ShadowLord wrote:

Hi. From modding queue

[One Apple]

SPOILER

00:12:933 (5) - Note placement suggestion. It sounds a lot better and follow the beats better IMO



01:57:702 (5,6) - Delete these two notes, and copy 01:56:779 (4) - and place it as in picture.

[Two Apples]

SPOILER

00:13:395 (2) - delete 00:13:856 (3) - and place hitcircles on 00:13:625 , 00:14:087 , 00:14:318 ( 4/5 get claps)



01:13:856 (x) - New Hitcircle + clap

[Lots of Apples]

SPOILER

00:12:934 (5) - orz, split this long slider in two maybe, it sounds a lot better imo.



00:34:857 (1) - remove new Combo

orz! Delete 00:35:318 (2,3) - and put a slider (+new combo) on 00:35:548 that ends on 00:35:895 (blue tick)

00:36:010 (x) - new hitcircle with clap
00:36:125 (x) - new hit circle

see picture for timeline

tutuhaha wrote:

呦luka葛格做中文图啊0口0
必须来混KD啊（揍

一个

00:11:548 (3) - 出框了，还不如移到下面对齐╮(￣▽￣")╭ 额。其实我一直不知道出框的影响是什么._.
00:10:395 (1) - 00:17:779 (4) 0 0这里面有问题的有00:14:318 (6)，放在5中间比较好00:14:779 (1)有点遮5不好看
假如你要改这一溜的话你就用下面这一溜吧，帮你调好了，觉得不够好可以无视╮(￣▽￣")╭
104,48,10395,5,0
144,136,10856,2,0,B|88:136,1,45
104,240,11548,1,0
208,344,12240,2,0,B|208:294,1,50
296,240,12933,2,0,B|360:264|400:200,2,100
320,144,14318,1,0
224,168,14779,6,0,B|224:68,2,100
256,264,16164,1,0
192,344,16625,2,0,B|72:344,1,100
88,192,17779,2,0,B|88:128,2,45

↑ 超好的啊亲，金馆长怒哭

00:38:779 (2) - 哦靠有种歪了的感觉，控一下
00:40:163 (3) - 出框了
00:55:856 (1,2) - 这俩向下移1格就和6是个完美的三角了
01:00:010 (2) - 向下移1格然后你确定要这么摆么4出去了OTL
01:07:856 (3) - X344 Y168
01:18:702 (3) - 尾巴长了一节比较明显哦，调成小格子控一下？
01:31:164 (5,1,2) - 控成这样怎么样

424,152,91164,2,0,B|488:200|464:288,1,150,0|8
368,312,92318,6,0,B|296:312|288:248,1,100,0|8
256,224,93010,2,0,B|177:208|160:119,1,150,0|8

PS建议你最好点一下resnap all note 我在拷贝这组数据的时候放在163note里面偏偏说164...

02:01:856 (4) - 真的歪了
02:07:394 (4) - ....控一下吧超丑OTL...
02:12:933 (3) - 那个小白点控到中间？
02:16:625 (3) - ^
02:19:394 (2) - 搞直它
02:20:318 (3) - 你想把它控对称是吧？那就弧度搞小点比这个好0.0
02:31:394 (2) - 拉到中间啦...
02:33:241 (4) - 一样^
02:40:625 (5) - 弧度搞小点

两个and很多个

快封osu网页了哦草我恨学校网(╬￣皿￣)＝○＃(￣＃)３￣)

就说一下主要的问题
两个里面是怎样，slider控的太乱了，善用COPAY你懂的偷懒必用☆~\(*^ -゜)v（你奏凯
而且这样看起来也比较好，你全图都用的是圆滑的slider所以建议不要有尖尖的那种slider

很多个里面，怎么说呢，我不觉得你这个歌里面适合用0.5X增加难度，而且这个歌最好的增加难度的方法是利用对称之类的来做
另外我不觉得你这里面可以多用3连4连5连6连0 0
圆滑的slider~

