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Well, starring since your map is so pro I felt like making a diff myself. ;o
EDIT: Looking back in retrospect, I never starred.
EDIT: Looking back in retrospect, I never starred.
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BPM:166
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BPM:166
Offset:-2
cute map! I like this.☆彡
but... I want a if possible easy a little more difficulty.
but... I want a if possible easy a little more difficulty.
Too many hitsounds, i think.
Also you can decrease volume of hitsounds.
[v0xtrot]
00:25:662 (7) - Up 1 grid. (Lvl 4 grid)
00:34:156 (x) - Add note here, OR add note here 00:34:337
01:06:867 (10) - Remove note and add note here 01:07:048
01:09:668 (9-10) - Down 1 grid.
It's all.
Starred.
Also you can decrease volume of hitsounds.
[v0xtrot]
00:25:662 (7) - Up 1 grid. (Lvl 4 grid)
00:34:156 (x) - Add note here, OR add note here 00:34:337
01:06:867 (10) - Remove note and add note here 01:07:048
01:09:668 (9-10) - Down 1 grid.
It's all.
Starred.
I still am not very good at timing, but I got 1,817 ms as the offset.
- All:
Needs an easier difficulty, imo.
- v0trot:
00:31:81 (1) - Short spinner. I think its best that you delete this and place notes at 00:32:00 and 00:32:18.
01:09:68 (9,10) - Possibly line up with 01:09:40 (7,8).
- Gentle Death:
Use more hitsounds throughout the map, like the other difficulty. This map is so boring without them.
00:19:15 (1) - Inconsistent spacing; not sure why you changed the distance spacing here.
00:33:97 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:31 (4) - Shorten this by 1/4.
00:26:74 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What exactly are these meant to follow? I can't figure out what - it could just be me.
01:10:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- Shin's
No real problems here; fun.
- All:
Needs an easier difficulty, imo.
- v0trot:
00:31:81 (1) - Short spinner. I think its best that you delete this and place notes at 00:32:00 and 00:32:18.
01:09:68 (9,10) - Possibly line up with 01:09:40 (7,8).
- Gentle Death:
Use more hitsounds throughout the map, like the other difficulty. This map is so boring without them.
00:19:15 (1) - Inconsistent spacing; not sure why you changed the distance spacing here.
00:33:97 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:31 (4) - Shorten this by 1/4.
00:26:74 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What exactly are these meant to follow? I can't figure out what - it could just be me.
01:10:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- Shin's
No real problems here; fun.
Topic Starter
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Yeah, you're brazilian, then i'll speak in portuguese, lol
Paulo, só umas sugestões...
[Gentle Death]:
00:10:208: add um círculo aqui, acho que se as sequencias ficarem as três iguais, fica melhor. :]
[v0xtrot]:
01:13:012 (1): esse circulo e o 2, não seriam melhor continuarem na sequencia anterior? Assim a nova sequencia seria do 3 em diante.
Shin's tá ótimo. xD
Só uma dica, em alguma dificuldade, separa mais os sliders um do outro, dando um pouco mais de dificuldade. As 3 dificuldades estão pouco parecidas, dar uma diferença nelas é interessante. c_c
Starred, congratz.
Paulo, só umas sugestões...
[Gentle Death]:
00:10:208: add um círculo aqui, acho que se as sequencias ficarem as três iguais, fica melhor. :]
[v0xtrot]:
01:13:012 (1): esse circulo e o 2, não seriam melhor continuarem na sequencia anterior? Assim a nova sequencia seria do 3 em diante.
Shin's tá ótimo. xD
Só uma dica, em alguma dificuldade, separa mais os sliders um do outro, dando um pouco mais de dificuldade. As 3 dificuldades estão pouco parecidas, dar uma diferença nelas é interessante. c_c
Starred, congratz.
[gentle death]
no problems here
[v0xtr0t]
00:31:80 (1) - spinner doesn't meet the auto+2000 rule.
01:09:58 (?) - i think a note here would fit better...
[shin's]
00:09:39 (1,2,3) - i find this to be confusing. The repeating sliders make the pattern really weird.
00:50:23 (3,4) - this is really confusing
other than those things all seems fine:)
no problems here
[v0xtr0t]
00:31:80 (1) - spinner doesn't meet the auto+2000 rule.
01:09:58 (?) - i think a note here would fit better...
[shin's]
00:09:39 (1,2,3) - i find this to be confusing. The repeating sliders make the pattern really weird.
00:50:23 (3,4) - this is really confusing
other than those things all seems fine
:)Relaxing
00:13:19 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't have notes on the offbeats on Easy difficulties. Try moving 1 and 2 ahead a white tick, remove 3, then make 2 a slider where 3 used to be.
