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Jin - Ayano no Koufuku Riron

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Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年8月15日 at 13:11:21

Artist: Jin
Title: Ayano no Koufuku Riron
Tags: Kagerou Project IA Shizen no Teki P Vocaloid3 ayano's theory of happinness yutsuki yukari kiiwa
BPM: 86
Filesize: 23722kb
Play Time: 05:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kiiwa's Theory (2.81 stars, 344 notes)
  2. Luka's Theory (4.61 stars, 560 notes)
  3. Yukari's Theory (0.86 stars, 211 notes)
Download: Jin - Ayano no Koufuku Riron
Download: Jin - Ayano no Koufuku Riron (no video)
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You're never alone, Ayano.
#善良图#
ALL DIFFs DONE. Enjoy our 善良ness.
ReDL if before 2013.08.06
Skins added and mp3/video changed.
I used the size of new skins from ppy for hit300 hit100 etc. so don't worry about that 0.0
Anyway enjoy the new hit 300 effect with little stars.

This map is ranked on Aug 15. Yes you know why it is important for this song.
Last edited by Megurine Luka , edited 35 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
先占沙发
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
:3 ill make it
EA_ory
5 posts
Joined March 2013
EA_ory
如果是mania的专铺，这谱面真是太棒了！ :lol:
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
OTL完全不会mania
EA_ory
5 posts
Joined March 2013
EA_ory
osu模式吾辈弱爆了，所以只能凭mania模式来感觉= =。mania打起来的感觉真心舒服。
Meisle
158 posts
Joined June 2012
Meisle
; ;我觉的offest是1552（总觉的要比原来那个提前一点）
不管怎么说喜欢这首歌._.
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
From The SLOW BPM Free Mod Queue!

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
Let's go!

* No general issues. Let's go ahead →

[Yukari's Theory]
♥ The entire diff is clean and sounds fine, but...
03:58:796 (3) - This loop slider can be improved as explained at Making Delicious Sliders.

[Luka's Theory]
♥ Like the other diff, this one sounds fine, but...
03:54:610 (5,6,7) - A bit confusing and harder-to-read overlapping here. A suggestion is presented here → http://puu.sh/3iY0C.jpg ← but not so good (mainly for the flow), but at least was made more readable.

And that's it ^^

Perfect mappers live here (: so take a

and GO GO RANK ^^

Att.

(BATs, let's check and Bubble this!)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from your queue


Luka's theory

  1. 00:06:121 (6) - 感觉这个不好, 要删掉
  2. 00:30:889 (3) - 稍微往里一点..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820642
  3. 00:56:354 (5) - 这个都叠到下面去了.. 我觉得让(1)和绿色的(3)叠在一起, 然后整个拉上去比较好
  4. 01:11:354 (8) - blanket没做好
  5. 01:17:284 (1) - ^
  6. 01:25:307 (6) - 出去了。。你看看这样行不 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820648
  7. 02:07:168 (1) - 试试放个3/4在这里
  8. 02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 叠的不科学, 你test看看需不需要手动
  9. 02:20:424 (8,1) - 好
  10. 03:34:377 (2) - 这样舒服一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820656
  11. 03:50:249 (6,1) - 这是什么! 用个滑条接在03:50:075 (5) - 吧 233
  12. 03:55:133 (6) - 不好看
Yukari's Theory

  1. 00:02:982 (2) - blanket没摆好
  2. 00:58:796 (4) - 这个往右一点
  3. 00:59:493 (5) - 然后这个节奏有点不对, 你把reverse去了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820659
  4. 01:07:866 (3) - blanket没摆好 其实右边的flow还好一点
  5. 04:40:656 (1,2) - blanket
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
大哥にゃ

[General]
IA是屬於Vocaloid3系列的tags記得加個3~

[Yukari's Theory]
  1. 00:21:121 Spinner 從00:20:598 - 00:23:912結束
  2. 01:05:773 (1) 去whistle +finish
  3. 01:28:098 (1) ^
  4. 01:49:726 (1) -NC 01:50:424 (2) +NC
  5. 02:01:586 (1) 去whistle +finish
  6. 02:04:377 (4) ^ 相反
  7. 02:43:447 (1) 去whistle +finish
  8. 02:54:610 (1) ^
  9. 03:16:935 (1) ^
  10. 03:27:400 -NC 03:28:098 (2) +NC
[Luka's Theory]
  1. 02:12:226 +note (因為shi-awase是連在一起的 -/-)
  2. 02:29:493 (6) 再折返一次? (慢著)
  3. 02:48:505 +note (vocal..)
  4. 03:15:540 (8) 拉長到 03:16:063 結束
  5. 03:18:156 +note?
  6. 04:41:703 (2,3) http://puu.sh/3ndDe.jpg
  7. 04:44:144 (9) http://puu.sh/3ndFi.jpg
  8. 04:48:330 (4) http://puu.sh/3ndIc.jpg
大哥可不可以求mutualにゃ。
Yutsuki yukari
Yutsuki yukari
:)
jogfi2002
189 posts
Joined July 2009
jogfi2002
[General]

