__Ag wrote:

补充一下，不用kd了

Kaneko wrote:

[Hardy]

Hitsounds
00:09:648 (4) - Whistle
00:10:231 (7) - ^
00:20:134 (3) - ^
00:20:716 (6) - ^
00:55:376 (4) - ^
00:58:580 (3) - ^
00:59:163 (6) - ^
01:06:153 (7) - ^
01:09:066 (4) - ^
01:09:648 (7) - ^

^ I'm sure you should be getting the idea by now. yea i know,i will consider that and remake the hit sound sometime, i know its bad now

01:13:726 (1) - A finish here (Normal Sampleset) works nice. good

General
00:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - < This is more Insane then Hard. Maybe revisit it. gonna keep that for now, it is hard but still couldnt find a good way to place them

01:20:716 (1) - < Delete this, longer break time is good, gives more time to drink coffee and enjoy the music :3 i prefer they way it is now

__Ag wrote:

因为最近时间不是很多，只得粗略看了，其实这样的类型的歌我很不擅长呢Orzzz
---Hardy----
02:07:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 唯一就觉得这里排列欠缺flow感，要是我会排成flow感的钟摆跳或者五角对角跳，当然草莓这样排应该是给了player上DT的余地（难道我太没人性？QAQ 那样就有点太难了，我觉得现在这样就对于一个hard来说就挺难了。。。flow的话对我来说还好全是逆时针转圈圈> <

star之，大草莓的图就是做得好，神麻婆就是神麻婆啊Orzzz 恩恩我很赞同！
GL~

1. 00:12:415 - add note 加在(1)上面
2. 00:14:018 (1) - 拉远点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629015
3. 00:20:717 (1) - new combo here instead
4. 00:24:794 (1) - 可以分成三个音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629021
5. 00:31:784 (1) - ^ 另外这个可以改下形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629025
6. 00:34:697 (5) - 远点? for 1/1
7. 00:36:736 (3) - reverse arrow挡住了
8. 00:57:124 (1) - 间距远点?
9. 01:07:901 (3) - 拉到和下面那个(2)平行比较好...
10. 01:13:143 (8) - 改成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629035
11. 01:30:328 - 这段看不清, 建议5-6滑条
12. 然后我觉得ez/normal/hard的滑条比ins好看, 尝试修一下o.o?
13. #(手熊拍)

1. 00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - 太突然了..
2. 00:40:595 (1) - 0.0?
3. 为什么前面都是1/1这里一大串1/2
4. 00:46:784 (4,5,6) - 0.0
5. 00:56:833 - 放个1/1的滑条可以
6. 01:07:318 - ^
7. 01:31:202 (1) - 往外弯两格
8. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - 感觉容易和1/3弄混, 这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629049
9. 01:57:124 (1,2,3) - 往右上一格
10. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉insane了 然后@LKs
11. 不要突然来个很难的梗啊_(:3 」∠ )_

1. 00:23:046 (2) - ctrl+shift+r anti-clockwise selection-center 11
2. 00:31:784 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629055
3. 01:31:202 (1) - 太紧凑了放松点..
4. 01:37:609 (3) - o.o 1/1+reverse吧
5. 01:49:551 (1) - ^
6. 02:02:075 (3) - ^
7. 01:41:105 (1) - 为什么normal还变速.. 而且只有一个..
8. 02:06:153 (1) - 往外两格

1. nyan

Xinely wrote:

Order from popner's queque

[Gracy]
00:13:726 (3) - staked with 00:13:143 (2) - ? nah.. i make the place deliberately..
00:20:717 (8) - staked with 00:20:134 (7) - ? ^
01:13:726 (11) - NC? needless i feel..
01:44:600 (6) - ctrl+G? i prefer the present flow.
01:55:522 (1,2) - swap NC? sure~
02:09:648 (1) - finish? yep.

nice map (:
and Good Luck~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好歌233