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overlaps like this may be too confusing for beginners
v0xtrot
00:31:80 (1) - bad bad bad bad bad bad spinner 
either lengthen to the next white tick or remove
aaand mrtn already mentioned it
Shin's
epically overmapped, but sure
yay
00:13:19 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't have notes on the offbeats on Easy difficulties. Try moving 1 and 2 ahead a white tick, remove 3, then make 2 a slider where 3 used to be.
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overlaps like this may be too confusing for beginners
v0xtrot
either lengthen to the next white tick or removeaaand mrtn already mentioned it
Shin's
epically overmapped, but sure
yay
Topic Starter
almost everything fixed~
I've got new skin elements coming, and they are pretty nice! Just wait ;D
I've got new skin elements coming, and they are pretty nice! Just wait ;D
[Relaxing]
00:02:52 (3) - A finish at end of slider :3
01:15:17 (4) - ^
This difficulty needs hitsounds.
[Gentle Death]
00:03:25 (8) - Finish here, too.
00:37:77 (5) - ^
01:15:44 (7) - ^
[v0xtr0t]
00:11:74 (8) - 1 square up? better
00:31:80 (1) - Unrankable spinner. <----- IMPORTANT TO CHANGE!!!!!
01:06:50 (8) - New combo.
01:07:59 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:03 (5) - New combo.
[Shin's]
Fine.
Star this <3
00:02:52 (3) - A finish at end of slider :3
01:15:17 (4) - ^
This difficulty needs hitsounds.
[Gentle Death]
00:03:25 (8) - Finish here, too.
00:37:77 (5) - ^
01:15:44 (7) - ^
[v0xtr0t]
00:11:74 (8) - 1 square up? better
00:31:80 (1) - Unrankable spinner. <----- IMPORTANT TO CHANGE!!!!!
01:06:50 (8) - New combo.
01:07:59 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:03 (5) - New combo.
[Shin's]
Fine.
Star this <3
You guys sure didn't like the spinner. Meh, thanks for the quick feedback on this map. ;o
[Gentle Death]:
00:20:51 (10) - Please put a finish or something here.
00:32:16 (14) - Same here.
00:37:76 (5) - Finish?
[shin]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I don't get this stream yo. :/
And that's pretty much all I have to say for now, I really like both your and Shin's maps.
I made some small changes on my map, like the first spinner, a note on a spot, etc. Check it out yo.
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [v0xtrot].osu
Meh, thanks for the quick feedback on this map. ;o[Gentle Death]:
00:20:51 (10) - Please put a finish or something here.
00:32:16 (14) - Same here.
00:37:76 (5) - Finish?
[shin]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I don't get this stream yo. :/
And that's pretty much all I have to say for now, I really like both your and Shin's maps.
I made some small changes on my map, like the first spinner, a note on a spot, etc. Check it out yo.
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [v0xtrot].osu
You guys sure didn't like the spinner.
No, is not that, for rank a map the spinner have to give with auto 2000 bonus...
No, is not that, for rank a map the spinner have to give with auto 2000 bonus...
Cool beatmap, cool spinner~
I don't have time to go into details, but this beatmap looks good.
So yeah, starred.
I don't have time to go into details, but this beatmap looks good.
So yeah, starred.
Relaxing~
Gentle X_x~
- 00:02:52 (3) - Redo break after beat. (It'll shorten)
- 00:10:11 (2) - Move 1 tick down.
- 00:49:87 (2,3,4) - Move 1 tick to the right. (This is for even spacing between 1 and 2.)
Gentle X_x~
- 00:20:59 (x) - Small suggestion: Possibly add a beat here? Since the drum sound ends there.
- 00:28:19 (1,2) - Move 3 ticks to the left.
- The offset is 0, change to 359. Then resnap.
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Shin's Chaos.... why doesn't that sound appealing to me... 
Anyways~
I'll look over Relaxing...
full nazi~!
Remove ALL claps and replace with whistles imo
00:02:52 (3) - remove finish or whistle (just one of them)
00:14:09 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:19:15 (2) - don't like this, it follows the drums, but then doesn't...make this slider or add note to 00:19:51! (and no hitsounds for this)
00:20:96 (1) - sounds awkward, but whatever
00:22:40 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:24:75 (3) - maybe new combo (since the last slider ended with Finish and its new start for vocal?)
00:26:74 (1) - down a tick?
00:30:72 (5) - right a tick or center it, and remove whistle-slide?
00:45:53 (3) - maybe add finish to end?