无。


[Yukari's Theory]

感觉这个难度是只想在白线上下NOTE？

00:52:517 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？
00:59:493 (5) - 移到284,92
01:06:470 (2,3) - 包好，或者把NOTE往右上挪一下
01:12:052 (1) - 换成一个1/4 slider
01:37:866 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？
02:31:761 (1) - spinner离上一个NOTE太近，建议放在红线上开始，也更合节奏
02:56:005 (2) - 缩短为1/4的slider
02:57:051 - 如果你有考虑在白线之外的地方上NOTE，这里可以加一个（在上一条修改了的前提下）
05:07:865 (3,4) - 有一点点难看
05:16:935 (1) - 这个spinner实在是有点nazi，太长而且不舒服


[Luka's Theory]

这个应该是HARD难度？
AR改成7好像比较舒服。

00:02:284 (2,3) - 建议改成这样：


00:05:424 (5,6) - 建议改成这样：


00:06:819 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跟人声会更好
00:16:586 (1) - 缩短slider，在白线结束更自然，后面类似的排列同感（打的时候感觉不太顺）
00:46:935 (2) - 这个地方也是改成2note+1slider感觉比较顺
00:55:831 (4,5) - 有点出界了
01:03:331 (2) - 换成3个NOTE如何？
01:14:145 (1) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:09:261 (4,5,6) - 没叠好，看间距貌似是故意这么放的？
02:12:575 (4) - 删掉
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 建议改成这样：


02:18:330 (3) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:19:028 (4,5) - 如果上面那条改了，这里就合成一个slider吧
02:32:284 (1) - 不在10那里开始么- -
02:56:354 (5,6) - 合成一个slider
03:07:168 (7) - 同00:16:586 (1)
03:41:703 (1) - ^
03:44:144 (6,7) - 有点难看
04:09:784 (1) - 这个倒是可以在长白线上开始
04:53:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - 或者可以考虑下这样：（现在这个节奏，前面的折返slider有点怪，后面的单点没问题）



就这么多吧~
The-Gabe
70 posts
Joined March 2013
The-Gabe
I am a noob at modding..........
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
hihi~

[Yukari]
01:47:633 (3) - NC?
01:49:726 (1,2) - and then switch NC here?
04:08:563 (2) - slider end finish?
04:46:935 (1) - add strong beat here? or maybe drum sound
that's all ~

[Luka]
00:08:563 (5) - 這要不往上彎？
00:55:831 (4,5) - 會不會太下面了一點？ 圈圈有點被遮住
01:04:377 (4) - 這個好像.. off timing, 跟背景音樂聽起來有差距. 我也不知道該怎麼修, 再多加紅線？
01:06:121 (5) - NC?
01:12:924 (5,6,7) - 雖然我試玩的時候沒有miss, 但是這個擺法有點confusing?
01:50:424 (3) - NC?
02:12:749 (5) - NC? combo有點太長了
03:05:772 (4,5) - (5)不要疊在(4)上面？ like here: 03:07:168 (7,8)
03:26:703 (7) - NC?
03:50:249 (6,1) - mmm.. spacing調整一下？
04:50:424 (1) - 背景音樂很強大　加個重音吧？　或是鼓聲
05:19:185 (2,3,4) - spacing再更多一點？　讓慢下來的節奏更明顯
恩就這樣 :>

difficulty spread的差距會不會太大了一些？　easy的難度過於簡單, 雖然中間還有一個diff
可以m4m嗎？可以的話謝啦～
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/103094

好歌, 加油加油!!
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
大感谢0.0

不过这两天可能没太有空。大概后天才能回mod了TAT
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from your queue


