Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :3 Let's go!

[Normal]
The volume from the beginning to the first break time should be lower. Try 70%? Ok!
00:46:670 (4) - Whistle at the beginning? Added
01:56:488 (4) - Shorten by 1/2 beat? edited
01:59:488 (1,2) - Missing whistles? Oops! :c Added whistles
03:25:124 (3) - Finish? added

[Hard]
I think you can add more hitsounds. Such as default soft-whistle :c
00:04:670 (7,8) - Don't overlap them, please. fixed
00:08:488 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:01:806 (10,11) - Spacing D: fixed too
02:16:943 (1) - Spacing ;_; And don't overlap it on 02:16:261 (8). ^
02:51:852 (10,1) - An unexpected jump? Deleted jump

Star (: Thanks for the mod&star c:!

GLF09 wrote:

lo olvide xD
Star¬

Z e o n wrote:

:)

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
If you're gonna use custom hitsound (the drum sound), use it on the 2nd and 4th white tick. It usually works well.
Keep kiai consistent. Normal and hard Kiai is little different (the last one) Changed. Now all the diffs have the same kiai time points
Keep tick rate consistent. Change hard to tick rate 2. Changed
Set preview point for all diff. Maybe at 01:11:488. Go to timinig > Set current position as preview point. Done~ º0º
Normal:
01:20:215 (1) - I suggest you remove slider and add triple there instead. So players can "click" the note and kiai time happens. :3 Removed slider and added notes instead
02:34:397 (1) - I have no idea why you used normal hitsound all of a sudden. Just change it back to soft? Ok
03:08:215 (5) - ^ ^
03:15:852 (7) - NC Added

Hard:
00:16:806 (6,1) - Jump might be too hard. Reduce the distance.Reduced
00:46:670 (4,5) - I'm not a fan of this overlap. Maybe switch their positions around? hmm no D: I like it as it is
02:07:533 (4,1) - Reduce the distance between jump Ok
02:34:397 (1) - Remove normal hitsound and use soft? Removed

Thanks For the mod&star

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :3 Let's go!

[Insane]
OD-1 ?? There are many low bpm streams. +1
00:11:621 (2) - It is too close to (1) >.<
00:35:757 (7) - It is too close to (6) T^T
00:38:485 (1) - Remove new combo :o
00:41:212 (1) - ^ :o
01:09:576 (1) - Remove new combo :o
01:09:848 (2) - New combo here. Maybe you can try to make another shape, this one's ugly. ;w;
01:55:394 (3) - Finish? :x
01:58:667 (1) - Remove new combo :o
I found many sliders look bad ;_; please make their shapes better. I will

Star (: Thanks >w<

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.
Insane:
00:19:394 (3) - Move this to the center? center
00:22:394 (5) - Just straighten this slider? The reverse arrow looks weird thats why. >.<
03:06:306 (2,3) - Don't like the overlap. Move 2 or 3. moved
03:14:215 (1) - I prefer kiai to start here instead. kiaied? x3
03:14:215 (1,3) - And don't do this thing. First slider completely blocks 3's slider path. I suggest you move 3 somewhere else so it doesn't get blocked. ºAº
I think you should work on some sliders more. Not a big deal though. thanks for modd >w<

l1106188 wrote:

Hi
I'm sorry
Did not see the fifth rule Oh no problem n.n
and..
I did not experience.So,this is just a view you can skip

Hard:
02:15:579 (7) - Add a whistle at the end only?! Added! Thank you

and..
Good Song

Thanks for checking my map!~

winber1 wrote:

General

--the kiai time is a little different at 03:14:215 (1) - there might be other discrepencies but i didn't really pay much attention to the others lol ooh :c you're right. fixed now

Hard

01:50:760 (10) - move this note 1/4 tick forward and add new combo added
01:51:033 (1) - remove combo ok!
01:59:624 (1) - this note doesn't really make much sense to me and it looks like it's on a red tick when it's not. I would rather you start this slider at 01:59:488 and end in the same place, and then rearrange notes. done :3
03:26:624 (5) - delete note. it doesn't follow anything. deleted

