ONE OK ROCK - Rock, Scissors, Paper [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Haya

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-03-08T22:32:06+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 30. Oktober 2013 at 21:49:49

Artist: ONE OK ROCK
Title: Rock, Scissors, Paper
Tags: nicovideo mad amv Tenshichan Bomber34 LunarSakuya Sakuya Bomber
BPM: 193
Filesize: 23079kb
Play Time: 02:33
Difficulties Available:

bomber's Easy (1,87 stars, 129 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 463 notes)
Normal (4,29 stars, 227 notes)
Sakuya's Hard (4,98 stars, 273 notes)
Tenshichan's Rain (5 stars, 538 notes)

Download: ONE OK ROCK - Rock, Scissors, Paper
Download: ONE OK ROCK - Rock, Scissors, Paper (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Let's do our Rock, Scissors and Paper ~
Map #3!! ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ♥ Ranked!!
bomber's Easy by Bomber34 (100%)
Normal by me (100%)
Sakuya's Hard by LunarSakuya (100%)
Insane by me (100%)
Tenshichan's CTB by Tenshichan (100%)

Last edited by Haya 2013-10-30T22:31:30+00:00, edited 81 times in total.

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-03-12T23:09:51+00:00

ffffffffffffffirst

kriegst nen star sobald ich wieder mehr als 20 kudos hab xD

Haya

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Haya 2013-03-13T11:56:11+00:00

wtf xD

Flanster

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Flanster 2013-03-13T17:29:46+00:00

Greetings from my timing queue.

I've checked your timing and seems your first two offsets are fine but the other two need tweaking.
Here are the offsets which need a change:

90118 to 90100
120895 to 120909

That is all.

Haya

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Haya 2013-03-13T19:50:30+00:00

Thank you very much!

Foxxer_old

Foxxer_old 2013-04-06T16:56:53+00:00

Timing Check Request

BPM: 193
Offset: 478

BPM: 191
Offset: 80063

BPM: 193
Offset: 90115

Good Luck~

Haya

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Topic Starter

Haya 2013-04-06T21:10:10+00:00

Thanks, changed the 1st and 2nd one

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-04-12T22:11:23+00:00

Nice song~

Haya

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Haya 2013-04-12T22:58:03+00:00

Indeed!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-04-14T20:36:08+00:00

..wieso hat das keinen artist? D: xD

Seph

Seph 2013-04-23T16:16:40+00:00

nvm, will mod ctb when downloaded

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-05-12T17:06:28+00:00

Tenshichan requested me a mod for his CTB diff in-game. Here I am /o/

[CTB]

Put the difficulty of the map inside the name? I'd be a Rain.
OD9, to fit it to the AR.
For the part at the very beginning, before the spinner, it's better not to put any HDash. The melody is quite calm there, and they don't really fit there.
01:20:063 (1,2,3,4) - Reminded me completely of Steven's map style wwwww
01:38:338 (1) - Delete this note? Sounds better to let alone the previous triplet (2,3,4).
01:40:048 - Restart the kiai here, instead of 01:40:359? Looks more fitting.
02:10:843 - ^
01:43:156 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid a pixel-jump here, since it's quite unexpected. Delete the HDash in (4) or put one in (3) to make this pattern a bit more confortable to play.
01:44:400 (3,4,5) - This one is a bit easier to catch, because there's a HDash in the previous (2), which carries the ryuuta to the next note quickly. Still, recommendable to avoid that pixel-jump.
01:53:726 (2) - Make the NC in this note, instead of the previous one?
01:59:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - It's really nice at is it, but to make it a bit more interesting, it's possible to separate a bit those notes from the Y-axis in groups of 2 notes. HERE is an example, but it doesn't have to be so extreme, and the separation can be done gradually (starting with (2) exactly in the Y-axis, (4) a bit more separated, and so on). It could be an interesting effect that can be added >w<
02:00:566 (5) - Make it horizontal looking to the right, to increase the distance with the next slider (1).
02:03:459 (2) - This note can be closer to (1,3), just to make a not-so-spreaded "<" triplet. The next ones are okay as they are, since the player already gets prepared with this not-so-difficult triplet.
02:03:769 (2) - ^ Same reason, and to keep the symmetry =)

Awesome job, and really fun map here! Most of the comments are just mere suggestions. Good luck :3

Tenshichan

595 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-05-13T10:48:02+00:00

Deif wrote:
Tenshichan requested me a mod for his CTB diff in-game. Here I am /o/

[CTB]

Put the difficulty of the map inside the name? I'd be a Rain. ok
OD9, to fit it to the AR. ok
For the part at the very beginning, before the spinner, it's better not to put any HDash. The melody is quite calm there, and they don't really fit there. I tried out several things here and I guess you are right. I made them now possible without a hyperdash.
01:20:063 (1,2,3,4) - Reminded me completely of Steven's map style wwwww Really? Its coincidence then I just liked this kind of pattern :3
01:38:338 (1) - Delete this note? Sounds better to let alone the previous triplet (2,3,4). Deleted the note and adjusted the spacing to the next note to make it not look so poor spaced.
01:40:048 - Restart the kiai here, instead of 01:40:359? Looks more fitting. I used the same kiai as in the other diffs in this mapset, and afaik it needs to be consistent so I dont make a change here
02:10:843 - ^ ^
01:43:156 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid a pixel-jump here, since it's quite unexpected. Delete the HDash in (4) or put one in (3) to make this pattern a bit more confortable to play. I fixed this by making the first note of the pixeljump into a hyperdash, and I put the next note near the last.
01:44:400 (3,4,5) - This one is a bit easier to catch, because there's a HDash in the previous (2), which carries the ryuuta to the next note quickly. Still, recommendable to avoid that pixel-jump. The same fix as above.
01:53:726 (2) - Make the NC in this note, instead of the previous one? Well, since NC in CTB are just to prevent overfilling the catcher I fixed this for aesthetic reasons, basically you are right it would be more fitting.
01:59:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - It's really nice at is it, but to make it a bit more interesting, it's possible to separate a bit those notes from the Y-axis in groups of 2 notes. HERE is an example, but it doesn't have to be so extreme, and the separation can be done gradually (starting with (2) exactly in the Y-axis, (4) a bit more separated, and so on). It could be an interesting effect that can be added >w< I highly agree on this, nice idea. I didnt like how the stream looked while playing and it was a bit plain before. I made it as you suggested but I didn't make the gap between the fruits so huge, it is now comparable to the jumps on 7x7x7 from the distance.
02:00:566 (5) - Make it horizontal looking to the right, to increase the distance with the next slider (1). Because I changed the previous pattern, this slider looked awkward there, so I moved it to the middle and made it vertical, so it blends in with the next pattern.
02:03:459 (2) - This note can be closer to (1,3), just to make a not-so-spreaded "<" triplet. The next ones are okay as they are, since the player already gets prepared with this not-so-difficult triplet. I hesitated to fix this because I wanted to make a pattern which looks similar to one of my favorite patterns in CTB (the original comes from the conversion of final test in Touhou). But Since the AR is 9 and I certainly won't change this I think you are right, so I fixed it as you suggested.
02:03:769 (2) - ^ Same reason, and to keep the symmetry =) ^

Awesome job, and really fun map here! Most of the comments are just mere suggestions. Good luck :3 Thank you very much for your mod :3

http://puu.sh/2SyMg.osu

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Deif 2013-05-13T16:36:11+00:00

Kiai times don't have to be consistent in guest difficulties, as long as they make sense. Example: p/2256323