Luka's theory

  1. 00:06:121 (6) - 感觉这个不好, 要删掉 还行应该
  2. 00:30:889 (3) - 稍微往里一点..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820642 k
  3. 00:56:354 (5) - 这个都叠到下面去了.. 我觉得让(1)和绿色的(3)叠在一起, 然后整个拉上去比较好 k
  4. 01:11:354 (8) - blanket没做好 k
  5. 01:17:284 (1) - ^
  6. 01:25:307 (6) - 出去了。。你看看这样行不 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820648 AIMOD没报错我就...
  7. 02:07:168 (1) - 试试放个3/4在这里 好像现在的好点
  8. 02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 叠的不科学, 你test看看需不需要手动 没懂
  9. 02:20:424 (8,1) - 好
  10. 03:34:377 (2) - 这样舒服一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820656
  11. 03:50:249 (6,1) - 这是什么! 用个滑条接在03:50:075 (5) - 吧 233 改了
  12. 03:55:133 (6) - 不好看
Yukari's Theory

  1. 00:02:982 (2) - blanket没摆好 好像还行
  2. 00:58:796 (4) - 这个往右一点 k
  3. 00:59:493 (5) - 然后这个节奏有点不对, 你把reverse去了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820659 k
  4. 01:07:866 (3) - blanket没摆好 其实右边的flow还好一点 k
  5. 04:40:656 (1,2) - blanket
应该还行


hoLysoup wrote:

hihi~

[Yukari]
01:47:633 (3) - NC? k
01:49:726 (1,2) - and then switch NC here? 好像没必要
04:08:563 (2) - slider end finish? added
04:46:935 (1) - add strong beat here? or maybe drum sound k
that's all ~

[Luka] all fixed except some NCs
00:08:563 (5) - 這要不往上彎？
00:55:831 (4,5) - 會不會太下面了一點？ 圈圈有點被遮住
01:04:377 (4) - 這個好像.. off timing, 跟背景音樂聽起來有差距. 我也不知道該怎麼修, 再多加紅線？ offset问题，我调了一下应该没问题了
01:06:121 (5) - NC?
01:12:924 (5,6,7) - 雖然我試玩的時候沒有miss, 但是這個擺法有點confusing?
01:50:424 (3) - NC?
02:12:749 (5) - NC? combo有點太長了
03:05:772 (4,5) - (5)不要疊在(4)上面？ like here: 03:07:168 (7,8)
03:26:703 (7) - NC?
03:50:249 (6,1) - mmm.. spacing調整一下？
04:50:424 (1) - 背景音樂很強大　加個重音吧？　或是鼓聲
05:19:185 (2,3,4) - spacing再更多一點？　讓慢下來的節奏更明顯
恩就這樣 :>

difficulty spread的差距會不會太大了一些？　easy的難度過於簡單, 雖然中間還有一個diff
可以m4m嗎？可以的話謝啦～
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/103094

好歌, 加油加油!!

jogfi2002 wrote:

[General]

无。


[Yukari's Theory]

感觉这个难度是只想在白线上下NOTE？

00:52:517 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？直的应该也OK就不改啦~
00:59:493 (5) - 移到284,92 现在这里也还行
01:06:470 (2,3) - 包好，或者把NOTE往右上挪一下
01:12:052 (1) - 换成一个1/4 slider
01:37:866 (4) - 弄成弯的可能比较好看？
02:31:761 (1) - spinner离上一个NOTE太近，建议放在红线上开始，也更合节奏 ok
02:56:005 (2) - 缩短为1/4的slider
02:57:051 - 如果你有考虑在白线之外的地方上NOTE，这里可以加一个（在上一条修改了的前提下）
05:07:865 (3,4) - 有一点点难看
05:16:935 (1) - 这个spinner实在是有点nazi，太长而且不舒服 没办法，这里变奏，全下note太难，slider的话end会unstack，干脆就这样了


[Luka's Theory] 改了一些0.0大概是节奏上的习惯不同我就不进行大调了不好意思TAT。依然感谢

这个应该是HARD难度？
AR改成7好像比较舒服。

00:02:284 (2,3) - 建议改成这样：


00:05:424 (5,6) - 建议改成这样：


00:06:819 (1,2) - 这里我觉得跟人声会更好
00:16:586 (1) - 缩短slider，在白线结束更自然，后面类似的排列同感（打的时候感觉不太顺）
00:46:935 (2) - 这个地方也是改成2note+1slider感觉比较顺
00:55:831 (4,5) - 有点出界了
01:03:331 (2) - 换成3个NOTE如何？
01:14:145 (1) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:09:261 (4,5,6) - 没叠好，看间距貌似是故意这么放的？
02:12:575 (4) - 删掉
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - 建议改成这样：


