1. Easy (2.77 stars, 94 notes)
2. Flask's Normal (4.28 stars, 141 notes)
3. Hard (4.96 stars, 225 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 293 notes)

Fumika wrote:

อิอิ xD

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

From my Queue~

[Easy]
00:27:576 (1) - Work out the curve of this slider, it wont cause any distance errors after or backwards. I'm not sure about this problem, but I will remove repeating slider. Then add a slider 1/2 on 00:28:667 instead.
00:52:303 (3) - You could move this a bit right so it could make a more beautiful shape with the previous circle and slider. Moved
00:55:212 (1) - This spinner is not nice for a newbie when playing. It's very "fast" since it appears quickly after a small break and ends as well very fast. Consider replacing it with something easier. Okay, but I will increase the period of spinner instead.
01:21:758 (2) - You can work this slider out a bit. It's fine for me.

[Hard]
That's very nice made
01:14:849 (8) - I guess you should NC here. Not very sure but it sounds like the combo changes between the lyrics. I want to follow the rhythm of song more than.

[Insane]
00:45:758 (3) - I guess it should go one grid to left. It was symmetrical. So I no moved.
00:57:576 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream made me feel uncomfortable. I highly suggest to make a bit more nice shaped stream instead. I'm not sure about shape, and I have no idea. So I may change later if I or some modder have idea.


Overall the beatmap is very good. I really like this song and I wish you good luck! I'll note this map and maybe remod later. I really like it

- t e n n y a - wrote:

I'll do M4M at your Queue Nich-san

General

1. add: JC Staff on tags? Only suggestion tough ;w; Okay. This is studio name.
2. I suggest to add soft-slidertick with clap sound to make hit sound balance at Easy diff owo Okay, added .

Easy

1. 01:03:940 (1)- : rather than Whistle, I hear cymbals here so change it into finish? no, I think whistle hitsound is suitable more than.

Hard

1. 00:00:667 (1,2)- : imo, better to add clap on circle 1 and remove the whistle and add clap on 2's slider tail and remove the drum set at there owo Change only slider tail of (2), but I no change on (1) because it is too loud, and I was shocked when I heard.
2. 01:21:030 (2)- : prefer to change this into clap and sampleset into auto owo Good for me. Changed

Insane

1. 00:00:667 (1,4)- : same suggestion as Hard Here as well. Change only slider tail of (2).
2. 01:16:212 (3)- : add clap? no, I felt weird when I heard.

that's all I can find >< hope it helpful xD~
good luck

Entreal wrote:

Hello There! M4M! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ Hello! :3


Easy

00:55:212 - My suggestion: Instead of a long spinner, why don't you make a slider from 00:55:212 to 00:56:485 and have a spinner at 00:56:667 to 00:58:121? no, spinner is too short for easy diff.
01:06:485 - I believe this slider can be something like this. Fixed

01:07:576 - I feel as if this slider doesn't belong in the song. Explanation? Okay. Fixed
01:10:121 (1) - Try replacing that circle with a slider. Start the slider 01:10:121. I think it's fine. So I no change.
01:15:940 - ^ ^

Hard

00:18:485 - NC. I want to follow the rhythm.
00:38:303 - I believe that this circle isn't needed. I prefer to add circle more than.
01:05:758 - Be careful about overlapping from such a far distance from the last circle, it may confuse players. Try moving it somewhere else. Fixed
01:15:576 - ^ but this was fine for me. So I no change.
01:22:121 - ^ ^

Insane

00:31:030 - I don't think this circle isn't needed. umm... I want to follow the rhythm/vocal.
00:34:687 - ^ ^
00:56:485 - I don't think its fine to have a circle right after a spinner. I want to just for fun to play. So I no change

I hope this can be useful! Star for Sakurasou! ◤(¬‿¬)◥ Thanks ><

neonat wrote:

Some suggestions

Hard

00:04:849 (7) - maybe try this rhythm? It's good, but I want to make it correspond with 00:05:602 (3).

SPOILER

00:21:576 - maybe add a note? Was tempted to press again here in test It's fine if I add it, but I prefer to no add it more than. okay, added

Insane

00:23:758 - add a note I think it isn't necessary to add it.
00:31:394 (3) - add whistle I'm not sure, but I prefer to no add it more than.
00:33:030 (8) - doesn't realy suit the music and vocals, shorten it to end at 00:33:212 fixed
00:34:303 (3) - add whistle This, too. I prefer to no add it more than.
00:42:849 - bass strums at this point, sure you don't want a note or making 00:42:667 (5) - a slider? okay, fixed


Good luck

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

01:15:966 - It feels like you're missing a note here. I want to follow the vocal, but have many people mention that to me. So I will change (4) into a circle, remove (1). Then add a slider on 01:15:602 ~ 01:16:329 instead.