Forgot to give a star /o/

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-27T22:54:56+00:00

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SPOILER

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:Rock, Scissors, Paper
Artist:ONE OK ROCK
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Creator:Haya
Version:Hard
Source:
Tags:nicovideo mad amv
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280,296,74156,2,0,L|308:364,1,68.0000012969971
220,240,74467,2,0,P|228:200|248:172,2,68.0000012969971
324,220,74933,6,0,P|332:172|216:84,2,204.000003890991
288,300,76022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,288,76177,2,0,P|168:268|144:244,2,68.0000012969971
128,336,76643,2,0,P|72:288|48:224,2,136.000002593994
200,288,77421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,77576,2,0,P|324:292|368:296,1,68.0000012969971
420,216,77887,2,0,P|384:204|340:200,1,68.0000012969971
248,192,78198,2,0,P|212:204|168:208,1,68.0000012969971
116,128,78509,2,0,P|152:116|196:112,1,68.0000012969971
284,112,78819,6,0,P|352:116|424:100,2,136.000002593994
200,76,79597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,92,79752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,168,79908,2,0,P|68:212|80:248,1,68.0000012969971,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,80377,6,0,L|380:304,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,81319,2,0,L|124:100,2,160,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,303,82261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,260,82576,6,0,P|192:208|192:100,1,160
324,28,83204,2,0,P|356:80|356:188,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,256,83675,2,0,P|400:272|436:272,2,80
276,244,84146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,84460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,136,84775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,72,85089,6,0,P|364:76|444:148,2,160,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,86031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,86267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,86345,2,0,P|120:296|172:324,1,120
208,316,86659,2,0,P|256:296|328:304,1,120
360,316,86973,2,0,L|436:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87445,12,0,89801,0:0:0:0:
160,104,90100,6,0,P|112:160|116:252,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,91032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,104,91343,2,0,P|400:160|396:252,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,92276,2,0,L|176:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,92587,6,0,P|96:232|8:192,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,168,93364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,180,93519,2,0,P|344:220|352:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,336,93830,2,0,L|499:277,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,94607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,332,94763,2,0,P|120:304|100:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,95074,6,0,P|144:176|140:216,1,80
56,160,95384,2,0,L|224:108,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,72,96162,2,0,L|128:44,1,80
312,168,96628,2,0,L|228:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,96939,2,0,P|232:304|320:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,97405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,180,97561,6,0,P|412:124|336:60,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98493,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98804,2,0,L|56:220,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,136,99270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,76,99426,2,0,P|180:108|264:100,2,160,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,24,100359,6,0,P|348:88|324:168,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,101291,2,0,P|300:248|396:232,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,172,102068,2,0,L|128:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,102535,2,0,L|284:16,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,103312,2,0,P|404:216|416:176,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,103778,2,0,P|224:308|136:296,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,104711,2,0,P|64:296|84:376,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,148,105644,6,0,B|356:124|320:120|320:120|244:144,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,208,106110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,106265,2,0,L|352:216,1,80
256,56,106732,2,0,L|100:104,1,160
72,184,107198,2,0,P|24:192|-12:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,107509,6,0,P|192:240|220:264,1,80
324,236,107820,2,0,P|300:204|264:176,1,80
220,264,108131,2,0,L|196:344,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,108441,2,0,L|292:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,52,108752,6,0,P|416:112|416:188,1,160
95,186,109374,2,0,P|96:112|152:52,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,120895,6,0,L|400:160,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,121827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,52,122138,2,0,L|112:160,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,123071,2,0,L|368:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,123382,6,0,P|424:196|508:176,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,124159,2,0,P|232:124|196:120,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,124625,2,0,P|128:240|48:240,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,125402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,125558,2,0,P|120:76|108:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,240,125869,6,0,P|88:212|104:180,1,80
20,160,126179,2,0,L|80:320,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,84,126957,2,0,P|104:52|144:36,1,80
352,116,127423,2,0,P|308:132|272:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,28,127734,2,0,P|416:44|444:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,204,128200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,236,128356,6,0,P|256:240|188:304,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129599,2,0,L|206:173,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,130065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,130221,2,0,P|200:148|192:248,2,160,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,131154,6,0,P|172:328|256:304,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,132086,2,0,P|172:56|256:80,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,132863,2,0,L|268:180,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,156,133330,6,0,P|456:220|400:296,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,134107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,44,134262,2,0,P|288:48|252:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,144,134573,2,0,B|140:132|140:132|128:124|128:124|56:112,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,135506,2,0,B|368:288|368:288|380:280|380:280|452:268,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,136439,6,0,P|136:276|236:244,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,188,136905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,137060,2,0,L|340:32,1,80
168,164,137527,2,0,P|216:120|224:20,1,160
144,64,137993,2,0,L|64:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,188,138304,6,0,L|96:180,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,138615,2,0,P|260:264|220:360,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,139081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,139236,2,0,P|276:192|312:180,1,80
412,220,139547,2,0,L|376:60,2,160,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,140480,2,0,L|136:60,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,141257,6,0,P|200:312|272:272,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,141724,2,0,P|388:160|476:168,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,142190,2,0,L|356:100,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,52,142656,2,0,L|200:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,142967,2,0,L|212:160,1,80
276,228,143278,6,0,P|212:264|128:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,188,143744,2,0,P|44:260|88:332,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,252,144211,2,0,P|152:180|108:108,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,144677,2,0,L|232:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,144988,2,0,P|360:84|396:68,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,145454,2,0,P|240:204|236:240,1,80
272,316,145765,6,0,P|344:340|428:320,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,146231,2,0,P|360:184|380:88,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,160,146698,2,0,P|364:180|288:152,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,147164,2,0,B|176:100|140:116|100:132|60:124,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,52,147630,2,0,P|144:100|116:200,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,148252,6,0,L|256:184,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,148718,2,0,L|356:280,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,149185,2,0,L|248:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,44,149496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,100,149651,2,0,P|108:136|112:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,260,149962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,150117,2,0,B|264:296|300:272|340:244|384:252,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,150817,12,0,153382,0:0:0:0:

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-05-28T14:44:53+00:00

I am so proud of you

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2013-05-31T07:02:55+00:00

Hello, thanks for m4m \o/

[General]

00:20:374 - kinda lack emphasis, idk, but i prefer to add a kiai burst here
01:40:359 - the kiai burst here seems a bit weird, prefer if you start it from here 01:40:048 -

[bomber's Easy]

00:10:892 (1) - this is too sudden after spinner, imo. My suggestion is to end the spinner at 00:09:182 - with low hitsounds, and then add a circle here 00:10:426 -
00:32:809 (1,2) - they can interact better i'm not really good at this
SPOILER
00:36:540 (2) - move it up a bit so the head of the previous slider blanketed
SPOILER
add whistle at 00:31:566 (2) - 's head, 00:32:809 (1) - 's tail, and remove whistle at 00:32:809 (1) - 's head to match hitsound pattern with 00:35:296 (1,2,1,2) -
00:44:001 (1) - remove whistle at slider's end, and 00:44:623 (2) - add whistle at slider's head for consistence hitsound pattern with 00:41:514 (1,2) -
00:47:731 (3) - nc
00:50:218 (1) - add finish
01:18:509 (5) - nc
01:22:261 (2) - 323|134 so it'll stack properly with 01:21:005 (2) - , then 01:23:518 (2,2) - should adjust too
01:30:100 (1) - add finish at slider's head
01:46:887 (1) - prefer if you start the spinner here 01:46:887 (1) - then add a note 01:46:887 - and/or 01:47:198 -
02:00:895 (1) - add finish
02:08:356 (6) - nc
02:09:599 (1) - remove nc
02:14:573 (3) - slider's head square point should be 301|221 if you want symmetry
SPOILER
02:14:573 (3,1) - i suggest you not to overlap

[Normal]

AR+1? Fit the SV imo

00:13:845 (2,1) - a bit overlap
00:07:939 (1,3) - add whistles?
00:37:783 (1,3) - stack them properly
01:06:384 (1,3) - don't make them touch
01:28:230 - prefer if you add a note here for a better rhythm flow
01:41:913 (6,2) - don't make them touch
02:17:371 (3,4) - stack them properly
nice diff :3

[Sakuya's Hard]

hi Sakuya o/

00:12:602 (6,1) - adjust the overlap more?
SPOILER
00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them properly
01:27:445 (1) - prefer if you start this spinner here 01:27:288 -
02:20:480 (6) - only suggestion, i think this rhythm fits the song more
SPOILER
02:21:724 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/350pF.jpg ?
nice diff :3

[Insane]

00:06:384 (4) - anti-jump doesn't fit, imo, i suggest you to ctrl+g here
00:17:887 (4) - nc
00:19:752 (5,6,7) - prefer to unstack, you can make more pattern
i'm not really good with insane diff x.x can't even play this

Good luck~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-05-31T10:21:59+00:00

SPOILER

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hello, thanks for m4m \o/

[General]

00:20:374 - kinda lack emphasis, idk, but i prefer to add a kiai burst here Hmm I mainly use the kiai for the Chorus, so that's a no ^^
01:40:359 - the kiai burst here seems a bit weird, prefer if you start it from here 01:40:048 - The Kiai times follows the lyrics!

[Normal]

AR+1? Fit the SV imo Done!

00:13:845 (2,1) - a bit overlap Done!
00:07:939 (1,3) - add whistles? Done!
00:37:783 (1,3) - stack them properly Done!
01:06:384 (1,3) - don't make them touch Done!
01:28:230 - prefer if you add a note here for a better rhythm flowFixed it another way.
01:41:913 (6,2) - don't make them touchDone!
02:17:371 (3,4) - stack them properly Done!
nice diff :3

[Insane]

00:06:384 (4) - anti-jump doesn't fit, imo, i suggest you to ctrl+g here Done!
00:17:887 (4) - ncDone!
00:19:752 (5,6,7) - prefer to unstack, you can make more pattern Done!
i'm not really good with insane diff x.x can't even play this
Good luck~

Thanks for the mod!

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2013-06-02T11:47:30+00:00

Hi ! From the queue !

[Insane]
01:13:068 (2,3) - I feel this better for the flow : http://puu.sh/36z5s.jpg
01:31:032 (4,5,6,7) - What you do here with the circles just after the slider just ruin toally the flow, the feeling of the player. So i think this would be better: http://puu.sh/36z9O.jpg
01:32:431 (10) - Stack it with (8)
01:40:048 (5) - The second kiai time should be here !
01:45:177 (9,10,11) - This stream is awkward imo
02:02:760 (8) - This ? http://puu.sh/36zfb.jpg
02:10:065 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel this fits better with the vocal : http://puu.sh/36zjL.jpg
02:19:236 (5) - For the flow : http://puu.sh/36zmW.jpg
02:30:739 (5,1) - This ? To fit with the little scream : http://puu.sh/36zps.jpg

[Hard]
01:40:048 (6) - For the kiai time. Same at the 02:10:843 (6)
01:42:224 (3) - Here you should just place a circle on the white tick. The red tick fits with nothing
02:06:957 (3,4) - These two sliders should be the same, like this : http://puu.sh/36zGf.jpg
02:21:724 (2) - Make a better blanket : http://puu.sh/36zHP.jpg
Nice diff here

[Normal]
I won't repeat the timing of kiais anymore
You've got some spacing issues, check the aimod
00:15:089 (3) - Clap here i suggest
00:42:446 (1) - Place it better, more symmetrical, 00:44:001 (4) - Here too
01:38:493 (3) - Blanket better here : http://puu.sh/36zPc.jpg
01:45:644 (1) - It's not really a problem but loud sliderticks aren't really appreciate by players, consider change it.
01:57:457 (1) - Blanket like this : http://puu.sh/36zU1.jpg
02:16:439 (2) - Here too for the slidertick

[Easy]
Well i'm not really good modding easy so i'll do what i can :
01:11:047 (1) - Stack this with (2) if you can
01:20:691 (1) - I find all this part to the spinner confusing for beginner, try to remember that it can be the first map played by a beginner.
01:46:887 (1) - You can do something else as a spinner here.
02:14:573 (3,1) - This isn't really pretty.
02:29:185 (2) - You should do this : http://puu.sh/36Ajw.jpg

Your map is very nice ! I star it so, good luck for after !

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-02T18:10:50+00:00

Changed the Kiai Time for all Diffs.

SPOILER

Arrival wrote:
Hi ! From the queue !

[Insane]
01:13:068 (2,3) - I feel this better for the flow : http://puu.sh/36z5s.jpg Fixed it another way
01:31:032 (4,5,6,7) - What you do here with the circles just after the slider just ruin toally the flow, the feeling of the player. So i think this would be better: http://puu.sh/36z9O.jpg Done!
01:32:431 (10) - Stack it with (8) Oh, that happened by accident xD
01:40:048 (5) - The second kiai time should be here ! Done!
01:45:177 (9,10,11) - This stream is awkward imo I don't think that it is.
02:02:760 (8) - This ? http://puu.sh/36zfb.jpg Naaah, that would be anti-flow with the next slider.
02:10:065 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel this fits better with the vocal : http://puu.sh/36zjL.jpg Done!
02:19:236 (5) - For the flow : http://puu.sh/36zmW.jpg Done!
02:30:739 (5,1) - This ? To fit with the little scream : http://puu.sh/36zps.jpg Done!