Gracy

1. 00:12:415 - add note 加在(1)上面 好
2. 00:14:018 (1) - 拉远点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629015 这里想要一个停顿的..
3. 00:20:717 (1) - new combo here instead 恩
4. 00:24:794 (1) - 可以分成三个音 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629021 还是保留现在的.. ;w;
5. 00:31:784 (1) - ^ 另外这个可以改下形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629025 好
6. 00:34:697 (5) - 远点? for 1/1 感觉这里近点没什么:P
7. 00:36:736 (3) - reverse arrow挡住了 恩，移到滑条中间了
8. 00:57:124 (1) - 间距远点? ~
9. 01:07:901 (3) - 拉到和下面那个(2)平行比较好... 好些了
10. 01:13:143 (8) - 改成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629035 lol还是喜欢原来的><
11. 01:30:328 - 这段看不清, 建议5-6滑条 好
12. 然后我觉得ez/normal/hard的滑条比ins好看, 尝试修一下o.o?
13. #(手熊拍)

0,0

1. I love to whine about the BG's size, so... why 442 KB? Try to compress it to ~150-200 KB, since there's no need for the BG to be that large anyway?

1. 00:05:571 - Replace finish with whistle? Finish just breaks the calmness of this spot, IMO, and whistle only supports it even more.
2. 00:07:318 - Remove finish? The reason's same as above.
3. 00:09:648 - Replace finish with whistle?
4. 00:12:561 - Remove finish?
5. 00:13:726 - ^
6. 00:14:309 - Replace whistle with finish? Finish actually fits here.
7. 00:18:095 - Add finish?
8. 00:18:677 - Replace finish with whistle?
9. 00:20:134 - Remove finish?
10. 00:21:008 (5) - Remove whistle?
11. 00:21:299 - Replace finish with whistle?
12. 00:23:046 - ^
13. 00:26:833 - Remove clap? It just doesn't fit with the atmosphere of the song...
14. 00:27:124 - Replace clap with whistle?
15. 00:28:289 - Replace finish with whistle?
16. 00:30:328 (2) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
17. 00:31:784 - Replace finish with whistle?
18. 00:33:823 (2,3) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
19. 00:35:279 - Replace finish with whistle?
20. 00:37:318 (2) - Same as the suggestions on 00:26:833 (2).
21. 00:56:542 - Add whistle?
22. 01:02:075 - ^
23. 01:07:609 - Replace finish with whistle?
24. 01:09:066 (4) - ^
25. 01:09:648 - Remove finish?
26. 01:17:221 - Replace finish with whistle?
27. 01:24:211 - Remove finish? (So yeah, all these hitsound suggestions are purely because I think they don't fit with how calm the song is (or at times, just how calm it is on a part while it isn't supposed to be... I do realize that this song is 206 BPM though), so go ahead and feel free to think of what you want to do, but if you applied one of them, apply them on similar parts too.)
28. 01:51:008 (1,2,3) - Make them look like this, maybe?

1. 00:05:571 - Add whistle?
2. 00:21:299 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it fits the song better, IMO.
3. 00:22:173 (1) - Maybe stack perfectly below 00:20:716 (4)'s tail?
4. 00:24:794 - Add whistle?
5. 00:46:930 - ^
6. 00:47:221 - Remove whistle?
7. 00:48:969 - Add whistle?
8. 00:53:338 - ^
9. 00:54:503 - ^
10. 01:13:726 (2) - Add finish?
11. 01:30:037 (2,1) - ...I don't really like how they touch each other slightly.
12. 01:31:202 - Add whistle?
13. 01:48:969 (4) - ^

1. 00:03:823 (1) - Add whistle?
2. 00:10:231 (7) - ^
3. 00:11:105 - ^
4. 00:20:716 (6) - ^
5. 00:39:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The star jumps are too small, IMO, making them really, really hard to play... Enlarge the spacing?
6. 01:50:862 (4) - NC since it's the beginning of a completely new pattern?
7. 01:56:105 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The jumps here are so unexpected and unreadable... I'll probably let it slip if this is an Insane, but this is Hard...
8. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This rotating 1/2 stream is too hard for a Hard diff, especially considering this song is 206 BPM.

