and easy-to-catch rhythm.
00:16:035 (1) - Make this more pretty ? xD
LIZBETH'S NORMAL
02:07:000 (2) - Make this more pretty. xD
HARD
All these are just purely map design suggestions, there're nothing techincally wrong with them. xD
00:33:080 (3) - This jump is a bit uneven and ugly. xD Fix them ?
00:43:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Nice design ! But I would prefer you align this 00:45:036 (4) - with 00:44:062 (8) xD Or just make the whole thing symmetrical ?
00:52:074 (2) - Nazi align pls. xD
01:28:052 (6,7) - Distance between 5 & 6 and 6 & 7 should be constant if you wanna make a small jump there, coz people would expect to hit 7 sooner than it appear.
01:50:003 (6,7) - This 2 sounds weird, coz the beat falls on 01:50:287 xD
Star for sure.
GENERAL
From what I feel, this map could use hitsounds of soft hitnormal, normal hitnormal and normal hitclap, especially normal hitnormal, it would sound fantastic. Feel free to PM me if you need further comments on the hitsounds. Right now, I won't touch and mod hitsounds since I can see that the map is near to be ranked already, so, re-doing the whole map's hitsound might not be motivating. xD
EASY
Good and easy-to-catch rhythm.
00:16:035 (1) - Make this more pretty ? xD
LIZBETH'S NORMAL
02:07:000 (2) - Make this more pretty. xD
HARD
All these are just purely map design suggestions, there're nothing techincally wrong with them. xD
00:33:080 (3) - This jump is a bit uneven and ugly. xD Fix them ?
00:43:015 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Nice design ! But I would prefer you align this 00:45:036 (4) - with 00:44:062 (8) xD Or just make the whole thing symmetrical ?
00:52:074 (2) - Nazi align pls. xD
01:28:052 (6,7) - Distance between 5 & 6 and 6 & 7 should be constant if you wanna make a small jump there, coz people would expect to hit 7 sooner than it appear.
01:50:003 (6,7) - This 2 sounds weird, coz the beat falls on 01:50:287 xD
Star for sure.
Mystearica
I would definitively say that it is worthwhile and motivating, because you'll know that your map is that much better. This whole notion of being just rankable is unacceptable. I could place down all sorts of random stuff and make it rankable as long as I have 2k spinners, all distance snapped stuff and correct new combo switches and the correct timing. As a mapper you should always take your map beyond that bare minimum level and make it nice & fun, not just rankable.alvisto wrote:
Wow, nice song. I love it.
GENERAL
From what I feel, this map could use hitsounds of soft hitnormal, normal hitnormal and normal hitclap, especially normal hitnormal, it would sound fantastic. Feel free to PM me if you need further comments on the hitsounds. Right now, I won't touch and mod hitsounds since I can see that the map is near to be ranked already, so, re-doing the whole map's hitsound might not be motivating. xD
1 more MOD that I forgot to mention (no kudosu for this post)
For the BG image, resize/recrop it so that when playing, there're no 2 black horizontal borders appearing on the top and bottom of the map. Recommend 1024 x 768.
xD
For the BG image, resize/recrop it so that when playing, there're no 2 black horizontal borders appearing on the top and bottom of the map. Recommend 1024 x 768.
xD
Topic Starter
i'll do the changes tomorrow... thanks for modding Alvisto, Mystearica
Topic Starter
updated..but Lizbeth still need to fix her difficulty ^^
thanks for starrin' Tanmak
EDIT: all difficulty fixed
thanks for starrin' Tanmak
EDIT: all difficulty fixed
[Easy]
00:18:031 (1) - remove new combo
00:20:028 (2) - new combo
00:22:025 (1) - remove new combo
Normal and Hard seems good.
I shot a star already. Then I shoot kds star now.
00:18:031 (1) - remove new combo
00:20:028 (2) - new combo
00:22:025 (1) - remove new combo
Normal and Hard seems good.
I shot a star already. Then I shoot kds star now.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding and kudostarrin' >.<ykcarrot wrote:
[Easy]
00:18:031 (1) - remove new combo
00:20:028 (2) - new combo
00:22:025 (1) - remove new combo
Fxed
Normal and Hard seems good.