[Normal]
I won't repeat the timing of kiais anymore
You've got some spacing issues, check the aimod Done!
00:15:089 (3) - Clap here i suggest Done!
00:42:446 (1) - Place it better, more symmetrical, 00:44:001 (4) - Here too Done!
01:38:493 (3) - Blanket better here : http://puu.sh/36zPc.jpg Tried it
01:45:644 (1) - It's not really a problem but loud sliderticks aren't really appreciate by players, consider change it. Let's see what I can do.
01:57:457 (1) - Blanket like this : http://puu.sh/36zU1.jpg Done!
02:16:439 (2) - Here too for the slidertick Done!

Your map is very nice ! I star it so, good luck for after !

Thanks for the mod and the star! :3

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2013-06-03T20:43:49+00:00

It was a real fun to mod your map, Tenshichan. I love it! I hope it gets ranked! Still good luck!

Here the chatlog:

SPOILER

22:10 Sey: 00:34:364 (1) - Ich sehe keinen Sinn, hier einen NC zu machen, kannst du mir das erklären?
22:11 Tenshichan: NC in CTB sind ja eher nur dazu da, damit der Catcher nicht überfüllt wird, und da hab ich versucht die Combo möglichst klein zu halten, aber im Grunde hast du REcht das sieht im Editor nicht so ästhetisch aus
22:12 Sey: Naja okay, ist kein Zwang.
22:12 Tenshichan: Hab die NC mal auf den Slider davor gesetzt
22:12 Sey: Ok. Gut.
22:12 Sey: Ok also erst mal allgemein: Die erste Minute ist echt super! Gefällt mir.
22:12 Tenshichan: Danke!

22:14 Sey: 00:59:545 (1) - bis 01:00:089 (8) - Ich würde den Stream anders machen. Ich finde, dass die Circle Distance nicht gelungen ist und mir würde es besser gefallen, wenn du sie kleiner machst, um das Ganze auch besser mit 01:01:721 (3) - zu verbinden.
22:15 Sey: Ich zeig dir mal, was ich gemacht habe: http://puu.sh/37Cxr.jpg Das lässt sich einfach flüssiger spielen, ist aber nur ein allgemeiner und sehr persönlicher Tipp.
22:16 Sey: Oh nicht (3), ich meinte 01:00:167 (1) -
22:16 Tenshichan: Ich probiers mal eben
22:17 Sey: Bei Circle Distance 0,8 im Stream lief es sehr gut, ich musste auch nicht ständig mitten im Stream nur 1 Millisekündchen dashen.
22:17 Tenshichan: Was mich an dem Stream so wie er jetzt ist stört ist das er zu weit nach rechts geht und deswegen manchmal ein random miss entsteht also finde ich es gut das du da nen Vorschlag hast
22:18 Sey: Ok, gut dass es dir gefällt! Nächster Punkt: 01:24:460 -
22:20 Sey: Ich würde die Slider 3 und 4 so setzen wie 1 und 2 oder vielleicht sogar etwas mehr auseinander, um einen kleinen HyperDash zu schaffen, weil er hier ganz gut passt. So wie hier: http://puu.sh/37D5x.jpg
22:22 Sey: Lässt sich wirklich sehr gut spielen und passt gut zu den Vocals, wenn du mich fragst.
22:22 Tenshichan: Ok finde ich gut, hab die 2 Slider aber noch etwas steiler gemacht dann sieht das allgemein etwas besser aus
22:22 Sey: Ok super. Moment.
22:23 Sey: 01:59:789 (1) - bis 02:00:566 (5)
22:23 Sey: Also, ich muss ganz ehrlich gestehen, dass mir dieses "Ding" überhaupt nicht gefällt... Es lässt sich einfach nicht schön spielen. Bitte überdenke das nochmal.
22:24 Sey: Ich würde fast eher 2 Slider daraus machen anstelle der 4 Circles...
22:24 Sey: Oder wie viele Circles auch immer^^"
22:25 Tenshichan: Mir gefällt die Stelle eigentlich, hatte da vorher was anderes gehabt. Ich lasse mir da mal was einfallen, eventuell versuche ich es mal andersrum, also das die circle nicht nach innen gehen sondern nach aussen. Warte, das probier ich einfach mal
22:26 Sey: Ok aber ich würde es irgendwie ändern, es wirkt beinahe so, als wolltest du den Player an dieser Stelle trollen orz
22:27 Sey: Und hör mal bei 25% Playback, ich finde, es klingt komisch, könnte aber auch an den Hitsounds liegen. Ich würde die Stelle einfach nochmal allgemein checken.
22:27 Tenshichan: hmm also vom sound her merk ich da nichts ungewöhnliches
22:28 Sey: Ok ne ist in Ordnung. Wenn dir die Stelle gefällt lass es so, um Gottes Willen ^^ Es ist halt einfach nicht mein Mapping Style
22:28 Tenshichan: Habs jetzt übrigens mal so wie oben beschrieben gemacht, und es ist definitiv besser. Jetzt muss man da nicht mal mehr dashen
22:28 Sey: Ok, ja Dashes hat die Map genug haha
22:28 Sey: Ok ich hab noch eine Kleinigkeit.
22:29 Sey: 02:29:962 (1) - Warum GANZ AM ENDE?! D:
22:29 Sey: Von mir aus in einer Kiai oder sonst wo... Aber warum muss man den Spieler noch schön die Max Score mit sowas GANZ am Ende stehlen!? D:
22:30 Sey: Das nimmt übrigens auch richtig die Lust weg, die Map nochmal spielen zu wollen. Ich wollte es nur gesagt haben.
22:30 Tenshichan: Die diff haben ja schon ein Paar getestet und es ist mir aufgefallen das einige dort wirklich missen. Ich selbst hatte nie so wirklich probleme damit, vllt liegts aber auch daran das ich le mapper bin
22:30 Tenshichan: Ich mach den Slider nicht so breit
22:30 Sey: Es gibt Spieler, die mögen es am Ende nochmal so schwer, aber ich finde diesen Slider schrecklich ^^"
22:30 Sey: Zumindest am Ende
22:30 Tenshichan: Also das man da nicht so einfach missen kann
22:31 Sey: Ok

Auf die Schnelle hab ich nichts weiter gefunden, lass mich nochmal einmal schnell drüberschauen!
22:31 Tenshichan: Vielleicht lass ich mir mit der Zeit auch noch was besseres da einfallen als einfach ein Slider
22:32 Tenshichan: Um ehrlich zu sein sind mir beim mappen am Ende an der Stelle die Ideen ausgegangen und dachte mir "nen slider tuts doch auch" xD
22:32 Sey: Ah eine Sache noch. Da bin ich mir aber selbst unsicher: Wäre es nicht schöner, wenn 00:10:426 (1) - und 00:10:892 (2) - horicontically flipped sind an der y-Achse?
22:33 Sey: Du kannst auch einen Stream mit Mini jumps machen, aber vorsicht, dass du es nicht NOCH SCHWERER machst als diesen Slider.
22:34 Tenshichan: hmm aber wenn ich beide slider an der y Achse spiegele dann ändert sich doch nichts an dem jump oder habe ich was falsch verstanden
22:35 Sey: Hm naja wenn die beiden zu dicht sind, würde der HDash verschwinden, du müsstest sie dann weiter distanzieren.
22:35 Sey: Ich finds nur schöner, weil die beiden Slider unterschiedliche Steigungen haben und es so einfach etwas seltsam ist. Ich war etwas verwirrt, als plötzlich der nächste Slider im Vergleich zum ersten etwas unsymmetrisch war.
22:38 Tenshichan: Ich probiere grad nen bisschen rum wie das schöner aussehen könnte
22:38 Sey: Ist deine Entscheidung, das ist so das grundlegendste, was ich gefunden habe, um deine Map etwas ästhetischer zu machen.
22:38 Sey: Aber alles in Allem, super! Ich will diese Map ranked sehen, und zwar so bald wie möglich! :3
22:38 Sey: Ok wie kann ich jetzt den Chat speichern? xD
22:38 Tenshichan: Der Sinn dabei ist nicht alles immer links > rechts > lincks > rechts zu mappen bei diesen Stellen^^
22:39 Sey: Ja na klar, ich fands dort aber ganz "hübsch"...
22:39 Tenshichan: Ich lass mir evtl was einfallen wenn mich nicht vorher noch wer anders auf eine Idee bringt

22:39 Tenshichan: Und danke für dein Lob! :3
22:39 Sey: :3

Tenshichan

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Tenshichan 2013-06-03T20:48:08+00:00

Thank you Sey :3

http://puu.sh/37FY5.osu

luxoDeh

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luxoDeh 2013-06-04T21:26:58+00:00

Hi! M4M from my queue

EASY

00:32:809 (1,2) - make the first slider follow the curve of the second one, like in this way:

SPOILER

01:09:182 (2) - maybe move it to x:300 y:216 so you can make a triangle with 01:06:695 (2,3,1) -
01:21:005 (2,2) - stack them perfectly
01:23:518 (2,2) - ^
01:58:390 (3) - maybe move it a bit up to make a light curve with all these notes

NORMAL

01:38:493 (3) - move the second point of this slider one grid right so it will be alligned with the previous slider
01:46:576 (2,3) - I know you did this also for symmetry but I think here sounds better something like this

SPOILER

SAKUYA'S HARD

00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them perfectly
01:11:047 (3,1,2,3) - maybe the rithm is better in this way?

SPOILER

01:26:973 (6) - this follow the vocal, but maybe it's better to end it at 01:27:288 - ?

INSANE

nothing here, seems good.

well, there's not too much to say, the map is good and the song too, hope to see this ranked soon

good luck!

Drafura

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Drafura 2013-06-05T14:25:13+00:00

[Tenshichan's Rain]
I'll personally use slider tick rate 1, sounds better on many parts of the song imho. (Totally up to your decision)

00:27:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part lack increasive flow, try something like that, or use 1/2 mouvements at this part : 00:29:079 (1,2,3,4) - instead of 1/1 mouvements. (The hitsounds calls for something increasing in term of difficulty).
00:41:825 (5,6) - This jump is kinda surprising tbh. Curving them more will help the player to predict the jump without modifying the difficulty. Something like this.
01:00:167 (1) - Too far of the stream. It breaks the visual of the "line". Fits better well placed in the end of the stream OR you can make a curve with the whole stream and have different h-spacing between each objects.
01:38:493 (5) - Move it to the left of the following object. Better consistency in the pattern.
01:42:846 (2,3) - This jump doesn't fit at all imho. Maybe make it easier OR rethink the pattern (01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ) to get a better consistency with the previous pattern.
01:51:395 (5,1) - This one is surprising too but I think it fits. (Nothing to do here, just wanted to mention it)
01:53:882 (2,3) - ^

Nice map, I hope the mod was usefull. Good luck for rankings.

