This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 02, 2010 at 6:59:06 PM

Artist: ZUN
Title: Love-coloured Master Spark
Source: Touhou
Tags: Imperishable Night Marisa Kirisame Theme Rokodo_[RL] Story of Eastern Wonderland impossiblexu
BPM: 169
Filesize: 4520kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:

1. Illusion Laser (3.7 stars, 101 notes)
2. Impossiblexu's Magic Missile (2.91 stars, 91 notes)
3. Love Sign - Master Spark (4.67 stars, 187 notes)
4. Magicannon - Final Spark (4.98 stars, 286 notes)
5. Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 443 notes)

Download: ZUN - Love-coloured Master Spark
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Here's my latest attempt at a beatmap.

This is Marisa Kirisame's Theme - Love-coloured Master Spark from the Touhou series. Personally, I find the song highly addictive, which is why I decided to beatmap it. It also turned out to be good material for some nice note patterns. I hope you all enjoy!

I just want to say thanks to everybody that's helped this beatmap along the way. I couldn't have done it without you! You all have just as much ownership in this beatmap for all the help you gave.

EDIT FINAL: It feels like this beatmap has been a huge collaborative effort. I couldn't have done it without all of you that have taken the time to mod it. Thank you everyone! When this gets ranked, you each can feel like you were a part of the process.

1,586 is the proper offset. The map as a whole has a lot of poorly snapped notes; this should be easy to fix once your offset isn't 1/4 beat away from where it should be. It's possible to map like that, but you're setting yourself up for a hard time. Remember, beats are generally going to be on white ticks and red ticks. What you've done here is placed some things on blue ticks where they're supposed to be (given that the offset is wrong) and some on white and red where they should be once you fix the offset. You'll have to go through the map carefully to make sure everything's where it should be.

Nice use of kiai time, but you should add another section in the break after the kiai so that the next notes don't show kiai as they come in, but then return to normal.

00:22:62() - Awkwardly placed break if you ask me.
00:32:29 (5,6,7,8) - Are you using Distance Snap? It generally plays pretty well, but I don't think you are. I'd recommend it strongly for new mappers.
00:45:87 (1,1) - Awkwardly placed spinners if you ask me.
00:53:84() - Awkward break.

All in all, though, this is pretty well-done for a new mapper. Have a BAT-star.

Thanks for the suggestions and the *much-needed* correction on my offset. Now that my offset is fixed and my notes are on track it sounds perfect.

I added some small sections into those awkwardly placed breaks you mentioned and fixed the notes at 00:32:29. I was using Distance Snap, but it just wanted to space them oddly for some reason. I manage to get them looking much better though.

As for the awkward spinners at 00:45:87... I'm still thinking on what to do at that spot. I wanted to avoid being too repetitive since that's what went wrong with my last choice of a beatmap (It was just a bad song choice to be honest).

Much-appreciated CheeseWarlock. Have some kudos. <3

Hey Yoshi, I'm no expert, but I'll try to generally help with your map, the song is nice.

Illusion Laser:

:22, 9, 10: Why have these jump up so far above the rest of your combo, you could just keep them staggered like the rest of your combo and people will know what to expect.

:26, 3,4: These two just seem close together, maybe it's just me, because the song hangs on a note and it made me really unsure of when 4 was going to hit.

:32, 10,11,12: Works on paper, and this is solely your call, but I would put them all on 11's position for a stack.

:36, 1,2,3: 3 is really out of place.

:38, 4,5,6: Ditto for :36.

1:05, 6,7: I think you meant to stagger these like you do later in the combo, on 9 and 10?

1:19: 3,4: Space these as according to your 2 and 3, they're on the same interval.

Magicannon:

:15, 4,5,6,7,8,9: I see the idea, but changing the direction of the beats isn't intuitive to speeding up the beats. I would say stack 5,6,7 and maintain the same spacing for 8 and 9 that you do for 4, or vice versa. Look to :18 for reference, although it's still a mite quick for me.

