Utada Hikaru - Simple and Clean (Techno Remix) · forum

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-11T14:03:41+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 19 marzo 2009 at 11.52.12

Artist: Utada Hikaru
Title: Simple and Clean (Techno Remix)
Source: Kingdom Hearts
BPM: 130
Filesize: 9057kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1,72 stars, 56 notes)
Luxary ReMiX (4,93 stars, 239 notes)
Normal (3,89 stars, 125 notes)
oSuPlaYeR mIX (4,81 stars, 207 notes)
xxheroxx's Hard (4,75 stars, 198 notes)

Download: Utada Hikaru - Simple and Clean (Techno Remix)
Download: Utada Hikaru - Simple and Clean (Techno Remix) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 7th map. I hope you like it.

Thanks to xxheroxx for gived to me the map.

11/03/09 : Submitted song.
11/03/09 : Added [oSuPlaYeR mIX]
11/03/09 : Added custom hitsounds and finished all difficulties.
12/03/09 : All things fixed [Thanks to DawnII]
12/03/09 : Song title changed and fixed any things. - Please RE-Download for all have it.
13/03/09 : Updated [xxheroxx's Hard] with new hitsounds.
13/03/09 : Added [Luxary ReMiX]
13/03/09 : Added hitsounds on [Luxary ReMiX]
13/03/09 : Fixed [oSuPlaYeR mIX]
13/03/09 : All things fixed [Thanks to Larto]
16/03/09 : All things fixed [Thanks to Mogsworth]
19/03/09 : All things fixed [Thanks to Mogsworth]

Last edited by Andrea 2009-03-19T10:52:26+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

flyboy87

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flyboy87 2009-03-11T22:21:29+00:00

KH!

I love the note design!

I'm not good in offseting stuff, though.

In general, at certain times, I feel that the whistle sounds are used way too much. You may want to reduce on that, a little. I agree it does go with the beat, but it does tend to get annoying if used too many times.

Anyway...

[Easy]
1:20:346 (1,2) - Too complicated for Easy. Make it... easier, I guess?
1:35:115 (1,2) - Same... here?

No other problems in other maps. Wow!

Have a nice star.

fufe

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fufe 2009-03-12T07:17:03+00:00

The offset looks fine to me. Shouldn't be a problem since there is that distinct beat introduced where your offset is now. Did you add the custom sounds to easy, normal, and osuplayermix? I looked at those and thought the whistles did get annoying as real whistles. The other difficulty's custom hitsounds are pretty cool =D

Also, that skin gets pixelated when on osuplayermix forme =\

Suggestions:

osuplayermix

00:31:884 :start the slider here. It doesnt make sense to me to start a slider in the middle of lyrics that extends to the end of a lyric phrase.
00:49:53 (3) - Nudge forward 1/4
01:00:96 (5) - Nudge back 1/4
01:17:46 (3) - Nudge forward and shorten 1/4

01:29:80 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I dont like it. I know its freestyle mapping but I dont think it fits the beat of the song at all here.
01:32:34 (3) - Nudge back and extend 1/4
01:33:269 - Add a hit? I think its awkward to follow lyrics then stop out of nowhere.
01:35:57 - Add hit? same as above
01:38:69 (5) - Nudge forward 1/4 imo
01:38:34 (4,5) - Reverse order? same as first comment. Slider starts on (war)"-nings" and ends on "the" i think that sounds wierd.
01:36:49 (7) - Unfair jump. Inconsistent with previous jumps.

xxheroxx-
00:23:80 (2) - Align with 3?
00:33:96 (1) - Awkward combo start
00:47:11 (4) - forward 1/4

DawnII

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DawnII 2009-03-12T14:53:09+00:00

Offset sounds better at 14,342.

Please lower sample volume, it overpowers the song right now.

[Easy]
00:48:26 (2) - Move 1/8 forward.

[Normal]
00:51:03 (1) - Repeat sounds bad. Shorten it so you have two repeats or remove the repeats.

[xxheroxx's Hard]
00:51:03 (1) - Again, sounds bad.
00:55:76 (2) - Move 1/8 back.
01:35:57 (2) - Shorten this 1/4 by switching to 1/8 on timeline.
01:36:38 (3) - Move this 1/8 back.