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-05T15:52:03+00:00

Thanks for the mod, luxoDEH and Drafura! :3

SPOILER

luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! M4M from my queue

NORMAL

01:38:493 (3) - move the second point of this slider one grid right so it will be alligned with the previous slider Done!
01:46:576 (2,3) - I know you did this also for symmetry but I think here sounds better something like this [img]http://i43.tinypic.com/2zrdquw.png[/img Hmm... Gonna leave it like this!

well, there's not too much to say, the map is good and the song too, hope to see this ranked soon good luck!

Tenshichan

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Tenshichan 2013-06-06T18:23:05+00:00

Drafura wrote:
[Tenshichan's Rain]
I'll personally use slider tick rate 1, sounds better on many parts of the song imho. (Totally up to your decision) Changed it to 1

00:27:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part lack increasive flow, try something like that, or use 1/2 mouvements at this part : 00:29:079 (1,2,3,4) - instead of 1/1 mouvements. (The hitsounds calls for something increasing in term of difficulty). You are right about the hitsounds so I chose to remap the entire pattern. I changed it to some small circlejumps instead of sliders now, which plays better.
00:41:825 (5,6) - This jump is kinda surprising tbh. Curving them more will help the player to predict the jump without modifying the difficulty. Something like this. I agree
01:00:167 (1) - Too far of the stream. It breaks the visual of the "line". Fits better well placed in the end of the stream OR you can make a curve with the whole stream and have different h-spacing between each objects. I didn't notice it while testing but you have a point there. I changed it to the former suggestion.
01:38:493 (5) - Move it to the left of the following object. Better consistency in the pattern. Yeah, I didn't even notice it, good point
01:42:846 (2,3) - This jump doesn't fit at all imho. Maybe make it easier OR rethink the pattern (01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ) to get a better consistency with the previous pattern. I moved the 2 jumps closer, but for now I want to keep this pattern. I think rhythmical it fits because I'm only following the drums in this pattern. If I come up with something better I will change this though.
01:51:395 (5,1) - This one is surprising too but I think it fits. (Nothing to do here, just wanted to mention it)
01:53:882 (2,3) - ^ I like this kind of pattern^^

Nice map, I hope the mod was usefull. Good luck for rankings.

Thanks for your mod, Drafura!

http://puu.sh/39Kt2.osu

phaZ

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phaZ 2013-06-07T18:31:05+00:00

mod ^^

[bomber's Easy]
-00:00:478 (1,2) - erhöhe bitte das spacing ;w; du hast durchgehend den 3/4 rhythmus und du willst hier einfach du früh tappen... ich
_ meine es interessierrt noch überhaupt keinen easy player, dass das sapcing 0,8 sein soll. wissen die doch garnicht
-00:20:373 (1) - ich weiß nicht ob man den ändern muss, aber ich bin mir sehr sicher, dass hier häufig gemisst wird, weil der nicht synchopisch
_ ist. die stimme hat hier einen anderen rhythmus als bei den vorherigen stellen. man haut bei den anderen drei
_ genau dann auf den slider, wenn er "share", "care",.. singt. das hast du hier aber nicht. außerdem breaken slider
_ nicht so schnell wie circle.
-00:36:540 (2) - das sie total komisch aus, wenn die nicht parallel sind. schieb den ersten wegpunkt zu 448;276
01:19:130 (6,1) - iwie finde ich das spacing zu gering, weil man überhaupt keine ahnung hat worauf (zur musik) sich die (1) bezieht. und weil
_ es am naheligendsten ist, dass er sich auf den schlag bei bezieht, wird man sofort danach (nachdem man das
_ merkt/denkt) tappen. du kannst das spacing erhöhen, indem du das blanket verbesserst: 2. wegpunkt auf 44;224
_ schieben, 3. auf 44;128 bewegen
-01:19:130 (6) - verbessere trotzdem das blanket. 2. wegpunkt zu 52;232
-01:21:005 (2) - ende nicht richtig gestackt.... weil der endpunkt garnicht richtig auf dem head vom slider ist
-01:22:261 (2) - nicht richtig gestackt, 2. punkt muss zu 252;172, 3. zu 244;256
-01:23:518 (2) - das ende ist nicht richtig gestackt. verschieb den 2. wegpunkt auf 176;212
-01:45:644 (2) - distance mistake o:?
-02:16:439 (1) - ist nicht ganz korrekt: mach beatsnapdivisor auf 1/2, dann 2. wegpunkt auf 244;326 setzten und dann bsd wieder auf 1/4
-02:30:739 (1) - um einen tick verlängern und dann whistle oder clap drauf

DD

coole easy
[Normal]
-00:01:721 (2,3,4) - meh double stack sieht doch verwirrend aus. mach einfach n dreieck und dann einfachen stack!
-00:08:560 (2) - klingt merwürdig wenn der nicht bei 00:08:405 ist.
-> 00:08:871 - logischer weise hier n circle: 300;316 (dreieck :> )
-00:39:338 (3,4,1) - mag ich auch nicht :< (damit meine ich, dass das wahrscheinlich einige normalplayer bnicht mögen, hab aber nur ein tester)

so gute normal-diff *.* muss dich mal für ne GD fragen
[sakuya's Hard]
-
-00:00:944 (2,3,4) - dreieck :3 | triangle?
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - dweieck | twiangle :3?
-00:09:182 (4,5) - this feels so weird ;c why isn't the offbeat on the circle? supersupersuper strange, change pls ;w;

auch gut

nice too
[Insane]
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - nettes pattern, aber das passt doch garnet hier

-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein?

star o/

Last edited by phaZ 2013-06-07T23:27:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-07T22:54:43+00:00

phaZ wrote:
mod ^^
[Normal]
-00:01:721 (2,3,4) - meh double stack sieht doch verwirrend aus. mach einfach n dreieck und dann einfachen stack! Done!
-00:08:560 (2) - klingt merwürdig wenn der nicht bei 00:08:405 ist. Hmm ich find dass es passt Klar ist es komisch wenn man auf den Guitar part hört, jedoch passt es vom Beat her.
-> 00:08:871 - logischer weise hier n circle: 300;316 (dreieck :> )Boom!
-00:39:338 (3,4,1) - mag ich auch nicht :< (damit meine ich, dass das wahrscheinlich einige normalplayer bnicht mögen, hab aber nur ein tester) Hmm, habs jetzt einfach mit nem Slider getauscht ._. Hoffe es passt!

so gute normal-diff *.* muss dich mal für ne GD fragen

[Insane]
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - nettes pattern, aber das passt doch garnet hier Hast Recht! Fixed!
-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein? Sind sie doch Q_Q
star o/

Danke für den Mod und den Star! :3

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-07T23:02:13+00:00

Haya wrote:
Danke für den Mod und den Star! :3

ach, kd :3

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-07T23:06:02+00:00

Weder Mod noch Star fml orz

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-07T23:08:19+00:00

was hab ich gemacht das du mich dermassen befluchst? t-t

egal, bin ja heute so nett

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-07T23:09:46+00:00

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-07T23:11:23+00:00

phaZ

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phaZ 2013-06-07T23:35:41+00:00

-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein? Sind sie doch Q_Q

leg die slider mal übereinandr O:...
und btw mach mal aus dem gmpt-banner n link xD

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-08T13:03:02+00:00

phaZ wrote:
-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein? Sind sie doch Q_Q
leg die slider mal übereinandr O:...
und btw mach mal aus dem gmpt-banner n link xD

Ich versteh wirklich nicht was du meinst... http://puu.sh/3b0rS.jpg

bomber34

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bomber34 2013-06-11T20:48:15+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
[bomber's Easy]

00:10:892 (1) - this is too sudden after spinner, imo. My suggestion is to end the spinner at 00:09:182 - with low hitsounds, and then add a circle here 00:10:426 - I kind of see your point. However ending the spinner on 00:09:182 - is a bad idea imo because the spinner ends on nothing and not even low hitsounds will make it feel "reasonable" to end it there. I don't think that the hitcircle really starts to close after the spinner. The low AR let's it seem like it is to close, I admit that. However the spinner is long enough to get completed early and I think beginners are not that "bad" to notice that they can stop spinning and concentrate on the next circle when a big "CLEAR" appears when you finish the spinner.
00:32:809 (1,2) - they can interact better i'm not really good at this uhh tried to make it like your picture ... maybe give me next time the code if you cannot explain it good enough?
SPOILER
00:36:540 (2) - move it up a bit so the head of the previous slider blanketed ???
SPOILER
why the spoilerbox?
add whistle at 00:31:566 (2) - 's head, 00:32:809 (1) - 's tail, and remove whistle at 00:32:809 (1) - 's head to match hitsound pattern with 00:35:296 (1,2,1,2) - done
00:44:001 (1) - remove whistle at slider's end, and 00:44:623 (2) - add whistle at slider's head for consistence hitsound pattern with 00:41:514 (1,2) - done
00:47:731 (3) - nc mkay. doesn't matter that much. looks better without nc there but at one point someone will list the arguments for the nc and then it doesn't matter anyway
00:50:218 (1) - add finish ok
01:18:509 (5) - nc I don't see a specific reason
01:22:261 (2) - 323|134 so it'll stack properly with 01:21:005 (2) - , then 01:23:518 (2,2) - should adjust too tried my best to stack them all correctly .... (would have been really helpful if you added the other coordinates too .___.)
01:30:100 (1) - add finish at slider's head ok
01:46:887 (1) - prefer if you start the spinner here 01:46:887 (1) - then add a note 01:46:887 - and/or 01:47:198 - uhh I start the spinner where the spinner already starts add a note at the start of the spinner and or while the spinner is active??? no?
02:00:895 (1) - add finish ok
02:08:356 (6) - nc meh
02:09:599 (1) - remove nc meh
02:14:573 (3) - slider's head square point should be 301|221 if you want symmetry ok
SPOILER
02:14:573 (3,1) - i suggest you not to overlap and instead? I would prefer too not to overlap but i see no other way

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Arrival wrote:
[Easy]
Well i'm not really good modding easy so i'll do what i can :
01:11:047 (1) - Stack this with (2) if you can done
01:20:691 (1) - I find all this part to the spinner confusing for beginner, try to remember that it can be the first map played by a beginner. Maybe, however I think it is still in a reasonable way since we talk about sliders where it is not "that" easy to click them to soon. The sliders are easily visible imo.
01:46:887 (1) - You can do something else than a spinner here. maybe, if more people complain about it. I think it still fits enough to keep it.
02:14:573 (3,1) - This isn't really pretty. see previous mod. I don't know what to do. Will think about it.
02:29:185 (2) - You should do this : http://puu.sh/36Ajw.jpg I don't agree with the flow that you get with this

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luxoDeh wrote:
EASY

00:32:809 (1,2) - make the first slider follow the curve of the second one, like in this way: Like the first mod. Tried it to make it more like this ... (.osu code would be the most helpful, or all slider anchor coordinates
SPOILER
01:09:182 (2) - maybe move it to x:300 y:216 so you can make a triangle with 01:06:695 (2,3,1) - I like this. let's see what others think
01:21:005 (2,2) - stack them perfectly like first mod. I tried too .... hopefully it is better now
01:23:518 (2,2) - ^ ^
01:58:390 (3) - maybe move it a bit up to make a light curve with all these notes moved it a bit.