02:18:330 (3) - 同00:16:586 (1)
02:19:028 (4,5) - 如果上面那条改了，这里就合成一个slider吧
02:32:284 (1) - 不在10那里开始么- -
02:56:354 (5,6) - 合成一个slider
03:07:168 (7) - 同00:16:586 (1)
03:41:703 (1) - ^
03:44:144 (6,7) - 有点难看
04:09:784 (1) - 这个倒是可以在长白线上开始
04:53:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - 或者可以考虑下这样：（现在这个节奏，前面的折返slider有点怪，后面的单点没问题）



就这么多吧~

Azure wrote:

大哥にゃ

[General]
IA是屬於Vocaloid3系列的tags記得加個3~ fixed

[Yukari's Theory]
  1. 00:21:121 Spinner 從00:20:598 - 00:23:912結束 感觉现在这里好一些
  2. 01:05:773 (1) 去whistle +finish 音效全改了
  3. 01:28:098 (1) ^
  4. 01:49:726 (1) -NC 01:50:424 (2) +NC k
  5. 02:01:586 (1) 去whistle +finish
  6. 02:04:377 (4) ^ 相反
  7. 02:43:447 (1) 去whistle +finish
  8. 02:54:610 (1) ^
  9. 03:16:935 (1) ^
  10. 03:27:400 -NC 03:28:098 (2) +NC k
[Luka's Theory] All fixed Thanks so much
  1. 02:12:226 +note (因為shi-awase是連在一起的 -/-)
  2. 02:29:493 (6) 再折返一次? (慢著)
  3. 02:48:505 +note (vocal..)
  4. 03:15:540 (8) 拉長到 03:16:063 結束
  5. 03:18:156 +note?
  6. 04:41:703 (2,3) http://puu.sh/3ndDe.jpg
  7. 04:44:144 (9) http://puu.sh/3ndFi.jpg
  8. 04:48:330 (4) http://puu.sh/3ndIc.jpg
大哥可不可以求mutualにゃ。
Last edited by Megurine Luka , edited 2 times in total.
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

KevinKang wrote:

; ;我觉的offest是1552（总觉的要比原来那个提前一点）
不管怎么说喜欢这首歌._.
确实=-=不过我直接-30了1557听上去应该差不多
hoLysoup
1,846 posts
Joined September 2009
hoLysoup
( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ☆
GIDZ
1,002 posts
Joined January 2013
GIDZ
Hi~ from modding queue that only accepts 3mins :P Oh well, I already modded 3 of ur maps, so from experience, I doubt there would be any problems. ANYWAYS~

General:
~Drums audio and increase volume to 50% for Kiai mode to make it more effective?

Yukari's Theory:
~03:39:231 (1) - Finish on slider head?
~04:37:835 (3) - Curve it the other way for cursor flow for next note? --> http://puu.sh/3CC9P.jpg
~05:07:835 (3) - Move this to the left a bit to align the notes and make game play flow better.Move to X:148 Y:188?
~The map is too simple for me to spot anymore suggestions ><

Luka's theory:
~01:19:347 (5) - Start NC here instead?
~01:50:045 (2) - Move this down a bit for cursor flow.
~02:29:463 (1) - NC here? Since there is an extra reverse arrow.
~03:35:393 (4) - NC for rhythm change.
~04:43:417 (1) - NC here? I think that combo is too long and not consistent with others.

Nicely mapped as always ^^ Good luck!
Papysh
259 posts
Joined February 2013
Papysh
Hi, my really late mod from my queue~ o3o
'
Yukari's theory:
00:02:952 (2) - i would like to see that slider a bit moved maybe 3 grids to the right should fix


00:50:394 (3,4) - maybe something like that
SPOILER
SPOILER


01:27:370 (1,2,1,2) - Please, Move that a bit down 01:28:766 (2) - so this can look like
SPOILER
And dont forget to move that down too 01:30:859 (1,2) - because it may be coliding to previous sliders ; p


05:16:905 (1) - Shouldnt that be snapped to the white tick?