~Hard~

OD +1 would be better. Okay. fixed

01:08:875 (1) - I don't think you need this new combo here. umm... I will remove NC.

Great map, can't find much.

Momochikun wrote:

Hi.. m4m here xD Hi ^^
I'll try some suggestions

[Easy]
00:02:875 (4) - Finish? no, finish is too loud for me and this rhythm. So whistle was fine for here.
00:11:238 - Add note here maybe ? it'll fix the rhytm no, I make to follow the vocal.
01:23:602 (4) - Whistle at the head of slider Added

[Hard]
00:45:784 (3) - Whistle ? okay, added
00:57:420 (1) - Add note here ? i think is a jump before Why? I had a note here xD

Can't find anymore. this map is good~ go ranked

BeatofIke wrote:

Hi Nichiyouki!

I will try to mod this map tomorrow! :3

1700th Post

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

1. seems fine

Easy

1. seems fine

Hard

1. I know that you just want to coordinate with the vocal ,but in fact there are too many blanks. when i'm playing this only make feel choppy.If still want to add blanks ,plz put continuous notes for at least one section(>4 beats) first. Of course this is only my feeling For me, I think it's not a problem any more. Similarly, it may cause easier to play imo.
   00:12:511 add circle
   00:15:238 ^
   00:20:511 ^
   00:26:875 ^
   00:32:511 ^
   In kiai seems ok
2. placings are very nice so no problem

Insane

1. 00:04:329 (1,2,3) - how about making them into a rotating pattern ? e.g. ② is ① rotated by -120° clockwise , ③ is by -240°. this may seems better okay, but I may move those notes are other pattern.
2. 00:15:966 (1) - try make a perfect blanket fixed
3. 00:30:511 from here to 00:41:784 always double-clap rhythm sounds kind of boring. try add some continuous hitsound at middle of the period ? such as around 00:35:966 and 00:38:147 Added whistle on some notes
4. 00:32:875 (7) - why whistle ? the single whistle make me confused and feel meaningless because I add to follow the vocal.
5. 00:35:784 (7) - ^ ^
6. 00:38:693 (9) - ^ umm... I will put that on slider repeat instead.
7. 00:42:693 (5) - try place parallel with ④ ah I just missed a little xD
8. 00:46:329 (5,1,2,3,4) - regular pentagon ? okay, fixed
9. 01:14:875 (3) - try curved slider ? I think it was fine.

Nice song~ Good luck~

1. I'm not sure if Japanese text is allowed in tags! It will be a good idea to ask a BAT if it's okay!

1. 00:00:693 (1) - (optional) Try adding a soft-clap at the end of this slider. This way, the soft-clap will emphasize the drum playing here.
2. 00:10:147 (1) - I think you should remove this soft-whistle at the end of this slider, because you are using soft-whistles to emphasize the piano chords. Adding an extra soft-whistle here make it a bit inconsistent.
3. 00:16:693 (2) - (optional) Not really a necessary fix, but I think adding an extra soft-whistle at the end of this slider would sound more full.
4. 00:29:784 (3) - You should add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider instead since the piano is still playing here. As for the end of this slider, you should replace the soft-whistle with a soft-clap to emphasize the percussion.
5. 00:43:602 (2) - I would add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider to emphasize the piano-chord. It's also consistent with 00:47:965 (1).
6. 00:45:056 (1) - Same suggestion as above: " I would add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider to emphasize the piano-chord." Also, it's consistent with 00:49:056 (2).
7. 00:58:875 (1) - I would add a soft-whistle at on the head of this slider to be consistent with 01:10:511 (1).
8. 01:01:056 (1) - Try adding a soft-whistle at the end of this slider as well. It will be consistent with 01:14:147 (3).
9. 01:11:238 (3) - I think adding a soft-whistle at the head of this slider would sound more full with the music. It would emphasize the soft chords.
10. 01:12:693 (1) - To be consistent with 01:01:056 (1), I would add a soft-whistle at the end of this slider.

