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Joon wrote:

hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:11:903 (1) - start notes add finish
00:32:660 (1) - add finish
00:42:714 (3) - add clap
00:48:227 (1) - start notes add finish
01:01:200 (1) - ^
01:38:822 (2) - End notes add clap
01:43:687 (2) - add clap

[ADVANCED]
00:11:903 (1) - start notes add finish
00:17:092 (1) - ^
00:19:849 (2) - remove clap
00:20:011 (3) - add clap
00:20:335 (5) - End notes add clap
00:20:660 (6) - add clap
00:35:254 (1) - start notes add finish
00:37:849 (1) - ^
01:11:579 (1) - add finish
01:27:146 (1) - start notes add finish


[EXHAUST]

00:06:715 (1) - add finish
00:11:903 (1) - ^
00:37:849 (1) - start notes add finish
01:01:200 (1) - ^


별다른 문제는 없어보입니다.
좋은결과 있으시길.

1. i find the creator are still jaehn215,but i dont know if there are some method to solve this problem =P

1. 00:11:579(3)add a finish?
2. 00:23:579(2)one gird left to make this slider under 00:21:633(4)
3. 00:42:714(3,2)one gird up
4. 00:53:416(1)something like this may better to me
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:02:497(2,1)slider tail not perfect stack
6. 01:28:768(x)i think you really need a note here to follow the music,or just for consistence
7. 01:41:416(4)why not put it right above the 01:38:822(2)

1. AR-1 OD-1 since your easier diff are just AR2 OD2
2. 00:06:065(3)x:180 y:180?
3. 00:12:714(4)a little change for this slider may looks better
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:24:227(4)^
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:52:768(7)nc here because slow slider always mislead player =P
6. 00:58:606(1)this spin could end in 00:59:903 imo
7. 01:49:606(1)try this?
   SPOILER

   

1. same HP Drain with ADVANCED diff？ maybe HP+1
2. 00:11:254(3)nc for changed the slider velocity
3. 00:36:876(2,3)circle2 x:116 y:88 circle3 x:260 y:52 for square
4. 00:39:389(4)its better to me if you put this circle at this point
   SPOILER

   
5. btw i think its too difficult when you use green line to change the slider velocity to 2.0 at 00:43:038

1. There is a huge difficulty gap between the NOVICE dif and the ADVANCED diff. You should consider mapping another diff. The song is short, don't be lazy ~
2. I don't like that grey combo colour, it doesn't suit that "happy" environment the song gives, and doesn't suit neither of the background image and other combo colours. Consider changing it to a light green colour instead ?

1. You should avoid putting notes under other notes in easier difficulties, that's really bad, in both termof readability and design.
   What do I mean when I say notes under other notes ? I mean this knd of pattern : 01:11:579 (1,2,3,4). They are everywhere in the map, I won't point them all out, I let you find them out by yourself so that you don't reiterate this error in your future maps.
2. You are using several Slider Velocity multipliers, that's in general a very bad idea in easier difficulties since begginers aren't actually used to the game yet, therefore it might be confusing for them.
3. 01:14:173 (3) - According on what you've done in the rest of the map, this object should have a new combo.
4. 01:19:362 (3) - Same as above.
5. 01:40:119 (3) - Same as above.

1. 01:00:552 (1,2,3) - Please do not put them at the centre of the screen. It is confusing because they are hidden by the hitburst of the slider.
2. 01:47:254 (3) - Don't change the slider velocity like this all in a sudden, that is really unexpected and will surprise the player who is probably going to break his combo.
   2x is way too much, maybe use a slower one like 1.40x

1. 01:00:552 (1,2) - Same as in ADVANCED.
2. 01:47:254 (3) - Same as in ADVANCED here too, the 2x is not justified here.

MMzz wrote:

From my M4M queue.

[EXHAUST]
I recommend OD8, OD7 for the hardest diff is really easy. This is just my opinion though. - I like OD 7..
Also when applying this mod run the AIMod Tool in editor, there is a nice handful of unsnapped notes you need to fix! - Thank you
(Editor error...)

00:13:037 (7) - I would put the new combo here instead of 00:13:361 (1) - . The next part of the melody starts here and it's on the downbeat, so it's the perfect spot to start a combo. - fixed
00:15:633 - add a note here? There is a beat you can map too, this feels really empty when playing. Example: http://puu.sh/2sIqt - fixed
00:43:037 (1,2) - I think you messed up the sliders here! xD http://puu.sh/2sIwO. Make sure 1 gets snapped to it's proper length. - fixed
00:48:226 (1) - This slider needs to be snapped to it's proper length too, same length as 00:48:551 (2) - . - fixed
00:53:415 (1) - ^ Another slider issue. - fixed

Oh.. So many Editor errors...

[ADVANCED]
00:52:768 (7) - Please place a combo on this note for more recognition. It will help the players know this note is special and possibly slowing down or speeding up. - fixed

Nice mapset, I enjoyed it, awesome song too! I'm really worried about the difficulty gap between NOVICE and ADVANCED though. You should make some sort of normal difficulty so the jump in difficulty isn't so high. - Thx I'll add NORMAL diff

Verlaren wrote:

Yo. From My queue.

General:
deselect Letterbox druring breaks, because you haven't a storyboard - fixed


wkdwlsejr's EASY:
CS -1? - fixed
too many unsnapped patterns. Use distance snap tool please on this diff. - check
00:24:876(1) - this slider is unrankable. Please remake him. - fixed
00:56:173(1,2,3) - too hard for Easy diff - I Don't Think so...
01:28:443(3) - new combo. Do not make on easy diff more than 4 or 5 combo on color. Otherwise it will be difficult for beginners to restore the level of HP
- ^

NOVICE:
about distance...same as Easy
too many NC..
00:10:606(1) - remove NC
00:15:795(1) - ^
00:23:579(1) - ^
00:26:173(1) - ^
00:39:146(1) - ^
00:41:741(1) - slider is unrankable. Please remake him, and remove NC - fixed
00:53:416(1,1,1,1) - spam of NC.
01:01:200(1) - remove NC
01:18:065(1) - ^
01:23:254(1) - ^
01:28:443(1) - ^
01:31:038(1) - ^
01:38:822(1) - ^
01:41:416(1) - ^
01:44:011(1) - ^


ADVANCED:
spam of NC.
All the patterns are not arranged very nice. Think about a permutation patterns


EXHAUST:
CS -1
DR +2 - + 1
AR -1

Good luck.

• [EASY]

1. 00:01:525 (1) - move it to x:212 y:108
2. 00:52:119 (2) - make it like thishttp://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1180.jpg more linear with the (1) slider
3. 00:54:714 (2) - make it from http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1181.jpg to http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1182.jpg looks better
4. 00:58:606 (3) - move it to x:216 y:188

• [Novice]

1. 00:11:903 (1) - make it more symmetrical by moving it to x:148 y:84
2. 00:26:173 (1) - more linear with x:164 y:328

• STANDART

1. 00:44:011 (2) - more linear with x:168 y:56
2. 01:34:606 (3) - more symmetrical with x:312 y:304

• ADVANCED

1. 01:45:957 (1) - not too sure with this stream, too hard?

• EXHAUST

1. can't find anything to mod, nice diff.

AnreFM wrote:

I'll try to mod this, hope this helps
I mainly mod for note placement, so feel free to object

• [EASY]

1. 00:01:525 (1) - move it to x:212 y:108 - No (because keep DS x1.0)
2. 00:52:119 (2) - make it like thishttp://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1180.jpg more linear with the (1) slider - fixed
3. 00:54:714 (2) - make it from http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1181.jpg to http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1182.jpg looks better
   - fixed..?
4. 00:58:606 (3) - move it to x:216 y:188 - I change this part

• [Novice]

1. 00:11:903 (1) - make it more symmetrical by moving it to x:148 y:84 - fixed
2. 00:26:173 (1) - more linear with x:164 y:328 - ??

• STANDART

1. 00:44:011 (2) - more linear with x:168 y:56
2. 01:34:606 (3) - more symmetrical with x:312 y:304

• ADVANCED

1. 01:45:957 (1) - not too sure with this stream, too hard? - fixed

• EXHAUST

1. can't find anything to mod, nice diff. - Thx

Okay i hope that helps, good luck

Arrival wrote:

M4M o/
Nice music, nice map

[dzhuifhzeuighfueirhgierphgeruigheriughei's Easy] <- lol
00:19:687 (1) - Whistle at the end of the slider ? - fixed
01:11:579 (1,2,3) - What about something like that : http://puu.sh/2L29n.jpg + http://puu.sh/2L2aJ.jpg ? - I don't think so...
01:24:552 (1) - This spinner should stop at 01:25:849 - ! - fixed

[NOVICE]
00:39:146 (1) - remove NC i think - I don't think so...
00:58:606 (1) - Put this spinner to 01:00:552 - fixed
01:36:551 (2,3,4) - Finish on these three ? Except the end of the slider (4) - fixed (and (1) added finish)
01:41:416 (1) - Why NC here ? - because follow Beat snap

[Vladimir Putin's Standard] <- loool
I find the tick rate too high imo, i should have down this to 2
00:55:038 (5,6,7) - What about put this like it : http://puu.sh/2L2ML.jpg
01:11:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing error
01:12:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I don't think standard is hard enough to make antijumps
01:19:687 (5) - What about something like this : http://puu.sh/2L2UB.jpg
01:26:011 (5) - NC ?
01:31:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to do something with the spacing
01:41:092 (5,6,7,8,9) - Between these circles too
01:43:362 (2) - This stack doesn't make sense
01:44:984 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again, spacing problem

[ADVANCED]
00:56:173 (1) - Finish ? - I don't think so...
00:56:173 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Why not but i think you can make another pattern here....
- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735507 hehehe
01:20:011 (3) - Finish ? - fixed
01:20:335 (3) - ^ - fixed
01:27:470 (2) - Clap - - fixed
01:30:065 (2) - ^ + 01:32:660 (2) - + 01:33:958 (2) - - fixed~

[EXHAUST]
00:08:335 (2) - Clap here + 00:08:984 (5) - here, or delete claps in 00:07:039 (3) - and 00:07:688 (7) - (but I recommand add claps 00:08:335 (2) and 00:08:984 (5)) - fixed
00:11:254 (3) - NC so people can see the acceleration - fixed
00:43:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - SO NICE TO PLAY - Thank you!
01:08:903 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well i find this kind of overmapped, try to respect the music before making it hard.
- Umm... Just listen to that. A little heard 1/4 Beat...
01:27:470 (3) - Claps here, like i said on the previous difficulty.


Nice mapset, really fun music and map, really want this to get ranked, good luck !

Thank you!

mingmichael wrote:

MineC24 my GD has done
this~ http://puu.sh/2PhFM.osu
>,<

Kloyd wrote:

go

ADVANCED

00:21:957 (6) - (극히 개인적인 생각이지만)드럼소리가 이 음에 맞지 않는것같아요
00:48:552 - 서클 추가 (혹시 하실거라면 다음패턴도)

EXHAUST

와 지존신나네요
00:16:930 - 드럼! 서클!

힛사모딩은 아직 짬이안되서 ㅜㅜ 힛사모딩까지 됬으면 좋았을텐데 저도 개인적으로 아쉽네요

굳맵이셈!! 별박고가요

HelloSCV wrote:

Melt꺼 모딩에 쿠도스 안주신듯 ( 아니면 안고치신건가? ) - 엌ㅋㅋ 깜박ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

General

1. 태그에 SDVX 추가해주세요

- 추가완료

EXHAUST

00:09:308 (1,3,5,6) - 피니시 추가해주세요 - 추가완료
00:17:092 (1) - ^ ( 00:11:903 (1) - 여기도 하셧으니 추가하시는거 추천 ) - 추가완료
00:19:687 (1,6) - ^ - 추가완료
00:21:957 (6) - 최고 난이도인만큼 이 슬라이더 리핏을 좀 늘이시는걸로 추천해요 위치는 다음 슬라이더하고 겹치시거나 약간만 떨어지게 - 이 노래와 매우 비슷한 동 작곡가의 팝핀샤워랑 비슷한 형태로 지은거라... (일종의 오마쥬)
00:24:227 (6) - 2번 리핏보다 슬라 2개가 낫지 않을까요? - 수정완료
00:43:038 (1,2) - 이렇게 꼬아놓은 슬라이더하고 배속은 좀 비추천 드려요 플레이 할때 놓치기가 너무나 쉬워서.. ( 콤보 브레이크의 주요원인 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ ) - 이건 상당히 심혈을 기울여 지은 파트라...
00:45:633 (1,2) - ^ - ^
00:58:606 (1) - 이전 빨간틱으로? - 그 사이인 작은 하얀틱으로..
01:11:903 - 드럼음?이 좀 강한데 비어있으니 좀 어색한거 같아요 여기 노트 추가하시고 다음 노트하고 점프 주시는것도 좋을듯 - 추가완료
01:14:497 (2) - ^ ( 이하 생략할께요 ) - ^
01:37:200 (6) - 전과 같아요 - 앞에서 말한 의견과 같은...
01:47:579 - 여기에서 키아이 끝맺어 주심이? - 수정완료

귀찮아서 1 난이도 모딩 헤헷 굿럭!

Kloyd wrote:

TRANSLATION REQUEST

NO KDS

뭔가 너무 빠른데? 싶었는데 ar이 높았네요 5정도면 괜찮지 않을까요? Isn't it too fast to put AR that high? I recommend 5

00:07:687 (3) - 00:09:308 (6) - 스탠다드(노말) 유저는 아직 이런 노트들은 처리를 못해요. 조금 더 상급 유저들한테는 더 플레이어블 한 요소로 작용할 수도 있는 ctrl +G겠지만 노말유저들한테는 무리가 있을 것 같아요. Actually people who play Normal diffs cannot read those patterns. It can be more playable if these kind of notes, patterns are on Higher difficulty.

00:33:146 - 노말에서는 약간의 1/2서클이 허용이 되요. 리듬 강조를 위해서 이곳에 서클하나 두는건 어떨까요 to put emphasis onto the rhythm, I recommend putting a circle.

00:35:579 (7) - 리듬 표현은 좋은데 노말유저들에게 있어서 플레이어블 한지는 잘 모르겠어요 이전에 있던 리턴슬라이더도 그렇고요
중간중간에 스페이싱을 확바꾼 노트들이 많이보이는데 이 맵 난이도를 혹시 하드로 생각하시면서 찍은건 아닐지 하는 우려가 생기네요. 혹시 그렇다면 난이도명을 standard으로는 하지 않는게 좋을것같아요.
Nice expression considering rhythm. but I think it is not playable on Normal difficulty. There are some drastically-spaced notes, so I guess you thought you're making Hard diff. If I'm right, I think this diff should not be 'Standard'

00:49:402 - 이 브렉타임부분은 뭔가 채워놓는게 좋을것 같아요. 곡은 확실하게 계속되고있으니까 이건 브렉타임이 아니에요.
The song is still ongoing. Putting breaktime here is not a good idea IMO
01:11:903 (2,2) - 음.. 리듬제안입니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760009 Why don't you put rhythm like this?
01:14:497 (2) - 혹시 이 제안을 받아들이실거라면 위의 패턴대로 이 노트도 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요 If you accept my suggestion above, this rhythm should be changed too.
01:25:524 - 서클 하나 넣는건 어떨까요 put a circle
01:31:038 (1,2,4,5) - 모양은 괜찮은데 노말유저들이 갑자기 놀랄만한 패턴이에요(스페이싱때문에) 스택시켜주는게 더 나아보여요
It has good shape, but due to the spacing, It can make players confused. I think stacking is better choice
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - 이런 패턴이 딱히 문제가 되는건 아니에요 리듬적으로는. 근데 이런 패턴은 철저히 스페이싱을 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
The pattern has no problem, but you should keep spacing here if you want to put this.
01:45:795 (6,7,8) - ^
01:47:579 - 서클 add a circle here

_VLaD_ wrote:

Kloyd wrote:

TRANSLATION REQUEST

NO KDS

뭔가 너무 빠른데? 싶었는데 ar이 높았네요 5정도면 괜찮지 않을까요? Isn't it too fast to put AR that high? I recommend 5

00:07:687 (3) - 00:09:308 (6) - 스탠다드(노말) 유저는 아직 이런 노트들은 처리를 못해요. 조금 더 상급 유저들한테는 더 플레이어블 한 요소로 작용할 수도 있는 ctrl +G겠지만 노말유저들한테는 무리가 있을 것 같아요. Actually people who play Normal diffs cannot read those patterns. It can be more playable if these kind of notes, patterns are on Higher difficulty.

00:33:146 - 노말에서는 약간의 1/2서클이 허용이 되요. 리듬 강조를 위해서 이곳에 서클하나 두는건 어떨까요 to put emphasis onto the rhythm, I recommend putting a circle.

00:35:579 (7) - 리듬 표현은 좋은데 노말유저들에게 있어서 플레이어블 한지는 잘 모르겠어요 이전에 있던 리턴슬라이더도 그렇고요
중간중간에 스페이싱을 확바꾼 노트들이 많이보이는데 이 맵 난이도를 혹시 하드로 생각하시면서 찍은건 아닐지 하는 우려가 생기네요. 혹시 그렇다면 난이도명을 standard으로는 하지 않는게 좋을것같아요.
Nice expression considering rhythm. but I think it is not playable on Normal difficulty. There are some drastically-spaced notes, so I guess you thought you're making Hard diff. If I'm right, I think this diff should not be 'Standard'

00:49:402 - 이 브렉타임부분은 뭔가 채워놓는게 좋을것 같아요. 곡은 확실하게 계속되고있으니까 이건 브렉타임이 아니에요.
The song is still ongoing. Putting breaktime here is not a good idea IMO
01:11:903 (2,2) - 음.. 리듬제안입니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760009 Why don't you put rhythm like this?
01:14:497 (2) - 혹시 이 제안을 받아들이실거라면 위의 패턴대로 이 노트도 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요 If you accept my suggestion above, this rhythm should be changed too.
01:25:524 - 서클 하나 넣는건 어떨까요 put a circle
01:31:038 (1,2,4,5) - 모양은 괜찮은데 노말유저들이 갑자기 놀랄만한 패턴이에요(스페이싱때문에) 스택시켜주는게 더 나아보여요
It has good shape, but due to the spacing, It can make players confused. I think stacking is better choice
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - 이런 패턴이 딱히 문제가 되는건 아니에요 리듬적으로는. 근데 이런 패턴은 철저히 스페이싱을 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
The pattern has no problem, but you should keep spacing here if you want to put this.
01:45:795 (6,7,8) - ^
01:47:579 - 서클 add a circle here

Thx Kloyd.
all fix*

HelloSCV wrote:

M4M

General

1. check tag plz

wkdwlsejr's Easy

1. 몇몇부분이 좀 오버맵된거 같지만 그래도 괜찮아 보이네요

01:46:606 - 키아이 시작점이나 끝지점은 노트나 슬라이더가 있어야해요 수정해주세요

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1. 노말이나 이지에서는 2번째 긴 흰색틱마다 뉴콤보 넣으시는거 추천드려요 ( 특히 01:01:200 (1) - 이런 것들은 정말 불필요하다 생각해요 )

• 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이

00:16:443 (2) - 방금전 슬라처럼 1/2로 두시는게 박자감있고 좋아보여요 - 이건 난이도상으로 봐도 그렇고 뭔가 조금 애매해서 그냥 공백으로...
00:32:660 (1,1) - 스핀-슬라 간 거리가 너무 짧지 않나요? - 수정완료
00:53:416 (1) - HP바 닿아요 - 수정완료
01:24:552 (1,1) - 아까와 같아요 - 수정완료
01:31:686 (2) - 여기도 아시겠죠? - ??

VLaD's STANDARD

00:13:849 (1) - delete NC 00:14:497 (3) - add it here
01:12:876 (1) - delete NC
01:31:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - aren't these too hard?
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:45:470 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:46:930 (9) - NC
01:50:497 - please end kiai time here or 01:47:903 - here ( Kiai end should not be placed during spinner )

ADVANCED

1. 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이

00:08:822 (3) - 여기에 노트 추가하심이? 좀 비는 느낌이네요
00:08:984 (6) - 1/4 보다는 1/2가 낫지 않을까요? ( 물론 리핏은 빼고 )
00:18:714 (2,3) - 방금 처럼 1/4슬라이더? ( 단순 일관성 때문이에요 )
01:10:281 (3) - NC 넣으시고 1/2 슬라이더 2개로?
01:18:065 (3) - NC
01:40:443 (2) - 노트? 여기만 비어두니좀 이상하고 키아이니까 넣으면 좀더 신나지 않을까요

전부 수정!!

굿렄

1. Change AR to 3 or 4?
2. 00:52:119 (2) - delete white point in center?
3. 00:56:173 (1,2,3) - really confusing part. Maybe replace it with spinner?
4. 01:02:497 (2,1) - make it symmetrical. Try to move slidertails to x=256
5. 01:24:227 (4) - move to (468,208) to make better flow?
6. 01:44:011 (3) - replace it with rotated 01:42:714 (1)?
7. 01:45:876 (2) - please move it to 01:45:957. You can make something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:05:416 (2) - Try to make better blanket with 00:04:119 (1). Remember to keep 1.00 spacing.
2. 00:09:308 (1) - What about to move (208,244) point to (212,244)? Then You'll have slider tick between these points.
3. 00:23:579 (1) - Make better blanket with (2).
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:41:741 (1) - Improve the shape. Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:45:633 (1) - I suggest You to make red points in white ticks to follow the rhythm, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:00:876 (1) - Remove it? It can be a bit confusing.
7. 01:19:362 (1) - Rotate it a bit to make slider paralel with previous circles. Example:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:21:957 (1,1) - Make better symmetry?
9. 01:38:822 (1) - same as 00:23:579.
10. 01:47:903 (1,1) - make same as in STANDARD diff? This diff should be easier than STANDARD.

1. What about to change hitsounds to soft in part 01:01:200 - 01:11:579 as in EXHAUST diff.
2. 00:32:660 (1,2,3,4) - Try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:26:011 (1,2) - It's confusing. Replace it with slider or make something other.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:41:416 - Add note to make it more clear?

1. 00:39:795 (4) - move it to ~(280,271) to make better spacing and straight line.
2. 01:00:552 (1,2) - unstack? It's a bit strange imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:25:524 (7) - Ctrl+G and move up to make more readable with next circles pattern.
4. 01:27:470 (2) - add reverse
5. 01:28:768 (2) - ^
6. 01:30:389 (4,5,6,7) - Unstack, it's confusing (similar pattern to 01:30:065 (2,3) but not 1/4).

1. 01:08:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why so weird stream shape? :O
   Really good diff

_VLaD_ wrote:

star! ~

1. It would be nicer to use the same kiai time on all the difficulties if possible.

1. 00:58:606 (1) - This spinner feels too short for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, try making it longer.
2. 01:20:660 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
3. 01:24:552 (1) - Make this spinner end with soft-hitnormal, not normal-hitnormal, sounds too loud.
4. 01:45:957 (2) - This slider has too many repeats and it might be confusing for beginners.

1. 00:10:606 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
2. 00:26:173 (1) - This slider has too many repeats and it might be confusing for beginners.
3. 00:35:254 (1) - Probably a bit too soon after spinner, try to center it a bit more at least.
4. 00:54:714 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
5. 00:57:470 (1) - Same as above.
6. 01:00:876 (1,1) - I'm not sure but these two notes after spinner might be confusing to see for beginners.
7. 01:41:416 (1) - This slider has too many repeats and it might be confusing for beginners.

1. Reduce OD by 1 tick, it's too high right now.

1. 00:04:119 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:09:308 (6) - Same as above.
3. 00:11:254 (10,1) - Wrong spacing here, check it carefully.
4. 00:18:389 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
5. 00:19:362 (4,1,2,3) - Wrong spacing once again, please make it consistent.
6. 00:29:741 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
7. 00:29:741 (6,7,8) - Again, inconsistent spacing.
8. 00:34:930 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
9. 00:50:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing of this pattern is completely inconsistent and feels random, rearrange it.
10. 00:55:038 (5,6,7) - Again, spacing is wrong.
11. 01:41:092 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above.
12. 01:45:308 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
13. 01:46:930 (10,1) - New combo should start on 10 and not on 1, music actually changes there.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.

1. 00:58:606 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 back so it's easier to play.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.

1. 00:45:633 (1,2) - These two sliders could be stacked better together.
2. 01:12:065 (3) - New combo due to the jump and new pattern.
3. 01:12:876 (8) - Same as above.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

~EXHAUST~
[*]01:12:065 (3) - New combo due to the jump and new pattern. - I don't think so...
[*]01:12:876 (8) - Same as above. - I don't think so...

Kiiwa wrote:

from #modreqs

[EXHAUST]

1. 00:11:416 - Make it a soft hitsound timing point instead. You can still hear it when it's on normal 10%. - fixed
2. 00:12:227 (3) - Add a clap. - fixed Thx~
3. 00:21:957 (6) - This should end at 00:22:241 - Also, maybe try adding normal whistle?
   - this slider hommage by https://osu.ppy.sh/s/42527 (This song analogous by this
   but added whistle
4. 00:22:281 - Add a finish. - fixed
5. 00:22:281 - 00:32:335 - Why is there no claps between here? - because this pattern is different to 00:11:903 ~ 00:22:281
6. 00:57:146 (5,1) - Distance should probably be bigger here. - fixed
7. 00:58:606 - Again, I suggest you to make it soft hitsound timing point. - fixed. Thx~
8. 01:21:957 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Could be arranged better... Even a bigger spacing would help I think. - I don't think so...
9. 01:37:200 (6) - Same as 00:21:957 - same reason
10. 01:37:524 - 01:47:579 - No claps yet again? - same reason..

Not so sure about the use of sudden X2.0 SV use here...

rest seems ok :3

aabc271 wrote:

I was browsing the pending map thread and saw this mapset which has too few taiko mods.
So I'm coming for a Taiko mod and hopefully more taiko mods will come ~
Anyway, let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[ m1ng's Taiko Oni]

No technical issues found. Click the below box for patterns and hitsounds suggestions.

Suggested patterns

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.
As some of my suggestions have long explanation. Feel free to find me in game if you need more help.

00:16:768 ( 3 ) - Red note ? ( If you listen carefully, you can notice in the last 5 notes of the stream sound like kddkd. [color=#FF00FF] As 00:16:687 ( 2 ) has a higher pitch than ( 3 ), I'd suggest using d here )nice check>.>! changed
01:32:011 ( 3 ) - ^ ( Same reason ) changed

00:32:660 ( 1,1,1,2,3 ) - O OO O O ? ( All finish ) ( All these notes are emphasized by the music and therefore finishes fit better imo. Also as 1,1,2,3 have a falling pitch, it's better to use sth like kkkd to show it's pitch difference. What I suggested can fit the falling pitch of music better imo ) hmmm, okay that's right explanation. okay, i changed it K KK K D

00:42:714 ~ 00:44:173 - Use this ( Highlighted 1~12 ) instead ? ( The big K for emphasizing the background heavy beats are the highlights of this section. So I'd like to see them not only in 00:44:335 & 00:45:633 so as to keep the style consistent. What I suggested is basically very similar to 00:45:633 for the sake of consistency. I believe using the suggested patterns can improve the overall consistent feeling a lot. The suggested (1) is to avoid monotonous 3 Ks in a row. ) great! XD i changed and fixed it

Overall a very nicely-made diff
The intense feeling is brought by the streams. Patterns and hitsounds also fit each other well.
Great job :3



The map should be ready to go after fixing.
Again, oni is nicely-made :3 >w< thanks there~

Star and good luck ~

aabc271 wrote:

I was browsing the pending map thread and saw this mapset which has too few taiko mods.
So I'm coming for a Taiko mod and hopefully more taiko mods will come ~
Anyway, let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

[ Taiko Muzukashii]

• I wonder who mapped this? Maybe you should add mapper's name into the diff name , or at least in the description page ?
- mapper by me
• This diff looks like a simple oni rather than muzu imo. The use of even-number endings, eg 00:12:227 ( 49~52 ), 01:21:957 ( 50~66 ), and frequent uses of finishes make this diff less friendly to muzu players. I'd suggest deleting some 3-plets 1/4 and some unnecessary finishes to simply this diff. PM me if you need further help. - some fixed, But I keep 'muzukashii' diff name

• 01:47:254 ( 201, 1 ) - I'd suggest replacing the slider with this. Remember to move the starting point of the spinner, but it's ending point unchanged. ( This is to allow the spinner to start at the correct position, and fit the oni diff ) - change slider. but no change spin


[box=Suggested patterns]Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:21:957 ( 110 ) - Add finish ? ( To fit oni diff, which you have added finish ) - nope..
01:37:200 ( 142 ) - ^ ( Same reason ) - nope.. I keep muzukashii

00:32:660 ( 163~168 ) - O OO O O ? ( All finish ) ( Look at oni's box for reasons. I'm not repeating here. ) - nope..

Overall ok. Just thinking this might be too difficult for a muzu.

removed witten mods -> fixed

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The map should be ready to go after fixing.
Again, oni is nicely-made :3

Star and good luck ~

mingmichael wrote:

ohyah~! here Mice~
http://puu.sh/3gGuJ.osu

MineC24 wrote:

mingmichael wrote:

ohyah~! here Mice~
http://puu.sh/3gGuJ.osu

Mice..? orz

And Update~~

CLSW wrote:

지금 ctb맵 만들어봐도 될까요..?

MineC24 wrote:

CLSW wrote:

지금 ctb맵 만들어봐도 될까요..?

음... 좀 애매한데.....

만들은 ctb 맵을 따로 추가다운 하도록 하면 안될까요..?

ctb 모더가 너무 없어서 랭크목적으로 ctb맵을 넣는기 부담이 너무 큰...

Leorda wrote:

Yow


[NOVICE]
00:56:173 (1,2) - Using too much repeating slider can confuse beginners because they don't know when it's end. Consider to decrease the number of repeating slider - fixed
01:07:687 (2) - Having placement like this can makes a linear flow, it can be break the flow. The previous slider is a curve slider and this must place beside the previous slider to create a circular flow pattern. Try to move this to X:360 and Y:224, and you should end up like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/833498
- fixed. but some change place

[ADVANCED]
00:50:173 (6,7,8) - Spacing error or it's intentional? - no. it's my self
00:51:470 (3,4,5) - Due this pattern, it can be break the flow, because it using a linear flow pattern. Why not using a spiral flow pattern? Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/833553 - 50% = fixed, 50% = change some pattern


Good luck

ZHSteven wrote:

01:47:903 (1,1,2) - not good, just not good, highly suggest changing to something other.

1. 00:13:200 (1,2,3,4) - I really wouldn't HDash both sliders, as it seems pretty extreme atm. Try to move (2) and (4) altogether to the left, to make the jump more handable and to de-stack (1,2) as well. That's only to make sth similar to the previous pattern, cos the notes of the melody are just the same.
2. 00:14:497 (1,2,3,4) - And here, honestly, a vertical slider after some complete horizontal ones don't fit at all. If you're out of space, move (2) more to the right, and (3) as well. Then, you can make that slider horizontal as well. Take care of the new spacing (3,4) that it's enough wide. It doesn't really matter if the HDashes (1,2) and (2,3) dissapear, since they're not really necessary.
3. 00:21:957 (4) - It's not a problem at all to add 2 repetitions more to this slider.
4. 01:37:200 (4) - ^ This is the same slider as before. If you applied the previous suggestion, you must do the same here.
5. 00:28:687 - Is it possible for you to add another note here? The melody suggest to have a triplet in this point.
6. 01:38:741 - ^ Same point of the melody, but in the 2nd chorus.
7. 00:30:714 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why do these sliders have to be HDashed? Wouldn't it be better to move (6) and (8) to the left to avoid a conditioned movement of the ryuuta? You can move (6) 2 grids left and (8) 2, or even just one left too.
8. 00:35:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There are not 1, but 2 triplets according to the music here, but with the current formation you have, it's quite difficult to make sth that looks good. Try out something like THIS.
9. 00:42:389 (9,10) - C'MON MAN!! (8) Even the singer suggests to make sth more interesting here wwwww. Let's see if you like THIS, creating a proper HDash for the occasion.
10. 00:50:497 (9) - Same as a previous slider, 1 repetition more is still possible to add. I don't think the Dash with the next slider would be so difficult to manage.
11. 00:52:119 (1,2) - They fit better to be vertical sliders, with HDash between them. Just hear the music! There's a difference of rhythm on those notes.
12. 00:58:606 (6) - It cannot be in that position. The strenght of the HDash (5,6) is doubled compared to (4,5). Though there's not a real strong note there, I'd rather let that circle in the middle of the screen.
13. 00:58:768 - Maybe a spinner here? It's a short break and it can be used to make more differences in the final score.
14. 01:00:552 (1,2,3,4) - Too, too extreme. Place the notes (1,2,3) with a normal Dash if you want, but not with a HDash that doesn't fit at all to those low notes. A HDash (3,4) is much recommendable though.
15. 01:02:011 (6,7) - 01:02:254 (8,9) - 01:02:660 (2,3,4) - and so on... Not a good idea in my opinion. But let's see what other people think about them...
16. 01:08:903 - Add a note there. You can hear that a 3plet is needed.
17. 01:09:795 (4,5) - And here, instead of a 3plet+note, I can here 2 2plets.
18. 01:13:524 (3,4,5,6) - Here would fit 2 inclined sliders instead of those notes. Something similar to what you have a bit later, at 01:15:470 (1,2).
19. 01:20:660 - The spinner is too close to the notes. Add a circle here and start the spinner at least 1/2 later (01:20:822).
20. 01:21:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Take care here, since there's the normal melody as before and a lower volumed one quite close. I mean, there's a clear difference in the melody, but not at all in the map! Make the distance between the notes in the calm part MUCH lower than normal, putting the notes more close to each other and making those sliders not so horizontal.
21. 01:23:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is the same here =(
22. 01:25:362 (1) - Does this slider end in a blue tick? Ew, no... Remove one repetition of it, please.
23. 01:25:362 (1,1,1) - It's probably better to make those 3 elements at the same distance.
24. The 2nd chorus (kiai time) is almost a copy of the 1st one. You can apply most of the suggestions mentioned before.
25. There are other points where more notes could've been added, but I guess the mapper didn't plan to "overmap" the diff too much. Some examples are 01:15:389 - , 01:17:984 - , 01:18:633 - ,...
26. 01:46:930 (1,1,1,2) - Hm... it looks really strange. Maybe it can be replaced by a spinner or so.

00:13:200 (1,2,3,4) - I really wouldn't HDash both sliders, as it seems pretty extreme atm. Try to move (2) and (4) altogether to the left, to make the jump more handable and to de-stack (1,2) as well. That's only to make sth similar to the previous pattern, cos the notes of the melody are just the same. fixed
00:14:497 (1,2,3,4) - And here, honestly, a vertical slider after some complete horizontal ones don't fit at all. If you're out of space, move (2) more to the right, and (3) as well. Then, you can make that slider horizontal as well. Take care of the new spacing (3,4) that it's enough wide. It doesn't really matter if the HDashes (1,2) and (2,3) dissapear, since they're not really necessary. fixed
00:21:957 (4) - It's not a problem at all to add 2 repetitions more to this slider.
01:37:200 (4) - ^ This is the same slider as before. If you applied the previous suggestion, you must do the same here.
00:28:687 - Is it possible for you to add another note here? The melody suggest to have a triplet in this point. added
01:38:741 - ^ Same point of the melody, but in the 2nd chorus. added
00:30:714 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why do these sliders have to be HDashed? Wouldn't it be better to move (6) and (8) to the left to avoid a conditioned movement of the ryuuta? You can move (6) 2 grids left and (8) 2, or even just one left too. fixed
00:35:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There are not 1, but 2 triplets according to the music here, but with the current formation you have, it's quite difficult to make sth that looks good. Try out something like THIS. fixed
00:42:389 (9,10) - C'MON MAN!! (8) Even the singer suggests to make sth more interesting here wwwww. Let's see if you like THIS, creating a proper HDash for the occasion. fixed
00:50:497 (9) - Same as a previous slider, 1 repetition more is still possible to add. I don't think the Dash with the next slider would be so difficult to manage. remapped
00:52:119 (1,2) - They fit better to be vertical sliders, with HDash between them. Just hear the music! There's a difference of rhythm on those notes. fixed
00:58:606 (6) - It cannot be in that position. The strenght of the HDash (5,6) is doubled compared to (4,5). Though there's not a real strong note there, I'd rather let that circle in the middle of the screen. fixed
00:58:768 - Maybe a spinner here? It's a short break and it can be used to make more differences in the final score.
01:00:552 (1,2,3,4) - Too, too extreme. Place the notes (1,2,3) with a normal Dash if you want, but not with a HDash that doesn't fit at all to those low notes. A HDash (3,4) is much recommendable though. already fixed but keep hyperdash with lower distance
01:02:011 (6,7) - 01:02:254 (8,9) - 01:02:660 (2,3,4) - and so on... Not a good idea in my opinion. But let's see what other people think about them... already fixed and remapped
01:08:903 - Add a note there. You can hear that a 3plet is needed. added
01:09:795 (4,5) - And here, instead of a 3plet+note, I can here 2 2plets. remapped
01:13:524 (3,4,5,6) - Here would fit 2 inclined sliders instead of those notes. Something similar to what you have a bit later, at 01:15:470 (1,2). fixed
01:20:660 - The spinner is too close to the notes. Add a circle here and start the spinner at least 1/2 later (01:20:822). fixed
01:21:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Take care here, since there's the normal melody as before and a lower volumed one quite close. I mean, there's a clear difference in the melody, but not at all in the map! Make the distance between the notes in the calm part MUCH lower than normal, putting the notes more close to each other and making those sliders not so horizontal. fixed
01:23:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is the same here =(
01:25:362 (1) - Does this slider end in a blue tick? Ew, no... Remove one repetition of it, please. oops, bad mistake fixed
01:25:362 (1,1,1) - It's probably better to make those 3 elements at the same distance. fixed
The 2nd chorus (kiai time) is almost a copy of the 1st one. You can apply most of the suggestions mentioned before.
There are other points where more notes could've been added, but I guess the mapper didn't plan to "overmap" the diff too much. Some examples are 01:15:389 - , 01:17:984 - , 01:18:633 - ,...
01:46:930 (1,1,1,2) - Hm... it looks really strange. Maybe it can be replaced by a spinner or so. fixed, but kept last 2 objects.

[CRYSTAL'S CTB INFINITE]

HP7? I think 8 is better, maybe a bit harsh but it looks better with AR/OD9. And fit better to the maps difficulty. It will be insane if I change drain to 8+...

00:32:660 (1) - Place a bit closer to 00:31:362 (1) - since its luck based to catch due because you are moving with dash to the other direction at the previous slider. And to suddenly change your way of moving, I dunno I think its pretty hard. And as I played several times, I don't really want to be there. So I think if you place it closer it would fit the music better. Fixed direction of slider
01:26:011 (1,2,3,4) - In this combo, place (4) a bit closer because with the current dash system its too luck based to catch this kind of jump. I placed at x416 y:96 and I catched it every time after. fixed

Even thou I can't play this kind of diffs very well, I think this is a pretty good diff. Good work. Be lucky and get it ranked.

ZHSteven wrote:

Finally got time to look at it~~

First I want to state this pattern: 00:37:849 (1,2) -

1

When you want to use a reverse short slider, always make sure your spacing can make the top and bottom note of the slider stack a little from each other. This is too prevent too high sv makes the short slider plays not fun. Suggestion:

2

remember this kind of slider can be treat as a "triangle triplet pattern", and this kind of spacing is not suitable for a triangle.

Fixed. No triangle triplets here.



Then I want to say something about your sv.

SPOILER

Yes, it will be fun when use it wisely, and it is challenge for pro player, but it requires a very very high technique of mapping. Your spacing of a jump is almost the same as your spacing inside a slider, makes your map exceed of jump. So you must have an excellent flow to connect each jump, otherwise it will gives players an impression of" jumping everywhere, cannot loose shift button" and finally makes a lot of player cannot enjoy the map. These kind of map is easily fall into the trick of put jump only for jump.
So if you insist to use high SV to map, these is what I suggest:
1. always think twice when you put slider, and test play frequently to make sure the slider is suitable for your flow.
2. Slider+jump should not be used frequently. Because your slider is already a big jump, this is too prevent an exceed of jump in map.
3. jump MUST have a good flow. A bad flow is still ok for a normal sv map, just not comfortable to play; but here, if you cannot make it well, it will makes the map unplayable.

00:06:714 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is what I mean by"an exceed of jump". might be better if you decrease the spacing for some of the sliders or the spacing between the sliders. there is also a lot in the rest of the map but I am not going to point out. All I want to say here is, think twice.

This was inspirated pattern from DaxMasterix's DECO*27 feat. marina - Aimai Elegy [Red Light ~CtB~] and I don't want to fix this or decrease SV.

00:12:227 (3,4) - I would suggest you to reduce the spacing for 1 slider.(also for the following 4 pattern) fixed
00:14:497 (1,2,3) - dont like the Hyperdash, but I dont have any ideas from now on. (not able to handle the spacing..)

Fixed

00:19:200 (4,5) - remove hyperdash. And please check whether your hyperdash can be removed at previous pattern, I am afraid of these series of pattern got HD spam, and please control your spacing not to make jump everywhere, let player have a rest. This CtB diff is Overdose difficulty. I think players who can play Overdoses have enough skills to catch these patterns..

00:26:173 (1,2) - I cannot see any reason that this should be hyperdashed.
00:28:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change to something else? not good to have a reverse triangle here. (half repeat pattern) eh, I think these are necessary.
00:42:308 (8,9) - please follow the spacing as 00:41:984 (4,5) - (x0.64) fixed
00:43:038 (1,2) - remove hyperdash.
00:45:633 (1,2) - ^ remapped, but keep hyperdashes.
00:46:768 (4,1) - remove hyperdash if possible. fixed
00:48:227 (1,2) - make a short movement between these 2.
00:50:822 (1,2) - ^ Aimai Elegy. No comments.
00:52:119 (1,2) - half the spacing for each slider. you will get better flow.
00:53:416 (1,2) - create a movement fixed
00:57:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion:

3

uh, not really.
01:06:389 (1) - half the spacing for this slider, and delete the last reverse. try this.

4

fixed with lower spacing, but I don't want to delete the reverse cuz I hate to put 8+ grid(actually 8+ grid jumps at 185 bpm require exact and perfect timings, I don't like these.)jumps.
01:08:984 (1,2,3) - short movement between sliders. fixed
01:10:606 (2) - full spacing for this slider.
01:18:065 (1,2,3) - remove hyperdash. fixed, but I remapped this one, you won't like it.
01:18:714 (4,5) - remove hyperdash if possible. ^
01:20:011 (5) - better make this stream from left to right. [color=#FF0000e8]fixed[/color]
01:24:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - think twice before you put this. Really not suitable to put full spacing hyperdashed “く” pattern here. fixed. \ (1/4 jump) /
01:49:606 (1,2) - this trick is awful... consider reduce the spacing fixed


This mod is a little be out of my hand, so this mod maybe not helpful.
Again, find other player test play this map, not only the pro player, but also some normal standard player, and collect the suggestion. I am sure that will improve it a lot.


That's all.

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Please tell me what did you fix and did not fix. It can help my mod quality improved


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1. The Slider Velocity of this difficulty is very high. By using all the time completely straight sliders the whole mapset gets extremely picky. Maybe that was your idea behind that and it's okay but please try to avoid that in further mapsets. I also highly suggest you to play more with slider shapes in your next map. In CtB not everything has to be straightened and you might play a bit with sliders to make special parts more interesting. I also must say that I cannot mod much here since this is not really my mapping style and I am not relative with this this super hard style. Anyway, let's see what I can find.
2. 00:08:011 (1,1) - Those sliders are too sharp. Please try to make this part just a bit softer by making those sliders a bit more sloping. same counts for parts where you used similar patterns. You should not abuse of those spiky sliders even though you think it's fitting in an overdose.
3. 00:19:200 (4,5) - The hyperdash on this place is not making any sense. If we listen clear to the rhythm here a jump is better fitting on 00:19:362 (5,6) - . However, I do not see a reason to put a hyperdash here since a normal but also challenging dash is quite enough here already.
4. 00:28:768 (1,2,3) - The problem on this hyperdash is that your catcher doesn't get cushioned by the fruits in the opposite direction. I suppose you tried to keep a symmetry here with the previous triplet but if do such a sharp movement to the right it is better if the slider is softly absorbed. If you do not understand what I mean try this here, that plays more comfortable because your Ryuuta doesn't have to stop so abruptly after the hyperdash. However, it is still challenging and only gives this part a better flow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/871793
5. 00:30:714 (5,6,7,8) - Those fruits still can be closer. This part is very challenging and can lead to extremely frustrating moments.
6. 00:46:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them more lopsided to the inner side. That gives the part a much better flow. Here a suggestion: http://puu.sh/3F79X.jpg
7. 00:58:200 (4,5) - To make this part even a bit more challenging you can think of making these circles a bit more outwardly than 00:57:470 (1) - and 00:57:957 (3) - . That also fits to the rhythm and it is FC'able. This is a good place where 2 HDashes in a row make sense because the Ryuuta softly goes back to the middle of the screen again.
8. 01:24:795 (4,5) - A HDash is too much here, there's nothing that really fits with it. You can make a Dash here but I suggest you to reduce the spacing here a bit.
9. 01:46:119 (6,7) - This jump is just ugly. Just go on with a normal stream here. The map was already hard enough. There doesn't need to be an unreadable HDash in the middle of a stream. And the rhythm is not even quite special here, so that a HDash doesn't make any sense at all.
10. 01:47:903 (1) - You cannot put the spinner like this in your difficulty. If we look on the Ranking Criterias 1/2 distance is acceptable but there's a factor that affects it: "depending on the BPM of the song and length of the spinner self, fruits are largely indistinguishable from spinner fruits when too close together." You have a song with a pretty high BPM, so I suggest you not to use only a 1/2 distance here. After a spinner it's better to leave a bit more of distance. I highly suggest you the following time section: http://puu.sh/3F83k.jpg

Sey wrote:

[CRYSTAL'S CTB INFINITE]

1. The Slider Velocity of this difficulty is very high. By using all the time completely straight sliders the whole mapset gets extremely picky. Maybe that was your idea behind that and it's okay but please try to avoid that in further mapsets. I also highly suggest you to play more with slider shapes in your next map. In CtB not everything has to be straightened and you might play a bit with sliders to make special parts more interesting. I also must say that I cannot mod much here since this is not really my mapping style and I am not relative with this this super hard style. Anyway, let's see what I can find.
2. 00:08:011 (1,1) - Those sliders are too sharp. Please try to make this part just a bit softer by making those sliders a bit more sloping. same counts for parts where you used similar patterns. You should not abuse of those spiky sliders even though you think it's fitting in an overdose. decreased 1 grid
3. 00:19:200 (4,5) - The hyperdash on this place is not making any sense. If we listen clear to the rhythm here a jump is better fitting on 00:19:362 (5,6) - . However, I do not see a reason to put a hyperdash here since a normal but also challenging dash is quite enough here already.
   I added hyperdashes at every sampling sounds 'HO!', and I remapped this parts.
4. 00:28:768 (1,2,3) - The problem on this hyperdash is that your catcher doesn't get cushioned by the fruits in the opposite direction. I suppose you tried to keep a symmetry here with the previous triplet but if do such a sharp movement to the right it is better if the slider is softly absorbed. If you do not understand what I mean try this here, that plays more comfortable because your Ryuuta doesn't have to stop so abruptly after the hyperdash. However, it is still challenging and only gives this part a better flow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/871793 fixed with your suggestion
5. 00:30:714 (5,6,7,8) - Those fruits still can be closer. This part is very challenging and can lead to extremely frustrating moments. decreased 1 grid
6. 00:46:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them more lopsided to the inner side. That gives the part a much better flow. Here a suggestion: http://puu.sh/3F79X.jpg fixed, but I added hyperdash myself on the fore part of this pattern, so I fixed that with reverse way.
7. 00:58:200 (4,5) - To make this part even a bit more challenging you can think of making these circles a bit more outwardly than 00:57:470 (1) - and 00:57:957 (3) - . That also fits to the rhythm and it is FC'able. This is a good place where 2 HDashes in a row make sense because the Ryuuta softly goes back to the middle of the screen again. fixed with my style. good
8. 01:24:795 (4,5) - A HDash is too much here, there's nothing that really fits with it. You can make a Dash here but I suggest you to reduce the spacing here a bit. I think dashes don't fit at this point, therefore I added stream slider and deleted hyperdash.
9. 01:46:119 (6,7) - This jump is just ugly. Just go on with a normal stream here. The map was already hard enough. There doesn't need to be an unreadable HDash in the middle of a stream. And the rhythm is not even quite special here, so that a HDash doesn't make any sense at all. fixed
10. 01:47:903 (1) - You cannot put the spinner like this in your difficulty. If we look on the Ranking Charts 1/2 distance is acceptable but there's a factor that affects it: "depending on the BPM of the song and length of the spinner self, fruits are largely indistinguishable from spinner fruits when too close together." You have a song with a pretty high BPM, so I suggest you not to use only a 1/2 distance here. After a spinner it's better to leave a bit more of distance. I highly suggest you the following time section: http://puu.sh/3F83k.jpg

fixed

I wish you good luck with your map. Try to get more mods and get inspirations by other people. That overdose still needs improvement. Work on it and it has potential to get ranked sooner or later.