1. 00:36:736 (3) - The repeat is hidden by 00:36:154 (1)'s hitburst. Okay, not really hidden, but the repeat is only revealed once we hitted the slider, so yeah...
2. 00:56:542 (10,11) - Why is (11) only 3/4-beats long? There's no sound at the beginning of (11) anyway. Remove (10) and begin (11) on (10)'s place?
3. 01:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is flow-breaking, seriously. How about making the spacing bigger, at least?
4. 01:17:804 (7) - NC considering the distance between 01:17:221 (6,7)? Or maybe you can just stack the head below (6)...
5. 02:09:357 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to (3)'s place and stack (3) below (1)?

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Trying to get stuff done from here.

2/4.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. I love to whine about the BG's size, so... why 442 KB? Try to compress it to ~150-200 KB, since there's no need for the BG to be that large anyway? um~ it's fine for now. so i won't like to make that change.. people never mind the diffrence of 200kb i think

>Gracy

1. 00:36:736 (3) - The repeat is hidden by 00:36:154 (1)'s hitburst. Okay, not really hidden, but the repeat is only revealed once we hitted the slider, so yeah... idk.. the present one is fine imo.. ;w;
2. 00:56:542 (10,11) - Why is (11) only 3/4-beats long? There's no sound at the beginning of (11) anyway. Remove (10) and begin (11) on (10)'s place? yea it's fun to play and fit the song anyway, also i want to stress the beat here so~ no change for now. ><
3. 01:10:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is flow-breaking, seriously. How about making the spacing bigger, at least? nah.. flow is just a style and general trend, however it's not suitable everywhere since the little round-trip jump is better for that~
4. 01:17:804 (7) - NC considering the distance between 01:17:221 (6,7)? Or maybe you can just stack the head below (6)... sorry i'm not get it.. ;~;
5. 02:09:357 (1,2,3) - Move (2) to (3)'s place and stack (3) below (1)? um yea, i fixed the pattern here.. looks better for now.

That's all I guess.

Good luck on the way

Kaneko wrote:

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1) - No, this shouldn't be allowed in a Normal diff. Please consider remapping this part. I'll consider about this but I'd like to keep this now :3(since it fits the music

Azure wrote:

[A32's Normal]

1. 00:10:959 (1) 滑條紅點移到(x:180 y:360) 最後一個點移到 (x:312 y:352)不想改orz
2. 00:13:726 (1) 移到 (x:4 y:52)done
3. 00:14:309 (2) 重疊 00:12:561 (3)^
4. 00:25:231 (1) -clap +finishsorry orz
5. 01:50:425 (2) -whistle +clap

no fix ;_;

Xinely wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:09:066 (5) - NC for consistency?fixed
00:21:299 (5,1) - swap NC?ok
00:21:299 - finish?sorry no ww
00:48:677 (1) - anchor point (384,108)?done
01:01:493 (4) - x:52 y: 332?no
01:05:571 (4) - NC?sorry
01:11:105 (5,1) - swap NC?ok ww
01:42:270 (2) - move to x:228 y:44 for look better? if yes don't forget to arrange the spacingsorry the current one is nice enough imo~
02:09:066 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add note in 02:09:648 - ?no this would prove to be too hard for normal.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

A32's Normal

1. 00:23:046 (2) - ctrl+shift+r anti-clockwise selection-center 11pro
2. 00:31:784 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629055done
3. 01:31:202 (1) - 太紧凑了放松点..还好啊233
4. 01:37:609 (3) - o.o 1/1+reverse吧暂时保留
5. 01:49:551 (1) - ^^
6. 02:02:075 (3) - ^^
7. 01:41:105 (1) - 为什么normal还变速.. 而且只有一个..很贴音乐啊ww 而且4.5星用个变速也未尝不可
8. 02:06:153 (1) - 往外两格不太好改 orz

lkx_Shore wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:30:619 (3) - x264 y112 好看点好

