1. Marathon (4.63 stars, 864 notes)

HeatKai wrote:

Let me take the break.

Andrea wrote:

Remove collab from tags or either rename the difficulty, I'd suggest to call it "Sky" or something like that.

1. 00:40:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The formation of this pattern could be improved, I'm sure you can place them much better than this.
2. 01:02:176 (2) - Add a repeat on this slider, it feels like it's missing. Also, make sure to fix the spacing afterwards.
3. 01:13:843 (4) - This slider looks weird and breaks the flow of the rest of the map imo, make it curve like the others instead.
4. 01:55:176 (1,2,3) - Make these symmetric? They would look and play better to me.
5. 02:00:843 (1) - You should start this spinner on the previous blue tick, same end as of now of course.
6. 02:37:510 - Add a note here, it feels like it's missing if you listen to the lyrics carefully.
7. 03:28:510 (1) - This combo feels a bit long compared to the rest of the map, try reducing it a bit.
8. 03:33:843 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit please.
9. 03:56:510 (9) - There should be a new combo here if you listen to the music.
10. 04:43:176 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
11. 04:45:843 (1) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody, it sounds way too loud.
12. 05:55:176 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.

Hi guys

Well thats all I can suggest here GL nice map

scanter wrote:

(、´・ω·)▄︻┻┳┳═一 ☆

Natsu wrote:

Miya:

1. 00:51:843 this part should be mapped since sound weird without the clap in your pattern of 2 and 4 line I want a variation
2. 00:53:176 x:64 y:228 to be in line with 00:52:510 nazi stuff xD sure, fixed ><
3. 02:06:676 should be a circle here like you did on 02:08:343 .-. Nope, i dont want to follow vocal at this section.
4. 02:17:343 same as above
5. 03:27:176 this place feel so empty and weird for play imo Ok, since bakabakari say the same thing too. Changed~

1. title: piece of azure
   
   wikipedia
2. add "visual novel" and "Lapis Lazuli" to tag.
3. you must resize pulse.jpg to 800x600. 1024x768 is not rankable.
   
   SPOILER

   
   use this.
   
4. you migh need to check epilepsy warning. at the moment, "pulse.jpg" is vibrating at kiai.
   if its vibrating is miss, not need to do it. but do not forget to fix about size code.

1. 01:17:510 (1,2,3) - (nazi) I thought appearance is not good because (1) touch 01:16:510 (3) on playing.
   
   
   
   try this.
2. 01:21:510 (2,3) - placement suggestion.
   
   
3. 01:31:843 (2,3,4) - (nazi) distance.
   
   1. 01:32:010 (3) - move to x:40 y:232
4. 03:31:010 (14) - remove?
   it is would be better because by again adding the change here.
5. 03:51:010 - add note here because I felt this place had vocal and instruments.
6. 03:55:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt some claps what ignore the instrument is odd.
   
   1. 03:55:343 (2) - 03:56:176 (7) - 03:56:343 (8) - 03:56:676 (2) - 03:57:010 (4) - 03:57:510 (7) - add clap.
7. 04:07:176 (4,5,6) - (nazi) distance.
   
   1. 04:07:510 (6) - x:128 y:124 ?
8. 04:17:843 (1) - why did you use spinner?
   there is no sound extending from 04:17:843 imo.
   
   
   1. 04:17:843 (1) - none
   2. 04:18:010 (2) - clap
   3. 04:18:343 (3) - ^
   4. 04:18:510 (4) - ^
   5. 04:18:676 (5) - none
   6. 04:18:843 (6) - clap
   7. 04:19:010 (7) - ^
   8. 04:19:176 (8) - finish?
   you can put these.
9. 04:51:176 (1) ~ 04:53:176 (6) - are picking up vocal/piano. however there is a contradiction.
   
   1. 04:50:843 - if it follow vocal, add note here. because this place had it.
   2. 04:53:510 - if it follow piano (or instrument), add note. there is a piano in here.
10. 04:57:343 - add note....like 05:01:176 (5,6,7) - .

