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P*Light - TRIGGER*HAPPY [Taiko|Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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MineC24
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MineC24
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 12월 9일 월요일 at 오후 5:26:27

Artist: P*Light
Title: TRIGGER*HAPPY
Source: SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH
Tags: SDVX REFLEC BEAT colette [ UniCiTy ] wkdwlsejr8 _VLaD_ mingmichael CLSW
BPM: 185
Filesize: 2715kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. 24's Muzukashii (4.67 stars, 530 notes)
  2. ADVANCED (5 stars, 320 notes)
  3. Crystal's INFINITE (5 stars, 460 notes)
  4. EXHAUST (4.9 stars, 486 notes)
  5. m1ng's Oni (4.78 stars, 769 notes)
  6. NOVICE (3.63 stars, 141 notes)
  7. UniCiTy's EASY (2.41 stars, 109 notes)
  8. VLaD's STANDARD (4.3 stars, 203 notes)
Download: P*Light - TRIGGER*HAPPY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Rank Beatmap!!

My 3rd Beatmap!

It's SOUND VOLTEX Original Song!!

If you DL before 2013/10/20, Re-Download please :D

Guest Diff Thanks : UniCiTy _VLaD_ mingmichael CLSW

Taiko Muzukashii : ★★★★★★★☆
Taiko Oni : ★★★★★★★★★★

Fix note
1/21 Uplode
1/23 Add EASY Guest Diff
1/28 Check Modding
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4/13 Add NOVICE Diff
4/17 Add NORMAL Guest Diff
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5/9 Add Taiko Oni(Guest Diff), Taiko Muzukashii Diff
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[ UniCiTy ]
56 posts
Joined January 2012
[ UniCiTy ]
http://blogattach.naver.net/a431b80b102 ... attachment
Star 2.15
히트 효과음까지 있어서 압축해드립니다. 파일만 안에 덮어 씌우시면 됩니다 ;)
:) :) :) :) :) :) :D
(크롬 사용이나 링크가 안뜰시 번역 헤제/새로고침후 링크 뜨면 눌러주세요)
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
Hi~ from my modding queue

[General]
Seems to be fine.

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
omg.... dat diff name.... hard to write :D
lol wat, Overall Difficulty 0? Raise by +2.

00:01:525 (1,2) - Personally, I would have arranged this different but ATM I can't figure out how.
00:14:497 (1) - New combo, please.
00:40:443 (1,2) - Ugly sliders. Please change them.
01:10:281 (2) - :!: This is tricky. All the previous sliders have one repeat. But newer players will be tricked because this one has two.
01:23:254 (3) - Covered by (1)'s hitburst.
SPOILER
Don't mind the "Autoplay enabled" note

Diff was quite good actually

[ADVANCED]
00:24:227 (3) - Awkward slider. Please remake it so it is longer.
00:32:011 (5) - Please make a perfect wave.
SPOILER
00:42:389 (3) - Again. ^
00:43:038 (1,2) - Strange sliders. No need to change yet recommended.
00:44:335 (1,2) - ^
00:45:633 (1,2) - ^
00:46:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please set Finish hitsound on (1), (3) and (5) only.
01:09:633 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:930 (3) - Perfect wave, please.
01:47:254 (3) - :!: I really disapprove of sudden slider velocity changes. Consider removing this.

[EXHAUST]
00:03:471 (3,4,5) - Space properly or make anti-jump.
00:11:254 (3) - :!: Perfect wave, please + Sudden slider velocity change.... again.
00:32:011 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Those jumps and anti-jumps don't fit. Really.
00:51:795 (7) - Slider end doesn't look too good.

That's it! 8-)

Cool mapset!
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi~ from my modding queue

[General]
Seems to be fine.

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
omg.... dat diff name.... hard to write :D
lol wat, Overall Difficulty 0? Raise by +2.

00:01:525 (1,2) - Personally, I would have arranged this different but ATM I can't figure out how.
00:14:497 (1) - New combo, please.
00:40:443 (1,2) - Ugly sliders. Please change them.
01:10:281 (2) - :!: This is tricky. All the previous sliders have one repeat. But newer players will be tricked because this one has two.
01:23:254 (3) - Covered by (1)'s hitburst.
SPOILER
Don't mind the "Autoplay enabled" note

Diff was quite good actually

[ADVANCED]
00:24:227 (3) - Awkward slider. Please remake it so it is longer.
00:32:011 (5) - Please make a perfect wave.
SPOILER
00:42:389 (3) - Again. ^
00:43:038 (1,2) - Strange sliders. No need to change yet recommended.
00:44:335 (1,2) - ^
00:45:633 (1,2) - ^
00:46:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please set Finish hitsound on (1), (3) and (5) only.
01:09:633 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:930 (3) - Perfect wave, please.
01:47:254 (3) - :!: I really disapprove of sudden slider velocity changes. Consider removing this.

[EXHAUST]
00:03:471 (3,4,5) - Space properly or make anti-jump.
00:11:254 (3) - :!: Perfect wave, please + Sudden slider velocity change.... again.
00:32:011 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Those jumps and anti-jumps don't fit. Really.
00:51:795 (7) - Slider end doesn't look too good.

That's it! 8-)

Cool mapset!

Thanks a lot~ :)
Entreal
136 posts
Joined July 2011
Entreal
Hello! ^^ Please be lenient.

wkdwlsejr's NOVICE
00:47:903 Maybe add a circle finish for some flavor :P
01:28:768 ^ no finish though
01:46:930 shorten slider to 01:47:579
01:47:903 if following ^ add a circle finish to end :3


Advanced!
00:09:795 Maybe add a circle here
00:12:389 Add a circle here for a 3 or 4 beat
00:13:524 ^
00:14:984 Add a circle here for a 3 beat
00:17:579 ^
00:18:714 ^ except make it a 4 beat
00:22:606 CIRCLE I think its better to have a midbeat between vocals IMO.
00:23:903 ^
00:25:200 ^
00:26:660 ^ (hehe)
00:44:741 Move this to 00:44:822 and remove circle
00:52:606 CIRCLE!


Exhaust!
01:11:092 Add a circle here!!
01:11:903 ^
00:12:389 Add a circle here for a 3 or 4 beat
00:13:524 ^

Still working on it... just letting you know about this..
Hsiao-Chai
119 posts
Joined January 2012
Hsiao-Chai
so busy thses days as well as melt, sry for late coming ;w;

SPOILER
[general]
transform BG from .png to .jpg make whole file smallerfor those BG delete guys won't cause porb

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:14:497 (1,2) - as easist diff, overlap make no sense other than confusion for newbie players
00:32:660 (1) - end it 00:34:930
01:02:497 (2,1) - try a better cover
01:21:957 (1,3) - ^

[ADVANCED]
only 3 different SV could be used in a diff
00:15:146 (4,5) - try a better cover
01:41:741 (2,3,4) - ummmh..pretty bad flow
00:58:606 (1,1) - either a long spinner or a long-lasting kick slider will be better (volumn change could a technique


[EXHAUST]
nice diff~
only 3 different SV could be used in a diff
try add a break somewhere
01:21:957 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - try bigger scale of arranging
00:32:335 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - not a meaningful siting
00:50:173 (5,6,7) - non-sense jumping www
00:58:606 (1,1) - either a long spinner or a long-lasting kick slider will be better (volumn change could a technique
Good luck~
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24
Update~

Thank you Entreal, Hsiao-Chai :D
---Assault[K]---
---Assault[K]---
[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:58:632 (3) Add note combo here 3 after slider.
01:29:102 (4) New combo?