Hinsvar wrote:

>A32's Normal

1. 00:05:571 - Add whistle?no,the music is quiet here.
2. 00:21:299 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it fits the song better, IMO.yeah
3. 00:22:173 (1) - Maybe stack perfectly below 00:20:716 (4)'s tail?nice
4. 00:24:794 - Add whistle?no
5. 00:46:930 - ^ok
6. 00:47:221 - Remove whistle?yeah
7. 00:48:969 - Add whistle?ok
8. 00:53:338 - ^no
9. 00:54:503 - ^no
10. 01:13:726 (2) - Add finish?I must say it is noisy...
11. 01:30:037 (2,1) - ...I don't really like how they touch each other slightly.well hard to change orz
12. 01:31:202 - Add whistle?no
13. 01:48:969 (4) - ^no need here

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[A32's Normal]
00:13:726 (1) - 移到x:64,y:40？感觉不太美观 orz
00:26:542 (3) - 再拉长点？结束在00:27:124 - 然后加个clap感觉现在这样还好啦...
00:28:289 (1) - 滑条头clap？ok
00:36:736 - add circle感觉不太必要...
00:51:008 (4) - 滑条头clap？不加 orz
00:54:503 (5) - 滑条头whistle？加了
01:32:367 (2) - 滑条头clap？done
01:34:697 (1) - 则不呢没有clap？把whistle去掉这里感觉还是whistle比较好啦...
01:41:105 (1) - 这里别突然减SV。。。很容易出100继续保留
01:42:852 (4) - 尾巴clap改了
01:56:833 (3) - 滑条尾clap^
02:03:823 (4) - ^^

Xinely wrote:

Order from popner's queque

[Hardy]
OD+1? lets keep it 6
00:13:726 (2,1) - the normal spacing is 0,8 right? if yes please fix this (0,70) not a big deal
00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - i think it's so hard so make just ordinal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/628979 ? nice
00:50:716 (5) - ctrl+G? k
00:57:124 (2,3) - it's like trap imo. so put 00:57:124 (2) - in x:224 y:84 and 00:57:707 (3) - stacked with 00:57:124 (2) - ? i do like what it is now..
01:13:143 (3) - ctrl+G better imo i would keep that
01:36:444 (7) - NC? k
02:08:046 (2,3) - spacing (1,12) i have changed this pattern...
02:09:648 (1) - finish and remove whistle? already

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好歌233

Hardy

1. 00:39:648 (3,4,5,6) - 太突然了.. 恩已经改掉了
2. 00:40:595 (1) - 0.0?
3. 为什么前面都是1/1这里一大串1/2 我没太明白。。
4. 00:46:784 (4,5,6) - 0.0
5. 00:56:833 - 放个1/1的滑条可以 我还是觉得小停顿蛮好的啊。。
6. 01:07:318 - ^
7. 01:31:202 (1) - 往外弯两格 k
8. 01:37:755 (9,10,11) - 感觉容易和1/3弄混, 这样? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629049 不好看了，我只能把间距拉大点
9. 01:57:124 (1,2,3) - 往右上一格 我就向上了1个，右面不用动的吧
10. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉insane了 然后@LKs
11. 不要突然来个很难的梗啊_(:3 」∠ )_

凑合凑合改了，简单不少但是感觉别扭orz（之前那个实在是太难了。。。。。）

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hardy]
AR+1好嘛...最后那一串真是不加hr不敢打 那一部分我改掉了，ar+1更没法打了。。。。

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there. Trying to get stuff done from here.