完了,有问题游戏PM我,学校网管网封游戏不封你说丫的是不是有问题(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻
音效不错，但是我觉得off是不是还有问题因为我玩的时候差了10秒多难道是我手速问题OTL..........
哎还有，要不要加个sb，就是最后苹果里钻出来条动画版的虫虫o(*≧▽≦)ツ~当然我不会做蛤蛤蛤o(*≧▽≦)ツ（你到底是有多恶趣味欠揍哦(Д゜(○=(゜ 皿゜)=○)゜Д゜)！

1. 01:06:471 - 这里50%感觉太慢, 75%我觉得比较合适

1. 01:31:625, 01:33:471 - 这2个sliertick声音感觉太突兀刺耳了,去掉感觉更好

[Colours]
Combo1 : 213,0,0
Combo2 : 0,128,0
Combo3 : 0,0,255
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~
Thanks for reading the rules~

General
Make "apple" to "Apple"
Make "apples" to "Apples"

One Apple
00:54:010 (1) - Add new combo here and remove the new combo at 00:55:856
01:58:625 (1) - Looks better when moved one grid left
02:03:010 (1) - Remove new combo ?
02:40:625 (5) - Make both sides of the sliders equal

Two Apples
00:47:779 (3) - Add finish
01:04:625 (7) - Make the center of the slider come from the x-axis
02:07:395 (4) - New combo


A Lot Of Apples
Fine~

Muya wrote:

[One Apple]:
01:06:010 (4) - 1 grid left (grid level 3)
01:06:471 (5) - 1grid down, 1grid right
01:18:702 (3) - remove finish

[Two Apples]:
00:47:318 (3) - remove finish

[Loys of Apples]:
01:04:395 (7) -add new combo?
01:19:395 (7) - remove finish
02:01:857 (4,5,6,7,8) - 2 grid up (grid level 3)

Tanmak wrote:

Hi. From my modding queue.

Then, This song is chinese?
Mayday also sang by chinese? @.@ I see.... Mayday is a Taiwanese band :3, so their songs are Chinese


[General]
Remove red time line in first part.
You don't need to set them up there with this BGM. I think if I del the first red time line the BPM of first part will goes to 130.5. And I want 130 so I will remain it.
I asked some a experienced mapper and he told me that I need to remain it. I will ask some BATs/MATs to check. Thanks for pointing it out. :3

[One Apple]
Good. Thanks

[Two Apples]
01:09:471 (5) - remove clap Sorry I wanna remain this.
01:31:625 (5) - ^ ^.
01:35:318 (5) - Clap del the clap on 6

[Lots of Apples]
00:53:780 (3,4) - spacing. Sorry I wanna remain :3
00:54:011 (4) - remove new combo I use it to indicate spacing change :3
00:54:472 (6) - ^ ^
01:25:395 (1,2) - spacing more. (very little more >.<) Yes
02:11:780 (2,1) - ^ Fixed


Great.

ax_pokl wrote:

[One apple]
上次我说到了一开始不规则的节奏是个难点，所以要修改。 Remain. 因为我跟的是鼓点..难是因为冠佑的鼓点下的比较随意，所以不会换成slider :3, 我试过换成slider，因为我选择的音效的关系会相对比较伪和233
现在我还是这么想的。当然，如果你是特意一开始就这么难的，那就另当别论了。
为了不破坏原本的音乐，规则还是要保持的。
我想到一个好主意：

——把00:00:000 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 全部改成slider如何？
这样既不会破坏音乐，又降低难度，而且slider带给人好感？（强烈建议~）