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phaZ wrote:
[bomber's Easy]
-00:00:478 (1,2) - erhöhe bitte das spacing ;w; du hast durchgehend den 3/4 rhythmus und du willst hier einfach du früh tappen... ich
_ meine es interessierrt noch überhaupt keinen easy player, dass das sapcing 0,8 sein soll. wissen die doch garnicht #YOLO inb4 23920392093029 modder sagen, dass ich doof bin NICHT 0,8x da zu haben
-00:20:373 (1) - ich weiß nicht ob man den ändern muss, aber ich bin mir sehr sicher, dass hier häufig gemisst wird, weil der nicht synchopisch
_ ist. die stimme hat hier einen anderen rhythmus als bei den vorherigen stellen. man haut bei den anderen drei
_ genau dann auf den slider, wenn er "share", "care",.. singt. das hast du hier aber nicht. außerdem breaken slider
_ nicht so schnell wie circle. Harte Nuss, ich weiß das selbst. Allerdings fängt dort der Teil der Musik an, der eindeutig (mMn) die "Pause" einläutet. Kein Platz großartig in der Ecke da übrig bleibt und der Rest von dem Ding Regelkonform ist.
-00:36:540 (2) - das sie total komisch aus, wenn die nicht parallel sind. schieb den ersten wegpunkt zu 448;276 ok Dann war das wohl in dem einen Mod gemeint xD das hier ist mir nie aufgellen.
01:19:130 (6,1) - iwie finde ich das spacing zu gering, weil man überhaupt keine ahnung hat worauf (zur musik) sich die (1) bezieht. und weil
_ es am naheligendsten ist, dass er sich auf den schlag bei bezieht, wird man sofort danach (nachdem man das
_ merkt/denkt) tappen. du kannst das spacing erhöhen, indem du das blanket verbesserst: 2. wegpunkt auf 44;224
_ schieben, 3. auf 44;128 bewegen okay, hätte sonst einfach alles von (1) bis zum Spinner verschoben. 0,9x vom (6) weg xD aber so wie du es schreibst lass ich es mal
-01:19:130 (6) - verbessere trotzdem das blanket. 2. wegpunkt zu 52;232 ... ääähh wenn ich ^ gemacht habe geht das hier nicht mehr ._.
-01:21:005 (2) - ende nicht richtig gestackt.... weil der endpunkt garnicht richtig auf dem head vom slider ist v
-01:22:261 (2) - nicht richtig gestackt, 2. punkt muss zu 252;172, 3. zu 244;256 v
-01:23:518 (2) - das ende ist nicht richtig gestackt. verschieb den 2. wegpunkt auf 176;212 ka. die anderen mods haben das bereits angesprochen, ich hoffe das ist jetzt schon gefixt
-01:45:644 (2) - distance mistake o:? ... das hat niemand gesehen, okay?
-02:16:439 (1) - ist nicht ganz korrekt: mach beatsnapdivisor auf 1/2, dann 2. wegpunkt auf 244;326 setzten und dann bsd wieder auf 1/4
-02:30:739 (1) - um einen tick verlängern und dann whistle oder clap drauf DD ;D Da hat jemand ein feines Ohr

coole easy cooler mod

Thank you all :3

UPDATE:

osu file format v12

[General]
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Tags:nicovideo mad amv Tenshichan Bomber34 LunarSakuya Sakuya Bomber
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ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2013-06-13T12:58:02+00:00

Hi

For modding CTB diff

*sorry for a bit late

Tenshichan's Rain

00:12:291 (1,2,3,4) - kinda waste of jump of that part (especially for beginning part , so my recommendation :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810425

01:12:446 (3) - not fit with the flow song , so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810437

01:13:690 (1) - ^ same : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456

01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - it seems it's a timing jump part .for me it's timed well but it's quite hard so :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810467

01:43:778 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456

For this mod below , it's up to you , because i think the adding circle will make the pattern more fit to play

00:50:218 - add circle & move the spinner into 00:50:296 (I think)

01:46:732 - add circle

01:52:172 - add circle

01:54:659 - add circle

01:57:146 - add circle

That's all i can help for mod , also it's a nice CTB diff

Tenshichan

595 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-06-18T14:19:16+00:00

ursa wrote:
Tenshichan's Rain

00:12:291 (1,2,3,4) - kinda waste of jump of that part (especially for beginning part , so my recommendation :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810425 Well okay, but I dont like that there is no symmetry in your pattern so I made it symmetrical

01:12:446 (3) - not fit with the flow song , so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810437 lol yeah, never really noticed it

01:13:690 (1) - ^ same : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456 Fixed

01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - it seems it's a timing jump part .for me it's timed well but it's quite hard so :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810467

01:43:778 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456 Okay, I moved them a little bit closer, that should help a bit, but I don't want to change the pattern because it is very challenging and I don't want to make it too easy in kiai time

For this mod below , it's up to you , because i think the adding circle will make the pattern more fit to play

00:50:218 - add circle & move the spinner into 00:50:296 (I think) This is perfectly fine because the spinner starts on the syllable and ends with it

01:46:732 - add circle okay

01:52:172 - add circle There is no drums at this part and a circle would not fit in the pattern too

01:54:659 - add circle Same as above

01:57:146 - add circle Again, there is nothing to follow here, so a circle doesn't fit

That's all i can help for mod , also it's a nice CTB diff Thank you!! :3

Thanks for your mod ursa! :3
http://puu.sh/3iwHP.osu

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-06-19T03:42:58+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
hi Sakuya o/ hihi

00:12:602 (6,1) - adjust the overlap more? Fixed
SPOILER
00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them properly Fixed
01:27:445 (1) - prefer if you start this spinner here 01:27:288 - i wanted to start this at the cresendo of the vocals
02:20:480 (6) - only suggestion, i think this rhythm fits the song more hm i kinda like this transition =v=
SPOILER
02:21:724 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/350pF.jpg ? Fixed
nice diff :3

Arrival wrote:
[Hard]
01:40:048 (6) - For the kiai time. Same at the 02:10:843 (6)
01:42:224 (3) - Here you should just place a circle on the white tick. The red tick fits with nothing fine orz
02:06:957 (3,4) - These two sliders should be the same, like this : http://puu.sh/36zGf.jpg Fixed
02:21:724 (2) - Make a better blanket : http://puu.sh/36zHP.jpg Fixed
Nice diff here

luxoDeh wrote:
SAKUYA'S HARD

00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them perfectly Fixed
01:11:047 (3,1,2,3) - maybe the rithm is better in this way? nice but i wish to follow the vocals here
SPOILER
01:26:973 (6) - this follow the vocal, but maybe it's better to end it at 01:27:288 - ? remapped =v=

phaZ wrote:
[sakuya's Hard]
-
-00:00:944 (2,3,4) - dreieck :3 | triangle? Fixed?
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - dweieck | twiangle :3? ^
-00:09:182 (4,5) - this feels so weird ;c why isn't the offbeat on the circle? supersupersuper strange, change pls ;w; hm any ideas maybe? but i kept it for now, it's playable imo

auch gut nice too

Thanks everyone ~

SPOILER

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bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-06-19T19:42:28+00:00