>Hardy

1. 00:03:823 (1) - Add whistle? not feeling good when adding...
2. 00:10:231 (7) - ^ sounds better
3. 00:11:105 - ^
4. 00:20:716 (6) - ^
5. 00:39:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The star jumps are too small, IMO, making them really, really hard to play... Enlarge the spacing? i changed the pattern
6. 01:50:862 (4) - NC since it's the beginning of a completely new pattern? keep that for now.
7. 01:56:105 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The jumps here are so unexpected and unreadable... I'll probably let it slip if this is an Insane, but this is Hard... i think thats the precious version, i did change that pattern
8. 02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This rotating 1/2 stream is too hard for a Hard diff, especially considering this song is 206 BPM.

yea i changed this too

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[Hardy]
01:36:444 (7) - NC 恩改掉了
02:07:318 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这段对hard难度来说是不是太难了，我个人理解你02:00:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这一段是摆的方便玩家DT的，但是最后弄成这样。。。 我自己打不来的，还是简单点好吧，改掉了:D

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Hardy]

OD +1? not really wanna do that

00:40:959 (3) stack? to which one?

00:44:600 (2,3) hmm... Numbers become obscured seems to be bad

00:53:046 (2) Ctrl+G? nah...

01:28:872 (3,4,5,6) 1/2 slider repeat change? Seems difficult to have a large number of players. nah..

01:32:367 (3,4,5,6) ^ too

01:35:862 (3,4,5,6) ^

01:39:357 (3,4,5,6) ^

1491625364981 wrote:

Hardy

AR調8 AR7感覺有點擁擠 ar8一般都是insane啊，hard ar8高了吧

00:46:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建議改成M形排列 現在這樣會有點混淆@A@ 有必要的话我会改，现在的话还是先这样吧

01:04:988 (1) - 這點會不會擺太下面了 别处也没地方摆呀

01:20:716 (1) - 加點的目的是? 这个地方有个比较明显的音效啊，我觉得蛮好的

02:02:221 (10) - NC 不了吧。。。

02:02:658 (1) - 不要NC

Gloria Guard wrote:

[A32's Normal]

OD +1?can't decide yet

00:30:474 (2) x:308 y:132 ?no sorry ww

00:36:881 add note? 00:35:716 (2,3) equally?not necessary ww

01:06:590 (6) remove note, Doesn't fit the beatok

01:48:815 (4) x:308 y:28done

1491625364981 wrote:

A32's normal

AR up to 5 难以决定orz 先摆着

1. 00:11:687 (2) - ↑↑→→
2. 01:48:969 (4) - ???yi yi he zai?

1. 00:57:124 (2,3) - NC ....guichu!

1. 00:19:406 (5) - 放在左邊感覺順些。。一個大跳過來。。嘛。。。試一下吧。orz。不知道怎麼說。roz
   SPOILER

   
   orz。。。guichu過頭。。打不動了;w;...

tutuhaha wrote:

[hardy]
hr+1 没改哎，我觉得现在的还好。。。

Athena Tennos wrote:

[Har?d?]
這名顯示I了把/w\....能玩！~？。。。如果這是I的話就卻一個H了。。。 你不就很H吗。。。。

1. 00:57:124 (2,3) - NC ....guichu!

谢谢姥姥帮我改过来，不过我倒是觉得改不改的没什么大区别。。。

Athena Tennos wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:11:687 (2) - ↑↑→→感觉还好233
2. 01:48:969 (4) - ???yi yi he zai?bai zhe geng hao

popner wrote:

12:22 popner: ----------------------------------A32----------------------------------------
12:22 popner: 00:22:173 (2,3) - overlap
12:23 popner: 00:31:202 (1) - remove NC
12:23 popner: 00:47:512 (1) - ^
12:24 popner: 01:37:609 (3) - N里最好不要用多次折返的kick slider
12:24 popner: 01:41:105 (1) - 和变速滑条
12:25 popner: 01:49:551 (1) - 多次折返
All done 233

Moway wrote:

[A32's Normal]

01:41:105 (1,1) - This transition timing is awkward. Maybe have the first slider end on 01:41:396, and make the SV decrease only 0.75deleted the whole speed changing lol
01:55:522 (4) - remove this circle, I think it plays fine without it and it'll make this a bit easierI think it could make a better effect

popner wrote:

12:27 popner: 01:19:551 (2) - a little hard for new player to read

Moway wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue.