01:47:603 (1,2,3,4) - maybe that
SPOILER


02:49:696 (1) - a bit right so it can better look o3o


02:51:091 (2) - a bit up so it can look better : P


03:58:766 (3) - I know that makes no difference in anything but i would like to make that slider look like that
SPOILER
than that
SPOILER
(the hole inside XD)


04:41:324 (2) - maybe better blanket : P


I dont see other things wrong o3o







Luka's theory
That diff look really good for me so there will be only few suggestions
01:31:556 (2) - Maybe that
SPOILER
But you wont like it i guess

01:44:812 (3) - maybe ctrl + g will be better


02:58:417 (4) - maybe a bit down


I cant noptice any other mistakes even after the last break o3o GJ
Selisi
721 posts
Joined October 2012
Selisi
From your M4M Queue~稍后来mod一下> <~~
哇 一开始没发现 这是文乃的幸福理论呀> <
超喜欢~
[General]
  1. 良心mapper 多说不了
[Yukari's Theory]
  1. 感觉有的地方需要slidertick的音效比如这里01:56:673 -
  1. 03:55:975 (1) - 这里放长滑条感觉不太好 因为这里有clap的音效 如果觉得没有什么问题的话也建议加个slidertick sound
  1. 04:41:324 (2) - 这个小滑条感觉要弯一些更好
[Luka's Theory]
  1. 00:22:487 (3) - 这个滑条有些不合背景呢 感觉不折返一个长滑条要更好
  1. 01:06:091 (5) - 这个折返滑条再放平一些好看
  1. 01:13:417 (6) - 这个slider感觉可以去掉
  1. 01:28:766 (5,6) - 包的不太好有些影响美观
  1. 01:34:347 (2,3,4) - 这三个slider的位置感觉还可以用ctrl+shift+R再调整一下 （看看三个滑条可不可以摆的角度差相等 可能会比较慢而且耗费精力 但是效果会很好QvQ
  1. 01:51:963 - 这里咱感觉这样好http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897496
  1. 02:21:789 (2,3) - 不平行耶 故意的咩？
  1. 02:29:463 (6) - 这个少折返一次会很棒
  1. 03:03:300 - 这里这样呢？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897505
  1. 03:42:021 - 这里这样呢？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897508
  1. 03:44:114 (7) - 这个滑条再弯一点好看
  1. 03:46:905 (3) - 这个滑条咱感觉应该是一个三连击
就这么多了 真好听> < star~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Hi!

M4M

[General]
赞！
04:50:394 - KIAI Time 到05:09:928 - ，因为这边开始有伴奏了


[Yukari's Theory]
基本上全部在白点
用些1/2吧（红点），像3连打什么的，不然玩家很容易入眠 >..<
02:07:835 (2) - 大圈圈不好看>w< , 试看这个
*Slider*
176,136,127835,2,0,B|208:96|260:108|260:108|260:44|324:40|324:40|380:76|340:140|340:140|396:164|396:232,1,420
02:33:649 - 休息从这里直接开始吧，或者这里开始02:34:347 -
04:29:812 - 放小声（例：20%），04:31:207 - 这里才放回原声
04:31:556 - 这里加点什么，感觉怪怪的>w<
04:36:440 (2) - 删
04:36:440 - 放slider 到04:36:789 -

[Luka's Theory]
AR: -1 / -2 看起来比较舒服
00:28:766 (4,5) - 距离靠近点，感觉不是很协调
02:29:463 (6) - 故意的吗，还是弹多一下了
02:35:742 - 休息时间
00:14:463 (6) - NC吧，觉得(10)不好看
03:14:812 (1) - ^
02:31:905 (10) - ^
03:42:370 (2) - Whistle
04:08:882 (8) - 稍微移左下点，X: 388 Y:224
04:09:754 (1) - 休息直接开始，或者这里开始04:12:021 -
04:59:463 (9) - NC
05:00:510 (1) - Remove NC
05:01:556 (3) - NC
05:16:742 - 这边开始变太多了 >_<' 试试1/6参1/4 ?
05:22:858 - 声量放30%
05:23:858 - ^ 20%
05:25:358 - ^ 10%

我中文很烂，希望你能读懂 o_o''
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Almost fixed

Sorry due to the updating I forgot where I fixed so ><

But really fixed a lot thanks guys ~
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
as your request

[General]
難度名不統一嗎?
Kiiwa's theory
Luka's Theory
Yukari's Theory

[Kiiwa's theory]
  1. 開AiMod檢查下，有些unsnapped
  2. 00:02:254 (1) 改成弧度感覺比較柔軟，因為這歌很輕 http://puu.sh/3QY5g.jpg
  3. 00:10:277 (2) 換成slider? http://puu.sh/3QY7t.jpg
  4. 00:17:254 (3) 稍微上移到 x196, y88
  5. 01:20:743 (2) 這也是 像這樣感覺好點 http://puu.sh/3QYke.jpg
    很多這種slider我都建議加點弧度，因為歌很柔，不過都是建議而已
好吧真摸不出甚麼東西
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
M4M :3

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks!

