Snyder & Ray - Together In Love (Nightcore Mix) · forum

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-02-01T04:03:40+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 février 2013 at 22:43:53

Artist: Snyder & Ray
Title: Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: Lally -Sekai- Sekai-nyan XinCrin Edit Remix Trance Dance
BPM: 170,4
Filesize: 4373kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4,9 stars, 279 notes)
Lally's Easy (1,89 stars, 108 notes)
Sekai's Normal (3,86 stars, 179 notes)
Xin's Hard (4,86 stars, 237 notes)

Download: Snyder & Ray - Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th ranked map: Nightcore map~!
February 5th 2013: Rest In Peace, my dear dog♥
February 17th 2013: Happy birthday to me~!
MP3 made by Andrea

Easy by Lally
Normal by Sekai-nyan
Hard by XinCrin
Insane by Gabe

Last edited by Aurele 2013-02-21T20:07:13+00:00, edited 37 times in total.

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2013-02-01T04:06:03+00:00

Hey Gabe!
Can I make the diff. Hard ?

Reupload the map, error with audio

I LOVE THIS SONG

Last edited by XinCrin 2013-02-01T04:09:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-02-01T04:09:08+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hey Gabe!
Can I make the diff. Hard ?

I LOVE THIS SONG

Sure!

I LOVE THIS SONG TOO! <3

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-02-01T04:11:27+00:00

:3

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-02-01T04:15:48+00:00

Xin: Aw.. I can't right now. I will reupload in 6hours! (When I will woke up)

Edit: Done!
It doesn't work.. D:!

Musty

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Musty 2013-02-01T20:58:11+00:00

You actually have to put "TogetherInLove.mp3" ( as read in the .osu ) in the song folder i guess.. or maybe, change the mp3 name and also .osu mp3 line like this :

AudioFilename: <newname>.mp3

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-02-01T21:28:47+00:00

Oh god, thank you Musty! It's working c:

\:D/

Well actually, I knew about this but, the thing I had to do is renaming the mp3 to what it was before..

Lally

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Lally 2013-02-01T21:33:04+00:00

easy mine <3

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-02-01T21:34:41+00:00

Normal MINE <3

EDIT: Done here's the diff + slidertick: http://puu.sh/1W2jp

:3

Konei

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Konei 2013-02-02T08:37:12+00:00

Gabe is a baka.

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Aurele 2013-02-02T15:27:27+00:00

Konei wrote:
Gabe is a baka.

Why and how

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-02-02T18:37:25+00:00

Gabe you dont have to add my Previous name o.o I dont have any rank with that name~

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Aurele 2013-02-02T19:20:21+00:00

You do http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37235 c:!

i will delete it when it's going to be in pending

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riffy 2013-02-03T06:24:46+00:00

Together in Love~ ~~With me~~

[General]

If it's Nightcred by Andrea, maybe you need an Andrea tag. try to ask him about it! >3<
Disable AudioLeadIn, please. 2414ms + 500ms is TOO long! >3</
Try to use combo colours that FIT with BG? It will bring some harmony o3o/
Together In Love > Alone at the beach BG WHY? :V it's kinda weird, baka!

[Insane]

00:31:814 - I'd place here a circle to make rhythm a bit more consistent. It fits here, it sounds good and plays good, too. So, why don't you place a circle here?
00:46:074 (1) - actually, you can silince spinner's end. It will fit here much better, sound fades here.
00:58:750 (1,2,3) - x0.2 > x1.0 it's kinda suddenly. How about using x0.5 instead? This part feels different, and regular spacing/jumps doesn't fit here, imo.
01:25:510 (1,2) - wait what? Why 1/1 sliders with jumps? I think some 1/4 triplets with 1/2 circles will fit here better! :V It is a bit confusing for me! rhythm here goes this way, right? o3o/
01:37:657 - nice try, but this diff is the Hardest diff. So, triplet here will fit the way better, imo. same for 01:37:657 - 01:40:562 (4) -

[Xin's Hard]

00:17:202 (1,2) - I didn't expect jump here. It's a calm part, and jumps here will confuse players!
00:25:124 (2,3,4) - try to move them 1/2 later and put circle at 00:25:124! (will require some changes in object-placement)! If you will do it, the rhythm will become MUCH better, i think. (for exmaple see 00:27:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part)
00:40:265 (5) - uh.. actually sounds VERY weird. don't ignore white ticks because they contain MAIN beat of the music. also 2x-reversed sliders are confusing. >3</
01:02:975 - did you miss something here? It feels kinda empty without beat here! same for 01:05:792 - 01:17:059 - remember, consistent rhythm makes map easier to play and more enjoyable!
01:41:706 (3) - 2x reverses are confusing. I will say it again and again. I don't recommend you to use them at all. Players probably will not notice second repeat, and fail this slider. :/ also this slider is kinda random and inconsistent

[Sekai's Normal]

AR5 Will fit here much better. Just try it. (Also it's more common for Normal diffs)
00:23:892 (4) - This is NOT a way to map this part. 2nd and third reverses are hard to notice/read and it doesn't sound so good. Replace it with one long slider. It will fit THE WAY better. Also it's more playable.
Some combo chains are too long (+7) but it doesn't looks THAT bad. So, you don't have to fix it. But I'm sure you can improve your comboing a bit. >3</

[Nyally's Easy]

