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Easy:
Delete the excess timing sections.

Hard:
00:46:41 (10) - New combo.

Insane:
00:11:74 (1) - Finish.
01:01:28 (4) - New combo.

As you have heard this so many times now, timing feels off. I get around 10-12ms late/early throughout the map. Wish I could help you with timing, but I suck @ it. Anyways, cool map. Star for juu! :)
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Easy
lol @ the storyboard
00:23:07 (2) - Shorten by a white tick, then add a beat two white ticks after
00:25:74 (2) - ^
00:28:41 (2) - Doesn't sound good, extend it so each repeat is 2 white ticks long
00:31:07 (2) - ^
01:25:73 (1) - Could you make this not overlap 2? I don't really care, but some people do :P w/e ignore this lol

Normal
00:59:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - *suggestion* h-flip this? Right now you have 3 combos in a row that start at almost the exact same spot01:25:73 (1) - same as easy (i'll stop mentioning it now) what

Hard
00:24:411 (and similar areas) Can you add some notes in these parts? (this goes for Insane as well)
01:08:62 (6) - Technically if you follow the lyrics this should start on the next white tick

Insane
00:18:41 (1,1,1,1) - Meh, I prefer this as one combo
01:08:28 (8) - Extend to white tick

Cute song, cute map :)

*
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With all the fixes here, I'm S'ing everything except Insane, which I'm not even nearly skilled enough to pass.

Oddly enough, looking at it through edit, the only map I have a problem with is insane.

Insane
:06, 1-6 - Right off the bat, I was 100'ing through these sliders because with the overlap, I was expecting to hit the next slider immediately after the first one, like on a 1/16 after the slider ended, but looking at the timing, it's an 1/8th step. It fits, but here's something I would suggest.

You have the sliders staggered like this:
\
/
\
etc.

Maybe you could try:
\
_ \
__ \
while showing the numbers so they could recognize the (slight) pause between those sliders. It may just be me. :?

:23, 4-8 and all of it's similarly placed brethren: The spacing on this, to me, is flat out mean. It may be that you want it that way, but damn that killed me fast.

Either way, I would play this map as is if it were ranked. Star'd.
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N0mad wrote:

With all the fixes here, I'm S'ing everything except Insane, which I'm not even nearly skilled enough to pass.

Oddly enough, looking at it through edit, the only map I have a problem with is insane.

Insane
:06, 1-6 - Right off the bat, I was 100'ing through these sliders because with the overlap, I was expecting to hit the next slider immediately after the first one, like on a 1/16 after the slider ended, but looking at the timing, it's an 1/8th step. It fits, but here's something I would suggest. :S They're 1/2 steps, and they follow along with the music. I see no problem with them, but thanks! =)

You have the sliders staggered like this:
\
/
\
etc.

Maybe you could try:
\
_ \
__ \
while showing the numbers so they could recognize the (slight) pause between those sliders. It may just be me. :?It's you. <3

:23, 4-8 and all of it's similarly placed brethren: The spacing on this, to me, is flat out mean. It may be that you want it that way, but damn that killed me fast. This is why it's insane. XD Also, a lot of maps are waaay harder, so I was nice and put the streams in a straight and close-together line.

Either way, I would play this map as is if it were ranked. Star'd. Thank you very much 8-)
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Star :)
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Easy
01:00:28 (2) - Random slider whistle is weird.
01:13:12 (3) - Same as ^.

Normal
Fine to me.

Hard
00:00:91 (1) - It doesn't start in the same spot as Easy and Normal
01:16:11 (2) - Add a Clap.
01:16:78 (4) - Add a Clap.
01:18:76 (2) - Add a Clap.
01:19:43 (4) - Add a Clap.
01:21:08 (1) - Add a Calp and the end of the slider.
01:21:75 (2) - Same as ^.
You get the point....

Insane
00:18:41 (1,1,1,1) - make this part of the combo beforehand.
Same Clap suggestions in those spots.

Anything made by Rumiko Takahash deserves a fucking super star.

It's almost bubble worthy....
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Metroid wrote:

Easy
01:00:28 (2) - Random slider whistle is weird. Fixed.
01:13:12 (3) - Same as ^. Done.

Normal
Fine to me. k

Hard
00:00:91 (1) - It doesn't start in the same spot as Easy and Normal Bleh, I'll just keep it on what I had before. (Starting on a blue tick because that's when the music starts and I don't want to have to make another offset point unless it's needed.)
01:16:11 (2) - Add a Clap. (And ones below) Added.
01:16:78 (4) - Add a Clap.
01:18:76 (2) - Add a Clap.
01:19:43 (4) - Add a Clap.
01:21:08 (1) - Add a Clap and the end of the slider.
01:21:75 (2) - Same as ^.
You get the point....

