Jin - Ayano no Koufuku Riron · forum

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Let's go!

* No general issues. Let's go ahead →

[Yukari's Theory]
♥ The entire diff is clean and sounds fine, but...
03:58:796 (3) - This loop slider can be improved as explained at Making Delicious Sliders.

[Luka's Theory]
♥ Like the other diff, this one sounds fine, but...
03:54:610 (5,6,7) - A bit confusing and harder-to-read overlapping here. A suggestion is presented here → http://puu.sh/3iY0C.jpg ← but not so good (mainly for the flow), but at least was made more readable.

And that's it ^^

Perfect mappers live here (: so take a

and GO GO RANK ^^

Att.

(BATs, let's check and Bubble this!)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-06-19T02:21:42+00:00

from your queue

Luka's theory

00:06:121 (6) - 感觉这个不好, 要删掉
00:30:889 (3) - 稍微往里一点..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820642
00:56:354 (5) - 这个都叠到下面去了.. 我觉得让(1)和绿色的(3)叠在一起, 然后整个拉上去比较好
01:11:354 (8) - blanket没做好
01:17:284 (1) - ^
01:25:307 (6) - 出去了。。你看看这样行不 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820648
02:07:168 (1) - 试试放个3/4在这里
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 叠的不科学, 你test看看需不需要手动
02:20:424 (8,1) - 好
03:34:377 (2) - 这样舒服一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820656
03:50:249 (6,1) - 这是什么! 用个滑条接在03:50:075 (5) - 吧 233
03:55:133 (6) - 不好看

Yukari's Theory

00:02:982 (2) - blanket没摆好
00:58:796 (4) - 这个往右一点
00:59:493 (5) - 然后这个节奏有点不对, 你把reverse去了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820659
01:07:866 (3) - blanket没摆好其实右边的flow还好一点
04:40:656 (1,2) - blanket

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2013-06-24T15:51:12+00:00

大哥にゃ

[General]
IA是屬於Vocaloid3系列的tags記得加個3~

[Yukari's Theory]

00:21:121 Spinner 從00:20:598 - 00:23:912結束
01:05:773 (1) 去whistle +finish
01:28:098 (1) ^
01:49:726 (1) -NC 01:50:424 (2) +NC
02:01:586 (1) 去whistle +finish
02:04:377 (4) ^ 相反
02:43:447 (1) 去whistle +finish
02:54:610 (1) ^
03:16:935 (1) ^
03:27:400 -NC 03:28:098 (2) +NC

[Luka's Theory]

02:12:226 +note (因為shi-awase是連在一起的 -/-)
02:29:493 (6) 再折返一次? (慢著)
02:48:505 +note (vocal..)
03:15:540 (8) 拉長到 03:16:063 結束
03:18:156 +note?
04:41:703 (2,3) http://puu.sh/3ndDe.jpg
04:44:144 (9) http://puu.sh/3ndFi.jpg
04:48:330 (4) http://puu.sh/3ndIc.jpg

~~大哥可不可以求mutualにゃ。~~

Yutsuki yukari

Yutsuki yukari 2013-06-26T06:25:19+00:00

jogfi2002

189 posts

Joined July 2009

jogfi2002 2013-07-04T14:04:11+00:00

[General]

无。

[Yukari's Theory]

感觉这个难度是只想在白线上下NOTE？

00:52:517 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？
00:59:493 (5) - 移到284,92
01:06:470 (2,3) - 包好，或者把NOTE往右上挪一下
01:12:052 (1) - 换成一个1/4 slider
01:37:866 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？
02:31:761 (1) - spinner离上一个NOTE太近，建议放在红线上开始，也更合节奏
02:56:005 (2) - 缩短为1/4的slider
02:57:051 - 如果你有考虑在白线之外的地方上NOTE，这里可以加一个（在上一条修改了的前提下）
05:07:865 (3,4) - 有一点点难看
05:16:935 (1) - 这个spinner实在是有点nazi，太长而且不舒服

[Luka's Theory]

这个应该是HARD难度？
AR改成7好像比较舒服。

00:02:284 (2,3) - 建议改成这样：

00:05:424 (5,6) - 建议改成这样：

00:06:819 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跟人声会更好
00:16:586 (1) - 缩短slider，在白线结束更自然，后面类似的排列同感（打的时候感觉不太顺）
00:46:935 (2) - 这个地方也是改成2note+1slider感觉比较顺
00:55:831 (4,5) - 有点出界了
01:03:331 (2) - 换成3个NOTE如何？
01:14:145 (1) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:09:261 (4,5,6) - 没叠好，看间距貌似是故意这么放的？
02:12:575 (4) - 删掉
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 建议改成这样：

02:18:330 (3) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:19:028 (4,5) - 如果上面那条改了，这里就合成一个slider吧
02:32:284 (1) - 不在10那里开始么- -
02:56:354 (5,6) - 合成一个slider
03:07:168 (7) - 同00:16:586 (1)
03:41:703 (1) - ^
03:44:144 (6,7) - 有点难看
04:09:784 (1) - 这个倒是可以在长白线上开始
04:53:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - 或者可以考虑下这样：（现在这个节奏，前面的折返slider有点怪，后面的单点没问题）

就这么多吧~

The-Gabe

70 posts

Joined March 2013

The-Gabe 2013-07-04T22:57:52+00:00

I am a noob at modding..........