01:01:44 (2,4) - add whistle (to 4's start)
01:01:80 (3,4) - 4 left a tick or 3,4 right a tick
01:02:16 (4) - maybe finish to end?
01:03:25 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the lines parallel (and have that first 1 align with 4 from last combo)
01:05:05 (3) - maybe finish to end? or not... your choice here~
01:14:09 (1,2,3,4) - down a tick
01:14:09 (1,2,3) - remove whistles~
01:15:17 (4) - if you did add more finish to those slider ends, then keep the finish here~ if you didn't, then remove
For hitsounds, I won't keep it simple ~
What else... right, a star...
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [Shin's Chaos].osu
Anyways~
I'll look over Relaxing...
full nazi~!
Remove ALL claps and replace with whistles imo
00:02:52 (3) - remove finish or whistle (just one of them)
00:14:09 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:19:15 (2) - don't like this, it follows the drums, but then doesn't...make this slider or add note to 00:19:51! (and no hitsounds for this)
00:20:96 (1) - sounds awkward, but whatever
00:22:40 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:24:75 (3) - maybe new combo (since the last slider ended with Finish and its new start for vocal?)
00:26:74 (1) - down a tick?
00:30:72 (5) - right a tick or center it, and remove whistle-slide?
00:45:53 (3) - maybe add finish to end?
01:01:44 (2,4) - add whistle (to 4's start)
01:01:80 (3,4) - 4 left a tick or 3,4 right a tick
01:02:16 (4) - maybe finish to end?
01:03:25 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the lines parallel (and have that first 1 align with 4 from last combo)
01:05:05 (3) - maybe finish to end? or not... your choice here~
01:14:09 (1,2,3,4) - down a tick
01:14:09 (1,2,3) - remove whistles~
01:15:17 (4) - if you did add more finish to those slider ends, then keep the finish here~ if you didn't, then remove
For hitsounds, I won't keep it simple ~
What else... right, a star...
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [Shin's Chaos].osu
[Relaxing]
00:20:96 (1) - End repeats at white tick instead?
00:28:19 (3) - Hitsound at end of this?
00:30:72 (5) - End at red tick?
00:54:93 (4,5) - Move these up 1 on level 3 grid for equal distance
[Gentle Death] (the name sounds hot lol)
00:03:25 (8) - Finish?
00:20:51 (10) - I don't like the clap here
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - Doesnt sound right
01:15:53 (8) - Finish
[Shins Chaos]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - lolwut?
00:55:11 (7) - Fast sliders up ahead...wow I got a "Splash Mountain" flashback from disneyland with this somehow lol
01:15:53 (6) - Finish
[v0xtrot]
Yay my favorite difficulty~!
Starr'd
00:20:96 (1) - End repeats at white tick instead?
00:28:19 (3) - Hitsound at end of this?
00:30:72 (5) - End at red tick?
00:54:93 (4,5) - Move these up 1 on level 3 grid for equal distance
[Gentle Death] (the name sounds hot lol)
00:03:25 (8) - Finish?
00:20:51 (10) - I don't like the clap here
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - Doesnt sound right
01:15:53 (8) - Finish
[Shins Chaos]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - lolwut?
00:55:11 (7) - Fast sliders up ahead...wow I got a "Splash Mountain" flashback from disneyland with this somehow lol
01:15:53 (6) - Finish
[v0xtrot]
Yay my favorite difficulty~!
Starr'd
What an elegant tv opening...
Relaxing
[00:14:745] finish here
[01:10:388] shrink a bit this slider (it can be difficult for beginners...)
[01:15:198] (4) clap ALL this little slider
Gentle Death
[General] this difficulty is supposed to be a normal mode, so let's "normalize" it making easier steps...
[00:02:840] ... like here!
[00:09:420] these rapid triple beats can be replaced with sliders... can't they?
[00:19:926] same thing here!
[00:31:376] ... and here!
v0xtrot
[00:05:029] (3) a clap HERE, not at 4th slider...
[00:51:665] use normal sounds from here
Shin's chaos
[00:16:016] (3) a whistle here, not on 4th beat
Maybe this GOOD map isn't ranked yet due to the "easy" modes, but it's only an opinion... Star'd!
Relaxing
[00:14:745] finish here
[01:10:388] shrink a bit this slider (it can be difficult for beginners...)
[01:15:198] (4) clap ALL this little slider
Gentle Death
[General] this difficulty is supposed to be a normal mode, so let's "normalize" it making easier steps...
[00:02:840] ... like here!
[00:09:420] these rapid triple beats can be replaced with sliders... can't they?
[00:19:926] same thing here!