[ADVANCED]
01:49:611 (1) Add clap sound
01:49:779 (2) Add note combo 2 here after combo 1 + Clap sound

[EXHAUST]
01:49:611 (1) Add clap sound
01:49:779 (2) Add note combo 2 here after combo 1 + Clap sound
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
Hey

Mod from my Queues ~



Must be fix
It's only what I think

General

  1. I think you should make a Hard diff for this mapset, because the jump from Easy (?) to ADVANCED (Insane ?) diff is to much. I would say this mapset is not rankable.
  2. Offset: 1510 I think it's better imo

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]

  1. 00:05:416 (2) - spacing
  2. 00:15:795 (2) - I wouldn't overlap this slider with the slider before and also the spacing is totally wrong too :P
  3. 00:22:281 (1) - spacing
  4. 01:02:497 (2,1) - try to snap these sliderend better together
  5. 01:06:389 (1,2,1) - 2 grid up to snap 01:05:092 (2,2) together
  6. 01:15:470 (4) - I would snap this slider with 01:12:876 (2)
  7. 01:30:389 (2) - I would this pattern like this
    SPOILER
  8. 01:32:335 (1,2,3,4) - I think these pattern is a bit to confuse for a beginner. I would change it.
  9. 01:35:903 (2) - add a Note here instead of this slider. (rememer this is a Beginner diff and I think it's hard to play for them :P)
  10. 01:45:957 (2,1) - I would change this part like this
    SPOILER

    it also follow the rhythm and it is easier to play for a Beginner.
  11. 01:47:903 (-) - maybe add a spinner here? end: 01:50:497

That's all what I have to say here.
Please contact me in-game if you see me online 8-)
So good luck with ranking~
HabiHolic
5,416 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
안녕하세요 M4M입니다~^^

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:15:795 (2) - 디스턴스가 안맞는거 같습니다
00:45:633 (1) - 뉴콤 제거?
01:12:876 (2) - 이걸 01:11:579 (1) - 이거랑 비슷하게 하는건 어떨가요?
01:24:552 (1) - 스피너 01:25:844 - 여기로 끝내기
01:46:930 (1) - 반복한번줄이고 01:47:903 - 여기에 서클추가하는게 나을거같아요

[ADVANCED]

00:12:308 (3) - 노트 2랑 겹칠것
00:13:606 (3) - ^
00:14:903 (3) - ^
00:17:416 (2) - 반복 추가하는게 좋을거 같네요
00:18:876 - 서클 추가
01:37:849 - 노트 추가
01:43:038 - ^

[EXHAUST]

00:03:309 (2,3,4,5) - 점프 어색
00:38:173 (2,3,4) - 일자로 할것

딱히 이난이도에선 지적할게 없는거 같아요

스타 받으시고 다시 모딩 필요하시면 말씀 부탁드립니다^^
K i A i
662 posts
Joined March 2011
K i A i
From Modding Queues!

앜하앜하 제가 좋아한느 PLight 랑께요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ



[노비스]
00:01:525 (1) - 디스턴스를 지키면서 조금만 더 옆으로 옮겨보세요!
00:14:497 (1,2) - do not use 'AntiJump' in Normal, Easy diff

[어드벤스드]
00:06:065 (3) - 두 칸 옆으로 이동해주세요~
00:12:470 이 부분 비워두지 말고 노트 놓는게 박자감이 더 좋아요 ㅋㅋ
+ 만약 추가시킬 경우에는, 00:13:200 (1) - 노트랑은 안 겹치게 넣고 점프로 놓아도 크게 문제되진 않을겁니다 ㅋㅋ
00:13:768 이 부분도 비우지 말고 노트 넣어주세요~
00:15:065 ^
00:17:660 ^
00:18:957 ^
00:39:795 (4,5,6) - 디스턴스 조금만 더 줄여보시는건 어떤가요?
00:44:984 (3) - 이 노트보다는 00:44:660 (2) - 이 슬라이더를 한 번 리버스 시켜보세요~
01:01:200 이 부분도 사운드가 확실하니까, 비워두기 보다는 서클 노트 하나 추가해보세요~
+ 노멀 피니시 사운드 추가
01:36:876 (3) - how about NC?
01:45:957 (3) - ^

[이그죠스트]
00:33:146 (3) - 해당 노트를 00:32:335 (6) - 노트와 겹치게 하기 보다는 00:32:984 (2) - 노트와 겹치게 만든 뒤, 00:33:470 (4,5) - 이 두 노트에 Ctrl + G는 어떤가요?
-> http://puu.sh/2ae0L
01:26:497 (3) - 해당 노트를 01:26:335 (2) - 노트와 겹치게 만든 뒤, 01:26:822 (4) - 를 01:26:497 (3) - 노트가 위치하던 자리로 옮겨보는건 어떤가요?
-> http://puu.sh/2ae3o



NICE~! :)
굿럭 + 1
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24
Update~~

Thank you Assault[K], Dark_Ai, HabiHolic, K i A i :)

K i A i wrote:

From Modding Queues!

앜하앜하 제가 좋아한느 PLight 랑께요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ - 저도 좋아해요 하아하아
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:11:903 (1) - start notes add finish
00:32:660 (1) - add finish
00:42:714 (3) - add clap
00:48:227 (1) - start notes add finish
01:01:200 (1) - ^
01:38:822 (2) - End notes add clap
01:43:687 (2) - add clap

[ADVANCED]
00:11:903 (1) - start notes add finish
00:17:092 (1) - ^
00:19:849 (2) - remove clap
00:20:011 (3) - add clap
00:20:335 (5) - End notes add clap
00:20:660 (6) - add clap
00:35:254 (1) - start notes add finish
00:37:849 (1) - ^
01:11:579 (1) - add finish
01:27:146 (1) - start notes add finish


[EXHAUST]

00:06:715 (1) - add finish
00:11:903 (1) - ^
00:37:849 (1) - start notes add finish
01:01:200 (1) - ^


별다른 문제는 없어보입니다.
좋은결과 있으시길.
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24

Joon wrote:

hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:11:903 (1) - start notes add finish
00:32:660 (1) - add finish
00:42:714 (3) - add clap
00:48:227 (1) - start notes add finish
01:01:200 (1) - ^
01:38:822 (2) - End notes add clap
01:43:687 (2) - add clap

[ADVANCED]
00:11:903 (1) - start notes add finish
00:17:092 (1) - ^
00:19:849 (2) - remove clap
00:20:011 (3) - add clap
00:20:335 (5) - End notes add clap
00:20:660 (6) - add clap
00:35:254 (1) - start notes add finish
00:37:849 (1) - ^
01:11:579 (1) - add finish
01:27:146 (1) - start notes add finish


[EXHAUST]

00:06:715 (1) - add finish
00:11:903 (1) - ^
00:37:849 (1) - start notes add finish
01:01:200 (1) - ^


별다른 문제는 없어보입니다.
좋은결과 있으시길.
고맙습니다 :D 몇몇개 빼고 다 수정했습니다.
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
Hi
Here is my mod :3

[General]
  1. i find the creator are still jaehn215,but i dont know if there are some method to solve this problem =P
[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
  1. 00:11:579(3)add a finish?
  2. 00:23:579(2)one gird left to make this slider under 00:21:633(4)
  3. 00:42:714(3,2)one gird up
  4. 00:53:416(1)something like this may better to me
    SPOILER
  5. 01:02:497(2,1)slider tail not perfect stack
  6. 01:28:768(x)i think you really need a note here to follow the music,or just for consistence
  7. 01:41:416(4)why not put it right above the 01:38:822(2)
[ADVANCED]
  1. AR-1 OD-1 since your easier diff are just AR2 OD2
  2. 00:06:065(3)x:180 y:180?
  3. 00:12:714(4)a little change for this slider may looks better
    SPOILER
  4. 00:24:227(4)^
    SPOILER
  5. 00:52:768(7)nc here because slow slider always mislead player =P
  6. 00:58:606(1)this spin could end in 00:59:903 imo
  7. 01:49:606(1)try this?
    SPOILER
[EXHAUST]
  1. same HP Drain with ADVANCED diff？ maybe HP+1
  2. 00:11:254(3)nc for changed the slider velocity
  3. 00:36:876(2,3)circle2 x:116 y:88 circle3 x:260 y:52 for square
  4. 00:39:389(4)its better to me if you put this circle at this point
    SPOILER
  5. btw i think its too difficult when you use green line to change the slider velocity to 2.0 at 00:43:038
That's all from me
Good luck :3
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
M4M \:D/

wkewkewekw's NOVICE

^ Sorry for didn't write the nick right!