还有，00:05:525 (1,2) - 这两个一开始就重叠并带有时间差，也许对新手太难了？ Fixed

Easy简直是完美。没什么好特别修改的地方了。

另外总觉得绿色有点太深了。之前试过浅绿，被说太刺眼了233。据说深颜色相对对比度比较低会显得柔和233

00:25:856 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里一串位置有点太靠下，能否上移一点？——我不喜欢在太边缘的Note。尤其是太下，因为我的鼠标会移位，时间长了就会移出桌子。。 Remain
00:40:164 (4) - 同理。remain
00:57:241 (3) - 在唱“放”的时候结束？后面改Slider？据说Easy压红线不大好233.虽然我后面有一点压但是能不压就不压了233
01:04:625 (3) - 同理？感觉一直正拍会麻痹。^
01:12:933 (2,3) - 改成4回转的？新人会不知道握多久的，这个我被挑过刺
01:15:702 (1) - 这个太长了？弄点节奏进去吧。。Remain
01:18:702 (3) - “手”的时候停？然后后面可以加短Brake，或者加Note？Remain
01:21:702 (1,2) - 回转slider？Remain,为了和后面搭调
01:23:087 (3) - 3回转？（仅建议）Remain,为了和后面搭调
01:31:164 (5) - 节奏不对哦？故意的
01:33:010 (2) - 拆成1-circle，2短回转？^
01:53:087 (5,2) - 这里可以用3回转了。~~~^
02:12:933 (3) - 3回转？后2circle或slider。多回转一般不用在EZ里，我被MAT挑过所以不好意思233
02:20:318 (3) - 这个不要回转了吧？来个长的？nope
02:24:010 (4,5) - 不介意中间加个circle？（建议）不能压红线所以不好意思
02:27:702 (3,4,5) - “辽阔”，延长slider，删除一个circle并修改circle位置。remain
02:31:394 (2) - 拆。拆了更难吧233
02:33:241 (4) - 拆。^
02:34:394 (1) - 这个大转盘太棘手了，还是弄点节奏吧。remain

大致就这样了。接着检查间距。

TIME1 TIME2 TIME DIS SPEED SPDIS SPABS

1383 1846 463 80 172 47 94
微调远。
28625 29087 462 80 173 34 83
微调远。
90932 91164 232 33 142 83 153
微调远。
92779 93010 231 40 173 39 152
微调远。
137317 137548 231 28 121 69 140
138009 138471 462 99 214 -93 182
139163 139394 231 45 194 20 126
微调远137317 137548。

Easy基本没有问题了。祝你Rank。

ax_pokl wrote:

[Two apple]
感觉和One apple差不多（这是一个严重的问题），反正我是随手FC了。其实相差很多._.你因为打的久了所以都觉得简单，对我来说这三个diff都是可以随手FC的._.
感觉还不错，要说问题基本也没有，只不过感觉circle是比One apple多了点。（这也没关系）

问题就在slider和circle的穿插没有规律。——我强烈建议凡是短拍（1/2拍）都用短slider连起来，长（1拍）尽量断开用circle，除非碰到4个长拍，那么可以选择用2个slider或1circle1slider1circle。
另外有些地方snapp的节奏比较难抓。

具体问题具体分析：（打完一遍感觉有些地方还是要改改？）

00:00:000 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 开头间距很好，怎么感觉到后面就短了呢？也许前面短点也好。后面适当增加距离。——忽略强制距离。NM不建议忽略强制距离，我的EZ和NM全部都是严格遵守强制距离的
00:03:461 (1,2) - 连sliderremain
00:06:675 (1,2,3) - 改ciecle，slider，circle。这里有根红线比较麻烦，所以还是这样
00:12:933 (1,2,3) - 一开始放个回转？remain
00:14:087 (4,5) - 后面缺一个circle？改成回转slider吧？remain

00:17:779 (1,2,3) - 回转slider+circle+空半拍+slider。sorry, remain
00:20:779 (1,2,3) - Jump？前面说过原因了._.
00:23:087 (6) - 短？nope。不跟vocal
00:24:933 (3) - 2短slider？和前面对应就不改了
00:25:856 (4,1,2) - 这个，你听“我，还是”：所以连同后面那2个红note，改成circle+空+slider+slider+空+circle+空空。不跟vocal所以抱歉
00:28:164 (4,5) - 回转？remain
00:29:548 (1,2,3) - snapp效果好。
00:32:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里很好。
00:35:548 (1,2,3) - Jump？原因如上
00:36:933 (4,5,6) - 同理，circle空sildersilder。remain
00:44:318 (4) - 拆！不拆了._.我喜欢那个slidertick
00:45:471 (5) - 回转！不跟vocal
00:46:164 (1,2,3) - reverse效果极好!!!