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

hoLysoup 2013-07-06T07:13:25+00:00

hihi~

[Yukari]
01:47:633 (3) - NC?
01:49:726 (1,2) - and then switch NC here?
04:08:563 (2) - slider end finish?
04:46:935 (1) - add strong beat here? or maybe drum sound
that's all ~

[Luka]
00:08:563 (5) - 這要不往上彎？
00:55:831 (4,5) - 會不會太下面了一點？圈圈有點被遮住
01:04:377 (4) - 這個好像.. off timing, 跟背景音樂聽起來有差距. 我也不知道該怎麼修, 再多加紅線？
01:06:121 (5) - NC?
01:12:924 (5,6,7) - 雖然我試玩的時候沒有miss, 但是這個擺法有點confusing?
01:50:424 (3) - NC?
02:12:749 (5) - NC? combo有點太長了
03:05:772 (4,5) - (5)不要疊在(4)上面？ like here: 03:07:168 (7,8)
03:26:703 (7) - NC?
03:50:249 (6,1) - mmm.. spacing調整一下？
04:50:424 (1) - 背景音樂很強大　加個重音吧？　或是鼓聲
05:19:185 (2,3,4) - spacing再更多一點？　讓慢下來的節奏更明顯
恩就這樣 :>

difficulty spread的差距會不會太大了一些？　easy的難度過於簡單, 雖然中間還有一個diff
可以m4m嗎？可以的話謝啦～
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/103094

好歌, 加油加油!!

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-07-06T13:45:57+00:00

大感谢0.0

不过这两天可能没太有空。大概后天才能回mod了TAT

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-07-06T14:04:53+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
from your queue

Luka's theory

00:06:121 (6) - 感觉这个不好, 要删掉还行应该
00:30:889 (3) - 稍微往里一点..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820642 k
00:56:354 (5) - 这个都叠到下面去了.. 我觉得让(1)和绿色的(3)叠在一起, 然后整个拉上去比较好 k
01:11:354 (8) - blanket没做好 k
01:17:284 (1) - ^
01:25:307 (6) - 出去了。。你看看这样行不 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820648 AIMOD没报错我就...
02:07:168 (1) - 试试放个3/4在这里好像现在的好点
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 叠的不科学, 你test看看需不需要手动没懂
02:20:424 (8,1) - 好
03:34:377 (2) - 这样舒服一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820656
03:50:249 (6,1) - 这是什么! 用个滑条接在03:50:075 (5) - 吧 233 改了
03:55:133 (6) - 不好看
Yukari's Theory

00:02:982 (2) - blanket没摆好好像还行
00:58:796 (4) - 这个往右一点 k
00:59:493 (5) - 然后这个节奏有点不对, 你把reverse去了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820659 k
01:07:866 (3) - blanket没摆好其实右边的flow还好一点 k
04:40:656 (1,2) - blanket

应该还行

hoLysoup wrote:
hihi~

[Yukari]
01:47:633 (3) - NC? k
01:49:726 (1,2) - and then switch NC here? 好像没必要
04:08:563 (2) - slider end finish? added
04:46:935 (1) - add strong beat here? or maybe drum sound k
that's all ~

[Luka] all fixed except some NCs
00:08:563 (5) - 這要不往上彎？
00:55:831 (4,5) - 會不會太下面了一點？圈圈有點被遮住
01:04:377 (4) - 這個好像.. off timing, 跟背景音樂聽起來有差距. 我也不知道該怎麼修, 再多加紅線？ offset问题，我调了一下应该没问题了
01:06:121 (5) - NC?
01:12:924 (5,6,7) - 雖然我試玩的時候沒有miss, 但是這個擺法有點confusing?
01:50:424 (3) - NC?
02:12:749 (5) - NC? combo有點太長了
03:05:772 (4,5) - (5)不要疊在(4)上面？ like here: 03:07:168 (7,8)
03:26:703 (7) - NC?
03:50:249 (6,1) - mmm.. spacing調整一下？
04:50:424 (1) - 背景音樂很強大　加個重音吧？　或是鼓聲
05:19:185 (2,3,4) - spacing再更多一點？　讓慢下來的節奏更明顯
恩就這樣 :>

difficulty spread的差距會不會太大了一些？　easy的難度過於簡單, 雖然中間還有一個diff
可以m4m嗎？可以的話謝啦～
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/103094

好歌, 加油加油!!

jogfi2002 wrote:
[General]

无。

[Yukari's Theory]

感觉这个难度是只想在白线上下NOTE？

00:52:517 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？直的应该也OK就不改啦~
00:59:493 (5) - 移到284,92 现在这里也还行
01:06:470 (2,3) - 包好，或者把NOTE往右上挪一下
01:12:052 (1) - 换成一个1/4 slider
01:37:866 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？
02:31:761 (1) - spinner离上一个NOTE太近，建议放在红线上开始，也更合节奏 ok
02:56:005 (2) - 缩短为1/4的slider
02:57:051 - 如果你有考虑在白线之外的地方上NOTE，这里可以加一个（在上一条修改了的前提下）
05:07:865 (3,4) - 有一点点难看
05:16:935 (1) - 这个spinner实在是有点nazi，太长而且不舒服没办法，这里变奏，全下note太难，slider的话end会unstack，干脆就这样了

[Luka's Theory] 改了一些0.0大概是节奏上的习惯不同我就不进行大调了不好意思TAT。依然感谢

这个应该是HARD难度？
AR改成7好像比较舒服。

00:02:284 (2,3) - 建议改成这样：

00:05:424 (5,6) - 建议改成这样：

00:06:819 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跟人声会更好
00:16:586 (1) - 缩短slider，在白线结束更自然，后面类似的排列同感（打的时候感觉不太顺）
00:46:935 (2) - 这个地方也是改成2note+1slider感觉比较顺
00:55:831 (4,5) - 有点出界了
01:03:331 (2) - 换成3个NOTE如何？
01:14:145 (1) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:09:261 (4,5,6) - 没叠好，看间距貌似是故意这么放的？
02:12:575 (4) - 删掉
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 建议改成这样：

02:18:330 (3) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:19:028 (4,5) - 如果上面那条改了，这里就合成一个slider吧
02:32:284 (1) - 不在10那里开始么- -
02:56:354 (5,6) - 合成一个slider
03:07:168 (7) - 同00:16:586 (1)
03:41:703 (1) - ^
03:44:144 (6,7) - 有点难看
04:09:784 (1) - 这个倒是可以在长白线上开始
04:53:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - 或者可以考虑下这样：（现在这个节奏，前面的折返slider有点怪，后面的单点没问题）

