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~Sky~
  1. 00:40:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The formation of this pattern could be improved, I'm sure you can place them much better than this.
  2. 01:02:176 (2) - Add a repeat on this slider, it feels like it's missing. Also, make sure to fix the spacing afterwards.
  3. 01:13:843 (4) - This slider looks weird and breaks the flow of the rest of the map imo, make it curve like the others instead.
  4. 01:55:176 (1,2,3) - Make these symmetric? They would look and play better to me.
  5. 02:00:843 (1) - You should start this spinner on the previous blue tick, same end as of now of course.
  6. 02:37:510 - Add a note here, it feels like it's missing if you listen to the lyrics carefully.
  7. 03:28:510 (1) - This combo feels a bit long compared to the rest of the map, try reducing it a bit.
  8. 03:33:843 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit please.
  9. 03:56:510 (9) - There should be a new combo here if you listen to the music.
  10. 04:43:176 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  11. 04:45:843 (1) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody, it sounds way too loud.
  12. 05:55:176 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.


Let's go ^^
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Added the slider repeat on 01:02:176 (2) - but for the combo, i dont want to add anymore combo, since it will ruin my combo consistencies (I place combo based on stanza)
Thx Andrea o/

http://puu.sh/2YCC9.osu

Also Sekai, please fix the source : Areas ~Sora ni Utsusu Kimi to no Sekai~
http://vndb.org/v1379
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Thanks Andrea for your mod :3

Fixed it now
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one lavu lavu omelette rice for you
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good luck w _(┐「ε:)_
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Thanks all of you for your stars >A<
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Fix one overmapped note from IRC mod from -Bakari-

ty ty for the mod -Bakabakari- :P

http://puu.sh/2ZYVN.osu
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Hi guys :D

Mod as you request some suggestions

Andrea:
  1. 00:18:676 I feel sound there maybe you should mapp it like you did on previous symilar parts maybe a repeat slider gonna fit nice
  2. 00:19:176 add circle and start spinner here 00:19:343 sinceI feel empty just start spinner imo need click somethink there.
  3. 02:53:843 1 grid down t be in line with 02:52:510 lol i feel like hitler now orz
Sekai-Nyan:
  1. 00:24:176 add circle? so empty feel weird when you play since a vocal start there
  2. 00:32:254 move x:140 y:187 play better imo
  3. 00:34:843 same as 00:24:176
  4. 00:37:843 make it symetrical orz actual shape is really bad xd
  5. 00:39:010 should be a triplet here like you did on 00:26:843 (1,2,3) -
  6. 00:43:176 x:79 y:241 nazi stuff orz
  7. 01:55:510 - 01:56:176 feel so empty maybe map that parts following vocals?
  8. 04:08:343 add clap maybe you forget it?
  9. 04:17:676 remove whistle and add clap empathize better the music here
  10. 04:47:176 this should be better if you align it perfect with 04:46:843 (2,4) - imo
  11. 05:01:843 add a circle with finish and start spinner here 05:02:010 sound better
  12. 04:52:843 - 04:53:010 add circles a triplet here sound better with music that was i expect when i was playing it xd
Miya:
  1. 00:51:843 this part should be mapped since sound weird without the clap in your pattern of 2 and 4 line
  2. 00:53:176 x:64 y:228 to be in line with 00:52:510 nazi stuff xD
  3. 02:06:676 should be a circle here like you did on 02:08:343 .-.
  4. 02:17:343 same as above
  5. 03:27:176 this place feel so empty and weird for play imo
Darksonic:
  1. 01:05:676 deberia haber un circulo aca asi como hicieron los tripletes y repeats los otros mappers y como vos hiciste aca 01:08:176 (2,3,4) -
  2. 01:09:843 esta parte creo que se empatizara mejor con un finish ´
  3. 01:15:010 lo mismo que en 01:05:676
  4. 01:25:843 agrega un finish a lo mejor se te olvido :D
  5. 04:40:510 agrega un circulo con finish aqui y empeza el spinner en 04:40:676 creo q suena y se juega mejor
  6. 04:36:843 (7,8,9) - este cambio de espacio puede ser confuso porque mejor no usas el q usaste en los anteriores seria mejor en mi opinion
Well thats all I can suggest here GL nice map :)

scanter wrote:

