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Shi Kong You Ke - Shi Pin Bu He Xie

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Topic Starter
buhei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月12日 星期五 at 18:36:21

Artist: Shi Kong You Ke
Title: Shi Pin Bu He Xie
Source: Bilibili Douga
Tags: 33娘 啪啪啪 初演唱 哔哩哔哩 Lady Gaga ft. Beyonce Telephone
BPM: 122
Filesize: 2208kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.07 stars, 80 notes)
  2. Hard (4.87 stars, 216 notes)
  3. Normal (4.06 stars, 115 notes)
Download: Shi Kong You Ke - Shi Pin Bu He Xie
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
bilibili
Melt
前排:3
cirno-_old
Hello :) Love the song lol.

Easy
SPOILER
00:33:131 - Add circle
00:37:066 - ^
00:45:427 (4) - Turn into circularto keep the flow nice like this http://i.imgur.com/wEmqa.png
00:52:804 - Add circle
01:00:672 - ^
01:26:738 (1) - Reverse part is offbeat, remake the slider with 2 reverses. Like this http://i.imgur.com/nFx1A.png

Normal
SPOILER
00:08:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not sure what's going on here...
00:11:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Hard
SPOILER
00:48:131 (2,3) - Move 4 grid to the left
00:49:115 (4,5,1) - ^
00:50:099 (2,3,4) - Move a little bit up

00:42:722 (6) - Add finish to the whole slider
00:43:459 (1) - Remove finish
00:46:902 (4) - Add finish

Nice maps :)
Topic Starter
buhei
Updated
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. 不需要在Tags中添加已有的Artist和Title,而且现在也支持中文的Artist和Title,Source里要填p主。所以Metadata里改成这样

Normal

  1. 在Normal难度及Easy中需要全程保持DS,细微处不同不要紧(比如全程1.5x偶尔几个1.47 1.48或者1.53这样)自己挨个Check吧
  2. 00:08:787 (2,3,4,5,6) - 在没什么节奏的开头就把连续的单点都放在红线上……感觉很怪异,建议全放到白线上
  3. 00:12:722 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 01:03:131 (1,2,3) - 连续三个折返两次的slider比较难,建议①②各删去一个折返
  5. 01:07:066 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 01:11:000 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 01:14:935 (1,2,3) - ^
    顺带一说,不要复制粘贴得这么明显……会显得没什么诚意……

Hard

  1. AR-1 OD-1
  2. 00:11:000 (3) - Slider画的不好看……原则上能少用锚点就少用,这里还行,这里00:14:443 (2) - 就显得有点不适合
    画成这样稍微好些?同样的:01:09:525 (3) - 01:17:394 (3) -
  3. 00:37:558 (1,2,3,4) - 影响读图,②④circle要么就叠在slider尾,要么按正常DS排出去,既然是没变的1/2节奏不需要放成遮挡一半
  4. 00:45:918 (2) - ^
    节奏做的蛮好的,排列还需练习

曲子很好听~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
buhei
Updated
EmPao
Hi!Silver Fran

Mod from my queue~

[Easy]
00:29:689 (3) - 尾刪clap
00:33:131 (2) - 加whistle
00:37:066 (2) - ^同上
00:54:771 - 加note?
01:03:131 (1,1,1) - 純個人建議:不是很喜歡同個slider來回這麼多次,拆成2個或以上的slider試試看?
01:30:672 (1) - 尾加clap
[Normal]
01:10:017 (4) - 頭刪finish
01:17:886 (4) - 頭尾都加clap(同01:13:951 (4) )
[Hard]
00:38:295 (4) - 覺得這裡的jump有點怪,因為歌詞是在00:38:050和00:38:541上 ,建議把00:38:295 (4,5) - Ctrl+G,然後00:38:295 (4,5) 再做jump,00:38:050 (3,4) - 就不要jump了
00:46:164 (4) - ^同上
01:10:263 (4) - 覺得沒必要用1.5x jump.. 1.0x正常spacing就可
01:18:131 (4) - ^同上
沒啥大問題,就一些建議~

