XeVary wrote:

hi
Little suggestion
on insane
00:42:928 (9) - Try to put one here?

00:45:473 (7) - 00:50:382 (6) - 01:01:473 (6) - Here too
01:23:201 (1) - More that of the DS(Distance Snap) might be good
01:23:746 (4) - Let's reverse　:D

01:25:019 (3) - DS
on Ixxm's Insane
01:06:837 (1,2,1,2,1) -New Combo

I like this song　:D
do your best!

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hihi~

GENERAL: Good patterns and spacing. but some hitsounds need to be improved on, especially in hard

EASY

00:05:540 (3) - Change the audio here, lower it to 10% to finish it better before the slider. Fixed

00:47:382 (4,5) - Should be changed to one long slider. Its easy difficulty, so the long sliders would be more appropriate. Fixed

01:00:473 (3,1) - ^ I like it better this way :3

NORMAL

00:16:268 (7) - Please add finish sound

00:45:565 (5) - The circle note doesnt sound so approriate. consider changing it to a slider, then making 00:45:928 (6) - not bounce back



01:06:474 (4) - Without hitsounds, the circle isnt exactly appropriate for this part of the song. can be improved by adding Finish+Whistle hitsound

01:13:928 (1) - Distance spacing, should be X:324 y:100
Fixed all
HARD

00:06:269 (7) - This section should be changed to a spinner, to make the playing more smooth for players

00:22:655 (3) - A circle should be added after 00:21:564 (2) - to make the rhythm sound better

00:42:655 (5,6) - Finish/Clap hitsounds for emphasis on stacked circles

01:04:291 (3) - Try to make this slider more curvy, like this



01:20:473 (6) - Finish hitsound after the slider . Sounds weird to me :/
Fixed the rest.

Sorry but Im not good at mapping Insane difficulties so I only did 3. but i hope I helped~

Awaken wrote:

Here's my mod.

I am just a newbie in modding
Maybe my mod can't help you
I can only mod harder difficulty than "hard" sorry!

[Hard]
00:19:904 (1,2) - I always don't like this kind of flow http://puu.sh/2S17o.jpg fix
01:05:746 (1) - this spinner may be better to use slider to replace ^

[Ixxm's Insane]
01:13:564 (1,2,3) - jump or may read wrong Fix
01:15:019 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:18:450 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should add a note on 0:19:086Fix
01:06:473 (7,8,1,2,1,2) - the jump may be able to be more interesting http://puu.sh/2S0ZG.jpg no fix


[Insane]
00:03:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about changing this? http://puu.sh/2S00s.jpg fix
00:05:905 (4,5,6) - i think it's a little crowded. you can try jumping http://puu.sh/2S09p.jpg ^
00:52:109 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think this jump is more beautiful http://puu.sh/2S0ny.jpg Changed it but into something else
01:04:837 (1,2,3) - jump or may read wrong fix
01:23:201 (1,2,3,4) - try jumping http://puu.sh/2S0x7.jpg ^

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod

Easy
It's a very clean map. Only minor things to say.

00:10:631 (3) - Wrap more evenly around 4? That gap just looks ugly to me. Just in case you don't know the terminology, wrapping an object around another object is referred to as blanketing. I will refer to it as such.
00:34:655 (1,2) - Blanket around this should be more even. I fixed this by having the second point (of slider 2) at x 33 y 134, the last point is at x 58 y 193. I turned grid snap off to fix. Make sure to fix the spacing with 3 afterwards.
00:47:382 (4,5) - Blanket here?
00:52:110 (3) - Any particular reason why you didn't add a finish here? I think I know this answer. you're only using them every so many measures. This sound stood out from the other sounds in terms of tone though. Maybe consider having a finish here because of that.
01:00:473 (3) - I suggest having this look similar to 1.

01:05:928 (2) - Starts a bit too close to the body of 1 for my tastes. It would help if 01:05:201 (1) - and 01:07:382 (3) - were in the exact same position. 01:05:201 (1) - is at x 266 y 242 and 01:07:382 (3) - is at x 267 y 244. The easiest way to fix this is to move 1. This will make the gap a little better.

