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Lissette
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lybydose
Normal

02:10:940 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing

Hard

Increase overall difficulty by one tick maybe?

00:42:170 (3) - Looks odd. Stack it under the slider endpoint

00:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part felt odd while playing it. I think it sounds much better if you put a circle at 00:44:260, 00:45:244, and 00:46:227. Better yet, make the timeline look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1865

02:16:104 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked properly and looks weird in play.
Topic Starter
Lissette

Lybydose wrote:

Normal

02:10:940 (5,6) - inconsistent spacing

Hard

Increase overall difficulty by one tick maybe?

00:42:170 (3) - Looks odd. Stack it under the slider endpoint

00:43:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part felt odd while playing it. I think it sounds much better if you put a circle at 00:44:260, 00:45:244, and 00:46:227. Better yet, make the timeline look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1865 Nice ^^

02:16:104 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked properly and looks weird in play.
Fixed all, thnx for modding ^^
Lybydose
Seems good.

Proto-Bubble

Also a tip for stacking things easily: If you put distance spacing at 0 and turn off grid snap (or hold shift), you can stack notes exactly under the previous note or endpoint. Just don't forget to set it back to normal when you start moving other stuff.
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks for re-cheking and for the tip ^^
Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. 00:10:940 (1) - Isn't stacked properly under 5.
  2. 01:36:022 (3) - Mirror with 1 horizontally.
  3. 01:47:826 (2) - Mirror with 3.
  4. 01:48:809 (4) - Mirror with 1.
  5. 01:56:678 (4) - ^
  6. 02:21:022 (4) - This isn't touching like the rest of the combo on this row.
Hard~
  1. 00:33:809 (3) - Mirror with 1 vertically.
  2. 01:39:465 (5) - A tad bit too far from 4. Scoot 5 through 9 a bit closer please.
  3. 01:55:203 (5) - Suggestion: New combo?
  4. 02:19:301 (3) - Mirror with 2 horizontally.
Very minor suggestions~
"kajiura yuki" are uncapitalized in the tags of Easy, yet they are capitalized in the other 2 difficulties. Mind fixing those? =P
AngelHoney
Hard

00:42:047 - add a note ?
01:07:498 (9) - new combo ?
01:43:891 (7) - move to 01:44:014 and 01:44:260 (9) - move to 01:44:383
01:45:735 (7) - remove ?


Normal

00:25:940 (2) - start at the 00:25:694 ?
00:26:924 (3) - ^

Easy

nice~


Great Map :) :)

star~
Topic Starter
Lissette
Fixed, thanks for modding!
Mafiamaster
Looks much better.
Bubbled~
whymeman
Your BG image is too large. The max allowed is 1024 x 768 but the current size is 1260 x 900.

[Easy]

00:16:350 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:26:186 (4,1) - ^
00:31:596 (1,2) - ^
00:34:547 (1,2) - ^
00:41:432 (1,2) - ^
01:34:547 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:55:940 (1,2) - ^
01:58:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:08:481 (3,4,5) - ^
02:18:317 (1,2,3) - ^

Not sure how the spacing fluctuations was overlooked, but this should be fixed.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

00:26:924 (3,4,5) - Just a bit far apart.
01:52:744 (3) - Compared to 01:50:776 (1), you bent the slider more than you might have planned since the end of this slider is too close to (4).

Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficulty.
Topic Starter
Lissette

whymeman wrote:

Your BG image is too large. The max allowed is 1024 x 768 but the current size is 1260 x 900.

[Easy]

00:16:350 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:26:186 (4,1) - ^
00:31:596 (1,2) - ^
00:34:547 (1,2) - ^
00:41:432 (1,2) - ^
01:34:547 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:50:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:55:940 (1,2) - ^
01:58:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:08:481 (3,4,5) - ^
02:18:317 (1,2,3) - ^

Not sure how the spacing fluctuations was overlooked, but this should be fixed.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

00:26:924 (3,4,5) - Just a bit far apart.
01:52:744 (3) - Compared to 01:50:776 (1), you bent the slider more than you might have planned since the end of this slider is too close to (4).

Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficulty.
Fixed all, thanks for modding! ^^
v2b
8-)
yaya
delete .osb fire

[Easy]
last spinner start at 02:20:039

[Normal]
02:00:613 (3,4) - so close.
Topic Starter
Lissette

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

delete .osb fire

[Easy]
last spinner start at 02:20:039

[Normal]
02:00:613 (3,4) - so close.
Fixed all, thnx for modding ^^
yaya
bubble
kingcobra52
I tend to be a bit late on the beats. Try 617 for offset (+4)

Easy

00:57:416 (3) - New combo here? Since it's an easy difficulty, an extra indicator would be nice that this is on the 1/2 beat.

Lizbeth's Normal

01:40:940 (1,2,3) - These are kinda awkward. Try adding a repeat on the 3. Same with the others.

Hard

01:40:449 - Add a beat here. Same with the other 2 patterns that follow.

These are all suggestions, so I won't pop. Let me know what you think.
James
No problems with the map as for me, played all 3 diffs and it did not confused and broke my combo about the layout.
Topic Starter
Lissette
kingcobra52 thanks for the suggestions, but i play it fine with the offset i have >.< lets see if anyone else complain about it
normal and hard: i like how it sounds the doubles on those parts ^^
so i guess i wont pop the bubble

thanks for checking you guys :)
kingcobra52
Very well.

Ranked.
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Congratulations, twin :D
It was too long journey. XD
Topic Starter
Lissette
Thanks!
lol, yeah ykcarrot>.<
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