[General]

Not sure if it matters much, but I think the real bpm of the song is 103. nah, the present bpm is following the drum and piano sound.

[Hardy]
00:38:192 (5) - NC to note slider velocity change nah it's longer than the previous slider and is obvious enough imo.. nc here would make a combo burst at previous slider (4), and that looks bad.
00:40:595 (1) - remove NC, doesn't make sense to have it here since these notes are really quick after this object same reason as the nc at here 00:42:270.
00:40:959 (3) - put the NC here instead

[Gracy]
00:11:978 (6,7,8) - This jump doesn't really make sense to me jump follow the music better.
00:57:998 (3) - maybe NC here to make the rest of the section easier to read umm needless for me.. it's such a short combo and not very helpful..
01:48:386 (1) - remove NC nah it's a new chapter by piano.
01:48:677 (3) - add NC

That's all, good luck!

1. 感覺可以拿兔子那套skin來用
2. Tag "Sounds of colour"
   
   
3. 其實我感覺可以拿掉letterbox during breaks 因為留著也不太好看233
4. 加個soft-sliderslide 然後都調成S:C1

1. HP+1~2 at least, since your distance spacing isn't really big, it'll be extremely messy with AR1 ;n;!
2. I saw you add many finished in this diff. That's cool, but if you can low down the volume by 10%~15%, it won't be that loud!
3. 00:03:823 - Why you don't add a finish here ;n; It sounds really fit since there's a strong finish sound at the music. Consider to add it!
4. 00:08:775 (2,3) - If I were you, I'll add a finish at 00:08:775 (2) -'s sliderend, then use a whistle instead of a finish at 00:09:357 (3) -'s sliderend. I saw you add some finishes at the downbeat in former patterns, so the finishes-rules should be consistent here. That would make me feel more comfortable while playing. :3
5. 00:19:260 (2,3) - ^
6. 00:57:707 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:14:309 - Finish here would be fit. You can hear an strong finish sound in the music, right?
8. 00:16:347 (3) - I can hear a sound in the music, so why you've added nothing here? Add whistle at sliderbegin/sliderend would be fit more.
9. 00:17:804 - I prefer a note here, I can here a sound in the music. Also, a note can connect the pattern between 00:14:600 - ~ 00:17:512 - and 00:18:095 (1,2,3) -, so the players won't think the hit-rhythm are always 2/1.
10. 00:26:833 (2,2,2,3,2) - I prefer use S:C1 section and then add finish instead these claps. Well it's awesome, right? (:
11. 00:36:153 (1,2,3,1) - Well, I'm not really into those 1/1s, since it would be surprised to the beginners a bit. Try to connect same musics in this part by using sliders! Here's an example:
    
12. 00:50:134 (1) - Here too, use a reserve slider to cross some strong music here may be weird. Try some not-really-hard rhyth, like example.jpg will be great imo.
    
13. 00:56:542 - At least a whistle here. You know that, right? >:
14. 01:02:075 - Yeah whistle again.
15. 01:03:241 (1,2,3) - Actually I'm not a big fan for this kind of rhythm: long slider reserve and then an alone-note. Seems pretty hard for Easy difficulty, and it isn't consistent with your former/following patterns. So try something like example.jpg will be more easier and more consistent imo.
    