Normal

00:07:722 (1,2,3,4) - Straight sliders just don't give this part justice. I think you could create a more interesting pattern utilizing two repeat sliders or at the very least adding more curves.
00:20:110 (2,3,4) - I think this looks better as a blanket. What do you think?
00:27:383 (2,3,4,5) - These curves look sloppy to me. I think reducing the arc makes a nicer pattern in general. Here's an example. You don't really have to change it if you don't want to. The arc just seems out of place to me.
00:51:383 (4,5) - Too linear. Something like this makes more sense IMO.
00:59:383 (1) - Move lower and more under previous slider for a better alignment. I'm pretty sure you could fix the alignment without screwing with your patterns.
00:59:383 (1,2) - Too close/ spacing breaks pattern consistency.
01:10:292 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Normally I would prefer patterns like these to be more consistent (similar slider shapes, spacings etc) But I rather like how 01:13:201 (4,1,2,3) - is executed. It makes up for the lack of consistency.
01:22:655 (1,2) - I think this could be a better pattern. I suggest placing the sliders in a more interesting way.

Hard
[Note] Chrome ate my first attempt at a mod for Hard. I apologize if this mod feels rushed. ask me if you have any questions.

Some parts of this difficulty felt randomly placed. It would be nice if this difficulty had elements that all fit together coherently and were based upon a common structure. There were parts that were just mapped very differently than other parts, sometimes unnecessarily so.

Kiai lacked finishes. the easier difficulties had more finishes than this difficulty has.

00:01:178 (3,4,5,6) - I think it would be better if you made the blanket perfect with 3,4 and then made a triangle pattern with the stack. http://puu.sh/2Sh3M.jpg
00:03:723 (3,4) - I think a perfect blanket here would look better. http://puu.sh/2Sh8N.jpg
00:05:904 - I suggest adding a note here. The gap between the next note throws me off the rhythm, which in turn makes the spinner uncomfortable to spin.
00:07:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are you happy with this pattern? It's probably not the best pattern, but it's not bad either. I could try to find a better one in a recheck if you want.
00:14:814 (4,5,6) - Stack leaning is messing with the spacing. You might want to manually space to fix it.
00:19:904 (1,2) - I don't like this blanket. It's imperfect and I think that the beat spread out is much more desirable to look at. consider forming it similarly to the next segment.
00:32:837 (3,4) - Weird pattern. How about something like this? http://puu.sh/2SizE.jpg
00:36:109 (3,4) - I did not expect this pattern to be angled. Could you try to make it so 3 doesn't angle upward as much?
00:42:655 (5,6,1) - Spacing is different and it shouldn't be. It's fine that you're using a higher distance snap, but make sure that the distance snap is the same spacing across the transition. (It isn't).
00:44:110 (3,4,5,6) - Randomly shaped pattern doesn't really fit considering that there are so many consistent patterns in this area.
00:47:438 - I'm not sure about this finish.
00:53:382 (2,3,4) - Is this spacing change intentional?
01:03:746 (2) - Looks bad curved in that direction. I recommend curving in the other direction and making a blanket with 01:02:837 (4) - Example http://puu.sh/2ShUR.jpg
01:05:746 (1) - The flatness of this doesn't complement the rest of the pattern IMO. Try adding more of a curve to wrap around the previous part.
01:22:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Just looks random to me. I think it could be a lot better.

Ixxm's Insane
I will need to be a better mood to more accurately mod this. There's a lot of senseless speed changes and some parts were so slow it was affecting my ability to play. The slowest parts of the Insane should not be the hardest parts.

00:02:450 (3) - Use a better curve. Use the new slider algorithm. It should look similar to 00:04:995 (3) -
00:20:110 (2) - Move last point to x 112 y 199. I think it looks better entering the note curve that way IMO.
00:29:564 (5) - The misalignment here is bad. You should fix this.
00:39:746 (2,3,4) - This would look so much better if the pattern after 2 was placed where 2 is pointing. http://puu.sh/2Sjnf.jpg
00:41:928 (2) - Looks to curve unnecessarily inward. If anything it should curve like this http://puu.sh/2SjrW.jpg
00:43:382 - This slowdown had terrible flow.
00:45:746 (4) - Use a better curve here?
00:52:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - A spam of annoying hitsounds >.< also the jumps are faster than the slider speed of the slider right before them. I find that very awkward.
00:54:110 (4) - I consider this abusing slider velocities. Slowing down like this doesn't make any sense here.
01:17:201 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Annoying.
01:18:473 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - Speed changes are unreadable and do not make any sense.
01:19:382 (9) - I feel this should be a single note.

