1. Hard (4.57 stars, 435 notes)
2. Normal (2.88 stars, 268 notes)
3. Thanks (4.99 stars, 673 notes)

GiNa wrote:

22神mapper

Underflow wrote:

Hi, tutuhaha.

[Thanks]
00:22:309 (1) - Add finish on slider head
00:23:198 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish on head
00:38:309 (3,4) - How about change to this?

SPOILER

00:38:309 (3) - Slider (end at 00:38:531)
00:38:642 - Add note (Optional)
00:38:753 (4) - Slider (end at 00:38:976)

00:45:420 (5,6) - ^
00:50:531 (3) - Add finish
01:35:198 (3,4) - Same as 00:38:309 (3,4) modding
01:41:420 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish on head
01:48:087 (5) - Add clap
01:59:642 (2,3) - Same as 00:38:309 (3,4) modding
02:20:976 (2,3) - How about change to this?

SPOILER

02:20:976 (2) - Slider (end at 02:21:198)
02:21:309 (3) - Circle
02:21:420 (4) - Slider (end at 02:21:642)

02:24:976 (3) - Add clap on slider head
02:51:976 - Add note
02:55:976 (8) - How about move to 372, 84
03:27:865 (3) - Add finish
03:37:420 (2,3) - Same as 02:20:976 (2,3) modding

No kudosu, Good luck :3

1. 00:49:864 (3) - This a really minimal aestetic thing,just fix if you want: what about encircling properly 00:51:642 (1) - with this slider? The current one does not encircle it well as it should :\
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   412,256,49864,2,0,P|352:300|272:272,2,165

2. 01:08:753 (2,1) - Well,I don't really like the transition used here between these two hitobjects... What about instead using this kind of pattern,which other than fitting perfectly in this part flows pretty good along with its dropoff? See if you like it ^^
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   280,140,66531,2,0,B|292:208|356:224,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   184,84,67864,6,0,B|184:52|200:24,2,55,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   108,164,68753,2,0,P|124:188|132:220,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   144,324,69420,5,4,0:0:0

   As you see I tried to structure this pattern vertically,to make the whole ascendent-descend flow from 01:06:531 (2) - better
3. 01:27:198 (1,2,3,4) - Well,this is mostly a subjective thing,so just fix if you want: What about continuing this pattern with 01:28:976 (4) - using a simil-oval flow? That implies the use of various arc based patterns... Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   312,108,87198,5,2,0:0:0
   304,216,87642,1,8,0:0:0
   212,272,88087,2,0,B|156:292|108:252,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   80,144,88976,2,0,B|84:52|180:12|256:32,2,220,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   It's just a little thing to make the flow there more natural so that's pretty much optional~
4. 01:28:976 (4) - Here it doesen't have really much sense to have a whistle at the end. While with 00:24:976 (3) - that fitted pretty good with the guitar chord used there,here I don't really here any of these chords. What about instead using the whistle at the repeat to follow that guitar chord? That's a minor thing,so fix just if you want ^^ If you do that,remember to do the same to 01:36:087 (4) - !
5. 01:39:642 (3) - Another really little and nazi hitsounding thing,please just fix if you want: As here the music gets pretty much silenced after that guitar chord instead of 00:35:642 (3) - ,what about using a soft whistle at the end to emphatize the guitar and to finish properly the rhythm used there? Imho,it fits quite good ^^
6. 01:56:531 (2) - I did not really like the ascendent flow created there,as this slider was going downwards. What do you think instead of using this type of pattern to make the whole pattern's flow a descendent one?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   416,240,115642,6,0,B|428:176|400:120,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   348,36,116531,2,0,B|298:78|284:139,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   204,180,117420,6,0,B|200:272|84:300|24:248,1,220

   It is a really little thing,though ^^
7. 04:20:753 (2) - Another really little and maybe unneded thing: what about moving this at x:48 y:192 just to follow 04:20:753 (2) - 's oval flow there? Imho,it flows better there because of that!

