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Atlantica - Battlezone

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blissfulyoshi
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Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 22, 2009 at 9:15:13 AM

Artist: Jeremy Soule
Title: Battlezone
Source: Atlantica
Tags: Atlantica
BPM: 200
Filesize: 1965kb
Play Time: 00:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (5 stars, 164 notes)
  2. Normal (3.9 stars, 71 notes)
Download: Jeremy Soule - Battlezone
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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An Atlantica beatmap. Enjoy. Thx to all the ppl who modded and commented on this map.

Edit 4/10: Wyaeiga edits. Small hitsound changes.
Edit 4/10 2: thepianist edits.
Edit 4/13: Daru edits
Edit 4/14: Minyeob edits
Edit 4/14 2: SteRRuM edits
Edit 4/14 3: Starrodkirby edits
Edit 4/15: Shinxyn edits (sort of undoing Minyeob edits)
Edit 4/15 2: MarioBros777 edits
Edit 4/16: fufe edits
Edit 4/16 2: added artist thx DxS
Edit 4/16 3: editted Wyaeiga pointed out (not what he said)
Edit 4/17: small nazi edits
Edit 4/17 2: Kyocciola edits
Edit 4/17 3: Takuma edits
Edit:4/18: Skyripper edits
Edit:4/26: Gens edits
Edit 4/26 2: Animask edits
Edit 4/26 3: Nexy edits
Edit 4/27: Symbolic edits
Edit 4/29: SFG edits
Edit 5/1: SFG edits 2
Edit 5/2: lukewarmholiday edits
Edit 5/2 2: Starrodkirby edits 2
Edit 5/2 3: Metroid edits
Edit 5/5: Sushi971 edits
Edit 5/5 2: Mafiamaster edits
Edit 5/6: 0_o edits
Edit 5/16: tieff edits
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Ken Cosgrove
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Joined August 2008
Ken Cosgrove
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thepianist
544 posts
Joined March 2009
thepianist
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Daru
osu!painter
866 posts
Joined August 2008
Daru
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blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Thank you for your replies everyone.

I followed everyone's comments on the beatmap so far except for changing the difficulty settings too much because I really love having easy difficulty settings on any beatmap from the easy ones to the hard ones.

Keep those responses coming ppl. Thank you.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
I had a problem when I modded this......
Some of slider's timing are little off.
Listen to the music with 25/50% play backrate and fix your slider's timing.

Here are some examples.

[It's going to sting a little]
19:995(1)-> Extend 1/4 beat
28:170(3)-> Extend 1/4 beat
37:095(1)-> 1/4 beat backward.
40:095(1)-> 1/4 beat backward.

[I'll cut you with one stroke]
21:550(1)-> Hidden.(You don't have to change this)
28:150(3)-> Extend 1/4 beat
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
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Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
This is a cool map. It's one of those sort of things that I would see in StepMania...except it's here! I love when that happens.

[It's going to sting a little]:
00:15:87 (1) - Looks a little cluttered here...
00:28:92 (1) - Should this start at the white tick before it...? (In the timeline)
00:32:89 (5) - Move this to the white tick further and cut the slider short so it ends on the 1/4.
00:37:09 (1) - This totally feels trippy in rhythm.
00:40:09 (1) - This feels too soon by a 1/4.
00:46:39 (2) - Shorten the beginning of this slider to make it start on the white tick. It's fine otherwise.

[I'll cut you with one stroke]:
00:02:35 (5) - Stack this on the endpoint of (1)'s slider there.
00:05:20 (6) - New combo?
00:48:77 (4) - New combo?

I tried in your search for an artist...closest I got was the topic saying who the Atlantica Online staff is...And there's no Music Team. Seriously.
Look for yourself.
http://atlantica.ndoorsgames.com/center ... 43&start=1

Great hitcircle. Haha...Just do a little things here and there and it'll be nice. You might need to make an easier difficulty. Might though.

I say you should get Saturos on this. I heard he plays Atlantica Online...But then again, he might just get annoyed or something, haha...

Good luck on this. Star.
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Thanks for searching for the artist for me. Hopefully no one will get mad now if I do not have an actual artist.