1. (optional) I would increase HP Drain +1 for a better difficulty spread. Hard difficulty has 6, but Normal only has 3.
2. 00:05:784 (3) - I would add a soft-finish at the end of this slider instead to emphasize the tone of the piano chord.
3. 00:39:238 (1) - The slider shape can be improved! Also, the slider is almost off screen. I would try to move it down somehow.
4. 00:57:420 (1) - Try adding a soft-finish at the head of this slider. Notice the same instrument playing as the one at 00:00:693 (1).

BeatofIke wrote:

Hi Nichiyouki! Time to mod! :3

[General]

1. I'm not sure if Japanese text is allowed in tags! It will be a good idea to ask a BAT if it's okay! umm... I see some mapper use Japanese text on tags. I think it's interest, but I may remove it if MAT or BAT aren't allowed.

[Easy]

1. 01:11:238 (3) - I think adding a soft-whistle at the head of this slider would sound more full with the music. It would emphasize the soft chords. I think it's weird sound for me.

But apart from things I mentioned, I fixed all.

EDIT: Your Hard and Insane difficulties are good! Nothing to suggest D:

That's pretty much it! This is your best map yet! Good Luck with your map! :3

Zazalng wrote:

Hello Sir I from Modding Queues Hello


[General]
Nothing to see!

[Easy]
00:04:329 Move to x76 y216 Why? I think it was fine ><
00:15:966 Try to make it Curve This is my style lol
00:26:875 Make Slider End At 00:27:238 ? no, I prefer use 2 circles more than a slider on here.

[Hard]
00:02:875 Try to Make it Curve ? no, this is my style lol
00:18:511 NC ? I would like follow the rhythm on here, So no add.
00:46:511 Move Slider (Start Point) to x:208 y:92 I will move to right and down 1 grid instead.
00:47:056 Move Slider (Start Point) to x:276 y:148 I think you would like slider begin to stack with 00:45:056 (1). So move it.

[Insane]
Nothing to See!

Sorry i very late mod

~อยากม็อดแมพต้นบ้าง เลยไปขอมาซักเพลง~

1. 00:53:784 (1,2) - เปลี่ยนเป็นแบบนี้จะโอเคกว่า ใส่ clap ได้ด้วย
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:04:693 - add soft-slidertick3 please
2. 00:22:329 (3) - add clap tail
3. 00:57:965 (2) - add clap

1. 00:33:056 (7) - add whistle tail like Insane
2. 00:36:147 (9) - add whistle
3. 00:38:875 (8) - add whistle tail

1. 00:01:784 (2) - add clap tail
2. 00:03:238 (3) - ^
3. 00:38:147 (8) - remove whistle tail
4. 00:38:693 (9) - add whistle head & tail & remove whistle at reverse
5. 00:46:147 (4) - add whistle
6. 00:47:238 (5) - swap whistle tail to head
7. 00:47:965 (1) - add whistle head
8. 00:49:056 (4) - ^
9. 00:50:511 (5) - add whistle
10. 00:51:420 (2) - ^
11. 00:51:602 (3) - remove whistle head
12. 00:51:965 (4) - add whistle head
13. 00:53:420 (4) - ^
14. 01:01:693 (5) - add clap
15. 01:13:329 (4) - ^
16. 01:16:238 (3) - ^
17. 01:26:329 (3) - remove clap head

1. nothing!

1. 00:07:238 - use lower volume ? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
2. 00:15:966 (1) - make curve slider ? same as (00:18:147 (3) - ). you can make the natural flow.
3. 00:21:784 (3) - add new combo ?
4. 00:32:693 (3,4) - try to make one slider ? Fix this one, so it prevents the player is going to misread.
5. 00:41:784 (3) - (nazi) Please check spacing here. Dont forget to check (00:43:602 (2) - )
6. 00:45:784 (2) - add whistle to the head of the slider.
7. 00:46:511 (3) - ^ the repeat
8. 00:49:784 (3) - ^ the tail
9. 00:59:602 (2) - ^ the head
10. 01:07:238 (1) - ^ the repeat. please check to put sound with constant rhythm :3
11. 01:10:147 - add note
12. 01:10:511 (1,2,3,4,1) - it is better to use DS1.0x >< Perhaps, is the failure.