[00:31:376] ... and here!
v0xtrot
[00:05:029] (3) a clap HERE, not at 4th slider...
[00:51:665] use normal sounds from here
Shin's chaos
[00:16:016] (3) a whistle here, not on 4th beat
Maybe this GOOD map isn't ranked yet due to the "easy" modes, but it's only an opinion... Star'd!
Topic Starter
Lokamp wrote:
What an elegant tv opening...
Relaxing
[00:14:745] finish here [there isn't a note here...?]
[01:10:388] shrink a bit this slider (it can be difficult for beginners...) [Fixed]
[01:15:198] (4) clap ALL this little slider [It doesn't sound right? D:]
Gentle Death [This diff isn't a normal, it's hard-ish, so I can't take your tips for these.]
[General] this difficulty is supposed to be a normal mode, so let's "normalize" it making easier steps...
[00:02:840] ... like here!
[00:09:420] these rapid triple beats can be replaced with sliders... can't they?
[00:19:926] same thing here!
[00:31:376] ... and here!
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This song...
[Relaxing]:
00:02:52 (3) - Shorten slider by 1/2. (Good luck though if you are ;-;) You also would have to fix the break.
01:03:61 (2,3,1,2,3) - This whole spacing here looks a bit inconsistent (Particularly (1) to (2)).
[Gentle Death]:
00:02:53 (3) - That 1/4 stream should start here...And then readjust break. I guess you should move (1) and (2) to make it look symmetrical if you're changing this.
01:15:44 (7,8) - I don't think these two beats are needed.
[v0xtrot]:
00:40:66 (1) - No volume endings are always confusing.
01:03:61 (2) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
[Shin's Chaos]:
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This is just ugly and cruel.
Whaaaaa~
Star!
I would have some other constructive comment or something...but gee whiz, I'm tired.
[Relaxing]:
00:02:52 (3) - Shorten slider by 1/2. (Good luck though if you are ;-;) You also would have to fix the break.
01:03:61 (2,3,1,2,3) - This whole spacing here looks a bit inconsistent (Particularly (1) to (2)).
[Gentle Death]:
00:02:53 (3) - That 1/4 stream should start here...And then readjust break. I guess you should move (1) and (2) to make it look symmetrical if you're changing this.
01:15:44 (7,8) - I don't think these two beats are needed.
[v0xtrot]:
00:40:66 (1) - No volume endings are always confusing.
01:03:61 (2) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
[Shin's Chaos]:
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This is just ugly and cruel.
Whaaaaa~
Star!
I would have some other constructive comment or something...but gee whiz, I'm tired.
Lokamp wrote:
What an elegant tv opening...
v0xtrot
[00:05:029] (3) a clap HERE, not at 4th slider... - No thanks. I've found no problems with the way it sounds, and neither have anybody else.
[00:51:665] use normal sounds from here - Nah, that makes no sense. I prefer it the way it is.
My main laptop is broken, and msn doesn't work on the school-lappie I'm using, so communication is a bit hard. Oh well. I'll update this post later with the fixes.Starrodkirby86 wrote:
[v0xtrot]:
00:40:66 (1) - No volume endings are always confusing - Agreed, they can be, but it ends at a good spot and I follow the vocals through almost the entire map. I'll see if I can come up with something good.
01:03:61 (2) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3. - I'll fix this though
<Gentle>
00:22:59 (2,3,4,5) - spacing
<Shin>
00:46:26 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit out of screen
Nice hitsounds~
00:22:59 (2,3,4,5) - spacing
<Shin>
00:46:26 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit out of screen
Nice hitsounds~
[Relaxing]
This one's fine, maybe you could've been more creative with your spacing but it's find. Just one thing though...
00:44:09 (1,2) - Have these sliders end a half tick earlier, it sounds better IMO
[Gentle Death]
Great job, you were more creative in this one, a few things though.
00:09:48 (2) - Tale this out, it doesn't sync to anything.
00:10:92 (7) - ^
00:52:77 (1,2,3,4) - While this looks pretty, the overlapping sliders make it hard to know where to move your mouse, in fact I think you can't get this ranked until you fix it.
[v0xtrot]
This is also, great, couldn't find any flaws, if I have to say anything though it would have to be to maybe make your jumps smaller, just maybe, I'm not saying to lose them, but maybe make them smaller.
[Shin's Chaos]
Found nothing wrong with it, I thought the spacing was really creative here.
[Overall]
Great job, keep going on, star!
This one's fine, maybe you could've been more creative with your spacing but it's find. Just one thing though...
00:44:09 (1,2) - Have these sliders end a half tick earlier, it sounds better IMO
[Gentle Death]
Great job, you were more creative in this one, a few things though.