Insane
There's probably a lot more things to be naziid about in this. I covered a large portion of the issues though.

00:04:632 (2) - I suggest a curve similar to 00:04:086 (5) - .
00:14:086 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's weird that the slider shapes keep changing. I recommend making it more consistent, especially here 00:14:631 (4,5,6) - 00:15:177 (6,7,8) - could use a pattern change. It's not that interesting.
00:28:837 (1) - I feel this doesn't look great in relation to slider 7. I suggest blanketing around the edge of 7 for a better pattern. http://puu.sh/2SkvK.jpg
00:29:564 (3,1) - Doesn't look that good either. Not sure how to fix though.
00:34:655 (1,2,3) - Spacing looks like an error to me. (Make sure this whole combo has consistent spacing)
00:49:928 (4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern just screws me up. Sliders are so slow. >.< it just kills the flow. i'm pretty sure it's because of that triple. I highly recommend removing the middle note, and spacing out. It plays a lot better.
00:58:655 (5,6) - Too close.
01:00:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Structure is shaky here. I feel that the notes don't form a cohesive pattern, despite first appearing like they were going to. also 4 and 5,6,7 look randomly placed.
01:11:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Structure is a bit off here too, but not as much.


Conclusion

I don't want to star this with the GD is such a poor shape. I would be willing to recheck, but perhaps after a mod or two. I'd appreciate it if you would :3

_nara_ wrote:

hi, m4m from your queue.

[Easy]
00:07:722 insert break between this 00:16:450 bcs its easy diff, and youre gonna kill their hands o.O
-1 ar and hd?

[Normal]
00:06:268 spinner?
00:07:722 break between this? 00:16:450

[Hard]
well, this is a hard diff, so no break time isn't big case.
and so for other diff.

sorry for the short mod ^^ bcs your map was good.

Arrival wrote:

Okay let's go :

[Insane]
00:00:450 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - On all this pattern you use like 1/3 of all the playground, try to develop this part a bit better. I think this pattern is okay though
00:19:904 (1) - Here from a looooooooong part you use the SAME rythm again and again, it's just really boring after repeating 4 times the 1/1 Slider, circle, 1/1 slider. Please diversify this. Following the vocal..
00:34:655 (1) - Stack it with 00:34:109 (4) - fix
01:06:655 - Place a circle, here you are on a Downbeat (The big white tick) it's important to map this. It's important but it follows nothing

[Ixxm's Insane]
00:36:837 (3,1,2) - This doesn't look symmetric
00:39:019 (6) - Make a better blanket here
00:41:201 (6) - ^
00:51:564 (1) - Why is there a NC ? Timing or SV don't change.
00:52:110 (1) - What about this ? http://puu.sh/2TYkd.jpg + http://puu.sh/2TYld.jpg
01:00:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Spacing inconsistence, you stay on the same rythm, and make jumps which don't have sense.
01:16:655 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I advice the same kind of pattern as 00:52:110 (1) -

[Hard]
00:52:110 (1) - Lack of inspiration ? following vocal
Nice diff here, i just think you should use more the playground.

[Normal]
00:37:200 (4) - I suggest you to use something else than a Slider-reverse. Consider this. I like it this way :3
00:39:018 (2) - Stack it perfectly... use grid level 4 fix
01:02:292 (1) - 01:03:747 (1) - I find these two sliders too curvy, personal feeling. fixing
01:03:746 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Like in the previous difficulty : You stay more than 5 seconds on the same 1/4 part of the playground..... fixing

[Easy]
01:09:564 (3,4,1) - Like this ? : http://puu.sh/2TYHU.jpg fix
Nice diff, except 01:07:382 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - where you map on the same 1/2 of the playground for like 10 seconds fixing

That's all :3 Good luck for your map !

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2!

Some suggestions

[Overall]

Your custom claps sounds really off starting w/ [Hard]. Consider to recheck.
All incoming spinner suggestions is made for follow vocal part properly.

