Muya wrote:

done~
http://puu.sh/1KKBh

1. 00:09:650 (1) Why stack this? It was a little bit confusing for me. Maybe rotate (3) by -21° (selection centre) and put (1) to x:92 y:20
2. 00:18:290 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) I think it would be better, if these are in a trangle or square pattern
3. 01:33:830 add a note? (Would fit great imo)
4. 01:41:750 add a note

1. 00:55:250 (10) Maybe stack this with (4) ?
2. 01:06:290 (8) put it to x:263 y:246 (+fixspacing) so its some sort of blanket to (7)
3. 01:46:130 (4,5,6) put this three objects in one line? (4,5) and the head of (6)
4. 02:07:010 (8,9) these doesn't fit to the music imo. Maybe try this rhytm: http://puu.sh/2kKKX

1. 00:27:176 Add a Note (it feels empty at this place without it)
2. 02:02:936 Maybe this instead?: http://puu.sh/2kKPi

1. 00:57:656 (1) Idk if this is still a "nogo" (i hate this word), but this slider seems to be out of the grid :/
2. 01:59:096 same^
3. 02:08:216 (4) this hits the bottom of my screen (I won't mention it another time, because i'm not sure about this)
4. 02:27:176 (5) Maybe make it parallel to (4)

1. background.jpg is 1365x768, i think should be 800 x 600 or 1024x768.
2. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections: easy and normal got it in 00:05:816 and hard and insane got it in 00:05:810

• AR -1?
  
  00:05:336 why easy is the only diff who start here? better remove the circle
  00:05:810 clap in the end?
  00:07:730 ^
  00:09:650 ^
  00:11:570 ^
  00:12:530 ^
  00:09:410 remove this? since is really hard for a easy diff
  00:17:090 ^
  00:17:330 clap in the end following your patterns
  00:20:210 (3,4,1) - why this changes of distance here? shoud fix this
  00:25:010 clap in the end
  00:25:970 ^
  00:27:410 (2,4) - clap
  00:28:850 clap in the end
  00:29:810 ^
  00:31:250 (2,4) - clap
  00:32:690 (1,2) - clap in the end
  00:35:090 (2,4) - clap
  mmmm your hitsounds are bad here you add good hitsounds in insane why here not? :c
  00:38:450 why this double repeat dont fit imo
  01:18:776 (1,2,1,2) - distance is so wrong here fix it
  01:24:536 (1,2,3) - this is so hard for easy imo o.o!
  01:51:416 (1,2) - distance error here too
  01:59:096 this touch hp bar
  02:07:742 so hard for an easy
  02:14:456 (3,4,5) - ^
  
  your hitsound in this diff are to bad imo add they like you did on insane and this diff is really hard for a easy
  
  Fix this

  00:05:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:05:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:05:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:07:730 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:07:730 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:07:730 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:09:410 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:09:650 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:09:650 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:09:650 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:11:570 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:11:570 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:12:530 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:12:530 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:13:490 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:13:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:13:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:14:930 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:14:930 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:15:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:15:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:15:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:17:090 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:17:330 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:17:330 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:17:330 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:19:250 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:19:730 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:20:210 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:20:690 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:21:170 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:21:170 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:22:130 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:22:130 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:23:090 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:23:090 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:24:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:24:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:24:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:010 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:25:010 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:25:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:930 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:27:410 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:27:890 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:28:370 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:28:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:28:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:29:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:29:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:30:770 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:31:250 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:31:730 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:210 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:690 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:32:690 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:33:650 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:33:650 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:34:610 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:35:090 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:35:570 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:36:050 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:36:530 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:36:530 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:37:490 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:37:490 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:40:370 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:40:370 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:41:330 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:41:330 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:42:290 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:42:290 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:250 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:43:730 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 02:01:022 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:01:022 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:01:982 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:01:982 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:02:942 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:02:942 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:04:142 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:04:142 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:04:862 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 02:05:342 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 02:06:062 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:06:062 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:06:782 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 02:07:262 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 02:07:742 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:07:742 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:08:222 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:08:222 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:09:182 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 02:09:902 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:09:902 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:10:622 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:10:622 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:11:582 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:11:582 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