就这么多吧~

Azure wrote:
大哥にゃ

[General]
IA是屬於Vocaloid3系列的tags記得加個3~ fixed

[Yukari's Theory]
00:21:121 Spinner 從00:20:598 - 00:23:912結束感觉现在这里好一些
01:05:773 (1) 去whistle +finish 音效全改了
01:28:098 (1) ^
01:49:726 (1) -NC 01:50:424 (2) +NC k
02:01:586 (1) 去whistle +finish
02:04:377 (4) ^ 相反
02:43:447 (1) 去whistle +finish
02:54:610 (1) ^
03:16:935 (1) ^
03:27:400 -NC 03:28:098 (2) +NC k
[Luka's Theory] All fixed Thanks so much
02:12:226 +note (因為shi-awase是連在一起的 -/-)
02:29:493 (6) 再折返一次? (慢著)
02:48:505 +note (vocal..)
03:15:540 (8) 拉長到 03:16:063 結束
03:18:156 +note?
04:41:703 (2,3) http://puu.sh/3ndDe.jpg
04:44:144 (9) http://puu.sh/3ndFi.jpg
04:48:330 (4) http://puu.sh/3ndIc.jpg
~~大哥可不可以求mutualにゃ。~~

Last edited by Megurine Luka 2013-07-06T14:34:36+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-07-06T14:14:37+00:00

KevinKang wrote:
; ;我觉的offest是1552（总觉的要比原来那个提前一点）
不管怎么说喜欢这首歌._.

确实=-=不过我直接-30了1557听上去应该差不多

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

hoLysoup 2013-07-09T16:15:38+00:00

( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ☆

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2013-07-14T12:34:43+00:00

Hi~ from modding queue that only accepts 3mins

Oh well, I already modded 3 of ur maps, so from experience, I doubt there would be any problems. ANYWAYS~

General:
~Drums audio and increase volume to 50% for Kiai mode to make it more effective?

Yukari's Theory:
~03:39:231 (1) - Finish on slider head?
~04:37:835 (3) - Curve it the other way for cursor flow for next note? --> http://puu.sh/3CC9P.jpg
~05:07:835 (3) - Move this to the left a bit to align the notes and make game play flow better.Move to X:148 Y:188?
~The map is too simple for me to spot anymore suggestions ><

Luka's theory:
~01:19:347 (5) - Start NC here instead?
~01:50:045 (2) - Move this down a bit for cursor flow.
~02:29:463 (1) - NC here? Since there is an extra reverse arrow.
~03:35:393 (4) - NC for rhythm change.
~04:43:417 (1) - NC here? I think that combo is too long and not consistent with others.

Nicely mapped as always ^^ Good luck!

Papysh

259 posts

Joined February 2013

Papysh 2013-07-21T10:52:38+00:00

Hi, my really late mod from my queue~ o3o
'
Yukari's theory:
00:02:952 (2) - i would like to see that slider a bit moved maybe 3 grids to the right should fix

00:50:394 (3,4) - maybe something like that

SPOILER

01:27:370 (1,2,1,2) - Please, Move that a bit down 01:28:766 (2) - so this can look like

SPOILER

And dont forget to move that down too 01:30:859 (1,2) - because it may be coliding to previous sliders ; p

05:16:905 (1) - Shouldnt that be snapped to the white tick?

01:47:603 (1,2,3,4) - maybe that

SPOILER

02:49:696 (1) - a bit right so it can better look o3o

02:51:091 (2) - a bit up so it can look better : P

03:58:766 (3) - I know that makes no difference in anything but i would like to make that slider look like that

SPOILER

than that

SPOILER

(the hole inside XD)

04:41:324 (2) - maybe better blanket : P

I dont see other things wrong o3o

Luka's theory
That diff look really good for me so there will be only few suggestions
01:31:556 (2) - Maybe that

SPOILER

But you wont like it i guess

01:44:812 (3) - maybe ctrl + g will be better

02:58:417 (4) - maybe a bit down

I cant noptice any other mistakes even after the last break o3o GJ

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2013-07-28T09:46:26+00:00

~~From your M4M Queue~稍后来mod一下> <~~~~
哇一开始没发现这是文乃的幸福理论呀> <
超喜欢~
[General]

良心mapper 多说不了

[Yukari's Theory]

感觉有的地方需要slidertick的音效比如这里01:56:673 -

03:55:975 (1) - 这里放长滑条感觉不太好因为这里有clap的音效如果觉得没有什么问题的话也建议加个slidertick sound

04:41:324 (2) - 这个小滑条感觉要弯一些更好

[Luka's Theory]

00:22:487 (3) - 这个滑条有些不合背景呢感觉不折返一个长滑条要更好

01:06:091 (5) - 这个折返滑条再放平一些好看

01:13:417 (6) - 这个slider感觉可以去掉

01:28:766 (5,6) - 包的不太好有些影响美观

01:34:347 (2,3,4) - 这三个slider的位置感觉还可以用ctrl+shift+R再调整一下（看看三个滑条可不可以摆的角度差相等可能会比较慢而且耗费精力但是效果会很好QvQ

01:51:963 - 这里咱感觉这样好http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897496

02:21:789 (2,3) - 不平行耶故意的咩？

02:29:463 (6) - 这个少折返一次会很棒

03:03:300 - 这里这样呢？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897505

03:42:021 - 这里这样呢？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897508

03:44:114 (7) - 这个滑条再弯一点好看

03:46:905 (3) - 这个滑条咱感觉应该是一个三连击

就这么多了真好听> < star~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-07-31T03:50:22+00:00

Hi!

