Tatsh - Shinkou -1st Desire- [Osu|Taiko] · forum

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-06-30T12:13:55+00:00

mercury2004 wrote:
skipping taiko, cant mod
M4M from neonat queue

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
Offset a bit late, try 182

Normal
sv is kinda hight for normal dif. just sayin
00:42:875 (1,2,3) - you can try different slider shape / direction here made them converge but in a different way than the following 3 sliders, these 3 overlap in a way the ends form a pattern
02:14:899 (2) - move this down abit, dont let it touch hp bar ok I'll move it down a bit

really this difficutly almost perfect, some slider / note symetrical fix will do I will look around to see what I wanna change.

Thanks for the mod~

code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 110421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 176,25206,54654,110421,142998,179807,265574
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shinkou -1st Desire-
TitleUnicode:信仰 -1st Desire-
Artist:Tatsh
ArtistUnicode:タッシュ
Creator:jonchua
Version:Neormal
Source:Touhou
Tags:far east of east vi toyosatomimi no miko shimizu tatsuya yu oda shoutoku legend true administrator ojami neonat psychicrose
BeatmapID:260560
BeatmapSetID:83482

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,57799,66153
2,100498,107933
2,212400,222779
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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176,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
25206,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
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67353,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
79685,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
110237,-100,4,2,0,25,0,0
110605,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
142998,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
178335,-100,4,1,0,25,0,0
179807,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
212200,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
244593,-100,4,1,0,25,0,0
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245053,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
254163,-100,4,2,0,25,0,0


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jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-07-01T08:24:26+00:00

mercury2004 wrote:
Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
Offset a bit late, try 182

Hard
00:03:856 (1) - remove nc
00:21:525 (9) - nc ok
00:51:709 (1) - fix this spacing 1.2 spacing throughout
01:24:470 (7,8) - move this somewhere else I think it's fine
01:25:574 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - recommended to use sliders in the first part, so player can react. ok
02:26:679 (2) - nc here ok
03:36:433 (6,7) - start this on white line, even more important when making easier difficulty ok
04:01:648 (1,2,3,4) - this here too, but this place has distinct rhythm. not as serious as ^ then too many 1/4 sliders which may be boring

Lunatic
00:00:176 to 00:22:998- adding soft whistle? adding soft whistle on the head / tail better
00:06:617 (3) - remove soft whistle from the slider
00:11:955 (1) - ^ ok[/color]
00:10:850 (5,6,7,8,9) - doesnt flow very well. unstack those beats and place somewhere else is better ok
00:16:372 (9) - nc here ok
00:36:617 (16) - nc when change in slider speed ok
00:42:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - try 1.8x spacing, fit to the song better ok
01:10:666 (3,4,5,6,7) - unstack these, the flow doest go very well here ok
01:12:047 (10) - remove and fix spacing ok

01:25:574 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - i love this part lml owo

01:37:353 (9) - nc ok
01:43:243 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - if you going to use reverse stream, try to start the reverse on the white line ok
01:48:028 (1) - remove nc then nc here 01:48:212 (2) -
02:24:286 (3) - stack this on 02:22:998 (1) - head ok
02:36:065 (5) - move this closer to 02:36:249 (6) -
02:58:335 (1) - use timingsection, and reduce its hitsound to 5% ok
03:09:194 (2) - remove whistle[/color] ok
03:20:053 (11) - move it closer to 03:19:685 (10) - I want to keep the symmetry here
03:27:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - nc on the white line ok
03:35:697 (2,3,4,5) - make triangle pattern out of it flow better ok
03:36:801 (5) - nc here ok
03:39:194 - did you miss any beat here? yes, added

Comment : the map is fun to play, but some note placement need to be fix in some place, especially lunatic difficulty. i understand that stacking note made it nice looking, but sometime, overuse those stacks will ruin the flow.

the part i really like in this map is. the map has different "mood" in it. and the picture you chose + the map made it uber awesome.

last of all. when you stacking beat on to slider, try to make it completly fir - remove grid will do
Kudo for you
would be awesome if you rank this before my semester start
EDITED : spelling check
Kudo or no kudo your choice. well I'm obviously going to kudo this since you gave a great mod XD

Thank you for modding

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-07-02T01:16:56+00:00

Hi! From my queue special round~

[General]
~~I'm not sure but isn't it the english name in the artist and the japanese name in romanised artist? Same as with the title~~

[Neomal]
00:32:568 (3) - Curve it in the other way

Hitsounds

01:07:906 (2) - Add NC here?
01:15:268 (2) - ^
01:22:629 (4) - ^
02:02:016 (7) - Add clap?
02:07:537 (7) - At the end, add whistle?
02:13:795 (4) - Add clap
02:14:899 (2) - At the beginning, add clap
02:47:108 (2) - Add whistle?
02:48:396 (4) - ^
02:52:077 (5) - ^
03:48:028 (5) - Add clap
03:58:335 (4) - ^

