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Raujika - Land of Grace

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Strawberry
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Strawberry
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年3月16日 at 23:36:46

Artist: Raujika
Title: Land of Grace
Tags: Fairy Tale Sounds of colour Katty Pie a3272509123 -Baby Strawberry- intrusmental
BPM: 103
Filesize: 3844kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. A32's Normal (4.08 stars, 179 notes)
  2. Gracy (4.93 stars, 475 notes)
  3. Hardy (4.72 stars, 314 notes)
  4. Pie's Easy (2.02 stars, 108 notes)
Download: Raujika - Land of Grace
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Strawberry #7
  • mapping for DeAdKiNgA~
    ——————And much thanks for you guys ongoing support!!
~ Mapset ~
Last edited by Strawberry , edited 24 times in total.
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
0.75好像稍微快了一点点
Strawberry
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Strawberry
@angelfix: 因为insane用的大圈所以个人觉得如果sv再低读起来有些别扭…一开始试过了…
yu1sT
40 posts
Joined June 2012
yu1sT
好顶赞，快开Raujika project坑。
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
bakabaka
草莓\:D/

SPOILER
23:49 Strawberry: baka酱求试图
23:49 Strawberry: lol
23:49 *Strawberry is listening to Raujika - Land of Grace
23:50 bakabaka: 哇草莓:D
23:50 bakabaka: 好呀:33
23:50 Strawberry: xDD
23:52 bakabaka: lol
23:52 bakabaka: BG調暗點好了:3
23:54 Strawberry: lol
23:54 Strawberry: 嗯嗯
23:55 bakabaka: 我覺得我不會讀圖了lol
23:55 Strawberry: Q__Q 咱摆的坑爹吗?
23:55 bakabaka: 感覺有一些坑爹Q-Q
23:55 Strawberry: xDD
23:55 bakabaka: 不過打起來不錯:D
23:57 Strawberry: 感觉太送分了不好
23:57 Strawberry: >< 嗷
23:57 Strawberry: 咱去看看其他人玩
23:58 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/566291
23:58 bakabaka: 感覺一個坑爹地方休掉就不錯:D
23:58 Strawberry: 好评!!~
23:58 Strawberry: 求指点><
23:58 bakabaka: 其實我剛剛熱身熱到一半Q_Q
23:58 bakabaka: 剛好找不到圖熱>A<
23:59 Strawberry: xDD耶~
00:00 bakabaka: 覺得02:04:114 (1)- 有一點點坑
00:00 bakabaka: lol
00:00 bakabaka: 應該是我讀圖弱:<
00:01 Strawberry: 是比较坑
00:01 Strawberry: 你觉得6,7对换位置怎么样
00:02 bakabaka: 我是覺得加個nc就好
00:02 bakabaka: 67換了感覺卡手:P
00:02 Strawberry: 噢
00:02 Strawberry: 好
00:02 bakabaka: 果然跳還是比較好:D
00:02 Strawberry: ><
00:03 bakabaka: 還有最後個
00:03 bakabaka: 02:07:609 (6)-
00:03 bakabaka: lol
00:03 Strawberry: 噢噢这个 lol
00:03 bakabaka: 要不要跟左邊那個一樣~移出來點
00:03 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/566300
00:03 Strawberry: 也许把7移到正常位好点??
00:04 bakabaka: 我覺得6移出來就好耶
00:04 Strawberry: 噢,我试试看
00:04 bakabaka: 阿等等
00:05 bakabaka: 還是說把02:07:318 (5)- 移掉~換成note
00:05 bakabaka: 變成左右左右跳lol
00:06 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/1MOzf
00:06 Strawberry: 这样??
00:06 Strawberry: 感觉不错:DD
00:07 bakabaka: 感覺好遠w
00:07 Strawberry: 是诶
00:07 Strawberry: :<
00:07 Strawberry: 或者3.5.8向右边收?
00:08 bakabaka: 阿
00:08 bakabaka: 5在3尾端 6在4尾端 7在3頭 8在4頭 ?
00:08 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/1MOBY
00:09 bakabaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/566311 ?
00:09 bakabaka: 試試我這個lol
00:10 Strawberry: 好评!
00:10 Strawberry: >< 改了
00:11 bakabaka: 02:09:357 (1,2,3)- 最後三個間距要不要大一點
00:11 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/1MOGy
00:11 Strawberry: 这样?
00:12 bakabaka: 恩:3
00:12 bakabaka: 阿
00:12 bakabaka: 整體123往上移一點
00:13 bakabaka: 02:09:211 (2)- 離這遠一點感覺比較好跳
00:14 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/1MOL2
00:14 bakabaka: hao
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
看到小草莓在摸Raujika的曲子我就从官网的map list滚进来了
先怒射不解释
edit: 上帝啊我摸不动

General
你需要一个消音soft sliderslide? 如果加的话记得在F6里把S都改成SC2

Easy
Found nothing to say =.=
Though it's not recomended to use many red ticks making sliders in Easy diff, it's fine looking.

Normal
00:10:813 (1,2) - 避免重叠吧
00:12:561 (3) - 头上whistle
00:23:046 (2) - 这个让它的前半部分能够稍微包一下上一个滑条的尾巴好看点吧大概
00:45:765 (1) - 中间锚点移到(256,88 )最后一个锚点移到(332,108) 好看些？
01:03:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这combo感觉长了点儿 和后面的再协调一下 每个combo弄得平衡些
01:09:066 (2) - 比较倾向于普通的弯滑条
01:11:105 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/283mY
01:32:367 (2) - 弄平一点儿吧 往上走碰血槽被吐槽 或者其实你把01:27:707 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 都一起往下挪点儿就好调整了

Hard
00:14:309 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/283xY 弧度稍微调整好看一些？ 调得话后面的滑条也对应调一下 不调的话至少把3和1叠准
00:26:833 (2) - 是从00:25:959 (3) - 复制的么 也许我眼睛有问题=。= 毕竟摆成这样的话就摆直吧
00:38:192 (5,6,1) - 建议把间距稍微拉大一点会更可读一些