M4M

[General]
赞！
04:50:394 - KIAI Time 到05:09:928 - ，因为这边开始有伴奏了

[Yukari's Theory]
基本上全部在白点
用些1/2吧（红点），像3连打什么的，不然玩家很容易入眠 >..<
02:07:835 (2) - 大圈圈不好看>w< , 试看这个

*Slider*

176,136,127835,2,0,B|208:96|260:108|260:108|260:44|324:40|324:40|380:76|340:140|340:140|396:164|396:232,1,420

02:33:649 - 休息从这里直接开始吧，或者这里开始02:34:347 -
04:29:812 - 放小声（例：20%），04:31:207 - 这里才放回原声
04:31:556 - 这里加点什么，感觉怪怪的>w<
04:36:440 (2) - 删
04:36:440 - 放slider 到04:36:789 -

[Luka's Theory]
AR: -1 / -2 看起来比较舒服
00:28:766 (4,5) - 距离靠近点，感觉不是很协调
02:29:463 (6) - 故意的吗，还是弹多一下了
02:35:742 - 休息时间
00:14:463 (6) - NC吧，觉得(10)不好看
03:14:812 (1) - ^
02:31:905 (10) - ^
03:42:370 (2) - Whistle
04:08:882 (8) - 稍微移左下点，X: 388 Y:224
04:09:754 (1) - 休息直接开始，或者这里开始04:12:021 -
04:59:463 (9) - NC
05:00:510 (1) - Remove NC
05:01:556 (3) - NC
05:16:742 - 这边开始变太多了 >_<' 试试1/6参1/4 ?
05:22:858 - 声量放30%
05:23:858 - ^ 20%
05:25:358 - ^ 10%

我中文很烂，希望你能读懂 o_o''

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-08-01T09:38:02+00:00

Almost fixed

Sorry due to the updating I forgot where I fixed so ><

But really fixed a lot thanks guys ~

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2013-08-01T10:01:14+00:00

as your request

[General]
難度名不統一嗎?
Kiiwa's theory
Luka's Theory
Yukari's Theory

[Kiiwa's theory]

開AiMod檢查下，有些unsnapped
00:02:254 (1) 改成弧度感覺比較柔軟，因為這歌很輕 http://puu.sh/3QY5g.jpg
00:10:277 (2) 換成slider? http://puu.sh/3QY7t.jpg
00:17:254 (3) 稍微上移到 x196, y88
01:20:743 (2) 這也是像這樣感覺好點 http://puu.sh/3QYke.jpg
很多這種slider我都建議加點弧度，因為歌很柔，不過都是建議而已

好吧真摸不出甚麼東西

Asphyxia

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2013-08-02T22:35:13+00:00

M4M :3

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks!

Yukari's Theory

00:13:417 (2) - Try to stack this with 00:08:533 (2) - ?
00:47:603 (4) - Slider's end 1 grid down?
00:55:277 (2) - You could add a bit more curve to this slider
04:36:440 (2) - Stack this properly with 04:37:835 (3) - end?
Really nice diff, nothing else to say :3

Kiiwa's Theory

-1 AR? -1 HP?
00:59:812 (4) - I think this touches the hp bar.
01:18:650 (2) - end touches the hp bar-
Nice diff~

Luka's Theory

-1 Ar?
00:16:556 (1,2) - Stack them?
00:56:324 (5) - can you put this anywhere else, looks funny coz stacked
01:01:382 (4) - Stack them?
01:04:347 (4) - ^
01:07:487 (3) - ^
01:14:812 (2) - ^
01:17:777 (2) - ^
01:21:963 (5) - ^
01:28:766 (5) - ^
01:31:556 (2) - ^
02:05:045 (2) - ^
02:21:789 (2) - ^
02:50:743 (5) - ^
Not going to mention these anymore.
03:06:440 (5) - This is right under 03:05:742 (4) - end but 03:07:835 (8) - isn't, imo fix some1 else?
03:26:673 (7) - 2 grids left?
Nice diff also~

Really nice mapset and beautiful song, have a star!

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-08-03T16:06:46+00:00

Thanks for modding~

But I don't have free time in weekends since my dad's friends visit these two days~

I will mod back next week ~ sorry for that.

abalee

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2008

abalee 2013-08-04T14:25:40+00:00

reversearrow 感觉颜色太淡了，如果遇上黄色的note的话会看不清，考虑改一下？
最后一个timing point 我建议将BPM设成57.500，将 spinner end对准靠后面的那个钢琴音。
考虑一下统一每个diff.的结尾。
早上醒来居然被马肉T出去了(躺

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-08-04T16:41:32+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
M4M :3

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks!

Yukari's Theory
00:13:417 (2) - Try to stack this with 00:08:533 (2) - ? nope No stack in Easy -v-
00:47:603 (4) - Slider's end 1 grid down? k
00:55:277 (2) - You could add a bit more curve to this slider k
04:36:440 (2) - Stack this properly with 04:37:835 (3) - end? impossible to stack with current DS
Really nice diff, nothing else to say :3

Kiiwa's Theory
-1 AR? -1 HP? HP-1 Others all fixed
00:59:812 (4) - I think this touches the hp bar.
01:18:650 (2) - end touches the hp bar-
Nice diff~

Luka's Theory
-1 Ar?
00:16:556 (1,2) - Stack them?
00:56:324 (5) - can you put this anywhere else, looks funny coz stacked
01:01:382 (4) - Stack them?
01:04:347 (4) - ^
01:07:487 (3) - ^
01:14:812 (2) - ^
01:17:777 (2) - ^
01:21:963 (5) - ^
01:28:766 (5) - ^
01:31:556 (2) - ^
02:05:045 (2) - ^
02:21:789 (2) - ^
02:50:743 (5) - ^
Not going to mention these anymore.
03:06:440 (5) - This is right under 03:05:742 (4) - end but 03:07:835 (8) - isn't, imo fix some1 else?
03:26:673 (7) - 2 grids left? fixed
Those overlaps are intentional~ so I will keep it ~ thanks for the star =3=
Nice diff also~

Really nice mapset and beautiful song, have a star!