1. 00:19:198 (4,1) - Oh well,after using 00:18:753 (3,4) - this dropoff seemed quite odd here to me, imho... What about instead using this pattern? It flows pretty good and makes the dropoff really pleasing to play!
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   284,224,19642,6,0,P|325:289|394:292,2,140,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   368,24,20976,1,8,0:0:0
   432,196,21420,6,0,B|392:220|344:212,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:44:309 (x) - This is a really optional thing,what what about adding a note here? Following the guitar chord here would be pretty good as you already followed it with 00:43:642 (3) - !
3. 01:39:642 (1) - As already said in the normal diff,what about making this a soft whistle to follow that guitar chord and to terminate properly the rhythm being used there?
4. 02:21:864 (3) - I can't really understand why instead of following the whole rhythm like you did on the first refrain/kiai time here you missed a 1/2 beat that was supposed to follow the vocals. Why don't you use instead a slider to follow all the instruments and to make a really fun to play pattern? Here's what I made,feel free to use it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   456,152,141864,2,0,P|492:172|508:200,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   368,164,142309,6,0,B|294:185|240:116,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   164,80,142976,1,0,0:0:0
   164,80,143420,2,0,P|180:224,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   236,288,144087,6,0,B|324:300|380:232,1,157.500006008148

5. 02:24:976 (2) - Why don't you add some claps at both the beginning and ending of this slider? It fits really good with the drums being used there (as you can clearly hear,there are some drums played there which totally fit with these claps)
6. 03:18:309 (4) - This is a really minor thing,so just fix if you want: as there is a cymbal being clearly played there,what about adding a soft finish at the end of this slider? It fits pretty good :3
7. 03:43:642 (4) - Again,minor hitsounding thing. What about just adding a clap at the end of this slider? If you hear close,you can distinguish 2 1/2 drums being played there,so emphatizing both of them would sound pretty cool other than making the jump 03:43:198 (3,4) - a bit more "reasonable" (as there really isn't any valid reason to do that jump,as the song isn't remotely asking for it)
   Awesome diff. As you see,these are some really minor things,as the diff is really good as it is.

1. 00:18:753 (1,2,3,4) - That's a really little hitsounding think,feel free to ignore this: what about keeping this 1/1 ~ 1/2 clap consistency after 00:17:864 (1,2,3,4) - ? A possible arrangement would be having a clap at 00:18:753 (1,3,4) - instead of the whistles being there. I like how it sounds,especially with the guitar playing there!
2. 00:51:198 (5,6) - Why this stack? It doesen't really have sense,as the guitar arrangements are pretty much the same,therefore it isn't really requesting for it. I would see better instead a nice triangular returning pattern there. It actually flows really good and plays pretty good with the guitar chords there. See if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,192,50976,1,0,0:0:0
   232,296,51198,1,0,0:0:0
   152,224,51420,1,8,0:0:0

3. 01:38:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - There isn't really anything wrong with this pattern,but anyways I have a little idea there: what about making an arc-shaped pattern with its spacing costantly increasing? It works really well there,as other than giving a proper finish to the pattern it fits really good with the drums taking place there and it flows absolutely good! Also, as said in the other diffs,you could use that soft whistle at 01:39:642 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   172,36,98753,5,0,0:0:0
   88,132,98976,1,0,0:0:0
   116,280,99198,1,8,0:0:0
   280,344,99420,1,4,0:0:0
   408,200,99642,1,0,0:0:0

4. 02:15:198 (1) - This a really nazi thing,as it's a really minimal flow changement,so just fix if you want. Anwyays,what do you think about placing the whole pattern 02:15:198 (1,2,3) - so that it countinues perfectly the flow created with 02:14:753 (4) - ? I didn't really like that linear transition used there...
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   240,228,135198,5,0,0:0:0
   292,112,135420,1,0,0:0:0
   176,56,135642,2,0,B|156:104|104:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   Another awesome diff,really good job!