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Natsu wrote:

Miya:
  1. 00:51:843 this part should be mapped since sound weird without the clap in your pattern of 2 and 4 line I want a variation
  2. 00:53:176 x:64 y:228 to be in line with 00:52:510 nazi stuff xD sure, fixed ><
  3. 02:06:676 should be a circle here like you did on 02:08:343 .-. Nope, i dont want to follow vocal at this section.
  4. 02:17:343 same as above
  5. 03:27:176 this place feel so empty and weird for play imo Ok, since bakabakari say the same thing too. Changed~
Ty for the mod :3

http://puu.sh/300SF.osu
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Thanks Natsu for your mod and star >w<

Fixed all of the stuff on my parts <3
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Sekai-nyan owo/ From my queue owo/

[Love]
  • Sekai-nyan:
  1. 00:31:676 - Add note here, I can here a sound. ;w;
  2. 00:37:010 - same here^ ;w;
  3. 01:28:676 (2) - delete note?
  4. 03:31:343 (2) - delete note, I think it would sound better. =w=

    Darksonic:
  5. 01:24:343 (3) - delete note, it would follow the piano sound.
  6. 04:21:843 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi, change to something like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772608 better imo.

    Andrea:
  7. 02:58:510 (9) - Maybe delete this, to follow the piano music.
  8. 03:06:843 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe try some different pattern here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772569

That's all desu ;w;
EDIT: Star shoot. ;w;
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Thanks For modding Kirino :3

Fixed my parts =w=
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  1. title: piece of azure

    wikipedia
  2. add "visual novel" and "Lapis Lazuli" to tag.
  3. you must resize pulse.jpg to 800x600. 1024x768 is not rankable.

    use this.
  4. you migh need to check epilepsy warning. at the moment, "pulse.jpg" is vibrating at kiai.
    if its vibrating is miss, not need to do it. but do not forget to fix about size code.



[Love]
  1. 01:17:510 (1,2,3) - (nazi) I thought appearance is not good because (1) touch 01:16:510 (3) on playing.


    try this.
  2. 01:21:510 (2,3) - placement suggestion.
  3. 01:31:843 (2,3,4) - (nazi) distance.
    1. 01:32:010 (3) - move to x:40 y:232
  4. 03:31:010 (14) - remove?
    it is would be better because by again adding the change here.
  5. 03:51:010 - add note here because I felt this place had vocal and instruments.
  6. 03:55:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt some claps what ignore the instrument is odd.
    1. 03:55:343 (2) - 03:56:176 (7) - 03:56:343 (8) - 03:56:676 (2) - 03:57:010 (4) - 03:57:510 (7) - add clap.
  7. 04:07:176 (4,5,6) - (nazi) distance.
    1. 04:07:510 (6) - x:128 y:124 ?
  8. 04:17:843 (1) - why did you use spinner?
    there is no sound extending from 04:17:843 imo.

    1. 04:17:843 (1) - none
    2. 04:18:010 (2) - clap
    3. 04:18:343 (3) - ^
    4. 04:18:510 (4) - ^
    5. 04:18:676 (5) - none
    6. 04:18:843 (6) - clap
    7. 04:19:010 (7) - ^
    8. 04:19:176 (8) - finish?

    you can put these.
  9. 04:51:176 (1) ~ 04:53:176 (6) - are picking up vocal/piano. however there is a contradiction.
    1. 04:50:843 - if it follow vocal, add note here. because this place had it.
    2. 04:53:510 - if it follow piano (or instrument), add note. there is a piano in here.
  10. 04:57:343 - add note....like 05:01:176 (5,6,7) - .


good luck :3
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boo!