I shot a star already. Then I shoot kds star now.
[General]
00:58:064 (1) - Same.
01:46:842 - You should add a beat here to be consistent.
02:06:514 - At 00:51:760 you placed another beat, instead of ending the spinner there. You should do the same here.
02:19:054 (1) - I don't like how it sounds silenced.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:56:043 (3) - New combo here?
00:59:629 (4) - Same.
01:40:094 (1,2) - Pretty confusing at first play. Mostly because you won't know (1) will have more than one repeat. Same applies to the next three combos after this one.
01:47:033 (1) - New combo feels out of place, I'd remove it.
02:10:080 - Move this section to 02:10:326?
02:10:440 (4) - I'd add a new combo marker here.
02:18:031 (4) - Same.
[Hard]
00:11:043 (5,6,7) - Not properly stacked, and looks weird while playing.
00:45:085 (6) - New combo here?
00:56:092 (8,9) - Align properly?
00:51:002 (1) - Can't you do the Normal sampleset change here, like you did in Normal?
00:58:089 (1) - Same.
01:32:058 (5) - You should add more new combo markers here, a combo of 14 is a bit too much. (5) is a good example in where to put it.
01:58:153 - The Soft-to-Normal sampleset change doesn't fit...
02:05:028 (6,7,8) - Stack looks weird.
02:10:080 - Move this section to 02:10:326?
~ ~ ~
These are just small/minor problems too look into. But I wonder why didn't you use grid snapping sometimes... some stacks look weird. =[
Aside from that, great map!
- Consider cropping the mp3, it's a bit long. Not of much importance though.
- Overall Difficulty feels a tiny tad too high. Might be just me.
00:58:064 (1) - Same.
01:46:842 - You should add a beat here to be consistent.
02:06:514 - At 00:51:760 you placed another beat, instead of ending the spinner there. You should do the same here.
02:19:054 (1) - I don't like how it sounds silenced.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
- I believe you can (and should) increase Overall Difficulty here a bit.
00:56:043 (3) - New combo here?
00:59:629 (4) - Same.
01:40:094 (1,2) - Pretty confusing at first play. Mostly because you won't know (1) will have more than one repeat. Same applies to the next three combos after this one.
01:47:033 (1) - New combo feels out of place, I'd remove it.
02:10:080 - Move this section to 02:10:326?
02:10:440 (4) - I'd add a new combo marker here.
02:18:031 (4) - Same.
[Hard]
00:11:043 (5,6,7) - Not properly stacked, and looks weird while playing.
00:45:085 (6) - New combo here?
00:56:092 (8,9) - Align properly?
00:51:002 (1) - Can't you do the Normal sampleset change here, like you did in Normal?
00:58:089 (1) - Same.
01:32:058 (5) - You should add more new combo markers here, a combo of 14 is a bit too much. (5) is a good example in where to put it.
01:58:153 - The Soft-to-Normal sampleset change doesn't fit...
02:05:028 (6,7,8) - Stack looks weird.
02:10:080 - Move this section to 02:10:326?
~ ~ ~
These are just small/minor problems too look into. But I wonder why didn't you use grid snapping sometimes... some stacks look weird. =[
Aside from that, great map!
Topic Starter
thax for checking Gens, Fixed the most of your modding ^^
[Hard]
[Source]
Please use Tsubasa Cronicle
lolol
Fix and I'll bubble.
[Source]
Please use Tsubasa Cronicle
lolol
Fix and I'll bubble.
Topic Starter
i have searched and the correct way is Chronicle, can you recheck it plz? ^^minyeob wrote:
[Hard]
[Source]
Please use Tsubasa Cronicle
lolol
Fix and I'll bubble.
Haha I mispelled Anime's name. Sorry about that.
Only
[Hard]'s source has "c""C"
Please fix it to "C".
Soooo minor, isn't it? I'm really sorry to mention about this
Edit: Bubble'd
Only
[Hard]'s source has "c"
Please fix it to "C".
Soooo minor, isn't it? I'm really sorry to mention about this
Edit: Bubble'd
Topic Starter
ooh i get it, thanks minyeob, is already fixed. ^^
I tried poking you in #mod but you were afk, so i guess ill just leave my message here.