RAIN

00:10:892 (2,3) - Warum kein Hyperdash? Symmetrie ist es nicht aber bei 00:12:913 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:15:400 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - kommt bei jedem Sliderende ein Hyperdash und diese passen besonders gut durch das Hitsounding. Entweder (2) weiter weg oder (3) weiter weg. Man könnte noch darauf eingehen das es vom flow nich konstant auf spiegelung setzt wie die nächsten (1,2,3,4) sliderjumps aber der passt immer noch ^^
00:15:400 (1,2) - Die sind doof konvertiert find ich. (1) ist nur n grader Droplet fall, während (2) so scheiße gebogen is (Also nur im Vergleich dazu). Vllt beide etwas weiter dehnen, strecken ... ka. xD oder beide wirklich nur gradlinig verlaufen lassen. Hauptsache beide wären gleich ^^
00:16:332 (3,4) - sliderenden miteinander stacken? Man möchte schon irgendwie mehr dashen... zumindest fühlt es sich besser an wenn die weiter weg voneinander wären. Ich sehe ja das (3) und (4) anfang mit den anfängen von (1) und (2) gestacked sind. Aber vllt. kannste was an der sliderform oder so ändern?
00:28:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nich sicher aber ich glaube das zumindest die äußersten Sprünge 00:28:301 (3,4,5,6) - bzw. nur 4,5 zu heftig sind für n dash alleine ... ka hätte es um einen grid 3 nach innen erleichtert (also 4 und 5)
00:30:633 (2,3) - und 00:32:809 (1,2) - Is nur mein persönlicher Geschmack aber ich würde es besser finden wenn man nich einfach nur unter dem Slider stehen muss um den zu catchen sondern langsam mit gehen muss. Muss ja nich viel sein aber ne kleine mindestbewegung wäre töfte ^^
00:34:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - bin kein Freund von diesen tonlosen sliderenden. 20% klingt ganz akzeptabel für mich und is auch noch leise genug, sodass es den komischen rhytmus nich kaputt macht. Man könnte immer noch argumentieren das es komplett auf vocal geht xD da passt der leise ton noch.
00:46:643 (2) - platzier den mal auf X: 80 oder X: 88 ... dieser Dash von (2) zu (1) ist zu lasch find ich. Hyperdash passt aber nich und erst recht nich mit (1,2) ... aber auch die kleine distance erweiterung die du damit auf (1,2) legst is ganz nett mit X:80 / 88
01:07:006 (1,2,3) - komischer Rhytmus. Wenn der nach dem Vocal geht müsste (1) auf 01:07:161 - enden und (2) auf 01:07:239 - anfangen. Allerdings is 01:07:317 - dann ohne was wo aber da der Beat ist >w<
01:10:737 (3,4,1) - Bitte einen dashsprung von (3) zu (4) wie es bei 01:10:115 (1,2,3) - der Fall ist. Is besser für den Flow finde ich.
01:13:690 (1,2) - entweder (2) direkt unter (1) oder etwas weiter weg. Es is leicht fangbar aber der flow is einfach ein wenig zu schwach ausgeprägt finde ich.
01:20:377 (2,3) - Hyperdash. Auf (3) ertönt ein Finish welcher immer gut kommt wenn ein HDash von ihm weg führt. Da es aber ein Slider ist kann kein HDash wegführen. Daher zwischen (2,3) HDash das passt auch eig. noch. Sollte sich so anfühlen wie 01:23:047 (4,1) -
01:21:947 (3) - hat ebenfalls dieses Finish ding
01:28:073 - Ich vermisse hier einen Beat ...vllt auf X: 288 platzieren? Ist recht langsam dann von (3,4,1) und passt zu dem folgenden Rest finde ich
01:29:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bei dem Stream vllt den Abstand um 1 grid4 vergrößern? Der Effekt käme besser als er im Moment schon is.
01:40:048 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - großteile dieses Patterns sind gut allerdings passt nicht alles auf die Stimme was schade ist (vom Flow her) ... mich stört eigentlich nur 01:40:048 (1) - und 01:42:224 (4) - Ich finde diese beiden sollte in die andere Richtung zeigen. Ka ob man jetzt aber einfach nur Strg+g benutzt oder Strg+h und die slider Anfänge miteinander stackt (vom X Wert nur mein ich ...
01:48:752 (1,2,1,2,3) - Mach den Stream bitte leise. Im Lied selbst gibt es nix was einen Stream großartig andeutet. Er passt aber, nur ist er zu laut finde ich
02:03:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Finde es lustig das mich von den 6 Triplets nur die 1. 4 stören. Vllt liegt es einfach nur an deren anordnung. Erst dachte ich es alle klingen furchtbar aber nach vielen tests find ich 02:04:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - gut ... Frag mich nich wieso xD
02:17:216 - Note bitte
02:17:371 (2,3) - ab dem Sliderende von (2) kommt dieser schrei ... vokal wo man eigentlich (zumindest im standard osu!) einen Slider erwarten würde... probier mal ein Hyperdash
02:22:034 (2) - ein bisschen weiter nach links
02:24:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - vllt dasselbe pattern hier wie bei 02:22:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?

Lustige CtB ^^ ich sehe schon warum ich kaum CtBs modde xD 1 Stunde und 20 Minuten für eine einzige diff lol

Tenshichan

595 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-06-22T21:05:38+00:00

bomber34 wrote:
RAIN
00:10:892 (2,3) - Warum kein Hyperdash? Symmetrie ist es nicht aber bei 00:12:913 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:15:400 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - kommt bei jedem Sliderende ein Hyperdash und diese passen besonders gut durch das Hitsounding. Entweder (2) weiter weg oder (3) weiter weg. Man könnte noch darauf eingehen das es vom flow nich konstant auf spiegelung setzt wie die nächsten (1,2,3,4) sliderjumps aber der passt immer noch ^^ Mir haben diese Slider von Anfang an nicht gefallen, aber der Ziel hierbei war nicht die ganze Zeit auf Symmetrie zu setzen. Ich habs jetzt verbessert und es zu einem symmetrischen pattern gemacht, was sich jedoch trotzdem von den anderen unterscheidet.
00:15:400 (1,2) - Die sind doof konvertiert find ich. (1) ist nur n grader Droplet fall, während (2) so scheiße gebogen is (Also nur im Vergleich dazu). Vllt beide etwas weiter dehnen, strecken ... ka. xD oder beide wirklich nur gradlinig verlaufen lassen. Hauptsache beide wären gleich ^^ Ich weiss auch nicht warum das so ist xD Ist mir nicht mal aufgefallen xD Ich hab die jetzt mal rund gemacht, aber das änderts auch nur minimal. Naja, das gameplay stört das nicht so von daher denke ich lass ich das jetzt so.
00:16:332 (3,4) - sliderenden miteinander stacken? Man möchte schon irgendwie mehr dashen... zumindest fühlt es sich besser an wenn die weiter weg voneinander wären. Ich sehe ja das (3) und (4) anfang mit den anfängen von (1) und (2) gestacked sind. Aber vllt. kannste was an der sliderform oder so ändern? Ich denke das wäre nur ein Problem an der Stelle wenn diese sich wiederholen würden, aber da (3) schon keinen Hyperdash mehr hat denke ich geht das so in Ordnung.
00:28:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nich sicher aber ich glaube das zumindest die äußersten Sprünge 00:28:301 (3,4,5,6) - bzw. nur 4,5 zu heftig sind für n dash alleine ... ka hätte es um einen grid 3 nach innen erleichtert (also 4 und 5) Drafura hat angemerkt das es an der Stelle gut wäre wenn sich die Schwierigkeit etwas erhöht da die Hitsounds stärker werden. Ich hab die nach etwas rumprobieren schon weiter nach innen gepackt, und ich fange die eigentlich ganz gut.
00:30:633 (2,3) - und 00:32:809 (1,2) - Is nur mein persönlicher Geschmack aber ich würde es besser finden wenn man nich einfach nur unter dem Slider stehen muss um den zu catchen sondern langsam mit gehen muss. Muss ja nich viel sein aber ne kleine mindestbewegung wäre töfte ^^ hmm warum nicht, done.
00:34:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - bin kein Freund von diesen tonlosen sliderenden. 20% klingt ganz akzeptabel für mich und is auch noch leise genug, sodass es den komischen rhytmus nich kaputt macht. Man könnte immer noch argumentieren das es komplett auf vocal geht xD da passt der leise ton noch. Habs mal geändert. War mir da aber total unsicher eventuell ändere ich es irgendwann wieder zurück, wenn sich da noch irgendein Unterschied auftut.
00:46:643 (2) - platzier den mal auf X: 80 oder X: 88 ... dieser Dash von (2) zu (1) ist zu lasch find ich. Hyperdash passt aber nich und erst recht nich mit (1,2) ... aber auch die kleine distance erweiterung die du damit auf (1,2) legst is ganz nett mit X:80 / 88 Habs auf 88 gesetzt, fand den Jump zwar bisher nicht so wichtig aber im Prinzip hast du da Recht, das spielt sich so etwas besser.
01:07:006 (1,2,3) - komischer Rhytmus. Wenn der nach dem Vocal geht müsste (1) auf 01:07:161 - enden und (2) auf 01:07:239 - anfangen. Allerdings is 01:07:317 - dann ohne was wo aber da der Beat ist >w< Habs jetzt komplett anders gemappt und es sollte jetzt besser passen.
01:10:737 (3,4,1) - Bitte einen dashsprung von (3) zu (4) wie es bei 01:10:115 (1,2,3) - der Fall ist. Is besser für den Flow finde ich. Dann würde es wiederum nicht ins nächste Pattern reinpassen, und ins vorherige passt es auch nicht wirklich und ich wüsste sonst nicht wo ich sie hinpacken soll xD
01:13:690 (1,2) - entweder (2) direkt unter (1) oder etwas weiter weg. Es is leicht fangbar aber der flow is einfach ein wenig zu schwach ausgeprägt finde ich. Habs nu anders gemappt, was mir auch besser gefällt.
01:20:377 (2,3) - Hyperdash. Auf (3) ertönt ein Finish welcher immer gut kommt wenn ein HDash von ihm weg führt. Da es aber ein Slider ist kann kein HDash wegführen. Daher zwischen (2,3) HDash das passt auch eig. noch. Sollte sich so anfühlen wie 01:23:047 (4,1) -
01:21:947 (3) - hat ebenfalls dieses Finish ding Das kriegt keinen Hyperdash weil hier die Schwierigkeit darin besteht die Slider ohne Hyperdash zu bekommen (ein Hyperdash würde das Pattern dann relativ nutzlos machen).
01:28:073 - Ich vermisse hier einen Beat ...vllt auf X: 288 platzieren? Ist recht langsam dann von (3,4,1) und passt zu dem folgenden Rest finde ich Der fehlt hier weil ich dort nach den drums mappe und da keine sind.
01:29:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bei dem Stream vllt den Abstand um 1 grid4 vergrößern? Der Effekt käme besser als er im Moment schon is.Wären die Jumps davor nicht da hätte ich zugestimmt, aber ich will das epische pattern nach dem stream nicht verändern, das heisst der stream würde sich somit nach links verlängern, und dann wäre der stream anfang vor der letzten frucht der jumps und das würde meiner Meinung nach den flow an der stelle zerstören wenn man nach dem letzten jumps noch nen Schritt nach links machen muss.
01:40:048 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - großteile dieses Patterns sind gut allerdings passt nicht alles auf die Stimme was schade ist (vom Flow her) ... mich stört eigentlich nur 01:40:048 (1) - und 01:42:224 (4) - Ich finde diese beiden sollte in die andere Richtung zeigen. Ka ob man jetzt aber einfach nur Strg+g benutzt oder Strg+h und die slider Anfänge miteinander stackt (vom X Wert nur mein ich ... Von den Lyrics her wäre das richtig. Denn der erste Slider (Gemu) und der zweite Slider (sore) bedecken jeweils 2 Silben und die anderen nur einen. Da aber die zweite Silbe jeweils verschluckt wird und kaum hörbar ist kann man das denke ich so lassen. Das Ziel von dieser Stelle ist es den Spieler kontinuierlich ohne Hyperdash dashen zu lassen, und ich denke da es mitten in der Kiai Time ist passt es von der Schwierigkeit und von Flow auch. Das Pattern ist auch einzigartig in der Diff da man sonst nirgendwo so ähnlich dashen muss, was nicht der Fall wäre wenn man die Slider z.B. spiegeln würde. Ich hoffe ich habe dich hier richtig verstanden, wenn nicht dann brüll mich einfach in osu! an.^^
01:48:752 (1,2,1,2,3) - Mach den Stream bitte leise. Im Lied selbst gibt es nix was einen Stream großartig andeutet. Er passt aber, nur ist er zu laut finde ich Gut hingehört. Die drums haben an der Stelle deutlich ne Nebenrolle. => habs auf 65% geändert hoffe das reicht.
02:03:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Finde es lustig das mich von den 6 Triplets nur die 1. 4 stören. Vllt liegt es einfach nur an deren anordnung. Erst dachte ich es alle klingen furchtbar aber nach vielen tests find ich 02:04:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - gut ... Frag mich nich wieso xD Darüber haben wir ja schon kurz gesprochen^^. Warum die Schrift orange ist? Nun ich hab selber noch Änderungen dran vorgenommen. Ich habe jeweils die äusserste Frucht der ersten 4 1 grid3 weiter zu den inneren geschoben, weil es sich so einfach besser spielen lässt. So ein Pattern wie das von Final Test in Touhou bleibt wohl für immer einzigartig in CTB *seufz*
02:17:216 - Note bitte Stimmt die passt gut.
02:17:371 (2,3) - ab dem Sliderende von (2) kommt dieser schrei ... vokal wo man eigentlich (zumindest im standard osu!) einen Slider erwarten würde... probier mal ein Hyperdash Das merkt man nicht so deutlich, aber ich habe an der Stelle nicht nach der Stimme gemappt sondern nach dem Beat.
02:22:034 (2) - ein bisschen weiter nach links Hab die Stelle etwas verändert da ich es wie es jetzt war bisschen zu einfach fand.
02:24:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - vllt dasselbe pattern hier wie bei 02:22:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? Ob ich da jetzt einen Slider setze oder die beiden Noten behalte macht eigentlich keinen Unterschied, deswegen lasse ich es so.

