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Gabi
lovley, starr for you
RemmyX25
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Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Thanks for the bubble mtmcl, and thanks for the pop mod Remmy. Updated and ready for more modding.
ACC
Perfect! that's what i want!

I'm burning :)
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I play with 20ms local offset,acc more better
Zerostarry
[Easy]
01:18:86 (2,3,4,5) - These snap to 1/6

[Normal]
01:18:80 (2,3,4,5) - 1/6
01:22:35 (5) - Spacing

[Hard]
00:55:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - O.o what
00:58:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this a stack instead?
01:07:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this a stream of circles, instead of sliders, same goes with the first one
01:10:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make this a stack?
01:18:80 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1/6 snap
Yuukari-Banteki
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Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Many thanks to you Zerostarry and Saturos-fangirl! The map is edited and updated as of now.
The_Priest_In_Yellow
The vortex of notes in Magicannon Final Spark created a lot of hurt on my part, but that's fine.

However what I don't know if I like is the use of KIAI, alright I was never a fan of KIAI to begin with, but I think there's a bit too much.

And I personally didn't have any trouble reading clusters like this: 00:58:745 but others might. But then they should play more (weak excuse^^). Maybe making the spacing a little looser would make it easier to read, but I think it's fine the way it is tbh.

Still, I think this is worthy a star.
Rokodo
Needs more taiko.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/lcms_roko.zip - Includes taiko map and background image.

Also, have a star.
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Thank you for the input and star Tippy!
Thank you kindly for the star and the Taiko difficulty Rokodo!
Lybydose
The offset is about 20ms early. I could just be bad, but I'm getting random 100's on this map unless I set a custom offset of +20 on this map. Someone else mentioned this too a few posts up.

00:58:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and
01:10:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe stack these? The current pattern feels strange.

Also, the comboburst image is a bit small. It may just be personal preference, but I prefer a larger one that spans the entire height of the screen. You could use this one: nevermind
Yuukari-Banteki
[Illusion Laser]
01:18:27 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - move on timeline like attachment



[Master Spark]
01:18:27 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - like Illusion Laser


[Final Spark]
01:18:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move on timeline like attachment



[Taiko]
looks good

Doomsday
this has been in pending for a while. might as well have a look to see why

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems good enough

[ILLUSION LASER]

00:36:91 (3) - i think it'd be better if you stacked this on (2).
00:39:75 (3) - ^
00:42:59 (3) - ^

[LOVE SIGN - MASTER SPARK]

01:29:45 (x) - beat here?

[MAGICANNON - FINAL SPARK]

00:35:31 (2,1) - seems like a random jump to me. could be just me though.
00:56:70 (14) - remove this. sounds like the stream had one too many beats imo
01:08:42 (14) - ^
01:26:61 (3,1) - another seemingly random jump. this jump is better than the 00:35:31 jump though, so i wouldn't mind you keeping this one as is.

[ROKODO_[RL]'S TAIKO]

can really mod this. even though i've been playing a lot of taiko recently, i don't know enough about it to mod it. seemed fine playing it though. it looks hilarious in the editor :P

'tis a functional map. not the best ever, but its functional.

star'd
IAmCrono
Love the map. Also, love the taiko chart by Roko.

+Star
varq
One thing I don't like is the deathstreams in "Final Spark". The only reason they seem to be there for is to prevent the player from getting 100%. If they were stacked/went in a straight line/followed a curve, I wouldn't mind, but turning sharply in less than a beat really throws someone off.

The sliders at 00:39:75 (7) and 00:45:43 (7) don't look very good either.

Everything else I'm fine with. This is one of favorite songs from Imperishable Night.
Yoshi348
Illusion Laser, 50:639... this slider and the one like it in the next combo are really annoying because you have no idea beforehand that it'll bounce an extra time. I suggest reworking those parts to avoid that issue.

Other than that I have no complaints. I LOVE the heart-shaped deathstream in Final Spark.
Gens
Last Visited: Aug 9, 2009
:cry:
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Guess who's back? :lol:

Sorry I just kind of disappeared randomly like that. I was dealing with a death in the family and eventually just kinda fell out of osu! for awhile and... forgot to come back to it?

Anyways, I really would love to see my first big project ranked so I've come to get this thing REVIVED so I can edit it for rankability!
Derekku
Glad to see you back, YY :3
Randy96
Oh hello there
Tonoko
welcome back ~ :)
Lybydose
ALLLLLRIGHTY THEN

All difficulties:

Make the source just "Touhou" and put "Imperishable Night" and "th08" in the tags. Oh, Imperishable Night is already in there. You can remove Love Coloured Master Spark from the tags.

