388,60,35115,2,0,P|452:80|484:144,1,140
484,196,35740,1,8,0:0:0
376,224,36157,1,0,0:0:0
256,340,36782,1,2,0:0:0
136,224,37407,2,0,P|72:204|40:140,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,108,38240,5,8,0:0:0
192,144,38448,2,0,P|256:168|324:140,1,140
364,108,39073,2,0,P|396:88|428:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Frostmourne wrote:

alacat's Easy
fine~ \^^/

Guy wrote:

　[alacat's Easy]

　●　00:34:490 (1) - 微妙にスタックできてないのでしっかり00:32:823 (2) - の始端にスタックしましょう。 oops fixed :3
　●　01:00:740 (3) - x:424 y:244あたりに移動して、直線を作る感じの配置のほうが自分は好みです。 Nope ~ >_<

S h i o n wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
00:52:823 (3) - 折返点去掉whistle? hmm , I have already added it >.<

MerryGate wrote:

[Easy]
OD-1...? ok :3
01:01:990 (2) - add clap to start I want to put sound with constant rhythm here

Lally wrote:

[Easy]
00:16:990 (4) - curve it i think it's better i like this pattern >_<
00:18:240 - whistle or finish Nope
00:23:240 (4) - move it under this slider 00:24:490 (4) to do a blanket for it ^

00:27:823 (1) - this slider is curved why don't you try to fix it so: fixed :3

00:59:490 (2) - do a blanket for 01:00:740 (3) same as above .

RikiH_ wrote:

alacat's easy

Why no video here? D:
00:04:490 (4,1) - Blanketing them can make the pattern more interesting Nope
00:21:573 I'd add a note with clap Nope
00:32:407 The same ^
00:32:823 (2) - Fix stack with following 1 ok :3
00:37:823 (1) - Not perfectly stacked, move 2nd sliderpoint in 352|220 and slider's tail in 328|128. This should do ^
01:02:823 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this pattern, it breaks the flow a bit mm , I want to keep current pattern >_<
01:06:573 (4) - Make this symmetric to the center? Nope.
01:27:407 (5) - Put the repeat in 172|204 fixed ~

Frostmourne wrote:

cRyo's Hard
01:08:865 (2,3) - ctrl+g this, I think this flows better than the previous , the current, distance from (3) to (4) is quite too short and doesn't fit with vocal(with higher volume of Horie's voice) yep changed a bit~
01:24:907 (5) - suggest new combo here , nothing else other than personal feeling want all kicksliders same color

Guy wrote:

　[cRyo's Hard]

　●　00:52:823 (4) - blanket (2)? 1grid right. and slider end point 1grid up and 1grid left. current blanket is fine for me o.o

　●　00:57:407 (5) - 1grid down? slider end stack with 00:58:865 (1) - no need

Lally wrote:

[Hard]
some unsnapped green lines green lines works correct oo!
00:09:282 (4) - curve this slider for a better flow i want straight x.x
00:38:448 (2,3,4,5,6) - do a better star its not supposed to be a star ^^

RikiH_ wrote:

cRyo's Hard

00:10:740 (1) - More curved? no need :>
00:47:823 (8) - A bit weird, put this in 280|64 no its somekind of weird symetry <.<
00:49:490 (5) - I'm not sure but it seems to be a bit asymmetric but its only 1 way point, how can it be asymmetric \:D/
00:57:407 (5) - Ctrl+g? I'm absolutely not sure about this but try it i think current plays better
00:58:865 (1) - This should be stacked with the previous 5 why o:

DarknessAngel wrote:

cRyo

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  (just ignore the suggestion you don't agree,but you should snap green sections which are unsnapped.)

1. 00:30:740 (1) - too many whistle in a short time sounds noizy to me.
   I feel better if you let the volume down to 35%. made 45% oo!
2. 01:16:990 (1,2) - I think the spacing between 01:16:990 (1,2) should be larger since the NC is just 2.
   also the large spacing can emphasize the vocal well. hmm i dont feel like there should be some large spacing x.x

Sekai-nyan wrote:

cRyo's Hard:

1. 00:39:490 (6) - why this combo is up to 10? i suggest you break it to 5 of 5 so add nc here~

i wanted same color for all kick sliders x.x ( this one also #10 00:41:157 (10) - \:D/
Nothing much to say owo/ good as always cryo wwww Thx !