1. 00:07:966 (2,3,4) - (nazi) try this pattern ?
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673439
2. 00:22:329 (3) - add clap to the tail of the slider.
3. 00:25:056 (2) - this blanket can be done better
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673477
4. 00:38:875 (5,2) - stack on tail of the slider~ looks better imo.
5. 00:44:147 (6) - add whistle to the repeat of the slider.
6. 00:51:784 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction for the natural flow.
7. 00:57:965 (2) - add clap
8. 01:01:056 (2) - try to rotate by -30°
9. 01:21:238 (1) - add finish at the head instead of whistle ? it needs strong sound.
   i want to put more whistle sound at kiai time

1. 00:11:420 - add note ? I want to put sound here.
2. 01:01:784 (4) - I recommended to make curve slider so you can make the natural flow.
3. 01:07:420 (2,3) - it is better to follow the vocal here ! like this : http://puu.sh/2ogQv
4. 01:09:420 - add clap (Soft Custom:1 sound)
5. 01:26:966 - same as here.
   good enough *w*

1. 00:05:056 (3) - add whistle to the head of the slider.
2. 00:17:238 (4,5,6) - it is better to use DS1.50x same as here.00:11:420 (4,5,6,7) -
3. 00:17:784 (5,4,1) - please check those notes >.<
4. 01:03:965 (4) - I want to put more spacing here , Because I feel it is strong sound.
5. 01:13:056 (2) - try this ? You could improve this flow a bit.
   like this:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673800
6. 01:26:965 (5) - add clap same as Hard diff :3

alacat wrote:

Hi Nich :3 Hi alacat \:D/

[General]

1. nothing!

[Easy]

1. 00:07:238 - use lower volume ? since the melody is calmer than previous part. no, I think it isn't too loud for me.
2. 00:15:966 (1) - make curve slider ? same as (00:18:147 (3) - ). you can make the natural flow. no, this is my style
3. 00:21:784 (3) - add new combo ? Really xD This combo is very long. So I will add NC on that.
4. 00:32:693 (3,4) - try to make one slider ? Fix this one, so it prevents the player is going to misread. okay, fixed
5. 00:41:784 (3) - (nazi) Please check spacing here. Dont forget to check (00:43:602 (2) - ) just 1.03x isn't problem to play it xD but I will fix it.
6. 00:45:784 (2) - add whistle to the head of the slider. added
7. 00:46:511 (3) - ^ the repeat added
8. 00:49:784 (3) - ^ the tail added
9. 00:59:602 (2) - ^ the head added
10. 01:07:238 (1) - ^ the repeat. please check to put sound with constant rhythm :3 added
11. 01:10:147 - add note I know that hear the rhythm here, but I think it is no problem imo.
12. 01:10:511 (1,2,3,4,1) - it is better to use DS1.0x >< Perhaps, is the failure. I mistake xD So fix it.

[Hard]

1. 00:11:420 - add note ? I want to put sound here. no, but if I want add note here, I think that should add it on 00:12:147, too.
2. 01:01:784 (4) - I recommended to make curve slider so you can make the natural flow. fixed
3. 01:07:420 (2,3) - it is better to follow the vocal here ! like this : http://puu.sh/2ogQv fixed
4. 01:09:420 - add clap (Soft Custom:1 sound) Okay, but I will reduce volume into 60%, too. Because it is too loud when I add it.
5. 01:26:966 - same as here. I think it was fine for hitsound on this note.
   good enough *w*

[Insane]

1. 00:05:056 (3) - add whistle to the head of the slider. added
2. 00:17:238 (4,5,6) - it is better to use DS1.50x same as here.00:11:420 (4,5,6,7) - I will move only (5)
3. 00:17:784 (5,4,1) - please check those notes >.< checked after above
4. 01:03:965 (4) - I want to put more spacing here , Because I feel it is strong sound. fixed
5. 01:13:056 (2) - try this ? You could improve this flow a bit.
   like this:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673800 okay imo.
6. 01:26:965 (5) - add clap same as Hard diff :3 I think it was fine for hitsound on this note.

nice nice nice nichi

good luck !!

Oyatsu wrote:

hi, M4M Nich-nee ^^

~Easy~
00:01:420 (2) - 1 gird left to balance I think that it seems fine.
00:18:147 (3) - 1 gird left-down to ^ I will move only left.
00:25:784 (2,3) - This should repeat with together. Circle before and slider after Fixed
00:32:693 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/3mnoJ.jpg I want to make to follow the rhythm.
01:06:511 (4,1,2) - distance Fixed

~Hard~
00:06:511 (4) - NC It's not problem to read. So no change.
00:25:602 (3) - Curved grid right will better Fixed a bit
00:46:511 (1) - More curved Fixed
01:09:420 (7) - NC It isn't necessary to add it.

Isane is really nice diff! I can't find anything
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Really Nice map! Good luck with rank!! Go! Go!