[osuplayer mix]
00:50:80 - Add a note here.
01:36:49 (6) - Random unnecessary jump.
01:41:11 - Add a note here.

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-12T16:05:04+00:00

Fixed :]

Luxary

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Luxary 2009-03-12T16:48:50+00:00

Forse c'è qualcosa da modificare, ma mi secco e comunque potrei sbagliare

Solo nozioni generali:

Il nome esatto della canzone è Utada Hikaru - Simple and Clean (Techno Remix) (poi magari può variare, ma credo che così sia più piacevole).

Suggerirei di diminuire il Sample Volume a metà o impostare i soft sound: ci sono punti in cui la melodia è molto bassa e i beat la coprono.

Abusa meno dei Whistle, specie nell' oSuPlaYeR mIX, che rendono la musicalità monotona.

Nella difficoltà oSuPlaYeR mIX, l'hp drain rate è impostato troppo alto: non costringere le persone a prendere una SS per finire la canzone.

Le pause messe a 01:13:418 sono pressochè inutili. Suggerisco di toglierle.

Credo sia tutto.
Ah, preparati ad aggiungere la mia difficoltà

(ma non sono disponibile 24 ore su 24 per cui non ti affannare a chiamare 300 BAT, per favore dammi il tempo -.-)

Starred!

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-12T17:34:24+00:00

Song title changed and fixed any things.

Please RE-Download for all have it.

fufe

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fufe 2009-03-12T19:55:16+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-03-12T21:46:27+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-13T10:25:49+00:00

Thanks Mark

Diasios

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Diasios 2009-03-13T11:52:43+00:00

Download: Utada Hikaru - Simple and Clean (Techno Remix) (osuplayer111) [xxheroxx's Hard].osu

New hitsounds...

starred

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-13T12:11:00+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Y&Co. feat. Karin - Sweet Rain (bossandy) [Extreme].osu

Luxary

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Luxary 2009-03-13T14:52:18+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Utada Hikaru - Simple and Clean (Techno Remix) (osuplayer111) [Luxary ReMiX].osu

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-13T16:33:09+00:00

Updated Again :]

Yumiko

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Yumiko 2009-03-13T18:55:16+00:00

Nice song, i really like it *-* Starred XD

fuffolo

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fuffolo 2009-03-13T18:55:57+00:00

Simply Perfect!! Starred ^^

dr333am

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dr333am 2009-03-13T18:56:29+00:00

Star ^^

FinalPrayer_old

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FinalPrayer_old 2009-03-13T18:58:38+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Last edited by FinalPrayer_old 2009-03-13T19:10:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

expressblu

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expressblu 2009-03-13T18:59:17+00:00

I'm the brother of fuffolo eheh!

osuplayer do you remember me? i'm marco

Your map is very fun, gg

Last edited by expressblu 2009-03-13T19:09:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

dr333am

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dr333am 2009-03-13T19:07:04+00:00

Can you teach me how can i do beatmap?

You're really a Good beatmapper

Diasios

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Diasios 2009-03-13T20:04:44+00:00

Download: Utada Hikaru - Simple and Clean (Techno Remix) (osuplayer111) [Luxary ReMiX].osu

Hitsounds...

I can be a good member of BAT

flyboy87

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flyboy87 2009-03-13T21:29:02+00:00

Very nice difficulty, there's nothing I see wrong here. Just some personal opinions...

1:30:034 (1) and 1:33:726 (6) - I don't like the way these sliders are made.

Other than that, it looks very nice~

Larto

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Larto 2009-03-13T21:55:20+00:00

Luxary:
Awesome

osuplayer Mix:
00:50:34 (6,7,8,9,10) - Keep spacing consistent please (Move 10 closer)
00:53:57 (4) - new Combo

xxheroxx:
00:44:11 (1) - Too close to last combo for my taste.
00:54:49 (3) - 100% overlapping sliders are a no no~

Normal:
00:21:26 (1) - Spinner a bit fast for a normal. Also, the note after it is hella fast for a normal.
01:06:03 (1) - Too clost to last combo for my taste.