:32, 5,6,7,8: These guys aren't really consistent with what you've been doing the rest of the map...

:36, 6,7: Stagger these like 4 and 5, possibly? The space extra space is wonky.

:39, 6,7: Ditto from :36.

:42, 6,7: Ditto. Do what you do on :45 for all of these!

1:19, 4 needs an 1/8th back, I think.

1:24, 1,2: Just not a fan.

Otherwise, good song, good luck. Penny for your thoughts?

Download: DWB feat. NIRGIRLS - SHINY SHINY (Fuuko) [Normal].osu

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Thanks for all of the suggestions N0mad.

A lot of the issues came from (believe it or not) distance snapping. Sure, it usually works for most purposes, but sometimes it just wants to make really wonky spacing or note shapes for things.

I fixed everything you mentioned and adjust how some parts flow so that it's not so sporadic. I agree that it was kinda chaotic in some parts. I need to adjust to sometimes ignoring the distance snapper, it works most of the time but it still doesn't beat human intuition on some things.

Very much appreciated help.

Woops, was posting this right as you posted DJPop. Sorry about that. Thanks for pointing out all of the notes that weren't snapped correctly, I'm not sure why they got unsnapped, but they're fixed now. I also (I think) addressed the spacing issues when I was fixing the things that N0mad mentioned. Please feel free to take another look for me though, I need all the help I can get.

Much thanks to the both of you.

Magicannon:

:38:864 - 123 and 456 seem incorrectly spaced
:41:881 - See #1
1:18:982 - 12 + 3 should be closer together
1:24:662 - 2 + 3 are TOO close
1:27:503 - See #4
1:36:023 - 3 to 4 doesn't flow well

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For a new mapper, this is pretty well done.

Magicannon-

00:15:60 (9,1) - Is this jump intended? It kind of comes out of nowhere. It's not impossible to hit or anything, but it just seems out of place.

01:11:17 (1) and the break after it - This is just a suggestion, but perhaps consider mapping this part? The break seems weird at this part of the music. If you wanted to keep the first break, a possibility is to place the break after 00:53:95 (5), then copy your current 00:55:50 (1) to 01:11:17 (1) and move it to start on 01:01:23 or 00:58:39 (you may want to remove the spinner currently at 01:11:17 and just replace it with notes/sliders).

Starring this map because I think it's pretty solid and could use more attention.

Thanks a bunch Ivalset. I can't adjust anything at the moment, but when I get home today I'll definitely take a look and adjust things like you've mentioned.

You get a star. It's pretty fun.

If I could make one suggestion; the break in the easier difficulty feels forced. If you feel the need to put a break there, you should probably delete that little phrase starting at 1:08:331, since it makes more sense to start a break on that set of phrases; If you choose to leave that combo, make it a new combo. At that point I'd suggest placing more beats instead of a break, since the break is 6 measures as opposed to 8. Weird number in this instance. Take it or leave it.

Anyway, looking forward to playing the ranked version. Keep it up.

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First, thanks for the input Detective_Tuesday and Symbolic. I greatly appreciate it.

Detective_Tuesday: I took out the note section and lengthened the break you mentioned in Illusion Laser. If you feel I need to do something else to it let me know though.

Symbolic: My Distance Snap was set to 0.8x for reason I will never understand (it defaulted there, and only God knows why it did that). I set it to 1.0x and resnapped everything you mentioned. Thanks for pointing that out. It's either the weird Distance Snap setting our just my slowness that the spacing was all crazy.

Second, I've added a custom combo burst and count down, which I will post screenshots of here.

Custom Countdown:


Custom Combo Burst:

[Illusion Laser]
I think you used 1.0x distance snap.
In my opinion, 1.0x is too long (This is the easiest difficulty)
I found nothing wrong.