Yukari's Theory
00:13:417 (2) - Try to stack this with 00:08:533 (2) - ?
00:47:603 (4) - Slider's end 1 grid down?
00:55:277 (2) - You could add a bit more curve to this slider
04:36:440 (2) - Stack this properly with 04:37:835 (3) - end?
Really nice diff, nothing else to say :3

Kiiwa's Theory
-1 AR? -1 HP?
00:59:812 (4) - I think this touches the hp bar.
01:18:650 (2) - end touches the hp bar-
Nice diff~

Luka's Theory
-1 Ar?
00:16:556 (1,2) - Stack them?
00:56:324 (5) - can you put this anywhere else, looks funny coz stacked
01:01:382 (4) - Stack them?
01:04:347 (4) - ^
01:07:487 (3) - ^
01:14:812 (2) - ^
01:17:777 (2) - ^
01:21:963 (5) - ^
01:28:766 (5) - ^
01:31:556 (2) - ^
02:05:045 (2) - ^
02:21:789 (2) - ^
02:50:743 (5) - ^
Not going to mention these anymore.
03:06:440 (5) - This is right under 03:05:742 (4) - end but 03:07:835 (8) - isn't, imo fix some1 else?
03:26:673 (7) - 2 grids left?
Nice diff also~

Really nice mapset and beautiful song, have a star!
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Thanks for modding~

But I don't have free time in weekends since my dad's friends visit these two days~

I will mod back next week ~ sorry for that.
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
reversearrow 感觉颜色太淡了，如果遇上黄色的note的话会看不清，考虑改一下？
最后一个timing point 我建议将BPM设成57.500，将 spinner end对准靠后面的那个钢琴音。
考虑一下统一每个diff.的结尾。
早上醒来居然被马肉T出去了(躺
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Asphyxia wrote:

M4M :3

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks!

Yukari's Theory
00:13:417 (2) - Try to stack this with 00:08:533 (2) - ? nope No stack in Easy -v-
00:47:603 (4) - Slider's end 1 grid down? k
00:55:277 (2) - You could add a bit more curve to this slider k
04:36:440 (2) - Stack this properly with 04:37:835 (3) - end? impossible to stack with current DS
Really nice diff, nothing else to say :3

Kiiwa's Theory
-1 AR? -1 HP? HP-1 Others all fixed
00:59:812 (4) - I think this touches the hp bar.
01:18:650 (2) - end touches the hp bar-
Nice diff~

Luka's Theory
-1 Ar?
00:16:556 (1,2) - Stack them?
00:56:324 (5) - can you put this anywhere else, looks funny coz stacked
01:01:382 (4) - Stack them?
01:04:347 (4) - ^
01:07:487 (3) - ^
01:14:812 (2) - ^
01:17:777 (2) - ^
01:21:963 (5) - ^
01:28:766 (5) - ^
01:31:556 (2) - ^
02:05:045 (2) - ^
02:21:789 (2) - ^
02:50:743 (5) - ^
Not going to mention these anymore.
03:06:440 (5) - This is right under 03:05:742 (4) - end but 03:07:835 (8) - isn't, imo fix some1 else?
03:26:673 (7) - 2 grids left? fixed
Those overlaps are intentional~ so I will keep it ~ thanks for the star =3=
Nice diff also~

Really nice mapset and beautiful song, have a star!
Azure's mod all fixed so no more specific reply 0.0

abalee wrote:

reversearrow 感觉颜色太淡了，如果遇上黄色的note的话会看不清，考虑改一下？吼
最后一个timing point 我建议将BPM设成57.500，将 spinner end对准靠后面的那个钢琴音。吼
考虑一下统一每个diff.的结尾。
早上醒来居然被马肉T出去了(躺 太伤感了T. T
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
by pm request

Yukari's Theory

02:31:556 (1) - i'd rather move this spinner on 02:32:254 - here and 02:31:556 - add a note here

Kiiwa's Theory

00:58:068 (2) - try whistle on end ( oh and 02:58:068 (2) - same here )
01:18:650 (2) - touching HP bar
02:20:394 (3) - drum sampleset with clap