[Hard]
I don't know but name it insane. There's part that it's like insane

Hitsounds

00:11:402 (6) - Add whistle
00:11:771 (8) - ^
00:20:973 (6) - ^
00:21:525 (1) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:05:881 (6,5,6,8,9) - Add clap?
03:58:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I don't know but do something like this

First combo: 03:58:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)
Ctrl+Shift+D, distance snap at 1.2x, points: 16

SPOILER

Second combo: 04:00:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)
Ctrl+Shift+D, distance snap at 0.9x, points: 16
(Sorry... I post the wrong picture...)
~~SPOILER~~

Third combo: 04:01:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)
Ctrl+Shift+D, distance snap at 0.7x, points: 16

SPOILER

Good Luck and star!

tetsutaro

3,863 posts

Joined February 2008

tetsutaro 2013-07-03T05:34:21+00:00

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]

Artist: Tatsh is the proper stylization in all appearances (BEMANI and Touhou Doujin incl.). Do not include タッシュ which is merely a assistive katakana transcription of the reading.

Taiko Storyboard: Most of the time only the parts under the skirt are shown. Fix or disable for Taiko diff altogether.

[Normal]

Appeared to be a bootleg difficulty just to satisfy the must have easier diff requirement.
00:20:789 (4,5) - Try adjusting the sharp turn so that the two legs are equal in length. Temporarily doubling the tick rate could help visualizing.
00:29:623 (7) - Try adjusting the sharp turn so that the two legs are equal in length.
00:35:513 (1) - End 1/2 to 1 beat early and note at original end.
01:09:378 (3) and 01:15:268 (2) - Follow vocal more closely with 3/4-beat returning slider and note at 01:10:114
01:21:157 (2) - Try adjusting so that the ridge is at exactly the midpoint.
04:04:961 (1,1) - Either extend the spinner to cover the circle, or not to have the spinner at all.

[0th desire] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Futsuu 3* Muzukashii

If you want a Muzukashii here, then you must have failed at it.

Interlude 02:22:997 ~ 02:58:335 - Lack of focus, and the use of denden note suggests a quickfire substitution to incomplete mapping.

[Hard]
04:04:961 (1,1) - Either extend the spinner to cover the circle, or not to have the spinner at all.

[Taiko Rose] Perceived difficulty rating: 6* Futsuu
Yes I know ~~Tatsh~~ Zeami composed Black Rose Apostle, but come on.

UNRANKABLE ISSUE The following notes are in direct violation of the following rule.

Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream. At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it and follow one of the following patterns: xxxxxxxxO, xxxxooooX, xxooxxooX

NewibornCLivee has already addressed on this but the issue is still prevalent.
When someone say "something like ****** is unrankable", you are supposed to also check other parts of the chart for similar violations and remove them altogether.

00:23:734 (109) ; 01:13:059 (468) ; 00:39:930 (222) ; 00:40:114 (224) ; 00:40:482 (225) ; 01:13:059 (468) ; 01:18:948 (510) ; 01:56:494 (748) ; 02:02:383 (792) ; 02:08:273 (837) ; 02:46:555 (1100) ; 02:50:972 (1134) ; 03:05:697 (1241) ; 03:11:586 (1285) ; 03:17:476 (1330) -
Because of HS0.5, the preceding streams of these notes are considered to be at 1/4 at 81.5BPM:

00:07:537 (31) ; 00:11:955 (52) ; 00:19:316 (81) ; 00:21:525 (93)

[Lunatic]
02:22:629 (13) ; 04:03:856 (9) - UNRANKABLE ISSUE 1/8 returning slider.
04:04:961 (1,1) - Either extend the spinner to cover the circle, or not to have the spinner at all.

I had to put it out, had it not been the Taiko diffs, ranking would have been much easier.

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-07-03T06:23:18+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hi! From my queue special round~

[Hard]
I don't know but name it insane. There's part that it's like insane Hard is ok i guess
Hitsounds
00:11:402 (6) - Add whistle
00:11:771 (8) - ^
00:20:973 (6) - ^
00:21:525 (1) - ^ added all

[Lunatic]
00:05:881 (6,5,6,8,9) - Add clap? ok
03:58:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I don't know but do something like this done

First combo: 03:58:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)
Ctrl+Shift+D, distance snap at 1.2x, points: 16
SPOILER

Second combo: 04:00:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)
Ctrl+Shift+D, distance snap at 0.9x, points: 16
(Sorry... I post the wrong picture...)
~~SPOILER~~

Third combo: 04:01:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)
Ctrl+Shift+D, distance snap at 0.7x, points: 16
SPOILER

tetsutaro wrote:
[General]
Artist: Tatsh is the proper stylization in all appearances (BEMANI and Touhou Doujin incl.). Do not include タッシュ which is merely a assistive katakana transcription of the reading. ok fixed

[Hard]
04:04:961 (1,1) - Either extend the spinner to cover the circle, or not to have the spinner at all. I don't get what you mean lol

[Lunatic]
02:22:629 (13) ; 04:03:856 (9) - UNRANKABLE ISSUE 1/8 returning slider. Why is this unrankable? I don't get it
04:04:961 (1,1) - Either extend the spinner to cover the circle, or not to have the spinner at all. as above

I had to put it out, had it not been the Taiko diffs, ranking would have been much easier.