• 00:06:296 (2) - you forget add clap here
  00:07:736 clap in the end?
  00:09:176 ^
  00:09:656 clap in the end of this slider?
  00:12:056 (2,4) - clap
  00:13:496 add finish here
  00:21:170 you forget finish here
  00:25:016 clap in the end
  00:25:976 this rhythm is wrong maybe:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:21:656 (2,3) - so hard for a normal..
  00:23:576 (2,3) - ^
  00:27:776 this start in blue tick so hard for a normal
  00:35:456 ^
  00:43:136 ^
  00:46:976 (3,4,5) - again i thing you are making this like a hard this not good for normal imo
  00:54:536 so confuse for a normal :/
  00:58:496 ^
  01:04:376 (3,4) - this is nice for hard but not for normal
  01:06:176 ^
  01:10:136 ^
  01:23:576 (2,3) - sriously im thinking you are making a hard here
  01:24:536 (1,2) - ^
  01:39:896 (1,2,1,2) - why this jumps on normal?
  01:55:256 (1,2) - so hard for normal
  01:56:096 (3,4) - ^
  01:59:936 ^
  02:03:776 ^
  02:11:336 ^
  02:15:416 ^
  02:22:136 (1,2,3,1) - since this patter look really bad and really hard here
  02:24:296 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - all this part is imposible for a new plyayer imo
  
  your hitsound in this diff are to bad imo add they like you did on insane and this diff is like hard

• 00:10:130 (2,3) - 0,40 is not good spacing this kind of pattern maybe 0.50?
  00:20:570 (6,7) - distance here is wrong and the pattern look really bad
  00:21:410 why the break here you should map this part imo
  00:25:490 (3,4,5) - and here you are using 0.60 distance when in the previous patterns you use 0,40
  00:28:610 (1,2,3) - and here you are sing 0,70 :/
  00:25:010 add finish
  00:46:130 (6,7) - why not remove 7 and add other repeat in 6 gonna be better fun and redeable
  00:49:010 00:49:970 00:50:930 00:52:850 this pauses got no sense imo map they
  00:55:250 this antijump dont fit imo
  01:13:010 (5,6,7) - when i play this i really got confused here
  01:13:010 and add new combo here
  01:28:130 (4) - idont see the readon for this antijump is really weird imo
  this look like an insane
  
  Fix this

  00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).

• Fix this

  00:20:690 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:20:850 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:20:930 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:21:090 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).

建議rhythm

SPOILER

Arnold0 wrote:

Hi for m4m queue

[easy]
00:47:336 (2) - There is a high volume sound at 00:47:096 - , I think you should start the slider here and make the and

same as now (00:47:576 - )
00:49:256 (3) - Same (Start at white tick before, same end as now)
00:53:096 (2) - ^
01:24:536 (1,2) - I think you should make them a 2 reverse slider I think it would be easier for an easy diff sure, removed a slider
02:04:136 (2) - Same as 00:53:096
02:06:062 (3) - ^
02:09:902 (2) - ^

[normal]
00:07:016 (3) - Sond like it is not correctly synched with the song, I think it should start here 00:06:896 - and hyave

the same end as now (00:07:256 - )
00:14:696 (3) - Same (Start and blue tick before, same end as now)
00:36:056 - Sound empty, maybe add a note here ?
00:57:896 - ^
01:06:776 - ^
01:35:336 (3) - Start on blue tick before then add two reverse, end on white tick I think it folow the music better

without being too hard (IDK if I explain correctly so )
01:35:816 - Add a note here if you do previous it sound better
01:36:296 - Sound empty add note maybe ?
01:36:536 (3) - End here sond better and is easier 01:37:016 -

sry. you listed me suggestions carefully but your mapping style are very different from mine, so I can't adapt them. You could make it your own style but I had used another style there.

[hard]
00:33:290 (2) - I think add a note here follows the music better and having little streams in hard is okey
00:35:090 (2) - I think make this a single note and add another note as 00:35:450 follows the music better
01:32:690 (6) - Start here 01:32:810 - and remove one arrow follow better the thing you folowed with the notes before I think
01:33:890 - The thing you followed still make a sound here so add note ?

