Lally wrote:

hi from my queue o3o Hi Lally :3

[Relaxing]

1. 00:20:197 (3) - 2 grind up the 2nd white tick for having a perfect blanket I fixed that blanket a bit :3
2. 01:59:812 (3) - i think is better to place itlike: I prefer to keep the symetry with the slider beginning, it doesn't affect anything anyways
   
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[Average]

1. 00:21:351 (5,1) - this 2 sliders have a bit an inperfect line,i think is better to stack the (5) - with 00:19:812 (3) - and then fixing the spacing and the line with (1) - like: Meh.. You are not the first one in suggest me that, so fixed.
   
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2. 01:44:235 (3) - i think this slider should be like: Hmm.. I like it as it is.
   
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[Challenging]

1. 02:42:889 (8,1) - i think you should do something like this here: Looks better now :3
   
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really nice mapset ,waaah such a noob mod ;_; sorry owo/* star-chan for you

1. Everything seems to be clear (AIMod/AIBat/Manually)! Nothing to point out!

1. Nothing to suggest here.

1. 00:46:351 (1,3) - I would suggest to curve these sliders just like you did on the other choruses, unless you are trying to add variety to the music.

1. 00:30:966 (1) - I believe you meant to add a finish here since you did so in your other difficulties.
2. 01:17:120 (1) - Same as above.

1. 02:51:735 (3,4,5,6,1) - I guess make a better star pattern? If the pattern already flows good when playing, you don't have to change.

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello! Sorry for Delay! Probably not kudosu recommended, but hey it's a mod!

[General]

1. Everything seems to be clear (AIMod/AIBat/Manually)! Nothing to point out! Oh.. Great :3

[Relaxing]

1. Nothing to suggest here. Nice

[Average]

1. 00:46:351 (1,3) - I would suggest to curve these sliders just like you did on the other choruses, unless you are trying to add variety to the music. Hmm.. Ok, you're not the first in suggest that.

[Challenging]

1. 00:30:966 (1) - I believe you meant to add a finish here since you did so in your other difficulties.
2. 01:17:120 (1) - Same as above. Nice catch :3. Both fixed for consistency

[Tough]

1. 02:51:735 (3,4,5,6,1) - I guess make a better star pattern? If the pattern already flows good when playing, you don't have to change. Hmm.. I like how it plays/looks as it is. So, I'll leave that for now.

Excellent map! Nothing much to say! Good luck!

And thanks Gonz for the stars

• [Relaxing]
  
  *Perhaps reduce AR by -1? feels a bit too fast for an easy diff.. but it may be just me.

1. 00:28:658 (3) - Improve this blanket. This note isn't properly making blanket with 00:27:120 (2).
2. 01:26:351 (1) - This note sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle? Or are they following the vocals? I didn't undestand at all your whistle pattern :3
3. 01:56:351 (3) - The clap at the repeat of this slider is inconsistent with the rest. Please consider removing this clap and replacing it with a whistle (like you did at 01:52:505 (2)).
4. 01:59:043 (2) - The rhythm here sounds weird. The empty space between this note and the next one feels awkward. Please consider making this slider larger, make it end at 01:59:428. Sounds better with the vocals and more consistent with your previous 1/1 sliders. I know you used some short 1/2 sliders but I think this one doesn't fit here.
5. 02:00:197 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 01:59:812 (3). My suggestion is moving it to 02:00:197. It fits more the voice than in the other way imo.
6. 02:49:812 (4) - Since the vocals change here, how about adding a newcombo here?
7. 02:55:581 (1) - Same about the previous spinner I mentioned.

• [Average]

1. 01:04:620 (1) - How about removing the whistle of this slider body? sounds really noisy.
2. 02:00:197 (1) - Same suggestion mentioned in Relaxing about spinners.
3. 02:55:581 (1) - Another spinner.
   
   Nothing else, really. Very solid difficulty.

• [Challenging]

1. 00:27:505 (7) - This slider sounds strange.. because you were following a lot the vocals but here you ignored the vocal at 00:27:697. Consider making this slider end there and then add a note at 00:27:889 to keep following consistenly the vocals.
2. 01:04:620 (1) - Same about this annoying whistle sound at the slider body. Now I understand that you used it to follow the voice.. but it doesn't fit imo. Again, I suggest you to remove it.
3. 01:12:312 (5) - ^
4. 02:39:620 (6) - Very nazi xD how about moving this slider a bit down to make this pattern like this?
   
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5. 02:55:389 - How about adding a note here? Sounds strange because you skip a kinda important vocal.