Luka's Theory

01:06:091 (5) - NC and 01:06:789 (1) - delete NC
01:08:184 (4) - NC here too
01:14:115 (1) - hmm i think 1/2 slider is better than 3/4 slider
01:26:324 (7) - add repeat here? (and add whistles on end 01:25:277 (6,7) - here)
02:21:091 (1) - well i think this sudden anti-jump can cause confusing for players as 1/4 beat since you didn't used it before
03:36:440 (7) - NC
03:47:603 (5) - ^ 03:48:649 (1) - delete this and 03:50:393 (7) - add NC here
04:07:138 (3) - clap on end fits nice
04:09:755 (1) - move this spinner to 04:09:929 - here? (oh and yes reduce spinner's length then)
04:43:068 (6) - NC
04:51:091 (2) - drum sampleset is purposed?
05:20:094 (4) - maybe clap

well i tried to map this but you faster than me haha, nice diffs, good luck!
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

HelloSCV wrote:

by pm request

Yukari's Theory

02:31:556 (1) - i'd rather move this spinner on 02:32:254 - here and 02:31:556 - add a note here

Kiiwa's Theory

00:58:068 (2) - try whistle on end ( oh and 02:58:068 (2) - same here )
01:18:650 (2) - touching HP bar
02:20:394 (3) - drum sampleset with clap

Luka's Theory

01:06:091 (5) - NC and 01:06:789 (1) - delete NC
01:08:184 (4) - NC here too
01:14:115 (1) - hmm i think 1/2 slider is better than 3/4 slider
01:26:324 (7) - add repeat here? (and add whistles on end 01:25:277 (6,7) - here)
02:21:091 (1) - well i think this sudden anti-jump can cause confusing for players as 1/4 beat since you didn't used it before
03:36:440 (7) - NC
03:47:603 (5) - ^ 03:48:649 (1) - delete this and 03:50:393 (7) - add NC here
04:07:138 (3) - clap on end fits nice
04:09:755 (1) - move this spinner to 04:09:929 - here? (oh and yes reduce spinner's length then)
04:43:068 (6) - NC
04:51:091 (2) - drum sampleset is purposed?
05:20:094 (4) - maybe clap

well i tried to map this but you faster than me haha, nice diffs, good luck!
I fixed Ez and Nm and Most of Hard
Except the 3/4 slider and the antijump~ I think they're fine =3=

Thanks a lot!
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
(timing check as requested)

Something I noticed in lower playback rate is the flute sounds earlier than the drums on 05:18:081 (5) so it *sounds* as it need a new timing point (which isn't in my opinion because of the drums) - good luck yet again Megurine Luka~

Example of the .osu file with new timing, taken from your Luka's Theory diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ayano.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 109035
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Ayano no Koufuku Riron
TitleUnicode:アヤノの幸福理論
Artist:Jin
ArtistUnicode:じん
Creator:Megurine Luka
Version:Timing
Source:
Tags:Kagerou Project IA Shizen no Teki P Vocaloid3 ayano's theory of happinness yutsuki yukari kiiwa
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:94351

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"35194485.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,32469,42682
2,155260,162682
2,252719,268728
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1572,697.674418604651,4,2,1,20,1,0
2254,-125,4,2,1,20,0,0
21091,-125,4,2,1,30,0,0
43417,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
110394,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
152254,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
208068,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
230219,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
230393,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
249928,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
316957,769.230769230769,4,2,1,40,1,0
317335,740.740740740741,4,2,1,40,1,0
318448,779.220779220779,4,2,1,40,1,0
319205,909.090909090909,4,2,1,40,1,0
320094,1000,4,2,1,40,1,0
321750,1111.11111111111,4,2,1,40,1,0
322861,1043.47826086957,4,2,1,40,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 249,189,172
Combo2 : 190,253,145
Combo3 : 255,239,162
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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168,320,202153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,276,202502,2,0,P|116:220|112:156,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,84,203548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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108,84,204595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,204943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,244,207734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,300,208083,6,0,P|256:304|208:272,1,110,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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72,280,209129,2,0,L|12:312,2,55,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,316,213664,6,0,P|172:352|136:348,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,248,279595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,264,280641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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180,20,281688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,20,281862,2,0,P|244:64|300:60,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,64,282385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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360,128,290234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,290409,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,352,291106,1,12,0:0:0:0:
72,304,291455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,291804,2,0,P|200:240|216:180,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,180,292502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,96,292850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,293199,6,0,P|244:112|388:112,1,220,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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364,48,294943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,48,295292,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,68,295641,6,0,P|204:64|160:40,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,28,296339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,296688,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,180,297036,2,0,L|152:244,2,55,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,297734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,156,298083,2,0,P|408:176|476:160,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,256,298781,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,256,299129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,316,299478,2,0,P|320:328|284:316,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,304,300176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,224,300525,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,24,301571,2,0,P|204:68|200:156,1,110,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,302269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,224,302618,2,0,P|104:268|152:264,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,303316,2,0,P|296:208|352:224,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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364,84,305060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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320,176,308199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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165,312,309246,2,0,L|132:208,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,124,309943,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,80,310641,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,184,311339,2,0,P|484:200|544:188,2,110,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
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Megurine Luka
I only changed the last part of the timing Thanks again Niva!