Insane
00:18:41 (1,1,1,1) - make this part of the combo beforehand. ARGH FINE.
Same Clap suggestions in those spots. Kay. Not gonna add more than suggested because I'll clap spam >_>

Anything made by Rumiko Takahash deserves a fucking super star. thanks~ <3!

It's almost bubble worthy....:3
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General: i felt like the offset was a tiny bit off, but i cant really get it right myself either.

[Easy]
good

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
01:04:78 (1) - maybe move down 1 grid?

[Insane]
01:22:41 (7) - new combo. (suggestion)

Great map :D
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Gabi wrote:

General: i felt like the offset was a tiny bit off, but i cant really get it right myself either. Yeah srsly. *sounds the BAT alarm*

[Easy]
good

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
01:04:78 (1) - maybe move down 1 grid? K.

[Insane]
01:22:41 (7) - new combo. (suggestion) Alright. I also new combo'd 00:18:41 (1) to match.

Great map :DThanks <3
I probably wouldn't bother giving kudos for nazi-esque comments, but what you pointed out in Hard helped me realize that the notes afterward weren't spaced correctly. Oops~ Thanks!
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[Timing]

BPM is fine
First offset : 775. (Remember to resnap all notes)
Second offset is fine.
Third offset fine too.

[Easy]

00:00:85 (1) - It's hard to know from where starts the slider... maybe you can add a storyboard with an arrow.

[Normal]

00:00:82 (1) - Same as easy.
00:34:91 (7) - New combo.
00:40:24 (7) - ^
00:46:41 (9) - ^
01:01:45 (5) - ^

[Hard]

The first slider on this is okay.

[Insane]

00:37:24 (4) - Align perfectly with (5).
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osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

BPM is fine
First offset : 775. (Remember to resnap all notes) oh god i love you <3
Second offset is fine.
Third offset fine too.

[Easy]

00:00:85 (1) - It's hard to know from where starts the slider... maybe you can add a storyboard with an arrow. uhhhh there IS a storyboard o.o;

[Normal]

00:00:82 (1) - Same as easy. dddddd
00:34:91 (7) - New combo. Kay (and below)
00:40:24 (7) - ^
00:46:41 (9) - ^
01:01:45 (5) - ^

[Hard]

The first slider on this is okay.

[Insane]

00:37:24 (4) - Align perfectly with (5).Oops, how'd I miss that? Thanks.
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Derekku Chan, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Overall:

The timing is fine.
I personally think that the offset is 770 .. Try it (on the Hard diff)

Easy:

00:28:44 (2) - Change the slider, so that the end and beginning are vertically even.
00:30:44 (1) - Align horizontal with end of (2) (previous combo)
00:31:10 (2) - Change the slider, so that the end and beginning are horizontally even.
00:35:77 (5) - 2 (lvl 3 grid) right and 1 (lvl 3 grid) down.

Normal:

00:19:77 (1) - Align horizontal with (2) (previous combo). (align the rest of the next combos if you change this)
00:29:10 (4) - Align vertical with end of slider (3) (same combo)
01:06:78 (1) - Align vertical with end of slider (2) (previous combo). (align the rest of the next combos if you change this)

Hard:

00:19:77 (1) - Align horizontal with (8) (previous combo)
00:41:43 (8) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) up. (So it aligns horizontal with (6) (same combo)
00:47:43 (5,6) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) to the right.
01:17:10 (5) - Align vertically with (4) (same combo). (It just makes it look a bit nicer
01:22:41 (3,4,5,6) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) down.

Insane

01:08:12 (7,8,9) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) up.. not really needed actually
01:26:72 (2) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) down.. ^

Insane is like ,, perfect o.O .. Nice work on the diffs my man :lol: , verry nice work. Hope to see it in the ranked section soon.
thats it for now -- ~~ Star ~~ --
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I think it's fine. Star.
posted
[Easy]
00:00:85 (1) - Confusing but nice star xD

[Hard]
Less confusing star

[Insane]
01:18:43 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - confusing...

[Normal]
00:00:85 (1) - confusing slider again
01:25:06 Add some notes here?

The spacing and timing seems pretty good :)
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i came it to check timing from irc. I thought it checked out i[ got +/- 3 ms in test]. Nothing popped out at me on my playthroughs really sostarlol
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fufe wrote:

i came it to check timing from irc. I thought it checked out i[ got +/- 3 ms in test]. Nothing popped out at me on my playthroughs really sostarlol
I don't know if I'm going crazy or what, because I still feel like it's off. Maybe I just need to stop worrying about it XP

Thanks~
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Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[EASY]

00:36:44 - Break?
00:41:77 - ^

no real problems with this. good job

[NORMAL]


00:36:44 - Break?
00:41:77 - ^

again, no actual problems :)

[HARD]


00:36:44 - Break?
00:41:77 - ^

[INSANE]

nothing :)

nice clean map. i struggled to find things wrong with it.
nice job

star'd
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