00:05:416 (2) - Finish on slider's tail since there is a finish also in the song
00:10:606 (2) - make an unique slider, it's a bit difficult for newbies to read something like this
00:11:579 (3) - Add a finish
00:22:281 (1) - ^
00:26:173 (2) - Something like this? (You can make it better than mine lol)
00:32:335 - I'd add a note with clap here
00:40:443 (1,2,3) - Like this, please. If you fix, stack the following note (3) under (1)'s end
00:53:416 (1,2) - You can make a nice blanket with these sliders
00:58:606 (3) - I'd add a note with finish here
01:02:497 (2,1) - Stack them properly
01:24:552 (1) - I think you should finish this 1/4 later because if you use 25% playback you can hear the music finish 1/4 later D:
01:28:768 - You should add a note with clap here to not to break the rhythm
01:36:876 (4) - Move 2 grid up
01:41:416 (4) - Clap here and here 01:42:065
01:42:714 (1,3) - Clap on these slider's tails
01:47:903 (2) - It's noisy, I suggest you to put 5% volume here

ADVANCED

00:01:525 (1) - Finish?
And here 00:02:822 (1) And here 00:04:119 (1) And here 00:05:416 (1)
00:07:038 - Clap
00:07:687 - ^
00:12:714 (4,1) - Blanket these properly
00:13:524 (2) - Clap
00:14:822 (2) - ^
00:15:470 (6) - Clap on slider's head
00:16:119 (2) - ^
And so on, clap on every 2nd white tick until 00:19:687
00:22:281 (1) - Finish
Also, you have to place claps here! I suggest you to place claps on every 2nd and 4th white tick, from here 00:22:281 to here 00:32:335
00:24:065 (3,4) - Blanket please
00:24:876 (1,2) - ^
00:30:065 (1) - Move to 84|292 to avoid overlap
00:36:552 - Claps on 2nd and 4th tick until 00:42:714
00:39:795 (2,3,4) - Move the whole pattern 1 grid down
00:41:092 (3) - 1 grid up
00:46:606 (3,4) - I'd unstack these, they are difficul to read, a player can think it's 1/4...
01:19:687 (2) - Ctrl+g?
01:26:335 (2,3) - Move three grid down
01:47:254 (3) - This speed up is a bit nazi for an hard imo...

EXHAUST

Well, you have to add claps in the parts of the map that I mentioned in Advanced!

00:35:903 (3) - Replace this with 1/4 circles?
00:45:633 (1,2) - Stack slider's ends properly!
00:47:903 (6) - I'd prefer this to be stacked under (4) and not under (5)
01:11:903 - Add a note?
01:43:038 (2) - Ctrl+g?
01:45:308 (1) - This should be stacked under 01:44:660 (6) 's tail
01:47:254 (3) - Ctrl+h on this. Actually it plays bad...

______________________________________________

Really nice, take a star :3
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
[General]
  1. There is a huge difficulty gap between the NOVICE dif and the ADVANCED diff. You should consider mapping another diff. The song is short, don't be lazy ~
  2. I don't like that grey combo colour, it doesn't suit that "happy" environment the song gives, and doesn't suit neither of the background image and other combo colours. Consider changing it to a light green colour instead ?
[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
  1. You should avoid putting notes under other notes in easier difficulties, that's really bad, in both termof readability and design.
    What do I mean when I say notes under other notes ? I mean this knd of pattern : 01:11:579 (1,2,3,4). They are everywhere in the map, I won't point them all out, I let you find them out by yourself so that you don't reiterate this error in your future maps.
  2. You are using several Slider Velocity multipliers, that's in general a very bad idea in easier difficulties since begginers aren't actually used to the game yet, therefore it might be confusing for them.
  3. 01:14:173 (3) - According on what you've done in the rest of the map, this object should have a new combo.
  4. 01:19:362 (3) - Same as above.
  5. 01:40:119 (3) - Same as above.
[ADVANCED]
  1. 01:00:552 (1,2,3) - Please do not put them at the centre of the screen. It is confusing because they are hidden by the hitburst of the slider. :(
  2. 01:47:254 (3) - Don't change the slider velocity like this all in a sudden, that is really unexpected and will surprise the player who is probably going to break his combo. :(
    2x is way too much, maybe use a slower one like 1.40x
[EXHAUST]
  1. 01:00:552 (1,2) - Same as in ADVANCED.
  2. 01:47:254 (3) - Same as in ADVANCED here too, the 2x is not justified here.
popner
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Just saying, since you changed your user name, you'd better to change creator to MineC24 manually.
kelvinli
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kelvinli
Hi from queue
[General]

[EXHAUST]
Adding some whistles on high pitched beats might get better!
00:03:309 (2,3) - well this jump is pretty unexpectable. You might want to change it to normal spacing!
00:05:903 (2,3) - ^
00:13:849 (4) - You might want to move it down so the cursor has a more natural movement: http://puu.sh/2rb7h
00:16:768 (7) - add clap?
00:21:957 (6) - whistle @ head?
00:23:254 (6) - clap @head
00:24:227 (6) - clap @ the 1st and 2nd repeat
and so on if I followed you rhythm!
00:32:335 (6) - finish?
00:32:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistle?
00:33:795 (5) - finish?
00:39:146 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can make a more natural curve than this: http://puu.sh/2rbec
00:49:524 (1,3,5,7) - Whistle? to make difference with the precious dimmed part
00:52:119 (1,3) - ^
01:01:200 - 01:08:984 - I think you can add a whistle on every white line. Idk it is up to you.
01:03:389 (6) - why not put it linear with (5) and (7)?
01:03:470 (7,8,1) - ^
01:05:092 (1,3) - minor overlap here. Space out (3)
01:32:011 (7) - clap?
01:37:200 (6) - whistle @ head?
01:37:524 (1) - you could apply similar hitsound structure start from here

This diff was nicely done, but what makes it troublesome are mostly hitsound problems. Fix it and this diff will certainly get better.

[ADVANCED]
The hitsound structure feels imcomplete.Please add them so it is clear.
00:12:714 (4,1) - an imperfect blanket. If you want it: http://puu.sh/2rcHm
00:15:470 (6) - clap missing @ head
01:00:876 (2,3) - convert it to a slider to reduce difficulty?
01:20:011 (3,1) - minor overlap here.That is not pretty
01:37:200 (2) - whistle @head

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:09:308 (1) - 4 repeats can be very confusing IMO
00:41:741 (2,3) - not a perfect blanket: http://puu.sh/2rcRW
Just copy paste (2) to become (1) afterwards
01:11:579 (1,3) - It can be confusing. You might want to put (3) somewhere else
01:24:552 (1) - end at 01:25:849?
01:27:795 (2) - clap @ head
01:37:200 (5) - whistle?


Good Luck :)
MineC24
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Sorry. I check modding now...
(So busy week...)
MineC24
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Update :D :D :D

Sorry.. I'm Veeeeery late check...

And re-download plz
MMzz
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MMzz
From my M4M queue.

[EXHAUST]
I recommend OD8, OD7 for the hardest diff is really easy. This is just my opinion though.
Also when applying this mod run the AIMod Tool in editor, there is a nice handful of unsnapped notes you need to fix!

00:13:037 (7) - I would put the new combo here instead of 00:13:361 (1) - . The next part of the melody starts here and it's on the downbeat, so it's the perfect spot to start a combo.
00:15:633 - add a note here? There is a beat you can map too, this feels really empty when playing. Example: http://puu.sh/2sIqt
00:43:037 (1,2) - I think you messed up the sliders here! xD http://puu.sh/2sIwO. Make sure 1 gets snapped to it's proper length.
00:48:226 (1) - This slider needs to be snapped to it's proper length too, same length as 00:48:551 (2) - .
00:53:415 (1) - ^ Another slider issue.

[ADVANCED]
00:52:768 (7) - Please place a combo on this note for more recognition. It will help the players know this note is special and possibly slowing down or speeding up.

[wkdwlsejr's NOVICE]
00:30:065 (1) - unsnapped slider.
01:15:470 (4) - ^
This easy is well done but you used a lot of sliders. I recommend you take some sliders and turn them into notes for a bit of variation, or the newer players might get bored and lose interest. Also all these sliders just make it way to easy! xD

Nice mapset, I enjoyed it, awesome song too! I'm really worried about the difficulty gap between NOVICE and ADVANCED though. You should make some sort of normal difficulty so the jump in difficulty isn't so high.
MineC24
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MMzz wrote:

From my M4M queue.