16. 01:16:347 - Yeah so here should be a finish or whistle idk it's so empty.
17. 01:17:512 (3) - Remove whistle from here? Sounds really annoying when 1/1 whistle appears. Also, you didn't add a whistle at 01:22:755 - , and I think that's better if you can leave nothing there.
18. 01:21:299 - Add a note here? First, I've heard a sound in the music, well you shouldn't leave a break when there's a sound. Second, place a note here would be fine as well as that will continue the 2/1 hit-rhythm, since your rhythm pattern are like 2/1s.
19. 01:23:338 (1) - Meh, why you place the slider here? The music starts 1/1 later, and then you should place this slider there (01:23:629 - ). Perhaps you'll think the hit-rhythm is more important, but it would be extremely WEIRD.
20. 01:34:697 - Seems you forget a finish.
21. 01:40:813 - W-why you add a clap here? It's really unfit, weird, and inconsistent! Please listen the music carefully, the music doesn't contain any clap-sound here. Remove it please.
22. 01:44:600 - k whistle here.
23. 01:49:551 - ^
24. 01:51:008 (1) - nazi a bit but symmetrical slider would be better imo...

1. 感覺AR可以+1 因為SV有點快
2. 有些我覺得可以加whistle的地方先放在盒子裡 你改完全部在下去看吧 >:
3. 00:10:813 (1) - 第二個彎可以在curve點
4. 00:12:561 (3,1) - 我感覺分開沒意思...反正這中間空拍也有點怪 刪掉(1)然後折返(3)可能會好點
5. 00:21:299 - 這finish? 或者whistle
6. 00:27:707 (5) - 其實可以curve然後作個blanket
7. 00:34:114 (2,3) - 這裡有點亂 而且00:32:949 (3,2,3) - 都是彎的多無聊
   
   
   

   488,200,34114,2,0,L|440:312,1,110
   360,324,34697,2,0,P|300:316|268:260,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   212,216,35279,5,8,0:0:0:0:

8. 00:36:736 - 沒啥理由空著吧。。音樂有個響音的說
9. 00:48:677 (1,2) - 感覺可以swap NC
10. 00:44:600 - 不是應該要finish嗎
11. 01:00:619 (3,4) - 平行比較美觀
12. 01:10:231 (4,1) - 嗯一樣swap
13. 01:13:726 (3) - 應該能finish
14. 01:31:202 - ...clap? 有點空
15. 01:32:367 - 應該是whistle
16. 01:49:551 (1,2) - 不是很好看 而且壓到折返..
17. 02:02:075 (3) - 這裡突然來個3折返實在不太安全
18. 02:04:406 (1) - 第四個錨點往下個五六格 *nazi*
    
    就是那啥whistle

    1. 00:04:114 - 其實我覺得這裡可以remove 因為在finish後面接whistle有點吵 另外可以作個層次感
    2. 00:05:571 - 這邊上whistle你懂
    3. 00:09:648 - ^
    4. 00:10:522 - ^
    5. 00:12:561 - ^
    6. 00:15:474 - ^
    7. 00:19:551 - ^
    8. 00:23:046 - ^
    9. 00:24:211 - ^
    10. 00:57:124 - ^
    11. 01:04:697 - ^
    12. 01:11:978 - ^
        後面hitsound下法變了就不吐槽了 lol

1. 00:03:823 (1) - 好空 /_\
2. 00:11:978 (3) - 其實我覺得沒必要留這顆..不過硬要塞的話就讓00:12:270 - 也有東西 在打圖的時候比較有節奏。。可以把這顆換成1/1滑條
3. 00:31:784 (1) - whistle你懂
4. 00:38:192 (5,6) - ...spacing跟SV突然變小還是NC下吧
5. 00:46:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不要跳嘛 這BPM很高的..
6. 01:08:483 (1,2) - 我感覺(1)沒太大的NC理由...我還以為節奏變了還是啥的 反而(2)來了一堆1/2才需要NC隔開才對
7. 01:29:745 (2) - whistle在sliderbody的意義何在
8. 01:45:619 (1) - 這個spinner來的有點莫名...明明就是同屬性的音樂前面有map這裡卻用轉盤帶過不是很奇怪嗎
9. 01:56:542 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我覺得十分違和 (3,4,5,6)是小spacing (7)卻作了大反差 但rhythm是一樣的 這樣再Hard裡有可能會造成誤讀圖或啥你懂的。。建議把(3,4,5,6)拆成兩個slider然後spacing最好分開點
   x3 nice diff!