Azure's mod all fixed so no more specific reply 0.0

abalee wrote:
reversearrow 感觉颜色太淡了，如果遇上黄色的note的话会看不清，考虑改一下？吼
最后一个timing point 我建议将BPM设成57.500，将 spinner end对准靠后面的那个钢琴音。吼
考虑一下统一每个diff.的结尾。
早上醒来居然被马肉T出去了(躺太伤感了T. T

HelloSCV

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Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-08-05T01:51:01+00:00

by pm request

Yukari's Theory

02:31:556 (1) - i'd rather move this spinner on 02:32:254 - here and 02:31:556 - add a note here

Kiiwa's Theory

00:58:068 (2) - try whistle on end ( oh and 02:58:068 (2) - same here )
01:18:650 (2) - touching HP bar
02:20:394 (3) - drum sampleset with clap

Luka's Theory

01:06:091 (5) - NC and 01:06:789 (1) - delete NC
01:08:184 (4) - NC here too
01:14:115 (1) - hmm i think 1/2 slider is better than 3/4 slider
01:26:324 (7) - add repeat here? (and add whistles on end 01:25:277 (6,7) - here)
02:21:091 (1) - well i think this sudden anti-jump can cause confusing for players as 1/4 beat since you didn't used it before
03:36:440 (7) - NC
03:47:603 (5) - ^ 03:48:649 (1) - delete this and 03:50:393 (7) - add NC here
04:07:138 (3) - clap on end fits nice
04:09:755 (1) - move this spinner to 04:09:929 - here? (oh and yes reduce spinner's length then)
04:43:068 (6) - NC
04:51:091 (2) - drum sampleset is purposed?
05:20:094 (4) - maybe clap

well i tried to map this but you faster than me haha, nice diffs, good luck!

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-08-05T02:46:04+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
by pm request

Yukari's Theory

02:31:556 (1) - i'd rather move this spinner on 02:32:254 - here and 02:31:556 - add a note here

Kiiwa's Theory

00:58:068 (2) - try whistle on end ( oh and 02:58:068 (2) - same here )
01:18:650 (2) - touching HP bar
02:20:394 (3) - drum sampleset with clap

Luka's Theory

01:06:091 (5) - NC and 01:06:789 (1) - delete NC
01:08:184 (4) - NC here too
01:14:115 (1) - hmm i think 1/2 slider is better than 3/4 slider
01:26:324 (7) - add repeat here? (and add whistles on end 01:25:277 (6,7) - here)
02:21:091 (1) - well i think this sudden anti-jump can cause confusing for players as 1/4 beat since you didn't used it before
03:36:440 (7) - NC
03:47:603 (5) - ^ 03:48:649 (1) - delete this and 03:50:393 (7) - add NC here
04:07:138 (3) - clap on end fits nice
04:09:755 (1) - move this spinner to 04:09:929 - here? (oh and yes reduce spinner's length then)
04:43:068 (6) - NC
04:51:091 (2) - drum sampleset is purposed?
05:20:094 (4) - maybe clap

well i tried to map this but you faster than me haha, nice diffs, good luck!

I fixed Ez and Nm and Most of Hard
Except the 3/4 slider and the antijump~ I think they're fine =3=

Thanks a lot!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-08-05T12:50:51+00:00

(timing check as requested)

Something I noticed in lower playback rate is the flute sounds earlier than the drums on 05:18:081 (5) so it *sounds* as it need a new timing point (which isn't in my opinion because of the drums) - good luck yet again Megurine Luka~

Example of the .osu file with new timing, taken from your Luka's Theory diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ayano.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 109035
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Ayano no Koufuku Riron
TitleUnicode:アヤノの幸福理論
Artist:Jin
ArtistUnicode:じん
Creator:Megurine Luka
Version:Timing
Source:
Tags:Kagerou Project IA Shizen no Teki P Vocaloid3 ayano's theory of happinness yutsuki yukari kiiwa
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:94351

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"35194485.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,32469,42682
2,155260,162682
2,252719,268728
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1572,697.674418604651,4,2,1,20,1,0
2254,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
21091,-125,4,2,1,30,0,0
43417,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
110394,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
152254,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
208068,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
230219,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
230393,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
249928,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
316957,769.230769230769,4,2,1,40,1,0
317335,740.740740740741,4,2,1,40,1,0
318448,779.220779220779,4,2,1,40,1,0
319205,909.090909090909,4,2,1,40,1,0
320094,1000,4,2,1,40,1,0
321750,1111.11111111111,4,2,1,40,1,0
322861,1043.47826086957,4,2,1,40,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 249,189,172
Combo2 : 190,253,145
Combo3 : 255,239,162
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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148,336,208781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,280,209129,2,0,L|12:312,2,55,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,196,209827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,145,210176,2,0,P|228:152|136:184,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,96,210874,2,0,P|228:52|332:60,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,32,211571,2,0,P|328:88|388:120,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,156,212269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,228,212618,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,212967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,268,213315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,316,213664,6,0,P|172:352|136:348,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,236,214362,2,0,P|18:257|94:282,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,212,215060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,212,215408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,212,215583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,212,215757,2,0,P|248:164|308:168,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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460,236,220641,2,0,P|412:192|404:128,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,280,223781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,232,224129,2,0,P|281:198|356:192,2,110,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,320,225176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,352,225525,6,0,P|444:244|472:168,1,165,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,226222,2,0,P|473:108|446:50,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,112,226920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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308,113,227269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,106,227443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,93,227618,6,0,L|176:201,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,252,228315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,314,228664,2,0,L|277:290,2,55,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,229362,2,0,L|344:200,1,55,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,184,229711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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260,128,238432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,32,240874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,72,241222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,112,244013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,244362,2,0,P|88:64|72:12,2,110,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,148,245757,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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312,108,247153,2,0,P|292:44|240:20,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,184,275060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,260,275409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,316,275757,2,0,P|72:332|24:324,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,336,276281,2,0,P|32:284|16:220,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,212,276804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,148,277153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,124,277502,6,0,L|224:104,1,55,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,88,277850,2,0,P|268:148|368:164,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,188,278548,2,0,P|420:148|488:152,2,110,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,248,279595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,316,279943,2,0,L|272:368,1,55,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,264,280641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,196,280990,6,0,P|232:116|216:84,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,20,281688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,20,281862,2,0,P|244:64|300:60,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,64,282385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,60,282734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,200,283432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,324,283781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,296,284129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,324,285176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,224,286222,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,184,286571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,286920,2,0,P|324:216|416:192,2,165,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,104,288664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,64,289013,2,0,P|328:36|400:44,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,100,289711,2,0,P|413:128|360:128,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,290234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,290409,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,352,291106,1,12,0:0:0:0:
72,304,291455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,291804,2,0,P|200:240|216:180,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,180,292502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,96,292850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,293199,6,0,P|244:112|388:112,1,220,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,116,294071,2,0,L|448:204,2,55,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,116,294595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,48,294943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,48,295292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,68,295641,6,0,P|204:64|160:40,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,108,296688,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,152,297734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,156,298083,2,0,P|408:176|476:160,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,256,298781,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,256,299129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,304,300176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-08-06T09:29:39+00:00