[Easy]
Don't know 'bout 00:00:450 (1) - and incoming kick-sliders. It can be tiring and confusing to play for newbs.
For example, you can 00:00:450 (1,2) remove repeats here, making it 00:00:450 - 00:01:177 length, remove 00:02:631 (3) - putting 1 note here instead.
And other like this. So your patterns will go just for vocal part.
Also, you can try to deal w/ same 1/1 kick-sliders some things, that will give an easy opportunity to being easy
If you want to keep it all, I'd still suggest to don't spam these sliders at least
I'll try to shorten my amount of these sliders :3
[Normal]
00:05:359 - I'd remove repeat of previous slider, remove incoming slider and make here a spinner to 00:07:359 Fixed
00:54:110 (7) - I'd delete it and start spinner from here, following vocal part I'd rather catch that loud bgm

[Hard]
00:16:450 (9) - I'd better start spinner here instead op putting a circle ^
00:54:473 (4) - cirlce instead of slider, start spinner at 00:54:655 Changed it but into something else
01:20:473 (6) - ^ -==- 01:20:837 I like it this way better :3

[Ixxm's Insane]
AR -1
00:03:359 (1) - any reason to make this jump THAT huge?
00:30:473 - Empty unmapped spaces w/ 7 HDR? Consider to put here something
01:20:291 (7) replace w/ circle, spinner 01:20:473 here
00:06:268 (1) - better start spinner here

[Insane]
00:53:928 - start spinner here Fixed


Other seems acceptable fine

azu-nyan14 wrote:

I love this song!

[General]

I think the timing is wrong, try this timing I found with the help of pimpG (thx again ^^):

SPOILER

440,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
10237,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
10600,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
13864,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
14984,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
20075,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
42612,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
43358,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
55017,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
56073,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
56449,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
61879,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
62267,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
65156,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
67621,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
68086,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
78420,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0
79722,363.636363636364,4,2,1,100,1,0

Fixed
I have a 2 better bg for you, use one of them if you want! ^^

SPOILER

I like the one I have more :3
In Insane GD have one inconsistency in combo colours, in all diffs except Insane GD Combo4 colour is 255,5,5 and in Insane GD Combo4 colour is 240,5,5.
Fixed
[Easy]

00:02:631 (3): Add whistle in start? Fix
00:05:540 (3): ^ in the end? ^
00:20:838 (2): Whistle in start and remove clap in the end? ^
00:21:565 (3): Maybe replace whistle for finish? ^
00:23:747 (2): Same as 00:20:838 ^
00:24:473 (3): Same as 00:21:565 ^
00:29:565 (2): Remove clap in the reverse? Also you can improve the flow here, like this: ^

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/2TDHm.jpg

00:43:019: Add a note? Feels empty without a one here imo. ^
01:01:564 (1,2,3): Maybe try this for better flow: fixed but into something else

SPOILER

01:12:110 (2,3,4): ^

SPOILER

01:16:473 (2,3,4,1,2,3): I think you sholud try this for better flow and rhythm: fixed

SPOILER

168,348,75382,2,0,L|261:348,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,290,76474,2,0,P|100:252|110:193,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,77564,2,0,P|244:260|332:276,1,120
424,292,78655,6,0,L|464:208,1,80
488,144,79383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,80,79746,2,0,P|379:69|308:80,1,120

[Normal]

00:08:268 (2,3): This rhythm can confuse newbies when playing, turn (2) into a 2/2 slider. Well it has to be a little more challenging though :/
00:16:268 (7): Delete this note to make the diff more easier to beginners. ^
00:47:382 (1): I think the rhythm can be improved here, i would have make like this: sounds odd to me though :/

SPOILER

01:23:746 (3): Why not make this curved? fixed

[Hard]

00:05:504 (7,8): You can improve this rhythm moving (7) to to 00:05:722, after this add a 1/2 slider in 00:05:504 and keep the note in 00:06:268. sounds odd to me :/ (maybe i did it wrong)
00:09:359 (6,7,8): Make this to improve the flow: fixed

SPOILER

00:15:360 (6,7,8,9): ^ fixed

SPOILER

00:31:382: Add a note here? Looks empty imo and if you fix this, stack with 1 will be great fixed
00:42:655 (5): Unstack this note. ^
00:47:382 (2,3): Improve the rhythm moving (3) to 00:47:564 and add a note on 00:48:473.sounds odd to me :/ (maybe i did it wrong)
00:53:382 (2,3,4): ^ (2) to 00:50:200, after this make a 2/2 slider in 00:53:746. fixed

SPOILER

00:57:200 (2,3,4): ^ (2) to 00:57:019, after this make a 1/1 slider in 00:57:200 and a 2/2 slider in 00:57:746, and after make a 1/2 slider in 00:58:291.fixed

SPOILER

00:59:928: Add a note here? fixed

If you fix the suggestion above

Move (2 - 01:00:473) to 01:00:655, after add a note in 01:00:473. Make the same in 01:09:200 and 01:12:110.