[Magicannon] final spark
14:905(4~9)-> 1 grid right (Use grid level two) You can change your grid level on View-> Grid level
36:918(7)-> 2 grid down (Grid level 1) Suggestion.

Have a star~

Didn't find anything wrong with map. But I also agree with minyeob about 1.0 in [Illusion Laser]. 0.8 Probably would be better imo. I feel the map should be longer, probably up to 1:57:858. <--- Suggestions

+Star

personally i think its great oh!!! at 42:6--, move the point a little closer, since its on easy:)
thats all i could find

Hey, modding modding modding. (I'm a design nazi, just so you know. You don't HAVE to fix everything)
Suggestions are in Purple
Illusion Laser

00:18:62 (1,2,3) - This is a little ugly. What I should do is -Select (2,3) and place 2's start aligned with (1)'s end (see IMG01)
00:36:37 (2) - Copy (1) while keeping notice with spacing. then place a circle 1/2 beat after (2). (see IMG02)
00:39:21 (2) - Same as above
00:42:05 (2,3) - Funny, you DID place something after 2 here, but nowhere else...
00:43:83 (X) - Place something here
00:47:02 (1,2,1,2) - Delete these, and place a break. Else it gets monotonous, and then you can delete the break at the end, which is too late IMO
The rest is fine by me.

Master Spark (just call it that, no need for brackets in brackets)

00:14:36 (3,4,5,6) - Big spacing flaw (you said you used 1.0)
00:15:60 (6,1) - More of the same
00:17:20 (3,4) - Minor Spacing flaw
00:18:45 (6,1) - etcetera
In short, go through your map once again with that spacing on
Now for notes:
00:22:88 (4) - Place 2 beats after it, or make it a slider. (see IMG03 and 04)
00:25:72 (2) - Slider till 00:26:44
00:31:23 (X) - Place something here
00:32:65 (X) - Same as above
00:36:91 (7) - Move 1 Grid to the right, (grid lvl 2) to gain symmetry. Once you use distance snap (1.0), this gets fixed automatically.
00:48:27 (6) - Slider till 00:49:15
00:57:32 (2,3) - Make these Beats, then you cacn start another slader at 3's end going to (4)
01:01:23 (8) - Slider, like (1) of this combo
01:02:65 (1,2,3) - Once it gets a little heavy, stop fixing what I just said
01:28:56 (X,X) - Place 2 beats here (red white red white)
01:36:73 (S) - End 1/2 later
There's a lot of work on this one. Did you make it in a hurry?

Final Spark (no need to add Magicannon there)

Same here, fix spacing
00:15:16 (12) - This goes in between (13,14) to fit with the song
00:18:00 (12) - Same
00:20:84 (12) - Same
00:22:88 (4) - See Master Spark for my suggestions here.
00:25:72 (3) - Slider (see MS)
01:36:73 (1) - End 1/2 Later
Check all the things I said on MS, if they still apply.

This one really looks like MS, so you get the same remark.

I'm not gonna star this just yet, only after you fix the spacing issues. The rest is up to you, young grasshopper.
There's modding for you.

Well, going by your suggestions, Master Spark (which was supposed to be a Normal or Hard) jumped up to the same star level as Final Spark. Hmm...

Anyways, I went through and fixed all of my spacing issues (seriously, I can't space notes worth anything it seems) and added in rhythms and such like you mentioned (although I think I may have gotten confused with the sections in Master and Final at 00:57:32, it may just be a huge mess now. c.c

Thanks a ton for all the help, because we all know I need it.

Good map. A relief from the flood of- I think I'll stop there. Everything fits. I like all the hearts in the Love Sign difficulty.

Have a star!

Arr, spacing _really_ isn't your thing.
Lemme point out the flaws that remain:

IL
01:08:33 (X) - Place that 01:05:49 (1,2,3) combo here again.