[General]
  1. I'm pretty sure you've missed some tags like collaboration and probably OST (since it's Original SoundTrack)
  2. Why there's no breaks? ;_; Try to discuss it with BATs, maybe it'll be ok to add at least one.
    Note: you should discuss it with BATs, because if you add break, Drain Time will be lower than 6 minutes. :<


[Collab]

Miya
10:59 Miya: hoo, you modding that map :o
10:59 -Bakari-: yea :3
10:59 Miya: just irc modding here if you found something on my part o/
11:05 -Bakari-: 03:27:010 (3,4) -
11:06 Miya: hmm? :o
11:06 -Bakari-: I'm not really sure about this pattern. I'd try to remove 03:27:343 (4) - and replace (3) with 1/4 slider
11:06 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/2ZYkd.jpg example]
11:06 -Bakari-: It sounds kinda better, imo
11:07 Miya: i do this because there is no beat on 03:27:176 -
11:07 -Bakari-: Vocals end here, so we can end slider at this point to emphasize it
11:08 Miya: hmm, i'll consider it ><
11:09 Miya: if other modder suggest the same thing, i ll change this :3
11:12 -Bakari-: Oh, and 02:05:010 (5) - 02:05:676 - 02:11:010 (6) - sound kinda overmapped.
11:14 Miya: 02:05:010 (5) - if you hear clearly you can hear a beat on this spot
11:14 Miya: 02:05:676 (8) - same vocal is here too
11:14 -Bakari-: Let me check it with 25% playback rate
11:14 Miya: for this 02:11:010 (6) - i will remove it ><
11:15 -Bakari-: 02:10:176 (4) - aaand maybe you should place something here
11:15 Miya: what? hitsound? :o
11:15 -Bakari-: wait-wait >3<
11:15 -Bakari-: 02:10:676 - here*
11:15 Miya: lol
11:16 Miya: nope, i want to keep the vocal consistencies here ><
11:18 -Bakari-: 02:22:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and how about making something interesting here? Somehow I feel like [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this [attern] fits with music pretty cool
11:18 -Bakari-: 02:22:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and how about making something interesting here? Somehow I feel like [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this [attern] fits with music pretty cool
11:18 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this] pattern*
11:18 Miya: let me see
11:19 Miya: :o
11:19 Miya: but i prefer my pattern ><
11:19 Miya: sorry
11:19 -Bakari-: Well, this pattern is out of your style, anyway.
11:19 Miya: yeah xD
11:20 Miya: besides it will looks weird since all pattern on this map is simple ><
11:21 -Bakari-: And one last thing
11:21 Miya: yup? :o
11:22 -Bakari-: 03:17:843 (1,2) - try to replace it with 1/2 sliders, so it will fit with vocals a bit better, imo. [http://puu.sh/2ZYJw.jpg example]
11:24 Miya: hmm, i prefer my rhythm ><
11:24 Miya: i want to add a 1/1 slider too to gives variation on this combo :3
11:25 -Bakari-: Well, it sounds a bit strange because (2) sounds kinda weird with vocals
11:26 Miya: im not following the vocal at this point 03:18:843 - :o
11:27 Miya: look at the next rhythm, im not following vocal at all ><
11:28 -Bakari-: Seems like you don't want to mix them here
11:28 Miya: yup yup ><
11:29 -Bakari-: well, that's it.
11:29 Miya: ok, ty for the mod :D
11:29 -Bakari-: Sure, you're always welcome!


Andrea
  1. 00:07:843 (2,3) - try to avoid jumps in calm part of the song. There's no any reason to place jump, it sounds just like 00:01:843 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - previous patterns.
  2. 03:08:176 (6,7,8) - stack/unstack both circles here, to make pattern consistent and easier readable, it'll looks easier-readable and better while playing.


Sekai-nyan
  1. 00:23:176 (3) - sory, but I can't hear any beat here. So, try to remove this circlel, please! You can make 00:22:510 (2) - 1/2 longer and silince it's end t follow vocals here.
    Note: 00:33:843 (3) - same happens here. :<
  2. 02:41:510 (4,5,1,2) - nazi - 90% of sliders in this map are curved, that's why seeing 4 straight sliders here is quite inconsistent.
  3. 03:55:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - are you sure, that deathstream actually fits here? It feels kinda too hard for a relaxing diff with calm rhythm. Consider replacing SOME circles with a slider.
  4. 04:42:843 (1) - BPM is quite low, but that note is still appears too quickly. Consider making spinner shorter and/or removing this circle. Discuss it with Darksonic, please
  5. 05:02:010 (1) - same as above. Discuss it with Andrea, maybe someone should cut/change their pattern.