Lustige CtB ^^ ich sehe schon warum ich kaum CtBs modde xD 1 Stunde und 20 Minuten für eine einzige diff lol

Danke für den Mod bomber :3
http://puu.sh/3lRB0.osu

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-24T22:09:09+00:00

MAN THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE SOME BADASS SONG WITH DEEP EDGY ANIME AND THEY BE GETTIN LIKE THE KAWAIIEST ANIME LOL

Overall:
02:21:102 - From this onward, why is this quieter? The feel of the song doesn't change.

Insane:
00:34:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The spacing here is really a lot, even though this part should be kind of softer. Like what is even being followed here?
01:15:711 (7,8,9) - The rest of this combo is all spaced normally, and nothing in the music really changes, so why is there a jump here?
01:17:110 (4) - Maybe make this part of the jumps too? It might be awkward to just have it so close to (3) relative to the previous notes

Good insane diff :3. Just make sure that your softer parts are as fitting as your more intense parts are.

Hard:
Reminds me of a hard I'd make, lol

Normal:
The diff is SUPER 1/1y. Like I know the vocals are like that, but try finding more interesting things to do than having a note on every white tick. Players want to play kawaii maps, not be a metronome.
00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - I know patterns are pretty but you already established the dotted quarter note feel of the piece, and having it turn into 1/1 just makes it feel weird

Easy:
Is there any reason the video isn't appearing on this diff? ouo
00:40:270 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Maybe add some longer sliders instead of mapping every single syllable?
01:00:167 (1) - From here onward, now it's not mapping enough vocal. Being a snare drum is cool and all but it might be more fun to play the actual leading vocal line, and maybe adding notes for drum supplement.
02:17:527 (2) - ! ! ! This looks REALLY bad. Especially for easy players, they're all gonna not be able to see it.

I like it. Sorry it took forever to get to, lol

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-06-25T13:22:45+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Easy:
Is there any reason the video isn't appearing on this diff? ouo Illuminati
00:40:270 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Maybe add some longer sliders instead of mapping every single syllable? Was not my idea. I had to push the Star rating up, because apparently the spread would be to bad if i had a lower/easier diff. My original version had 1 star exactly lol
01:00:167 (1) - From here onward, now it's not mapping enough vocal. Being a snare drum is cool and all but it might be more fun to play the actual leading vocal line, and maybe adding notes for drum supplement. Problem with vocal is that it is not that suitable for Easy as a diff because he talks so fast. But his vocal does not fit for a lot of sliders either. I replaced some notes with sliders, which give you some form of vocal "feedback"
02:17:527 (2) - ! ! ! This looks REALLY bad. Especially for easy players, they're all gonna not be able to see it. LAWL. No idea how this happened. It is not supposed to be like this. I am totally innocent. Syntax ERROR. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
~~even though the real way doesn't look better ....~~

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139,191,12291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,12913,6,0,L|256:364,2,120,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,143,14312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,14778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,92,15400,6,0,P|406:150|404:206,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,292,16332,2,0,P|320:328|256:332,1,120
172,308,17265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,248,17887,6,0,P|247:209|184:190,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,18819,2,0,P|154:94|96:125,1,120
28,56,19752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,184,20374,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,48,30322,6,0,P|396:72|420:140,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,252,31566,2,0,P|248:212|208:116,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,32809,6,0,P|80:108|32:172,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,280,34053,2,0,P|148:184|272:164,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,35296,6,0,L|332:340,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,276,36540,2,0,B|448:180|448:180|448:124|408:92|376:92|376:92|356:92,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,37783,6,0,P|192:104|140:132,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,208,39027,2,0,P|344:196|396:168,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,56,40270,6,0,P|292:40|248:36,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,40892,1,2,0:2:0:0:
132,56,41203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,108,41514,6,0,P|72:144|64:196,1,80,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,228,42136,2,0,L|196:228,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
252,224,42757,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,200,43068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,136,43379,1,2,0:2:0:0:
252,112,43690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,112,44001,6,0,L|100:112,1,80,2|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
112,48,44623,2,0,L|200:48,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,48,45244,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,176,45866,2,0,L|256:340,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,47731,6,0,P|256:172|216:56,1,320
112,132,49597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50218,12,4,52705,0:0:0:0:
256,80,60167,6,0,L|336:80,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,61099,2,0,P|420:232|332:264,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,62343,6,0,P|184:128|112:160,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,264,63586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,328,64208,2,0,B|304:392|304:296|464:328,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,200,66073,6,0,P|456:152|356:112,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,107,67317,2,0,L|157:107,2,80,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,107,68560,2,0,P|364:188|296:216,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,216,69804,2,0,L|84:216,2,80,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,71047,5,8,0:0:0:0:
191,148,71669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,216,72291,2,0,P|124:280|208:316,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,314,73534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,223,74156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,100,74778,2,0,P|344:76|268:104,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,76022,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,264,76643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,176,77265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,92,77887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,176,78509,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,304,79130,2,0,P|44:224|44:128,1,240,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,39,80691,5,4,0:0:0:0:
200,39,81005,2,0,P|276:75|324:135,1,160
348,191,81947,5,4,0:0:0:0:
323,133,82261,2,0,P|247:185|239:249,1,160
252,307,83204,5,4,0:0:0:0:
239,247,83518,2,0,P|167:211|91:231,1,160
92,291,84460,5,4,0:0:0:0:
93,230,84775,2,0,L|93:62,1,160
92,4,85717,5,4,0:0:0:0:
93,71,86031,2,0,P|185:163|89:299,1,320
256,192,87602,12,0,89487,0:0:0:0:
324,160,90100,6,0,P|256:124|188:160,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
156,216,91032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,280,91343,2,0,P|256:308|372:280,1,240,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,236,92587,5,2,0:2:0:0:
448,180,92897,2,0,B|448:120|448:120|448:100|448:52|408:28|384:28|384:28|384:28|316:28,2,240,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,95074,5,2,0:2:0:0:
404,288,95384,2,0,P|320:324|240:316,1,160
188,316,96317,2,0,P|88:292|116:180,1,240,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,97561,5,2,0:2:0:0:
220,112,97872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,80,98182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,98804,5,2,0:2:0:0:
304,216,99115,1,2,0:2:0:0:
252,252,99426,1,2,0:2:0:0:
196,284,99737,1,2,0:2:0:0:
144,324,100048,6,0,P|260:360|372:324,2,240
132,260,102224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,195,102535,2,0,P|260:159|372:195,2,240
256,260,105022,5,2,0:0:0:0:
298,139,105644,2,2,P|255:52|213:139,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106887,12,4,109996,0:0:0:0:
384,192,117457,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,128,117923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,124,118856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,119322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,128,121516,1,2,0:2:0:0:
368,256,122138,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,192,122760,2,0,L|180:152,2,80,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,256,123692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,124003,6,0,P|396:232|368:96,1,320,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
316,64,125558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,125869,5,2,0:2:0:0:
256,104,126179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,126490,1,2,0:2:0:0:
152,244,127112,2,0,P|212:304|284:308,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
344,284,128045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,128356,2,0,P|404:160|348:100,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
236,52,129599,6,0,L|152:52,1,80,0|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
132,112,130221,2,0,L|48:112,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
28,172,130843,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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40,104,139858,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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32,232,140480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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92,136,150117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,150739,12,8,153459,2:0:0:0:

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-25T17:18:31+00:00

SPOILER

CDFA wrote:
MAN THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE SOME BADASS SONG WITH DEEP EDGY ANIME AND THEY BE GETTIN LIKE THE KAWAIIEST ANIME LOL
I KNOW BUT IT WAS THE ONLY SHITT [MAD] I FOUND THERE =____=

Overall:
02:21:102 - From this onward, why is this quieter? The feel of the song doesn't change. Right.

Insane:
00:34:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The spacing here is really a lot, even though this part should be kind of softer. Like what is even being followed here? That was a desperate try to increase the Star rating lol. It became 4,90 due to a bug and so I thought that I had to increase it ><
01:15:711 (7,8,9) - The rest of this combo is all spaced normally, and nothing in the music really changes, so why is there a jump here? Done!
01:17:110 (4) - Maybe make this part of the jumps too? It might be awkward to just have it so close to (3) relative to the previous notes Hmm Naaah, a small Anti Jump is always good for tha hand

Good insane diff :3. Just make sure that your softer parts are as fitting as your more intense parts are.