Thank you both for modding!

PsychicRose

13 posts

Joined December 2012

PsychicRose 2013-07-03T06:36:17+00:00

tetsutaro wrote:
From the people who brought you

comes this mod.
[0th desire] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Futsuu 3* Muzukashii
If you want a Muzukashii here, then you must have failed at it. 0th for a reason lol
Interlude 02:22:997 ~ 02:58:335 - Lack of focus, and the use of denden note suggests a quickfire substitution to incomplete mapping. alright then, wait a bit

[Hard]
04:04:961 (1,1) - Either extend the spinner to cover the circle, or not to have the spinner at all.

[Taiko Rose] Perceived difficulty rating: 6* Futsuu
Yes I know ~~Tatsh~~ Zeami composed Black Rose Apostle, but come on.
UNRANKABLE ISSUE The following notes are in direct violation of the following rule.
Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream. At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it and follow one of the following patterns: xxxxxxxxO, xxxxooooX, xxooxxooX
NewibornCLivee has already addressed on this but the issue is still prevalent.
When someone say "something like ****** is unrankable", you are supposed to also check other parts of the chart for similar violations and remove them altogether. yeah, remapping

[Seraphin]

240 posts

Joined October 2012

[Seraphin] 2013-07-04T01:17:30+00:00

From mod queue~
Tatsh

[Normal]
03:20:053 (4) - move to left a little-- and along with that move the rest of the objects to the left a little-- xD. It feels weird with all the other circles after a slider not being under the end of the slider.

[Hard]
Nothing. :0

[Lunatic]
HP drain +1

Awesome beatmap.
Barely anything to fix

I may re-check later.

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-07-04T12:46:24+00:00

[Seraphin] wrote:
From mod queue~
Tatsh

[Hard]
Nothing. :0 o.o

[Lunatic]
HP drain +1 how the... I don't remember hp7 being this lenient...

Awesome beatmap.
Barely anything to fix
I may re-check later.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-07-05T16:44:12+00:00

I don't see why my difficulty would seem bootleg.

Made some changes.

Code

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 110421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 176,25206,54654,110421,142998,179807,265574
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shinkou -1st Desire-
TitleUnicode:信仰 -1st Desire-
Artist:Tatsh
ArtistUnicode:Tatsh
Creator:jonchua
Version:Neormal
Source:Touhou
Tags:far east of east vi toyosatomimi no miko shimizu tatsuya yu oda shoutoku legend true administrator ojami neonat psychicrose
BeatmapID:260560
BeatmapSetID:83482

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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2,100498,107933
2,212400,222779
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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20,212,157722,6,0,B|104:212|104:212|40:292|40:292|148:292,1,280
264,340,158826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,340,159194,2,0,P|456:308|456:212,1,140
328,232,159930,2,0,P|333:171|420:129,1,140
284,44,160666,6,0,P|228:84|152:60,1,140
152,208,161402,2,0,P|96:168|20:192,1,140
88,312,162139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,364,162507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,312,162875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,216,163243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,163611,6,0,L|460:16,2,70
272,52,164347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,84,164715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,165083,2,0,L|-4:136,2,70
120,312,165820,2,0,L|56:360,2,70
256,272,166556,6,0,P|320:248|408:280,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,316,167108,2,0,L|496:248,1,70
464,124,167660,2,0,P|420:80|324:96,1,140
208,104,168396,2,0,L|132:64,2,70
336,164,169133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,169501,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,288,169869,2,0,P|152:292|176:316,2,70
48,160,170605,2,0,P|52:108|76:84,2,70
164,80,171341,2,0,P|176:70|228:66,2,70
112,208,172077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,268,172445,6,0,P|280:296|380:288,1,140
456,184,173182,2,0,P|368:164|320:192,1,140
188,168,173918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,108,174286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,174654,2,0,P|104:308|184:308,1,140
256,192,175390,12,0,178335,0:0:0:0:
368,148,179807,6,0,P|400:172|400:268,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,356,180544,2,0,P|261:269|281:235,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,181280,2,0,B|216:128|176:40|176:40|104:56,2,210
304,236,182752,2,0,B|392:268|432:180|432:180|504:196,2,210
176,176,184225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,228,184593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,360,184961,2,0,P|152:312|228:332,1,140
348,336,185697,6,0,B|448:292|372:232|488:168,2,210
292,208,187169,2,0,B|244:112|172:204|132:72,2,210
356,332,188642,2,0,P|408:312|428:208,1,140
432,96,189378,2,0,P|376:96|312:32,1,140
176,60,190114,2,0,B|104:84|164:132|80:156,1,140
24,280,190850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,276,191218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,272,191587,6,0,B|380:272|380:272|380:332|448:356|504:308,2,210,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,193059,2,0,B|380:132|380:132|380:72|448:48|504:96,2,210
184,60,194531,2,0,L|64:164,1,140
96,292,195268,2,0,L|208:196,1,140
332,148,196004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,268,196372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,372,196740,2,0,P|240:360|208:292,1,140
84,244,197476,6,0,B|28:168|124:180|72:92|72:92|208:92,1,280
320,132,198580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,172,198949,2,0,B|512:248|416:236|468:324|468:324|332:324,1,280
352,324,200053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,200421,6,0,B|165:349|165:349|114:348|64:312|61:250|103:183,1,280
240,168,201525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,144,201893,2,0,B|413:97|413:97|412:46|376:-3|314:-6|249:33,1,280
240,168,202998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,292,203366,6,0,B|200:284|208:368|144:336|144:336|88:336,1,210
48,308,204102,2,0,B|36:256|108:248|108:248|92:184|92:184|12:192|12:192|4:140,1,280
92,48,205206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,80,205574,2,0,P|280:104|372:64,1,140
256,192,206310,12,0,207415,0:0:0:0:
136,236,207783,6,0,P|136:192|216:128,1,140
304,228,208519,2,0,P|356:180|336:96,1,140
232,44,209255,2,0,L|172:4,2,70
92,64,209991,2,0,L|72:148,2,70
256,192,210728,12,4,212200,0:0:0:0:
104,148,223979,6,0,P|128:104|428:152,1,420
404,288,225452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-07-06T01:00:43+00:00