Saturos is still playing Atlantica. I was planning to ask him after a little more modding was done, so I feel like it... because I kind of doubt he would be on osu! at a time where I will catch him.
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Wow, it's purely own beats~

Sting-
00:01:47 (2) - down one level 3 grid
00:12:79 (1) - start on white tick at 00:12:87 and end on 00:13:62
00:18:57 (4) - end 1/2 beat earlier
00:19:99 (1) - start on white tick at 00:20:07 and end on 00:20:67
00:20:97 (2) - start on white tick, 00:20:97 to 00:22:17
00:28:17 (3) - end on red tick at 00:28:62
00:37:02 (1) - end on red tick at 00:38:22
00:40:84 (1) - 00:40:92 to 00:41:37
00:47:82 (2) - sounds awkward here, move back 1/2
Basically, use purely 1/2 beat snap divisor, and fix spacing for most note, especially the beats 1/2 next to each other

Cut-
00:06:70 (4) - add whistle to the beats on the slider or take out slider whistle
00:21:55 (1) - lonely whistle?
00:28:90 (1,2,3) - is this supposed to only have sliding whistles?
00:45:25 (2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like the finish spam
00:47:95 (1,2,3) - sounds very awkward...
00:48:85 (1,2,3,4) - move whole thing 1/4 right, nor am I too sure about the finish hitsounds for all four sliders
waah pure own beats~~ and too much finish hitsounds

Okay, advice- 1. Since Bpm seems good, use only 1/2 (except for rapid parts), 2. The audio's too quiet, either find a louder one or reduce the hit volumes by 3 or 4 ticks, 3. Did you know you can apply hitsounds to parts of sliders? like the starting beat of slider, ending beat or the sliding part?
And if you want to, please fix spacing for both diffs...?

I like the creativity of own beats, I guess I can give you a star... just barely though... ;)
fufe
284 posts
Joined September 2008
fufe
Sting-
00:13:77 (1) - Spacing inconsistent with previous sliders.
00:16:17 (2) - forward 1/2 shorten accordingly ( or dont? i think its nice not shortened. move 3 tho)
00:35:97 (1,1,1) - is there a reason why these aren't stacked like the others before and after it?
00:47:67 (2) - random jump? If so. new combo here instead i think.


Cut-
00:17:95 (3) - could be neater. One grid(3) right?
00:19:45 (6) - One grid down? If its supposed to jump out of shape it isnt doing a good job where it is now =p
00:23:65 (5) - New combo here instead of the one two hits ahead?
00:39:25 (1) - up two grids? not sure what the intended effect is here with that jump. but 345 is neatly lines up so maybe this too?
00:45:25 (2,3,1) - &
00:47:05 (3,1,2) - ^ why are these new-combos?
00:48:10 (2,3) - should be the same length imo.

I have a problem with the mini sliders but thats probably just out of my difficulty curve. In the name of fairness id ask for the quick slider transitions to be stacked but that is just my style and me not being able to beat this difficulty =p

I was gunna wait to see what u said about Cut before i did this but meh screw it. st'R'
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
Sorry I forgot to post and you deserve a star.

The edits I suggested were:-

Cut-

- The 4 sliders at the end were to be place sort of like this.



And that was it, I think... Good work. XD
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
I'll star first since you were being a good person and all.

Artist: Jeremy Soule (not 100% sure, verified on a gaming site.)

and we already discussed other things in #mod. Good luck.
Ken Cosgrove
43 posts
Joined August 2008
Ken Cosgrove
For Cut You

00:23:65 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove 4, move 5 back half a beat, repeat 5

First time I played, 4 sounded like an extra beat, 5 sounded just off in general.

Even looking at the song in the edit screen didn't help much.

It's just my opinion, but I think the edits make it sound better.