大草莓
00:13:726 (3) - 移到(120,192)？
00:16:056 (3,4,5) - 等距？
00:36:154 (1,3) - 折返箭头遮挡unrank的
00:56:542 (10,11) - 感觉不必要的拆分
01:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 比较倾向于whistle加在有音的地方而不是没有的……
02:03:823 (5,7) - 5的hitburst会妨碍7的可读性？

啊啊啊疯了 什么都看不出来
Last edited by Zero__wind , edited 1 time in total.
a32
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a32
done owo
http://puu.sh/20h62
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
from my queue
[Pie's Easy]
00:03:823 (1) - report at 00:04:406
00:13:726 (3) - remove finish
00:50:425 (1,1) -
01:19:551 (2) - unlookable
01:46:056 (1,2) - :? a lot thing is good than 1/1 report slider
[Gracy]
00:02:658 (1) - this spinner start is to hard for play
00:05:280 (4,1,2) - ctrl+>?
00:14:163 (2,4) - more nearly with00:14:018 (1,3)
00:22:464 (4) -
SPOILER
00:34:989 (8,1) - (8)end at blue and (1)start at white
SPOILER
00:37:610 (1,2) - ctrl+g :? must be little friendly for play
00:51:008 (8) - NC
01:27:707 (1) - remove NC
01:20:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - :? 01:19:551 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个已经很拥挤了在中下位子 后面的(1~9)不要再叠回去了英语无力
01:34:260 (6,3) - x:268 y:200

nice map
good luck :)
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-
http://puu.sh/23gsC 走你┏ (゜ω゜)=☞
jomnhnk
276 posts
Joined March 2010
jomnhnk
Hi~Strawberry><!!!. I'm rooting for you. :)
(*´艸｀*)
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry

jomnhnk wrote:

Hi~Strawberry><!!!. I'm rooting for you. :)
(*´艸｀*)
thankyouuuu!!!~~~ i love you so much ><
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry

wantuole wrote:

from my queue
[Gracy]
00:02:658 (1) - this spinner start is to hard for play umm.. why?
00:05:280 (4,1,2) - ctrl+>? um.. nope i'd prefer to keep my style. :p
00:14:163 (2,4) - more nearly with00:14:018 (1,3) umm.. not neccesary..
00:22:464 (4) -
SPOILER
fixed in another way.
00:34:989 (8,1) - (8)end at blue and (1)start at white nice catch. done
SPOILER
00:37:610 (1,2) - ctrl+g :? must be little friendly for play umm.. not such hard and also for the flow..
00:51:008 (8) - NC yep
01:27:707 (1) - remove NC right
01:20:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - :? 01:19:551 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个已经很拥挤了在中下位子 后面的(1~9)不要再叠回去了英语无力 the melody is also whirly by a same point so i think it's fine for range.
01:34:260 (6,3) - x:268 y:200 nice

nice map
good luck :)
ty~~ ;)
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
:3

[General]
  1. Add your guest mapper's to tags.
  2. Add 0.5 seconds to audio lead in on all difficulties.
  3. Disable countdown? It doesn't even appear anyway.

[Gracy]
  1. 00:14:309 - Maybe a default soft finish suits better then a whistle here?
  2. 01:17:804 (7) - New combo.
  3. 02:09:066 (1,2,1,2,1) - Maybe this order is better:

[Hardy]
  1. 01:13:726 (1) - Better as a Finish instead of whistle.
  2. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - Don't agree with using this spacing here. Would be confused as a stream. Maybe just stack properly on 01:38:192 (1) -
  3. 01:57:124 (1,4) - Switch new combo between these two.
  4. 02:09:648 (1) - Better as a Finish instead of whistle.

what a nice song.
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry
thank you~ ^^

will check later and mod your map asap. :3
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

Kiiwa wrote:

:3


[Hardy]
  1. 01:13:726 (1) - Better as a Finish instead of whistle. good one
  2. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - Don't agree with using this spacing here. Would be confused as a stream. Maybe just stack properly on 01:38:192 (1) - hmm keep that for now, looking for some more mods to decide. thanks for noticing :)
  3. 01:57:124 (1,4) - Switch new combo between these two. ok
  4. 02:09:648 (1) - Better as a Finish instead of whistle. got that
thanks for modding~!

http://puu.sh/261Si there you go > <
Teara
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814 posts
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Teara
[General]

Tags

Add all the guest mappers into the Tags please, in all the diffs.

Fairy Tail Katty Pie a3272509123 -Baby Strawberry-

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1) - No, this shouldn't be allowed in a Normal diff. Please consider remapping this part.

Rest looks good.

[Hardy]

Hitsounds
00:09:648 (4) - Whistle
00:10:231 (7) - ^
00:20:134 (3) - ^
00:20:716 (6) - ^
00:55:376 (4) - ^
00:58:580 (3) - ^
00:59:163 (6) - ^
01:06:153 (7) - ^
01:09:066 (4) - ^
01:09:648 (7) - ^

^ I'm sure you should be getting the idea by now.

01:13:726 (1) - A finish here (Normal Sampleset) works nice.

General
00:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - < This is more Insane then Hard. Maybe revisit it.

01:20:716 (1) - < Delete this, longer break time is good, gives more time to drink coffee and enjoy the music :3

[Gracy]
Spacing -> most of the map.

General

01:17:804 (7) - NC
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry
fixed all. thanks~
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
nazi desu
[Easy]
  1. 請刪除以下finsh....
    00:07:318、00:08:192、00:09:648、00:10:813、00:12:561、00:13:726、00:20:134
    00:56:250、00:57:124、00:58:580、00:59:745、01:02:658、01:09:066、01:09:648
    01:09:940、01:43:435、01:59:163、02:00:910、02:02:658、02:06:153
  2. 02:09:648 綠線聲音調成5% 刪除finish
[A32's Normal]
  1. 00:10:959 (1) 滑條紅點移到(x:180 y:360) 最後一個點移到 (x:312 y:352)
  2. 00:13:726 (1) 移到 (x:4 y:52)
  3. 00:14:309 (2) 重疊 00:12:561 (3)
  4. 00:25:231 (1) -clap +finish
  5. 01:50:425 (2) -whistle +clap
後2個難度無能 ._.
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry
@katty pie (translated mod from Azure.