Updated.

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-07-06T14:53:32+00:00

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good, balanced and playable.
The music sound quality is kinda umm...or it's supposed to be like this? Consider taking the TV size from RAWs, DVDs source or Official source
Pick some combo colors >.o / (combo color is important, it affects the image of your beatmap)

[Neormal]
^ Neormal or Normal? typo?
Quite ok, use more red ticks for part like this 02:37:722 - , like adding circles between sliders etc.
The beat is deadly, may be boring, try follow some lyric

[Hard]
>.o)b

[Insane]
00:30:728 (12) - New combo (don't make the combo numbers too high, not nice for looking)
00:35:513 (7) - ^
00:38:458 (5) - ^
00:48:274 (5,6,7,8) - Make the spacing further, ex. edge stick to edge instead of stacking close (cuz you're using 1/3, inform the player)
00:50:237 (7) - New combo
00:53:918 (9) - ^
00:56:863 (11) - ^
00:59:899 (10) - ^
01:04:225 (7) - ^
01:09:378 (11) - ^
01:09:930 (1) - Remove new combo
01:10:850 (4) - New combo
01:13:795 (12) - ^
01:21:157 (5) - ^
01:30:973 (2) - Same as 00:48:274 (5,6,7,8) - .
01:32:936 (7) - New combo
01:33:181 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:408 (7) - New combo
01:35:881 (14) - ^
01:36:126 (1) - Remove new combo
02:07:537 (13) - New combo
02:18:580 (1) - Not suggested to make to long streams, try to put some sliders in the stream or make the stream stop for a little moment then continues
02:40:298 (9) - ^
02:52:814 (3) - New combo (to make it looks more fun)
02:53:182 (5) - ^
02:53:274 (6) - ^
02:53:918 (10) - ^
02:54:286 (12) - ^
02:54:654 (14) - ^
02:55:022 (16) - ^
03:10:114 (4) - New combo (remember to choose combo color properly too)
03:10:482 (7) - ^
03:10:850 (10) - ^
03:11:218 (13) - ^
03:16:740 (11) - New combo
03:19:685 (10) - ^
03:22:629 (10) - ^
03:25:574 (11) - ^
03:27:783 (1) - Long streams are boring hard to be ranked, ask pros for some tips, people gets tired too
03:58:703 (1) - ^

04:04:961 (1) - Remove this hit, make the slider starts at that timing

Good luck.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-07-07T13:24:45+00:00

Not a typo lol....

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-07-13T07:10:05+00:00

DEAncientNaga wrote:
DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good, balanced and playable.
The music sound quality is kinda umm...or it's supposed to be like this? Consider taking the TV size from RAWs, DVDs source or Official source It's from the 320kbps mp3 that I have
Pick some combo colors >.o / (combo color is important, it affects the image of your beatmap)