Normal

02:26:215 (1,2) - these two notes really don't make any sense to me replaced with circles that follow the vocals
02:30:306 (2,3,4,5) - you can definitely follow the vocals better than what you are doing now lol. replaced too c:
03:08:215 (5,6,7) - you never used whistles in this song, so this is kinda random and abrupt deleted hitsound change
03:16:397 (3) - 1 grid left fixed c:

cool map :3

star~~ Thanks for your mod&star \:D/

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
The offset is seriously wrong, i think about +18 (52) is much more accurated. Ok. Changed offset to 52
You probably need 1s lead-in time. ok changed to 1s
The countdown is still enabled in [Normal], disable it plz. Also the preview time in [Normal] is different from the other 2 diffs. disabled countdown and fixed Normal preview time
The use of hitsounds is nice but... When you want to add whistle hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, choose the beats and then add whistle plz. It's really noisy now... a easy solution to it is add a mute soft-sliderwhistle.wav file in your folder and full submit again. i'll add it later
Seems you're a fan of sliderarts, that's not a bad thing but make sure you could do your best with them, otherwise it will ends up with ugly effects.

[Normal]
00:18:579 (6) - change this to a 3/4 repeated slider? this could fit the beat on 00:18:988 & 00:19:397. ok
01:09:852 (6) - ^same thing, also you can add a beat at 01:10:943 ok
02:07:684 (6,7,1) - the flow is really strange here... maybe sth like this?
[attachment=1:4ccc5]97.png[/attachment:4ccc5] Nice~

[Hard]
00:06:034 (1,2) - ...well if you want to do sliderart, try to do the best.
[attachment=0:4ccc5]98.png[/attachment:4ccc5] edited >:0
01:04:261 (6,1) - i don't know the reason why you suddenly increase the spacing here, though you have a new combo. deleted the increase of spacing
01:09:715 (1) - how about add a note then start the spinner? ok
02:00:033 (2,3) - move 3 farther, it's ugly now... ok
02:56:761 (3) - the finish pace sounds really boring start from here. D:!!!
Thanks for your mod&star c:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane

00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm ?
00:09:443 (2) - unstack? nope >w<
00:34:398 (2) - move note 1/4 tick forward and rearrange spacing souns better, thanks
01:24:034 (5) - i wuold rather play five notes than have 1 repeat slider, but that's just me o.o
01:46:534 (x) - add note
01:46:806 (x) - ^
if you add those notes. then i would rearrange 01:46:397 (3,4,5,6) - so that it makes more sense rather than have a weird jump at 01:46:806 (6,1) - ok I didnt get you x3
01:53:488 (9) - new combo new :3
02:22:124 (2,3) - i would space this a little further apart. spaced =o

--nothing is really wrong with the diff, but you could follow vocals a little more. many times you just follow something else or just make up some sort of drum beat (that, although makes sense, i think could be made more interesting and fun to play) thanks x3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[i_k's Insane]
00:35:779 (7,1) - do you think it's too hard..? I dont know
02:19:688 (7) - should end 1/4 earlier. ok

Don't want to focus on certain places to fix (because it's really...there are many of them), you may pay more attention to the flow, and also the structure (i mean try to put notes in a more good-looking way) thanks .w.

ikari_kyon wrote:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane

00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm ?
00:09:443 (2) - unstack? nope >w<
00:34:398 (2) - move note 1/4 tick forward and rearrange spacing souns better, thanks
01:24:034 (5) - i wuold rather play five notes than have 1 repeat slider, but that's just me o.o
01:46:534 (x) - add note
01:46:806 (x) - ^
if you add those notes. then i would rearrange 01:46:397 (3,4,5,6) - so that it makes more sense rather than have a weird jump at 01:46:806 (6,1) - ok I didnt get you x3
01:53:488 (9) - new combo new :3
02:22:124 (2,3) - i would space this a little further apart. spaced =o