Azure wrote:

nazi desu
[Easy]
  1. 請刪除以下finsh.... (removing these finished plz~
    00:07:318、00:08:192、00:09:648、00:10:813、00:12:561、00:13:726、00:20:134
    00:56:250、00:57:124、00:58:580、00:59:745、01:02:658、01:09:066、01:09:648
    01:09:940、01:43:435、01:59:163、02:00:910、02:02:658、02:06:153
  2. 02:09:648 綠線聲音調成5% 刪除finish (decreasing the volume of hitsounds to 5% by inherited section~
__Ag
611 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag
因为最近时间不是很多，只得粗略看了，其实这样的类型的歌我很不擅长呢Orzzz
---Hardy----
02:07:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 唯一就觉得这里排列欠缺flow感，要是我会排成flow感的钟摆跳或者五角对角跳，当然草莓这样排应该是给了player上DT的余地（难道我太没人性？QAQ

star之，大草莓的图就是做得好，神麻婆就是神麻婆啊Orzzz
GL~
__Ag
611 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag
补充一下，不用kd了
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry

__Ag wrote:

补充一下，不用kd了
why not~ it would be helpful. :D

just waiting for -baby strawberry-~
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

Kaneko wrote:

[Hardy]

Hitsounds
00:09:648 (4) - Whistle
00:10:231 (7) - ^
00:20:134 (3) - ^
00:20:716 (6) - ^
00:55:376 (4) - ^
00:58:580 (3) - ^
00:59:163 (6) - ^
01:06:153 (7) - ^
01:09:066 (4) - ^
01:09:648 (7) - ^

^ I'm sure you should be getting the idea by now. yea i know,i will consider that and remake the hit sound sometime, i know its bad now

01:13:726 (1) - A finish here (Normal Sampleset) works nice. good

General
00:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - < This is more Insane then Hard. Maybe revisit it. gonna keep that for now, it is hard but still couldnt find a good way to place them

01:20:716 (1) - < Delete this, longer break time is good, gives more time to drink coffee and enjoy the music :3 i prefer they way it is now :)
thanks for modding~!

__Ag wrote:

因为最近时间不是很多，只得粗略看了，其实这样的类型的歌我很不擅长呢Orzzz
---Hardy----
02:07:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 唯一就觉得这里排列欠缺flow感，要是我会排成flow感的钟摆跳或者五角对角跳，当然草莓这样排应该是给了player上DT的余地（难道我太没人性？QAQ 那样就有点太难了，我觉得现在这样就对于一个hard来说就挺难了。。。flow的话对我来说还好全是逆时针转圈圈> <

star之，大草莓的图就是做得好，神麻婆就是神麻婆啊Orzzz 恩恩我很赞同！
GL~
谢谢mod~！

还有啊姥姥你上次是不是上传错了（还是我发错了。。）。。。我发现我更新了一下是我之前没改过的版本。。。。
过两天给你更新下吧orz
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Order from popner's queque

[Pie's Easy]
AR+1? because the normal diff is AR4 i think AR2 better
00:16:347 (3) - use whistle in start and end slider?
00:50:134 (1) - ^
01:29:745 (3) - make little curved?
02:03:532 (3,1) - spacing

[A32's Normal]
00:09:066 (5) - NC for consistency?
00:21:299 (5,1) - swap NC?
00:21:299 - finish?
00:48:677 (1) - anchor point (384,108)?
01:01:493 (4) - x:52 y: 332?
01:05:571 (4) - NC?
01:11:105 (5,1) - swap NC?
01:42:270 (2) - move to x:228 y:44 for look better? if yes don't forget to arrange the spacing
02:09:066 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add note in 02:09:648 - ?

[Hardy]
OD+1?
00:13:726 (2,1) - the normal spacing is 0,8 right? if yes please fix this (0,70)
00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - i think it's so hard so make just ordinal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628979 ?
00:50:716 (5) - ctrl+G?
00:57:124 (2,3) - it's like trap imo. so put 00:57:124 (2) - in x:224 y:84 and 00:57:707 (3) - stacked with 00:57:124 (2) - ?
01:13:143 (3) - ctrl+G better imo
01:36:444 (7) - NC?
02:08:046 (2,3) - spacing (1,12)
02:09:648 (1) - finish and remove whistle?

[Gracy]
00:13:726 (3) - staked with 00:13:143 (2) - ?
00:20:717 (8) - staked with 00:20:134 (7) - ?
01:13:726 (11) - NC?
01:44:600 (6) - ctrl+G?
01:55:522 (1,2) - swap NC?
02:09:648 (1) - finish?

nice map (:
and Good Luck~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好歌233


Gracy

  1. 00:12:415 - add note 加在(1)上面
  2. 00:14:018 (1) - 拉远点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629015
  3. 00:20:717 (1) - new combo here instead
  4. 00:24:794 (1) - 可以分成三个音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629021
  5. 00:31:784 (1) - ^ 另外这个可以改下形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629025
  6. 00:34:697 (5) - 远点? for 1/1
  7. 00:36:736 (3) - reverse arrow挡住了
  8. 00:57:124 (1) - 间距远点?
  9. 01:07:901 (3) - 拉到和下面那个(2)平行比较好...
  10. 01:13:143 (8) - 改成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629035
  11. 01:30:328 - 这段看不清, 建议5-6滑条
  12. 然后我觉得ez/normal/hard的滑条比ins好看, 尝试修一下o.o?
  13. #(手熊拍)
Hardy

  1. 00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - 太突然了..
  2. 00:40:595 (1) - 0.0?
  3. 为什么前面都是1/1这里一大串1/2
  4. 00:46:784 (4,5,6) - 0.0
  5. 00:56:833 - 放个1/1的滑条可以
  6. 01:07:318 - ^
  7. 01:31:202 (1) - 往外弯两格
  8. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - 感觉容易和1/3弄混, 这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629049
  9. 01:57:124 (1,2,3) - 往右上一格
  10. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉insane了 然后@LKs
  11. 不要突然来个很难的梗啊_(:3 」∠ )_
A32's Normal