[EXHAUST]
I recommend OD8, OD7 for the hardest diff is really easy. This is just my opinion though. - I like OD 7..
Also when applying this mod run the AIMod Tool in editor, there is a nice handful of unsnapped notes you need to fix! - Thank you :D
(Editor error...)

00:13:037 (7) - I would put the new combo here instead of 00:13:361 (1) - . The next part of the melody starts here and it's on the downbeat, so it's the perfect spot to start a combo. - fixed
00:15:633 - add a note here? There is a beat you can map too, this feels really empty when playing. Example: http://puu.sh/2sIqt - fixed
00:43:037 (1,2) - I think you messed up the sliders here! xD http://puu.sh/2sIwO. Make sure 1 gets snapped to it's proper length. - fixed
00:48:226 (1) - This slider needs to be snapped to it's proper length too, same length as 00:48:551 (2) - . - fixed
00:53:415 (1) - ^ Another slider issue. - fixed

Oh.. So many Editor errors... :(

[ADVANCED]
00:52:768 (7) - Please place a combo on this note for more recognition. It will help the players know this note is special and possibly slowing down or speeding up. - fixed

Nice mapset, I enjoyed it, awesome song too! I'm really worried about the difficulty gap between NOVICE and ADVANCED though. You should make some sort of normal difficulty so the jump in difficulty isn't so high. - Thx :) I'll add NORMAL diff
Thx :) :)
Verlaren
Verlaren
Yo. From My queue.

General:
deselect Letterbox druring breaks, because you haven't a storyboard


wkdwlsejr's EASY:
CS -1?
too many unsnapped patterns. Use distance snap tool please on this diff.
00:24:876(1) - this slider is unrankable. Please remake him.
00:56:173(1,2,3) - too hard for Easy diff
01:28:443(3) - new combo. Do not make on easy diff more than 4 or 5 combo on color. Otherwise it will be difficult for beginners to restore the level of HP


NOVICE:
about distance...same as Easy
too many NC..
00:10:606(1) - remove NC
00:15:795(1) - ^
00:23:579(1) - ^
00:26:173(1) - ^
00:39:146(1) - ^
00:41:741(1) - slider is unrankable. Please remake him, and remove NC
00:53:416(1,1,1,1) - spam of NC.
01:01:200(1) - remove NC
01:18:065(1) - ^
01:23:254(1) - ^
01:28:443(1) - ^
01:31:038(1) - ^
01:38:822(1) - ^
01:41:416(1) - ^
01:44:011(1) - ^


ADVANCED:
spam of NC.
All the patterns are not arranged very nice. Think about a permutation patterns


EXHAUST:
CS -1
DR +2
AR -1

Good luck.
MineC24
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Verlaren wrote:

Yo. From My queue.

General:
deselect Letterbox druring breaks, because you haven't a storyboard - fixed


wkdwlsejr's EASY:
CS -1? - fixed
too many unsnapped patterns. Use distance snap tool please on this diff. - check :D
00:24:876(1) - this slider is unrankable. Please remake him. - fixed
00:56:173(1,2,3) - too hard for Easy diff - I Don't Think so...
01:28:443(3) - new combo. Do not make on easy diff more than 4 or 5 combo on color. Otherwise it will be difficult for beginners to restore the level of HP
- ^

NOVICE:
about distance...same as Easy
too many NC..
00:10:606(1) - remove NC
00:15:795(1) - ^
00:23:579(1) - ^
00:26:173(1) - ^
00:39:146(1) - ^
00:41:741(1) - slider is unrankable. Please remake him, and remove NC - fixed
00:53:416(1,1,1,1) - spam of NC.
01:01:200(1) - remove NC
01:18:065(1) - ^
01:23:254(1) - ^
01:28:443(1) - ^
01:31:038(1) - ^
01:38:822(1) - ^
01:41:416(1) - ^
01:44:011(1) - ^


ADVANCED:
spam of NC.
All the patterns are not arranged very nice. Think about a permutation patterns


EXHAUST:
CS -1
DR +2 - + 1
AR -1

Good luck.
I passed NC mods.. (I don't think so...)

Thx :) and Update
MineC24
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I change diff name (VLaD's STANDARD)

re-download plz :)
AnreFM
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AnreFM
I'll try to mod this, hope this helps :)
I mainly mod for note placement, so feel free to object :D

  • [EASY]
  1. 00:01:525 (1) - move it to x:212 y:108
  2. 00:52:119 (2) - make it like thishttp://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1180.jpg more linear with the (1) slider
  3. 00:54:714 (2) - make it from http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1181.jpg to http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1182.jpg looks better :D
  4. 00:58:606 (3) - move it to x:216 y:188
  • [Novice]
  1. 00:11:903 (1) - make it more symmetrical by moving it to x:148 y:84
  2. 00:26:173 (1) - more linear with x:164 y:328
  • STANDART
  1. 00:44:011 (2) - more linear with x:168 y:56
  2. 01:34:606 (3) - more symmetrical with x:312 y:304
  • ADVANCED
  1. 01:45:957 (1) - not too sure with this stream, too hard? :o
  • EXHAUST
  1. can't find anything to mod, nice diff. :)
Okay i hope that helps, good luck :)
MineC24
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AnreFM wrote:

I'll try to mod this, hope this helps :)
I mainly mod for note placement, so feel free to object :D

  • [EASY]
  1. 00:01:525 (1) - move it to x:212 y:108 - No (because keep DS x1.0)
  2. 00:52:119 (2) - make it like thishttp://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1180.jpg more linear with the (1) slider - fixed
  3. 00:54:714 (2) - make it from http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1181.jpg to http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot1182.jpg looks better :D
    - fixed..?
  4. 00:58:606 (3) - move it to x:216 y:188 - I change this part
  • [Novice]
  1. 00:11:903 (1) - make it more symmetrical by moving it to x:148 y:84 - fixed
  2. 00:26:173 (1) - more linear with x:164 y:328 - ??
  • STANDART
  1. 00:44:011 (2) - more linear with x:168 y:56
  2. 01:34:606 (3) - more symmetrical with x:312 y:304
  • ADVANCED
  1. 01:45:957 (1) - not too sure with this stream, too hard? :o - fixed :D
  • EXHAUST
  1. can't find anything to mod, nice diff. :) - Thx :)
Okay i hope that helps, good luck :)
Thank you! :)
Arrival
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Arrival
M4M o/
Nice music, nice map :)

[dzhuifhzeuighfueirhgierphgeruigheriughei's Easy]
00:19:687 (1) - Whistle at the end of the slider ?
01:11:579 (1,2,3) - What about something like that : http://puu.sh/2L29n.jpg + http://puu.sh/2L2aJ.jpg ?
01:24:552 (1) - This spinner should stop at 01:25:849 - !

[NOVICE]
00:39:146 (1) - remove NC i think
00:58:606 (1) - Put this spinner to 01:00:552 -
01:36:551 (2,3,4) - Finish on these three ? Except the end of the slider (4)
01:41:416 (1) - Why NC here ?

[Vladimir Putin's Standard]
I find the tick rate too high imo, i should have down this to 2
00:55:038 (5,6,7) - What about put this like it : http://puu.sh/2L2ML.jpg
01:11:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing error
01:12:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I don't think standard is hard enough to make antijumps
01:19:687 (5) - What about something like this : http://puu.sh/2L2UB.jpg
01:26:011 (5) - NC ?
01:31:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to do something with the spacing
01:41:092 (5,6,7,8,9) - Between these circles too
01:43:362 (2) - This stack doesn't make sense
01:44:984 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again, spacing problem

[ADVANCED]
00:56:173 (1) - Finish ?
00:56:173 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Why not but i think you can make another pattern here....
01:20:011 (3) - Finish ?
01:20:335 (3) - ^
01:27:470 (2) - Clap
01:30:065 (2) - ^ + 01:32:660 (2) - + 01:33:958 (2) -

[EXHAUST]
00:08:335 (2) - Clap here + 00:08:984 (5) - here, or delete claps in 00:07:039 (3) - and 00:07:688 (7) - (but I recommand add claps 00:08:335 (2) and 00:08:984 (5))
00:11:254 (3) - NC so people can see the acceleration
00:43:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - SO NICE TO PLAY :D
01:08:903 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well i find this kind of overmapped, try to respect the music before making it hard.
01:27:470 (3) - Claps here, like i said on the previous difficulty.