MS
00:25:72 (2,1) - Spacing
00:36:91 (7) - This, (3) and (6) should form a triangle to achieve the symmetry I talked about.
00:43:83 (10,1) - Spacing. Select (1,2,3) and move them up to immediately fix 00:44:54 (3,4) [Spacing]
00:47:38 (2,3) - Spacing
00:53:42 (3,4,5) - Same
00:58:03 (3,4) - DEFINITE NO-GO! Sliders can't overlap. I told you to change (3) into a hit circle at the start and (4) at the end.
01:28:74 (6,7) - Enormous spacing!!

FS
00:36:91 (7,1) - Spacing
00:58:03 (3,4) - DEFINITE NO-GO! Sliders can't overlap. I told you to change (3) into a hit circle at the start and (4) at the end. Again.
01:03:71 (2,3) - DEFINITE NO-GO! Sliders can't overlap. I told you to change (3) into a hit circle at the start and (4) at the end. Again. Again.
01:19:78 (1-4,1-4,1-4,1-4) - Place this stack more to the center. It's quite long, and nearly goes offscreen with easy mod on.

The rest is okay

Still no star, sorry!

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[Illusion Laser]

00:43:479 (2, 3, 4): Check the spacing on these.
01:19:514 (x): Place a slider with a clap here that ends at the white snap closest (1/8 divisor)
01:19:870 (x): Place the spinner here and...
01:21:112 (1): End the spinner here, with a finish instead of a clap.

[Master Spark]
"01:19:514 (x): Place a slider with a clap here that ends at the white snap closest (1/8 divisor)
01:19:870 (x): Place the spinner here and...
01:21:112 (1): End the spinner here, with a finish instead of a clap." <- Do the same here, but keep to finishers instead of claps just like now.
01:28:390 (4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9): Check spacing here, it's inconsistent.

[Final Spark]

01:18:893 (x): Place a note here, place it between 2 and 3.
01:19:781 (1 2 3 bla bla bla): This stack just feels boring and bla. See if you can edit in something more interesting here.

OVERALL THOUGHTS: It's a nice map, mostly, but you've made some small mistakes with the spacing. Check it out. Also, the map feels a bit empty. What I said is just what I think sounds better, you don't have to do it. Anyway, star'd. This needs some attention etc.

You're almost there! One or two more spacing flaws!

IL
00:52:71 (1,2) - No finishes here. Really Noisy. Just one at the end Look at IMAGE 03 (yes, numbers messed up)
MS
00:43:83 (10,1,6) - I mentioned this once before, I think. Yes I did! Look at IMG01 For correct spacing with your divisor. (which is, at that part: 1.1)

Wojjan wrote:

00:43:83 (10,1) - Spacing. Select (1,2,3) and move them up to immediately fix 00:44:54 (3,4) [Spacing]

00:45:25 (6,7) - Minor Spacing
01:00:87 (8) - This heart should start one white tick later, and place a beat at the original start. Then Change the Silder (1) into a beat at its end, because:

Wojjan wrote:

Sliders can't overlap

See IMG02 For the timing.

FS
01:19:78 (1-4,1-4,1-4,1-4) - What voxtrot said, but better. Can you arrange them in a heart shape?

NOW you get a star.

If I mod this once more, I don't know what I'm gonna do

This is tough because the map itself if quite inconsistent on master spark so I'm going to try to mod parts where it trips me up. if you're distance snapping be careful that you aren't changing the snap distance.

I modded this with level 3 grid on. which is what you should be using to go over spacing on your map.

Love Sign - Master Spark
00:36:91 (7) - Spacing. Move up
00:39:75 (7) - ^
00:47:02 (1) - Move this left a space
00:53:77 (4,5) - tighten spacing
01:19:51 (5) - Move up a tad so spacing is equal

Magicannon - Final Spark
00:15:60 (15,1) - spacing
00:36:91 (7) - move slider start down a bit due to spacing.
00:44:36 (2) - Move up a tad to match last combo
00:48:27 (6) - spacing
00:50:93 (4) - move down a grid
01:28:39 - 01:28:75 put in some notes here mmaaaaaaann

Having different spacing in different combos in maps is fine, just try to not have a spacing switch mid combo. There are many many many small inconsistencies between combos, be careful of this in the future, this map gets my approval.

