This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 06. April 2013 at 17:14:55

Artist: nayuta
Title: Toki wo Kizamu Uta
Source: Clannad ~After Story~
BPM: 139
Filesize: 3142kb
Play Time: 02:27
Difficulties Available:

1. 4K EZ - 4Key (2,96 stars, 270 notes)
2. 4K HD - 4Key (4,6 stars, 618 notes)
3. 4K MX - 4Key (5 stars, 964 notes)
4. 4K NM - 4Key (2,87 stars, 248 notes)
5. 7K HD - 7Key (4,15 stars, 948 notes)
6. 7K MX - 7Key (4,94 stars, 1264 notes)
7. 7K NM - 7Key (3,11 stars, 536 notes)

Download: nayuta - Toki wo Kizamu Uta
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First time trying osu!mania mapping

I love it!

nice map~

○ Need more diffs for other key modes, 4K is recommended.
○ To avoid the maps being too plain, you should add more hitsounds.

~HD~
00:05:153 (5153|2) - set volume to 5% and silence its slider-slide
00:07:959 (7959|0) - add bass-drum sound, should have reverb effect (like a bomb sound)
00:07:959 (7959|4,7959|0) - add cymbal sound
00:10:549 (10549|2,10657|1,10764|0,10980|2,11196|3) - soft-hitwhistles will do
• And so on when these lead sounds occured.
00:21:772 (21772|0) - add bass-drum sound
00:21:772 (21772|6) - add cymbal sound
00:28:354 (28354|6) - remove this note
00:31:268 (31268|4) - add notes on the lead sounds, it's weird to just ignore only this part
00:32:131 (32131|0) - •○○•○○•• → ••••••••
00:33:858 (33858|5) - remove this long note
00:33:858 (33858|5,34506|3) - should be started on 00:34:721
00:35:584 (35584|0) - add bass-drum sound
00:35:584 (35584|6) - add cymbal sound
• I'll stop telling "add cymbal" from here, I think you know where to add
01:06:641 - since this part, using normal-hitnormal as bass-drum sound is a great idea (or use custom sound)
01:07:279 (67279|2) - remove
01:09:006 (69006|1) - move to 01:09:545
01:10:948 (70948|4) - move to 01:10:840
01:16:128 (76128|2) - move to 01:16:020
01:16:236 - add note
01:17:962 - ^
01:19:689 - ^
01:24:760 (84760|2) - move to 01:24:653
01:26:596 - add note
01:29:833 - ^
01:30:049 - ^
01:31:775 - ^
01:32:746 (92746|5,92746|2,92961|6,92961|4,93069|3,93177|2,93177|0,93285|1) - use only single note
01:56:273 (116273|2) - add some double notes in this part
01:47:208 (107208|1,107640|2) - this type of long note doesn't fit here
01:48:071 (108071|4,108719|5) - ^
02:04:474 - add note
02:08:035 - ^

~NM~
00:05:153 (5153|3) - set volume to 5% and silence its slider-slide
00:51:971 (51971|1) - what is this note for?
01:06:641 ~01:32:639 - use triple notes only when the cymbal occurred, otherwise double notes or single note
01:37:712 - add note
01:39:007 (99007|2) - line 4 or 5
01:48:071 - this part is too easy imo
02:27:551 (147551|2) - line 2

Thanks alot DJpop i have fixed almost everything! All that i could understood what you mentioned or noticed myself. It took me some time time to figure out how the links work in the forum for this mode

I hope the maps got better now I will also try to improve this beatmap later on with more hitsounds and do 4K difficulties

artist: nayuta
title: 時を刻む唄
romanized: Toki wo Kizamu Uta

blame natteke

edit: i mean no 'trance arrange' lol

hhehehe

cool map.

Star~
(ﾉ゜ヮ゜)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

[4K NM]

00:41:624 (41624|0,42487|1) - the bass is so--re---, so it would be better to keep "so" note at 2nd column and "re" at the 1st column.
00:50:138 (50138|2) - according to what is mapped later, better to keep 1/2 notes at that position. Move to 00:50:030 (50030|2) -?
01:33:610 (93610|1) - delete? the other two notes is representing the vocal. I think that is enough . Also this part the instruments cooled down, so it would be nice to put less notes.