That's all!
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
buhei
Updated
Topic Starter
buhei
I decided to 填坑 remap before the number of mods is small ._.

remapping..
Flask
~~ Request via QQ :3

[General]
  1. Preview Time還是沒修 Hard的是47403, 其他則是47401
  2. tag 'vocaloid'? 查了下B站是人力vocaloid, 就tag下吧~
  3. 然後順便tag 'Silver Fran' (米桶那張sakamichi有tag)
  4. 打開閃瞎眼提示 kiai頭太閃..
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:778 (2,3,4) - 我覺得等距跳比較好看 比起不規則spacing來講
  2. 00:26:745 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:27:237 (4,5,1) - ^
  4. 00:29:081 (5) - 像這樣在兩個clap中間塞whistle真心覺得吵且不fit
  5. 00:31:171 - 應該是clap吧finish有點怪
  6. 00:41:499 (1,2) - 跳的莫名 你前面相同的part都沒跳這裡來個跳很奇怪 反而後面(3,4)跳的不錯
  7. 00:45:925 (2,3,4) - 嘛一樣等距跳 我感覺(2,3)之間可以跳一下
  8. 00:50:352 (5,6,1) - 嗯等距
  9. 00:54:040 (2,3,4) - ^
  10. 00:54:778 (3) - 應該是clap吧finish好怪
  11. 01:02:647 (3) - x:332, y:176 for 等距
  12. 01:31:171 - / 01:32:155 - clap
  13. 01:32:647 (1,2,3) - 作個這樣的效果怎麼樣呢 :3
    SPOILER

    424,192,92647,6,0,L|432:288,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    272,308,93138,2,0,L|264:212,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    340,184,93630,2,0,P|292:144|228:136,1,125.999996154785,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    看到我寫很多關於等距跳的東西你可能覺得很煩 不過等距跳可以讓版面看起來整齊一點 不會這裡到那裡很近 那裡到另一個地方很遠 險的很不整齊 以後在做跳的時候大概要注意一下
[Normal]
  1. AR可以+1 擺了滿多1/2
  2. 00:26:253 - 忘了clap
  3. 00:46:909 - finish+clap有點吵
  4. 01:03:138 (1,1,1,1) - 這些太不保險了 你前面擺了許多1/2+折返的滑條 這裡真的太多折返了 會讓人覺得很無聊 而且容易誤讀 基本上低難度不要放太多折返的滑條比較好
  5. 01:06:581 - clap嗯
    那些折返修掉 其他都不錯
[Easy]
  1. 除了CS外每個settings都+1才是Easy基本值
  2. 00:46:909 - clap+finish略吵
  3. 01:03:138 (1,1,1,1) - 你懂
  4. 01:30:679 (1) - 可能忘了finish 你其他有加
其他都沒了吧 =w=
Topic Starter
buhei
Updated
Satellite
hi~

[General]
remove letterbox check?

[Hard]
00:11:745 - add note?
00:13:712 (6) - stack is 00:13:958 - here?
00:15:679 - add note?
00:19:614 - ^

awesome~

[Normal]
00:37:073 (3) - nazi 1grid left

[Easy]
00:39:532 (1) - 00:38:057 (4) - Suffer is wrong place


good luck nice mapset :3

edit: nice~ goodjob :3/ star~
mintong89
M4M~ w

[General]

Tag 要加 Telephone, 初演唱, 啪啪啪Lady Gaga ft. Beyonce .因为这是原唱的歌曲

Letterbox during breaks 去吧. 没用到~

其他的F酱有说了我就不提了

[Hard]
AR7太慢了, +1吧

00:22:319 (2) - 感觉这样会比较好.
00:50:352 (5) - x=136 y=352, 这样就可以和 00:49:860 (4) - 这slider的尾端对称.

