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Hatsune Miku - Momiji

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Shinxyn
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May-02-09 at 1:18:42 PM

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Momiji
BPM: 107
Filesize: 5738kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.73 stars, 383 notes)
  2. Normal (3.65 stars, 267 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Momiji
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Momiji for James' Hatsune Miku Project
Momiji is an Autumn leaf, so let me escape with Spring-y theme plz~~
Thanks James for finding timing for me (Sorry for not mentioning before!)

-Did whymeman's suggestions (for Normal, and Hard is meant to be like that)
-Did James' commands and reduced hitsounds, and nudged some of Nexy's stuff, but some were meant to be like that and not-grid snapped on purpose.
-Hitsounds again
-Added some removed hitsounds.. and 00:48:63 is a "Ru" in Hiragana (Japanese) ... though it looks like a 3.. should I remove it?
-Fixed more suggestions
-Yay mod star (fixed offset a bit)
-Fixed offset again, and removed Kiai times =3=
-rawr! removed all claps and replaced them with whistles and removed some other whistles and stuff...
-more timing fixes, thanks awp
->hitsounds< and rechecked 02:12:74's section, should be well now. <AGAIN!?! oi... how about this time?>
-^ just removed the section and added a break, then added a few extra notes here and there ^
Last edited by Shinxyn , edited 18 times in total.
whymeman
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whymeman
Lets see how I can help for this map... :)

Also, some of the errors posted are only suggestions, not directions.

[Normal] (Done... )

00:22:83 (5) - Looks a bit oddly placed. Maybe lining this up with the stacked notes before it would look better?
00:23:39 (1) - This could line up with (5).
00:30:40 (1,2) - Not sure if it looks okay stacking this over the slider....
00:35:17 (1) - Beautiful...... :cry: :)
00:46:11 (1,2) - The lineup looks a bit off and unevenly spaced.
00:56:70 (3) - Slider a bit too short (mis-timed a bit early). Needs to end 1/4 later.
01:08:80 (3,1) - These two are not lined up with each other. Try to get (1) lined up.
01:39:53 (2) - This slider is slanted and making it stand out from the other hit notes.
02:08:22 (4) - This could line up with (3).

Not bad. Clean and no major errors. :)

[Hard] (Done... )

**Not sure about using the claps at the start. It sounds like it kinda stands out to me...
00:21:43 (2,3,4,5,6) - A jump..... hmm..... (not sure if this is okay or not, but if it is to make the map harder, then I guess its okay).
00:30:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:22:38 (1,2,3) - maybe its just me, but it feels like these was just randomly placed...
02:46:84 (2) - This could line up better inbetween the two notes (1 and 3).

Not bad and no major errors as far as I see. I like the art of the spinner and the song is really smooth and claming. Star for effort.
James
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James
Wheres my credit for the timing? :evil:

Anyways, this map is alot better than the previous one.

I'm surprised I got ~20 100s while playing this for the first time, so I guess BPM is OK.

I'll just point out some obvious parts from now.

1. Hitsounds, finish spam again. grrr.

Heres my suggestion about your hitsounds, its up to you how you do it. You might need to redo the whole hitsound thing.
-Just use soft clap and whistle sounds. dont use finish frequently, thats why its called "finish".
-Don't spam clap and whistle though, spam claps in a appropriate part (the way how you spam claps sounds bad as finish spam)
-Don't use max volume, its noisy XD Use something like 7-8.
-Use clap with low volume, and finish with a little less volume than usual.
-Finish sounds best when placed at the white tick most of the time.
-Just waste your time making it sound good in Hard, I don't really care about normal. Haha.

2. Slider overlap.
-00:08:25 (5,6)

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Suggestion:

Hard:
Why didn't you start the song at the start? you could just use an audio-lead in.. just wondering.
02:47:68 (1,2,3,4) - imo it doesn't fit with the song , you could just do something shorter.

Normal:
00:56:70 (3) - extend 1/4 beat?
02:27:50 (4) - sounds awkward...

Thats all for now.
mosluv
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Joined December 2008
mosluv
Found some tiny spacing issues. Nothing serious.

Corrections/Suggestions

Normal:
Can't find anything wrong here. :)

Hard:
00:08:256-00:08:817(5,6) - Hidden slider. Not sure if everyone can see it.
00:24:518(3) - Nudge down or left.
00:34:891(6) - Nudge up.
00:38:555(3) - Nudge left.
01:10:031(6) - Nudge up.
01:11:292(1) - ^
01:15:826(5) - Nudge right
01:16:336(1) - Nudge left
01:58:910(4) - Nudge down.
02:32:268(1) - More to the right.
02:48:249(2) - Nudge down.

Love the spinner :!: +Star
James
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James
At the previous hitsounds, it sounds too noisy.
Now some parts are too empty and some parts are noisy.

thats all for now
Starrodkirby86
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Most of this purely suggestions, as this song has so very little errors...Man, a lot of the beatmaps I find have something like that...Maybe not...
[Normal]:
00:02:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Way to scare off newbies in this song. xD
00:32:92 (2) - Clap here?
00:34:61 (4) - Replace the clap here with a whistle perhaps.
00:48:63 (1) - This is a beautiful (3). Care to explain why it's here though? XD

[Hard]:
00:19:47 (7) - Clappity clap clap~
00:20:03 (1) - Whistle~
00:20:59 (1) - Whistle + Clap the Slider endpoint only.
00:22:83 (6) - Clap perhaps?
00:23:95 (2) - A clap for the beginning circle on this slider, por favor. :3
00:26:76 (2) - And a clap here.
00:28:16 (2) - Slider's endpoint gets a clap of doom.
00:29:56 (5) - Whistle + Clap~
00:32:92 (2) - El clap goes here.
01:23:90 (4) - New combo?
02:11:99 (5) - Entirely optional, but New combo?

If you can, make an easier difficulty--Nah, you don't need to. :P

This gets a Star. It's a very lovely beatmap; soothing and relaxing. I would love to play this multiple times.
blissfulyoshi
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zerostarry
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Good work. Offset should be 424 imo. Resnap.

[Normal]
- Disable Countdown
- Note placement could be a bit neater
- Overall difficulty -1?

[Hard]
- I have no problems, nice job.
m980
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m980
Wow big improvement since the last map I saw, (Which sucked)
Seibei4211
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Seibei4211
Um, -8ms to all sections.

The kiai time is like... I don't think there was an epic enough part that called for it. You don't need to put kiai time in the map. It felt like it was just thrown in here.

Edit: Fixed and rebub'd.
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
Hi. I just passed normal on this so I think that says something hopefully.

Gonna star for a couple of reasons.

1. Love the spinner art.
2. Your doing the map for James.
3. Best map you have made so far.

Sadly I'm to lazy and lacking the motivation to actually mod the map but enjoy a Shiny DxS star. =P
James
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James
should i check the sounds again....?
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn

James wrote:

should i check the sounds again....?
Its your project, so please do, I'll feel at unease if this gets ranked without your priority star...
James
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James
okay... youre using claps the wrong way. the way you place claps are wrong. And whats with clap every beat? >:[

heck, i can make this sound good using whistle and finish only. << semi-hint

hard:
00:35:18 (1) - snap it to timeline?
01:07:51 (1) - looks/sounds better when starts at 01:07:76

imo 5-stream circles fit with the song. not telling where to put them properly though :P

dont blame me if this gets ranked and then another bat will say timing is wrong.blame all bats who modded this.
double check the timing please.

normal: dont care hahahah
awp
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awp
Unfortunately the timing's still a fair bit off. It's interesting in this case, however, because some spots are early and some are late. I found only one of the actual BPMs to be wrong so most of it's a quick fix.

BPM: 107.00 Offset: 410
BPM: 119.00 Offset: 36515
BPM: 119.015 Offset: 101017
BPM: 107.00 Offset: 133481

One of the existing bpms (118.95 I think) turned out to be unnecessary.

To compensate for the popped bubble, STAR AND AWAAAAAAY.

EDIT: Oh cool I just read James' post cool he agrees with me.

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Metroid
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Metroid
Normal
02:26:93 (3) - just move it up slightly so it overlaps 4 more and overlaps 2 a little less.

Hard
01:26:43 (4,5,6) - move this slightly to the right to perch it perfect across the x axis of the grid.
(yeah it makes it out of spacing but due to how you mapped it and the song, it would be cool :3)
01:27:94 (1,2) - perch this across the y axis of the grid.
01:28:95 (2) - move this to be a flip of 1.
01:29:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - move this a little down so the horizontal sliders are on the x axis.
02:10:97 (3,4) - move this to the left a little to be a horizontal flip of 1,2 beforehand
02:27:49 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this all centered around the x and y axis to be perfect flips to each other.
(best is to move the whole mass of combos of this suggestion down a little onto the x axis.)
Starred.
Imaginary bubble is what's going through my mind at the moment..

Anything blue is a suggestion to make the map look nice.
vytalibus
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vytalibus
Rebubbled. I hope the timing's okay now.
James
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James
it sounds alot better than the previous one.
you could make it better IMO. less whistlespam and more consistensy of placing whistles.
but i guess its fine as it is.

last request, i dont mind if the map gets ranked before reading this..
all finish sounds: lower the volume by 3-4 ticks.

/me stars
mtmcl
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Alace
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Alace
It`s good now
Shooting~ star
Jarby
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Jarby
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Paulo8624
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Paulo8624
great map. I like it!

the skin is really well done, I loved the spinner.

I'll give you my star~
RemmyX25
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Normal:
02:12:61 (7,8) - this bit just doesn't sound right. Mark mentioned it as well, but I'm not sure what to do with it...

Hard:
02:12:61 (3,4) - Again, it sounds awkward. I guess I'll pop until we can figure out what to do with them.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
A break works perfectly between 02:11:23 (4) and the spinner imo. Just a suggestion. ;)
Shinxyn
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Mafiamaster wrote:

A break works perfectly between 02:11:23 (4) and the spinner imo. Just a suggestion. ;)
Should I just take the suggestion and escape even mapping the part that's preventing this from getting ranked.... hmmm

Update-
ahhh, whatever, did it anyways, can't think of any way to fix that section...
kingcobra52
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Hook, Line, and Bubble!

Btw, The sakura petals are awesome! :)
Larto
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Larto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Derekku
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Derekku
I never got to comment on this map. You did a beautiful job with it! The spinner is SO pretty~ And the hiragana ru slider <3<3<3
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