I only changed the last part of the timing Thanks again Niva!

I didn't changed the first timing line cuz other wise some parts of short stream obvious off.

Thanks again for the last part!

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-08-06T16:09:35+00:00

nothing to complain about, take this :~3

mimicoco

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mimicoco 2013-08-08T06:44:43+00:00

good T∨Tb!!

NavyYa

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NavyYa 2013-08-08T18:59:38+00:00

Hello~M4M

Yukari's Theory

I think it is PERFECT~ but

I think hitsound is 40% but a little loud..?

Kiiwa's Theory

my suggest
03:24:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change circles to slider..?

03:29:493 (2) - move to x:236 y: 232

03:35:424 (2) - x:428 y: 232 (more round

)

Luka's Theory

01:49:377 (1) - delete nc and 01:50:424 (3) - nc

My Suggest

delete 00:58:796 (5) , and 00:58:447 (4) - finish at 00:58:970 -
finally add circle on 00:59:145 (5) -

01:50:424 (3) - not add reverse and 02:10:656 (5,6) - delete,

02:09:959 - spinner (ends at 02:11:005 )

03:07:168 (7) - nc

That's it~

Wonderful Song! rank it plz

02:12:749 (1)
02:16:238 (7)
04:01:586 (2) - - I think they are too long

SapphireGhost

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SapphireGhost 2013-08-08T23:03:51+00:00

Here I am, modding Jin songs again.

General
- Tick Rate 2 would work very well on all difficulties here. The BPM is very slow, so many of the sliders are lacking ticks. Raising the tick rate shows off your custom slider tick and improves the map, in my opinion.

Luka's Theory
- I know it's less popular, but I think AR7 would be much more appropriate for a slow map like this.
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - Stacks under kicksliders like this are confusing to read with Hidden. Try to move the notes so they don't hide each other.
02:20:424 (8,1) - Awkward spacing here, just space it normally.
02:32:110 (1) - Starting the spinner on a white tick makes sense here.
04:09:784 (1) - ^
04:54:086 (2,3) - More readable with (3) in a different position than (2).
05:07:517 (4,5) - Similar to above, but with (5) in a different position than (4).
05:16:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is tricky to do with circles. Since the timing is so strange, using sliders might relieve the player of some accuracy stress, but it's your choice.

Kiiwa's Theory
02:22:168 (3,1) - There isn't need for a different spacing here and it plays awkwardly, so stick with 1.1x.
03:51:121 (2,1) - ^
03:59:842 (3,1) - ^
04:29:493 - It might be nice to drag the break to this point.
05:16:238 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1) - Same comment as on Luka's Theory about using all circles at this point.

Yukari's Theory
03:58:796 (3) - This loop could be a bit nicer, see the "Loops" section in this thread. Alternatively, try a different shape since the slider velocity is a bit low and we don't want to confuse new players.
05:13:447 (3,4) - Arranging the notes like this looks nicer.

August 15 would be the best day possible to rank this map, for the Kagerou Project. We'll see if it works out.

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-08-09T02:33:39+00:00

Yes please do it on Aug 15. I will be on a trip and back on mid night of Aug 14, so I will fix it first.

Hmm I think the stacks part and the anti-jump slider is fine in a Hard diff like this. 0.0 ppl can recognize them by approaching circles ouo.

Also I was thinking about AR7 before but still I think AR8 fits better so I wanna keep them.

About the last part, I know circles are kinda difficult but making sliders would makes the slider end off, which once happened in this before, p/1057948#p1057948

I'm trying to avoid it since I don't really know how to adjust the slider end. Also I think circles are fine and easier to make a loop. :3 So I will keep them.

Others are fixed. Including Yukari and kiiwa's diffs.

@[Navy]: Thanks for modding, I fixed the NC and also a bit in kiiwa's diff -3- Thanks again and I will mod your map later.

So self-poped first.

a32

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a32 2013-08-09T04:15:23+00:00

Yeah rank it on aug 15th~~~

Garven

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Garven 2013-08-15T03:28:35+00:00

Beyond the small mods from IRC, the timing seems to be a bit off.

Faust and bliss both got 1610 (and 1611, but the same thing). Try that and see if it works better for you.

Faust

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Faust 2013-08-15T03:53:07+00:00

Hi.

So this song was being talked about in the lounging corner and I happened to be interested.

Timing currently is rather early. Try starting the first offset at 1,614.