Set a preview point and make it the same for every difficulty. I suggest 00:35:668, but you can choose whatever.

Background image is too large. Reduce the size, don't go over 1024x768. Actually, if you want, I can crop this so there aren't black bars at the top and bottom. Let me know.

+20ms to the offset. Don't forget to resnap all notes.

AFTER changing the offset, make your first kiai section begin at exactly 00:35:688 on the large white tick. Make the second kiai begin at exactly 01:21:132, also on the large white tick.

The easy and normal difficulties are very similar. Try either changing things up a bit so they aren't so similar, or, at the very least, flip the notes in one of them.

A lot of your claps sound bad. Try not to put so many clap sounds on red ticks. USUALLY claps sound best when placed on the 2nd and 4th beats. For example, in this screenshot http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3301 these would be the black 3, black 6, and purple 3. DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING IN THE TAIKO DIFFICULTY THOUGH.

Move the map to Pending when you upload.

Final Spark:

00:23:972 - add circle here maybe
00:24:150 - and here
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - claps on these sound bad. Try using soft whistles instead (on the white ticks) Also, this section could use a slight volume decrease on the hitsounds.
00:58:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same deal with the claps
01:07:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:10:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:824 (2,3,4) - fix spacing
01:19:713 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - again, remove these claps. If you insist on using claps, put them on the 2nd and 4th white ticks.
01:21:132 - add a circle here

01:10:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure what to say about these streams. Some people may complain about them, but I don't have any trouble playing them in the "intended" way (actually moving the cursor in the circle instead of trying to find a center point).

Why not map all the way to the end at 01:58:055? The current ending seems kind of random

Master Spark:

00:23:952 - same as hard, could use two circles here
00:35:668 - hmm, why is the spacing here larger than this same section in the harder difficulty? I think you should give hard the higher spacing.
00:40:284 (8) - extend to the next white tick maybe. Right now it seems to end too early.
00:45:964 (8) - same
00:58:035 (3) - move this to the right a bit so it lines up with the 6
00:51:645 (6,7) - fix spacing

Should map this to the end too.

Illusion:

00:32:493 (1,2,3) - this is kind of confusing for the easiest difficulty
00:45:984 - should map this break
00:54:150 - I suggest putting a spinner here. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3302
01:16:517 - should also map something here
ignorethis
otakumak
+ star
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Oye vey! How did I not see your giant mod yet Lybydose? Sorry about that, I'll get right on those!

EDIT: Alrighty, yours mods are complete other than the extra mapping to the end. I may reconsider mapping more but I personally don't feel that the ending is all that random and nobody else has really mentioned it yet.
Rokodo
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Download: LCMS_taiko.rar
Lybydose
Mods marked with a * are boring stupid nazi suggestions, you don't have to do them if you don't want.

A BG image didn't come with the download, so uhhh fix that :? I also got an image titled LCMS_Taiko.png, which isn't used, so delete that.

Offset is still wrong in Master, Final and Roko. It should be 1606. Actually make that 1603, so change Illusion too.

Preview point on Illusion is good, but it needs to be the same across all difficulties. Right now, it's different in Master Spark and Roko-don, and doesn't exist at all in Final Spark.

Change the other difficulties to have the same source as Illusion Laser.

Illusion:

00:27:878 (2,3) - Confusing spacing. You could reverse the 2 and then move the 3 to the middle of the map, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4399
*00:46:694 (5,1,2,3) - Hold shift to align these better. If you have distance snap enabled and hold shift when moving the 5, it will automatically align in horizontally with the previous slider. Then do that for the yellow notes too.

Master Spark:

*00:36:911 (7,8) - move 1 grid to the right to align with the fading 3
00:37:443 (8) - how did I miss that before? extend this to 00:38:154
00:35:017 - move this kiai section to 35,685

Final Spark:

00:35:017 - move this kiai section to 35,685
*01:09:751 (4) - one grid left
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
The image didn't change? I could have sworn I did a full upload for that, and even if I had forgotten, it should have updated when I uploaded the new Taiko. Bizarre...

I'll get right on those mods.
Lybydose
Resnap all notes in the Taiko difficulty. Make sure you have 1/4 snap selected when you do this.

Also, consider slightly lowering the volume (like 1-2 ticks) of all the normal hitsound sections in all difficulties.

(don't kudosu this post)

You should totally set this as the preferred skin.
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Woo! I definitely love that skin for this map. Thanks for the suggestion.