This map could really use slider ticks. In [Easy] you leave slider ticks out in the beginning of the map, but put them in near the end. [Normal] they just come in and out randomly. In hard i hear them maybe once?
Moral of post: USE SLIDERTICKS PLEASE <3
Also, AIMod is giving me a few spacing errors, so be sure to check those out. (Ctrl-Shift-A)
This map could really use slider ticks. In [Easy] you leave slider ticks out in the beginning of the map, but put them in near the end. [Normal] they just come in and out randomly. In hard i hear them maybe once?
Moral of post: USE SLIDERTICKS PLEASE <3
Also, AIMod is giving me a few spacing errors, so be sure to check those out. (Ctrl-Shift-A)
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Much better. RemmyBubbled
Crop the mp3. Half of it is completely superfluous to the beatmap.
Let me know once you've done it.
Let me know once you've done it.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Normal
02:10:940 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing
Hard
Increase overall difficulty by one tick maybe?
00:42:170 (3) - Looks odd. Stack it under the slider endpoint
00:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part felt odd while playing it. I think it sounds much better if you put a circle at 00:44:260, 00:45:244, and 00:46:227. Better yet, make the timeline look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1865
02:16:104 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked properly and looks weird in play.
02:10:940 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing
Hard
Increase overall difficulty by one tick maybe?
00:42:170 (3) - Looks odd. Stack it under the slider endpoint
00:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part felt odd while playing it. I think it sounds much better if you put a circle at 00:44:260, 00:45:244, and 00:46:227. Better yet, make the timeline look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1865
02:16:104 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked properly and looks weird in play.
Topic Starter
Fixed all, thnx for modding ^^Lybydose wrote:
Normal
02:10:940 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing
Hard
Increase overall difficulty by one tick maybe?
00:42:170 (3) - Looks odd. Stack it under the slider endpoint
00:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part felt odd while playing it. I think it sounds much better if you put a circle at 00:44:260, 00:45:244, and 00:46:227. Better yet, make the timeline look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1865 Nice ^^
02:16:104 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked properly and looks weird in play.
Seems good.
Proto-Bubble
Also a tip for stacking things easily: If you put distance spacing at 0 and turn off grid snap (or hold shift), you can stack notes exactly under the previous note or endpoint. Just don't forget to set it back to normal when you start moving other stuff.
Proto-Bubble
Also a tip for stacking things easily: If you put distance spacing at 0 and turn off grid snap (or hold shift), you can stack notes exactly under the previous note or endpoint. Just don't forget to set it back to normal when you start moving other stuff.
Topic Starter
Thanks for re-cheking and for the tip ^^
Normal~
"kajiura yuki" are uncapitalized in the tags of Easy, yet they are capitalized in the other 2 difficulties. Mind fixing those? =P
- 00:10:940 (1) - Isn't stacked properly under 5.
- 01:36:022 (3) - Mirror with 1 horizontally.
- 01:47:826 (2) - Mirror with 3.
- 01:48:809 (4) - Mirror with 1.
- 01:56:678 (4) - ^
- 02:21:022 (4) - This isn't touching like the rest of the combo on this row.
- 00:33:809 (3) - Mirror with 1 vertically.
- 01:39:465 (5) - A tad bit too far from 4. Scoot 5 through 9 a bit closer please.
- 01:55:203 (5) - Suggestion: New combo?
- 02:19:301 (3) - Mirror with 2 horizontally.
"kajiura yuki" are uncapitalized in the tags of Easy, yet they are capitalized in the other 2 difficulties. Mind fixing those? =P
Hard
00:42:047 - add a note ?
01:07:498 (9) - new combo ?
01:43:891 (7) - move to 01:44:014 and 01:44:260 (9) - move to 01:44:383
01:45:735 (7) - remove ?
Normal
00:25:940 (2) - start at the 00:25:694 ?
00:26:924 (3) - ^
Easy
nice~
Great Map
star~
00:42:047 - add a note ?
01:07:498 (9) - new combo ?
01:43:891 (7) - move to 01:44:014 and 01:44:260 (9) - move to 01:44:383
01:45:735 (7) - remove ?
Normal
00:25:940 (2) - start at the 00:25:694 ?