Timing:

Slowdown:

BPM: 85.00, Offset: 314,869
BPM: 84.00, Offset: 315,574
BPM: 83.00, Offset: 316,288
BPM: 78.00, Offset: 317,010
BPM: 83.00, Offset: 317,394
BPM: 75.50, Offset: 318,478
BPM: 68.00, Offset: 319,272
BPM: 70.00, Offset: 319,713
BPM: 60.00, Offset: 320,141
BPM: 44.50, Offset: 321,141
BPM: 28.50, Offset: 321,815
BPM: 35.40, Offset: 322,867

Piano:

BPM: 81.00, Offset: 324,138
BPM: 77.00, Offset: 324,878
BPM: 81.00, Offset: 325,137
BPM: 82.00, Offset: 325,507
BPM: 75.00, Offset: 325,872
BPM: 52.00, Offset: 326,272
BPM: 57.50, Offset: 326,848

Faust

osu! Alumni

4,785 posts

Joined January 2009

Faust 2013-08-15T05:14:45+00:00

Sat down with Luka and did some minor IRC modding.

Log:

11:36 Megurine Luka: Faust san 0.0~~
11:37 Faust: ?
11:37 Megurine Luka: SG told me you suggested 1610 for the offset for ayano map 0.0
11:37 Faust: 1614
11:37 Megurine Luka: OAO
11:37 Faust: I'm working on the final stages of timing atm
11:37 Faust: so I'm a little busy
11:37 Megurine Luka: Oh Thanks~
11:37 Faust: I'll make a post
11:37 Megurine Luka: ><
11:38 Megurine Luka: btw besides the final stage
11:38 Megurine Luka: 03:27:415 (8,9,10,11,1) - some parts like this feels off 0.0
11:42 Faust: ah
11:43 Faust: early or late ?
11:43 Megurine Luka: late ;w;
11:44 Faust: I see no problem on my side
11:44 Megurine Luka: OAO
11:44 Megurine Luka: I will check again after you post >w<
11:45 Faust: 1,614 seems fine for the whole thing until the piano
11:45 Megurine Luka: OAO
11:47 Megurine Luka: 03:28:125 (1) - 0.0 this one if 25%
11:48 Megurine Luka: 03:28:823 (2) - but this one is fine
11:48 Megurine Luka: so I think it might be just a little off for this part of drum?
11:49 Megurine Luka: 03:50:102 (7,8,1) - and this part also
11:49 Megurine Luka: but when flows to 03:51:148 (3) - , it back to the correct offset again 0.0
11:50 Faust: the constant timing and metronome is fine
11:50 Faust: the drummer/composer just made it a little slow
11:50 Megurine Luka: O.O~
11:50 Faust: doesn't really matter
11:50 Megurine Luka: ok ouo
11:50 Megurine Luka: Then I have no problem with this offset OUO
11:53 Faust: posted
11:53 Megurine Luka: Thanks ><
11:53 Faust: you're welcome
11:54 Faust: no one told you before that the timing was early ?
11:54 Faust: lol
11:54 Faust: I am surprised
11:54 Megurine Luka: Q.Q no. I actually I was using the 1600+timing before
11:55 Megurine Luka: and was told about the little stream part
11:55 Faust: stream ?
11:55 Megurine Luka: yep just the drum thing
11:55 Faust: oh that
11:55 Faust: it's not really late/early or anything
11:55 Megurine Luka: ;w; yes
11:55 Faust: 03:28:474 (11) - only this is a little bit late
11:56 Faust: by
11:56 Faust: like
11:56 Megurine Luka: ouo right
11:56 Faust: 4 ms
11:56 Faust: lol
11:56 Faust: that's nothing
11:56 Megurine Luka: lol
11:56 Faust: this is a legit mp3 right
11:56 Megurine Luka: do I need to add both of the piano and slowdown part?
11:56 Faust: not a rip from a video
11:56 Megurine Luka: yep 0.0
11:56 Faust: you mapped the slowdown
11:56 Faust: so yeah I guess
11:56 Faust: the piano is optional
11:56 Megurine Luka: ouo
11:57 Megurine Luka: right
11:57 Faust: since you didn't map it
11:57 Faust: but it'll look nice and complete
11:57 Faust: so I recommend

11:57 Megurine Luka: :O O okay that's good
11:57 Faust: let me know if there's anything off
11:57 *Faust takes a break
11:57 Megurine Luka: thanks again =3=
11:58 Faust: np
12:05 Megurine Luka: 05:21:815 (7) - only this one seems a bit late 0.0
12:07 Megurine Luka: http://puu.sh/42stz.png
12:07 Megurine Luka: OAO disconnected
12:08 Faust: maybe 2-3 ms
12:08 Faust: lol
12:08 Faust: noted
12:08 Megurine Luka: ouo
12:09 Faust: 2, yeah.
12:09 Faust: 2 ms changes are actually quite big in this song
12:09 Megurine Luka: yes ouo
12:09 Faust: anything else ?
12:09 Megurine Luka: nope

12:09 Faust: I think the timing is alright
12:10 Faust: if it feels late, then it's probably on-the-dot
12:10 Faust: anything 6 ms and above difference will be an actual problem
12:11 Megurine Luka: oh
12:11 Megurine Luka: another small problem
12:11 Megurine Luka: about the BPM: 57.50, Offset: 326,848
12:11 Megurine Luka: last one
12:11 Megurine Luka: for the last spinner
12:11 Megurine Luka: I feel a bit late 0.0
12:12 Faust: 05:22:867 - the spinner is here ?
12:12 Faust: lol
12:12 Megurine Luka: yep
12:12 Megurine Luka: I mean
12:12 Faust: 05:24:138 to 05:24:878 (12) - is 1/3
12:12 Megurine Luka: the ending