I suggest cropping the bottom of the image a tad so I can see marisas face during breaks and into. Looking at her chin isn't the most appealing thing. Maybe blur the bottom of marisa because having that hard edge on the bottom of her Irks me.

Ok I've checked it, and I admit it looks great. I couldn't find any timeline or spacing mistakes. What actually bothers me is that the timing sounds a bit off, I think it could be the offset but I'm not sure, I'm not good with timings XD
Also, I'd shorten some combos in Magicannon - Final Spark, it's a bit incoherent, since you have combos of 2 and combos of 15. But that's a matter of tastes (I think XD).
By the way, this should get ranked soon ^^
You have my star~

Lets see how I can help. And some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. But mainly, i'm posting anything to take notice of. Its up to you how you want to really look into it.

Illusion Laser (Done... )

00:32:47 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't the new combo start at (3)?
00:35:66 (1,2) - You could try to even these two out (maybe copy and paste one of them to fix this).
00:38:50 (1,2) - ^ (This is more noticable.)
00:41:34 (1,2) - ^ (Even more noticable than the last one.)
00:56:97 (2) - Just a thought. Shouldn't this be the start of a new combo?
01:11:17 (1,2) - These two sliders seem to colide with each other....
01:14:01 (1,2) - ^

[Love Sign - Master Spark] (Done... )

00:15:60 (6) - Maybe this could line up with the end of the slider (5)?
00:18:62 (1,2,3) - If you can link up (2) evenly end-to-end, this would look alot more organized (depends on the type of spacing though...)
00:34:24 (2) - This could line up evenly with then end of the slider (1).
01:23:95 (1,2) - If the sliders looked more even, this would look better.
01:27:50 (2) - This could line up with the end of the slider (1).
01:28:03 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Right after (5), the spacing is off with (6). And try to make it look better by placing (6) with the (3).

[Magicannon - Final Spark] (Done... )

00:15:60 (15,1) - The shape here looks a bit odd. Try to see if you can make this into a "triangle" figure for the neatness.
00:16:49 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - The row of (1,2, and 3) doesn't line up with (4,5, and 6) and then with (7, 8, and 9), you still have the fading notes of (1,2, and 3) which makes it look a bit cluttered. And for the last row of (10, 11, 12, 13, 14, and 15), (10) and the way down doesn't seem evenly spaced. And (15) isn't lined up with (1).
00:20:58 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - The row is not evenly spaced out with the other one. (EX: Like how (10) is touching (8) but there is space in between with (9) ).
00:23:24 (5) - If you can get the end of this slider over (1), it should make it look more neat.
00:41:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The formation here looks really out of place. Maybe if you "triangulate" (1,2, and 4), it would look better.
00:49:87 (1) - This is being buried under slider note (6).
00:50:58 (3,4,5) - The shape of how the notes placed here looks kinda odd to me. Especially how (3) and (4) is over (5).
01:05:49 (1) - This note is also being buried under the slider.
01:12:59 (3) - Not lined up with the end of (2).
01:28:92 (9) - Slightly uneven comparing to slider (1) next to it.


Well, the map isn't bad at all. But I see what the main two problem is. 1.) The spacing between the notes its a bit "tacky" but not too bad. Though you would want to use caution for a song like this and for the style it is mapped. 2.) Shapes - The heart shapes are nice, but in some parts of the map, the shapes of the sliders for example, seems to cause the formation of the hitnotes to crumble easliy, and the odd placements of some of the notes makes it look a bit funny, especailly when playing. But overall, its not bad and the errors are easy to fix. Star for effort.

Oh and one more thing, the title is EXTREMELY long as it can't fit in the osu game window. But if that is the actual name and everything, then I guess its okay.