00:09:48 (2) - Tale this out, it doesn't sync to anything.
00:10:92 (7) - ^
00:52:77 (1,2,3,4) - While this looks pretty, the overlapping sliders make it hard to know where to move your mouse, in fact I think you can't get this ranked until you fix it.
[v0xtrot]
This is also, great, couldn't find any flaws, if I have to say anything though it would have to be to maybe make your jumps smaller, just maybe, I'm not saying to lose them, but maybe make them smaller.
[Shin's Chaos]
Found nothing wrong with it, I thought the spacing was really creative here.
[Overall]
Great job, keep going on, star!
Okay, real modding time.
[Overall]
- First time I ever skip this section :O I could bother you about Lead-In, since I always think that more than 1 sec is too much. But that is tooootally your choice.
[Kiai Time]
Kiai Time suggestions:
So yeah, just a suggestion.
[Timing]
Offset: 364?
[Relaxing] (I'm amazed you didn't use the ~)
Seems fine to me.
[Gentle Death]
Good work.
[v0xtrot]
01:09:39 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't makes sense IMO... Could you change it to a more fitting pattern or something?
[Shin's Chaos]
- Some parts of the "Normal Sampleset" section lack hitsounds. Not claps, nor whistles, only finishes... They really fit the song, you know. I like how did you mixed Soft and Normal, though.
~ ~ ~
So yeah, like I said before, pretty much flawless. It looks like it's already ranked!
[Overall]
- First time I ever skip this section :O I could bother you about Lead-In, since I always think that more than 1 sec is too much. But that is tooootally your choice.
[Kiai Time]
Kiai Time suggestions:
- 1st. 00:03:06 (Fountain)
- 2nd. 00:43:55 - 00:55:12 (Fountain) - 01:06:142 (End of Kiai)
- 3rd. 01:15:35 (Fountain)
So yeah, just a suggestion.
[Timing]
Offset: 364?
[Relaxing] (I'm amazed you didn't use the ~
)Seems fine to me.
[Gentle Death]
Good work.
[v0xtrot]
01:09:39 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't makes sense IMO... Could you change it to a more fitting pattern or something?
[Shin's Chaos]
- Some parts of the "Normal Sampleset" section lack hitsounds. Not claps, nor whistles, only finishes... They really fit the song, you know. I like how did you mixed Soft and Normal, though.
~ ~ ~
So yeah, like I said before, pretty much flawless. It looks like it's already ranked!
[Relaxing]
Good!
[Gentle Death]
Great!
[v0xtrot]
Radical!
[Shin's Chaos]
00:19:87 (3) - I disagree with the Kiai time here. I suggest making it shorter.
Otherwise, great job. Star.
Good!
[Gentle Death]
Great!
[v0xtrot]
Radical!
[Shin's Chaos]
00:19:87 (3) - I disagree with the Kiai time here. I suggest making it shorter.
Otherwise, great job. Star.
mtmcl
Why does the melody sound like Sk8tr boi in EBA?
Wow, the anime's story line if Fucked up...
Relaxing
No Issues...
Gentle Death
No Issues...
v0trot
No Issues...
Shin's Chaos
No Issues...
Starred' for lack of issues..
No Kudos please.
Wow, the anime's story line if Fucked up...
Relaxing
No Issues...
Gentle Death
No Issues...
v0trot
No Issues...
Shin's Chaos
No Issues...
Starred' for lack of issues..
No Kudos please.
I am mapping the full version of this song, edited for length, in an authentic style, and have been for a period of months.
It seems my map will be very different from both this map and the 2007 map, so I don't have any concerns.
Just thought you might like to know.
It seems my map will be very different from both this map and the 2007 map, so I don't have any concerns.
Just thought you might like to know.
I won't pop this bubble, but I want to know why you're having two kiai times at 00:44:09 and 00:46:98 instead of something like 00:44:09 and 00:55:66 in relaxing/gentle death.
Also imo shin's map is completely incomprehensible, but the other mods don't seem to mind, so meh.
Also imo shin's map is completely incomprehensible, but the other mods don't seem to mind, so meh.
Topic Starter
It's because, for me, the chorus ends in 00:55:11, and has it's peak moments at 00:44:09 and 00:46:98 respectively. It doesn't feel like anything else after that deserves kiai.
I think the chorus starts at 00:44:09 and finishes at the end of the song
Topic Starter
Oh well, I think that 50% of a song made of Kiai is a little too much... Sometimes we have to be selective about Kiai, but if any other BAT complain about that, I'll change it
Here we go
Adding an online offset.
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