00:26:924 (3) - ^
Easy
nice~
Great Map
star~
Topic Starter
Fixed, thanks for modding!
Looks much better.
Bubbled~
Bubbled~
Your BG image is too large. The max allowed is 1024 x 768 but the current size is 1260 x 900.
[Easy]
00:16:350 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:26:186 (4,1) - ^
00:31:596 (1,2) - ^
00:34:547 (1,2) - ^
00:41:432 (1,2) - ^
01:34:547 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:55:940 (1,2) - ^
01:58:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:08:481 (3,4,5) - ^
02:18:317 (1,2,3) - ^
Not sure how the spacing fluctuations was overlooked, but this should be fixed.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:26:924 (3,4,5) - Just a bit far apart.
01:52:744 (3) - Compared to 01:50:776 (1), you bent the slider more than you might have planned since the end of this slider is too close to (4).
Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficulty.
[Easy]
00:16:350 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:26:186 (4,1) - ^
00:31:596 (1,2) - ^
00:34:547 (1,2) - ^
00:41:432 (1,2) - ^
01:34:547 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:55:940 (1,2) - ^
01:58:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:08:481 (3,4,5) - ^
02:18:317 (1,2,3) - ^
Not sure how the spacing fluctuations was overlooked, but this should be fixed.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:26:924 (3,4,5) - Just a bit far apart.
01:52:744 (3) - Compared to 01:50:776 (1), you bent the slider more than you might have planned since the end of this slider is too close to (4).
Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficulty.
Topic Starter
Fixed all, thanks for modding! ^^whymeman wrote:
Your BG image is too large. The max allowed is 1024 x 768 but the current size is 1260 x 900.
[Easy]
00:16:350 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:26:186 (4,1) - ^
00:31:596 (1,2) - ^
00:34:547 (1,2) - ^
00:41:432 (1,2) - ^
01:34:547 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:55:940 (1,2) - ^
01:58:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:08:481 (3,4,5) - ^
02:18:317 (1,2,3) - ^
Not sure how the spacing fluctuations was overlooked, but this should be fixed.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:26:924 (3,4,5) - Just a bit far apart.
01:52:744 (3) - Compared to 01:50:776 (1), you bent the slider more than you might have planned since the end of this slider is too close to (4).
Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficulty.
delete .osb fire
[Easy]
last spinner start at 02:20:039
[Normal]
02:00:613 (3,4) - so close.
[Easy]
last spinner start at 02:20:039
[Normal]
02:00:613 (3,4) - so close.
Topic Starter
Fixed all, thnx for modding ^^osu_CN_yaya wrote:
delete .osb fire
[Easy]
last spinner start at 02:20:039
[Normal]
02:00:613 (3,4) - so close.
bubble
I tend to be a bit late on the beats. Try 617 for offset (+4)
Easy
00:57:416 (3) - New combo here? Since it's an easy difficulty, an extra indicator would be nice that this is on the 1/2 beat.
Lizbeth's Normal
01:40:940 (1,2,3) - These are kinda awkward. Try adding a repeat on the 3. Same with the others.
Hard
01:40:449 - Add a beat here. Same with the other 2 patterns that follow.
These are all suggestions, so I won't pop. Let me know what you think.
Easy
00:57:416 (3) - New combo here? Since it's an easy difficulty, an extra indicator would be nice that this is on the 1/2 beat.
Lizbeth's Normal
01:40:940 (1,2,3) - These are kinda awkward. Try adding a repeat on the 3. Same with the others.
Hard
01:40:449 - Add a beat here. Same with the other 2 patterns that follow.
These are all suggestions, so I won't pop. Let me know what you think.
No problems with the map as for me, played all 3 diffs and it did not confused and broke my combo about the layout.
Topic Starter
kingcobra52 thanks for the suggestions, but i play it fine with the offset i have >.< lets see if anyone else complain about it
normal and hard: i like how it sounds the doubles on those parts ^^
so i guess i wont pop the bubble
thanks for checking you guys
normal and hard: i like how it sounds the doubles on those parts ^^
so i guess i wont pop the bubble
thanks for checking you guys
Very well.
Ranked.
Ranked.
Congratulations, twin
It was too long journey. XD
It was too long journey. XD