--nothing is really wrong with the diff, but you could follow vocals a little more. many times you just follow something else or just make up some sort of drum beat (that, although makes sense, i think could be made more interesting and fun to play) thanks x3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[i_k's Insane]
00:35:779 (7,1) - do you think it's too hard..? I dont know
02:19:688 (7) - should end 1/4 earlier. ok

Don't want to focus on certain places to fix (because it's really...there are many of them), you may pay more attention to the flow, and also the structure (i mean try to put notes in a more good-looking way) thanks .w.

ikari_kyon wrote:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane
00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm ?

hitmefast wrote:

normal

clean the sliders omg :O ;_____;
tags:gackpoid ikari_kyon?? add name of song and artist maybe? check tags pls :X No. El nombre de la canción y Artista ya cuentan como Tags, no es necesario ponerlos denuevo como Tag. Esto también pasa con Source.
offset in: 00:02:230 Ok.

00:01:684 delete No D:
01:00:320^ ^
01:04:684 delete or add hitsound ^ (No delete, y hitsound ya tiene.)
01:58:139 move this slider here 01:58:411 Ok.
02:02:502 add hitsound ? ;__;

hard

offset + tags also Ok offset. No tags.

02:41:233 solve this slider pls Ok.
02:46:552 ^ ^
02:51:052 ^ ^
02:54:597 ^ ^
02:55:006 ^ ^

insane

offset + tags too... Yo le cambié el offset, pero no tags.

also nice strange sliders for normal and hard xd Me gusta hacer diseños con los sliders c:

star~ :3 Gracias por la star y por moddear :D/ Hubieses moddeado en español. Hablamos español Kyon y yo :3

hitmefast wrote:

insane

offset + tags too... tags?¿?¿?

03:12:052 (opinion)change finish sound to wistle/normal? normal sound set??? I dont like it
03:17:506 make it clean where is the garbage?
please clean the 'inherited points'

nice insane ^^ thanks? =o

no modifications, no new file...

Keilara wrote:

hitmefast wrote:

normal

clean the sliders omg :O ;_____;
tags:gackpoid ikari_kyon?? add name of song and artist maybe? check tags pls :X No. El nombre de la canción y Artista ya cuentan como Tags, no es necesario ponerlos denuevo como Tag. Esto también pasa con Source.
offset in: 00:02:230 Ok.

00:01:684 delete No D:
01:00:320^ ^
01:04:684 delete or add hitsound ^ (No delete, y hitsound ya tiene.)
01:58:139 move this slider here 01:58:411 Ok.
02:02:502 add hitsound ? ;__;

hard

offset + tags also Ok offset. No tags.

02:41:233 solve this slider pls Ok.
02:46:552 ^ ^
02:51:052 ^ ^
02:54:597 ^ ^
02:55:006 ^ ^

insane

offset + tags too... Yo le cambié el offset, pero no tags.

also nice strange sliders for normal and hard xd Me gusta hacer diseños con los sliders c:

star~ :3 Gracias por la star y por moddear / Hubieses moddeado en español. Hablamos español Kyon y yo :3

hitmefast wrote:

hehe es la mania XD
te agrego ;3 os agrego ;3

haver si algun dia hacemos una collab o una guest ^^

[Shalon] wrote:

Normal
fine :0!!

Hard
00:51:597 (4,5) - why don't you use the same slider with00:51:051 (3) ? Ok.
01:09:733 (8) - how about delete it? No D:
02:18:461 (4) - delete and replace it with 02:18:597 (5). (If you'll follow it, make the slider more longer) Ok!