Nice mapset, really fun music and map, really want this to get ranked, good luck !
_VLaD__old
_VLaD__old
Vladimir Putin's Standard - loool :'DDDD
I'm not Vladimir... VLaDislav*
MineC24
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Arrival wrote:

M4M o/
Nice music, nice map :)

[dzhuifhzeuighfueirhgierphgeruigheriughei's Easy] <- lol
00:19:687 (1) - Whistle at the end of the slider ? - fixed
01:11:579 (1,2,3) - What about something like that : http://puu.sh/2L29n.jpg + http://puu.sh/2L2aJ.jpg ? - I don't think so...
01:24:552 (1) - This spinner should stop at 01:25:849 - ! - fixed

[NOVICE]
00:39:146 (1) - remove NC i think - I don't think so...
00:58:606 (1) - Put this spinner to 01:00:552 - fixed
01:36:551 (2,3,4) - Finish on these three ? Except the end of the slider (4) - fixed (and (1) added finish)
01:41:416 (1) - Why NC here ? - because follow Beat snap :D

[Vladimir Putin's Standard] <- loool
I find the tick rate too high imo, i should have down this to 2
00:55:038 (5,6,7) - What about put this like it : http://puu.sh/2L2ML.jpg
01:11:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing error
01:12:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I don't think standard is hard enough to make antijumps
01:19:687 (5) - What about something like this : http://puu.sh/2L2UB.jpg
01:26:011 (5) - NC ?
01:31:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to do something with the spacing
01:41:092 (5,6,7,8,9) - Between these circles too
01:43:362 (2) - This stack doesn't make sense
01:44:984 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again, spacing problem

[ADVANCED]
00:56:173 (1) - Finish ? - I don't think so...
00:56:173 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Why not but i think you can make another pattern here....
- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735507 hehehe :D
01:20:011 (3) - Finish ? - fixed
01:20:335 (3) - ^ - fixed
01:27:470 (2) - Clap - - fixed
01:30:065 (2) - ^ + 01:32:660 (2) - + 01:33:958 (2) - - fixed~

[EXHAUST]
00:08:335 (2) - Clap here + 00:08:984 (5) - here, or delete claps in 00:07:039 (3) - and 00:07:688 (7) - (but I recommand add claps 00:08:335 (2) and 00:08:984 (5)) - fixed
00:11:254 (3) - NC so people can see the acceleration - fixed
00:43:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - SO NICE TO PLAY :D - Thank you! :)
01:08:903 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well i find this kind of overmapped, try to respect the music before making it hard.
- Umm... Just listen to that. A little heard 1/4 Beat...
01:27:470 (3) - Claps here, like i said on the previous difficulty.


Nice mapset, really fun music and map, really want this to get ranked, good luck !
Thank you! :) :)

And Update~ :D :D
MineC24
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I'll add Taiko Diffs~ :D
mingmichael
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MineC24 :) my GD has done :D
this~ http://puu.sh/2PhFM.osu
>,<
MineC24
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mingmichael wrote:

MineC24 :) my GD has done :D
this~ http://puu.sh/2PhFM.osu
>,<
Thank you! :D :D
I'll add this diff :) :)

Edit : removed green timing points (but, no remove kiai timing set)
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EASY
00:09:308 (1) - 리듬 표현 자체에는 문제가 없는데 이 패턴은 노비스에 들어가기엔 좀 힘들 것 같아요
00:17:092 (1) - 스페이싱 1.07
00:21:633 (4) - 1.09
00:22:281 (1) - 1.17
00:22:281 (1,2,1) - 같은 음이 반복되는 구간인데 마지막 슬라이더도 모양을 같게 해주는건 어떨까요
00:28:768 (2) - 1.08. -> 1.0x를 쓰실건지 1.1x를 쓰실건지 확실히 해주시는게 이지 노말난이도에서는 좋아요
00:30:065 (1) - 리듬제안 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759976
00:56:173 (1,2) - 이것도 맨처음 것처럼 패턴 자체가 초보분들한테 힘들어요 그런데 딱히 소리를 표현할 길이 안보이네요;; 파란틱에 소리가 강조되서...
그래도 슬라이더 몇개로 나누는게 나을것 같이 보여요 2 3으로

-> 여러군데에 스페이싱 이슈가 보이는데 이부분은 1.0이나 1.1로 맞춰주세요. 1.0이 더 많은걸 보니 1.1을 1.0으로 줄여주시는게 더 편할것같고 난이도 자체에도 더 좋을것 같이 보여요
01:15:470 (4) - 이것도. 근데 이부분은 잘 모르겟어요. 템포를 유지하고싶으시면 스크린샷처럼 서클을 붙이시고 다른노트들을 옮겨주셔야될거에요. 서클이 없어도 되고요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/759984

01:29:741 (1,2) - 이 슬라이더 두개를 복붙으로 같게 해주는게 더 좋을 것 같아요

굳굳이셈~~ IRC

NOVICE

00:08:660 (3) - 1.18
00:26:173 (1) - 리핏은 한번하고 서클로 바스켓 <- 이지랑 같은이유에서에요
01:09:633 - 여기 녹색선들 5개있는데 스피너가 있다가 사라진것같아요. 원상복귀시키던가 이 녹샌선들을 빼주세요
01:20:011 (1,1) - 이 스피너들은 다음노트와의 간격이 너무 짧긴 한데 아마 문제가 되는거라면 다른모더들도 지적을 해주실거에요 숙지만 해놔주세요
01:46:930 (1) - 이거 모양을 조금만 아주 조금만 더 좌우대칭이 되게 해주세요 저기있는 중간틱을 y축에 맞춰주시면 될거같아요. 슬라모양 바꾸기가 힘들거같이 보이는 슬라이던데 그냥 그리드 이동만 해주셔도 될것같아요


STANDARD
혹시 한국인 아니시면 나중에 PM 달라고 해주세요 영어로 직접 설명해드릴게요
뭔가 너무 빠른데? 싶었는데 ar이 높았네요 5정도면 괜찮지 않을까요?

00:07:687 (3) - 00:09:308 (6) - 스탠다드(노말) 유저는 아직 이런 노트들은 처리를 못해요. 조금 더 상급 유저들한테는 더 플레이어블 한 요소로 작용할 수도 있는 ctrl +G겠지만 노말유저들한테는 무리가 있을 것 같아요.

00:33:146 - 노말에서는 약간의 1/2서클이 허용이 되요. 리듬 강조를 위해서 이곳에 서클하나 두는건 어떨까요

00:35:579 (7) - 리듬 표현은 좋은데 노말유저들에게 있어서 플레이어블 한지는 잘 모르겠어요 이전에 있던 리턴슬라이더도 그렇고요
중간중간에 스페이싱을 확바꾼 노트들이 많이보이는데 이 맵 난이도를 혹시 하드로 생각하시면서 찍은건 아닐지 하는 우려가 생기네요. 혹시 그렇다면 난이도명을 standard으로는 하지 않는게 좋을것같아요.


00:49:402 - 이 브렉타임부분은 뭔가 채워놓는게 좋을것 같아요. 곡은 확실하게 계속되고있으니까 이건 브렉타임이 아니에요.
01:11:903 (2,2) - 음.. 리듬제안입니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760009
01:14:497 (2) - 혹시 이 제안을 받아들이실거라면 위의 패턴대로 이 노트도 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요
01:25:524 - 서클 하나 넣는건 어떨까요
01:31:038 (1,2,4,5) - 모양은 괜찮은데 노말유저들이 갑자기 놀랄만한 패턴이에요(스페이싱때문에) 스택시켜주는게 더 나아보여요
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - 이런 패턴이 딱히 문제가 되는건 아니에요 리듬적으로는. 근데 이런 패턴은 철저히 스페이싱을 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
01:45:795 (6,7,8) - ^
01:47:579 - 서클

ADVANCED

00:09:957 (4) - 리턴슬라이더의 화살표를 서클2에 닿지 않도록 돌려주시는건 어떨까요
00:21:957 (6) - (극히 개인적인 생각이지만)드럼소리가 이 음에 맞지 않는것같아요
00:48:552 - 서클 추가 (혹시 하실거라면 다음패턴도)
01:20:011 (3) - 서클 1에 닿지않도록 돌려주시는건 어떨까요

EXHAUST

와 지존신나네요
00:16:930 - 드럼! 서클!

힛사모딩은 아직 짬이안되서 ㅜㅜ 힛사모딩까지 됬으면 좋았을텐데 저도 개인적으로 아쉽네요

굳맵이셈!! 별박고가요 :)
MineC24
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Topic Starter
MineC24

Kloyd wrote:

go

ADVANCED

00:21:957 (6) - (극히 개인적인 생각이지만)드럼소리가 이 음에 맞지 않는것같아요
00:48:552 - 서클 추가 (혹시 하실거라면 다음패턴도)

EXHAUST

와 지존신나네요
00:16:930 - 드럼! 서클!

힛사모딩은 아직 짬이안되서 ㅜㅜ 힛사모딩까지 됬으면 좋았을텐데 저도 개인적으로 아쉽네요

굳맵이셈!! 별박고가요 :)
감사합니다!
저 위에 남겨져있는 제안빼고는 다 수정했습니다~ :D
HelloSCV
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Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
Melt꺼 모딩에 쿠도스 안주신듯 ( 아니면 안고치신건가? )

General

  1. 태그에 SDVX 추가해주세요

EXHAUST

00:09:308 (1,3,5,6) - 피니시 추가해주세요
00:17:092 (1) - ^ ( 00:11:903 (1) - 여기도 하셧으니 추가하시는거 추천 )
00:19:687 (1,6) - ^
00:21:957 (6) - 최고 난이도인만큼 이 슬라이더 리핏을 좀 늘이시는걸로 추천해요 위치는 다음 슬라이더하고 겹치시거나 약간만 떨어지게
00:24:227 (6) - 2번 리핏보다 슬라 2개가 낫지 않을까요?
00:43:038 (1,2) - 이렇게 꼬아놓은 슬라이더하고 배속은 좀 비추천 드려요 플레이 할때 놓치기가 너무나 쉬워서.. ( 콤보 브레이크의 주요원인 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ )
00:45:633 (1,2) - ^
00:58:606 (1) - 이전 빨간틱으로?
01:11:903 - 드럼음?이 좀 강한데 비어있으니 좀 어색한거 같아요 여기 노트 추가하시고 다음 노트하고 점프 주시는것도 좋을듯
01:14:497 (2) - ^ ( 이하 생략할께요 )
01:37:200 (6) - 전과 같아요
01:47:579 - 여기에서 키아이 끝맺어 주심이?

귀찮아서 1 난이도 모딩 헤헷 굿럭!
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24

HelloSCV wrote:

Melt꺼 모딩에 쿠도스 안주신듯 ( 아니면 안고치신건가? ) - 엌ㅋㅋ 깜박ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

General

  1. 태그에 SDVX 추가해주세요
- 추가완료

EXHAUST

00:09:308 (1,3,5,6) - 피니시 추가해주세요 - 추가완료
00:17:092 (1) - ^ ( 00:11:903 (1) - 여기도 하셧으니 추가하시는거 추천 ) - 추가완료
00:19:687 (1,6) - ^ - 추가완료
00:21:957 (6) - 최고 난이도인만큼 이 슬라이더 리핏을 좀 늘이시는걸로 추천해요 위치는 다음 슬라이더하고 겹치시거나 약간만 떨어지게 - 이 노래와 매우 비슷한 동 작곡가의 팝핀샤워랑 비슷한 형태로 지은거라... (일종의 오마쥬)
00:24:227 (6) - 2번 리핏보다 슬라 2개가 낫지 않을까요? - 수정완료
00:43:038 (1,2) - 이렇게 꼬아놓은 슬라이더하고 배속은 좀 비추천 드려요 플레이 할때 놓치기가 너무나 쉬워서.. ( 콤보 브레이크의 주요원인 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ ) - 이건 상당히 심혈을 기울여 지은 파트라...
00:45:633 (1,2) - ^ - ^
00:58:606 (1) - 이전 빨간틱으로? - 그 사이인 작은 하얀틱으로..
01:11:903 - 드럼음?이 좀 강한데 비어있으니 좀 어색한거 같아요 여기 노트 추가하시고 다음 노트하고 점프 주시는것도 좋을듯 - 추가완료
01:14:497 (2) - ^ ( 이하 생략할께요 ) - ^
01:37:200 (6) - 전과 같아요 - 앞에서 말한 의견과 같은...
01:47:579 - 여기에서 키아이 끝맺어 주심이? - 수정완료

귀찮아서 1 난이도 모딩 헤헷 굿럭!
감사합니다! :D :) ~~
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TRANSLATION REQUEST

NO KDS

뭔가 너무 빠른데? 싶었는데 ar이 높았네요 5정도면 괜찮지 않을까요? Isn't it too fast to put AR that high? I recommend 5

00:07:687 (3) - 00:09:308 (6) - 스탠다드(노말) 유저는 아직 이런 노트들은 처리를 못해요. 조금 더 상급 유저들한테는 더 플레이어블 한 요소로 작용할 수도 있는 ctrl +G겠지만 노말유저들한테는 무리가 있을 것 같아요. Actually people who play Normal diffs cannot read those patterns. It can be more playable if these kind of notes, patterns are on Higher difficulty.

00:33:146 - 노말에서는 약간의 1/2서클이 허용이 되요. 리듬 강조를 위해서 이곳에 서클하나 두는건 어떨까요 to put emphasis onto the rhythm, I recommend putting a circle.

00:35:579 (7) - 리듬 표현은 좋은데 노말유저들에게 있어서 플레이어블 한지는 잘 모르겠어요 이전에 있던 리턴슬라이더도 그렇고요
중간중간에 스페이싱을 확바꾼 노트들이 많이보이는데 이 맵 난이도를 혹시 하드로 생각하시면서 찍은건 아닐지 하는 우려가 생기네요. 혹시 그렇다면 난이도명을 standard으로는 하지 않는게 좋을것같아요.
Nice expression considering rhythm. but I think it is not playable on Normal difficulty. There are some drastically-spaced notes, so I guess you thought you're making Hard diff. If I'm right, I think this diff should not be 'Standard'

00:49:402 - 이 브렉타임부분은 뭔가 채워놓는게 좋을것 같아요. 곡은 확실하게 계속되고있으니까 이건 브렉타임이 아니에요.
The song is still ongoing. Putting breaktime here is not a good idea IMO
01:11:903 (2,2) - 음.. 리듬제안입니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760009 Why don't you put rhythm like this?
01:14:497 (2) - 혹시 이 제안을 받아들이실거라면 위의 패턴대로 이 노트도 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요 If you accept my suggestion above, this rhythm should be changed too.
01:25:524 - 서클 하나 넣는건 어떨까요 put a circle
01:31:038 (1,2,4,5) - 모양은 괜찮은데 노말유저들이 갑자기 놀랄만한 패턴이에요(스페이싱때문에) 스택시켜주는게 더 나아보여요
It has good shape, but due to the spacing, It can make players confused. I think stacking is better choice
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - 이런 패턴이 딱히 문제가 되는건 아니에요 리듬적으로는. 근데 이런 패턴은 철저히 스페이싱을 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
The pattern has no problem, but you should keep spacing here if you want to put this.
01:45:795 (6,7,8) - ^
01:47:579 - 서클 add a circle here
_VLaD__old
_VLaD__old

Kloyd wrote:

TRANSLATION REQUEST

NO KDS

뭔가 너무 빠른데? 싶었는데 ar이 높았네요 5정도면 괜찮지 않을까요? Isn't it too fast to put AR that high? I recommend 5

00:07:687 (3) - 00:09:308 (6) - 스탠다드(노말) 유저는 아직 이런 노트들은 처리를 못해요. 조금 더 상급 유저들한테는 더 플레이어블 한 요소로 작용할 수도 있는 ctrl +G겠지만 노말유저들한테는 무리가 있을 것 같아요. Actually people who play Normal diffs cannot read those patterns. It can be more playable if these kind of notes, patterns are on Higher difficulty.

00:33:146 - 노말에서는 약간의 1/2서클이 허용이 되요. 리듬 강조를 위해서 이곳에 서클하나 두는건 어떨까요 to put emphasis onto the rhythm, I recommend putting a circle.

00:35:579 (7) - 리듬 표현은 좋은데 노말유저들에게 있어서 플레이어블 한지는 잘 모르겠어요 이전에 있던 리턴슬라이더도 그렇고요
중간중간에 스페이싱을 확바꾼 노트들이 많이보이는데 이 맵 난이도를 혹시 하드로 생각하시면서 찍은건 아닐지 하는 우려가 생기네요. 혹시 그렇다면 난이도명을 standard으로는 하지 않는게 좋을것같아요.
Nice expression considering rhythm. but I think it is not playable on Normal difficulty. There are some drastically-spaced notes, so I guess you thought you're making Hard diff. If I'm right, I think this diff should not be 'Standard'

00:49:402 - 이 브렉타임부분은 뭔가 채워놓는게 좋을것 같아요. 곡은 확실하게 계속되고있으니까 이건 브렉타임이 아니에요.
The song is still ongoing. Putting breaktime here is not a good idea IMO
01:11:903 (2,2) - 음.. 리듬제안입니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760009 Why don't you put rhythm like this?
01:14:497 (2) - 혹시 이 제안을 받아들이실거라면 위의 패턴대로 이 노트도 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요 If you accept my suggestion above, this rhythm should be changed too.
01:25:524 - 서클 하나 넣는건 어떨까요 put a circle
01:31:038 (1,2,4,5) - 모양은 괜찮은데 노말유저들이 갑자기 놀랄만한 패턴이에요(스페이싱때문에) 스택시켜주는게 더 나아보여요
It has good shape, but due to the spacing, It can make players confused. I think stacking is better choice
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - 이런 패턴이 딱히 문제가 되는건 아니에요 리듬적으로는. 근데 이런 패턴은 철저히 스페이싱을 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
The pattern has no problem, but you should keep spacing here if you want to put this.
01:45:795 (6,7,8) - ^
01:47:579 - 서클 add a circle here
Thx Kloyd.
all fix*
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24

_VLaD_ wrote:

Kloyd wrote:

TRANSLATION REQUEST

NO KDS

뭔가 너무 빠른데? 싶었는데 ar이 높았네요 5정도면 괜찮지 않을까요? Isn't it too fast to put AR that high? I recommend 5

00:07:687 (3) - 00:09:308 (6) - 스탠다드(노말) 유저는 아직 이런 노트들은 처리를 못해요. 조금 더 상급 유저들한테는 더 플레이어블 한 요소로 작용할 수도 있는 ctrl +G겠지만 노말유저들한테는 무리가 있을 것 같아요. Actually people who play Normal diffs cannot read those patterns. It can be more playable if these kind of notes, patterns are on Higher difficulty.

00:33:146 - 노말에서는 약간의 1/2서클이 허용이 되요. 리듬 강조를 위해서 이곳에 서클하나 두는건 어떨까요 to put emphasis onto the rhythm, I recommend putting a circle.

00:35:579 (7) - 리듬 표현은 좋은데 노말유저들에게 있어서 플레이어블 한지는 잘 모르겠어요 이전에 있던 리턴슬라이더도 그렇고요
중간중간에 스페이싱을 확바꾼 노트들이 많이보이는데 이 맵 난이도를 혹시 하드로 생각하시면서 찍은건 아닐지 하는 우려가 생기네요. 혹시 그렇다면 난이도명을 standard으로는 하지 않는게 좋을것같아요.
Nice expression considering rhythm. but I think it is not playable on Normal difficulty. There are some drastically-spaced notes, so I guess you thought you're making Hard diff. If I'm right, I think this diff should not be 'Standard'

00:49:402 - 이 브렉타임부분은 뭔가 채워놓는게 좋을것 같아요. 곡은 확실하게 계속되고있으니까 이건 브렉타임이 아니에요.
The song is still ongoing. Putting breaktime here is not a good idea IMO
01:11:903 (2,2) - 음.. 리듬제안입니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760009 Why don't you put rhythm like this?
01:14:497 (2) - 혹시 이 제안을 받아들이실거라면 위의 패턴대로 이 노트도 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것 같아요 If you accept my suggestion above, this rhythm should be changed too.
01:25:524 - 서클 하나 넣는건 어떨까요 put a circle
01:31:038 (1,2,4,5) - 모양은 괜찮은데 노말유저들이 갑자기 놀랄만한 패턴이에요(스페이싱때문에) 스택시켜주는게 더 나아보여요
It has good shape, but due to the spacing, It can make players confused. I think stacking is better choice
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - 이런 패턴이 딱히 문제가 되는건 아니에요 리듬적으로는. 근데 이런 패턴은 철저히 스페이싱을 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
The pattern has no problem, but you should keep spacing here if you want to put this.
01:45:795 (6,7,8) - ^
01:47:579 - 서클 add a circle here
Thx Kloyd.
all fix*
Thx! :D
Update~~ :)
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
M4M

General

  1. check tag plz

wkdwlsejr's Easy

  1. 몇몇부분이 좀 오버맵된거 같지만 그래도 괜찮아 보이네요

01:46:606 - 키아이 시작점이나 끝지점은 노트나 슬라이더가 있어야해요 수정해주세요

Normal

  1. 노말이나 이지에서는 2번째 긴 흰색틱마다 뉴콤보 넣으시는거 추천드려요 ( 특히 01:01:200 (1) - 이런 것들은 정말 불필요하다 생각해요 )
  • 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이
00:16:443 (2) - 방금전 슬라처럼 1/2로 두시는게 박자감있고 좋아보여요
00:32:660 (1,1) - 스핀-슬라 간 거리가 너무 짧지 않나요?
00:53:416 (1) - HP바 닿아요
01:24:552 (1,1) - 아까와 같아요
01:31:686 (2) - 여기도 아시겠죠?

VLaD's STANDARD

00:13:849 (1) - delete NC 00:14:497 (3) - add it here
01:12:876 (1) - delete NC
01:31:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - aren't these too hard?
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:45:470 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:46:930 (9) - NC
01:50:497 - please end kiai time here or 01:47:903 - here ( Kiai end should not be placed during spinner )

ADVANCED

  1. 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이
00:08:822 (3) - 여기에 노트 추가하심이? 좀 비는 느낌이네요
00:08:984 (6) - 1/4 보다는 1/2가 낫지 않을까요? ( 물론 리핏은 빼고 )
00:18:714 (2,3) - 방금 처럼 1/4슬라이더? ( 단순 일관성 때문이에요 )
01:10:281 (3) - NC 넣으시고 1/2 슬라이더 2개로?
01:18:065 (3) - NC
01:40:443 (2) - 노트? 여기만 비어두니좀 이상하고 키아이니까 넣으면 좀더 신나지 않을까요

굿렄
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24

HelloSCV wrote:

M4M

General

  1. check tag plz

wkdwlsejr's Easy

  1. 몇몇부분이 좀 오버맵된거 같지만 그래도 괜찮아 보이네요

01:46:606 - 키아이 시작점이나 끝지점은 노트나 슬라이더가 있어야해요 수정해주세요

Normal

  1. 노말이나 이지에서는 2번째 긴 흰색틱마다 뉴콤보 넣으시는거 추천드려요 ( 특히 01:01:200 (1) - 이런 것들은 정말 불필요하다 생각해요 )
  • 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이
00:16:443 (2) - 방금전 슬라처럼 1/2로 두시는게 박자감있고 좋아보여요 - 이건 난이도상으로 봐도 그렇고 뭔가 조금 애매해서 그냥 공백으로...
00:32:660 (1,1) - 스핀-슬라 간 거리가 너무 짧지 않나요? - 수정완료
00:53:416 (1) - HP바 닿아요 - 수정완료
01:24:552 (1,1) - 아까와 같아요 - 수정완료
01:31:686 (2) - 여기도 아시겠죠? - ??

VLaD's STANDARD

00:13:849 (1) - delete NC 00:14:497 (3) - add it here
01:12:876 (1) - delete NC
01:31:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - aren't these too hard?
01:41:579 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:45:470 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:46:930 (9) - NC
01:50:497 - please end kiai time here or 01:47:903 - here ( Kiai end should not be placed during spinner )

ADVANCED

  1. 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이 키아이
00:08:822 (3) - 여기에 노트 추가하심이? 좀 비는 느낌이네요
00:08:984 (6) - 1/4 보다는 1/2가 낫지 않을까요? ( 물론 리핏은 빼고 )
00:18:714 (2,3) - 방금 처럼 1/4슬라이더? ( 단순 일관성 때문이에요 )
01:10:281 (3) - NC 넣으시고 1/2 슬라이더 2개로?
01:18:065 (3) - NC
01:40:443 (2) - 노트? 여기만 비어두니좀 이상하고 키아이니까 넣으면 좀더 신나지 않을까요

전부 수정!!

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HelloSCV
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Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
당연히 더줘야죠

주면 안돼요 ㅋㅋ
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
m4m from your queue

[NOVICE]
00:53:416 (1,1) - what about this pattern?
SPOILER
01:06:389 (1,2) - I think this looks better :/
SPOILER
01:11:579 - try this pattern. looks better
SPOILER
112,192,71579,6,0,B|84:148|84:148|72:48,2,150,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,156,72876,2,0,P|205:236|153:288,2,150
305,156,74173,6,0,P|305:236|350:284,2,150
400,192,75470,2,0,B|428:148|428:148|440:48,2,150,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,285,76768,5,4,0:0:0:0:
01:38:173 (2) - make this blanket?
SPOILER

[VLaD's STANDARD]
00:15:146 (2) - is this distance spacing error on your purpose? if yes, move 00:15:795 (4) right 2 grid
00:28:443 (3,4,5) - 136|36 , 272|36 , 408|36 for balance distance and move (5)'s tail stack (1). maybe move (6) follow to flow too
00:33:470 (3,4) - I think this distance is confuse. maybe move them a bit far from (2)? or maybe u can add slider at 00:32:984 end at 00:33"146 instead (2)
00:35:416 - u can add note here
00:48:227 - u can add note here and add finish also
00:58:606 - ^
01:07:038 (2) - i dont get the spacing here 0.0
01:07:362 (3) - move down 1 grid OR move (4) up 1 grid
01:29:092 (5) - spacing error
01:41:092 (5,6,7,8,9) - weird spacing here =w=
01:44:984 until end - ^
01:47:579 - add note and add finish also?

[wkdwods's EASY]
00:02:822 (2) - move to 100|312
00:08:011 (2) - move to 244|272
00:56:173 (1,2) - this confuse beginner. imo
01:48:876 (2) ^

[ADVANCE]
00:24:552 (4) - add clap at 00:24:552 and maybe add one more repeat?
look good diff 0.0

[EXHAUST]
omg good diff..

Good luck :3
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
wa_
Hi :3 Nice song!
Some suggestions from my side.
[EASY]
  1. Change AR to 3 or 4?
  2. 00:52:119 (2) - delete white point in center?
  3. 00:56:173 (1,2,3) - really confusing part. Maybe replace it with spinner?
  4. 01:02:497 (2,1) - make it symmetrical. Try to move slidertails to x=256
  5. 01:24:227 (4) - move to (468,208) to make better flow?
  6. 01:44:011 (3) - replace it with rotated 01:42:714 (1)?
  7. 01:45:876 (2) - please move it to 01:45:957. You can make something like this:
    SPOILER
[NOVICE]
  1. 00:05:416 (2) - Try to make better blanket with 00:04:119 (1). Remember to keep 1.00 spacing.
  2. 00:09:308 (1) - What about to move (208,244) point to (212,244)? Then You'll have slider tick between these points.
  3. 00:23:579 (1) - Make better blanket with (2).
    SPOILER
  4. 00:41:741 (1) - Improve the shape. Like this:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:45:633 (1) - I suggest You to make red points in white ticks to follow the rhythm, like this:
    SPOILER
  6. 01:00:876 (1) - Remove it? It can be a bit confusing.
  7. 01:19:362 (1) - Rotate it a bit to make slider paralel with previous circles. Example:
    SPOILER
  8. 01:21:957 (1,1) - Make better symmetry?
  9. 01:38:822 (1) - same as 00:23:579.
  10. 01:47:903 (1,1) - make same as in STANDARD diff? This diff should be easier than STANDARD.
[STANDARD]
  1. What about to change hitsounds to soft in part 01:01:200 - 01:11:579 as in EXHAUST diff.
  2. 00:32:660 (1,2,3,4) - Try this?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:26:011 (1,2) - It's confusing. Replace it with slider or make something other.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:41:416 - Add note to make it more clear?
[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:39:795 (4) - move it to ~(280,271) to make better spacing and straight line.
  2. 01:00:552 (1,2) - unstack? It's a bit strange imo.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:25:524 (7) - Ctrl+G and move up to make more readable with next circles pattern.
  4. 01:27:470 (2) - add reverse
  5. 01:28:768 (2) - ^
  6. 01:30:389 (4,5,6,7) - Unstack, it's confusing (similar pattern to 01:30:065 (2,3) but not 1/4).
[EXHAUST]
  1. 01:08:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why so weird stream shape? :O
    Really good diff :D
Catch star~! ;)
_VLaD__old
_VLaD__old
star! ~ ;)
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24
Update map~

and

_VLaD_ wrote:

star! ~ ;)
Thx :D :D
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~General~
  1. It would be nicer to use the same kiai time on all the difficulties if possible.
~wkdwlsejr's EASY~
  1. 00:58:606 (1) - This spinner feels too short for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, try making it longer.
  2. 01:20:660 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  3. 01:24:552 (1) - Make this spinner end with soft-hitnormal, not normal-hitnormal, sounds too loud.
  4. 01:45:957 (2) - This slider has too many repeats and it might be confusing for beginners.
~NOVICE~
  1. 00:10:606 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  2. 00:26:173 (1) - This slider has too many repeats and it might be confusing for beginners.
  3. 00:35:254 (1) - Probably a bit too soon after spinner, try to center it a bit more at least.
  4. 00:54:714 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  5. 00:57:470 (1) - Same as above.
  6. 01:00:876 (1,1) - I'm not sure but these two notes after spinner might be confusing to see for beginners.
  7. 01:41:416 (1) - This slider has too many repeats and it might be confusing for beginners.
~VLaD's STANDARD~
  1. Reduce OD by 1 tick, it's too high right now.
  1. 00:04:119 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:09:308 (6) - Same as above.
  3. 00:11:254 (10,1) - Wrong spacing here, check it carefully.
  4. 00:18:389 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  5. 00:19:362 (4,1,2,3) - Wrong spacing once again, please make it consistent.
  6. 00:29:741 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  7. 00:29:741 (6,7,8) - Again, inconsistent spacing.
  8. 00:34:930 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  9. 00:50:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing of this pattern is completely inconsistent and feels random, rearrange it.
  10. 00:55:038 (5,6,7) - Again, spacing is wrong.
  11. 01:41:092 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above.
  12. 01:45:308 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
  13. 01:46:930 (10,1) - New combo should start on 10 and not on 1, music actually changes there.
~ADVANCED~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:58:606 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 back so it's easier to play.
~EXHAUST~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:45:633 (1,2) - These two sliders could be stacked better together.
  2. 01:12:065 (3) - New combo due to the jump and new pattern.
  3. 01:12:876 (8) - Same as above.
Nice map but _VLaD_'s difficulty needs much work.
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
MineC24

Andrea wrote:

~General~

~EXHAUST~
[*]01:12:065 (3) - New combo due to the jump and new pattern. - I don't think so...
[*]01:12:876 (8) - Same as above. - I don't think so...
Thx :D

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