00:51:702 (4) - 这么多节奏可以加进去，你竟然就这么带过了。。不跟vocal所以这里直接长slider
slider*2或3回转+长slider
00:51:702 (4,5) - 之间+circle
00:54:471 (6) - 取消回转改长slider不跟vocal所以不用
00:58:625 (6) - 提前。不跟vocal所以不用

00:59:087 (1,2) - 3回转。顺便弄下来。不跟vocal所以不用
01:04:625 (7) - 3circle+紧接长长slider（结尾延长到下一节开始）。这里slider可以用timming调变速变慢。没有节奏上或是音量上的变慢或变轻所以不改SV了
01:11:548 (3) - slider
01:12:471 (1) - slider
01:18:702 (4) - 取消回转，直接空。（改circle位置。）~~~~~~~remain

00:50:318 (1,2,3) - 顺便说一句，这几个可以删掉以延长brake。break的时间三个难度要一样所以不了，而且这三个是重音啊怎么能删掉呢233

01:24:010 (6) - 短。
01:25:856 (3) - 短2。
01:26:779 (4,5) - +circle
01:27:702 (5,6,7) - 2slider或2+空1circle

02:07:395 (1) - 后+circle连起来！
02:09:241 (4) - 同上。
02:17:548 (3) -

02:21:702 (2) - 改成3个snapp的circle？

以上都不改了._.毕竟我NM不怎么跟vocal的

——后面基本你随便改了，我已经吐槽完毕了，大致意思你应该理解了。

关于难度的问题，可以调整diffcuty？实在不行也可以调circle size。

关于间距——

简直是perfect。


5065 5525 460 112 243 38 73
+长
9240 9702 462 104 225 52 111
+长
13163 13395 232 48 206 36 72
+长
17318 17779 461 130 281 -1 37
18240 18471 231 56 242 39 43
18932 19164 232 57 245 -3 10
19164 19625 461 128 277 -32 56
19855 20318 463 116 250 27 84
20318 20779 461 127 275 -25 44
不稳定
24240 24471 231 40 173 93 152
+长
28625 29087 462 109 235 48 93
+长
34625 34856 231 37 160 112 227
JUMP！！！
41317 41548 231 48 207 86 168
+长
47779 50318 2539 242 95 182 364
JUMP！！！
61163 61395 232 48 206 75 154
+长
67856 68318 462 126 272 12 43
68779 69010 231 50 216 56 44
69471 69702 231 50 216 0 5
69702 70164 462 128 277 -61 131
70625 70856 231 48 207 70 131
71317 71548 231 48 207 0 5
不稳定
79395 81702 2307 88 38 237 474
81702 82164 462 128 277 -239 476
——删
83548 83779 231 32 138 139 278
+长
120702 121164 462 130 281 0 15
121394 121856 462 123 266 15 126
122317 122548 231 29 125 141 286
122548 123010 462 132 285 -160 517
123471 123587 116 128 1103 -818 1357
125548 126010 462 187 404 699 1390
126010 126471 461 128 277 127 566
126471 126933 462 131 283 -6 133
这里还需改改，自己看看吧。
135471 135702 231 60 259 47 90
136163 136625 462 128 277 -18 170
136855 137087 232 40 172 105 232
137317 137548 231 65 281 -109 212
138009 138471 462 131 283 -2 142
138932 139164 232 8 34 249 494
139164 139395 231 64 277 -243 492
这里也是。
147471 147702 231 40 173 94 187
+长
153702 153933 231 48 207 83 166
+长

就这样吧。

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~One Apple~

1. 01:15:241 (5): Move this to x:388 y:324
2. 01:18:471 (3): Move this to x:304 y:144
3. 01:29:318 (3): Move this to x:276 y:228
4. 01:29:664 (4): Move this to x:276 y:128
   
   ~Two Apple~
   
   Looks good...
   