01:09:532 (2) - 一个slider这样盖过去有点不顺耳, 试试这样?
01:17:401 (3) - ^

01:19:368 (3,4) - 没stack好

[Normal]
尼玛别把AR调那么慢啊, AR+1

00:11:007 (5) - x=412 y=112, 这样比较美观.

00:36:089 (2) -

[Easy]
AR+1

没什么好说啦233

渣mod233
Fushimi Rio
[Easy]

糟 不会拉slider表示不知道怎么mod了
有几个背景里有的clap空下了 感觉不太好不过加了note对新手不太和谐 总之没看到啥问题

[Normal]

1.4的slider是不是高了点
一开始slider夹circle的梗感觉可以在circle上加whistle circle声音太小有点打空气
00:29:450 - 这段在这里加个note比较好
00:45:188 - ^
00:49:122 - 加note
01:05:597 (4) - reverse去了 头换成circle

[Hard]

clap接finish的音效听着些许蛋疼
00:31:171 (4) - 缩短 要不把slider尾声音弄小点
00:54:778 (3) - finish换clap
01:32:647 (1,2) - ……觉得这里可以做的更好些

Tag啥的我不会查 就这些了 真是short mod ._.
Topic Starter
buhei

Satellite wrote:

hi~

[General]
remove letterbox check?

[Hard]
00:11:745 - add note?
00:13:712 (6) - stack is 00:13:958 - here?
00:15:679 - add note?
00:19:614 - ^

awesome~

[Normal]
00:37:073 (3) - nazi 1grid left

[Easy]
00:39:532 (1) - 00:38:057 (4) - Suffer is wrong place


good luck nice mapset :3
Fixed some. That's really a short mod...wwww
Topic Starter
buhei

Eggache0 wrote:

[Easy]

糟 不会拉slider表示不知道怎么mod了
有几个背景里有的clap空下了 感觉不太好不过加了note对新手不太和谐 总之没看到啥问题

[Normal]

1.4的slider是不是高了点
一开始slider夹circle的梗感觉可以在circle上加whistle circle声音太小有点打空气
00:29:450 - 这段在这里加个note比较好
00:45:188 - ^
00:49:122 - 加note
01:05:597 (4) - reverse去了 头换成circle

[Hard]

clap接finish的音效听着些许蛋疼
00:31:171 (4) - 缩短 要不把slider尾声音弄小点
00:54:778 (3) - finish换clap
01:32:647 (1,2) - ……觉得这里可以做的更好些

Tag啥的我不会查 就这些了 真是short mod ._.

发下你的图的Link吧..不清楚下次开Queue是什么时候
Topic Starter
buhei
updated
Raose
Hello! From your M4M queue. I'm still a newb mapper, take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
00:38:548 (5) - I wouldn't recommend 1/2 repeating sliders, they may be too confusing for beginners. Change them to simple long sliders here and in the other parts of the map.
01:20:843 (2) - large empty space afterward, maybe you can fill it in with a slider? D: I see your intent though :)
01:24:778 (3) - ^
01:28:712 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Good diff, only have a few NC suggestions
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC here, place on 2 instead
00;58:958 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:991 (1) - blanket 2 better
00:14:450 (2) - don't think this repeating slider is the best fit for the vocals, maybe have a pattern like this?


00:45:434 (1) - Don't let this touch 5
00:50:843 (6) - stack on top of 4
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC, place on 2 instead
01:01:909 (2) - slider looks odd to me, maybe move the tail over more to the right?
01:18:876 (1) - don't stack, spread the circles out to keep consistent with the rest of the map (it's either a stream or triples)

Best to add a spinner somewhere in the map to add variation among the scores when this gets ranked :D Or else a bunch of people are going to have the same score!