  1. 00:23:046 (2) - ctrl+shift+r anti-clockwise selection-center 11
  2. 00:31:784 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629055
  3. 01:31:202 (1) - 太紧凑了放松点..
  4. 01:37:609 (3) - o.o 1/1+reverse吧
  5. 01:49:551 (1) - ^
  6. 02:02:075 (3) - ^
  7. 01:41:105 (1) - 为什么normal还变速.. 而且只有一个..
  8. 02:06:153 (1) - 往外两格
Pie's Easy

  1. nyan
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Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry

Xinely wrote:

Order from popner's queque

[Gracy]
00:13:726 (3) - staked with 00:13:143 (2) - ? nah.. i make the place deliberately..
00:20:717 (8) - staked with 00:20:134 (7) - ? ^
01:13:726 (11) - NC? needless i feel..
01:44:600 (6) - ctrl+G? i prefer the present flow. :P
01:55:522 (1,2) - swap NC? sure~
02:09:648 (1) - finish? yep.

nice map (:
and Good Luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好歌233


Gracy

  1. 00:12:415 - add note 加在(1)上面 好
  2. 00:14:018 (1) - 拉远点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629015 这里想要一个停顿的..
  3. 00:20:717 (1) - new combo here instead 恩
  4. 00:24:794 (1) - 可以分成三个音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629021 还是保留现在的.. ;w;
  5. 00:31:784 (1) - ^ 另外这个可以改下形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629025 好
  6. 00:34:697 (5) - 远点? for 1/1 感觉这里近点没什么:P
  7. 00:36:736 (3) - reverse arrow挡住了 恩，移到滑条中间了
  8. 00:57:124 (1) - 间距远点? ~
  9. 01:07:901 (3) - 拉到和下面那个(2)平行比较好... 好些了
  10. 01:13:143 (8) - 改成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629035 lol还是喜欢原来的><
  11. 01:30:328 - 这段看不清, 建议5-6滑条 好
  12. 然后我觉得ez/normal/hard的滑条比ins好看, 尝试修一下o.o?
  13. #(手熊拍)
0,0
thanks for modding!

@小草莓: 我粘过去了了啊.. 还改了tag什么的.. 哭哭哦 OTZ. 好像的确是弄错了orz.. 传好了
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Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Thanks for mods, but for easy no changes ^^'
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Hardy]
AR+1好嘛...最后那一串真是不加hr不敢打

[A32's Normal]
00:30:619 (3) - x264 y112 好看点

[Other]
感觉mod不出什么,别给kd了...
Goodluck

这都给给kd我内疚死了好嘛
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Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi there. Trying to get stuff done from here.

2/4.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. I love to whine about the BG's size, so... why 442 KB? Try to compress it to ~150-200 KB, since there's no need for the BG to be that large anyway?
>Pie's Easy
  1. 00:05:571 - Replace finish with whistle? Finish just breaks the calmness of this spot, IMO, and whistle only supports it even more.
  2. 00:07:318 - Remove finish? The reason's same as above.
  3. 00:09:648 - Replace finish with whistle?
  4. 00:12:561 - Remove finish?
  5. 00:13:726 - ^
  6. 00:14:309 - Replace whistle with finish? Finish actually fits here.
  7. 00:18:095 - Add finish?
  8. 00:18:677 - Replace finish with whistle?
  9. 00:20:134 - Remove finish?
  10. 00:21:008 (5) - Remove whistle?
  11. 00:21:299 - Replace finish with whistle?
  12. 00:23:046 - ^
  13. 00:26:833 - Remove clap? It just doesn't fit with the atmosphere of the song...
  14. 00:27:124 - Replace clap with whistle?
  15. 00:28:289 - Replace finish with whistle?
  16. 00:30:328 (2) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
  17. 00:31:784 - Replace finish with whistle?
  18. 00:33:823 (2,3) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
  19. 00:35:279 - Replace finish with whistle?
  20. 00:37:318 (2) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
  21. 00:56:542 - Add whistle?
  22. 01:02:075 - ^
  23. 01:07:609 - Replace finish with whistle?
  24. 01:09:066 (4) - ^
  25. 01:09:648 - Remove finish?
  26. 01:17:221 - Replace finish with whistle?
  27. 01:24:211 - Remove finish? (So yeah, all these hitsound suggestions are purely because I think they don't fit with how calm the song is (or at times, just how calm it is on a part while it isn't supposed to be... I do realize that this song is 206 BPM though), so go ahead and feel free to think of what you want to do, but if you applied one of them, apply them on similar parts too.)
  28. 01:51:008 (1,2,3) - Make them look like this, maybe?
>A32's Normal
  1. 00:05:571 - Add whistle?
  2. 00:21:299 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it fits the song better, IMO.
  3. 00:22:173 (1) - Maybe stack perfectly below 00:20:716 (4)'s tail?
  4. 00:24:794 - Add whistle?
  5. 00:46:930 - ^
  6. 00:47:221 - Remove whistle?
  7. 00:48:969 - Add whistle?
  8. 00:53:338 - ^
  9. 00:54:503 - ^
  10. 01:13:726 (2) - Add finish?
  11. 01:30:037 (2,1) - ...I don't really like how they touch each other slightly.
  12. 01:31:202 - Add whistle?
  13. 01:48:969 (4) - ^
>Hardy
  1. 00:03:823 (1) - Add whistle?
  2. 00:10:231 (7) - ^
  3. 00:11:105 - ^
  4. 00:20:716 (6) - ^
  5. 00:39:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The star jumps are too small, IMO, making them really, really hard to play... Enlarge the spacing?
  6. 01:50:862 (4) - NC since it's the beginning of a completely new pattern?
  7. 01:56:105 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The jumps here are so unexpected and unreadable... I'll probably let it slip if this is an Insane, but this is Hard...
  8. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This rotating 1/2 stream is too hard for a Hard diff, especially considering this song is 206 BPM.
>Gracy
  1. 00:36:736 (3) - The repeat is hidden by 00:36:154 (1)'s hitburst. Okay, not really hidden, but the repeat is only revealed once we hitted the slider, so yeah...
  2. 00:56:542 (10,11) - Why is (11) only 3/4-beats long? There's no sound at the beginning of (11) anyway. Remove (10) and begin (11) on (10)'s place?
  3. 01:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is flow-breaking, seriously. How about making the spacing bigger, at least?
  4. 01:17:804 (7) - NC considering the distance between 01:17:221 (6,7)? Or maybe you can just stack the head below (6)...
  5. 02:09:357 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to (3)'s place and stack (3) below (1)?
That's all I guess.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Trying to get stuff done from here.