   ~Lots of Apples~
   
   SO MANY APPLES!!!!
   
   Looks good...

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello, how are you?. Looks like you need to mod my beatmap twice...

I need help with something on this. Read first...
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~One Apple~

1. 01:15:241 (5): Move this to x:388 y:324 sorry it's better not to overlap in EZ so...
2. 01:18:471 (3): Move this to x:304 y:144 Fixed
3. 01:29:318 (3): Move this to x:276 y:228 Nope cuz I need a square :3
4. 01:29:664 (4): Move this to x:276 y:128 ^
   
   ~Two Apple~
   
   Looks good...
   
   ~Lots of Apples~
   
   SO MANY APPLES!!!!
   
   Looks good...

You get to mod my beatmap two times! One for soon and one for next time...

• 
  One Apple

1. 非常好~
   
   Two Apples
2. 01:03:241 (3,4) 变成一个slider
3. 01:26:779 (4) 变成两个slider
   
   Lots of Apples
4. 00:46:625 (2,3,4,5,6) 摆歪了
5. 00:48:010 (?) 加一个circle
   

   187,120,47087,1,0
   266,131,47318,1,0
   280,210,47549,1,8
   209,247,47779,1,0
   152,192,48010,1,0

cmn_891127 wrote:

支持中文歌~~

• 
  One Apple

1. 非常好~
   
   Two Apples
2. 01:03:241 (3,4) 变成一个slider Fixed
3. 01:26:779 (4) 变成两个slider Fixed
   
   Lots of Apples Fixed all
4. 00:46:625 (2,3,4,5,6) 摆歪了
5. 00:48:010 (?) 加一个circle
   

   187,120,47087,1,0
   266,131,47318,1,0
   280,210,47549,1,8
   209,247,47779,1,0
   152,192,48010,1,0

完全挑不出什么大毛病，囧...

1. HP Drain change to 6?
2. OD change to 8? (maybe)

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

allo~~ xD
*i just can give some suggestion~*

One Apple
00:12:241 (4) - add a New Combo?? k
02:03:241 (5) - change to a circle? k
02:06:010 (x) - add a circle? I'm afraid it's hard for EZ player to get the next circle, but anyway I will add it. Need MAT to check this.
02:14:779 (1) - this slider end at 02:15:241 - ? k
02:18:471 (1) - ^ 02:18:933 - ? k
02:31:394 (2) - up 1 grid. x:356 y:200 Fixed

Two Apples
00:07:395 (3) - overlap at the previous circle (2) ? k
00:08:318 (4) - change to a circle? I wanna a slider
01:26:779 (4,1,2) - dont make this style on NORMAL difficulty, because it will make NORMAL PLAYERS confused. Fixed

Lots of Apples

1. HP Drain change to 6? k
2. OD change to 8? (maybe)

nope cuz this song is hard to get high ACC so rather remain AR7
01:25:395 (1) - remove this New Combo indicate spacing change so
01:32:318 (6) - why dont start the New Combo at here?? Fixed
01:35:087 (3) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/5OSf kawaiii.
01:52:164 (3) - up 1 grid? x:204 y:172 Fixed
01:59:087 (2) - make it like this? --> http://puu.sh/5OSx Remain :>
02:09:703 (1) - remove this New Combok
02:11:549 (1) - ^indicate spacing change :>
02:27:703 (6) - add a New Combo?k
02:38:780 (4) - ^K

----
Nice Mapset!!
shoot a apple star for you xD
GoodLuck

goodbye wrote:

[L]
00:14:548 (11) - 加个note 顺便加个clap
00:53:318 (9) - 取消new combo 然后后面的10(也就是本来的2)new combo
00:55:164 (1) - 取消new combo
00:55:395 (2) - add new combo 对应前面
00:55:857 (4) - ^
00:56:318 (6) - ^
00:59:549 (2) - 2可以往左移一点...让它的头部和1的头部之间距离看上去与1头部与00:58:626 (4) - 尾部之间的距离差不多
01:09:472 (1) - 取消new combo
01:11:087 (3,4,5) - 说实话不太喜欢这节奏 我觉得还是长slider还是结束在01:11:318这，然后4移到01:11:548 比较好
02:09:703 (4) - 不太懂为什么这里spacing突然变了233 如果一定要变最好new combo一下
02:33:703 (4) - 往左边移 大概移到4的尾部和3的尾部之间(眼睛看上去的)距离和3尾部到5之间的距离(目测)一致
02:36:472 (4,5) - 往右移 尽量不要和3贴着

其他没什么了233 那两个难度ai mod都mod不出我也没什么好说的(懒病

SamiPale wrote:

[General]
这个Finish音。。由于default normal finish音后滞音很多所以这个音配合音乐原Finish音(如00:22:164)，一开始听会觉得很囧。。。尽管不是最佳的解决方法，还是建议跟原音乐finish重叠的finish音降低20%左右音量或者换个其他finish音或者不要，或者让人听个十次估计也没事了...
00:51:702(4) - Finish或许音量再低点会好些（如果是100%音量的default finish个人觉得还不如不加好）
结尾的那个finish我个人建议不加

拖啊拖啊拖结果没什么好说，star

winber1 wrote:

sorry for a lot of combo mod. apply them if you like.

lol cute skin :3

Lots of Apples

00:26:318 (6) - new combo?
00:30:471 (5,6,7) - i would move all of these notes back by 1/2 tick, and then add a note at 00:30:702
00:32:318 (2,3,4) - ^ same as above excpet add a note at 00:32:548 (4) -
00:33:357 (2) - delete note and rearrange spacing
00:35:780 (5,6) - i would switch the order of these notes so combo 6 is at 00:35:780 and combo 5 starts at 00:36:010. This just sounds a little better and is a little more interesting to play for me. rearrange spacing if needed.
00:42:934 (5) - new combo
00:51:703 (4) - new combo
01:08:318 (4) - ^?
01:18:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream just doesn't fit here.
01:19:856 - insert small break?
01:25:395 (1,1) - remove new combos, they don't really make sense.
01:30:472 (4) - new combo and remove combo at 01:31:164 (1) -
01:35:087 (3) - sounds better if you end this note at 01:35:779 and add another note at 01:36:010
02:09:011 (1) - remove combo and add new combo at 02:09:241 (2) -

Two Apples

00:28:164 (4) - new combo?
00:31:395 (4) - ^
00:32:549 (1) - remove combo
00:47:318 (3) - try this:?

SPOILER

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00:51:702 (4) - new combo
00:54:010 (2) - ^
00:57:241 (5) - ^
01:00:933 (3) - ^
01:04:625 (6) - ^
01:08:318 (4) - ^
01:12:010 (4) - ^
01:12:471 (1) - remove combo
01:15:702 (4) - new combo
01:17:087 (1) - remove combo
01:17:548 (2) - new combo
01:19:856 - add break?
01:23:087 (4) - new combo
01:26:779 (4) - new combo
01:27:241 (1) - remove combo
01:30:471 (4) - new combo
01:54:471 (5) - ^
01:55:395 (1) - remove combo
02:00:702 (3) - i would not stack this note actually, but that's just me
02:09:241 (4) - new combo
02:12:933 (3) - ^
02:18:471 (4) - ^
02:24:010 (4) - ^
02:29:087 (2) - move note 1/2 tick back
02:35:087 (4) - unstack?
02:35:548 - break?