[4K HD]
00:23:282 (23282|2) - there is a piano sound at this place.

[7K NM]
00:23:067 (23067|3,23282|2,23714|3,23930|2) - change one of these two? Since the melody is different.
00:29:757 (29757|1,29973|2,30405|1,30621|2) - ^
02:01:884 (121884|0,122316|2,122748|4) - maybe can change to the same pattern as later. But if you think we need a break after the previous part that's also fine.

7K HD and MX looks fine to me

chonicle wrote:

[4K NM]

00:41:624 (41624|0,42487|1) - the bass is so--re---, so it would be better to keep "so" note at 2nd column and "re" at the 1st column. Opps! how did this happen lol- fixed!
00:50:138 (50138|2) - according to what is mapped later, better to keep 1/2 notes at that position. Move to 00:50:030 (50030|2) -? Yeah thx! fixed
01:33:610 (93610|1) - delete? the other two notes is representing the vocal. I think that is enough . Also this part the instruments cooled down, so it would be nice to put less notes. fixed~

[4K HD]
00:23:282 (23282|2) - there is a piano sound at this place. Thx fixed

[7K NM]
00:23:067 (23067|3,23282|2,23714|3,23930|2) - change one of these two? Since the melody is different. fixed both~
00:29:757 (29757|1,29973|2,30405|1,30621|2) - ^
02:01:884 (121884|0,122316|2,122748|4) - maybe can change to the same pattern as later. But if you think we need a break after the previous part that's also fine. Yeah~ I think putting more notes there is not bad but this is a smooth transition and not too hard

7K HD and MX looks fine to me Nice^^

Thanks for mod chonicle

That's all that I can find~ The rest are good already for me \o/

Entozer wrote:

4k HD

00:38:172 (38172|3) - delete
00:38:064 (38064|3) - add
00:38:280 (38280|1) - add

00:38:172 (38172|3,108827|3) - At this part, the synth is quite different. Instead of having a note here, it has a note at 01:48:719 (108719|0) - But it's up to you if you want to change it

7k NM

00:33:858 (33858|1) - delete
00:33:642 (33642|0) - make this a long note instead of ^

02:02:100 (122100|1) - add note?
02:02:532 (122532|3) - add note?

01:05:562 (65562|2) - (I'm not sure, but if this part is following synth) delete. It flows better in my opinion ><

That's all that I can find~ The rest are good already for me \o/

Thanks i fixed those parts

1. I can't hear hitsounds, you should use at least soft for almost all notes.
2. diff speard of 4K has some problem, 4K NM star rate 4.5, more like a HD diff, change 4K NM to 4K HD, and HD to MX.
Make a 4K NM or EZ with star rate under 3 will fill the gap.
3. As the guideline said, OD for all 7K diff should be 7 or 8.
4. Timing points on 00:49:383, 01:34:259, 02:15:681 should be inherited points.

woc2006 wrote:

1. I can't hear hitsounds, you should use at least soft for almost all notes.
2. diff speard of 4K has some problem, 4K NM star rate 4.5, more like a HD diff, change 4K NM to 4K HD, and HD to MX.
Make a 4K NM or EZ with star rate under 3 will fill the gap.
3. As the guideline said, OD for all 7K diff should be 7 or 8.
4. Timing points on 00:49:383, 01:34:259, 02:15:681 should be inherited points.