Maybe you can also move 00:17:65 (1,2,3) elsewhere because every time I play, it always interferes with the slider @ 00:18:85 (5). Probably it's just me, but usually I just can't see the slider under until it's too late and I mess up the combo.
Kyocciola
146 posts
Joined November 2008
Kyocciola
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Takuma
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Takuma
☆
omg those are long difficulty name.
I'll cut you with one stroke!:
  1. 00:30:85 (1) - Remove new combo.
  2. 00:31:60 (1) - ^
  3. 00:31:15 (2) - Place new combo here.
  4. 00:34:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
  5. 00:35:80 (4) - Place new combo here.
  6. 00:43:45 (7) - ^
  7. 00:44:05 (1) - Remove new combo.
It's going to sting a little:
  1. 00:05:22 (4) - Place new combo here.
  2. 00:05:67 (1) - Remove new combo.
  3. 00:13:77 (1) - ^
  4. 00:14:37 (2) - Place new combo here.
  5. 00:15:87 (1) - Too close to 00:14:97 (4)
  6. 00:26:07 (1) - Remove new combo.
  7. 00:27:27 (1) - ^
  8. 00:30:87 (1) - ^
  9. 00:34:62 (1) - ^
  10. 00:37:02 (1) - ^
  11. 00:39:27 (1) - ^
  12. 00:40:17 (1) - ^
  13. 00:41:67 (1) - ^
  14. 00:42:57 (1) - ^
  15. 00:44:07 (1) - ^
  16. 00:44:97 (1) - ^
  17. 00:47:97 (1) - Shorten by 1/2.
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Takuma I applied all your changes except 00:15:87 (1) - Too close to 00:14:97 (4) since I believe the time lapse between these notes justifies the position, but 1 or 2 other ppl have asked about this before, so if another person believes this should be changed, I will change it.
Skyripper
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Joined August 2008
Skyripper
Offset 556 (make sure you resnap)

consider reducing length of difficulty titles

[I'll cut you]
00:10:60 (2) - stack on 1's end. move 3 accordingly (and whatever else)
00:29:80 (4) - stack end on 5's start

00:48:77 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds bad
do this:
00:48:85 (1) - select all 4 combos and move them so the 1 slider starts on 00:48:85

then reduce lengths as depicted in screenshot

Dather
2 posts
Joined December 2008
Dather
Very nice, much better than first drafts. I am impresed, feels good
Gens
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Joined August 2008
Gens
[It's going to sting a little]
00:04:756 (x) - Place a beat here?
00:14:95 (3,1) - Spacing? (I didn't tested the map, so I'm not sure. I'm not in the mood to test, sorry)

[I'll cut you with one stroke]
00:04:15 (4) - Whistle?

I think it's a cool map. Starred!
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
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mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Didn't find anything wrong. I do have 3 suggestions:

It's going to sting a little
00:12:556 - Place a hitcircle here?

I'll cut you with one stroke
00:19:45 (6) - New combo.
00:24:250 - Place a hircircle here? Possibly with a clap.

+Star :D
Sleep Powder
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Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
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Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
[It's going to sting a little]

Maybe make difficulty-name a bit shorter.
00:01:45 (2) - Delete this note.
00:02:65 (1) - ^
00:03:85 (3) - ^
00:04:75 (x) - Add note here.
00:05:35 (6) - Delete this note.
00:17:35 (3) - Don't stack this note, because later in the map you have a 1/2 note stacked after a slider. It's hard to see if it's a 1 note or a 1/2 note then (for Normal).


[I'll cut you with one stroke]

Maybe make difficulty-name a bit shorter.
00:04:90 (x) - Add a note here.
00:05:05 (x) - ^
00:27:40 (x) - ^
00:29:80 (4) - Can't see that this is a 1/4 slider. It seems like it's a note.
00:30:25 (6) - Change this slider, it's overlapped too much by (5).
00:31:90 (x) - Add a note here.
00:33:10 (x) - ^
00:33:40 (7) - Delete this note.
________________________________________________________________________________________________

Starred *
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
00:18:55 (4,1,2) - slider overlap is ugly (for this and all others like it)
*nazi modding starts here*
00:04:75 (3) - align directly over 2 (move slightly farther west)
00:12:85 (1,2) - these do not flow into each other well
00:16:15 (2) - align with 1
00:18:55 (4) - maybe make this symmetrical? it looks kinda ugly
00:26:05 (2) - if you move this so the start aligns with the ending vector of 1, it will both flow better and not overlap
00:30:85 (2) - doesnt flow well from 1
00:35:95 (1) - move up a bit to align with previous 2
00:43:75 (2) - stack under fading 3
00:45:55 (1) - end with a clap
slider velocity and spacing are a bit fast for an Easy