One Apple

00:02:307 (2,3) - i would change this into a slider
00:03:461 (4) - new combo
00:05:985 (2,3) - change into a slider?
00:07:856 (5) - new combo
00:17:779 (4) - add one more repeat
00:18:471 - add break
00:51:702 (4) - new combo
00:54:010 (1) - remove combo
00:57:241 (6) - new combo
01:02:779 (1) - remove combo
01:04:625 (7) - new c ombo
01:52:625 (4) - ^
02:07:394 (4) - ^
02:11:087 (1) - remove combo
02:12:933 (6) - new combo
02:18:471 (1) - remove combo
02:20:318 (7) - new combo
02:25:856 (1,2) - i would not use these. They make the difficulty harder than needed and they don't really follow anything in the music.

nice map! :3

ziin wrote:

[skin]
approachcircle.png isn't a circle and looks bad.
spinner is wobbly, and spinner background isn't the same as the background. read this to fix Thx and I will ask Aoi to fix this

[timing]
I don't see the need for 3x red timing sections. The beginning can't be that far off, though I am hitting ~15 ms early
Need more people to check the timing._. Thx anyway.

[one apple]
00:08:318 - no note in BG
00:13:856 - ^, or at least not a drum
00:14:318 (3) - ^
There's a lot of this through the song, which makes it sound weird, since the notes do not match the song, or at least with a bass drum hitnormal. If you use a different hitnormal for those notes (hi hat, for example) it will sound better, but it's a lot of work to do so.
Thx for mentioning that. Although I dont think it's a big deal~I will just decrease the volume to make it sounds better.
02:25:856 (1,2) - very minor, these overlap slightly when they don't need to.oooops. You're so careful :3

[two apples]
I think you should get rid of the spinner background, and get a new bg for this diff with 2 apples in it Good suggestion. But the song's name is one apple so I prefer to remain :3. Thx anyway.
01:30:471 (4,1) - make these symmetrical? Fixed

[many apples]
needs a background with many apples
kiai is different, 2nd one ends later, probably should fix 1 and 2 apples' kiai instead of this one. Fixed
00:52:730 (7) - move 1/2 later (to blue tick). Repeat wherever you mapped the lyrics incorrectly. Fixed
Tons more overmapping stuff that I don't feel like going over right now. If you care to fix it, listen to all of your 1/4th beats on 25% and delete them if there's nothing in the background there.
01:11:076 (3,4) - reverse these, add a soft slider whistle on the slider. Fixed
01:24:923 (1,2,1,2,1) - strange combos Indicate spacing change :3

1. I prefer to use red to all hit300 elements and green to hit100, blue to hit50, red to hit0 which same to deafault, that would easy to tell what you hit, just personal opinion, depends on you whether fix it or not
2. Maybe you can change the postion of apple in spinner-background, make it appear at the same place to background when spin

1. Beginning part maybe a bit hard for new player, well, I guess it's fine, it fits music then
2. 00:36:933 (1) - Normalfinish here with 90% volume seems nice
3. 01:08:318 (1) - ^
4. 01:23:087 (3) - ^
5. 01:37:856 - How about drag break to here
6. 02:24:010 (4) - Add finish?
7. 02:44:318 spinner - ^

1. 00:22:164 (4) - Add finish? and if you feel it's loud, decrease volume a bit
2. 00:36:933 (4) - ^
3. 01:08:318 (4) - ^
4. 01:23:087 (4) - ^
5. 01:37:856 - Drag break to here
6. 01:52:625 (3) -Add finish? and if you feel it's loud, decrease volume a bit
7. 02:24:010 (4) - ^
8. 02:28:856 (2) - Unexpected jump :/
9. 02:44:318 spinner - Add finish