All fixed! Thanks for mod

• Re-snap all notes in every diffs
• 7K EZ should be converted into 4K EZ, easy is not necessary for 7K if 4K existed
• Cymbal mods XD. Hitsounds should be consistent in every diffs, most similarity.
• I'm really tired ;w;


~4K NM~
00:56:294 - add cymbal note
00:58:020 - add double notes, one with cymbal
00:58:875 (58875|2) - remove
00:59:749 - add long note with cymbal
01:06:649 - add cymbal
01:34:257 - ^
01:54:977 - ^
01:56:703 - ^
01:58:430 - ^
01:59:293 - ^
02:15:696 - ^
02:27:567 - ^

~4K HD~
00:58:020 - add cymbal
01:00:608 - ^
01:03:621 (63621|3) - remove
01:06:649 - add cymbal
01:32:099 - add bass-drum note
01:34:257 - add cymbal
01:51:525 (111525|3) - no cymbal here
02:15:696 - add cymbal

~4K MX~
00:36:554 - add note
00:56:286 (56286|2) - add cymbal
00:58:012 (58012|1) - ^
00:59:738 (59738|0) - ^
01:00:601 (60601|1) - ^
01:01:903 - ^
01:06:649 - ^
01:20:444 - ^
01:34:259 - ^
01:37:495 - add note
01:44:401 - ^
01:47:207 - ^
01:47:639 - ^
01:48:070 - add cymbal
01:51:308 - add note
01:54:977 - add cymbal
01:56:705 (116705|1) - ^
01:58:431 (118431|1) - ^
01:59:294 (119294|2) - ^
02:00:158 (120158|3) - ^
02:15:681 (135681|3) - ^

~7K EZ~
00:12:275 (12275|2) - move to 00:12:059
00:14:434 - add note
00:19:182 (19182|3) - remove
00:56:286 (56286|1) - add cymbal note
00:58:020 - ^
00:58:875 (58875|4) - remove
00:59:738 (59738|2) - add cymbal
01:10:516 (70516|4) - add snare
01:32:962 (92962|3) - remove
02:04:690 (124690|2,124906|3,125122|4) - remove, too hard for EZ
02:08:143 (128143|4,128359|3,128575|2) - ^
02:11:597 (131597|2,131812|3,132028|4) - ^
02:27:551 (147551|5) - add cymbal

~7K NM~
00:19:613 (19613|1) - end at 00:20:477
00:56:286 (56286|5) - add cymbal
00:58:012 (58012|6) - ^
00:59:738 (59738|1) - ^
01:00:601 (60601|4) - ^
01:01:903 - add cymbal on every white ticks
01:03:189 (63189|0) - add cymbal
01:06:632 - ^
01:20:444 - ^
01:32:530 (92530|6) - ^
01:34:257 - ^
01:37:497 - add note line 2 or 3
01:39:006 - add note
01:39:221 (99221|2) - end at 01:40:948
01:44:401 - add note line 4
01:48:070 - add cymbal
01:51:308 - add note line 2
01:52:819 (112819|3) - don't use long note
01:54:977 (114977|3) - add cymbal
01:56:705 (116705|6) - ^
01:58:430 (118430|6) - ^
02:00:157 (120157|5) - ^
02:15:696 - add cymbal
02:22:587 (142587|3) - move to 02:22:819
02:27:551 (147551|3) - add cymbal

~7K HD~
00:46:586 (46586|4) - set 5% volume
00:49:390 ~ 01:01:471 - ○ • ○• • ○• ○ • while • has whistle ○ otherwise
01:00:608 - add cymbal
01:01:471 - add cymbal on every white ticks, you don't need to add anymore notes though
01:05:562 (65562|2) - move to 01:05:678
01:05:786 (65786|0) - unsnapped note
01:06:632 (66632|3) - add cymbal
01:06:632 ~ 01:32:531 - should have same rhythm as MX
01:20:444 - add cymbal
01:33:178 (93178|2) - move to 01:33:286
01:34:257 - add cymbal
01:34:257 ~ 01:58:430 - patterns are not relative, follow these steps and adjust note's positions as you like
1) add vocal notes
2) add bass-drum notes (every white ticks)
3) add cymbal notes (I'll tell you where)
4) add snare notes (every 2nd and 4th white ticks)
5) add hi-hat notes (every red ticks) this is optional
01:37:495 (97495|1) - don't use long note
01:39:006 (99006|3) - ^
01:48:070 - add cymbal
01:53:250 (113250|4) - wrong starting point
01:54:977 - add cymbal
01:56:703 - ^
01:56:703 - recommend not to use drum rolls in this part yet, use pattern I suggested above instead
01:58:430 - add cymbal, you don't need to add anymore notes though
01:59:293 - ^
02:00:157 - ^
02:22:587 (142587|4) - remove