2/4.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. I love to whine about the BG's size, so... why 442 KB? Try to compress it to ~150-200 KB, since there's no need for the BG to be that large anyway? um~ it's fine for now. so i won't like to make that change.. people never mind the diffrence of 200kb i think :P
>Gracy
  1. 00:36:736 (3) - The repeat is hidden by 00:36:154 (1)'s hitburst. Okay, not really hidden, but the repeat is only revealed once we hitted the slider, so yeah... idk.. the present one is fine imo.. ;w;
  2. 00:56:542 (10,11) - Why is (11) only 3/4-beats long? There's no sound at the beginning of (11) anyway. Remove (10) and begin (11) on (10)'s place? yea it's fun to play and fit the song anyway, also i want to stress the beat here so~ no change for now. ><
  3. 01:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is flow-breaking, seriously. How about making the spacing bigger, at least? nah.. flow is just a style and general trend, however it's not suitable everywhere since the little round-trip jump is better for that~
  4. 01:17:804 (7) - NC considering the distance between 01:17:221 (6,7)? Or maybe you can just stack the head below (6)... sorry i'm not get it.. ;~;
  5. 02:09:357 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to (3)'s place and stack (3) below (1)? um yea, i fixed the pattern here.. looks better for now.
That's all I guess.

Good luck on the way 8-)
thank you!!
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Yuki-kun
From my queue, but map seem fine with me.
Star~
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32

Kaneko wrote:

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1) - No, this shouldn't be allowed in a Normal diff. Please consider remapping this part. I'll consider about this but I'd like to keep this now :3(since it fits the music

Azure wrote:

[A32's Normal]
  1. 00:10:959 (1) 滑條紅點移到(x:180 y:360) 最後一個點移到 (x:312 y:352)不想改orz
  2. 00:13:726 (1) 移到 (x:4 y:52)done
  3. 00:14:309 (2) 重疊 00:12:561 (3)^
  4. 00:25:231 (1) -clap +finishsorry orz
  5. 01:50:425 (2) -whistle +clap
no fix ;_;


Xinely wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:09:066 (5) - NC for consistency?fixed
00:21:299 (5,1) - swap NC?ok
00:21:299 - finish?sorry no ww
00:48:677 (1) - anchor point (384,108)?done
01:01:493 (4) - x:52 y: 332?no
01:05:571 (4) - NC?sorry
01:11:105 (5,1) - swap NC?ok ww
01:42:270 (2) - move to x:228 y:44 for look better? if yes don't forget to arrange the spacingsorry the current one is nice enough imo~
02:09:066 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add note in 02:09:648 - ?no this would prove to be too hard for normal.


[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

A32's Normal

  1. 00:23:046 (2) - ctrl+shift+r anti-clockwise selection-center 11pro
  2. 00:31:784 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629055done
  3. 01:31:202 (1) - 太紧凑了放松点..还好啊233
  4. 01:37:609 (3) - o.o 1/1+reverse吧暂时保留
  5. 01:49:551 (1) - ^^
  6. 02:02:075 (3) - ^^
  7. 01:41:105 (1) - 为什么normal还变速.. 而且只有一个..很贴音乐啊ww 而且4.5星用个变速也未尝不可
  8. 02:06:153 (1) - 往外两格不太好改 orz

lkx_Shore wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:30:619 (3) - x264 y112 好看点好


Hinsvar wrote:

>A32's Normal
  1. 00:05:571 - Add whistle?no,the music is quiet here.
  2. 00:21:299 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it fits the song better, IMO.yeah
  3. 00:22:173 (1) - Maybe stack perfectly below 00:20:716 (4)'s tail?nice
  4. 00:24:794 - Add whistle?no
  5. 00:46:930 - ^ok
  6. 00:47:221 - Remove whistle?yeah
  7. 00:48:969 - Add whistle?ok
  8. 00:53:338 - ^no
  9. 00:54:503 - ^no
  10. 01:13:726 (2) - Add finish?I must say it is noisy...
  11. 01:30:037 (2,1) - ...I don't really like how they touch each other slightly.well hard to change orz
  12. 01:31:202 - Add whistle?no
  13. 01:48:969 (4) - ^no need here



Thanks for all of you for modding :3



http://puu.sh/29bos
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari






[Pie's Easy]
AR+1
00:12:561 (2,3) - 滑条头移除finish and NC
00:14:600 (1) - 滑条头add finish
00:18:095 (1) - 滑条尾remove finsh
00:19:260 (2) - 滑条头finish
00:20:716 (4) - NC
00:55:668 (3) - 滑条尾remove finish
01:09:648 (1) - 滑条头remove finish
01:10:231 (2) - 滑条头remove finish and 滑条尾 add finish
01:57:998 (2) - 折返的部分去掉finish
02:07:027 (4) - NC
02:08:046 (1) - easy难度的话这个spinner开始的太早了，建议往后1/2


[A32's Normal]
00:13:726 (1) - 移到x:64,y:40？
00:26:542 (3) - 再拉长点？结束在00:27:124 - 然后加个clap
00:28:289 (1) - 滑条头clap？
00:36:736 - add circle
00:51:008 (4) - 滑条头clap？
00:54:503 (5) - 滑条头whistle？
01:32:367 (2) - 滑条头clap？
01:34:697 (1) - 则不呢没有clap？把whistle去掉
01:41:105 (1) - 这里别突然减SV。。。很容易出100
01:42:852 (4) - 尾巴clap
01:56:833 (3) - 滑条尾clap
02:03:823 (4) - ^


