Hi ,
Mod from my queue:
Feeling when i played the diff:
Neonat:
Very good. Keep mapping like this ^^ It'as a little bit hard for a Normal diff but i think you can keep this.
Small remark: 00:48:764 (1,2,3) Maybe stack the end of the sliders or try avoiding them to touch each other.
jonchua:
First beatmap? 4min Drain Time? Well, you're courageous. ^^
Anyway, about the hard: the map is good but have a lot of small flaws which make it not very good. We can see that it's your first map and i think i can even point where you ran out of idea for your diff (yes, mapping 4 min it's very long!!!)
But for a first beatmap it's more than ok, there are a lot of good thing that i like in this diff but it's spoiled by all these little flaws. The only BIG flaw imo is the beggining where the notes are too close from each other and it's not pleasant to play. Increase the DS in this part a little bit and it woudl be much better. You can also add more notes (like in the Insane diff) because it feels a little bit void when playing.
About the Lunatic: I barely play streamy map so i can't say anything about the streams but basically it's the same as Hard. Good diff, a lot of good things, some litlle flaws which spoiled them and we can see where you ran out of idea (even if i can see that you was more inspired for this diff than the Hard one)
The mod:
[General]
Mod from my queue:
Feeling when i played the diff:
Neonat:
Very good. Keep mapping like this ^^ It'as a little bit hard for a Normal diff but i think you can keep this.
Small remark: 00:48:764 (1,2,3) Maybe stack the end of the sliders or try avoiding them to touch each other.
jonchua:
First beatmap? 4min Drain Time? Well, you're courageous. ^^
Anyway, about the hard: the map is good but have a lot of small flaws which make it not very good. We can see that it's your first map and i think i can even point where you ran out of idea for your diff (yes, mapping 4 min it's very long!!!)
But for a first beatmap it's more than ok, there are a lot of good thing that i like in this diff but it's spoiled by all these little flaws. The only BIG flaw imo is the beggining where the notes are too close from each other and it's not pleasant to play. Increase the DS in this part a little bit and it woudl be much better. You can also add more notes (like in the Insane diff) because it feels a little bit void when playing.
About the Lunatic: I barely play streamy map so i can't say anything about the streams but basically it's the same as Hard. Good diff, a lot of good things, some litlle flaws which spoiled them and we can see where you ran out of idea (even if i can see that you was more inspired for this diff than the Hard one)
The mod:
[General]
- Add "neonat" to the tag since he/she does a GD.
- 00:00:176 to 00:25:206 - Like i said, maybe use a higher DS because the note are really close to each other and try to fill the blank a little bit like you did in the Insane diff (but not as much) because it feels a litlle bit void when playing.
- 00:04:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use less curved sliders like this:
it looks better imo. - 00:15:636 (9) - 1/2 beat long slider instead of a note?
- 00:20:605 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - The shape isn't really great. I think with 6 notes you can do better than a simple square.
- 00:27:783 (8,3) - They touch a little bit.
- 00:35:513 (7,8,9) - Maybe make 4 slider of the same length. It's more intuitive to play (expecially for those who play in Hidden like me)
- 00:42:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not 100% but i think it's unrankable. The head of a slider shouldnt be hidden by another slider. You can still do something like this:
- 00:54:163 (10,2) - They touch a little bit.
- 00:58:335 (3,4,1,2) - Make them of the same lenght?
- 01:08:458 (2,3,4) - It doesn't looks very good because the notes are hidden by the slider so stack them or put them above the slider.
- 01:11:587 (5,6) - 1 beat long slider instead of these two note?
- 01:25:574 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ~~~You ran out of idea~~~ In this place we have a music more and more intense so i would suggest to start with a normal DS a increase it more and more. Then you have a normal spacing at the start and at the end when the song is the more intense you have big jumps. And please avoid all these straight lines, one or two it's good but you have way too many of it.
- 02:10:482 (6,7,1) - They touch a little bit.
- 02:32:384 (2) - Why not a straight one?
- 02:37:722 (1) - Doesn't looks good, try making it less sharp and more smooth.
- 02:44:899 (8) - NC? It'll show better the change.
- 02:50:605 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - With 6 notes you have a LOOOOOOOT of possibility of pattern so why do you choose straight line not used since 2008!!!!!!!!!!
- 02:55:390 (1) - Definitely looks weird XD
- 03:02:752 (1,2) - Looks weird too.
- 03:04:593 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - You use principaly 1/4-slider all along the map so why not keeping it a let this for the Lunatic diff?
- 03:24:470 (4,5,6) - ^ and with the long stream after it's more insane-like than hard-like.
- 03:27:783 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - NO DEATHSTREAM IN A HARD DIFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- 03:41:034 (5) - Wow.... Or you can use a spinner XD
- 03:51:341 (5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern doesn't play well.
- 04:05:053 (1) - You can stop it at 04:14:899.
- I'm not an expert of stream so i can't mod them. Sorry.
- 36 millions points.... I'm not sure if you can rank this or just go for approval.
- 00:16:924 (10) - NC?
- 00:21:525 (1) - A jump of 5.2x it's a little bit exagerated imo. Even in the Osu! Jump compilation they hardly ever go that far.
- 01:22:261 (8,1) - Stack them?
- 02:25:206 (5,6,1) - They touch a little bit.
- 03:07:169 (4) - CTR+G otherwise it kills your symmetry. (and if you do so move 03:07:445 (5,6))
- 03:26:310 (1) - You tried to do something? But it doesn't looks good.
- 03:43:611 (1,2) - They touch a little bit.
- 03:46:924 (3) - x=184 y=156?
- 03:51:157 (5,2,2) - Stack them or destack 03:49:869 (4,1,1) the same way they are.
- 03:54:838 (2) - CTRL+H (and the following note as well)
- 04:05:053 (1) - You can stop it at 04:14:899.