Hello,


~Comments here are not final decisions, you can always decide by yourself~


[Illusion Laser]

00:25:72 (2) - allign with slider's end
00:25:72 (2) - snap here varies with 00:25:72 (2) - and the next combos
00:33:53 (4) - new combo
00:36:91 (3) - move diagonally up to the left one square
00:39:75 (3) - move diagonally down one square
00:42:05 (2) - i'd move the middle point of this slider, down, so it matches (3)
00:43:83 (3) - allign with (1)
00:44:18 (4) - new combo


[Love Sign - Master Spark]

00:12:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Please use a constant spacing on these combo patterns
00:25:72 (2) - allign with previous slider's end
00:28:56 (4) - put in the middle and form a triangle
00:35:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please use a constant spacing on these combo patterns
00:58:03 (3) - allign with slider's end, then allign (4) with (2)
00:59:81 (5) - new combo
01:05:84 (4) - new combo
01:28:74 (6) - put on top of fading (3) and allign the next beats to it


[Magicannon - Final Spark]

00:14:36 (7) - new combo
00:17:20 (7) - put on top of fading (1) and new combo
00:20:04 (7) - new combo
00:25:55 (2) - allign with slider's end and then allign (3) to it
00:35:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please use a constant spacing on these combo patterns
00:58:39 (4) - new combo
01:01:23 (8) - new combo, 01:03:00 (1) - undo new combo
01:04:07 (3) - new combo, 01:05:49 (1) - undo new combo
01:06:91 (3) - new combo
01:09:75 (1) - new combo, 01:11:17 (2) - undo new combo
01:12:59 (4) - new combo, 01:14:01 (1) - undo new combo
01:29:63 (10) - new combo
01:30:34 (11) - move one square to the left
01:35:31 (1,2,3) - start this from the right instead of the left

Good job overall, i liked the patterns.

Thanks lukewarmholiday for pointing out the kinks in my spacing and helping me shape out my mape a little better.

Thanks to you both: whymeman and Sir_Minelli! You both really helped me out in fixing my note patterns and shaping to make the map flow better and generally just look better. <3

Thanks to everyone that's been helping me along the long road with this map! You've all be a huge help!

I didn't see anything wrong in the map.

But some things that kind of bug me~

Mp3 file could be shortened to maybe about half since you're not mapping the full thing and also to save space.

When the comboburst goes off during gameplay, it shows Marisa with her legs cut off since it's in the upper corner.
How about replacing it with this one.

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Thanks very much for the BAT star vyt! I had changed the comboburst image but had forgotten to upload it, so it should be good now. I also scooted the death stream (nice term =D) over to start on the white beat tick like you suggested.

Starred. :3

[Illusion Laser]
00:20:75 (4) - align w 3
00:28:56 (3) - align w 2 and spacing is misleading
00:35:66 (1,2) - whistle. kill it now.
00:36:91 (3) - align w 2 better
00:38:50 (1,2,3) - as above
00:41:34 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:18 (1,2) - kill whistles
ok go through and delete all whistles they sound crappy in the song
00:53:42 (2) - end with a finish
00:55:55 (1) - delete and put a break here
00:56:97 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - needs a
smattering of hitsounds
ok advice on hitsounds: you want 1/3 - 1/5 of your notes to be
hitsounded. that does NOT mean select 1/5 of your map and add whistles
on every note. you should not have a long space without hitsounds nor
should you have a long space where everything has hitsounds (really no
more than 7 notes for dead space and 5 for hitsounds) please correct
hitsounds on your map on this basis



