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Shi Kong You Ke - Shi Pin Bu He Xie

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buhei
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buhei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月12日 星期五 at 18:36:21

Artist: Shi Kong You Ke
Title: Shi Pin Bu He Xie
Source: Bilibili Douga
Tags: 33娘 啪啪啪 初演唱 哔哩哔哩 Lady Gaga ft. Beyonce Telephone
BPM: 122
Filesize: 2208kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.07 stars, 80 notes)
  2. Hard (4.87 stars, 216 notes)
  3. Normal (4.06 stars, 115 notes)
Download: Shi Kong You Ke - Shi Pin Bu He Xie
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Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
前排:3
cirno-_old
cirno-_old
Hello :) Love the song lol.

Easy
SPOILER
00:33:131 - Add circle
00:37:066 - ^
00:45:427 (4) - Turn into circularto keep the flow nice like this http://i.imgur.com/wEmqa.png
00:52:804 - Add circle
01:00:672 - ^
01:26:738 (1) - Reverse part is offbeat, remake the slider with 2 reverses. Like this http://i.imgur.com/nFx1A.png

Normal
SPOILER
00:08:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not sure what's going on here...
00:11:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Hard
SPOILER
00:48:131 (2,3) - Move 4 grid to the left
00:49:115 (4,5,1) - ^
00:50:099 (2,3,4) - Move a little bit up

00:42:722 (6) - Add finish to the whole slider
00:43:459 (1) - Remove finish
00:46:902 (4) - Add finish

Nice maps :)
buhei
567 posts
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buhei
Updated
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qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. 不需要在Tags中添加已有的Artist和Title,而且现在也支持中文的Artist和Title，Source里要填p主。所以Metadata里改成这样
    SPOILER

Normal

  1. 在Normal难度及Easy中需要全程保持DS，细微处不同不要紧（比如全程1.5x偶尔几个1.47 1.48或者1.53这样）自己挨个Check吧
  2. 00:08:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - 在没什么节奏的开头就把连续的单点都放在红线上……感觉很怪异，建议全放到白线上
  3. 00:12:722 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 01:03:131 (1,2,3) - 连续三个折返两次的slider比较难，建议①②各删去一个折返
  5. 01:07:066 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 01:11:000 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 01:14:935 (1,2,3) - ^
    顺带一说，不要复制粘贴得这么明显……会显得没什么诚意……

Hard

  1. AR-1 OD-1
  2. 00:11:000 (3) - Slider画的不好看……原则上能少用锚点就少用，这里还行，这里00:14:443 (2) - 就显得有点不适合
    画成这样稍微好些？
    SPOILER
    同样的：01:09:525 (3) - 01:17:394 (3) -
  3. 00:37:558 (1,2,3,4) - 影响读图，②④circle要么就叠在slider尾，要么按正常DS排出去，既然是没变的1/2节奏不需要放成遮挡一半
  4. 00:45:918 (2) - ^
    节奏做的蛮好的，排列还需练习

曲子很好听~Good Luck~
buhei
567 posts
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buhei
Updated
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
EmPao
Hi!Silver Fran

Mod from my queue~

[Easy]
00:29:689 (3) - 尾刪clap
00:33:131 (2) - 加whistle
00:37:066 (2) - ^同上
00:54:771 - 加note?
01:03:131 (1,1,1) - 純個人建議:不是很喜歡同個slider來回這麼多次,拆成2個或以上的slider試試看?
01:30:672 (1) - 尾加clap
[Normal]
01:10:017 (4) - 頭刪finish
01:17:886 (4) - 頭尾都加clap(同01:13:951 (4) )
[Hard]
00:38:295 (4) - 覺得這裡的jump有點怪,因為歌詞是在00:38:050和00:38:541上 ,建議把00:38:295 (4,5) - Ctrl+G,然後00:38:295 (4,5) 再做jump,00:38:050 (3,4) - 就不要jump了
00:46:164 (4) - ^同上
01:10:263 (4) - 覺得沒必要用1.5x jump.. 1.0x正常spacing就可
01:18:131 (4) - ^同上
沒啥大問題,就一些建議~

That's all!
Good Luck~
buhei
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Topic Starter
buhei
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buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
buhei
I decided to 填坑 remap before the number of mods is small ._.

remapping..
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
~~ Request via QQ :3

[General]
  1. Preview Time還是沒修 Hard的是47403, 其他則是47401
  2. tag 'vocaloid'? 查了下B站是人力vocaloid, 就tag下吧~
  3. 然後順便tag 'Silver Fran' (米桶那張sakamichi有tag)
  4. 打開閃瞎眼提示 kiai頭太閃..
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:778 (2,3,4) - 我覺得等距跳比較好看 比起不規則spacing來講
  2. 00:26:745 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:27:237 (4,5,1) - ^
  4. 00:29:081 (5) - 像這樣在兩個clap中間塞whistle真心覺得吵且不fit
  5. 00:31:171 - 應該是clap吧finish有點怪
  6. 00:41:499 (1,2) - 跳的莫名 你前面相同的part都沒跳這裡來個跳很奇怪 反而後面(3,4)跳的不錯
  7. 00:45:925 (2,3,4) - 嘛一樣等距跳 我感覺(2,3)之間可以跳一下
  8. 00:50:352 (5,6,1) - 嗯等距
  9. 00:54:040 (2,3,4) - ^
  10. 00:54:778 (3) - 應該是clap吧finish好怪
  11. 01:02:647 (3) - x:332, y:176 for 等距
  12. 01:31:171 - / 01:32:155 - clap
  13. 01:32:647 (1,2,3) - 作個這樣的效果怎麼樣呢 :3
    SPOILER

    424,192,92647,6,0,L|432:288,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    272,308,93138,2,0,L|264:212,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    340,184,93630,2,0,P|292:144|228:136,1,125.999996154785,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    看到我寫很多關於等距跳的東西你可能覺得很煩 不過等距跳可以讓版面看起來整齊一點 不會這裡到那裡很近 那裡到另一個地方很遠 險的很不整齊 以後在做跳的時候大概要注意一下
[Normal]
  1. AR可以+1 擺了滿多1/2
  2. 00:26:253 - 忘了clap
  3. 00:46:909 - finish+clap有點吵
  4. 01:03:138 (1,1,1,1) - 這些太不保險了 你前面擺了許多1/2+折返的滑條 這裡真的太多折返了 會讓人覺得很無聊 而且容易誤讀 基本上低難度不要放太多折返的滑條比較好
  5. 01:06:581 - clap嗯
    那些折返修掉 其他都不錯
[Easy]
  1. 除了CS外每個settings都+1才是Easy基本值
  2. 00:46:909 - clap+finish略吵
  3. 01:03:138 (1,1,1,1) - 你懂
  4. 01:30:679 (1) - 可能忘了finish 你其他有加
其他都沒了吧 =w=
buhei
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buhei
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Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
hi~

[General]
remove letterbox check?

[Hard]
00:11:745 - add note?
00:13:712 (6) - stack is 00:13:958 - here?
00:15:679 - add note?
00:19:614 - ^

awesome~

[Normal]
00:37:073 (3) - nazi 1grid left

[Easy]
00:39:532 (1) - 00:38:057 (4) - Suffer is wrong place


good luck nice mapset :3

edit: nice~ goodjob :3/ star~ ★
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mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
M4M~ w

[General]

Tag 要加 Telephone, 初演唱, 啪啪啪 和 Lady Gaga ft. Beyonce .因为这是原唱的歌曲

Letterbox during breaks 去吧. 没用到~

其他的F酱有说了我就不提了

[Hard]
AR7太慢了, +1吧

00:22:319 (2) - 感觉这样会比较好.
SPOILER

00:50:352 (5) - x=136 y=352, 这样就可以和 00:49:860 (4) - 这slider的尾端对称.

01:09:532 (2) - 一个slider这样盖过去有点不顺耳, 试试这样？
SPOILER

01:17:401 (3) - ^

01:19:368 (3,4) - 没stack好

[Normal]
尼玛别把AR调那么慢啊, AR+1

00:11:007 (5) - x=412 y=112, 这样比较美观.

00:36:089 (2) -
SPOILER

[Easy]
AR+1

没什么好说啦233

渣mod233
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
[Easy]

糟 不会拉slider表示不知道怎么mod了
有几个背景里有的clap空下了 感觉不太好不过加了note对新手不太和谐 总之没看到啥问题

[Normal]

1.4的slider是不是高了点
一开始slider夹circle的梗感觉可以在circle上加whistle circle声音太小有点打空气
00:29:450 - 这段在这里加个note比较好
00:45:188 - ^
00:49:122 - 加note
01:05:597 (4) - reverse去了 头换成circle

[Hard]

clap接finish的音效听着些许蛋疼
00:31:171 (4) - 缩短 要不把slider尾声音弄小点
00:54:778 (3) - finish换clap
01:32:647 (1,2) - ……觉得这里可以做的更好些

Tag啥的我不会查 就这些了 真是short mod ._.
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
buhei

Satellite wrote:

hi~

[General]
remove letterbox check?

[Hard]
00:11:745 - add note?
00:13:712 (6) - stack is 00:13:958 - here?
00:15:679 - add note?
00:19:614 - ^

awesome~

[Normal]
00:37:073 (3) - nazi 1grid left

[Easy]
00:39:532 (1) - 00:38:057 (4) - Suffer is wrong place


good luck nice mapset :3
Fixed some. That's really a short mod...wwww
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
buhei

Eggache0 wrote:

[Easy]

糟 不会拉slider表示不知道怎么mod了
有几个背景里有的clap空下了 感觉不太好不过加了note对新手不太和谐 总之没看到啥问题

[Normal]

1.4的slider是不是高了点
一开始slider夹circle的梗感觉可以在circle上加whistle circle声音太小有点打空气
00:29:450 - 这段在这里加个note比较好
00:45:188 - ^
00:49:122 - 加note
01:05:597 (4) - reverse去了 头换成circle

[Hard]

clap接finish的音效听着些许蛋疼
00:31:171 (4) - 缩短 要不把slider尾声音弄小点
00:54:778 (3) - finish换clap
01:32:647 (1,2) - ……觉得这里可以做的更好些

Tag啥的我不会查 就这些了 真是short mod ._.

发下你的图的Link吧..不清楚下次开Queue是什么时候
buhei
567 posts
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Topic Starter
buhei
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Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
Hello! From your M4M queue. I'm still a newb mapper, take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
00:38:548 (5) - I wouldn't recommend 1/2 repeating sliders, they may be too confusing for beginners. Change them to simple long sliders here and in the other parts of the map.
01:20:843 (2) - large empty space afterward, maybe you can fill it in with a slider? D: I see your intent though :)
01:24:778 (3) - ^
01:28:712 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Good diff, only have a few NC suggestions
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC here, place on 2 instead
00;58:958 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:991 (1) - blanket 2 better
00:14:450 (2) - don't think this repeating slider is the best fit for the vocals, maybe have a pattern like this?

SPOILER

00:45:434 (1) - Don't let this touch 5
00:50:843 (6) - stack on top of 4
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC, place on 2 instead
01:01:909 (2) - slider looks odd to me, maybe move the tail over more to the right?
01:18:876 (1) - don't stack, spread the circles out to keep consistent with the rest of the map (it's either a stream or triples)

Best to add a spinner somewhere in the map to add variation among the scores when this gets ranked :D Or else a bunch of people are going to have the same score!

Good luck :) relaxing song~
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
buhei

Zhengster wrote:

Hello! From your M4M queue. I'm still a newb mapper, take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
00:38:548 (5) - I wouldn't recommend 1/2 repeating sliders, they may be too confusing for beginners. Change them to simple long sliders here and in the other parts of the map.
01:20:843 (2) - large empty space afterward, maybe you can fill it in with a slider? D: I see your intent though :)
01:24:778 (3) - ^
01:28:712 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Good diff, only have a few NC suggestions
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC here, place on 2 instead
00;58:958 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:991 (1) - blanket 2 better
00:14:450 (2) - don't think this repeating slider is the best fit for the vocals, maybe have a pattern like this?

SPOILER

00:45:434 (1) - Don't let this touch 5
00:50:843 (6) - stack on top of 4
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC, place on 2 instead
01:01:909 (2) - slider looks odd to me, maybe move the tail over more to the right?
01:18:876 (1) - don't stack, spread the circles out to keep consistent with the rest of the map (it's either a stream or triples)

Best to add a spinner somewhere in the map to add variation among the scores when this gets ranked :D Or else a bunch of people are going to have the same score!

Good luck :) relaxing song~
thanks for modding. updated.
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
luxoDeh
Hi! M4M from my queue :)

EASY

not much to say in reality, that's a good diff
maybe just 00:10:024 (3) - move the second point of the slider one grid up, for me it flow better.

NORMAL

00:51:089 (7) - maybe remove NC and add next
00:58:958 (1) - ^
01:21:335 (4) - maybe make this slider end to 01:21:827 -
01:29:204 (4) - ^

HARD

01:19:860 - add a note here
01:27:729 - ^
01:23:210 (2) - add clap at the endo of the slider
01:24:194 (4) - ^
01:31:079 (2) - ^
01:32:063 (4) - ^

that's all... there's not much to say. it is well mapped, and the song is good. good luck for rank ;)
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
buhei

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue :)

EASY

not much to say in reality, that's a good diff
maybe just 00:10:024 (3) - move the second point of the slider one grid up, for me it flow better.

NORMAL

00:51:089 (7) - maybe remove NC and add next
00:58:958 (1) - ^
01:21:335 (4) - maybe make this slider end to 01:21:827 -
01:29:204 (4) - ^

HARD

01:19:860 - add a note here
01:27:729 - ^
01:23:210 (2) - add clap at the endo of the slider
01:24:194 (4) - ^
01:31:079 (2) - ^
01:32:063 (4) - ^

that's all... there's not much to say. it is well mapped, and the song is good. good luck for rank ;)
thx for modding. updated.
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