[Hard]
>.o)b o.o

[Insane]
00:30:728 (12) - New combo (don't make the combo numbers too high, not nice for looking) all changed to 1 bar per NC
00:35:513 (7) - ^
00:38:458 (5) - ^
00:48:274 (5,6,7,8) - Make the spacing further, ex. edge stick to edge instead of stacking close (cuz you're using 1/3, inform the player) The sliders before that make it clear that it's 1/3, and I want the increasing DS too
00:50:237 (7) - New combo
00:53:918 (9) - ^
00:56:863 (11) - ^
00:59:899 (10) - ^
01:04:225 (7) - ^
01:09:378 (11) - ^
01:09:930 (1) - Remove new combo
01:10:850 (4) - New combo
01:13:795 (12) - ^
01:21:157 (5) - ^
01:30:973 (2) - Same as 00:48:274 (5,6,7,8) - .
01:32:936 (7) - New combo
01:33:181 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:408 (7) - New combo
01:35:881 (14) - ^
01:36:126 (1) - Remove new combo
02:07:537 (13) - New combo
02:18:580 (1) - Not suggested to make to long streams, try to put some sliders in the stream or make the stream stop for a little moment then continues
02:40:298 (9) - ^
02:52:814 (3) - New combo (to make it looks more fun)
02:53:182 (5) - ^
02:53:274 (6) - ^
02:53:918 (10) - ^
02:54:286 (12) - ^
02:54:654 (14) - ^
02:55:022 (16) - ^
03:10:114 (4) - New combo (remember to choose combo color properly too)
03:10:482 (7) - ^
03:10:850 (10) - ^
03:11:218 (13) - ^
03:16:740 (11) - New combo
03:19:685 (10) - ^
03:22:629 (10) - ^
03:25:574 (11) - ^
03:27:783 (1) - Long streams are boring hard to be ranked, ask pros for some tips, people gets tired too
03:58:703 (1) - ^

04:04:961 (1) - Remove this hit, make the slider starts at that timing It seems sensible to add a note here

Good luck.

Last edited by jcjc 2013-08-15T12:56:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-07-30T05:22:39+00:00

Form my queue
nice stream >w<
[Hard]
01:20:421 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/3Padq.jpg
03:36:433 (6) - http://puu.sh/3Palx.jpg

[Neormal]
02:24:470 (1,2,3) - Break?

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-07-30T06:12:25+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
Form my queue
nice stream >w<
[Hard]
01:20:421 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/3Padq.jpg ok
03:36:433 (6) - http://puu.sh/3Palx.jpg ok

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-08-04T10:54:16+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
Form my queue
nice stream >w<

[Neormal]
02:24:470 (1,2,3) - Break? Not sure, the arrows would irritate the player if it keeps appearing so fast and often, I'll leave it to jon to decide this one

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-08-04T13:13:45+00:00

neonat wrote:
Kawaiwkyik wrote:
Form my queue
nice stream >w<

[Neormal]
02:24:470 (1,2,3) - Break? Not sure, the arrows would irritate the player if it keeps appearing so fast and often, I'll leave it to jon to decide this one

Breaks should be ok here I guess. I don't know if the last spinner is too long for a normal diff though.

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2013-08-15T11:42:32+00:00

Hi~ from my queue

[Neormal]

00:17:844 (1) - Why don't you use same shape as 00:16:372 (9) - ? (Ctrl+H+J+G)
01:31:464 (1,2) - Too near... You should keep 1.00x
01:50:605 (1,2) - Using same shap is better imo.
image
02:02:384 (1) - add finish at 02:02:384 -
02:10:850 (4) - stack with 02:09:746 (3) - 's end.
02:13:795 (4) - stack with 02:12:691 (3) - 's end.
02:16:372 (4) - How about to make blanket with 02:16:004 (3) - ?
02:20:053 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer if these are a rhombus.
image
02:59:807 (1,2) - Use same shape?
03:11:587 (1) - remove finish at 03:12:691 -
04:01:648 (3,4,5,6) - make a rhombus.

[Hard]

01:06:433 (4) - How about changing to 3/4 slider to make faithfulness for this song.
image
01:07:906 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest like this. Just a suggestion.
image
01:34:409 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make regular triangles.
02:33:304 (4) - stack with 02:32:384 (2) - 's end?
02:45:083 - Border should be here, so...
1. 02:44:899 (1) - Remove NC. Remove finish on the head. Ctrl+G.
2. 02:45:083 (2) - Add NC. Add finish on the head.
03:20:421 (1) - make better blanket with 03:20:973 (2) - 's head.
03:33:672 (9) - NC here?
03:37:353 - Border should be here.
image
03:57:783 (8) - I recommend to avoid partial overlapping with 03:57:415 (7) - . Move to (304,300).
04:01:648 (1,2,3,4) - Returning 5 times is not good for me because we must catch slider on upbeat in this pattern, additionaly I think catching slider on downbeat is better. I suggest the pattern like following.
1. 04:01:648 - to 04:03:028 - 3 times returning 1/4 slider * 4
2. 04:03:120 - to 04:04:133 - no returning 1/4 slider * 6

[Lunatic]

00:12:507 (2,3,4) - stack all of these.
00:13:427 (5,6) - stack.
00:18:580 (4,5) - ^
00:25:942 (4,5) - ^
00:40:666 (2,3) - ^
01:52:629 (8,9) - ^
02:17:108 (11,12) - ^
00:50:237 (7) - move to (408,272)?

d = small don
D = big don
k = small kat
K = big kat

[Zeroth Desire]

01:37:352 (258) - change to K. Here is more important than 01:40:297 (266) -
01:40:297 (266) - change to k. The reason is same as above.
01:48:948 (290) - change to k.
01:50:604 (292) - change to K.
02:02:383 (327) - ^
02:59:807 (1) - ^
03:05:697 (18) - ^
03:11:586 (36) - ^
04:04:961 - Don't use Kiai for a flash in Taiko dif.