12:12 Faust: by the way
12:12 Megurine Luka: Oh
12:12 Megurine Luka: I see
12:13 Faust: 05:26:848 - so, this is late ?
12:13 Faust: by the way, the snapping for this is 1/12
12:13 Faust: you'll get 4 notes
12:14 Megurine Luka: O.O
12:15 Megurine Luka: but I feel ends at 05:27:043 will be better 0.0
12:16 Megurine Luka: no 05:27:043 is a bit early but 05:27:108 is a bit late TAT
12:16 Faust: uh
12:17 Faust: modify the BPM until it goes to maybe 80 ?
12:17 Faust: I mean
12:17 Faust: 05:27:080
12:17 Faust: or something
12:17 Faust: I don't know
12:17 Faust: 108 is perfect imo
12:17 Megurine Luka: O.O
12:19 Megurine Luka: well you know, it's acutally only a .. what's that called in English? legato?
12:20 Faust: think so
12:20 Faust: piano shit, etc
12:20 Megurine Luka: yep
12:20 Megurine Luka: so just let it be 108 0.0 ~
12:20 Faust: yay
12:20 Megurine Luka: I will make the timing in other diffs consistent and then upload \:D/
12:20 Faust: sure
12:20 Faust: I won't post a full mod
12:20 Faust: unless you really really want me to
12:21 Megurine Luka: :O timing is fine Really thanks!
12:21 Faust: hehe
12:21 Faust: you're welcome.
12:29 Faust: are you a guy or a girl ?
12:29 Faust: sometimes people refer to you as "she"
12:29 Faust: and then some Chinese as "he"
12:40 Megurine Luka: oh
12:40 Megurine Luka: I am a girl
12:41 Megurine Luka: :S
12:47 Megurine Luka: hmm can you actually take a full mod and rebub? cuz SG and me both wish it can be ranked today >.<
12:49 Faust: :S
12:49 Faust: S:
12:51 Megurine Luka: Q.Q
12:51 Faust: SG can't rebubble ?
12:51 Faust: lol
12:51 Megurine Luka: he wants to rank this >.<
12:52 Faust: this guy.
12:52 Megurine Luka: lol
12:54 Faust: apparently, you have unused files ?
12:54 Megurine Luka: OAO!
12:55 Faust: particles
12:55 Megurine Luka: which one 0.0
12:55 Faust: scorebar
12:55 Faust: maker
12:55 Megurine Luka: oh they're not unused
12:55 Faust: marker*
12:55 Megurine Luka: skins

12:55 Faust: probably AIbat being dumb
12:55 Megurine Luka: yep 0.0
12:57 Megurine Luka: particles are the new skins effect ><
12:57 Megurine Luka: the thing like fireworks
12:57 Megurine Luka: but scorebar marker seems useless
12:57 Megurine Luka: deleted
12:57 Faust: map seems fine
12:58 Megurine Luka: OK I will upload again ><
12:58 Megurine Luka: done

12:59 Faust: 04:54:113 (2) - this one is odd though
12:59 Faust: why not shift the slider to - 04:54:288 - instead
12:59 Faust: of having that note there
13:00 Megurine Luka: you mean http://puu.sh/42uth.jpg ?
13:01 Faust: yup
13:01 Megurine Luka: okay
13:02 Megurine Luka: fixed :S
13:02 Megurine Luka: and uploaded

13:04 Faust: nice skin by the way
13:05 Faust: the slider ticks remind me of my country
13:05 Megurine Luka:

13:05 Faust: because of the crescent and star
13:05 Megurine Luka: I see

13:05 Megurine Luka: it's a very lovely pattern
13:05 Faust: kiiwa maps Normal ~ Hard pretty well
13:06 Faust: but her Insanes become difficult
13:06 Megurine Luka: yes
13:06 Megurine Luka: T.T
13:06 Faust: I've seen a lot of her maps (excluding CURRICULUMACHINE)
13:06 Faust: overlap party
13:06 Megurine Luka: yes
13:06 Megurine Luka: overlap party
13:07 Megurine Luka: with curved flow
13:07 Faust: I have a suggestion for her
13:07 Faust: 04:21:148 (1) -
13:07 Faust: http://puu.sh/42uGc.jpg
13:08 Faust: mind if you send a PM
13:08 Faust: that's about it
13:08 Megurine Luka: I can actually fixed for her
13:08 Megurine Luka: as always
13:08 Faust: 04:24:637 (1) - then this slider will be the same
13:09 Faust: to mirror the going back
13:10 Faust: that's all
13:10 Faust: let me once you update
13:12 Megurine Luka: all done

13:12 Faust: we're all set
13:12 Megurine Luka: XD

Without further ado.

SapphireGhost

osu! Alumni

2,618 posts

Joined June 2010

SapphireGhost 2013-08-15T06:47:36+00:00

After a day's work with help from Garven, blissfulyoshi and Faust, the map is now ready to be ranked right on time. We'll dedicate it to the good health of Megurine Luka and family, best wishes to all of you and enjoy your newly ranked map!

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2013-08-15T06:49:32+00:00

大哥恭喜!!

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-08-15T06:50:01+00:00

Conz~

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-08-15T06:51:07+00:00

Thank you all for your help!

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pw384

2,288 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2013-08-15T06:53:18+00:00

好

Kiiwa

928 posts

Joined January 2010

Kiiwa 2013-08-15T06:56:48+00:00

yay~~

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

hoLysoup 2013-08-15T07:09:01+00:00

哇~~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-08-15T07:15:48+00:00

太神了

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-08-17T17:28:59+00:00

excuse me I'm sooo late but....

RAAAAANKEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ^^

Congratz Megurine luka ^^

Thanks Nymph & Faust & SapphireGhost

gfcjyb

44 posts

Joined November 2011

gfcjyb 2013-08-28T10:56:42+00:00

为啥是VOCALOID3的tag。。。我每周搜一次vocaloid看有无新rank图结果把这个漏掉了。。。！

Megurine Luka

2,580 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

Megurine Luka 2013-08-30T20:59:52+00:00

我搜vocaloid可以搜到的啊.w.

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