[insane]
nothing (Too hard for me too ^^)

I think your diff spread is good but I think your hard could be named insane, your normal hard, and your easy normal.
Good luck with your map

Natsu wrote:

Hi from my Queue

General

1. background.jpg is 1365x768, i think should be 800 x 600 or 1024x768. 16:9 BG is fine
2. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections: easy and normal got it in 00:05:816 and hard and insane got it in 00:05:810

fixed

Easy:

• AR -1?
  
  00:05:336 why easy is the only diff who start here? better remove the circle sure
  00:05:810 clap in the end?
  00:07:730 ^
  00:09:650 ^
  00:11:570 ^
  00:12:530 ^
  00:09:410 remove this? since is really hard for a easy diff I'm hesitating on this. need more opinions
  00:17:090 ^
  00:17:330 clap in the end following your patterns ok
  00:20:210 (3,4,1) - why this changes of distance here? shoud fix this
  00:25:010 clap in the end
  00:25:970 ^
  00:27:410 (2,4) - clap
  00:28:850 clap in the end
  00:29:810 ^
  00:31:250 (2,4) - clap
  00:32:690 (1,2) - clap in the end
  00:35:090 (2,4) - clap
  mmmm your hitsounds are bad here you add good hitsounds in insane why here not? :c :c I used different way to set hitsound in this diff
  00:38:450 why this double repeat dont fit imo fixed
  01:18:776 (1,2,1,2) - distance is so wrong here fix it
  01:24:536 (1,2,3) - this is so hard for easy imo o.o!
  01:51:416 (1,2) - distance error here too
  01:59:096 this touch hp bar
  02:07:742 so hard for an easy
  02:14:456 (3,4,5) - ^
  
  your hitsound in this diff are to bad imo add they like you did on insane and this diff is really hard for a easy
  
  Fix this

  00:05:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:05:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:05:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:07:730 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:07:730 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:07:730 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:09:410 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:09:650 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:09:650 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:09:650 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:11:570 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:11:570 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:12:530 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:12:530 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:13:490 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:13:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:13:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:14:930 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:14:930 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:15:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:15:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:15:890 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:17:090 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:17:330 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:17:330 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:17:330 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:19:250 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:19:730 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:20:210 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:20:690 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:21:170 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:21:170 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:22:130 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:22:130 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:23:090 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:23:090 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:24:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:24:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:24:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:010 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:25:010 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:25:970 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:930 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:27:410 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:27:890 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:28:370 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:28:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:28:850 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:29:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:29:810 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:30:770 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:31:250 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:31:730 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:210 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:690 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:32:690 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:33:650 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:33:650 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:34:610 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:35:090 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:35:570 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:36:050 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:36:530 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:36:530 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:37:490 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:37:490 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:38:450 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:40:370 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:40:370 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:41:330 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:41:330 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:42:290 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:42:290 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:250 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:43:730 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 02:01:022 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:01:022 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:01:982 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:01:982 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:02:942 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:02:942 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:04:142 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:04:142 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:04:862 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 02:05:342 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 02:06:062 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:06:062 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:06:782 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 02:07:262 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 02:07:742 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:07:742 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:08:222 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:08:222 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:09:182 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 02:09:902 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:09:902 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:10:622 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:10:622 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:11:582 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 02:11:582 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).]

  Normal:

  
  

  • 00:06:296 (2) - you forget add clap here I'm not using claps all time. only during chorus and they're needed, in order to get better contrast
    00:07:736 clap in the end?
    00:09:176 ^
    00:09:656 clap in the end of this slider?
    00:12:056 (2,4) - clap
    00:13:496 add finish here yes
    00:21:170 you forget finish here
    00:25:016 clap in the end
    00:25:976 this rhythm is wrong maybe:
    [spoilerbox]
    00:21:656 (2,3) - so hard for a normal..
    00:23:576 (2,3) - ^
    00:27:776 this start in blue tick so hard for a normal
    00:35:456 ^
    00:43:136 ^
    00:46:976 (3,4,5) - again i thing you are making this like a hard this not good for normal imo
    00:54:536 so confuse for a normal :/
    00:58:496 ^
    01:04:376 (3,4) - this is nice for hard but not for normal
    01:06:176 ^
    01:10:136 ^
    01:23:576 (2,3) - sriously im thinking you are making a hard here
    01:24:536 (1,2) - ^
    01:39:896 (1,2,1,2) - why this jumps on normal? http://puu.sh/2ljnk you'll find it's not jump if you play
    01:55:256 (1,2) - so hard for normal
    01:56:096 (3,4) - ^
    01:59:936 ^
    02:03:776 ^
    02:11:336 ^
    02:15:416 ^
    02:22:136 (1,2,3,1) - since this patter look really bad and really hard here
    02:24:296 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - all this part is imposible for a new plyayer imo new players are recommeded to play Easy, and Normal is for intermediate players
    