[Taiko Rose]

This map has some unrankable issues. Read Ranking Criteria and check how to use D and K.
00:00:176 - to 00:23:734 - Here is a calm part, so I don't recommend to use D and K.
00:48:519 (275) - I suggest to remove this. Additionaly, how about like this?
image
01:22:998 - add note?
02:59:807 (1200) - change to D.
04:01:463 (1613) - Move to 04:01:372 - to follow the song.
04:02:935 (1619) - ^ (04:02:844 - )
04:04:409 (1625) - ^ (04:04:317 - )
04:04:961 - Don't use Kiai for a flash in Taiko dif.

Good Luck

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-08-15T13:08:08+00:00

Cah-m wrote:
Hi~ from my queue
[Hard]
01:06:433 (4) - How about changing to 3/4 slider to make faithfulness for this song. fixed
image
01:07:906 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest like this. Just a suggestion. I want it this way
image
01:34:409 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make regular triangles. Isn't it already triangles lol
02:33:304 (4) - stack with 02:32:384 (2) - 's end? fixed
02:45:083 - Border should be here, so... fixed
02:44:899 (1) - Remove NC. Remove finish on the head. Ctrl+G.
02:45:083 (2) - Add NC. Add finish on the head.
03:20:421 (1) - make better blanket with 03:20:973 (2) - 's head. fixed
03:33:672 (9) - NC here? fixed
03:37:353 - Border should be here. fixed
image
03:57:783 (8) - I recommend to avoid partial overlapping with 03:57:415 (7) - . Move to (304,300). fixed
04:01:648 (1,2,3,4) - Returning 5 times is not good for me because we must catch slider on upbeat in this pattern, additionaly I think catching slider on downbeat is better. I suggest the pattern like following. fixed
04:01:648 - to 04:03:028 - 3 times returning 1/4 slider * 4
04:03:120 - to 04:04:133 - no returning 1/4 slider * 6
[Lunatic]
00:12:507 (2,3,4) - stack all of these. fixed all
00:13:427 (5,6) - stack.
00:18:580 (4,5) - ^
00:25:942 (4,5) - ^
00:40:666 (2,3) - ^
01:52:629 (8,9) - ^
02:17:108 (11,12) - ^
00:50:237 (7) - move to (408,272)?
Good Luck

Thanks a lot!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-08-16T15:23:30+00:00

Cah-m wrote:
Hi~ from my queue

[Neormal]
00:17:844 (1) - Why don't you use same shape as 00:16:372 (9) - ? (Ctrl+H+J+G) it's the same shape, just flipped differently
01:31:464 (1,2) - Too near... You should keep 1.00x changed
01:50:605 (1,2) - Using same shap is better imo. maybe, but the current one has more practical use for me though
image
02:02:384 (1) - add finish at 02:02:384 - ok
02:10:850 (4) - stack with 02:09:746 (3) - 's end.
02:13:795 (4) - stack with 02:12:691 (3) - 's end.
02:16:372 (4) - How about to make blanket with 02:16:004 (3) - ?
02:20:053 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer if these are a rhombus. I made 5 and 6 identical to 3 and 4
image
02:59:807 (1,2) - Use same shape?
03:11:587 (1) - remove finish at 03:12:691 - ok
04:01:648 (3,4,5,6) - make a rhombus.
Good Luck

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Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Totoro 2013-08-23T23:59:33+00:00

iCo's mod is here~

[General]

Nice mapset

[Normal]

00:00:912 (2,3) - Unneccessary overlap

00:04:593 (3,4,5) - I don't suggest 2 repeat sliders in Normal

00:10:482 (5,6) - ^

00:47:292 (4) - ^

01:35:881 (4) - ^

01:55:758 (7) - bring this slider more inside

01:56:495 (1,2) - would be better if they blanket each other

02:24:470 (1,2,3) - Not needed imo. Extend the break time

03:48:396 (6,1) - Ugly overlap

[Hard]

01:16:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Bit confusing overlaps

01:19:685 (1,2) - Just overlap these two

01:27:047 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugly shape

Like the creative sliders

[Lunatic]

Nothing seems wrong imo. Nice diff

Sorry for the short mod

jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-08-27T13:09:38+00:00

-iCo- wrote:
iCo's mod is here~

[Hard]

01:16:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Bit confusing overlaps keeping this, not very confusing imo

01:19:685 (1,2) - Just overlap these two fixed

01:27:047 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugly shape fixed

Like the creative sliders

[Lunatic]

Nothing seems wrong imo. Nice diff

Sorry for the short mod

Thank you for modding!

