hi
request from veoliouy
[General]
BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
cuz your video is 15MB , maybe cut your mp3 into 128kbps? don't forget fix timing if you change mp3 file
[Goblin]
rhyme and hitsound are good
but arrangement and slider shape are boring
jumps make map fun to play , but not all jump is fun and they sometimes doesn't follow the song well
for examples :
00:02:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this jumps is good , cuz they follow the vocal to increase the spacing
00:07:920 (5,1) - but this is boring , the vocal here is suddenly louder , but the spacing is not a jump
00:12:920 (6,7) - ^
00:21:420 (1) - I do know this slider is following the vocal "la la la la" , but I think use circles here is betther , for this , change circles before/after this slider to sliders if you change this slider to circles
00:23:586 (7,8,9) - same , vocal become louder but spacing not changing
ok , I stop now , suggestions above this is just tell you , anti-jump should follow the song , don't jump randomly
and the other problem is , jump between circles and sliders is different
2 circles can change into 1 slider , but you should click 2 times on circles but just hold on a slider , so a slider is much more easier than 2 circles
so if you make jumps , the spacing between circles should smaller than the spacing between sliders
for example :
00:47:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is too hard to play , maybe the most hard pattern in your map , cuz the jumps are all in circles
00:50:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:54:420 (1,2,3,4) - this seems hard to paly , but in fact , they are very easy , cuz the jumps are all in sliders
01:13:086 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:45:420 - ciecles before this are much harder to play than the following sliders , even the slider is 1.5x speed
stop here , what I want to tell you is just , slider jumps should longer than circles , to make the all pattern be in the same diffculty
after this , I should say , the map is mess
slider shapes are boring , and circles go in a strange way , this broke the map's flow and beauty
use some beautiful slider shapes and make some patterns symmetrical , or let sliders go around circles , this map will be better
for example :
02:12:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this are 3 pentagons , this is good
03:20:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2 squares , nice
some other patterns in your map seems mess
04:00:086 (1) - this slider shape is bad , far away from a heart
at last is just some nazi :
01:50:503 - add ciecle
00:10:420 - clap
00:15:753 - ^
then I ignore same issues after this , I don't know whay you miss a clap in every here
00:18:420 - remove whistle
00:53:753 (8) - change to 1/4 repeat slider
01:18:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't know why this stream's spacing is not the same
I love this song , but map need lots of lots of more working
good luck