-kevincela- wrote:

Mod finished! Really good map,I hope I helped you! ^^ Expect a mod soon from chewin...

-kevincela- wrote:

Hey!

[Normal]

1. 00:49:864 (3) - This a really minimal aestetic thing,just fix if you want: what about encircling properly 00:51:642 (1) - with this slider? The current one does not encircle it well as it should :\ :othis one need look with 00:48:087 (1) -
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   412,256,49864,2,0,P|352:300|272:272,2,165

2. 01:08:753 (2,1) - Well,I don't really like the transition used here between these two hitobjects... What about instead using this kind of pattern,which other than fitting perfectly in this part flows pretty good along with its dropoff? See if you like it ^^ FIX
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   280,140,66531,2,0,B|292:208|356:224,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   184,84,67864,6,0,B|184:52|200:24,2,55,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   108,164,68753,2,0,P|124:188|132:220,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   144,324,69420,5,4,0:0:0

   As you see I tried to structure this pattern vertically,to make the whole ascendent-descend flow from 01:06:531 (2) - better
3. 01:27:198 (1,2,3,4) - Well,this is mostly a subjective thing,so just fix if you want: What about continuing this pattern with 01:28:976 (4) - using a simil-oval flow? That implies the use of various arc based patterns... Here's what I have done,see if you like it! FIX
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   312,108,87198,5,2,0:0:0
   304,216,87642,1,8,0:0:0
   212,272,88087,2,0,B|156:292|108:252,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   80,144,88976,2,0,B|84:52|180:12|256:32,2,220,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   It's just a little thing to make the flow there more natural so that's pretty much optional~
4. 01:28:976 (4) - Here it doesen't have really much sense to have a whistle at the end. While with 00:24:976 (3) - that fitted pretty good with the guitar chord used there,here I don't really here any of these chords. What about instead using the whistle at the repeat to follow that guitar chord? That's a minor thing,so fix just if you want ^^ If you do that,remember to do the same to 01:36:087 (4) - ! :oI think it is ok
5. 01:39:642 (3) - Another really little and nazi hitsounding thing,please just fix if you want: As here the music gets pretty much silenced after that guitar chord instead of 00:35:642 (3) - ,what about using a soft whistle at the end to emphatize the guitar and to finish properly the rhythm used there? Imho,it fits quite good ^^ FIX~
6. 01:56:531 (2) - I did not really like the ascendent flow created there,as this slider was going downwards. What do you think instead of using this type of pattern to make the whole pattern's flow a descendent one? FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   416,240,115642,6,0,B|428:176|400:120,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   348,36,116531,2,0,B|298:78|284:139,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   204,180,117420,6,0,B|200:272|84:300|24:248,1,220

   It is a really little thing,though ^^
7. 04:20:753 (2) - Another really little and maybe unneded thing: what about moving this at x:48 y:192 just to follow 04:20:753 (2) - 's oval flow there? Imho,it flows better there because of that! move to x40 y112

[Hard]

1. 00:19:198 (4,1) - Oh well,after using 00:18:753 (3,4) - this dropoff seemed quite odd here to me, imho... What about instead using this pattern? It flows pretty good and makes the dropoff really pleasing to play! FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   284,224,19642,6,0,P|325:289|394:292,2,140,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   368,24,20976,1,8,0:0:0
   432,196,21420,6,0,B|392:220|344:212,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:44:309 (x) - This is a really optional thing,what what about adding a note here? Following the guitar chord here would be pretty good as you already followed it with 00:43:642 (3) - ! FIX~
3. 01:39:642 (1) - As already said in the normal diff,what about making this a soft whistle to follow that guitar chord and to terminate properly the rhythm being used there? FIX~
4. 02:21:864 (3) - I can't really understand why instead of following the whole rhythm like you did on the first refrain/kiai time here you missed a 1/2 beat that was supposed to follow the vocals. Why don't you use instead a slider to follow all the instruments and to make a really fun to play pattern? Here's what I made,feel free to use it! FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   456,152,141864,2,0,P|492:172|508:200,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   368,164,142309,6,0,B|294:185|240:116,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   164,80,142976,1,0,0:0:0
   164,80,143420,2,0,P|180:224,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   236,288,144087,6,0,B|324:300|380:232,1,157.500006008148