03:15:052 (4) - stack it with 03:13:688 (1) Done

use more new combo. Ok. I added more new combos in this update. Thanks for your mod and star c:

hitmefast wrote:

haver si algun dia hacemos una collab o una guest ^^ collabs no x.x

[Shalon] wrote:

Insane
00:09:596 - add a note? feels weird x3 srry
fine. thanks

Roddie wrote:

i_k's Insane

1. 00:36:869 (1)-Add a finish on the end. nope
2. 00:48:323 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Fix the spacing on these by using the distance snap. It is spaced to x1,2 but I had rearranged it
3. 01:10:688 (1)-Add a finish? nope
4. 01:16:415 (1)-^ yeah
5. 01:17:324 (1)^? There is non object here
6. 01:28:415 (9)-Add a finish on the beginning? yeah
7. 01:42:597 (3)-^ yes
8. 01:44:777 (1)-Add a finish. hmm yeah
9. 01:46:959 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. nope
10. 01:55:687 (1)-^? ok
11. 02:04:414 (1)-^? nope
12. 02:21:869 (1)-Add a finish? nope
13. 02:36:596 (5)-Add a finish on the end. yup
14. 02:48:051 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? ya
15. 02:52:414 (9)-^? aya
16. 02:54:596 (1)-^ ya
17. 02:55:414 (4)-Add a finish on the end? ok
18. 03:00:596 (8)-^ www
19. 03:05:505 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning? there is no object here
20. 03:07:687 (1)-Put a new combo here. why
21. 03:14:233 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. nope
22. 03:18:596 (7)-Put a new combo here? yeah
23. 03:19:960 (4)-Remove new combo? w erqrwq
24. 03:20:778 (6)-Put a new combo here? better on 03:21:324

Here's a star. thanks ><

Roddie wrote:

General

1. i_k's Insane has a different preview point than Normal and Hard. Oh D: Now it has the same preview point as in Normal and Hard.
2. I don't think the lead-in time is necessary for Normal and Hard. :c
3. i_k's Insane has a different Offset than Hard and Normal. I recommend using Hard's and Normal's Offset. Don't forget to resnap all the notes and the timing points (Green Lines). Fixed

Normal

1. 01:58:415 (8)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Fixed
2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning? Added
3. 02:21:324 (1)-^ Added
4. 02:26:233 (1)-Add a finish. Added
5. 03:13:688- I think it's better to start off the kiai time on 03:14:233. This applies to the other difficulties? :?
6. 03:27:051 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Fixed

Hard

1. 01:03:324 (2)-Add a finish.Added
2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?^
3. 02:13:142 (2)-^? ^
4. 02:26:233 (2)-^ ^
5. 02:30:597 (2)-Add a finish. ^
6. 02:34:961 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? ^
7. 02:39:324 (3)-^? ^
8. 02:4&:506 (1)-Add a finish on the end. Ok! >:0

And that's it. Good luck, Keilara~ :D

Here's a star. Thanks for everything Roddie \:D/

justnobody wrote:

first time to hear gackpoid's voice. Yeah :c There's no Gackpoid ranked map.
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i don't like the hitsounds in kiai. D:!!
the finish doesn't match the custom whistle good imo...

[normal]
01:57:870 (7,8) - spacing? ? D: Roddie told me the same, and I already fixed it.
good diff. *O* Thanks!

[hard]
02:15:051 (9) - whistle at start? ok
02:21:870 (2) - i thought there should a kiai here... but anyway. .-. if someone mentions that again I'll add kiai.

star for gackpoid. Thanks for your mod&star! c:
make it the first ranked gackpoid map! I'm aiming for that! I support Gackpoid :3

bipolarmen98 wrote:

buuen mapa ^^

:3

espero que lo aprueben pronto ^^

Snepif wrote:

nice~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

star

• Hard: 71233
  i_k's Insane: 71370
  Normal: 71233

• Combo1 : 222,114,182
  Combo2 : 172,40,187
  Combo3 : 189,132,175
  Combo4 : 255,255,255

poisonchan wrote:

Heeya Modding your map as your request.
Hope it helps Yay \c:/

[!] = Need to be changed.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.