Good luck :) relaxing song~
Topic Starter
buhei

Zhengster wrote:

Hello! From your M4M queue. I'm still a newb mapper, take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
00:38:548 (5) - I wouldn't recommend 1/2 repeating sliders, they may be too confusing for beginners. Change them to simple long sliders here and in the other parts of the map.
01:20:843 (2) - large empty space afterward, maybe you can fill it in with a slider? D: I see your intent though :)
01:24:778 (3) - ^
01:28:712 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Good diff, only have a few NC suggestions
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC here, place on 2 instead
00;58:958 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:991 (1) - blanket 2 better
00:14:450 (2) - don't think this repeating slider is the best fit for the vocals, maybe have a pattern like this?


00:45:434 (1) - Don't let this touch 5
00:50:843 (6) - stack on top of 4
00:51:089 (1) - remove NC, place on 2 instead
01:01:909 (2) - slider looks odd to me, maybe move the tail over more to the right?
01:18:876 (1) - don't stack, spread the circles out to keep consistent with the rest of the map (it's either a stream or triples)

Best to add a spinner somewhere in the map to add variation among the scores when this gets ranked :D Or else a bunch of people are going to have the same score!

Good luck :) relaxing song~
thanks for modding. updated.
luxoDeh
Hi! M4M from my queue :)

EASY

not much to say in reality, that's a good diff
maybe just 00:10:024 (3) - move the second point of the slider one grid up, for me it flow better.

NORMAL

00:51:089 (7) - maybe remove NC and add next
00:58:958 (1) - ^
01:21:335 (4) - maybe make this slider end to 01:21:827 -
01:29:204 (4) - ^

HARD

01:19:860 - add a note here
01:27:729 - ^
01:23:210 (2) - add clap at the endo of the slider
01:24:194 (4) - ^
01:31:079 (2) - ^
01:32:063 (4) - ^

that's all... there's not much to say. it is well mapped, and the song is good. good luck for rank ;)
Topic Starter
buhei

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue :)

EASY

not much to say in reality, that's a good diff
maybe just 00:10:024 (3) - move the second point of the slider one grid up, for me it flow better.

NORMAL

00:51:089 (7) - maybe remove NC and add next
00:58:958 (1) - ^
01:21:335 (4) - maybe make this slider end to 01:21:827 -
01:29:204 (4) - ^

HARD

01:19:860 - add a note here
01:27:729 - ^
01:23:210 (2) - add clap at the endo of the slider
01:24:194 (4) - ^
01:31:079 (2) - ^
01:32:063 (4) - ^

that's all... there's not much to say. it is well mapped, and the song is good. good luck for rank ;)
thx for modding. updated.
lkx_Shore
hard里的01:34:614 (1,2) - 音乐没有了就别放物件了,那样不太好.-.
Topic Starter
buhei

lkx_Shore wrote:

hard里的01:34:614 (1,2) - 音乐没有了就别放物件了,那样不太好.-.
觉得那个"Bilibili Douga"挺带感的所以就放了w 话说为什么来这里..
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, here is my M4M. :D
嘛 如果那張圖沒辦法挑出毛病 我是有別張 只是都4分 不曉得你願不願意ww..
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
okay.

-Easy-
-建議-
1/1跟1/4好像沒什麼差, 可以改成1/1.

My replay (HR+HD)

-finish-
-Normal-
1/2好像就可以了w (?

My replay(HR+HD)

-finish-
-Hard-

My replay(DT)

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
Mod就到此結束
沒什麼毛病, 還不錯玩. (感覺好像可以做出IN)
:D 祝你好運 ♥
Topic Starter
buhei

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my M4M. :D
嘛 如果那張圖沒辦法挑出毛病 我是有別張 只是都4分 不曉得你願不願意ww..
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
okay.

-Easy-
-建議-
1/1跟1/4好像沒什麼差, 可以改成1/1.

My replay (HR+HD)

-finish-
-Normal-
1/2好像就可以了w (?

My replay(HR+HD)

-finish-
-Hard-

My replay(DT)

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
Mod就到此結束
沒什麼毛病, 還不錯玩. (感覺好像可以做出IN)
:D 祝你好運 ♥
首先得声明一下 您的图咱可能Mod不好原因不是找不出问题 而是问题不知从何说起w
另外那个1/1,1/2之类只对编辑器有影响,对打图完全没有影响,这种根本不能算的..除非出来1/16那种才最多提一下
还有就是你这个不能算Mod=w= 不小心点了give kds您可以选择mod again 不然我有可能会无视你的图orz
Strawberry
- Miomio Chii -

buhei wrote:

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my M4M. :D
嘛 如果那張圖沒辦法挑出毛病 我是有別張 只是都4分 不曉得你願不願意ww..
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
okay.

-Easy-
-建議-
1/1跟1/4好像沒什麼差, 可以改成1/1.

My replay (HR+HD)

-finish-
-Normal-
1/2好像就可以了w (?

My replay(HR+HD)

-finish-
-Hard-

My replay(DT)

-finish-
-------------------------------------------------
Mod就到此結束
沒什麼毛病, 還不錯玩. (感覺好像可以做出IN)
:D 祝你好運 ♥
首先得声明一下 您的图咱可能Mod不好原因不是找不出问题 而是问题不知从何说起w
另外那个1/1,1/2之类只对编辑器有影响,对打图完全没有影响,这种根本不能算的..除非出来1/16那种才最多提一下
还有就是你这个不能算Mod=w= 不小心点了give kds您可以选择mod again 不然我有可能会无视你的图orz
恩w..
嘛 我只能以replay來mod了 其餘的看不太出來 音效也蠻可以的 不然 請無視吧
至於是kd怎辦 我也不曉得..orz
wantuole
for M4M
[General]
ok
Effect.jpg 这个sb效果00:47:893结束就好了
[easy]
00:38:548 (5) - 去了clap 保持一致 (要么你其他红线也加上这个clap:D)
00:46:417 (4) - ^ 只需要末尾的clap
01:06:089 (5,1) - 这个两个slider有点不同会更好 因为有个slider头上有finish
01:18:876 (1) - 折返位子不好 2 4线clap漏了 换其他主意
01:26:745 (1) - ^
[Normal]
00:34:122 (4) - slider上也加上clap
00:38:057 (5) - ^
00:46:909 (6) - finish替换成clap 保持两个clap会好点 而且后面1已经是finish了
01:21:827 - 这里空着感觉不太好 加note 或者把4挪后到红线开始
01:29:696 - ^
[Hard]
00:24:778 (2) - 不叠在1下面更好
00:25:516 (5) - 去了whistle
00:26:745 (2) - ^
00:28:958 (4) - ^去了clap
00:30:925 (3) - 去了clap
01:13:466 (3) - x:240 y:320
01:18:876 (1,2) - 用一个slider就好
01:26:745 (1,2) - ^
01:33:630 (3) - 用折返slider 中间有个重音

good luck
很不错的图
[Mahua]
[General]
XD
[Easy]
00:15:925 (1) - 在Easy用这种滑条觉得不太好 就算你用 麻烦用比较合曲的滑条 比如随音调转弯的
[Normal]
建议tick2
00:40:516 (3) - 如果tick2就可以加上一个tick音 但是下绿线就多了
00:50:352 (6) - ^
00:54:040 (5) - ^
00:58:220 (6) - ^
01:01:909 (5) - ^
01:20:843 (3,4) - 重复前面的梗不行么 1/2滑条挺好的啊
01:28:712 (3,4) - ^
[Hard]
01:02:893 (4,5) - 用短滑条梗怎样
01:06:581 (5) - 168,176
01:14:450 (5) - 247,197
01:32:647 (1,2) - 整齐点反正最高难度难点无所谓
QAQ你们都神麻婆
Melt
Mod as request