Darksonic
  1. 01:13:510 (2,3,4) - nazi - try to unstack them. so you'll have a cute blanket like this
  2. 04:42:843 (1) - BPM is quite low, but that note is still appears too quickly. Consider making spinner shorter and/or removing this circle. Discuss it with Sekai-nyan, please
  3. 05:28:176 (6) - nazi - that stack looks kinda awkward. Just to make sure that this map is PERFECT, fix this little stack. :3


~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
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Thanks for modding Both of you :3

Fixed my parts!
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Approved gogo!
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yo ~
from pm in game owo

First, i'm sorry if there are things in my mod that are already fixed, because Sekai updated the map when
I modded it and I'm lazy to check the map from the beginning again =w=

General


reduce volume 10-20% in 04:43:176 - ?

Sekai-nyan


00:31:843 (5) - 384,180? to make jump since this is aprrove map
00:34:843 (5) - 420,252?
00:37:010 (5) - 16,176?
00:39:843 (6) - spacing 1,06x is it itentional? if no, fix with normal spacing better imo
01:29:510 (3) - nazi. 420,140 for straight with 01:30:176 (5) -
01:32:176 (4) - why spacing 1,19x in here? just use normal spacing better imo.. or if you want to keep that give NC to know spacing change
01:34:510 (3) - ctrl+H for better flow?
01:42:843 (4) - use normal spacing?
01:45:676 (3) - nazi. 312,316?
01:58:510 (6) - same with 01:32:176 (4) -
02:25:176 (2) - spacing 0,93x? i think use normal spacing better
02:38:510 (2) - spacing 0,88x? i think use normal spacing better
02:39:843 (7) - nazi. 72,184
04:08:343 (10) - remove clap?
04:50:843 - add note in here for follow vocal? (can add in 192,184 for diagonal too)
05:01:343 (6) - spacing issue (0.94x) and 05:01:843 (8) - NC for consistency
05:56:510 (3) - another nazi. 436,128

Miya


00:46:843 (3) - 100,108?
00:59:176 (1) - replace with finish?
03:31:010 (14) - nazi. 1 grid down

DarkSonic


01:25:176 (5) - 308,184?
04:36:843 (7) - should be NC in here because change spacing

Andrea


02:51:176 (1) - should be NC based vocal or stanza
02:52:510 (1) - remove NC and NC in 02:53:843 (4) -

Love this song ~
Good Luck ~
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Xinely wrote:

Miya


00:46:843 (3) - 100,108? I think my current position is fine.
00:59:176 (1) - replace with finish? No, it will break my finish rhythm.
03:31:010 (14) - nazi. 1 grid down Ok, fixed ><
Ty for the mod Xinely :3
http://puu.sh/30SBs.osu
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Thanks for modding Xinely :3

Fixed my parts and updated Miya's too ><
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o3o/ Hi everyone ~ Sekai is challenging to marathon !

Love

  1. 00:31:676 - Add 1 circle? playing and rhythm more better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778550
  2. 00:57:176 (2) - How about move to better place? I don't think stack is well about this sound. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778565
  3. 01:25:176 (5) - It is a little boring slider before kiai-time. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778570
  4. 01:30:510 (6) - Change clap to whistle?
  5. 01:44:176 (10) - Add clap? how about makes more rhythmical?
  6. 02:22:510 (2,3) - change 3/4 slider one? it will fit vocals downbeat sound. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778590
    02:23:176 (3,4,5,6) - If follow this, I recommend likes this circles shape. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778593
    This is code.
    96,92,141843,6,0,P|144:104|172:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,176,142343,2,0,P|216:212|312:228,1,135
    388,248,143176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    361,160,143510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    447,133,143843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    472,219,144176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 03:13:343 (2,3) - Move to x:178, y:222. not perfect stacked.
  8. 03:33:843 (3) - Change to upside curve? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778600
  9. 04:13:010 (9) - Delete this circle? I can't hear any sound.
  10. 04:37:510 (10) - Add NC? players might confuse this circle.
  11. 05:04:510 (1) - Move to x:256, y: 192? moving will better.
  12. 05:07:176 (1) - Add clap on slider's end.
  13. 05:25:843 - This is last kiai-part. how about turn up volume likes 80%↑?
  14. 05:28:176 (6) - Is it intentionally unstacked? unless, move to x:148, y:162
  15. 05:57:176 (1,1) - How about add more decrescendo on it? http://puu.sh/328E2.png


That's all ;) GL :)
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