[Master Spark]
00:14:36 (3,4,5) - spacing wut
00:18:62 (1) - align under 6
00:31:05 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is a good usage of hitsounds...one of the
few ive seen
00:49:87 (1) - move out from under 6
00:58:39 (4) - whistle for consistancy
01:03:36 (2) - move out from under 5
01:04:07 (3) - k youre really starting to overuse this one slider
01:08:33 (1,2,3,4,5) - mapping a constant rhythm is getting REALLY
repetitive try and break it up some
01:14:01 (1) - finish end
01:30:69 (4) - align above 2
01:36:55 (5) - should center between 3,4
01:36:73 (1) - really weird place to end imo
needs hitsound work



[Final Spark]
00:41:34 (1) - hidden
00:45:43 (7) - ugly
00:58:39 (1) - whistle for consistency
01:05:49 (3) - align horizontally w start of 2
01:05:49 (3,4) - slider overlap is ugly
01:08:68 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - getting repetitive
01:19:78 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can you flip this
horizontally and reposition so you get less overlap by fading hits?
01:21:11 (4) - finish
01:28:39 (6) - new combo
01:30:34 (2) - end with finish
01:36:73 (1) - again ending feels weird but a finish might alleviate
that
hitsounds need srs work


call me back later and i may star

Master and Final Spark are way too similarly mapped, especially towards the end, to such a degree that I have to impose modding on the map's design. Make them different. Try to use more than the main melody to create rhythm patterns in the hardest difficulty, for example. Try mapping more silences in the hardest difficulty too, but beware of overmapping.

Other than that, everything checks out.

You rock for all the IRC help Sinistro. My map is a lot stronger because of it. <3

Illusion Laser
00:17:91 (4) - The 4 shouldn't touch the 3 slider if it's gonna be like 00:18:62 (1,2) - .

Love Sing - Master Spark
00:14:36 (3) - Put this directly under the 1st slider and respace the rest of the combo and others.
00:37:44 (8) - I don't think 1 slider hiding another one completely is allowed.
00:39:75 (7) - Same as above^.
00:45:43 (7) - Same as above^.
00:47:38 (2) - This shouldn't touch the end of the 1 slider beforehand.
00:51:11 (5) - Illegal slider.
00:53:06 (2) - Too close for the correct spacing in this difficulty.
01:14:01 (1) - I think this should be centered on the gird.

Magicannon - Final Spark
00:21:46 (1) - Move the starting slider anchor a little up for correct Nazi spacing.
00:35:31 (2) - out of spacing to the 1 slider.
00:43:12 (8,9,10) - they seem to be out of spacing to each other.
00:51:64 (8,9,10) - Same as above^.
01:02:29 (3) - Out of spacing to the 2 slider and respace the rest of the combo if you fix this.
01:10:81 (3) - Out of spacing to the 2 slider.
01:14:01 (1) - Center to the grid please?
01:28:92 (4,5,6,7) - Move this whole combo to the right so the 4 is in correct spacing.

I'm not a very big fan of the on purpose out of spacing between combo.

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Thank ye kindly for the suggestions Gens.

I fixed up everything except the countdown images. I do see why you would say to have numbers, but I don't really want to cover up the artwork for it or anything. I may get back to doing it if other people raise concerns though.

i have not submitted for this beatmap =S starred cuz i like it =D

This is a really fun map, especially the hardest difficulty. Spacing, timing, etc check out. I have no complaint about the countdown. That's really your choice anyway. Have a fragile mtmcl bubble.

lovley, starr for you

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Thanks for the bubble mtmcl, and thanks for the pop mod Remmy. Updated and ready for more modding.

Perfect! that's what i want!

I'm burning
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I play with 20ms local offset,acc more better

[Easy]
01:18:86 (2,3,4,5) - These snap to 1/6

[Normal]
01:18:80 (2,3,4,5) - 1/6
01:22:35 (5) - Spacing

[Hard]
00:55:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - O.o what
00:58:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this a stack instead?
01:07:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this a stream of circles, instead of sliders, same goes with the first one
01:10:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this a stack?
01:18:80 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1/6 snap

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Many thanks to you Zerostarry and Saturos-fangirl! The map is edited and updated as of now.