[Hardy]
01:36:444 (7) - NC
02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这段对hard难度来说是不是太难了，我个人理解你02:00:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这一段是摆的方便玩家DT的，但是最后弄成这样。。。

[Insane]
00:20:134 (7) - finish？
00:21:590 (4) - 滑条头finish
00:23:047 (1) - ^
00:36:736 (3) - 折返处finish？
00:57:852 (2) - 我个人觉得吧，这个地方的单个鼓点不是很明显，你又放了遮挡很容易误导人，建议这里重新排下位置
01:37:464 (3) - 往前移1/2，是在那根长白线上
01:45:474 (1) - 建议移到x:216,y:244这，和后面的2保持1.0的间距，01:45:182 (9) - 的话可以转个180°
02:09:357 (1) - remove NC

good luck~
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Thx for mod guys, but I prefer my hitsounds. and no changes in it~
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:13:726 (1) - 移到x:64,y:40？感觉不太美观 orz
00:26:542 (3) - 再拉长点？结束在00:27:124 - 然后加个clap感觉现在这样还好啦...
00:28:289 (1) - 滑条头clap？ok
00:36:736 - add circle感觉不太必要...
00:51:008 (4) - 滑条头clap？不加 orz
00:54:503 (5) - 滑条头whistle？加了
01:32:367 (2) - 滑条头clap？done
01:34:697 (1) - 则不呢没有clap？把whistle去掉这里感觉还是whistle比较好啦...
01:41:105 (1) - 这里别突然减SV。。。很容易出100继续保留
01:42:852 (4) - 尾巴clap改了
01:56:833 (3) - 滑条尾clap^
02:03:823 (4) - ^^


多谢野牛的mod ww


http://puu.sh/2ase9
Gloria Guard
2,274 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi Strawberry (:3 」_) =3

From in-game m4m 'w'

[General]

customising the countdown remove

letterbox during breaks remove


[Pie's Easy]

AR +1 ? OD -1 ?

00:52:755 (1) Ctrl+G?


[A32's Normal]

OD +1?

00:30:474 (2) x:308 y:132 ?

00:36:881 add note? 00:35:716 (2,3) equally?

01:06:590 (6) remove note, Doesn't fit the beat

01:48:815 (4) x:308 y:28


[Hardy]

OD +1?

00:40:959 (3) stack?

00:44:600 (2,3) hmm... Numbers become obscured seems to be bad

00:53:046 (2) Ctrl+G?

01:28:872 (3,4,5,6) 1/2 slider repeat change? Seems difficult to have a large number of players.

01:32:367 (3,4,5,6) ^ too

01:35:862 (3,4,5,6) ^

01:39:357 (3,4,5,6) ^


[Gracy]

AR -1?

00:07:318 (5,1) Ctrl+G? and 00:07:901 (2) number 3 slider head stack?

00:14:017 (1,2) Ctrl+G ? For better flow

00:26:177 add note and paste number 6 slider'w'

00:32:658 (1) I have found other beats that hidden -> http://puu.sh/2aBCK

00:43:580 (6) Ctrl+G?

00:56:250 (9) NC?

00:57:1234 (1) remove NC ?

01:00:328 (1) remove NC

01:05:571 (6) NC ?

01:13:726 (11) NC ?

01:44:309 (5) Ctrl+G ?


Nice map XD
Good luck !
1491625364981
68 posts
Joined September 2010
1491625364981
yo 草莓>.</

GENERAL

你的source呢@@?

Pie's easy

Good diff !

A32's normal

AR up to 5

Hardy

AR調8 AR7感覺有點擁擠

00:46:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建議改成M形排列 現在這樣會有點混淆@A@

01:04:988 (1) - 這點會不會擺太下面了

01:20:716 (1) - 加點的目的是?

02:02:221 (10) - NC

02:02:658 (1) - 不要NC

Gracy

這個INSANE 我MOD不來TAT



好圖 坐等RANK! :)
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

Xinely wrote:

Order from popner's queque

[Hardy]
OD+1? lets keep it 6
00:13:726 (2,1) - the normal spacing is 0,8 right? if yes please fix this (0,70) not a big deal
00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - i think it's so hard so make just ordinal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628979 ? nice
00:50:716 (5) - ctrl+G? k
00:57:124 (2,3) - it's like trap imo. so put 00:57:124 (2) - in x:224 y:84 and 00:57:707 (3) - stacked with 00:57:124 (2) - ? i do like what it is now..
01:13:143 (3) - ctrl+G better imo i would keep that
01:36:444 (7) - NC? k
02:08:046 (2,3) - spacing (1,12) i have changed this pattern...
02:09:648 (1) - finish and remove whistle? already :)
thanks for modding ~!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好歌233

Hardy

  1. 00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - 太突然了.. 恩已经改掉了
  2. 00:40:595 (1) - 0.0?
  3. 为什么前面都是1/1这里一大串1/2 我没太明白。。
  4. 00:46:784 (4,5,6) - 0.0
  5. 00:56:833 - 放个1/1的滑条可以 我还是觉得小停顿蛮好的啊。。
  6. 01:07:318 - ^
  7. 01:31:202 (1) - 往外弯两格 k
  8. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - 感觉容易和1/3弄混, 这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629049 不好看了，我只能把间距拉大点
  9. 01:57:124 (1,2,3) - 往右上一格 我就向上了1个，右面不用动的吧
  10. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉insane了 然后@LKs
  11. 不要突然来个很难的梗啊_(:3 」∠ )_
凑合凑合改了，简单不少但是感觉别扭orz（之前那个实在是太难了。。。。。）
谢谢mod~！

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hardy]
AR+1好嘛...最后那一串真是不加hr不敢打 那一部分我改掉了，ar+1更没法打了。。。。
谢谢mod~！

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Trying to get stuff done from here.