~7K MX~
01:05:778 (65778|4) - unsnapped note
01:06:632 (66632|3) - add cymbal
01:20:444 - ^
01:34:259 (94259|4) - ^
01:47:532 (107532|5) - remove
01:58:430 - should have cymbal here
01:59:293 - ^
02:00:157 - ^
02:01:883 - lower volume a bit, maybe 50%
02:01:811 - add note
02:12:027 - ^
02:15:696 - unsnapped timing
02:15:696 - from here to the end, some concurrent notes are random and unfit
Currently you used 3,2,2,2,2,2,2,2 ; 2,2,2,2,2,1,2,1
In one room, number of notes should be 2,1,3,1,2,1,3,1 (if there's cymbal, add 1 new note there
02:26:488 - add note
02:26:688 (146688|3) - remove

ALL FIXED!

Except 2 things in the 7K MX difficulty:

02:15:696 - from here to the end, some concurrent notes are random and unfit
Currently you used 3,2,2,2,2,2,2,2 ; 2,2,2,2,2,1,2,1
In one room, number of notes should be 2,1,3,1,2,1,3,1 (if there's cymbal, add 1 new note there

I used here a pattern consisting of drum kick, hi-hat and piano. I don't really remember now anymore and i didnt look in clearly to explain what is what but i like to play it so now i decide not to change it~

02:26:488 - add note
02:26:688 (146688|3) - remove

I also like to play this too and i don't want to remove the notes or add there~


1=drumkick
2=hi-hat
3=cymbal
4=piano high
5=piano low
6=wind sound ? (lol special effect)

Thanks alot for the modding DJPop. I finally finished it and it took me close to 3 hours to do that. I couldn't know how long it took you to look at that yourself Thanks so much

Also im mad why so many notes got unsnapped! This is ridiculous in some beatmap were 200 up to 300 something notes unsnapped!

And i didnt even change a timing. And the resnap option is not working, so manually resnapping every note one by one..
Well it fixed now for all the notes and it does not happen again, or will go crazy..

General
I think KIAI's end should at 02:01:883 -

4K NM
remove the break time

4K HD
OD at least 8(see guideline)

7K NM
this diff is a bit hard as it's a normal diff. especially start from 01:06:649 - ,i'd like to remove 01:06:847 (66847|6) - 01:08:574 (68574|6) - to make it easier.

7K MX
01:32:962 (92962|3,92962|1,93070|4,93177|2,93286|5,93501|3) - set volume at normal level,if its intentional, set at 70% normal level.

4K MX
the same volume issue as in 7K MX

woc2006 wrote:

General
I think KIAI's end should at 02:01:883 - Fixed (Also added a new KIAI at the end of the song)

4K NM
remove the break time Fixed

4K HD
OD at least 8(see guideline) Fixed

7K NM
this diff is a bit hard as it's a normal diff. especially start from 01:06:649 - ,i'd like to remove 01:06:847 (66847|6) - 01:08:574 (68574|6) - to make it easier. Fixed (remapped this part)

7K MX
01:32:962 (92962|3,92962|1,93070|4,93177|2,93286|5,93501|3) - set volume at normal level,if its intentional, set at 70% normal level. Fixed

4K MX
the same volume issue as in 7K MX Fixed

Additionally to the mod i went through all diffs and added a slightly lower volume section (where the kiai time ends now, 50%)
All done Thanks woc2006

bubbled

Good! I enjoy playing this.

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

yay

congratz btw i need start playing mania too o3o

wah, congratulations, hanyuu XD

wa

mania map congrats

yay.... hanyuu <3 czcz ( congrats )

another mania map, congratz :3

no 7K Easy?
that is meh
but the rest is nice

congraz~nice map~

grats :3
Now I have to start playinf mania o3o/

but there are two things that disturbs me,

4K EZ should be 4K NM, and 4K NM should be 4K EZ :/