[Hard]
00:12:85 (1) - partly hidden by 6
00:31:90 (3,4) - move 4 out from under 3 cus this is confusing
00:39:55 (3) - can you move the pattern a little so this is halfway between 5 and 6
00:49:45 (3) - try to stack this under the end of the previous 3
*nazi time*
00:34:30 (4,5) - doesnt flow very well
00:44:95 (1) - sudden spacing change is kinda ugh
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
00:05:80 (2,3,4) - notes feel disjointed from each other
00:12:85 (1,2) - can you change this so 2 isnt partly hidden by the slider section of 1
00:14:95 (3) - finish
00:20:95 (2) - clap the end
00:23:95 (1,2) - the two whistles where 1 ends and 2 begins sound bad...maybe remove one of them just from the end?
00:30:85 (2) - if you put this at a 45 degree angle from the end of 1 it wont overlap anymore and look better imo
00:35:95 (1) - move this up a bit so it aligns w 2
00:38:35 (1) - ^
00:40:15 (5,1) - i feel like at least one of these hits needs a finish
00:44:05 (3) - remove clap
00:47:35 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:06:70 (4) - whistle all three hits
00:11:95 (6) - is still about 2 pixels too low to be properly stacked :P
00:23:05 (4) - end with a whistle
00:26:50 (3,4) - align these
00:37:75 (4) - whistle?
00:39:25 (1,2,3) - can you make this an equilateral triangle?
00:43:75 (2) - finish
00:47:95 (1) - flows badly from 6
and i dont really like the way you mapped the ending
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Ryuukun
00:39:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - arent they a little bit to far apart? can this actually be fc'd?

thats it pretty cool map :)
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
lukewarmholiday
Kiai time is unnecessary.

Please don't have a slider section have a whistle sound while the start and end dont. It's immensely irritating and was actually messing me up while playing

Nothing else I see atm.
Starrodkirby86
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Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
Easy
00:27:55 (4) - There is only a whistle on the track, add whistles to the slider hits.

Hard
00:19:75 (1) - Move this to the right by 1 level 3 grid unit.
00:20:65 (4,5,6) - Move this together down by 1 level 3 grid unit.
00:48:85 (1,2,3,4) - Move this so it's straight downward and to make the center of the sliders be on the y (vertical) axis.
Darrihuka's BRANDY - Move it on DJ map has something like this, use his as a example.

Starred'
Sushi
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Joined October 2008
Sushi
[Easy]
00:16:15 (2,3) - align end of (2) with (3)
00:20:95 (2,1) - align end of (2) with (1)

[Hard]
00:22:45 (1,2,3,4) - move (4) 1 grid down and left to make (3,4) similar to, (1,2)


Nice map~

Have my star
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Mafiamaster
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0_o
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Joined December 2008
0_o
These are all my humble opinions, ignore as you please :P
Easy
00:46:45 (2) - Sounds kinda cool shortening it 1/2 (or making it 2 hitcircles 1/2 apart)

Hard
00:05:80 (2,3,4) - Not really wrong, it just tripped me up because they are differently spaced on the timeline when they look so nice and lined up on the map :P
00:16:00 (4,5) - Try moving 4 ahead 1/4 and taking out 5? Plays/sounds better imo
00:18:85 (5,6) - Kind of decieving distancewise, can you make 5 point downwards? I think this is the same problem I had with the first thing I mentioned on this difficulty
00:21:10 (7) - Plays better as a hitcircle then slider instead of a repeat slider
00:39:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - Woahh, very unpredictable spacing here
00:41:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this plays better a slider-hitcircle pattern instead of hitcircle-slider
00:44:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit more predictable after this happened last time, but I didn't like the last time :P

Cool short map, starred * :)
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[EASY]

nothing. good job

[HARD]

nothing, there are a few nazi spacing issues i could go on about but i am not a nazi modder, so ill leave those to the likes of SFG

overall a nice, clean map
star'd
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
let's see, the map is fine

[Easy]
fine, some sounds I were'nt able to hear, with the sound low, so yea, it's all good

[Hard]
00:31:90 (3,4) - hmm, this was confusing to me, I guess. . . . . that is all

only odd thing I felt with both difficulties was that their difficulties were pretty high, I mean, 5 stars and 4 stars for an Easy, it's pretty wack, but heck,
*star*
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
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cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Nice map.

Suggestions(remember, you don't have to follow them):

[General]
Volume feels a bit loud.

[Easy]
Just fine!

Hard
00:31:90 (3,4) - (3,4) - I just don't feel too comfortable with this. But I could get used to it.
00:47:875 - New timing section to lower the volume or soft sounds?

There isn't much left to check! :D

Star'd!
mtmcl
mtmcl
I'll star this for now. It's good, but you might want to make an easier difficulty and call easy normal. I won't require it. If you're really against it, just say so in this thread and I'll bubble. Good job!
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
I changed easy to normal, but I have no plans to create a easier difficulty because I believe that normal is easy enough for most ppl.
mtmcl
mtmcl
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RemmyX25
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