>Hardy
  1. 00:03:823 (1) - Add whistle? not feeling good when adding...
  2. 00:10:231 (7) - ^ sounds better
  3. 00:11:105 - ^
  4. 00:20:716 (6) - ^
  5. 00:39:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The star jumps are too small, IMO, making them really, really hard to play... Enlarge the spacing? i changed the pattern
  6. 01:50:862 (4) - NC since it's the beginning of a completely new pattern? keep that for now.
  7. 01:56:105 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The jumps here are so unexpected and unreadable... I'll probably let it slip if this is an Insane, but this is Hard... i think thats the precious version, i did change that pattern
  8. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This rotating 1/2 stream is too hard for a Hard diff, especially considering this song is 206 BPM.
yea i changed this too
thanks for modding~!

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:



[Hardy]
01:36:444 (7) - NC 恩改掉了
02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这段对hard难度来说是不是太难了，我个人理解你02:00:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这一段是摆的方便玩家DT的，但是最后弄成这样。。。 我自己打不来的，还是简单点好吧，改掉了:D
谢谢mod~！

姥姥姥姥来更新不要弄错了哦这次:)
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry
sorry for can't reply each mod, however fixed mostly! thanks alot!

for now updated all!
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-
so sorry i missed 2 mods...

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Hardy]

OD +1? not really wanna do that

00:40:959 (3) stack? to which one?

00:44:600 (2,3) hmm... Numbers become obscured seems to be bad

00:53:046 (2) Ctrl+G? nah...

01:28:872 (3,4,5,6) 1/2 slider repeat change? Seems difficult to have a large number of players. nah..

01:32:367 (3,4,5,6) ^ too

01:35:862 (3,4,5,6) ^

01:39:357 (3,4,5,6) ^
thanks for modding~!

1491625364981 wrote:

Hardy

AR調8 AR7感覺有點擁擠 ar8一般都是insane啊，hard ar8高了吧

00:46:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建議改成M形排列 現在這樣會有點混淆@A@ 有必要的话我会改，现在的话还是先这样吧

01:04:988 (1) - 這點會不會擺太下面了 别处也没地方摆呀

01:20:716 (1) - 加點的目的是? 这个地方有个比较明显的音效啊，我觉得蛮好的

02:02:221 (10) - NC 不了吧。。。

02:02:658 (1) - 不要NC
谢谢mod~！

好吧基本上没改动orz
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
[gracy]
00:05:862 (2) - 往左边移一格
00:10:813 (3,4)- 这边我觉得不是跳所以用slider盖过去然后后面的5拆成俩note再跳才对把..
00:14:017 (1,2) - ctrl+g一下？
00:16:347 (3,4,5) - 间距统一一下？
00:29:309 (5,6,7) - 间距统一一下？
01:20:716 - 橘色这块的间距有点不平均，平均一下
这个难度靠近一分半的地方那些突然升高的调子可以用渐远的space润色一下我觉得

[hardy]
hr+1

不好意思就mod了这么多，其他的难度我都觉得没啥大问题
其实最主要的原因是我电脑被我煞笔的点了更新于是把我所有东西包括xp系统整个都删除掉了
电脑老师帮我重新装好mac系统后本来答应这星期给我顺便把xp搞好
但是学校特么的真多事于是他就没时间了orz！噢谢特！
mac系统下的osu抽搐的简直没法用
好丧心，祝你幸福
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32

Gloria Guard wrote:

[A32's Normal]

OD +1?can't decide yet

00:30:474 (2) x:308 y:132 ?no sorry ww

00:36:881 add note? 00:35:716 (2,3) equally?not necessary ww

01:06:590 (6) remove note, Doesn't fit the beatok

01:48:815 (4) x:308 y:28done

1491625364981 wrote:

A32's normal

AR up to 5 难以决定orz 先摆着
Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/2el9o
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:687 (2) - ↑↑→→
  2. 01:48:969 (4) - ???yi yi he zai?
[Har?d?]
這名顯示I了把/w\....能玩！~？。。。如果這是I的話就卻一個H了。。。
  1. 00:57:124 (2,3) - NC ....guichu!
[Grapy]
  1. 00:19:406 (5) - 放在左邊感覺順些。。一個大跳過來。。嘛。。。試一下吧。orz。不知道怎麼說。roz
    SPOILER
    orz。。。guichu過頭。。打不動了;w;...
GL & Star☆ :D ~
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry
all fixed expect 00:19:406 (5) on Gracy and setting on Hardy.~ all updated!

@Athena Tennos: the present difficulty is fine for "Hard" imo. :3
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-

tutuhaha wrote:

[hardy]
hr+1 没改哎，我觉得现在的还好。。。
谢谢mod~！

Athena Tennos wrote:

[Har?d?]
這名顯示I了把/w\....能玩！~？。。。如果這是I的話就卻一個H了。。。 你不就很H吗。。。。
  1. 00:57:124 (2,3) - NC ....guichu!
谢谢姥姥帮我改过来，不过我倒是觉得改不改的没什么大区别。。。
谢谢mod~！