Normal:
The diff is SUPER 1/1y. Like I know the vocals are like that, but try finding more interesting things to do than having a note on every white tick. Players want to play kawaii maps, not be a metronome. I know, but there is not really another way to map a song like this ><
00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - I know patterns are pretty but you already established the dotted quarter note feel of the piece, and having it turn into 1/1 just makes it feel weird Done!

I like it. Sorry it took forever to get to, lol

Thanks for the mod! :3

Smoothie

569 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2013-06-26T15:30:55+00:00

Heya~
From my modding queue.

[Insane]
00:00:788 (2) - Wie wäre es, wenn du den Whistle am Slider-start entfernst? Hört sich besser an meiner meinung.
00:03:742 (4) - Auch hier den whistle weg machen?
00:05:141 (5) - ^
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - Wie wäre es mit einem kurzen Kiai-Flash? :3
01:19:908 (9) - Mh, Setz die Note auf x:352 y:184. Hat einen besseren Flow.
01:31:654 (7) - Strg+G und platziere diese Note 01:31:498 (6) auf den Slider-start. Hat 'nen besseren Flow~
02:04:936 (6) - Ugh... Strg+G diesen Slider bitte. So wie er jetzt ist, killt er den Flow. :c

[Sakuya's Hard]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - A Kiai-Flash here would be nice~
01:10:892 - How about adding a note here?
01:26:267 (3,4,5,6) - That plays a bit odd imo. How about something like that?

[Normal]
00:04:830 (4,1,2) - Die Bankets sind ein wenig "uneben"

SPOILER

00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Wie schon oben erwähnt. Ein Kiai-Flash hier?
00:17:887 (4) - Ich denke du hast die Claps bei diesem Slider vergessen.
00:19:130 (1) - NC
00:42:446 (1) - x:204 y:74?
00:43:379 (2) - Wenn du den eben erwähnten Slider beweget hast, bewege diese Note nach x:256 y:144
00:43:690 (3) - x:256 y:232
00:44:001 (1) - x:308 y:304
01:31:343 (4) - Den Clap an dem Slider-ende würde ich entfernen. Hört sich besser ohne ihn an. xP

[bomber's Easy]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Kiai-Flash? xP
00:39:027 (2) - Willst du den Whistle nicht lieber an den Slider-end setzen? Hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an.
00:49:597 (2) - Ich denke ein Finish würde hier besser passen.
01:02:343 (1) - Warum benutzt du für den Slider-end nicht den Custom hit-clap?
01:40:048 (1) - Wie wäre es mit einem Finish am Slider-start?
02:30:739 (1) - Der spinner sollte hier enden: 02:33:382

Awesome map
Good luck!

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-26T16:18:02+00:00

SPOILER

[quote="Smoothie":05195]Heya~
From my modding queue.

[Insane]
00:00:788 (2) - Wie wäre es, wenn du den Whistle am Slider-start entfernst? Hört sich besser an meiner meinung.[b:05195] Done![/b:05195]
00:03:742 (4) - Auch hier den whistle weg machen? [b:05195]Hmm neeee [/b:05195]
00:05:141 (5) - ^ [b:05195]Nah[/b:05195]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - Wie wäre es mit einem kurzen Kiai-Flash? :3 [b:05195]Würde ich gerne machen, darf ich aber nicht >_<[/b:05195]
01:19:908 (9) - Mh, Setz die Note auf x:352 y:184. Hat einen besseren Flow.[b:05195] Gute Idee, aber ich mag diesen Dreieck flow![/b:05195]
01:31:654 (7) - Strg+G und platziere diese Note 01:31:498 (6) auf den Slider-start. Hat 'nen besseren Flow~ [b:05195]Hab ne alternative Lösung gefunden ~[/b:05195]
02:04:936 (6) - Ugh... Strg+G diesen Slider bitte. So wie er jetzt ist, killt er den Flow. :c[b:05195] Done![/b:05195]

[Normal]
00:04:830 (4,1,2) - Die Bankets sind ein wenig "uneben" [b:05195]Done![/b:05195]
[spoilerbox:05195][img:05195]http://puu.sh/3oMua.jpg[/img:05195][/spoilerbox:05195]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Wie schon oben erwähnt. Ein Kiai-Flash hier? [b:05195]Würde ich gerne machen, darf ich aber nicht >_<[/b:05195]
00:17:887 (4) - Ich denke du hast die Claps bei diesem Slider vergessen.[b:05195]Done![/b:05195]
00:19:130 (1) - NC [b:05195]Done![/b:05195]
00:42:446 (1) - x:204 y:74?[b:05195] Die sind extra versetzt :3[/b:05195]
00:43:379 (2) - Wenn du den eben erwähnten Slider beweget hast, bewege diese Note nach x:256 y:144[b:05195] Die sind extra versetzt :3[/b:05195]
00:43:690 (3) - x:256 y:232 [b:05195]Nah[/b:05195]
00:44:001 (1) - x:308 y:304 [b:05195]Nah[/b:05195]
01:31:343 (4) - Den Clap an dem Slider-ende würde ich entfernen. Hört sich besser ohne ihn an. xP[b:05195] Done![/b:05195]

Awesome map
Good luck![/quote:05195]

Thanks for the mod, Smoothie!

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-06-28T09:57:44+00:00

~General~

The files "sb\a1.png sb\a2.png sb\a3.png sb\a4.png sb\a5.png sb\a6.png sb\a7.png sb\a8.png sb\b1.png sb\b2.png sb\b3.png sb\b4.png sb\b5.png sb\b6.png" seems to be unused, remove them.

~bomber's Easy~

Reduce the AR and OD by 1 tick, they're too high for an Easy difficulty right now.

01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better.
02:18:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row, that's no good for beginners, you know that.
02:23:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better.

~Normal~

Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

01:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent if you check carefully here.
01:49:374 (3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.
02:30:739 (1) - This spinner should end on the next blue tick, to be consistent with the "wroah!".

~Sakuya's Hard~

02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.

~Insane~

01:26:188 (1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern doesn't seem to follow much with the lyrics, try remaking it.
02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.

Well done :3

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-28T21:58:57+00:00

SPOILER

Andrea wrote:
~General~
[list:06011][*:06011][b:06011]The files "sb\a1.png sb\a2.png sb\a3.png sb\a4.png sb\a5.png sb\a6.png sb\a7.png sb\a8.png sb\b1.png sb\b2.png sb\b3.png sb\b4.png sb\b5.png sb\b6.png" seems to be unused, remove them.[/b:06011][/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011][b:06011] Done![/b:06011]

[b:06011]~Normal~[/b:06011]
[list:06011][*:06011][b:06011]Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.[/b:06011][/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011][b:06011] Done![/b:06011]
[list:06011][*:06011]01:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent if you check carefully here.[b:06011] Done![/b:06011][/*:m:06011]
[*:06011]01:49:374 (3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.[b:06011] Done![/b:06011][/*:m:06011]
[*:06011]02:30:739 (1) - This spinner should end on the next blue tick, to be consistent with the "wroah!".[/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011]

[b:06011]~Insane~[/b:06011]
[list:06011][*:06011]01:26:188 (1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern doesn't seem to follow much with the lyrics, try remaking it. [b:06011]Done![/b:06011][/*:m:06011]
[*:06011]02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.[/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011][b:06011]Done![/b:06011]

Well done :3

Thank you very much!

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-06-30T23:10:15+00:00

Smoothie wrote:
[bomber's Easy]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Kiai-Flash? xP Etepetete Hayas Entscheidung
00:39:027 (2) - Willst du den Whistle nicht lieber an den Slider-end setzen? Hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an. Behalte Sliderende und setze auf Ende nochmal whistle
00:49:597 (2) - Ich denke ein Finish würde hier besser passen. wieder beides ... ohne clap fehlt was
01:02:343 (1) - Warum benutzt du für den Slider-end nicht den Custom hit-clap? Weil der total nicht passt mMn. Hab den jetzt komplett entfernt und n normalen clap draufgesetzt .. sofern wir jetzt vom selben reden .___.
01:40:048 (1) - Wie wäre es mit einem Finish am Slider-start? merke keinen Unterschied also wayne ... hinzugefügt
02:30:739 (1) - Der spinner sollte hier enden: 02:33:382 würde keinen Unterschied machen, endet auf der Stimme also meh

Awesome map
Good luck!

Andrea wrote:
~bomber's Easy~
Reduce the AR and OD by 1 tick, they're too high for an Easy difficulty right now. logically the AR and OD should not be higher than Normal diff, because anything easier than a "Normal" Diff is already something you can call "Easy". I also think that the AR is fine, because you can see enough of the following Hitcircle without being something like "Easy" mod where you see too much. At this moment you have 1:200 seconds to see the next hitcircle (when I began playing osu! I had a really hard time, because of low AR, that doesn't mean I recommend AR8 or more but AR4 seems fine to me . About the OD ... maybe
01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better. I actually disagree but I changed it anyway
02:18:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row, that's no good for beginners, you know that. Well ... I got forced to increase the Star rating drasticly ... that was one result out of it... tried something new. The second (1,2,3,4) you mentions stays though. The first got changed, also changed a in previous mod mentioned problem ... but probaly it is still not perfect >w<
02:23:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better. I don't really understand why it is hard to read... only the part between the combos(4,1) & (5,1) are a bit complicated I changed (4,1) to one slider.I stay with (5,1) because (1) is a slider and those are pretty lenient when it comes to clicking.

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LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-07-02T03:36:43+00:00

Smoothie wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - A Kiai-Flash here would be nice~ hmm i'll let the SV change handle that for now
01:10:892 - How about adding a note here? Fixed, made a slider
01:26:267 (3,4,5,6) - That plays a bit odd imo. How about something like that? aw I had it like that before xD but i felt the approach circles for 3,4 were a bit...cramped? idk i might change back anyway

Andrea wrote:
~Sakuya's Hard~
02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.

Thanks

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220,108,147164,2,0,B|176:100|140:116|100:132|60:124,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,52,147630,2,0,P|144:100|116:200,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,148252,6,0,L|256:184,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,148718,2,0,L|356:280,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,149185,2,0,L|248:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,44,149496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,100,149651,2,0,P|108:136|112:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,260,149962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,150117,2,0,B|264:296|300:272|340:244|384:252,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,150817,12,0,153459,0:0:0:0:

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