I didn't changed the first timing line cuz other wise some parts of short stream obvious off.


Thanks again for the last part!
Nymph
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Nymph
nothing to complain about, take this :~3
mimicoco
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mimicoco
:) :cry: good T∨Tb!!
NavyYa
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NavyYa
Hello~M4M



Yukari's Theory

I think it is PERFECT~ but

I think hitsound is 40% but a little loud..?

Kiiwa's Theory

my suggest
03:24:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change circles to slider..?

03:29:493 (2) - move to x:236 y: 232

03:35:424 (2) - x:428 y: 232 (more round :) )


Luka's Theory

01:49:377 (1) - delete nc and 01:50:424 (3) - nc

My Suggest

delete 00:58:796 (5) , and 00:58:447 (4) - finish at 00:58:970 -
finally add circle on 00:59:145 (5) -

01:50:424 (3) - not add reverse and 02:10:656 (5,6) - delete,

02:09:959 - spinner (ends at 02:11:005 )

03:07:168 (7) - nc

That's it~

Wonderful Song! rank it plz :)


02:12:749 (1)
02:16:238 (7)
04:01:586 (2) - - I think they are too long
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
Here I am, modding Jin songs again.

General
- Tick Rate 2 would work very well on all difficulties here. The BPM is very slow, so many of the sliders are lacking ticks. Raising the tick rate shows off your custom slider tick and improves the map, in my opinion.

Luka's Theory
- I know it's less popular, but I think AR7 would be much more appropriate for a slow map like this.
02:17:284 (1,2,3) - Stacks under kicksliders like this are confusing to read with Hidden. Try to move the notes so they don't hide each other.
02:20:424 (8,1) - Awkward spacing here, just space it normally.
02:32:110 (1) - Starting the spinner on a white tick makes sense here.
04:09:784 (1) - ^
04:54:086 (2,3) - More readable with (3) in a different position than (2).
05:07:517 (4,5) - Similar to above, but with (5) in a different position than (4).
05:16:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is tricky to do with circles. Since the timing is so strange, using sliders might relieve the player of some accuracy stress, but it's your choice.

Kiiwa's Theory
02:22:168 (3,1) - There isn't need for a different spacing here and it plays awkwardly, so stick with 1.1x.
03:51:121 (2,1) - ^
03:59:842 (3,1) - ^
04:29:493 - It might be nice to drag the break to this point.
05:16:238 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1) - Same comment as on Luka's Theory about using all circles at this point.

Yukari's Theory
03:58:796 (3) - This loop could be a bit nicer, see the "Loops" section in this thread. Alternatively, try a different shape since the slider velocity is a bit low and we don't want to confuse new players.
05:13:447 (3,4) - Arranging the notes like this looks nicer.

August 15 would be the best day possible to rank this map, for the Kagerou Project. We'll see if it works out.
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
Yes please do it on Aug 15. I will be on a trip and back on mid night of Aug 14, so I will fix it first.

Hmm I think the stacks part and the anti-jump slider is fine in a Hard diff like this. 0.0 ppl can recognize them by approaching circles ouo.

Also I was thinking about AR7 before but still I think AR8 fits better so I wanna keep them.

About the last part, I know circles are kinda difficult but making sliders would makes the slider end off, which once happened in this before, p/1057948#p1057948

I'm trying to avoid it since I don't really know how to adjust the slider end. Also I think circles are fine and easier to make a loop. :3 So I will keep them.

Others are fixed. Including Yukari and kiiwa's diffs.

@[Navy]: Thanks for modding, I fixed the NC and also a bit in kiiwa's diff -3- Thanks again and I will mod your map later.

So self-poped first.
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