[General]
- Preview point must be the same in all diffs, you should fix it:

• Hard: 71233
  i_k's Insane: 71370 Fixed
  Normal: 71233

- You have the sliderfollowcircle.png add in your mapset, since it is a custom skin, I suggest you making the whole 'pack' (The other elements) or removing it. Otherwise it can look odd/weird. [Yes, having such element - alone - in the mapset is allowed, but is preferable if you complete the mapset with a few other elements at least.] Uhm.. I'm not sure. I think I'll make the other skin elements.

- What about these as the combo colours: (Don't forget: If you decide to change it, you must change in all the difficulties)

• Combo1 : 222,114,182
  Combo2 : 172,40,187
  Combo3 : 189,132,175
  Combo4 : 255,255,255

ºoº Nice. Changed. It's better now.

[Normal]
00:09:324 (4) - I saw that you tried to make it symmetrical, to be 'perfectly' done, should be like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122197 ? :c You're right. Fixed.
00:16:961 (3) - This overlap can be improved if you move the beat to the left, don't forget to modify (4)'s position aswell. *nazi* ?] Ok!
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:34:961 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:46:688 (4) - New combo ? ^
01:10:961 (5) - ^ ^
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here. ^
01:44:779 - Drag the end of the Break here. ^
01:47:779 (2) - New combo. Added.
02:07:142 (4) - ^ Added.
02:24:597 (1) - This slider is too short, making it too harder for a normal. Oh :c Deleted and added a note insted.
03:28:961 (6) - Uh, don't add the red point in the slider, it is making an odd look. What about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122204 instead? Ok.

[Hard]
00:02:233 (2) - I can't understand why there is 2 points in the slider: http://puu.sh/3PrL. Remove the one who is in the middle of the line. Removed.
00:03:870 (5) - New Combo ? Added.
00:04:415 (6) - Follow the distance spacing, it is looking like a force jump. Maybe something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122207 [Don't forget to add the new combo on (5) ] Fixed.
00:08:506 (5) - New Combo ? Added
00:12:597 (6) - ^ ^
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:35:506 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:37:688 (6) - New Combo. Added.
00:37:961 (1) - Move it closer to the previous note. Ok.
00:50:233 (2) - Move this beat a bit down and right, so it wont overlap the 00:49:688 (1), don't forget to apply the changes on (3) and (4) [In (4), move the low point in the slider 1 tick to the right, same with (5) but in this case, change the high point.), and move 6-7 to the side aswell. Done.
00:55:142 (2) - Same thing about the overlap on (1). [Don't forget to fix the rest of the combo] Fixed.
01:13:415 (7) - Move this beat a little to the right, so won't overlap the previous note. ^
01:14:915 (3) - Stack this note. Don't forget to fix the spacing of the next note. Stacked.
01:17:233 (3) - Same thing about overlap. Don't forget to change the following notes. Fixed too.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:45:324 - Drag the end of the Break here.
01:58:551 (5) - I suggest flipping it vertically. Ok!
02:05:779 (5) - New combo. Added.
02:06:597 (1) - Remove new combo. Removed.
02:37:142 (7) - New combo, also, try a different spacing like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122234 ? Ok. Now is much better
02:49:415 (3) - New Combo Added.
02:51:870 (10) - Remove this beat. Removed.
02:52:142 (1) - Fix the Spacing Fixed.
02:52:415 (2) - New Combo Added
02:53:506 (7) - ^ ^
03:07:142 (6) - New Combo ^
03:07:688 (1) - Remove new combo Removed
03:16:142 (6) - New combo Added.
03:24:597 (7) - New combo ^
03:25:142 (1) - Remove new combo Removed.