1. 00:36:934 (1) - Add finish, if you feel it's loud, decrease volume a bit
2. 01:08:318 (4) - ^
3. 01:11:318 (4) - This unique whistle sounds a bit awkward here
4. 01:23:087 (3) - Add finish, and contrl the volume yourself, just you know it
5. 01:37:856 - Drag break to here
6. 01:52:626 (4) - Finish blahblah
7. 02:24:010 (1) - ^
8. 02:38:780 (1) - ^
9. 02:42:471 (5) - ^
10. 02:44:318 spinner - ^

Breeze wrote:

[Skin]

1. I prefer to use red to all hit300 elements and green to hit100, blue to hit50, red to hit0 which same to deafault, that would easy to tell what you hit, just personal opinion, depends on you whether fix it or not <I like green ones, good for eyes :> change 50 to blue to distinguish it from hit0
2. Maybe you can change the postion of apple in spinner-background, make it appear at the same place to background when spin<Fixed

[One Apple] <All fixed

1. Beginning part maybe a bit hard for new player, well, I guess it's fine, it fits music then
2. 00:36:933 (1) - Normalfinish here with 90% volume seems nice
3. 01:08:318 (1) - ^
4. 01:23:087 (3) - ^
5. 01:37:856 - How about drag break to here
6. 02:24:010 (4) - Add finish?
7. 02:44:318 spinner - ^

[Two Apples]<All fixed

1. 00:22:164 (4) - Add finish? and if you feel it's loud, decrease volume a bit
2. 00:36:933 (4) - ^
3. 01:08:318 (4) - ^
4. 01:23:087 (4) - ^
5. 01:37:856 - Drag break to here
6. 01:52:625 (3) -Add finish? and if you feel it's loud, decrease volume a bit
7. 02:24:010 (4) - ^
8. 02:28:856 (2) - Unexpected jump :/
9. 02:44:318 spinner - Add finish

[Lots of Apples]<All fixed

1. 00:36:934 (1) - Add finish, if you feel it's loud, decrease volume a bit
2. 01:08:318 (4) - ^
3. 01:11:318 (4) - This unique whistle sounds a bit awkward here changed to clap
4. 01:23:087 (3) - Add finish, and contrl the volume yourself, just you know it
5. 01:37:856 - Drag break to here
6. 01:52:626 (4) - Finish blahblah
7. 02:24:010 (1) - ^
8. 02:38:780 (1) - ^
9. 02:42:471 (5) - ^
10. 02:44:318 spinner - ^

KingsAL2 wrote:

** THAT BUBBLED =.= ** SORRY ><From WMF ~ Mod queue ~~~

[Lots of Apples]
00:42:934 (5) - New combo
01:08:318 (4) - ^
02:10:395 (3,4,5) - Spacing
02:12:011 (1,2) = 1.6 But 02:12:472 (4,5) = 1.5 only so Spacing problem
02:34:395 (5) - Semi jump,,, plz new combo or change the spacing

[Two Apples]
02:18:471 (4) - New combo
02:40:625 (5) - ^

[All]
Nice map, not much problem ~~~
STAR ~

ax_pokl wrote:

好多天没mod了。
重新打了hard，觉得几乎没有地方要修改了。
Overall diffculry可以降一下，虽然基本能够fc，但是acc不敢恭维啊。
spinner的背景可以改改么？我没一次转上300的（不是我转的不够快）。我根本不知道自己转了多少。。

spinner-background.png能把苹果放中间么？并且颜色深一点。最好加个指针spinner-approachcircle.png什么的！

好了，打卡Editor，看看有没有问题。
[Hard]

00:13:857 (7,8,9,10,11) - 对了，这里一下子上手有点吓人，最好还是把后面的变成slider。

好了，全看过了，真的没什么好改的了。

就mod到这吧。

whymeman wrote:

[Lots of Apples]

01:05:087 (3,4,5) - (5) is a bit too close and makes the jump combo uneven. Make sure to equally space this note out.

Well, it's the only issue i've found so far. Let me know when you get that fixed.

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