Circle size 3 will make it the way more cute. 1/1 circles will not be overlapped (they're overlapped a bit now) HUGE circles can stress beginners too, so using CS3 here is a good idea, imo!
Try to make whistles during first kiai more consistent! I'm sure you can do it by yourself. :3/
00:37:272 (2) - I'd recommned you to avoid 1/2 sliders here. They're too short and too fast. Beginners will not understand them!
01:01:567 (1) - nazi - you can make it'svery cuter, by following spinner's shape o3o/ [url]-Naziri-[/url]
01:19:524 (3) - nazi - missed new combo. this combo chain is TOOO LOOOONG!
01:38:185 (1) - nazi - according to your comboing this NC seems to be extra. it'll be great if you remove it!

~~~~~~~~~~
Well mapped! Star!

~

Good luck!

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Aurele 2013-02-03T15:44:11+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Together in Love~ ~~With me~~

[General]
If it's Nightcred by Andrea, maybe you need an Andrea tag. try to ask him about it! >3< I am not sure, to be honest. o_o
Disable AudioLeadIn, please. 2414ms + 500ms is TOO long! >3</ Totally not long, lol
Try to use combo colours that FIT with BG? It will bring some harmony o3o/ The Combo Colors are taken from the SliderBall owo!
Together In Love > Alone at the beach BG WHY? :V it's kinda weird, baka! that the one I've found and thought it was cute :v
[Insane]
00:31:814 - I'd place here a circle to make rhythm a bit more consistent. It fits here, it sounds good and plays good, too. So, why don't you place a circle here? I prefer not since I don't really ear anything that I can emphasize it with the circle. I mostly tried to follow the song with the vocals and if I add a circle here, it might create a jump, which is not what I want.
00:46:074 (1) - actually, you can silince spinner's end. It will fit here much better, sound fades here. Okay owo
00:58:750 (1,2,3) - x0.2 > x1.0 it's kinda suddenly. How about using x0.5 instead? This part feels different, and regular spacing/jumps doesn't fit here, imo. I will keep the way it is, it's well spaced.
01:25:510 (1,2) - wait what? Why 1/1 sliders with jumps? I think some 1/4 triplets with 1/2 circles will fit here better! :V It is a bit confusing for me! rhythm here goes this way, right? o3o/ I will try to do something.. but I prefer the way it is
01:37:657 - nice try, but this diff is the Hardest diff. So, triplet here will fit the way better, imo. same for 01:37:657 - 01:40:562 (4) - Well.. it's following a sound. I will keep it.

Konei

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Konei 2013-02-03T18:45:02+00:00

I personally don't think that Andrea should be in map's tags.
It would be like adding the one who gave a background image to you to the tags.

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riffy 2013-02-04T08:24:26+00:00

Konei wrote:
I personally don't think that Andrea should be in map's tags.
It would be like adding the one who gave a background image to you to the tags.

Well, not really. For example if I map Cascada song, I put DJ Manian in tags because he's a part of a band and he took part in creating a song. Same with this track, right? Andrea is a guy who remixed the track.. I'm not sure, but.. meh.

Sekai

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Sekai 2013-02-04T08:30:15+00:00

Thanks Bakari for your mod :3

Fixed everything you said~

http://puu.sh/1XhNG

Konei

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Konei 2013-02-04T08:37:33+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Konei wrote:
I personally don't think that Andrea should be in map's tags.
It would be like adding the one who gave a background image to you to the tags.
Well, not really. For example if I map Cascada song, I put DJ Manian in tags because he's a part of a band and he took part in creating a song. Same with this track, right? Andrea is a guy who remixed the track.. I'm not sure, but.. meh.

Gabe credited Andrea already in creator's words and actually, I think it is a difference if the one who mixed the music is in a music career or in the osu! community. Keep in mind: If someone searches Andrea's name per osu! he'll be looking forward seeing maps mapped by Andrea and not the ones which Andrea gave an mp3 to. ;3

Lally

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Lally 2013-02-04T14:13:56+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Together in Love~ ~~With me~~

[Nyally's Easy]
Circle size 3 will make it the way more cute. 1/1 circles will not be overlapped (they're overlapped a bit now) HUGE circles can stress beginners too, so using CS3 here is a good idea, imo! uhm yap after 10 sec thinking i use cs3
Try to make whistles during first kiai more consistent! I'm sure you can do it by yourself. :3/
00:37:272 (2) - I'd recommned you to avoid 1/2 sliders here. They're too short and too fast. Beginners will not understand them! i dunno no changes for now but i will think about
01:01:567 (1) - nazi - you can make it'svery cuter, by following spinner's shape o3o/ [url]-Naziri-[/url] ok \o3o\
01:19:524 (3) - nazi - missed new combo. this combo chain is TOOO LOOOONG! ok o3o
01:38:185 (1) - nazi - according to your comboing this NC seems to be extra. it'll be great if you remove it! lol fail done
~~~~~~~~~~
rawwwr o3o~

o3o

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Snyder & Ray - Together In Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 24948
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 1
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[Metadata]
Title:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Snyder & Ray
ArtistUnicode:Snyder & Ray
Creator:Gabe
Version:Lally's Easy
Source:
Tags:Lally -Sekai- Sekai-nyan XinCrin Cute Little Girl Love Lovely Song Edit Remix Trance Dance Lovers Night
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XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2013-02-04T21:49:51+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
[Xin's Hard]
00:17:202 (1,2) - I didn't expect jump here. It's a calm part, and jumps here will confuse players! Fixed
00:25:124 (2,3,4) - try to move them 1/2 later and put circle at 00:25:124! (will require some changes in object-placement)! If you will do it, the rhythm will become MUCH better, i think. (for exmaple see 00:27:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part) Well , is better . I think
00:40:265 (5) - uh.. actually sounds VERY weird. don't ignore white ticks because they contain MAIN beat of the music. also 2x-reversed sliders are confusing. >3</ I removed a reverse and add a slider more
01:02:975 - did you miss something here? It feels kinda empty without beat here! same for 01:05:792 - 01:17:059 - remember, consistent rhythm makes map easier to play and more enjoyable! Fixed
01:41:706 (3) - 2x reverses are confusing. I will say it again and again. I don't recommend you to use them at all. Players probably will not notice second repeat, and fail this slider. :/ also this slider is kinda random and inconsistent The music becomes more fun the reverses of these sliders, really not very confusing in my opinion, do not change it for now, maybe if someone else tells me, I'll change

Thank you Baka !