    your hitsound in this diff are to bad imo add they like you did on insane and this diff is like hard

  Hard:

  
  

  • 00:10:130 (2,3) - 0,40 is not good spacing this kind of pattern maybe 0.50?
    00:20:570 (6,7) - distance here is wrong and the pattern look really bad
    00:21:410 why the break here you should map this part imo
    00:25:490 (3,4,5) - and here you are using 0.60 distance when in the previous patterns you use 0,40
    00:28:610 (1,2,3) - and here you are sing 0,70 :/
    00:25:010 add finish
    00:46:130 (6,7) - why not remove 7 and add other repeat in 6 gonna be better fun and redeable
    00:49:010 00:49:970 00:50:930 00:52:850 this pauses got no sense imo map they
    00:55:250 this antijump dont fit imo
    01:13:010 (5,6,7) - when i play this i really got confused here
    01:13:010 and add new combo here
    01:28:130 (4) - idont see the readon for this antijump is really weird imo
    this look like an insane
    Fix this]00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:20:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).

  Insane:

  
  

  • 00:20:690 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:20:850 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:20:930 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:21:090 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).

  
  since i just take a look in this diff look well maked but this diff is not insane is like extra or something you should rename your diffs imo and work with hitsounds too o.o kk good luck
  
  all done. thanks

Loneight wrote:

Hi~ LKs醬
OwO 準備看神奇的中英文.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:47:085 - I feel there should have beat to hit when hearing the music, try to add a circle or other way you like. 02:03:885 - same as there
2. 01:22:125 (2) - add clap to make a law with 01:14:445 (5,6) -
3. 02:19:245 - it is a bit weird that 02:19:245 - is empty, how about moving 02:19:485 (4) - to there and repeat ? I think would be better for playing
4. 02:25:965 (3) - I feel there should NC from music like 02:22:125 (1) -

nice diff >w<~!

[Normal]

1. 00:27:765 (3) - it is werid that 00:28:365 have normal sound, try to make like 00:36:285 (5) -
2. 02:19:245 (3) - if people listen music to play there, I think wouldn't be easier to know it is repeat two times slider, try to repeat one time and add a circle
3. for 02:22:125 - ~ 02:27:405 - , why dosen't have whistle sound ? I think 02:20:205 - ~ 02:27:405 - is a part same as 02:12:525 - ~ 02:19:965 - , but only 02:20:205 - ~ 02:21:885 - have whistle, I feel weird about this >~<

I feel this is like Normal+ lol! (run

[Hard]

1. 00:14:205 (2) - try to give it 1.10x distance, because it is easy that let people consider it is like 00:06:285 (2,3) - when listen piano in the music. 00:15:885 (2) - same as here
2. 01:25:485 (6) - NC it would be easier to read there

[Insane]

1. Useless green line:
   
   useless green line

   00:16:845 -
   00:24:045 -
   00:32:685 -
   00:37:245 -
   00:46:725 -
   00:46:845 -
   00:46:965 -
   00:48:525 -
   00:49:125 -
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2. 00:09:525 (2) - a little hard to read that it is a slider instead two circles, how about change to circles ? or other way
3. 00:43:485 (2,3) - I think you can increase distance to let there be easier to read like 01:06:525 (2,3) -

I tried my best ... (lie
very fun to play ~!

good luck ~ LKs醬 >w<
star! :3

Fumika wrote:

Hi, just suggestion from me.