[Insane]

00:10:268 (4): Consider unstack this note? fixed
00:12:813 (5): Turn this to a 1/4 slider with 3 repeats? Sounds bettter imo. ^

SPOILER

00:14:995 (5,6,7,8): Improve the flow here making this: fixed

SPOILER

301,209,14995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,152,15177,2,0,P|202:122|195:88,1,70
292,88,15540,2,0,P|317:63|332:32,2,70
316,184,16086,2,0,P|331:215|364:236,1,70

00:32:837 (3,4,5,6,1): Make this pattern more clean: didnt fix cuz the next jump would look odd

SPOILER

Well is a good map, but need more improvements imo. GL

Jemmmmy wrote:

easy
fine

NORMAL

normal
00:37:165 (4,1) - change rhythm CB and place to Fixed
00:50:813 (3,4) - change rhythm and place to didnt fix cuz it sounded off w/o the white tick
01:06:610 - add a circle didnt fix don't see a reason to put one here :3

hard
00:08:440 (4) - move middle anchor point to 440,316 and end anchor point to 380,332 didnt fixed cuz it's to sharp
00:08:803 (5) - move to324,348 fixed
00:31:711 (1) - move middle anchor point to 128,60 end's to 188,56 and distance snap 1,2,3 fixed
00:33:165 (4) - move to 260,248 ,middle achor point move to 308,280,end's to 372,276 fixed

Ixxm's Insane
00:18:620 (2,3,4,5) - change rhythm to . let 3,4,5,6 closer to 2 is better
00:39:711 (2) - move middle anchor point to 188,172 ,end's to 200,216(all this for beautiful)
00:51:539 (7) - move middle anchor point to 76,108 and end's to 104,180

insane
00:25:165 (7) - better same as 00:24:438 (5) - it's already the same but Control G-ed
01:07:337 (3,4) - move to 180,184 fixed
01:18:086 (6) - move to 168,280 fixed

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Mod Request from Clannad Modding Queue~

[Easy]
00:16:438 (1) - Delete Finish Fixed put whistle instead
00:20:074 (1) - ^ ^
00:22:985 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:893 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:985 (3) - ^ ^
00:28:802 (1) - ^ ^
00:45:539 (2) - Add Clap on Slider Start fixed
01:10:995 (1,3) - Don't overlap fixed
01:18:390 (1,3) - Add Clap on Slider Start fixed

[Normal]
00:12:054 (2) - Delete Clap
00:13:894 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why Don't add clap?
00:20:075 (2) - Delete Finish
00:34:257 (4) - X:252 Y:156
00:37:165 (4) - Add Clap
00:52:085 (5) - Clap on Slider End
01:07:711 (3,2) - Stack
01:09:903 (3,2) - Slider Arrow Stack 01:09:903 (3) -
all fix
[Hard]
00:00:439 (1) - Delete Finish and add whistle
And volume--->50%
00:20:074 (2,1,1,6) - Delete Finish
00:42:075 (4) - red line--->normal hitsound
01:06:792 (2,3,4) - Normal Hitsound
01:13:541 (4) - Clap
01:16:449 (4,2) - Don't Overlap
all fix

[Insane]
So Lazy zzz....
Sorry
for
My
English is Bad
And I can't
Mod
YouR
Insame QAQ

OEvil wrote:

[Hey, From Quene ]

[All Difficulties]

Tags
- Consider adding "Ixxm" to all of your tags

Timing Sections
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections, All The Timing Sections Must Be the Same At All Difficulties:
Huh it's same at all difficulties o-o?
- [Easy]
Red timing sections at:
- 00:00:440, BPM of 165.000
- 00:10:237, BPM of 165.000
- 00:10:600, BPM of 165.000
- 00:13:894, BPM of 165.000
- 00:14:984, BPM of 165.000
- 00:20:075, BPM of 165.000
- 00:42:612, BPM of 165.000
- 00:43:358, BPM of 165.000
- 00:55:017, BPM of 165.000
- 00:56:073, BPM of 165.000
- 00:56:449, BPM of 165.000
- 01:01:879, BPM of 165.000
- 01:02:267, BPM of 165.000
- 01:05:156, BPM of 165.000
- 01:07:621, BPM of 165.000
- 01:08:086, BPM of 165.000
- 01:18:420, BPM of 165.000
- 01:19:722, BPM of 165.000