1. 00:05:280 (4,1) - 我覺得沒必要作大跳 放個1.52x spacing就夠了(跟00:05:571 (1,2,3) - 等距)
2. 00:09:940 (1,3) - swap NC, 跟音樂吧
3. 00:34:697 (5,6,7) - 為啥要anti-jump ;v;?!! 我會建議移開一點 不然就是NC提示 orz
4. 00:41:978 (6) - 這個應該在(4)的左邊比較坑 (?) 打起來比較爽-w-
5. 00:50:134 (4,5) - 應該可以跟(3)的sliderend作個三角型的跳 這裡都按0.9x排太無趣
6. 01:07:318 - finish你懂的
7. 01:09:503 (4,5,6,7) - 正方形 這樣好丑
8. 01:17:512 - ..為啥要空著啊 這裡音樂沒有明顯停下來 什麼東西都沒放覺得好...違和嗎?
9. 01:52:318 (1,2,3) - 等距 沒必要不等距啊

Flask wrote:

草莓姥爺~~

[General]

1. 感覺可以拿兔子那套skin來用 nah it's not fit the song ._.
2. Tag "Sounds of colour" since the Sounds of colour is just the omnibus' name, not the original album, i'm not mind to tag it. thank you Flask.
   
   
3. 其實我感覺可以拿掉letterbox during breaks 因為留著也不太好看233 nah. it's wired moving it.
4. 加個soft-sliderslide 然後都調成S:C1 it's wired to sound. really. orz

[Gracy]

1. 00:05:280 (4,1) - 我覺得沒必要作大跳 放個1.52x spacing就夠了(跟00:05:571 (1,2,3) - 等距) since it's the insane diff and i don't want to make too many regular things because the song is independent and fluent. btw the jump is not large at all.. plays fine for me.. keep for now.
2. 00:09:940 (1,3) - swap NC, 跟音樂吧 indeed, from the piano of the song, the NC should be placed on the present position.. ;w;
3. 00:34:697 (5,6,7) - 為啥要anti-jump ;v;?!! 我會建議移開一點 不然就是NC提示 orz same. it's fun to play. and i don't want to make the map seems like be limitted by something for the song.. (sorry for my poor ability of expression00
4. 00:41:978 (6) - 這個應該在(4)的左邊比較坑 (?) 打起來比較爽-w- um i tried but it is not very comfortable to play and also not really fit the song~
5. 00:50:134 (4,5) - 應該可以跟(3)的sliderend作個三角型的跳 這裡都按0.9x排太無趣 the calm before the storm. (maybe? lol
6. 01:07:318 - finish你懂的 you are right.
7. 01:09:503 (4,5,6,7) - 正方形 這樣好丑 the fact turn out the square would break the pattern and it looks fine for me. so..
8. 01:17:512 - ..為啥要空著啊 這裡音樂沒有明顯停下來 什麼東西都沒放覺得好...違和嗎? nope. just following keynotes.
9. 01:52:318 (1,2,3) - 等距 沒必要不等距啊 for the rising scale. idk. it fit the song for me.

又要泡了TAT

Flask wrote:

[A32's Normal]
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[*]00:44:600 - 不是應該要finish嗎柑橘加了略违和
[*]01:00:619 (3,4) - 平行比較美觀太对称感觉不太自然 orz
[*]01:13:726 (3) - 應該能finish这边音乐突然静下来了我觉得whistle更加suitable
[*]02:02:075 (3) - 這裡突然來個3折返實在不太安全 少量的大概允许吧...
那啥whistle全改了

popner wrote:

Re-checked and made some small change in [Gracy] and fix some improperly used patterns in Normal.