总之还是没有更新咯 :)
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
irc mod:
Log
23:23 popner: 00:13:726 (2,1,2) - 这个我觉得太容易读错
23:24 popner: 打了几遍都读错
23:25 Strawberry: ;w;
23:25 Strawberry: 那把00:13:726 (2) - 错开
23:25 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/2eGZh
23:34 popner: 咦
23:34 popner: 刚才跑去干别的事了。。
23:35 popner: 嗯好
23:35 popner: 00:28:581 (2,3,4) - 这个距离觉得不好看啊
23:36 Strawberry: 恩 http://puu.sh/2eHgf
23:39 popner: 00:31:785 (1) - 这个我觉得可以拉得更合曲一些。。
23:40 Strawberry: 求梗 ;~;
23:40 Strawberry: 这个形状也改过其实.. 还是不理想;w;
23:40 popner: http://puu.sh/2eHmZ
23:41 popner: 就是这种意思。。
23:41 Strawberry: 噢噢了解
23:43 popner: 00:45:182 (1,2,3) - 这个要是我的话，会放kick slider
23:43 popner: 因为前面一串1/2，后面又有跳
23:43 Strawberry: 好
23:45 popner: 00:49:842 (3,4) - 这里我觉得前后换一下比较好
23:45 popner: http://puu.sh/2eHtX
23:45 popner: 滑条结尾在长白线上，节奏会不舒服
23:47 Strawberry: 好 修了
23:47 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/2eHxQ
23:50 popner: 貌似后面 4 5 6 flow会不好。。
23:51 popner: http://puu.sh/2eHDr
23:51 Strawberry: 我看看..
23:54 Strawberry: 好改了~
23:57 popner: 01:05:571 (1) - 这NC位置有点奇怪。。
23:57 popner: 前面四个竖着的滑条是用的梗NC的嘛
23:57 popner: 这里也可以用梗NC
23:58 popner: 01:05:279 (4) - 就是加这里
23:58 Strawberry: 好 改了~
23:59 popner: 01:06:153 (5) - 然后这里加NC
23:59 popner: 01:06:736 (1) - 这个NC去掉
23:59 Strawberry: 恩
00:00 popner: 避免NC过短
00:00 popner: 01:07:173 (1) - 这个感觉可以去掉
00:00 popner: 就2个note，音乐上也没有什么变化
00:01 Strawberry: 恩 好!
00:03 popner: 01:13:143 (8,9,10) - 三连有点奇怪。。
00:03 popner: 跟鼓的话貌似是5连
00:03 popner: 跟钢琴的话，没有连
00:05 Strawberry: 那我去掉连打然后把后面的圈移开像这样? http://puu.sh/2eHYP
00:05 popner: http://puu.sh/2eHZ7 箭头地方有鼓
00:06 Strawberry: 恩
00:06 popner: 我倾向于不放连打，一是滑条尾接连打不太好
00:07 Strawberry: 恩 改成1/2了~
00:07 popner: 而是前面那个8连1/2 note比较难
00:07 popner: 二*
00:09 popner: 01:52:318 (1,2,3) - 这。。
00:10 popner: 改不改倒无所谓
00:10 Strawberry: spacing蛋疼嘛;w;
00:11 popner: 02:09:648 (3) - 这个貌似移右上角好一点
00:11 popner: 右下往左上跳反人类。。
00:12 Strawberry: 好 改了
00:12 Strawberry: lol
00:14 Strawberry: ...
00:14 popner: 真坑啊
00:15 Strawberry: QAQ
00:15 popner: 00:40:231 (7,1,2) - 这很容易就读成前面那种1/2的anti-jump了
00:17 Strawberry: 把3挪远点好些?
00:18 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/2eIi7
00:19 popner: 嗯
00:22 popner: 然后GD mod我说一下,你不用回
00:22 Strawberry: en
Mod for GD
12:22 popner: ----------------------------------A32----------------------------------------
12:22 popner: 00:22:173 (2,3) - overlap
12:23 popner: 00:31:202 (1) - remove NC
12:23 popner: 00:47:512 (1) - ^
12:24 popner: 01:37:609 (3) - N里最好不要用多次折返的kick slider
12:24 popner: 01:41:105 (1) - 和变速滑条
12:25 popner: 01:49:551 (1) - 多次折返
12:26 popner: -------------------------------------Katty Pie-------------------------------------------
12:27 popner: 01:19:551 (2) - a little hard for new player to read
12:28 popner: -------------------------------------end----------------------------------------
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
Hi, from popner's queue.

[General]

Not sure if it matters much, but I think the real bpm of the song is 103.

[Pie's Easy]

Looks good, nice difficulty.

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1,1) - This transition timing is awkward. Maybe have the first slider end on 01:41:396, and make the SV decrease only 0.75
01:55:522 (4) - remove this circle, I think it plays fine without it and it'll make this a bit easier

[Hardy]
00:38:192 (5) - NC to note slider velocity change
00:40:595 (1) - remove NC, doesn't make sense to have it here since these notes are really quick after this object
00:40:959 (3) - put the NC here instead

[Gracy]
00:11:978 (6,7,8) - This jump doesn't really make sense to me
00:57:998 (3) - maybe NC here to make the rest of the section easier to read
01:48:386 (1) - remove NC
01:48:677 (3) - add NC

That's all, good luck!
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32

Athena Tennos wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:687 (2) - ↑↑→→感觉还好233
  2. 01:48:969 (4) - ???yi yi he zai?bai zhe geng hao

popner wrote:

12:22 popner: ----------------------------------A32----------------------------------------
12:22 popner: 00:22:173 (2,3) - overlap
12:23 popner: 00:31:202 (1) - remove NC
12:23 popner: 00:47:512 (1) - ^
12:24 popner: 01:37:609 (3) - N里最好不要用多次折返的kick slider
12:24 popner: 01:41:105 (1) - 和变速滑条
12:25 popner: 01:49:551 (1) - 多次折返
All done 233


Moway wrote:

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1,1) - This transition timing is awkward. Maybe have the first slider end on 01:41:396, and make the SV decrease only 0.75deleted the whole speed changing lol
01:55:522 (4) - remove this circle, I think it plays fine without it and it'll make this a bit easierI think it could make a better effect

http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid ... 2416123550



(puush盘突然崩坏于是暂时度娘代替 233
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo

popner wrote:

12:27 popner: 01:19:551 (2) - a little hard for new player to read
Hm not think~ Slider speed almost not changes and It's fine to play~
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Moway wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue.

[General]

Not sure if it matters much, but I think the real bpm of the song is 103. nah, the present bpm is following the drum and piano sound.

[Hardy]
00:38:192 (5) - NC to note slider velocity change nah it's longer than the previous slider and is obvious enough imo.. nc here would make a combo burst at previous slider (4), and that looks bad.
00:40:595 (1) - remove NC, doesn't make sense to have it here since these notes are really quick after this object same reason as the nc at here 00:42:270.
00:40:959 (3) - put the NC here instead

[Gracy]
00:11:978 (6,7,8) - This jump doesn't really make sense to me jump follow the music better.
00:57:998 (3) - maybe NC here to make the rest of the section easier to read umm needless for me.. it's such a short combo and not very helpful..
01:48:386 (1) - remove NC nah it's a new chapter by piano.
01:48:677 (3) - add NC

That's all, good luck!
and

updated all! thank you guys
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