ALLLLLRIGHTY THEN
All difficulties:Make the source just "Touhou" and put "Imperishable Night" and "th08" in the tags. Oh, Imperishable Night is already in there. You can remove Love Coloured Master Spark from the tags.
Set a preview point and make it the same for every difficulty. I suggest 00:35:668, but you can choose whatever.
Background image is too large. Reduce the size, don't go over 1024x768. Actually, if you want, I can crop this so there aren't black bars at the top and bottom. Let me know.
+20ms to the offset. Don't forget to resnap all notes.
AFTER changing the offset, make your first kiai section begin at exactly 00:35:688 on the large white tick. Make the second kiai begin at exactly 01:21:132, also on the large white tick.
The easy and normal difficulties are very similar. Try either changing things up a bit so they aren't so similar, or, at the very least, flip the notes in one of them.
A lot of your claps sound bad. Try not to put so many clap sounds on red ticks. USUALLY claps sound best when placed on the 2nd and 4th beats. For example, in this screenshot
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3301 these would be the black 3, black 6, and purple 3. DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING IN THE TAIKO DIFFICULTY THOUGH.
Move the map to Pending when you upload.
Final Spark:00:23:972 - add circle here maybe
00:24:150 - and here
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - claps on these sound bad. Try using soft whistles instead (on the white ticks) Also, this section could use a slight volume decrease on the hitsounds.
00:58:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same deal with the claps
01:07:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:10:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:824 (2,3,4) - fix spacing
01:19:713 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - again, remove these claps. If you insist on using claps, put them on the 2nd and 4th white ticks.
01:21:132 - add a circle here
01:10:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure what to say about these streams. Some people may complain about them, but I don't have any trouble playing them in the "intended" way (actually moving the cursor in the circle instead of trying to find a center point).
Why not map all the way to the end at 01:58:055? The current ending seems kind of random
Master Spark:00:23:952 - same as hard, could use two circles here
00:35:668 - hmm, why is the spacing here larger than this same section in the harder difficulty? I think you should give hard the higher spacing.
00:40:284 (8) - extend to the next white tick maybe. Right now it seems to end too early.
00:45:964 (8) - same
00:58:035 (3) - move this to the right a bit so it lines up with the 6
00:51:645 (6,7) - fix spacing
Should map this to the end too.
Illusion:00:32:493 (1,2,3) - this is kind of confusing for the easiest difficulty
00:45:984 - should map this break
00:54:150 - I suggest putting a spinner here. Like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330201:16:517 - should also map something here