Taiko has been resnapped and the volume in all difficulties has been adjusted. Also made the preferred skin the Marisa Kirisame skin you linked to.
Lybydose
Ok looks fine now, except one thing. You're going to hate me for this:

Final Spark:
00:53:082 (2) - turn off distance and grid snap and move this so it's right under the endpoint from the previous (10) slider. I missed this like 82035 times in a row because I really expected it to be there :o

I guess this also gives me an excuse to request one other minor change: Increase the size of the Illusion Laser hit circles by one tick.

Fix those and I'll pubble.

(again, don't Kudosu)
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Done and done. Thanks a ton for all the help Lybydose. <3
Lybydose
EDIT: pubbled
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Whoops, way for me to pay attention to the details there. I'll have it fixed right away.
Chacha17
Tags: remove touhou in the tags since it's already in the source :s and add Rokodo_[RL] on the tags.

Nazi~

Illusion Laser
00:39:768 (3) - move it like this? so that it would look like an inverted copy of the previous pattern

01:29:129 - kiai time there? :o

Love Sign - Master Spark
01:38:171 end the kiai there?

Magicannon - Final Spark
01:33:200 (2) - move two grids up then resnap the other beats
01:38:171 end the kiai there?

Roko-don's taiko
i don't know how to mod taiko diffs but this is fun to play.

Here you go. :>
Dotsu
~star~
And can I make a [Easy]for you?
Dotsu
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Sure, I'll take it impossiblexu, it would be nice to have an actual Easy. =D Do you care if I rename it to fit in with the naming scheme of the rest of the things?
Dotsu

YellowYoshi1 wrote:

Sure, I'll take it impossiblexu, it would be nice to have an actual Easy. =D Do you care if I rename it to fit in with the naming scheme of the rest of the things?
Of course!
Tonoko
for the long long time ~
for the great effort ...
for "you each can feel like you were a part of the process."

;)
deepsea
Wow another over 1 year old map.

Impossiblexu's Magic Missile
00:24:35(2) (3) Stack circle under slider end is hard for newers imo
00:25:74(2) (3) ^
00:37:84(4) (1) ^
00:45:15(4) (1) ^

Yes I am picky in Easy difficulty hmm.

Other than that I found nothing, good map, have a teletubby star.
Asutarotto
;) Star~
Xgor
Project Overdrive Modding!
God this is old, I remeber seeing this map when i was a newb. haha.

Well..
Remove osb.
[Tags]
Add "the Story of Eastern Wonderland" and "impossiblexu" to tags in all difficulites.

[Magic Bullet]

Sorry for nagging a bit but you need to lower the difficulty to be exactly 3.00 or lower... Well here is my suggestions how to do that and actually make the map more fun and better:
Lower the HP drain
00:25:034 (3) - Remove this circle
00:26:455 (3) - ^
00:29:295 (1) - ^ (And add a new combo at the old (2) )
00:44:916 (2,3,4) - Remove (3,4) Add a repeat on (2) and add a circle at 00:46:336 (This part is pretty confusing for the easiest difficulty right now)
This should make it under 3.00 and this not butchering the map ^^ (In my opinion)

Also..
00:49:176 (6) - God this looks ugly!

Good diff otherwise ;)

[Illusion laser]
00:23:259 - Add circle here
00:23:614 - ^
00:51:662 - ^
00:52:017 - ^
00:52:372 - ^

[Master Spark]
Maybe Lower HP drain?
00:23:969 - Add circle here
00:55:567 to 01:14:029 - It's feels kinda odd that there is no claps during this part

[Final Spark]
Please lower the HP drain.
00:55:567 to 01:14:029 - It's feels kinda odd that there is no claps during this part (Same thing as in Master spark)

[Taiko]
Why can't i never understand the logic on taiko maps, they sounds so random at some parts :?

Well, not a bad map overall and one year in pending is way too long, so here's a star ;)
*star*
Topic Starter
YellowerYoshi
Yay! I'll get on those mods later tonight. Expect an update. <3

EDIT: Updates are finished!
deepsea
o_O
oipoi
:oops:
什么时候才能做成这样呢
Starrodkirby86
IRC fixes.

- .osb begone!
- Changed color on a combo...
- Removed some excess tags. Now the tags are consistent!

Rebubble <3
_lolipop
nice map~
star
minyeob
Finally.
Starrodkirby86
Biggest congratulations YellowYoshi. Your positive persistence for this map paid off. TwT
Tonoko

minyeob wrote:

Finally.

:oops: finally

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