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:532(2)这个还可以往上点,大概x:215 y133附近 如果改了记得调一下后面slider的位置
  2. 00:15:925(1)easy的话这里用finish有点怪,降点音量或者改成whistle吧
  3. 00:38:548(5)尾再向上拉点?
  4. 01:01:171(3)直的放这里有点奇怪 试试带点弧线?
[Normal]
  1. 感觉OD可以加1
  2. 00:19:860(1)再往上放一点点
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:384(2)换成向内的弧线吧
  2. 00:20:843(3,4,5,6)可以向下拉点让00:20:352(2,3)变成一个直线
  3. 00:25:761(1)可以考虑拉到左边填充一下铺面
  4. 00:26:745(2,3,4)这3角形不正啊
  5. 00:43:466(1)
  6. 01:08:548(5)
  7. 01:26:745(6)我感觉删掉这个note拉成一个slider就行了
都是些建议 总的没啥问题
一星加油 :3
Topic Starter
buhei
updated
Birdy
[Easy]
00:15:925 (1) - Move red point 1 square down, it makes the turn to land on beat better

[Normal]
AR -1
You should use distance snap 1.1x instead of 1.0x to avoid 1/2 circles touching (example 00:21:827 (4,5) - ), but it's hard to fix now so it's okay.
00:26:745 (5) - Maybe rotate like this, so it won't touch next one:


00:46:909 (6) - Move middle point 2 square down
01:03:138 (1,2) - Add claps to second arrows
01:07:073 (1,2) - ^
01:11:007 (1,2) - ^
01:14:942 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:16:417 (2) - This is not fitting here
Besides quite random spacing, the design is good here

great job, good luck with ranking
Topic Starter
buhei

Strawberry wrote:

差点忘了 give kd for irc orz
Topic Starter
buhei
updated again
wcx19911123
irc modded
14:23 buhei: O.O
14:25 buhei: 长喜啊你在干啥
14:48 wcx19911123: 刚刚在剪指甲
14:48 buhei: ......
14:48 wcx19911123: 你先link下?
14:49 buhei: 快去看快去看QAQ
14:49 buhei: 本来就可以当作M4M的..都摸过你的了的说
14:49 buhei: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/64712
14:49 wcx19911123: 0.0
14:49 wcx19911123: 听着有点恶俗0.0
14:56 buhei: ...
14:57 buhei: 怎样
14:59 buhei: 啊喂..?
15:02 buhei: WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
15:12 wcx19911123: 正在看0.0
15:14 buhei: 好了么?= =
15:14 wcx19911123: 正在看0.0
15:14 buhei: QAQ能有多快
15:15 wcx19911123: 应该就快了0.0
15:16 wcx19911123: 感觉N的AR可以-1
15:16 buhei: 嗯
15:19 wcx19911123: 感觉H的HD可以+1 0.0
15:19 buhei: HD?
15:19 buhei: 好的已加
15:21 wcx19911123: 恩
15:21 buhei: 然后呢
15:23 wcx19911123: offset有问题
15:23 buhei: 诶
15:23 buhei: 怎么改
15:24 wcx19911123: 我在测
15:26 buhei: ........
15:26 wcx19911123: 要+8
15:27 wcx19911123: 其他没问题了
15:27 buhei: +8
15:27 buhei: ..
15:27 wcx19911123: 知道怎么改offset吧0.0
15:27 buhei: 知道
15:27 buhei: 话说有差那么多?
15:28 wcx19911123: 有
15:28 wcx19911123: 我觉得+8差不多了
15:28 buhei: 好吧
15:28 wcx19911123: 反正肯定要+一点
15:30 buhei: 救命+8了以后我打各种early
15:30 wcx19911123: 0.0..
15:30 buhei: 觉得+4足够
15:30 wcx19911123: 你试试Hard0.0?
15:31 buhei: 就是Hard啊= =
15:33 wcx19911123: 那+6 0.0?
15:33 buhei: +4觉得差不多
15:33 buhei: 刚刚改了一下
15:33 buhei: 2 early
15:33 buhei: 2ms
15:33 buhei: 等于没问题
15:34 wcx19911123: 但是只+4的话低难度就会late了0.0..
15:34 buhei: 改之前是十几ms
15:34 buhei: 不会啊..
15:34 buhei: 我看下
15:35 buhei: 没事
15:35 buhei: 还是2ms early
15:35 wcx19911123: 那就这样吧0.0
15:36 buhei: 可以泡?
15:36 wcx19911123: 恩0.0
15:36 buhei: 谢咯w
15:37 wcx19911123: 还好图短
we set AR-1 on Normal and HD+1 on Hard, fixed offset and some other patterns, things are all fine now
bubbled
Strawberry
baka
Topic Starter
buhei