• [Tough]

1. 01:21:351 (5) - This slider sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle at the end of it to follow the vocals?
2. 02:00:005 (4) - Perhaps add a hitfinish here to emphasize the end of the chorus?
3. 02:47:505 (1) - This slider isn't symmetric.. if it was your intention to make it like that you should fix it.
4. 02:52:312 (6) - This hitfinish here sounds too redundant. My suggestion is removing it. A finish at 02:52:505 (1) is fairly enough imo.
   
   I'm surprised. Your style is changing a lot in every map you make. I hope to see more stuff like this from you!
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Kei wrote:

Just sit back, sit back, sit back, relax, relax! :D

• [Relaxing]
  
  *Perhaps reduce AR by -1? feels a bit too fast for an easy diff.. but it may be just me. I always use AR3 in my Easy difficulties. In addition, you can see that the BPM is a bit high (and the SV is not that low), so a lower AR won't fit properly with the map

1. 00:28:658 (3) - Improve this blanket. This note isn't properly making blanket with 00:27:120 (2). Fixed a bit
2. 01:26:351 (1) - This note sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle? Or are they following the vocals? I didn't undestand at all your whistle pattern :3 lol, yes they are following the vocals. But a whistle here doesn't hurt I think, so ok.
3. 01:56:351 (3) - The clap at the repeat of this slider is inconsistent with the rest. Please consider removing this clap and replacing it with a whistle (like you did at 01:52:505 (2)). I know that, but it is the best way to follow the Instrumental and vocals at the same time, you can notice that I did the same thing in the other difficulties.
4. 01:59:043 (2) - The rhythm here sounds weird. The empty space between this note and the next one feels awkward. Please consider making this slider larger, make it end at 01:59:428. Sounds better with the vocals and more consistent with your previous 1/1 sliders. I know you used some short 1/2 sliders but I think this one doesn't fit here. Hmm.. Ok, fixed.
5. 02:00:197 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 01:59:812 (3). My suggestion is moving it to 02:00:197. It fits more the voice than in the other way imo. Oh great, follows perfect the vocals and instrumental at the same time, that's great. Applied
6. 02:49:812 (4) - Since the vocals change here, how about adding a newcombo here? Sure.
7. 02:55:581 (1) - Same about the previous spinner I mentioned. Done.

• [Average]

1. 01:04:620 (1) - How about removing the whistle of this slider body? sounds really noisy. Hmm.. Ok, you are not the first modder in suggest me that, so fixed.
2. 02:00:197 (1) - Same suggestion mentioned in Relaxing about spinners. Both fixed.
3. 02:55:581 (1) - Another spinner.
   
   Nothing else, really. Very solid difficulty. Thanks :3

• [Challenging]

1. 00:27:505 (7) - This slider sounds strange.. because you were following a lot the vocals but here you ignored the vocal at 00:27:697. Consider making this slider end there and then add a note at 00:27:889 to keep following consistenly the vocals.Again, you are not the first in suggest me that, so maybe I'm wrong xD. Fixed.
2. 01:04:620 (1) - Same about this annoying whistle sound at the slider body. Now I understand that you used it to follow the voice.. but it doesn't fit imo. Again, I suggest you to remove it.
3. 01:12:312 (5) - ^ Both removed
4. 02:39:620 (6) - Very nazi xD how about moving this slider a bit down to make this pattern like this? haha. Alright
   
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5. 02:55:389 - How about adding a note here? Sounds strange because you skip a kinda important vocal. Nah.. I think plays fine as it is.

• [Tough]

1. 01:21:351 (5) - This slider sounds too empty. How about adding a whistle at the end of it to follow the vocals? Nice :3
2. 02:00:005 (4) - Perhaps add a hitfinish here to emphasize the end of the chorus? Sounds good . Added
3. 02:47:505 (1) - This slider isn't symmetric.. if it was your intention to make it like that you should fix it. I fixed it just a bit because it is not that bad anyways xD
4. 02:52:312 (6) - This hitfinish here sounds too redundant. My suggestion is removing it. A finish at 02:52:505 (1) is fairly enough imo. Okie.
   
   I'm surprised. Your style is changing a lot in every map you make. I hope to see more stuff like this from you! Glad to listen that. Thanks! :3
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By the way mancu, you should map this Panic! at the Disco song please. IT GIVES ME SO MANY OLD MEMORIES.

Whew.. well, call me back!

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yay for album projects! :3

General
- SliderBorder : 66,66,66 is a more appropriate colour for your hitcircleoverlay. Used 55,55,55 because I think 66,66,66 is too bright.

Tough
02:31:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Big difficulty jump from the rest of the map, which isn't good for DT players. I hope you could rethink by simplifying the pattern or adding more kicksliders for the players with less streaming skill. Ok, I tried other thing instead

These are really my only issues with the map, so just poke me after fixes.

SapphireGhost wrote:

This was no accident, this was a therapeutic chain of events.