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
- 00:00:450, BPM of 165.000
- 00:20:110, BPM of 165.000

- [Insane]
Red timing sections at:
- 00:00:450, BPM of 165.000
- 00:20:110, BPM of 165.000

- [Ixxm's Insane]
Red timing sections at:
- 00:00:440, BPM of 165.000
- 00:10:237, BPM of 165.000
- 00:10:600, BPM of 165.000
- 00:13:894, BPM of 165.000
- 00:14:984, BPM of 165.000
- 00:20:075, BPM of 165.000
- 00:42:612, BPM of 165.000
- 00:43:358, BPM of 165.000
- 00:55:017, BPM of 165.000
- 00:56:073, BPM of 165.000
- 00:56:449, BPM of 165.000
- 01:01:879, BPM of 165.000
- 01:02:267, BPM of 165.000
- 01:05:156, BPM of 165.000
- 01:07:621, BPM of 165.000
- 01:08:086, BPM of 165.000
- 01:18:420, BPM of 165.000
- 01:19:722, BPM of 165.000

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
- 00:00:440, BPM of 165.000
- 00:10:600, BPM of 165.000
- 00:20:110, BPM of 165.000
- 00:43:358, BPM of 165.000
- 00:55:017, BPM of 165.000
- 00:56:073, BPM of 165.000
- 00:56:449, BPM of 165.000
- 01:02:267, BPM of 165.000
- 01:08:086, BPM of 165.000
- 01:18:420, BPM of 165.000
- 01:19:722, BPM of 165.000

[Easy]

Spinner New Combo
- 00:57:176 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

fixed
[Hard]

Good Diff

[Insane]

Nice Diff

Spinner New Combo
00:19:904 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

fixed
[Ixxm's Insane]

Nice Diff

Spinner New Combo
00:48:995 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

it isn't following a spinner o-o
[Normal]

Nice Diff
- 00:05:894 (4) - Remove this circle. removed
- 00:05:530 - Add a spinner from here until 00:07:349, with a finish.

I'd rather follow the piano

AsprikaQ wrote:

Hi, all suggestion (for M4M from your queue)

[General]

Why you no use Yui BG Some notes are being placed in some weird position. Hard to say.

[Insane]

00:16:438 (1) - Add note and start spin at 00:16:620 (1) - started it at the blue tick
00:16:620 (1) - Personally, I would say remove this and add notes and sliders is better choice I rather keep this spinner here :/
00:41:893 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Good hitsounds used!
00:42:256 (6) - Add clap Sounds a bit messy to me though ><
00:42:793 (9) - ^ ^
00:42:975 (11) - ^ for both head and tail ^
00:44:085 (2) - Clap to head
00:47:721 (5) - Change Finish to Clap at tail
00:49:176 (3) - Finish at head
00:52:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Add some hitsounds maybe nice
01:19:722 (1) - Remove spinner and add some notes and sliders as you want please Keeping the spinner here :/
01:25:449 (1) - Change Finish to Whistle is better and also make it start at same time (01:25:540) like other diffs please
fixed the rest
[Hard]

00:05:894 (7,8) - I don't think stacking these is a good idea
00:23:711 (3) - Change to Finish at tail
00:46:267 (1) - Finish at head
01:05:701 (1) - Whistle at reverse
01:19:722 (4) - Finish
01:25:540 (1) - Change Finish to Whistle is better
fixed all
[Normal]

00:09:894 (5) - Remove Clap
00:10:237 (6) - Why it suddenly become so loud..
00:10:600 (1) to 00:12:054 (2) - - ^
00:16:438 (1) - Not recommended spinner right after in Normal & Easy diff. I rather keep itlike this :3
00:38:983 (3) - Don't stack with same pattern please
00:44:630 (4) - Remove overall Whistle
00:49:904 (1) - Clap at head
00:53:358 (6) - Remove and place note at each white line sounds better Following the vocal here though :0
01:23:176 (2) - Finish at head
01:23:722 (3) - ^
01:25:540 (1) - Change Finish to Whistle is better
fixed the rest
[Easy]