Strawberry wrote:

baka
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
听着有点恶俗
wantuole

wcx19911123 wrote:

14:49 wcx19911123: 听着有点恶俗0.0
Flask
怎麼都這麼快泡啊
lkx_Shore

buhei wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

hard里的01:34:614 (1,2) - 音乐没有了就别放物件了,那样不太好.-.
觉得那个"Bilibili Douga"挺带感的所以就放了w 话说为什么来这里..
好友随机mod图.
Scorpiour
Hi there~~ random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Swap Source & Artist (discussed and confirmed with three other staffs)
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:224 (4,5) - 交换位置感觉flow会更好
  2. 00:31:175 (4) - finish换clap
  3. 00:49:864 (4,5) - 感觉做成2个直线的会更干净利落一点(因为前面三连的缘故),或者稍微带一点点的小弧线也可以,但是不要弯这么多而且不对称
  4. 00:54:782 (3) - 放到一个和前后间距稍微均匀点的位置?比如185:360之类
  5. 01:04:618 (5) - 偏到左面一点感觉更舒服
  6. 01:14:454 (5) - 重音停在slider尾有点不带感……改成1/2slider + Note with NC这样?
  7. 01:16:421 (5) - 这个可以反过来往右面偏一点,和01:15:438 (2) - 大致对称
[Normal]
  1. 01:05:601 (4) - 拉歪了,弄的对称一点
that's all, good work :>
Topic Starter
buhei

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Swap Source & Artist (discussed and confirmed with three other staffs) fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:224 (4,5) - 交换位置感觉flow会更好 fixed
  2. 00:31:175 (4) - finish换clap i prefer using finish to using clap sorry
  3. 00:49:864 (4,5) - 感觉做成2个直线的会更干净利落一点(因为前面三连的缘故),或者稍微带一点点的小弧线也可以,但是不要弯这么多而且不对称 fixed
  4. 00:54:782 (3) - 放到一个和前后间距稍微均匀点的位置?比如185:360之类 no
  5. 01:04:618 (5) - 偏到左面一点感觉更舒服 ok
  6. 01:14:454 (5) - 重音停在slider尾有点不带感……改成1/2slider + Note with NC这样? no
  7. 01:16:421 (5) - 这个可以反过来往右面偏一点,和01:15:438 (2) - 大致对称 no
[Normal]
  1. 01:05:601 (4) - 拉歪了,弄的对称一点 no._.
that's all, good work :>
Updated..
Scorpiour
irc rechecked with mapper, remove redundant osb file after changing artist.

nice work~~ enjoy your first rank here~~~

Ranked~~!!
Topic Starter
buhei

Scorpiour wrote:

irc rechecked with mapper, remove redundant osb file after changing artist.

nice work~~ enjoy your first rank here~~~

Ranked~~!!
Thank you!!! XDDDD
mintong89

gratz ~
Rotte
喵,来占位
raririn
恭喜!!
popner
笑死我了,居然有人说鲁迅是绍兴人?鲁迅明明是周树人嘛!
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笑死我了,居然有人说鲁迅是绍兴人?鲁迅明明是周树人嘛!
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