1. I'm pretty sure you've missed some tags like collaboration and probably OST (since it's Original SoundTrack)
2. Why there's no breaks? ;_; Try to discuss it with BATs, maybe it'll be ok to add at least one.
   Note: you should discuss it with BATs, because if you add break, Drain Time will be lower than 6 minutes. :<

10:59 Miya: hoo, you modding that map :o
10:59 -Bakari-: yea :3
10:59 Miya: just irc modding here if you found something on my part o/
11:05 -Bakari-: 03:27:010 (3,4) - 
11:06 Miya: hmm? :o
11:06 -Bakari-: I'm not really sure about this pattern. I'd try to remove 03:27:343 (4) - and replace (3) with 1/4 slider 
11:06 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/2ZYkd.jpg example]
11:06 -Bakari-: It sounds kinda better, imo
11:07 Miya: i do this because there is no beat on 03:27:176 -
11:07 -Bakari-: Vocals end here, so we can end slider at this point to emphasize it
11:08 Miya: hmm, i'll consider it ><
11:09 Miya: if other modder suggest the same thing, i ll change this :3
11:12 -Bakari-: Oh, and 02:05:010 (5) - 02:05:676 - 02:11:010 (6) -  sound kinda overmapped. 
11:14 Miya: 02:05:010 (5) - if you hear clearly you can hear a beat on this spot
11:14 Miya: 02:05:676 (8) - same vocal is here too
11:14 -Bakari-: Let me check it with 25% playback rate
11:14 Miya: for this 02:11:010 (6) - i will remove it ><
11:15 -Bakari-: 02:10:176 (4) - aaand maybe you should place something here
11:15 Miya: what? hitsound? :o
11:15 -Bakari-: wait-wait >3<
11:15 -Bakari-: 02:10:676 - here*
11:15 Miya: lol
11:16 Miya: nope, i want to keep the vocal consistencies here ><
11:18 -Bakari-: 02:22:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and how about making something interesting here? Somehow I feel like [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this [attern] fits with music pretty cool
11:18 -Bakari-: 02:22:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and how about making something interesting here? Somehow I feel like [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this [attern] fits with music pretty cool
11:18 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this] pattern*
11:18 Miya: let me see
11:19 Miya: :o
11:19 Miya: but i prefer my pattern ><
11:19 Miya: sorry
11:19 -Bakari-: Well, this pattern is out of your style, anyway. 
11:19 Miya: yeah xD
11:20 Miya: besides it will looks weird since all pattern on this map is simple ><
11:21 -Bakari-: And one last thing
11:21 Miya: yup? :o
11:22 -Bakari-: 03:17:843 (1,2) - try to replace it with 1/2 sliders, so it will fit with vocals a bit better, imo. [http://puu.sh/2ZYJw.jpg example]
11:24 Miya: hmm, i prefer my rhythm ><
11:24 Miya: i want to add a 1/1 slider too to gives variation on this combo :3
11:25 -Bakari-: Well, it sounds a bit strange because (2) sounds kinda weird with vocals 
11:26 Miya: im not following the vocal at this point 03:18:843 - :o
11:27 Miya: look at the next rhythm, im not following vocal at all ><
11:28 -Bakari-: Seems like you don't want to mix them here 
11:28 Miya: yup yup ><
11:29 -Bakari-: well, that's it.
11:29 Miya: ok, ty for the mod :D
11:29 -Bakari-: Sure, you're always welcome!

1. 00:07:843 (2,3) - try to avoid jumps in calm part of the song. There's no any reason to place jump, it sounds just like 00:01:843 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - previous patterns.
2. 03:08:176 (6,7,8) - stack/unstack both circles here, to make pattern consistent and easier readable, it'll looks easier-readable and better while playing.

1. 00:23:176 (3) - sory, but I can't hear any beat here. So, try to remove this circlel, please! You can make 00:22:510 (2) - 1/2 longer and silince it's end t follow vocals here.
   Note: 00:33:843 (3) - same happens here. :<
2. 02:41:510 (4,5,1,2) - nazi - 90% of sliders in this map are curved, that's why seeing 4 straight sliders here is quite inconsistent.
3. 03:55:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - are you sure, that deathstream actually fits here? It feels kinda too hard for a relaxing diff with calm rhythm. Consider replacing SOME circles with a slider.
4. 04:42:843 (1) - BPM is quite low, but that note is still appears too quickly. Consider making spinner shorter and/or removing this circle. Discuss it with Darksonic, please
5. 05:02:010 (1) - same as above. Discuss it with Andrea, maybe someone should cut/change their pattern.

1. 01:13:510 (2,3,4) - nazi - try to unstack them. so you'll have a cute blanket like this
2. 04:42:843 (1) - BPM is quite low, but that note is still appears too quickly. Consider making spinner shorter and/or removing this circle. Discuss it with Sekai-nyan, please
3. 05:28:176 (6) - nazi - that stack looks kinda awkward. Just to make sure that this map is PERFECT, fix this little stack. :3

Xinely wrote:

Miya

00:46:843 (3) - 100,108? I think my current position is fine.
00:59:176 (1) - replace with finish? No, it will break my finish rhythm.
03:31:010 (14) - nazi. 1 grid down Ok, fixed ><

Love

That's all GL