5. 02:24:976 (2) - Why don't you add some claps at both the beginning and ending of this slider? It fits really good with the drums being used there (as you can clearly hear,there are some drums played there which totally fit with these claps) FIX~
6. 03:18:309 (4) - This is a really minor thing,so just fix if you want: as there is a cymbal being clearly played there,what about adding a soft finish at the end of this slider? It fits pretty good :3 FIX~
7. 03:43:642 (4) - Again,minor hitsounding thing. What about just adding a clap at the end of this slider? If you hear close,you can distinguish 2 1/2 drums being played there,so emphatizing both of them would sound pretty cool other than making the jump 03:43:198 (3,4) - a bit more "reasonable" (as there really isn't any valid reason to do that jump,as the song isn't remotely asking for it) :owell, I think it is ok
   Awesome diff. As you see,these are some really minor things,as the diff is really good as it is.

[Thanks]

1. 00:18:753 (1,2,3,4) - That's a really little hitsounding think,feel free to ignore this: what about keeping this 1/1 ~ 1/2 clap consistency after 00:17:864 (1,2,3,4) - ? A possible arrangement would be having a clap at 00:18:753 (1,3,4) - instead of the whistles being there. I like how it sounds,especially with the guitar playing there! FIX~
2. 00:51:198 (5,6) - Why this stack? It doesen't really have sense,as the guitar arrangements are pretty much the same,therefore it isn't really requesting for it. I would see better instead a nice triangular returning pattern there. It actually flows really good and plays pretty good with the guitar chords there. See if you like it! FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,192,50976,1,0,0:0:0
   232,296,51198,1,0,0:0:0
   152,224,51420,1,8,0:0:0

3. 01:38:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - There isn't really anything wrong with this pattern,but anyways I have a little idea there: what about making an arc-shaped pattern with its spacing costantly increasing? It works really well there,as other than giving a proper finish to the pattern it fits really good with the drums taking place there and it flows absolutely good! Also, as said in the other diffs,you could use that soft whistle at 01:39:642 (5) - FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   172,36,98753,5,0,0:0:0
   88,132,98976,1,0,0:0:0
   116,280,99198,1,8,0:0:0
   280,344,99420,1,4,0:0:0
   408,200,99642,1,0,0:0:0

4. 02:15:198 (1) - This a really nazi thing,as it's a really minimal flow changement,so just fix if you want. Anwyays,what do you think about placing the whole pattern 02:15:198 (1,2,3) - so that it countinues perfectly the flow created with 02:14:753 (4) - ? I didn't really like that linear transition used there... FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   240,228,135198,5,0,0:0:0
   292,112,135420,1,0,0:0:0
   176,56,135642,2,0,B|156:104|104:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   Another awesome diff,really good job!

Sorry for the unfinished mod,I have already to go! x.x
Tomorrow I will finish the mod for sure,in the meanwhile I hope I helped you!
Mod finished! Really good map,I hope I helped you! ^^ Expect a mod soon from chewin...

1. 00:34:087 (2) - 不需要repeat吧
2. 00:41:864 (3) - 这里建议摆成这样 00:41:864 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/502501
3. 00:43:864 (4,5,6) - 这里最好有个三连 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/502503
4. 01:01:420 (3,4,5,6) - 三连这里有点别扭不如放五连 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/502505
5. 01:06:531 (3) - 1/4+ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/502510
6. 01:34:642 - add

1. 01:18:976 (2) - back http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/502513
2. 04:17:198 (3,4,5) - slider
3. 04:18:976 (3,4,5) - ^

1. 00:21:420 (1) - color

1. Add custom slidertick similar to NC:1 clap to fill the drum sounds like 00:12:976 / 00:13:864 and so on

1. 00:08:087 (1) - Finish on the downbeat to match that clash in the cymbals. Maybe add it on reverse arrow too? I think it sounds pretty fine
2. 00:22:309 (2,3) - Considering that this is the easiest diff of the mapset I'd unstack these 2 circles. It's awkward to play for beginners
3. 00:22:309 (2) - Add finish on this circle to match the cymbals
4. 00:23:198 (1) - Maybe add a finish on this slider's head too? I like how it sounds considering the new rhythm section.
5. 00:44:531 (1) - I don't know but I feel that this slider would flow much better with the previous and the next one if curved in a different way. I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/503603
6. 00:49:864 (3) - Add finish on slider reverse arrow. You already know why ;3
7. 00:51:642 (1) - I don't undestand why you didn't add finishes where you need to add them çç add it on this slider's head pls
8. 01:34:309 (1) - Add finish e_e
9. 01:59:198 (1) - What about to make this slider more curved to improve the blanket with the previous one? I mean:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   176,88,119198,6,0,B|240:68|284:124,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 02:22:976 (4) - Finish on the slider's head, for the same reason
11. 03:13:642 (1) - According to the vocal sound this spinner should start 1/2 later
12. 03:20:087 (2) - Finish on the slider head. Btw, still here, I would unstack 03:19:198 (1,2) :\
13. 04:16:087 (1,1) - Add finishes on sliders' tails too

1. 00:23:198 (1) - Finish on the slider's head. Anyways, I don't want to point out one more time the same finish hitsounds you missed. Just add the same hitsounds I wrote in the normal, pls ;3
2. 00:33:420 (1) - Honestly I don't see a valid reason to add new combo here :s what about to remove it?
3. 00:44:531 (1) - This finish sounds bad and too loud imo :\ I'd remove it.
4. 02:11:420 (1) - Finiiiish c.c
5. 04:16:753 (2) - ^
6. 04:18:531 (2) - ^

1. 00:17:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Are you sure you want to keep these squares? With AR8 they are really awkward to play. I'd suggest you to avoid them D; It's up to you, btw.
2. 01:04:087 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how this pattern flows çwç What about to CTRL + G the slider (3) and to overlap the (4) with (2)? I also would improve (2)'s shape, something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   176,340,64087,6,0,P|156:264|100:228,1,135
   88,224,64531,1,8,0:0:0
   60,308,64753,2,0,P|152:292|164:200,1,180
   88,224,65420,1,8,0:0:0

3. 02:27:642 (x) - What about to add a circle with a lower volume here? Because of downbeat
4. 02:40:976 (3) - Finish
5. 03:13:864 (x) - Mh.. I'd have thought to add a spinner here till 03:15:198 to fill this empty part s:
6. 03:26:309 (1) - Finish
7. 03:26:976 (1,2,3) - You should use a bigger spacing here (or maybe an overlap with all these 3 circles) to make the spacing different from the previous pattern 03:26:309 (1,2,3) that is 1/2 and not 1/1 like this one
8. 04:16:531 (2,2) - You know finishes on the tails
9. 04:20:753 (1) - You must use a different spacing here from the previous circle, even if you have used new combo here it's confusing to play, believe me. You can stack it with (4), maybe.

Chewin wrote:

Ehi tutuhaha :3

[General]

1. Add custom slidertick similar to NC:1 clap to fill the drum sounds like 00:12:976 / 00:13:864 and so on FIX~

[Normal]

1. 00:08:087 (1) - Finish on the downbeat to match that clash in the cymbals. Maybe add it on reverse arrow too? I think it sounds pretty fine FIX~
2. 00:22:309 (2,3) - Considering that this is the easiest diff of the mapset I'd unstack these 2 circles. It's awkward to play for beginners FIX~
3. 00:22:309 (2) - Add finish on this circle to match the cymbals FIX~
4. 00:23:198 (1) - Maybe add a finish on this slider's head too? I like how it sounds considering the new rhythm section. FIX~
5. 00:44:531 (1) - I don't know but I feel that this slider would flow much better with the previous and the next one if curved in a different way. I mean: FIX~http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/503603
6. 00:49:864 (3) - Add finish on slider reverse arrow. You already know why ;3 FIX~
7. 00:51:642 (1) - I don't undestand why you didn't add finishes where you need to add them çç add it on this slider's head pls FIX~
8. 01:34:309 (1) - Add finish e_e FIX~
9. 01:59:198 (1) - What about to make this slider more curved to improve the blanket with the previous one? I mean: FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   176,88,119198,6,0,B|240:68|284:124,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 02:22:976 (4) - Finish on the slider's head, for the same reason FIX~
11. 03:13:642 (1) - According to the vocal sound this spinner should start 1/2 later well I think this one is ok
12. 03:20:087 (2) - Finish on the slider head. Btw, still here, I would unstack 03:19:198 (1,2) :\ no enough space Orz....and I dont think there need a finish
13. 04:16:087 (1,1) - Add finishes on sliders' tails too FIX~

[Hard]

1. 00:23:198 (1) - Finish on the slider's head. Anyways, I don't want to point out one more time the same finish hitsounds you missed. Just add the same hitsounds I wrote in the normal, pls ;3 FIX~
2. 00:33:420 (1) - Honestly I don't see a valid reason to add new combo here :s what about to remove it? FIX~
3. 00:44:531 (1) - This finish sounds bad and too loud imo :\ I'd remove it. FIX~
4. 02:11:420 (1) - Finiiiish c.c FIX~
5. 04:16:753 (2) - ^ FIX~
6. 04:18:531 (2) - ^ FIX~

[Thanks]

1. 00:17:864 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Are you sure you want to keep these squares? With AR8 they are really awkward to play. I'd suggest you to avoid them D; It's up to you, btw. Well, this part I am sure it is easy and fun to play <3~
2. 01:04:087 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how this pattern flows çwç What about to CTRL + G the slider (3) and to overlap the (4) with (2)? I also would improve (2)'s shape, something like this: FIX~
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   176,340,64087,6,0,P|156:264|100:228,1,135
   88,224,64531,1,8,0:0:0
   60,308,64753,2,0,P|152:292|164:200,1,180
   88,224,65420,1,8,0:0:0

3. 02:27:642 (x) - What about to add a circle with a lower volume here? Because of downbeat FIX~
4. 02:40:976 (3) - Finish FIX~
5. 03:13:864 (x) - Mh.. I'd have thought to add a spinner here till 03:15:198 to fill this empty part s: Well, this part I think is ok <3~...
6. 03:26:309 (1) - Finish FIX~
7. 03:26:976 (1,2,3) - You should use a bigger spacing here (or maybe an overlap with all these 3 circles) to make the spacing different from the previous pattern 03:26:309 (1,2,3) that is 1/2 and not 1/1 like this one This one when I play and find test
   player to play, we are no wrong about this, so I think is ok and I am really sure it is rankable ^_^
8. 04:16:531 (2,2) - You know finishes on the tails FIX~
9. 04:20:753 (1) - You must use a different spacing here from the previous circle, even if you have used new combo here it's confusing to play, believe me. You can stack it with (4), maybe. This one when I play and find test
   player to play, we are no wrong about this, so I think is ok and I am really sure it is rankable ^_^, and very fun, I like it

Good mapset, just some suggestions about hitsounding. You can call me back for a recheck.
Btw, unfortunately, Andrea won't rank it since now he got "1000 ranked" maps and he doesn't want to rank anymore.
I don't know, this is so dumb. I'm very sorry for this, but you will have my bobbi, at least. ^_^

Chewin wrote:

[Hard]

00:33:642 (1) - I still see new combo here. keep this NC but remove this NC 00:32:087 (1) -
00:50:087 (2) - You missed finish on the reverse arrow, you used it in the normal diff as I said in the previous mod post. FIX
02:11:420 (1) - You wrote fix but you didn't. Orz...FIX now ;+;

You said "fix" but you haven't added all finishes I mentioned in the normal ç_ç Please, check it carefully and add them all in the hard diff too.
So sorry and check again now I think is ok
no kd

1. normal-hitclap.wav
2. normal-hitclap2.wav
3. normal-slidertick2.wav

1. 00:43:420 (5) - Missing clap on slider's end here? o.o
2. 00:53:420 (3) - ...the cymbal is clearly a soft one, I recommend Sampleset: Normal Addition: Soft to be used here
3. 01:28:976 (4) - Uhm, I don't really got why you used such a sharp-angled slider here orz... Try this one, it flows much better especially to your next (1) :
   

   80,144,88976,2,0,B|58:92|88:38|88:38|142:12|204:30,2,220,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 02:24:087 (5) - How about using Addition: Soft here xD
5. 03:16:531 (1) - Uhm, personally I don't really like placing post-spinner note in the center (the comboburst may obscure next note's timing and therefore confuse beginners) but it's not unrankable >_<
6. 03:25:198 (4) - orz... It's VERY obvious this slider is unsymmetrical (why there's an extra waypoint near the end anyway o.o)
7. 03:48:309 (2) - Another slider which obviously looks unsymmetrical, and ruins the flow imo (on this case simply move midpoint to ~x:167 y:134)
8. 04:20:856 (1) - orz, set Sampleset to soft please >_<

1. 00:22:300 (3,4,1) - Manual stacking (to bottom-left) may look more charming here, up to you (:
2. 00:53:411 (1) - Same as Normal
3. 01:48:522 (1,2,3) - Again, you can also try manual stacking here (bottom-left / bottom-right) xD
4. 02:11:411 (1,2,3) - Err, are you creating an arc or a straight line here o.o - I highly suggest to move (2) higher (~x:190 y:235) and place (3) slightly lower without grid snap on, to form a flowy arc (:
5. 02:24:078 (1) - What happened to the slider snapping here orz >_<
6. 03:07:633 (2,2) - How about CTRL+G'ing these two, one by one? Forms an authentic pattern imo~
7. 03:13:189 (4,5,6) - Err, just something personal, but considering (2,3)'s placement I MUCH prefer this arc going downward instead...
8. 04:03:633 (1) - Another slider which looks obviously unsymmetrical orz (just move midpoint to ~x:164 y:310)
9. 04:20:856 (1) - Same as Normal

1. 00:22:855 (2,3) - Small distance inconsistency here (should be fine if you realign them without grid snap on)
2. 00:53:411 (1) - Same as Normal, but on slider's start here
3. 01:01:411 (3,4,5) - Select all and CTRL + G? Flows MUCH better like that imo xD
4. 01:33:411 (1,2) - I personally feel the guitar here can be emphasized more, try to add whistle to both slider's start and then set Sampleset: Auto Addition: Soft for slider's start
5. 01:55:855 (2,3,4) - Try a symmetry jump like this here? Flows much better than your current parallel pattern imo, plus the next (5) won't be hard to adjust:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:13:855 - Perhaps add break here (and drag the break manually here)? The break arrows looks good actually (:
7. 04:20:856 (1) - Same as previous diffs

Niva wrote:

Hi tutuhaha~
Random bubble check...

[General]

-> ALL of your these following samples:

1. normal-hitclap.wav
2. normal-hitclap2.wav
3. normal-slidertick2.wav

has a ~10ms blank on its start (you can test it by using audacity), therefore it causes an off-sync hitsound... HOWEVER on normal-slidertick2, I think it's best to add a normal-hitnormal overlay above it (as it's used to fill in the claps on your 2/1 slider) - You can download the fixed version here (: FIX~

-> Regarding the issue above I found the offset should be 1856 (-9ms) FIX~
-> Also on all diffs you can also drag the break to the downbeat (example : 01:25:411) if you want xD XD I think is ok now~

[Normal]

1. 00:43:420 (5) - Missing clap on slider's end here? o.o FIX~
2. 00:53:420 (3) - ...the cymbal is clearly a soft one, I recommend Sampleset: Normal Addition: Soft to be used here well, try to make it more soft, FIX~
3. 01:28:976 (4) - Uhm, I don't really got why you used such a sharp-angled slider here orz... Try this one, it flows much better especially to your next (1) :
   

   80,144,88976,2,0,B|58:92|88:38|88:38|142:12|204:30,2,220,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   FIX~
4. 02:24:087 (5) - How about using Addition: Soft here xD well, try to make it more soft, FIX~
5. 03:16:531 (1) - Uhm, personally I don't really like placing post-spinner note in the center (the comboburst may obscure next note's timing and therefore confuse beginners) but it's not unrankable >_< XD I think is ok now~
6. 03:25:198 (4) - orz... It's VERY obvious this slider is unsymmetrical (why there's an extra waypoint near the end anyway o.o) FIX~
7. 03:48:309 (2) - Another slider which obviously looks unsymmetrical, and ruins the flow imo (on this case simply move midpoint to ~x:167 y:134) XD I think is ok now~ and FIX midpoint~
8. 04:20:856 (1) - orz, set Sampleset to soft please >_<

I want to use normal's whistle :O

[Hard]

1. 00:22:300 (3,4,1) - Manual stacking (to bottom-left) may look more charming here, up to you (: FIX~make a new idea
2. 00:53:411 (1) - Same as Normal FIX like normal~
3. 01:48:522 (1,2,3) - Again, you can also try manual stacking here (bottom-left / bottom-right) xD FIX~
4. 02:11:411 (1,2,3) - Err, are you creating an arc or a straight line here o.o - I highly suggest to move (2) higher (~x:190 y:235) and place (3) slightly lower without grid snap on, to form a flowy arc (: FIX~
5. 02:24:078 (1) - What happened to the slider snapping here orz >_< :D...music?
6. 03:07:633 (2,2) - How about CTRL+G'ing these two, one by one? Forms an authentic pattern imo~ FIX~
7. 03:13:189 (4,5,6) - Err, just something personal, but considering (2,3)'s placement I MUCH prefer this arc going downward instead... FIX~
8. 04:03:633 (1) - Another slider which looks obviously unsymmetrical orz (just move midpoint to ~x:164 y:310) FIX midpoint and maybe I like to make slider like this Orz.....~
9. 04:20:856 (1) - Same as Normal

I want to use normal's whistle :O

[Thanks]

1. 00:22:855 (2,3) - Small distance inconsistency here (should be fine if you realign them without grid snap on) FIX~
2. 00:53:411 (1) - Same as Normal, but on slider's start here FIX~
3. 01:01:411 (3,4,5) - Select all and CTRL + G? Flows MUCH better like that imo xD FIX~
4. 01:33:411 (1,2) - I personally feel the guitar here can be emphasized more, try to add whistle to both slider's start and then set Sampleset: Auto Addition: Soft for slider's start FIX a litter~
5. 01:55:855 (2,3,4) - Try a symmetry jump like this here? Flows much better than your current parallel pattern imo, plus the next (5) won't be hard to adjust:
   
   SPOILER

   
   well, I like my way much so sorry Q_Q..........
6. 03:13:855 - Perhaps add break here (and drag the break manually here)? The break arrows looks good actually (:
7. 04:20:856 (1) - Same as previous diffs

I want to use normal's whistle :O

Err, just a quick check orz, still not in the mood of doing a big mod ._.
Anyway after you fixed the timing, I suggest to do this to ALL of your inherit sections (not timing section) :

Niva wrote:

(rechecking, don't kudosu)

On Thanks I see you added a break after 03:13:633 (7), so drag the break to the downbeat (03:13:855) perhaps as I said above? Not a big issue though, I'll edit my post after your reply (:

Shiro wrote:

offset+12

grats