My changes

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Snyder & Ray - Together In Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 24948
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Snyder & Ray
ArtistUnicode:Snyder & Ray
Creator:Gabe
Version:Xin's Hard
Source:
Tags:Lally -Sekai- Sekai-nyan XinCrin Cute Little Girl Love Lovely Song Edit Remix Trance Dance Lovers Night
BeatmapID:216586
BeatmapSetID:76937

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Background.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,49091,53625
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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232,104,110157,2,0,P|276:80|308:100|308:100|340:80|384:100,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,168,110685,1,0,0:0:0
340,248,110861,6,0,P|380:240|408:212,1,80
488,204,111213,2,0,P|494:240|478:280,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,344,111565,2,0,P|381:343|412:324,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,328,112093,1,0,0:0:0
180,312,112269,6,0,P|104:284|104:284|84:248|116:208,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,228,112798,1,0,0:0:0
224,156,112974,1,0,0:0:0
196,80,113150,2,0,P|180:36,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,156,113502,1,0,0:0:0
296,124,113678,6,0,P|356:72,1,80
436,72,114030,2,0,P|496:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,192,114382,2,0,P|396:136|396:136|340:192,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,248,114910,1,0,0:0:0
444,316,115086,6,0,P|404:328|368:320,1,80
296,280,115438,2,0,P|256:268|220:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,348,115790,2,0,P|192:348|148:312,2,120
296,280,116495,5,0,0:0:0
352,224,116671,1,0,0:0:0
352,144,116847,1,8,0:0:0
296,84,117023,1,0,0:0:0
216,88,117199,2,0,P|136:96,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,168,117727,1,0,0:0:0
208,248,117903,6,0,P|128:256,1,80
304,248,118255,2,0,P|384:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,200,118607,2,0,P|464:164,8,40,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,119400,12,4,120720,0:0:0

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-02-05T14:10:48+00:00

I agree with the last post of Konei. I mean, adding everyone to the Tags for editing specific Stuff for the Beatmap would be kinda ridiculous.

[General]
- Hm.. Why isn't this NC Spinner in? You know which I mean, rite?

[Lally]
01:04:384 (3) - There is a Finish missing at the Start.
01:14:594 (3) - Clap is missing at the Start.
01:17:763 (2,1) - Sounds meh.. Such songs are more or less a repeat of the same rhythm and should be mapped in the same way. Try this Pattern: http://puu.sh/1XPyR
01:25:510 (3) - Finish sounds a bit weird here, imo you should let it out. Otherwise, keep it consistent and add at 01:27:974 (2) to the End Finish.
01:30:439 (2) - Clap sounds so godly here. x3
01:39:946 (2) - I just feel that Claps comes here too early. But this is caused to the Symmetry you created here. So keep the Start blank.
01:43:819 (2) - Clap at the End sounds too much imo. Like you did it at 01:36:777 (1,2,1) you should leave out the Clap here so you would have at each 4th white Tick Clap. And this sounds obviously better.

[Sekai]
01:01:567 (1,2,3,4) - This sounds actually better from the Rhythm. http://puu.sh/1XPUy
01:07:200 (1) - Finish at the Start to emphasize this Part.
01:21:284 (1) - Nazi Mod (orz) Move the red Sliderpoint and the 3rd white Sliderpoint one grid left. It looks better. I find the Curve here very ugly. orzorzorz
01:37:129 - 01:41:706 - I find this break poor. :c This part of the Song should be mapped.

[Xin]
00:06:991 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - What I really dislike here: 00:07:343 (1) is coming way too late and should create a good symmetry flow with (2,3) after. Then, the Slider is out of the Voice. If you're moving the Start at 00:08:047 the Voice is in rhythm with the Slider (and the pattern after). Also, 00:10:160 (5) would stay at 00:10:864 which sounds even better as now. And not to keep it blank, add from 00:06:991 - 00:07:343 a Slider and move 00:06:991 (4) to 00:07:695. At all, it should looks like that. http://puu.sh/1XQ0X
00:35:335 (4) - Imo you can short it for some repeats so that it ends at 00:35:863. Actually, it fits well with the Song tho.
00:45:018 (1,2) - Feels better to swap them. http://puu.sh/1XQim
01:24:805 (3) - Finish here sounds random, remove it.
01:42:411 (1) - Remove the Repeat and add one Circle at 01:42:763, recommended to stack it with 01:42:939 (2). I am sure that I am not the only one who would continue to go after the Slider's End. :p

[Noob]
01:56:143 (6) - noob

Welp, Mapset is fine so far.

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-02-09T01:23:34+00:00

o3o

Stefan wrote:
[Lally]
01:04:384 (3) - There is a Finish missing at the Start. done
01:14:594 (3) - Clap is missing at the Start.done
01:17:763 (2,1) - Sounds meh.. Such songs are more or less a repeat of the same rhythm and should be mapped in the same way. Try this Pattern: http://puu.sh/1XPyR done
01:25:510 (3) - Finish sounds a bit weird here, imo you should let it out. Otherwise, keep it consistent and add at 01:27:974 (2) to the End Finish. done
01:30:439 (2) - Clap sounds so godly here. x3 done
01:39:946 (2) - I just feel that Claps comes here too early. But this is caused to the Symmetry you created here. So keep the Start blank. done
01:43:819 (2) - Clap at the End sounds too much imo. Like you did it at 01:36:777 (1,2,1) you should leave out the Clap here so you would have at each 4th white Tick Clap. And this sounds obviously better. done

ty for modding tefan :3
ma fix : http://puu.sh/1ZzB6

0gre_old

367 posts

Joined January 2013

0gre_old 2013-02-11T10:47:26+00:00

oh what a cute nightecore><

can I do the taiko parts if you are going to add it??

(sorry I may losing some respection because I am requesting for other taiko maps as well
but I also have a wish to make this song as well so please add it in consideration)

Gabe wrote:
I am glad that you are interested on making a Taiko difficulty but, unfortunately, I won't be adding more difficulties on the mapset. If you're still interested, I will add it on the description only.
Hope you can understand.

oh ok!
I will see another time~
anyway thanks fro seeing XD

Last edited by 0gre_old 2013-02-12T05:36:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Aurele

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Topic Starter

Aurele 2013-02-12T03:56:21+00:00

0gre wrote:
oh what a cute nightecore><

can I do the taiko parts if you are going to add it??

(sorry I may losing some respection because I am requesting for other taiko maps as well
but I also have a wish to make this song as well so please add it in consideration)

I am glad that you are interested on making a Taiko difficulty but, unfortunately, I won't be adding more difficulties on the mapset. If you're still interested, I will add it on the description only.
Hope you can understand.

Edit: @Answer of the edit above; Ahah ^^' . So yeah, I'm sorry!~

Aurele

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Topic Starter

Aurele 2013-02-15T00:05:06+00:00

I've fixed Stefan's mod for Sekai and Xin. To all of you, I've made some changes to your difficulties. I hope it's alright? :<

Thank you Stefan!

UnitedWeSin

891 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-02-15T07:53:09+00:00

Oh hai Gabe!
M4M here from your queue.

[General]

To my eyes, colors 3 and 4 are too alike. Maybe change their positions in the cycle so that they don't appear right next to each other, or make 4 brighter. 4 might be nicer as a more pinkish colors. (:

[Lally's Easy]

Map Design/Rhythm

00:54:525 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's a little strange to me that you didn't go for a nice symmetrical setup here, it would fit well with a lot of the other patterns in the map imo. Why not have 1.1 spacing between the 00:54:525 (1,2)? o.o You could have them placed opposite each other on the grid, and then maybe stack the 00:57:341 (1) on the 00:54:525 (1) and have the 00:58:046 (2) in the center of the screen. It would just be all around nicer to have the 00:58:750 (1,2) as close to the center as possible imo for both aesthetics and to setup for the spinner better. Also better to NC at 00:55:933 (2) imo because it's like a reset there just like at 00:57:341 (1) it's the same sound really.
01:29:735 (1,2,3,1,2) - Eh, why not make a upside down star here? Or something like it. (:

Mine is way off but you get what I mean. x.x
01:52:974 (2) - A bit too difficult to read with the gap at 01:52:622 for an easy diff imo. It would play much better as a 1/1 slider with a repeat at 01:52:622.

Hitsounds

Why don't you make use of the slider tick clap in this diff like Sekai does? ;_; It would sound nice.
00:39:032 (1) - Hmm, the finish here is a bit strange to me. Better to remove it imo. It's noisy because this isn't the beginning of the kiai or the kiai fountain. You don't use a finish at 00:27:765 (1) which is the same set of music.
01:12:834 (1) - Since the bass cuts out on the head of this slider and comes back in at 01:13:186 I think it might be nice to make the finish on the head a soft finish instead. It fits better when there is no bass and it accents the aspect of bass reset that is happening in the music.
01:30:439 (2) - Maybe remove the finish here because the bass doesn't hit like it does at 01:29:735 (1) and 01:31:143 (3) so it sounds a bit noisy.

Nice diff, but I think in the future you should be wary about skipping over downbeats too much in your rhythms because I think it might make a lot of new players confused, especially ones that are just starting out and can't read approach circles, so relying on their sense of rhythm is all they have.

[Sekai's Normal]

Map Design/Rhythm

00:45:018 (2) - Maybe tilt it more upwards so that it's in a nicer triangle pattern with the 00:44:666 (1,3) and we have a nicer transition into the 3.
00:46:074 (1,1) - Maybe a personal thing, but two spinners back to back is too much for a normal imo, I think it's an Insane level technique because the player has no way of knowing that there will be another spinner after the current one so it's always a surprise. I think it would be better to make it one long spinner, or to map out the first spinner like Xin does in his hard diff.
01:25:510 (1) - Hm, why NC here? It's breaking your combo pattern of NC every other downbeat. Maybe remove this one would be better.

Hitsounds

01:12:834 - Same as easy, consider making this a soft finish on the end of the 5 to accent how the bass stops for this downbeat.
01:22:693 - Consider adding a green line to change sample set to soft here. Then change it back to normal at 01:24:101. Sounds really nice to me and accents the bass cut out and reset at 01:24:101.
01:31:143 (3) - Maybe add a finish on the head here. The other diffs do this, I think it fits nice with the single bass hits in this section. If you do, also add one at 01:32:552 (5) and 01:33:256 on the head of the 7.

Fun diff. :3

[Xin's Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm

00:11:040 (1,2) - I really hate the way this plays. Sure it's following the vocals, but in doing so you made a really awkward phrase. It would be much better to continue flow from the 00:09:456 (3) with a nice simple rhythm to fit this slow section imo.
Sure the 1 hits before the vocals, but so does the 00:08:047 (1). It would just be a nicer phrase to play imo.
00:40:265 (5) - A bit nazi, but I think if you rotate this slider just 6 degrees clockwise and replace it, your could have a nicer blanket with the 4.

I just moved the 00:40:793 (6,1,2) down a bit to fix spacing.
01:15:475 (4) - A bit hard to tell imo when it's not only covered by the hitburst from the 01:14:594 (2) but is also hidden by the slider as it fades. It might play better if you reverse the 3 and reposition.
This plays a lot better to me.

Hitsounds

00:18:962 (4) - Hm, maybe a whistle here? Follows in pattern with the whistles here and leads us into the 00:19:314 (1) better imo.
00:19:314 (1) - A whistle on the repeat would be really nice to me. I hear a whistle in the music here.
00:40:793 (6) - Missing clap here, unless it was intentional to hit with vocals. x.x idk
00:58:046 (2) - Missing finish imo.
01:01:567 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Since you don't do offbeat claps, it might be nice to add another finish on the tail of the 01:01:567 (1) and one on the tail of the 01:04:384 (1) since at each spot we have these double bass hits, so the two finishes sound well with them and add some spunk to this section.
01:12:834 (5) - Same as other diffs, a soft finish instead of a normal one fits better to me because the bass cuts out for this downbeat.
01:22:869 - Maybe add a green line and change to soft sample set because the bass cuts out here. Change back to normal at 01:24:101. It fits really well imo.
01:44:523 (3) - Hm, maybe add a soft whistle to the repeat to make the 1/4 more obvious like you did earlier. Same thing at 01:45:932 (5) and 01:47:340 (3) and 01:55:790 (3).

Nice sliders. (:

[Gabe's Insane]

Map Design/Rhythm

Maybe HP-Drain +1?
I just really don't want this diff to have the same star rating as the hard diff because it makes the hard diff appear at the bottom of the list in song select. I think that many players only look at the bottom song because they assume it's the hardest dif, so lots of people might miss out on your diff if you keep it this way (at least I've had that problem with not realizing there's a harder diff -.-)
Since you have pretty frequent new combos, I don't think that HP drain +1 is such a big deal. Either this or try and reduce the star rating of the hard diff. Either way, please fix that star rating issue.
00:34:455 (5,1,2,3) - I really don't like how this plays. To me it's not intuitive to have the 1 stacked on the head of the 00:34:103 (4). It plays much better if it's stacked on the 00:34:455 (5). Maybe try this placement, I find that it plays much more smooth.

The 1 is stacked on the 5 and the 2 is stacked on the 00:34:103 (4). I moved the 3 over.
00:35:511 (4) - Consider ctrl-G here so that the 4 ends on the head of the next slider after all the repeats. It plays nicer that way imo. A small jump to the 4 fits imo. Same thing at 00:41:497 (3), maybe that one you could just move down so the heads overlap.
01:12:834 (1) - Consider reducing slider velocity for this slider. That might make a fun fade out and back in sort of effect that would fit the music. Something to play with. (:
01:13:802 (4) - This note is a bit weird because it's not sounding in the melody line. It makes this awkward triplet here that doesn't fit imo, consider removing it.
01:22:693 (1) - You probably won't change this but I'll mention it anyways because it bugs me.
Maybe end this spinner at 01:23:749 and remove the finish from the end. Then have a 1/1 slider at 01:24:101 with a finish on the head. Something like this maybe:

Plays so well. ;_;
01:24:805 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Awesome flow through here it feels really good.
01:37:481 (3,4,5) - I think all of these would play better if you increased spacing. 1.3 isn't enough imo, lots of players will assume it's a larger jump with a normal 1/2 rhythm.
01:43:819 (1,1) - You probably won't change, but these don't plays very nice imo when they are complete overlapped with the previous slider. The latter one isn't bad, but the 01:43:819 (1) is super confusing because in play it just looks like there's a circle stacked on the head of the 01:43:115 (3) and not another slider there. Maybe really consider offseting these sliders a bit so that they aren't complete overlapped with the previous ones. It plays much better that way imo.

Hitsounds

00:13:681 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I can't figure out why you chose to add the normal hits on the onbeats here instead of the offbeats where the clap happens in the music. It sounds very strange to have a normal hit when the soft hit should be and then a soft whistle where the normal hit should be to accent the clap. -.-
00:47:571 (1) - The finish on the end is so quiet. ;_; Maybe increase volume by 20% or so would fit better with the burst in the music at the end of the spinner.
01:07:200 (1) - Maybe a finish on the head here? It would make the bass kick in more accented imo.
01:48:044 (1) - Finish really missing on the head imo. It's the start of the kiai. ;_;

Fun. (:
I can't FC this I'm bad. ;_;

Ok I hope it helps. You're all great mappers and I enjoyed this mapset very much, so I give you star. (:

rEdo

809 posts

Joined November 2008

rEdo 2013-02-16T00:32:56+00:00

[Lally's Easy]
00:13:681 (1) - add a finish at its beginning, perhaps?
01:39:946 (2) - add a finish at its end.
01:46:636 (2) - this seems to be a bit too close to the previous slider (0.98x). I guess you should fix it.

[Sekai's Normal]
00:21:427 (3) - sampleset normal for its beginning.
00:34:455 (3) - move it two grids higher for aesthetics (x:300 y:232).
00:40:441 (4) - add a finish at its end.
01:01:567 (1,2,3) - the distance snap is too high here, change it to 1.0x.
01:21:284 (1) - add a finish at its beginning.

[Xin's Hard]
00:22:219 (1) - do not start a spinner immediately after the note preceding it! give it at least a 1/2 break.
00:40:969 (1) - if you really want to give a new combo here, give it to the previous note for aesthetics.
00:42:553 (3) - move it to x:468 y:154 in order to get a perfectly mirrored slider. don't forget to resnap (2) note after.
01:15:651 (1) - add a finish at its beginning.
01:26:918 (1) - ^
01:59:400 (1) - same issue as above.

[Insane]
00:15:089 (3) - I guess that new combo isn't really necessary.
00:35:511 (4) - your whistle is on a blue tick preceding the white tick, and I guess this is where your whistle is supposed to be.
01:02:799 (6,7,1) - this pattern is pretty meh, it doesn't even follow the music... something like that plays A LOT better. if you want it, here's the code for that mine suggestion of a pattern that might be better ;)
01:08:433 (4,5,1) - same stuff as above, just come up with something on your own this time.
01:13:538 (3,4,5) - so you actually made a triplet out of that? 01:11:602 (1,2) is just much better for that...
01:31:143 (1) - Ctrl+H perhaps?
01:59:400 (1) - do not start a spinner immediately after the note preceding it! give it at least a 1/2 break.

you're trying to map with beats that actually do not exist in the song in this, it's not a good thing to do :( you should consider self-modding your difficulty and trying to fix some of the patterns you've got there.

well, I guess that's it. good luck! ;)

Last edited by rEdo 2013-02-16T12:48:35+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Sekai

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Sekai 2013-02-16T02:29:36+00:00

Thanks for modding :3

Fixed everything http://puu.sh/23ekl

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2013-02-16T03:31:27+00:00

Sup.

Mod for mod request (ﾉ´∀｀*)

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

General

Black color for a SliderTrackOverride is just don't matched o.o I suggest you to use a dark purple color instead (93,36,114) or a very light purple instead (220,189,232) or maybe without any SliderTrackOverride?
"Cute Little Girl Love Lovely Song Lovers Night" i don't think this is necessary lolol
Use title text with color 200,169,212 for the Artist and 220,189,232 for the Title?

Lally's Easy

01:01:567 (1) - Remove finish?
01:04:384 (3) - ^
01:12:130 - These gap just feels really empty. Maybe add note right here?
01:14:594 (3) - Add clap on start too?
01:19:876 (2) - Try something "less curved" like this? http://puu.sh/23f7B
01:36:777 (1) - Not a right way to make wiggle slider. Here: http://puu.sh/23f9C this is better
01:52:622 - Add note here please

Sekai's Normal

00:02:414 (1,2,3) - symmetry please ;w;
00:07:695 (5,1) - Blanket here?
00:12:977 (3,1) - ^
00:15:089 (3) - Not a right way to make wiggle slider. See my mod on Lally's diff on how to make wiggles like this looks better
00:17:906 (3,4,5,6,1) - No. This just feels forced. Make a polygonal pattern instead so no confusing overlap like 00:18:610 (5,1) - does.
00:26:356 (4) - uhhh
00:31:638 (4,5) - blanket
00:58:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd rather use polygonal pattern here, seriously.
01:14:594 (5,6,7) - Not a good polarity aesthetic, to make a circle triplet after a sequence of circle pattern. Why don't you make a slider triplet instead?
01:27:974 (2,3,4,5,6) - Not beautiful ;w;
You have to know when you want to make a square pattern, triangle pattern, and polygonal pattern, because they depends on amount of notes. If you used 5 circles, that means polygon works the best and a square or triangle pattern just doesn't match, and vice versa.
01:32:552 (5) - NC
01:59:311 (8,1) - No. This map consists of 1/2 pattern implementation, and this spinner starts on 1/4 beat. On standard mode this doesn't matter but it really make difference on osu!mania mode (because spinner treated as long notes that have to hit properly on when they start, unlike standard mode which players can start spinning whenever they want) Since players had already used to 1/2 notes and patterns, adding spinner on 1/4 here will shock the players therefore making them miss. Start this spinner on 1/2 beat (red tick) instead.

Xin's Hard

Hmmm. To make this diff don't overcome the Insane diff, maybe lower HP -1 and remove kick sliders like 00:59:454 (3) - , and replace them with spinners or something else.
00:19:314 (1) - Whistle on start?
00:39:736 (4,5) - imperfect blanket
01:09:841 (4,1,2,3) - ^
01:53:678 (1,3) - imperfect parallel

Insane

AR +1
00:28:997 (5) - Not a perfect wiggle. See my mod on Lally's diff on how to make this perfect
00:36:920 (3,4) - Blanket too tight. To make perfect blankets, you have to equal their space just the way notes spaced. Examples: This is perfect blanket This is imperfect blanket
01:42:411 (1,2,3,4,1) - No. You're forcing a wrong design for this pattern. Use this: http://puu.sh/23fV5

Cool map. Good luck, Gabe.
(╯ ´ ・ω ・`)╯ 彡 ☆

regenz

1,277 posts

Joined November 2009

regenz 2013-02-16T09:11:40+00:00

Hi M4M please

General
The combo color 3 and 4 is close and it blend together . Can you switch Combo 6 and Combo 3 ? ( Change combo 3 to color 6 and Combo 6 to color of combo 3 )
Well here
Combo1 : 55,217,47
Combo2 : 102,197,242
Combo3 : 48,63,241
Combo4 : 233,121,54
Combo5 : 210,85,210
Combo6 : 213,40,88
Combo7 : 154,68,187
Combo8 : 249,244,81

Insane
00:14:913 (2) – move 1/2 beat backward
00:35:511 (4) - 00:35:775 remove whistle put at 00:35:863 instead
01:43:819 (1) – Can you move this a bit right it really hard to see this but if you fix color combo that I suggest this is fine it can see clearly.
Xin ‘s Hard
00:19:314 (1) – finish head
00:35:863 whistle

Sekai's Normal
01:42:411 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) – I think you NC this set wrong You NC every 8 beats right?
01:43:819 (1,1) – remove NC then 01:45:227 (7) –

Easy
01:00:862 Add Green Timing point here and reduce volume to 20 percent
Then add Green Timing again at 01:01:215 and set volume to 50 percent.
01:33:960 (1) – remove finish add whistle.
01:39:946 (2) –finish end of slider
01:42:058 (4) –Finish

map for mod4mod
(just pick one)

If you can mod Approve please Various Artists - SUPER SHOT Compilation https://osu.ppy.sh/s/51037
If not
Rin - Prism*Magical (DJ SHARPNEL hardrave remix) Short Ver. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/39032
or
Mizuho - Tobira Hiraite, Futari Mirai e -Fantom Euro Mix- https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957

Regou

1,927 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2013-02-16T17:47:27+00:00

Oh yes it's nightcore!!!!
M4M

[Insane]
00:06:463 (1) - Ahh..this one doesn't looks really good. something like this would be good:

Same for (2).
00:13:681 (1) - A soft hitfinish works better here -v-
00:29:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You don't really need to put them up straight, rotate it for about 12 degree anti-clockwise?
00:31:814 - A note should be added here to follow the music :3
01:11:690 - Add note?
01:12:834 (1) - Use soft sampleset for tail?
01:12:834 (1) - Add note?
01:20:580 (5,6) - Ctrl+G?

[Hard]
00:19:314 (1) - Add finish at start?
00:40:265 (5) - Not perfectly blanketed, do it like this! .w.

01:51:213 (2,3) - bad flow :C

[Normal]
00:13:681 (1) - 1 grid down
00:21:427 (3) - The whistle sound so odd
00:34:455 (3,1) - Spacing
01:11:426 (4) - Making this symmetrical would be good

01:43:819 (1) - Remove NC
01:45:227 (3) - Add NC here
01:46:636 (1) - Remove NC

[Easy]
Why not use some custom slidertick sound like Sekai's Normal does?

It sounds great
00:37:272 (2) - Using 1 or 2 circle would be really enough instead of using a 1/2 repeat slider, could be difficult to newbies(btw, it's just up to you)
Same for similar case.
01:19:876 (2) - This super long slider make nonsense

That's all! This map is quite good and good luck Gabe

Gloria Guard

2,274 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-02-16T17:50:27+00:00

Hi Gabe 'w'/

m4m

[Lally's Easy]

00:27:765 (1,2) In front of it with the same tempo and seems to be good.
http://puu.sh/23vDh <- this, easy read players because it is easier and 00:30:582 add note

01:12:130 add note? The beat seems to be empty

01:23:397 ^ too

01:26:566 add note?

01:33:960 (1) This is spin end 01:35:369 ? Being tailored to the end of the lyrics.

01:46:636 (1,2) specing -> http://puu.sh/23vN2

01:50:861 (1) Why the off-screen?

01:55:086 (2) 4 grid down?

[Sekai's normal]

00:03:470 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/23vQo change? In order to shape a better

00:05:758 (1,2) blanket ? -> http://puu.sh/23vRQ

00:08:751 (1,2) ^ too Recommended shape that covers the slider to the end. -> http://puu.sh/23vTb

00:13:305 (3,1) blanket

01:42:411 (1,2,3,4) this is pattern - > http://puu.sh/23w08 < change?

[Xin's hard]

00:11:920 (3) Ctrl+G ? For better flow

00:26:004 (5) Ctrl+G ? too

01:25:334 (3,4) Is a bad pattern.
It is recommended that notes four times to move the green slider on the head once

[Insane]

SC + 1 ?

00:27:061 (3) Ctrl+G ? Recommended for better flow.

00:34:103 (4,5) Ctrl+G ?

00:41:497 (3,4) Repeated arrows slider will be hidden,Skin, but is not losing, not obscured.

Nice map Star !

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,514 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Aurele 2013-02-16T18:55:46+00:00

I've updated for the combo colors c:!

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2013-02-16T19:40:05+00:00

It erased my answers, apologies !!!

Changes

osu file format v11

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AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 24948
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Snyder & Ray
ArtistUnicode:Snyder & Ray
Creator:Gabe
Version:Xin's Hard
Source:
Tags:Lally -Sekai- Sekai-nyan XinCrin Cute Little Girl Love Lovely Song Edit Remix Trance Dance Lovers Night
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Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-02-16T23:35:44+00:00

UnitedWeSin

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Lally's Easy]

Map Design/Rhythm

00:54:525 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's a little strange to me that you didn't go for a nice symmetrical setup here, it would fit well with a lot of the other patterns in the map imo. Why not have 1.1 spacing between the 00:54:525 (1,2)? o.o You could have them placed opposite each other on the grid, and then maybe stack the 00:57:341 (1) on the 00:54:525 (1) and have the 00:58:046 (2) in the center of the screen. It would just be all around nicer to have the 00:58:750 (1,2) as close to the center as possible imo for both aesthetics and to setup for the spinner better. Also better to NC at 00:55:933 (2) imo because it's like a reset there just like at 00:57:341 (1) it's the same sound really.
personally i like how it is atm
01:29:735 (1,2,3,1,2) - Eh, why not make a upside down star here? Or something like it. (: sure fixed

Mine is way off but you get what I mean. x.x

01:52:974 (2) - A bit too difficult to read with the gap at 01:52:622 for an easy diff imo. It would play much better as a 1/1 slider with a repeat at 01:52:622.i like how it sounds here no changes
Hitsounds

Why don't you make use of the slider tick clap in this diff like Sekai does? ;_; It would sound nice. fixed all :3

00:39:032 (1) - Hmm, the finish here is a bit strange to me. Better to remove it imo. It's noisy because this isn't the beginning of the kiai or the kiai fountain. You don't use a finish at 00:27:765 (1) <- added a finish here upswhich is the same set of music.

01:12:834 (1) - Since the bass cuts out on the head of this slider and comes back in at 01:13:186 I think it might be nice to make the finish on the head a soft finish instead. It fits better when there is no bass and it accents the aspect of bass reset that is happening in the music.
uuh i like how it sounds added :3
01:30:439 (2) - Maybe remove the finish here because the bass doesn't hit like it does at 01:29:735 (1) and 01:31:143 (3) so it sounds a bit noisy.
done
Nice diff, but I think in the future you should be wary about skipping over downbeats too much in your rhythms because I think it might make a lot of new players confused, especially ones that are just starting out and can't read approach circles, so relying on their sense of rhythm is all they have.
i'll try next time ty for modding :3

rEdo

rEdo wrote:
[Lally's Easy]
00:13:681 (1) - add a finish at its beginning, perhaps? here is a finish :O
01:39:946 (2) - add a finish at its end. personally i think it fits here
01:46:636 (2) - this seems to be a bit too close to the previous slider (0.98x). I guess you should fix it.woooh >u< fixed

inverness

inverness wrote:
Sup.

Lally's Easy
01:01:567 (1) - Remove finish?i think is ok here so no changes,because it fits with the music
01:04:384 (3) - ^-^
01:12:130 - These gap just feels really empty. Maybe add note right here? added :3
01:14:594 (3) - Add clap on start too? >.< fixed
01:19:876 (2) - Try something "less curved" like this? http://puu.sh/23f7B uuh i like this slider ;w;
01:36:777 (1) - Not a right way to make wiggle slider. Here: http://puu.sh/23f9C this is better i know but i like how it is this slider and i think is not a big problem i have a ranked map with this kind of slider : http://puu.sh/23GiK ( i think if the slider looks good even if it have 984563496 white points is not a big problem à.à
01:52:622 - Add note here please yuppi u.u done

regenz

regenz wrote:
Easy
01:00:862 Add Green Timing point here and reduce volume to 20 percent sure :3
Then add Green Timing again at 01:01:215 and set volume to 50 percent. -^
01:33:960 (1) – remove finish add whistle. ok :O
01:39:946 (2) –finish end of slider hmm i'm not really sure about
01:42:058 (4) –Finish here not

Regou

Regou wrote:
[Easy]
Why not use some custom slidertick sound like Sekai's Normal does? It sounds great did it :3
00:37:272 (2) - Using 1 or 2 circle would be really enough instead of using a 1/2 repeat slider, could be difficult to newbies(btw, it's just up to you)
Same for similar case. i like it how it sounds just for givving some difference to the map
01:19:876 (2) - This super long slider make nonsense :C i like this slider

Gloria Guard

Gloria Guard wrote:
[Lally's Easy]

00:27:765 (1,2) In front of it with the same tempo and seems to be good.
http://puu.sh/23vDh <- this, easy read players because it is easier and 00:30:582 add note i don't like here :C

01:12:130 add note? The beat seems to be empty done in the prev mod

01:23:397 ^ too if you listen a bit the music you'll understand why i stoppen the rhythm a bit :X

01:26:566 add note? yap done

01:33:960 (1) This is spin end 01:35:369 ? Being tailored to the end of the lyrics. i love long spinners and it fints good for me to end it here

01:46:636 (1,2) specing -> http://puu.sh/23vN2 fixed in the prev mod

01:50:861 (1) Why the off-screen? i think is not a big problem :X

01:55:086 (2) 4 grid down? it's ok how it is o3o

waaah ty for modding >u<)/

le fix o3o

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Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2013-02-17T00:42:47+00:00

Kawaii mod for my Gabe =w=/

[General]

Fine ~

[Lally's Easy]

Uhm, I'd say AR - 1 plays much better and doesn't screw something up, so I suggest it to you.
00:03:822 (2) - Really nazi, but you could align this perfectly by using Ctrl and pulling the Slider.
00:08:399 (1) - I know you might not want to do it due to consistency reasons but since the Slider sounds kinda empty witout hitsounds, how about adding whistle to start and end? It would still be consistent in the fact that every Slider has whistle on start and end.
00:13:681 - Why are you changing your whistle pattern all of this sudden from down to upbeats? It doesn't make really sense here as music stays in fact the same way. I would actually suggest you to look at your whistles and place them away from the upbeats and replace them on the downbeats. But actually looking at 00:19:314 (1) - I can't see your whistle pattern as for the fact that if you would going for the upbeats this Slider should have no whistles and if you go for the downbeats the whole Slider should have whistles.
00:47:483 (1) - This Spinner is a bit short for an Easy difficulty, so how about replacing it with a long, awesome Slider? c:
01:26:566 (4) - This circle overlap looks kinda ugly and irritating and I wouldn't be looking forward to seeing this in a map I play as beginner, would I? I recommend you to replace it kinda bit up or something.

[Sekai's Normal]

00:21:427 (3) - I don't like this whistle at the start since it doesnt follow anything clear hearable in the music and comes to sudden of the nothing, so I'd like it to be removed.
00:33:399 (1,3) - Hm, for a better look, would you mind to allign the start of these two Sliders?
00:35:511 (2,3,4) - Uh, 4 looks weird being placed their somehow in the upper part, alligning it with 2 looks much more pleasing in my opinion.
01:57:903 (4) - Music is changing noticeable here and much more quiet, how about a NC here? Would also fit pretty good with the downbeat here.

[Xin's Hard]

00:12:624 (4) - This circle should have a whistle to keep hitsounding consistent.
00:46:778 (5) - Flows a bit akward due to the up and down going of the mouse. How about ctrl + G? Fix spacing if you do so.
01:01:567 (1) - The beat on the end of the Slider as as strong as the one on the start, so I think you should also add a finish to the end. This will also help to seperate it more from the following weaker beats.
01:04:384 (1) - Same as above.
01:07:200 (1) - And same here.
01:12:834 (5) - The start is in music totally week, so you shouldn't use a finish here. Also as the music begins to become quieter at this point, I'd suggest to start NC here instead of on your current 1.
01:20:228 (2) - This jump is like it seems only used for fun or such :< Anyways, please use Ctrl + G to get rid of this jump and the same on 01:20:580 (3) - to fix spacing you could delete 4, and add a repeat to 3.
01:28:150 (4) - three circles stacked there feel kinda too much, so would you mind to stack this circle with 4?
01:29:559 (3) - Just a suggestion but how about as this is already a jump, ctrl + G? Flow feels awesome in my opinion.
01:47:340 (3) - You should add a whistle to Slider's repeat and start to be consistent with the earlier Slider's like 01:37:481 (3) -

[Insane]

00:05:935 (3) - As you are following piano with your whistles, you should have a whistle on the end of this Slider.
00:09:984 (6) - Same with this Slider's start.
00:59:454 (3) - Since there are still heavy beats at 00:59:454 and the repeat on 00:59:806 how about using finishes for them?
01:32:552 (1) - Hm, I would find much more exciting if this circle was stacked on the place where 2 is, what do you think?

That's about it ;3
Good luck Gabe!! <33

happy birthday <3

Last edited by Konei 2013-02-17T15:57:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,514 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Aurele 2013-02-17T01:39:09+00:00

Updated for me, most of all the suggestions were applied.
Thanks to all of you. I will be able to look at all of your maps soon!

Sekai

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

Sekai 2013-02-17T02:07:01+00:00

Fixed everything on my diff :3

Thnks for modding: http://puu.sh/23Lm7

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-02-17T09:33:26+00:00

this song ...

good luck ^^

Aurele

Global Moderator

7,514 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Aurele 2013-02-17T16:27:05+00:00

Konei: I've only followed one suggestion, the third one and I've changed some things (not like you suggested) on the two first suggestions.
The reason is, I wasn't following the piano, but I've only placed whistles at every little downbeats (at the third line); and for the last suggestion, I prefer to keep it stacked since it's less harder to just go at the same place. (anyways, I understand myself)

Thank you for your mod, Konei!♥

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-02-17T19:36:22+00:00

~General~

Tags between the difficulties are inconsistent, please fix it.

~Sekai's Normal~

00:31:990 (5) - Wrongly snapped.
01:10:721 (2,4) - Stack them correctly.

~Xin's Hard~

01:40:298 (3) - Ugly slider, change it.

~Insane~

01:39:330 - You're missing a circle here.
01:58:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream is so evil and unexpected, make it less larger please.

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-02-17T19:47:30+00:00

@fixed all and all hitsounds but din't fix the spinner i think is ok

le fix

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Snyder & Ray - Together In Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 24948
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Together In Love (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Snyder & Ray
ArtistUnicode:Snyder & Ray
Creator:Gabe
Version:Lally's Easy
Source:
Tags:Lally -Sekai- Sekai-nyan XinCrin Cute Little Girl Love Lovely Song Edit Remix Trance Dance Lovers Night
BeatmapID:216938
BeatmapSetID:76937

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