Easy:
00:48:26 (2,3) - Fast notes for a Easy are pretty evil :B
00:51:96 (1,2) - ^

Meraviglioso <3

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-13T22:25:31+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-15T11:50:32+00:00

Check this map please >_<

Larto

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Larto 2009-03-15T12:22:11+00:00

Cool stuff.

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-15T12:24:42+00:00

Thank you Larto ^.^

Mogsy

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Here since the beginning

Mogsy 2009-03-16T19:41:03+00:00

Timing sections:
-Inherit Timing
Offset: 90,038
Hitsound type: Soft
Hitsound volume: Full
-Inherit Timing
Offset: 104,807
Hitsound type: Normal

Easy:
-01:18:96 (1) - Make this exactly symmetrical.

Normal:
-00:18:95 (2,3) - Line up with 1.
-00:20:80 (4) - Line up with endpoint of 3.
-00:26:34 (2) - Line up with 1.
-00:54:49 (3) - Line up with 2.
-01:21:66 (4) - Add a Finish to this.

xxheroxx's Hard:
-I don't like the OEWY hitsounds on this map, to be honest.
-01:06:95 (3) - Place exactly on 1's endpoint.
-01:07:88 (5) - Place exactly on 3's endpoint.

oSuPlaYeR mIX:
-00:17:57 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:18:03 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:25:18 (8) - ^
-00:25:88 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:43:41 (1) - ^
-00:43:88 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:49:41 (3) - ^
-01:06:72 (2,3) - I'm not the biggest fan of this jump.
-01:39:26 (6) - Place this exactly on 5's endpoint.
-01:43:88 (1) - Finish goes here.

Luxary ReMiX:
-Again, not the biggest fan of the OEWY sounds in this case.
-00:22:41 (3,4,1,2) - Stack these endpoints properly, please.
-00:23:34 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:24:26 (1) - ^
-00:25:41 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:44:11 (2) - ^
-01:17:11 (3) - ^
-01:18:95 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:20:34 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:21:95 (1) - Put a Clap on the endpoint.
-01:22:41 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:44:80 (1) - I'd probably remove the Clap here.

Bubble popped, sorry.

OmicronEXE

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OmicronEXE 2009-03-17T03:06:31+00:00

This is actually the PLANITb remix, but a very good map!

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-17T12:49:34+00:00

Thanks :3

For mogsworth, i have fixed all. You can bubble again! :3

Last edited by Andrea 2009-03-19T10:33:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mogsy

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Here since the beginning

Mogsy 2009-03-18T16:24:23+00:00

Easy:
-01:28:19 (1) - Finish goes here.
-01:30:96 (1) - Remove the Finish.

Normal:
-00:18:95 (2,3,4) - Align with 1. (Highlight all three and move 2)
-00:23:11 (2) - It seems like this is spaced incorrectly. Respace it please?
-01:30:95 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-01:42:95 (1) - Add a Finish.

As for the difficulties with the OEWY skin hitsounds, I'd like to see what you'd think of the map if they weren't used.

Diasios

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Diasios 2009-03-18T18:45:38+00:00

Mogsworth wrote:
As for the difficulties with the OEWY skin hitsounds, I'd like to see what you'd think of the map if they weren't used.

We (me and osuplayer111) like the OEWY hitsounds on hard and on Luxary's RMX
Why we have to remove them? they're nice and give... rhythm. Sorry but I don't understand...

Mogsy

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Here since the beginning

Mogsy 2009-03-18T22:10:51+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Why we have to remove them? they're nice and give... rhythm. Sorry but I don't understand...

To be perfectly honest, it's the disc-scratch type of sound that drives me crazy. It feels like it doesn't belong, to me. And if I remember correctly, some finishes are, like, clap-ish?

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-19T10:52:55+00:00

All fixed again.

Anyway dear mogsy, i dont remove the OEWY hitsounds because i like, sorry

And... because my friend worked 1 hour for this sounds.

mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-03-19T11:10:24+00:00

Personally, I've always loved the OEWY hitsounds and this is no exception. I'm giving this a bubble. I noticed some fast sliders in Luxary's difficulty? They're in a pretty predictable place, though, so I'm not concerned about them.

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-03-19T11:45:48+00:00

Thanks mark :3