[Easy]

1. 00:05:805 (1) - How about to invert node to make next note flow ? this..doen't influence flow
2. 00:11:565 (1) - Delete this NC, It's too short and unnecessary to NC.
3. 00:57:165 (2) - How about to move it up here and make a flow to next note. [/color]
4. 02:15:885 (5) - This note is too hard for Easy to read IMO, How about to put this instead ?
5. 02:23:085 (2) - Same as above, Delete this note and add reverse to (1) like this. why it's hard?
6. 02:26:445 (1) - NC This.

[Normal]

1. 00:06:285 (2) - How about to make this curve ?
2. 00:34:605 (1) - Remove this NC and NC next note.
3. 00:46:965 (1) - NC this note like many part you did 00:45:165 (1) - yes
4. 01:02:205 (2) - Add reverse ?
5. 01:22:365 (5) - NC this note and remove NC next note.
6. 01:40:365 (2,2) - Ctr + G would be nice here. will consider
7. 02:03:765 (3) - NC this note like you did in many part.

yes

[Insane]

• Unsnapped
  

1. 00:20:685 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
2. 00:20:845 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
3. 00:20:925 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
4. 00:21:085 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).

it's AIBAT's fault

1. 00:32:685 (1) - Try to make this hook and it will make a flow to next note.
2. 00:39:885 (6) - NC this note would be nice to read.
3. 01:24:525 (8) - I thought (9) as (8) = =, NC This note for easier to read ?will consider
4. 02:04:365 (5) - NC ?

That's all for me, great map xD

Sync wrote:

[General]
The gap between Insane and Hard is massive but uh... I don't know, you could call Insane "Extra" and make a harder version of Hard if you wanted to. Not necessary in my opinion. There is a not small gap here. however the Hard and Insane are all technically ok and I thought the hard and the Insane can already let all players to enjoy(Insane is not hard to pass, but it's challenging to fc). I mean players who play normal Insane are capable to play this diff too, so I'd prefer keep it

[Insane]
(all suggestions)
This map is hard as hell. HP -1 to be a little more forgiven if you want. ok

00:14:325 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/4th -- I really feel the piano here. (keeping the kick sound here works really well too) ok, fixed
02:07:605 (4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is questionable. I like the emphasis it puts on the music right here; however, the spacing from 4 -> 1 makes players hit 2 much earlier than they should. This happened to me and another person I spectated while playing. You should consider changing it. (happens previously at 00:50:805 as well) adjusted the pattern, much less misleading now. (less flow tho

Notes about this diff to other modders:
00:20:685 (1) - this is completely playable. also, AIBat considers some of these sliders unsnapped but I'm pretty sure that's only because of 1/12. yap
01:13:965 (1) ~ 01:14:805 (4) - is really hard but completely playable I worried this pattern before, It plays easier than it looks, glad to hear you give positive comments :3

[Hard]
00:20:085 (3) - This part is kind of tricky -- making these three notes into a repeat slider will make people hit 00:20:565 (4,5) more easily due to the pattern being less complex.
01:19:725 (3) - This note needs to be stressed. Delete 01:19:485 (2) and replace the start of it with a hit circle. After that, make a 1/2-slider starting at 01:19:725 (3).
01:33:165 (3,4) - This pattern is kinda unreadable. Besides, it would follow the music better if you simply put a 1/3

Other difficulties are fine

jesus1412 wrote:

00:19:245 (1,2) - Please change, very weird to read (overlap on the slider start.) I'm sorry but I didn't really get you..because all notes are even spacing except this 00:19:965 (2) - . Did you mean this 00:19:605 (2) - stack is hard to read?
00:20:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I find this is VERY hard to full 300, single notes maybe? About this pattern, I knew they would be discussed when I map it. Those sliders are equal to 1/6 circle streams. I will discuss with next modder/XAT and you if all of you have such opinions. But now I'd like to keep it since I personally like this design ;3; (will give you kd if I finally change this (remind me

Everything else plays perfectly, nice map.

This part is pure gold: 01:13:965 (1) -

Mr Color wrote:

GG

[Luanny] wrote:

This beatmap is so perfect <3 I'd vote 11 if I could

spboxer3 wrote:

Mr Color wrote:

GG

Sync wrote: