1. Broken (1,18 stars, 154 notes)
2. MuzuZoda (4,2 stars, 566 notes)
3. OniZoda (4,78 stars, 805 notes)
4. Precious (4,34 stars, 282 notes)
5. Slow-ru's Fragile (2,81 stars, 215 notes)

Irreversible wrote:

I hope this is the right map to mod? If not, well I hope it is. xDD it's the right map <3

[General]

Nice diff names! Also, the mapset is pretty good thank you!
I can't check it properly, but I think General is fine. (not at home, still language stay, will recheck if you like if I'm at home agian) I pay a lot of attention to general things, i think it should be fine

[Precious]

00:12:098 (7) - I think you could improve this blanket to 00:10:956 (4) - , i mean, why not xD sure
00:12:670 (1,2) - Try: 1: 169 200 2:320 320 , you would create a nice blanket with 5 and 2, and a nice path between the first circle and the last slider of this part. my pattern is ugly, so i changed it to something different :3/
00:13:813 (4,5) - Try Ctrl + g once, not for the placing but for the rhythm. sounds better in my ears, something is wrong about the current one. yes! sounds better
00:18:956 (4) - What about a Little stack here? You create a nice jump for afterwards, and you build up some Tension, try 160 64 I don't really like this jump, sorry. It feels kinda strange here, I'm sure that this part is supposed to be calm :<
00:27:527 (8) - Idk why, but i feel a quiet finish here.. xDD It sounds so empty without, maybe a whistle ? Try it yourself drum-hitnormal o3o/
00:40:098 (6) - NC for consistency?
00:44:670 (5) - Same here yes for these two!
01:12:956 (2) - Add a custom whistle here? It doesn't fit the consistency, but for me it sounds like a good finisher of this part. Try to lower the hitsounds for the following sliders as well! It's a bit annoying, well the sliderslide is. sure, why not?
01:32:098 (8,9,1) - Check your distance snap please and make it the same between them! D:
01:48:670 (8) - Nice slider shape but this breaks the flow pretty much, make it the same like the others, a jump is a must here imo. I'll think about this one, I don't feel like killing this slider now, sorry ;_;/
02:21:527 (7) - If you added the custom whistle above, please do it here as well! ~
02:48:384 (2,3) - "blanket" try to make the curve of 3 a bit curvier. <3 i love blanket sliders
02:51:241 (7) - For a nicer path/flow, try moving this a bit to the left, and same to 8 of course to Keep the flow! yes!
02:54:384 (5,6) - Time to make the map a bit confusing: I think an anti jump would definetly help emphasizing this part! 5: 432 168 6: 424 168 hueheuhue I'M SO MEAN! YES LET'S MAKE IT A BIT CHALLENGING
03:03:813 (8) - Maybe do the same as above, but it might be too much then. But i really recommend the one above o3o not sure, I think weird and ugly slider emphasizes this part goo enough ;_;/

Really really nice map you've made there bakari! I enjoyed playing it, very consistent, really nice slider shapes, good good The only Thing i could say something against are the hitsounds, sometimes i think they are missing, but not sure if it's on purpose :/ probably ;_;/ I'll get some hitsounds modding :3

[Broken]

00:09:241 (1,2,3) - Try a triangle shape? yes!
00:17:813 (2,3) - o.o Well the Long slider doesn't really fit, and I think you Need NC on 3 o,o' Try to make it more 'DAPDAPDAPAAA' or w/e this part is alled xDD yes, changed rhythm
Also, I'm not sure anymore if all These dapdapdapaaa parts Need NC, if yes, please do so o.o but up to you I don't think it's really needed here.
03:13:241 (1,2,3) - Triangle shape again xD ~
03:19:527 (2,3) - try making a better blanket here again! ~

Good for an easy, not much to Point out actually lol yaay \o/

good luck bakakari! take a star <3

Irreversible wrote:

[Slow'rus-Fragile]

00:32:098 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Please hitsound this part, it feels very empty - ok
00:44:670 (3) - And please make NC to all These parts, it's definetly something 'new' - some of that parts already have NC, so, I leave it "as is" for now
01:34:956 (4) - Stack on 2 ! Well, try it - c:
01:40:670 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsound this part as well, please¨ - ok
02:54:956 (6) - NC, he starts singing again - ok

That's all i can find for now, pretty nice rhythm for normal, and maybe there are some more NC mistakes, but the map has no mods yet, so that's all I can find for now Thank you! :3

happy623 wrote:

nice gif

Slow-ru's Fragile

1. 00:15:813 - Useless inherited point
2. 00:17:241 (1,2,3) - Put some inherited point just like 00:12:670 (1,2,3) or 00:40:098 (1,2,3) ?
3. 00:42:384 (1) - remove NC and put the NC at 00:44:670 (3) instead. It can consist with your NC patterns
4. 01:06:384 (2) - slider's head stack with 01:04:670 (7)
5. 01:36:670 (6) - stack with 01:34:956 (4) 's tail
6. 01:48:670 (5) - NC to keep the your NC patterns consistently
7. 01:53:241 (4) - ^
8. 02:03:527 (2) - NC here? It fits the music imo
9. 02:14:956 (6) - make it blanket with 02:13:813 (5,1) ?
10. 02:21:813 (1) - remove whistle ? Or make a lower volume
11. 03:29:241 (8) - how about lined it up with 03:28:098 (7) like this
    SPOILER

    

Applied everything for my diff. Thank you! :з