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-09-03T13:37:45+00:00

Hi~
I'm glad to receive Touhou-project song request

[General]

SB: Aspect ratio is OK? I feel at odds with BG.jpg, grey.jpg, SB2.jpg, SB3.jpg, SB4.jpg

[Neormal]

For normal, SV is a little rapid, imo
02:08:274 (1,3) - these shoud be symmetrical position
02:17:108 (1,1) - a little difficult. it is better to move the slider closer to center position
03:18:949 (3,4) - it is better not to stack
03:54:286 (7) - move to x:212 y:58 (and adjust DS)
04:04:961 (1) - x:256 y:192

[Hard]

00:07:353 (3) - NC
00:31:004 (7,1) - adjust for smoother cusor moving
01:04:777 (5,6) - exchange for one slider
01:22:629 (1,2) - I suggest the following style
03:02:752 (1,2) - this overlap is not good
03:48:028 (2,1) - stack correctly?
04:04:961 (1) - x:256 y:192

[Lunatic]

CS +1, HD +1
00:40:666 (2,3) - shoud be same slider as 00:39:930 (1) -
00:59:807 (9) - NC
01:06:985- it is better to exist any sound. how about this?
01:50:605- remove whistle. add finish
04:04:961 (1) - x:256 y:192

so imperial pictures of TAISHI~
Nice SB

~Good Luck~

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-09-04T06:57:53+00:00

Thanks for all the mods

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 110421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 176,25206,54654,110421,142998,179807,265574
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shinkou -1st Desire-
TitleUnicode:信仰 -1st Desire-
Artist:Tatsh
ArtistUnicode:Tatsh
Creator:jonchua
Version:Neormal
Source:Touhou
Tags:far east of east vi toyosatomimi no miko shimizu tatsuya yu oda shoutoku legend true administrator ojami neonat psychicrose
BeatmapID:260560
BeatmapSetID:83482

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,57799,66153
2,100498,107933
2,212400,222779
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-09-05T05:47:22+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
Hi~
I'm glad to receive Touhou-project song request

[General]
SB: Aspect ratio is OK? I feel at odds with BG.jpg, grey.jpg, SB2.jpg, SB3.jpg, SB4.jpg 1366 x 768 should be okay for SB images

[Hard]
00:07:353 (3) - NC okay
00:31:004 (7,1) - adjust for smoother cusor moving okay
01:04:777 (5,6) - exchange for one slider okay
01:22:629 (1,2) - I suggest the following style okay
03:02:752 (1,2) - this overlap is not good okay
03:48:028 (2,1) - stack correctly? okay
04:04:961 (1) - x:256 y:192 okay

[Lunatic]
CS +1 I don't really like small circle size , HD +1 I think it's too hard
00:40:666 (2,3) - shoud be same slider as 00:39:930 (1) - They are sliders of different length
00:59:807 (9) - NC okay
01:06:985- it is better to exist any sound. how about this? I prefer it this way
01:50:605- remove whistle. add finish okay
04:04:961 (1) - x:256 y:192 I prefer larger jump

so imperial pictures of TAISHI~
Nice SB

~Good Luck~

Thanks for modding!

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2013-09-26T06:06:14+00:00

From the modding queue:

[General]
i don't think thr will be any problem here since there r edi so many mod above me :p

[Neormal]
00:28:887 (6) - Move slightly down
00:29:623 (7) - Maybe a little curve like PIC1? ; Stack the end of the slider to the head of 00:28:151 (5)

PIC1

02:00:912 (5) - Just C&P 01:59:439 (3) maybe?
~Newbie friendly map

[Zeroth Desire]
~~y u place all note in the middle and no use new combo D:?~~
I'll skip this, I don't know taiko

[Hard]
00:05:329 (3,4,1,2) - Makes these slider curve will help the flow
00:11:218 (3) - NC
00:11:955 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:918 (4,1,2,3) - This is kinda confuse, suggest to change
02:29:899 (3) - This is 1/6 note, move to 02:29:930
02:31:372 (3) - ^
02:34:041 (1,2,3,4) - This is confusing, suggest to change also
02:46:556 (1) - Cancel 1 repeat
02:48:028 (2) - Add a note
03:38:642 (2) - Remove this

[Lunatic]
00:08:274 (3) - CTRL G
01:09:194 (7) - Move to x136 y208, make a jump
01:10:114 (3) - Move a little more to the right
01:11:402 (4,5) - This break the flow, suggest to change
01:31:464 (1) - Adjust the curve, make it follows 01:30:973 (2,3,4,5)
02:46:556 (1) - Cancel a repeat
02:48:028 (2) - Add a note
03:10:850 (7) - NC
03:12:691 (3) - Remove NC
03:13:059 (1) - ^
03:15:636 (5) - NC
03:16:004 (1) - Remove NC
03:13:427 (2) - NC
03:16:372 (2) - NC
03:18:580 (3) - NC
03:18:949 (1) - Remove NC
03:21:525 (3) - NC
03:21:893 (1) - Remove NC
03:25:574 (7) - NC
03:27:783 (1) ~ 03:31:739 (12) - It would be better if you make the stream curve, or maybe some pattern
~This diff is great

