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nao - piece of azure

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Suimya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 09 January, 2014 at 8:12:53 AM

Artist: nao
Title: piece of azure
Source: Areas~空に映すキミとのセカイ~
Tags: visual novel eroge Lapis Lazuli OST fripSide collaboration osuplayer111 Andrea Darksonic Miya Areas ~Sora ni Utsusu Kimi to no Sekai~
BPM: 90
Filesize: 10329kb
Play Time: 06:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Marathon (4.63 stars, 864 notes)
Download: nao - piece of azure
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This map Collab between: Me, Miya, Andrea And Darksonic =w=/

Thanks for Setsurei for the awesome sb :3

Thanks guys:

<span style='color:#FF4000'>jonathanlfj</span> #1

<span style='color:#FF4000'><strong>Irreversible</strong></span> #2
<span style='color:#FF4000'><strong>Gabe</strong></span>

Have fun <3
Miya
Complete this, don't make this graveyarded =3=
Kurai
go go \o.o\
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Kurai \:D/

And i wont give up on this map =w=/ <3
HeatKai
Let me take the break.
Tari
Awesome!

might mod when this is finished
Miya

HeatKai wrote:

Let me take the break.
no break on this map xD
scanter
(、´・ω·)▄︻┻┳┳═一 ☆
Topic Starter
Suimya
scanter moe =w=/
Andrea
I'm done with my parts, I hope you like them.

http://puu.sh/2XXsI.osu
Miya
^ pro
I'm such a slowpoke =3=
Andrea
Remove collab from tags or either rename the difficulty, I'd suggest to call it "Sky" or something like that.
Miya

Andrea wrote:

Remove collab from tags or either rename the difficulty, I'd suggest to call it "Sky" or something like that.
Sky? i hear a wave sound on this song end. Maybe "Ocean" is more good, or something like that. Or "Azure", whatever xD
HeatKai
It should be HeatWAVE
BeatofIke
Support Sekai :3
Take my star! /me runs
Topic Starter
Suimya
ok, this map is done ><

And ready for mods :3
Andrea
~Sky~
  1. 00:40:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The formation of this pattern could be improved, I'm sure you can place them much better than this.
  2. 01:02:176 (2) - Add a repeat on this slider, it feels like it's missing. Also, make sure to fix the spacing afterwards.
  3. 01:13:843 (4) - This slider looks weird and breaks the flow of the rest of the map imo, make it curve like the others instead.
  4. 01:55:176 (1,2,3) - Make these symmetric? They would look and play better to me.
  5. 02:00:843 (1) - You should start this spinner on the previous blue tick, same end as of now of course.
  6. 02:37:510 - Add a note here, it feels like it's missing if you listen to the lyrics carefully.
  7. 03:28:510 (1) - This combo feels a bit long compared to the rest of the map, try reducing it a bit.
  8. 03:33:843 (3) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit please.
  9. 03:56:510 (9) - There should be a new combo here if you listen to the music.
  10. 04:43:176 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  11. 04:45:843 (1) - Remove the whistle from the sliderbody, it sounds way too loud.
  12. 05:55:176 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
Let's go ^^
Miya
Added the slider repeat on 01:02:176 (2) - but for the combo, i dont want to add anymore combo, since it will ruin my combo consistencies (I place combo based on stanza)
Thx Andrea o/

http://puu.sh/2YCC9.osu

Also Sekai, please fix the source : Areas ~Sora ni Utsusu Kimi to no Sekai~
http://vndb.org/v1379
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Andrea for your mod :3

Fixed it now
HeatKai
one lavu lavu omelette rice for you
10nya
good luck w _(┐「ε:)_
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks all of you for your stars >A<
Miya
Fix one overmapped note from IRC mod from -Bakari-

ty ty for the mod -Bakabakari- :P

http://puu.sh/2ZYVN.osu
Natsu
Hi guys :D

Mod as you request some suggestions

Andrea:
  1. 00:18:676 I feel sound there maybe you should mapp it like you did on previous symilar parts maybe a repeat slider gonna fit nice
  2. 00:19:176 add circle and start spinner here 00:19:343 sinceI feel empty just start spinner imo need click somethink there.
  3. 02:53:843 1 grid down t be in line with 02:52:510 lol i feel like hitler now orz

Sekai-Nyan:
  1. 00:24:176 add circle? so empty feel weird when you play since a vocal start there
  2. 00:32:254 move x:140 y:187 play better imo
  3. 00:34:843 same as 00:24:176
  4. 00:37:843 make it symetrical orz actual shape is really bad xd
  5. 00:39:010 should be a triplet here like you did on 00:26:843 (1,2,3) -
  6. 00:43:176 x:79 y:241 nazi stuff orz
  7. 01:55:510 - 01:56:176 feel so empty maybe map that parts following vocals?
  8. 04:08:343 add clap maybe you forget it?
  9. 04:17:676 remove whistle and add clap empathize better the music here
  10. 04:47:176 this should be better if you align it perfect with 04:46:843 (2,4) - imo
  11. 05:01:843 add a circle with finish and start spinner here 05:02:010 sound better
  12. 04:52:843 - 04:53:010 add circles a triplet here sound better with music that was i expect when i was playing it xd

Miya:
  1. 00:51:843 this part should be mapped since sound weird without the clap in your pattern of 2 and 4 line
  2. 00:53:176 x:64 y:228 to be in line with 00:52:510 nazi stuff xD
  3. 02:06:676 should be a circle here like you did on 02:08:343 .-.
  4. 02:17:343 same as above
  5. 03:27:176 this place feel so empty and weird for play imo

Darksonic:
  1. 01:05:676 deberia haber un circulo aca asi como hicieron los tripletes y repeats los otros mappers y como vos hiciste aca 01:08:176 (2,3,4) -
  2. 01:09:843 esta parte creo que se empatizara mejor con un finish ´
  3. 01:15:010 lo mismo que en 01:05:676
  4. 01:25:843 agrega un finish a lo mejor se te olvido :D
  5. 04:40:510 agrega un circulo con finish aqui y empeza el spinner en 04:40:676 creo q suena y se juega mejor
  6. 04:36:843 (7,8,9) - este cambio de espacio puede ser confuso porque mejor no usas el q usaste en los anteriores seria mejor en mi opinion

Well thats all I can suggest here GL nice map :)

scanter wrote:

(、´・ω·)▄︻┻┳┳═一 ☆
Miya

Natsu wrote:

Miya:
  1. 00:51:843 this part should be mapped since sound weird without the clap in your pattern of 2 and 4 line I want a variation
  2. 00:53:176 x:64 y:228 to be in line with 00:52:510 nazi stuff xD sure, fixed ><
  3. 02:06:676 should be a circle here like you did on 02:08:343 .-. Nope, i dont want to follow vocal at this section.
  4. 02:17:343 same as above
  5. 03:27:176 this place feel so empty and weird for play imo Ok, since bakabakari say the same thing too. Changed~
Ty for the mod :3

http://puu.sh/300SF.osu
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Natsu for your mod and star >w<

Fixed all of the stuff on my parts <3
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