Everything perfect! but only

01:25:540 (1) - Change Finish to Whistle is better
fixed
That's all GL HF GG WP from Germany

1. From what i understand the Normal diff is a collab right? if yes add Collab to tags,and maybenotice us witha SB the parts o3o

1. 01:01:539 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
2. 00:54:085 (1) - spinner end is not right snapped
   
   Unsnapped inherited sections at:
3. 00:10:440 - snap to 00:10:418
4. 00:18:963 - snap to 00:18:984
5. 00:31:746 - snap to 00:31:711
6. 01:07:883 - snap to 01:07:893

1. 00:21:529 (3,1) - look good the spacing here,is like a jump òwò
2. 00:27:347 (2,1) - this 2 objects are a bit near to each other
3. 01:10:995 (1) - the next slider is a bit far

1. 01:03:721 (4) - about this circle,also you can do a btter blanket with the next slider,and personally i don't like really much the overlap with 01:05:156 (1) -
2. 01:13:176 (3) - can be stacked with 01:10:631 (4) -
3. 01:19:329 (2,3) - you can do a better blanket here
4. 01:25:176 (3) - do it like this : / for improving the flow and the ugly slider
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:13:540 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
2. 01:01:175 (3) - Unsnapped slider end

1. 00:22:984 (1) - the next and the prev objectmake with this circle a double jump,you should fix the spacing here
2. 00:30:984 (7,1) - again :V try to don't use jumps in normal easy diffs
3. 00:37:529 (1,2) - same again about the wrong spacing

1. 00:05:530 - start spinner here
2. 00:07:712 (1,2,3,4) - this patten looks a bit hard for a normal imo why don't you try to make it a bit simpler?
3. 00:31:711 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern will flow better if you make it symmetrical
4. 00:44:630 (4) - remove whistle from slider body
5. 00:50:448 (2,3) - try a simpler rhythm like this:
   
6. 01:18:420 (1,2) - place itlike this for improving a bit the flow
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:24:449 (4) - the clap on slider end sounds weird

1. 00:23:505 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
2. 00:26:415 (2) - Unsnapped circle.

1. 00:55:177 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
2. 00:55:177 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
3. 00:55:540 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
4. 00:55:540 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
5. 00:55:540 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
6. 01:04:994 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
7. 01:07:316 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
8. 01:19:692 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
9. 00:48:995 - add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

1. 00:10:258 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
2. 01:01:539 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   
   Unsnapped inherited sections at:
3. 01:22:291 - snap to 01:22:267
4. 01:25:928 - snap to 01:25:903
5. 01:26:655 - snap to 01:26:631
6. 01:27:382 - snap to 01:27:358
7. 01:27:746 - snap to 01:27:722

Lally wrote:

hi o3o reqfrom my queue

[General]

1. From what i understand the Normal diff is a collab right? if yes add Collab to tags,and maybenotice us witha SB the parts o3o

Well we didn't really did it in parts ><
[Easy]
Snapping

1. 01:01:539 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
2. 00:54:085 (1) - spinner end is not right snapped
   
   Unsnapped inherited sections at:
3. 00:10:440 - snap to 00:10:418
4. 00:18:963 - snap to 00:18:984
5. 00:31:746 - snap to 00:31:711
6. 01:07:883 - snap to 01:07:893

Spacing:

1. 00:21:529 (3,1) - look good the spacing here,is like a jump òwò
2. 00:27:347 (2,1) - this 2 objects are a bit near to each other
3. 01:10:995 (1) - the next slider is a bit far

Placement:

1. 01:03:721 (4) - about this circle,also you can do a btter blanket with the next slider,and personally i don't like really much the overlap with 01:05:156 (1) -
2. 01:13:176 (3) - can be stacked with 01:10:631 (4) - alot of people complain about stacking in easy :/ so I rather keep it like this :3
3. 01:19:329 (2,3) - you can do a better blanket here
4. 01:25:176 (3) - do it like this : / for improving the flow and the ugly slider
   
   SPOILER

   

fixed the rest :3
[Normal]
Snapping:

1. 00:13:540 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
2. 01:01:175 (3) - Unsnapped slider end

Spacing:

1. 00:22:984 (1) - the next and the prev objectmake with this circle a double jump,you should fix the spacing here
2. 00:30:984 (7,1) - again :V try to don't use jumps in normal easy diffs
3. 00:37:529 (1,2) - same again about the wrong spacing

Placement:

1. 00:05:530 - start spinner here
2. 00:07:712 (1,2,3,4) - this patten looks a bit hard for a normal imo why don't you try to make it a bit simpler? No idea how to make simpler ><
3. 00:31:711 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern will flow better if you make it symmetrical
4. 00:44:630 (4) - remove whistle from slider body
5. 00:50:448 (2,3) - try a simpler rhythm like this:
   
6. 01:18:420 (1,2) - place itlike this for improving a bit the flow
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:24:449 (4) - the clap on slider end sounds weird

fixed the rest
[Hard]

1. 00:23:505 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
2. 00:26:415 (2) - Unsnapped circle.

fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:10:258 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
2. 01:01:539 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   
   Unsnapped inherited sections at:
3. 01:22:291 - snap to 01:22:267
4. 01:25:928 - snap to 01:25:903
5. 01:26:655 - snap to 01:26:631
6. 01:27:382 - snap to 01:27:358
7. 01:27:746 - snap to 01:27:722

fixed all :3

Hope it can help good luck o3o

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello, my dear. mod at your request.

[General]

propose a new time for KiAi:
Hmm will consider ^^
00:56:449 (1) - start
01:06:428 (5) - finish
01:08:086 (1) - start
01:18:420 (1) - finish


[Easy]

00:05:530 (3) - whistle
00:10:600 (4) - new combo
00:13:894 (1) - whistle
00:14:984 (2) - ^
00:15:711 (3) - ^
00:16:073 (3) - remove whistle
00:41:893 (3) 00:42:612 (4,5,6) - whistle
00:46:267 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/33BCA.jpg I think this will sound better Sounds odd te me though :/, so no fix ><
fixed the rest =w=
[Hormal]

00:46:812 (x) - add note
00:50:994 (3) - remove note
00:51:176 (x) - add note
01:24:449 (4) - new combo fixed
further no change ><
[Hard]

00:16:438 (1) - remove new combo and align under 00:16:256
00:21:347 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:347 (1) - ^
00:28:802 (4) - new combo
00:58:994 (7,8) - this is bad... propose to do so. it slider 00:58:903 (7) - move here 00:59:358 (7) - and remove return.
00:58:994 (x) - add note . 00:59:358 (8) - new combo. 01:00:085 (1) - delete new combo
01:05:156 (6) - new combo and 01:05:701 (1) - delete new combo
01:06:792 (2) - new combo
01:10:631 (5) - move here 01:10:995 (5) - and delete return. 01:10:631 (5) - add note (01:10:995 (6) - new combo.01:11:721 (1) - delete new combo )
fixed all :3

eveless wrote:

• [General]

1. I’m worried about the timing, maybe try to ask Charles445 or lks to give you a correct one.

Ill ask one of them ^^

• [Insane]

1. 00:00:439 (1) – Maybe it’s just me but the volume is really too loud…
2. 00:02:985 (4) – It sounds good if you can add whistile in the beginning~
3. 00:16:438 (9) – missing a gong here, add finish please~
4. 00:29:347 (2) – nazi spacing stuff
5. 00:31:529 (1) – well how about try this to emphasize the 00:31:711‘s downbeat?
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:358 (1) – looks ugly if you do it like this, I think all the slow down stuff are start at this note so make a normal spacing here will be better. (that means you should use 1.86x cause the speed was changed.)
7. 00:48:994 (1,2,3) – Flows better if you can try sth like this~
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:49:903 (4,5,6) – everything is straight make me confusing, I’d like to make a change at ordinate like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:00:085 (1) – Does this new combo really necessary? It doesn’t make any sense at all imo.

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:711 (7) – nazi spacing.
2. 00:22:984 (1) – how about remove these finish stuff, they’re very annoying in such a quiet part.
3. 01:17:358 (3) – missing a finish in the end.

• [Normal]

1. 00:07:712 (1) – use finish instead of clap will be better, hear it at 25% rate if you can.
2. 00:45:540 (5) – Flows better if you can move it a bit down.
3. 00:56:449 (1) – I think there should be finish but not whistle cuz the hitsound is gong.

• [Easy]

1. 01:17:540 (4) – missing a finish in the end