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2013-10-05T12:01:25+00:00

_AI wrote:
From the modding queue:

[Neormal]
00:28:887 (6) - Move slightly down
00:29:623 (7) - Maybe a little curve like PIC1? ; Stack the end of the slider to the head of 00:28:151 (5)
PIC1
Made changes to the above mentioned portion and the notes around them
02:00:912 (5) - Just C&P 01:59:439 (3) maybe? I think (3) would be too curvy for it to be at (5)
~Newbie friendly map

Thanks for the mod

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mp3.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 110421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 176,25206,54654,110421,142998,179807,265574
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shinkou -1st Desire-
TitleUnicode:信仰 -1st Desire-
Artist:Tatsh
ArtistUnicode:Tatsh
Creator:jonchua
Version:Neormal
Source:Touhou
Tags:far east of east vi toyosatomimi no miko shimizu tatsuya yu oda shoutoku legend true administrator ojami neonat psychicrose
BeatmapID:260560
BeatmapSetID:83482

[Difficulty]
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jcjc

144 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

jcjc 2013-10-05T13:32:50+00:00

_AI wrote:
From the modding queue:

[General]
i don't think thr will be any problem here since there r edi so many mod above me :p

[Hard]
00:05:329 (3,4,1,2) - Makes these slider curve will help the flow ok
00:11:218 (3) - NC ok
00:11:955 (1) - Remove NC ok
01:23:918 (4,1,2,3) - This is kinda confuse, suggest to change I want to keep this
02:29:899 (3) - This is 1/6 note, move to 02:29:930 nice catch
02:31:372 (3) - ^ ^
02:34:041 (1,2,3,4) - This is confusing, suggest to change also I want to keep this too
02:46:556 (1) - Cancel 1 repeat there is still guitar until the last repeat
02:48:028 (2) - Add a note no change because of ^
03:38:642 (2) - Remove this ok

[Lunatic]
00:08:274 (3) - CTRL G ok
01:09:194 (7) - Move to x136 y208, make a jump ok
01:10:114 (3) - Move a little more to the right ok
01:11:402 (4,5) - This break the flow, suggest to change I want to keep this
01:31:464 (1) - Adjust the curve, make it follows 01:30:973 (2,3,4,5) ok
02:46:556 (1) - Cancel a repeat there is still guitar until the last repeat
02:48:028 (2) - Add a note no change because of ^
03:10:850 (7) - NC all these are one bar per NC?
03:12:691 (3) - Remove NC
03:13:059 (1) - ^
03:15:636 (5) - NC
03:16:004 (1) - Remove NC
03:13:427 (2) - NC
03:16:372 (2) - NC
03:18:580 (3) - NC
03:18:949 (1) - Remove NC
03:21:525 (3) - NC
03:21:893 (1) - Remove NC
03:25:574 (7) - NC
03:27:783 (1) ~ 03:31:739 (12) - It would be better if you make the stream curve, or maybe some pattern
~This diff is great

Nwolf

2,604 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2013-10-07T12:28:52+00:00

woof from my modding queue

[Neormal]
00:07:353 (6) - delete, there's nothing in the music

[Zeroth Desire]

hm....

00:36:985 - 00:39:930 - Add a few more notes here, this section is not calm enough for two finishers only. Also, get rid of them.
01:18:212 (211,212,213,214) - make them small
01:19:685 - 01:22:629 - See -------------------------^
--Refrain 1--
01:50:421 - Add kat here, vocals start at this point
01:50:973 - Add don here, it plays a bit weird especially since there are more notes after this and it's the same refrain
01:55:022 (309) - Make it small, it doesn't fit
01:55:022 - 01:56:310 - Once again, this section is also not calm enough for so few notes.
01:56:310 - Add kat here, vocals start at this point
01:56:863 - Add don here
02:00:912 (326) - Make it small, doesn't fit
--Repeat everything that is the same until 02:14:163 (everything's fine from there, at least for this part)--
02:49:501 (1) - One spinner, okay. Two long ones, just no. Think of something else here, please.
--Refrain 2--
See 1

[Taiko Rose]
00:00:000 - 00:25:206 - Get rid of finishers, too calm section.
00:22:722 (101,104,105,107,108) - Delete these notes, they don't fit at all.
00:39:930 (217,219,220) - No finishers here - they are against the rules.
00:43:366 (241) - Same as above
00:44:102 (245) - Additionally it would be better then to delete the finisher from here too, as it doesn't fit that good anymore.
00:47:292 (266) - No finisher here
00:52:200 (289) - ^
01:56:495 (743) - Rule breaking finisher
02:02:384 (787) - ^

I won't go more into detail here - you should now know when you shouldn't use finishers, or at least when they are forbidden. I would also suggest to reduce the amount of 1/4 streams, especially in the refrain and the part before the refrain a lot.

Both Taikos still need a lot of modding... but gl for rank^^

Phantom_Stella

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Phantom_Stella 2016-03-25T13:33:00+00:00

Can you update the mp3 file?Because this one is bad quality

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