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Hope it helps :3
If you need any help or a recheck, poke me in game, or send me a Forum PM. Thank You! c:! Your mod was very helpful to me. I'll ask you for re-check later, when Kyon finish to make changes to his difficulty.

poisonchan wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
00:23:097 (6) - New combo, and if possible, make it less 'overlapped' by the previous stream. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122218 ?]
00:27:461 (6) - New combo.
00:31:824 (6) - New combo.
00:41:233 (5) - ^
00:45:461 (4) - ^
01:08:779 (1,2,3) - Blind pattern. If possible, unstack the notes from the previous pattern, and try following a 'free' spacing pattern? [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122220]
01:09:870 (5) - New combo. Try a spacing like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122223 maybe?
01:13:824 (6) - New combo.
01:17:642 (6) - ^
01:20:915 (6) - ^ + Make it less overlapped with the previous note.
01:24:052 (5) - New combo.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:37:142 - Drag the end of the Break here.
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Ok, I'm not going to complete the mod till the end of the diff, cause I guess you should check it yourself and try improving your map according to the tips I gave you. ^-^ If you need any help with that, poke me in game, and I will be happy to help. ^-^
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kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

ikari_kyon wrote:

poisonchan wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
00:23:097 (6) - New combo, and if possible, make it less 'overlapped' by the previous stream. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122218 ?]
00:27:461 (6) - New combo.
00:31:824 (6) - New combo.
00:41:233 (5) - ^
00:45:461 (4) - ^
01:08:779 (1,2,3) - Blind pattern. If possible, unstack the notes from the previous pattern, and try following a 'free' spacing pattern? [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122220]
01:09:870 (5) - New combo. Try a spacing like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122223 maybe?
01:13:824 (6) - New combo.
01:17:642 (6) - ^
01:20:915 (6) - ^ + Make it less overlapped with the previous note.
01:24:052 (5) - New combo.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:37:142 - Drag the end of the Break here.
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Ok, I'm not going to complete the mod till the end of the diff, cause I guess you should check it yourself and try improving your map according to the tips I gave you. ^-^ If you need any help with that, poke me in game, and I will be happy to help. ^-^
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kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod Time.

[General]
I don't like the fin sound Yeah, it doesn't really fit to the song. I'll search for other later.
And also some sliders look very strange when you add these red dots

[Normal]
00:18:587 (4) - fin ok
01:18:052 (5,6,7) -

try this

Ok
01:26:779 (6) - this slider doesn't look so nice ;___;
01:54:597 (6) - add fin ok
01:55:415 (2) - del fin Ok?
02:07:415 (2,3) -

try this

Ok
02:11:506 (4,5) -

try this

ok
02:21:324 (1) - del fin No :c
02:40:415 (3) - spacing. SV change will affect spacing. it is difficult for new players to identify the spacing change ah fixed
02:59:506 (6) - add whistle added
03:07:688 (4) - ^ added
03:16:142 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:20:779 (4) - ^ ^
03:27:051 (1,2) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:36:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - makes it smoother, I mean the note 2 Oh ok c:
00:37:961 (1) -

try this

^
00:51:597 (4) - 1 gird up moved
00:52:142 (5) - 2 grid up ^
00:55:142 (2) -

try this

^
The hit sound in 1st kiai time is very good. But problem is still the fin sound. That really destroy the hearing Yeah :c Like I said before, i'll search for another fin sound later.
01:55:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - smoother Ok
02:01:415 (4,5) - 2 grid down moved
02:22:415 (3) -

try this

Ok
02:44:779 (4) -

this way

Ok
02:58:142 (5) - one grid up, this slider is diff from 4&6 Replaced this slider with 4/6 slider
03:19:688 (4) - looks weird D:!! I'll keep this one :c

Star. Still have a lot to work on I'll do my best to improve more my map c:
Good Luck Thank you ^o^/!!

Megurine Luka wrote:

[i_k's insane]
It's best for you to share the same start point with the other 2 diff really? =O
00:13:688 (3) -

this way

that way
00:36:052 (1) - spacing respaced
00:07:006 (2) - put it in the same line with the slider why =o
00:40:142 (3) - put it at the end of last slider ah? it is at the end, I think
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - sudden noise.. don't use that sound effect. or you can control the volume from lower to higher, so does 01:54:870 (1,2,3) :(
01:27:052 (11) - 2 grid left lefty
02:09:324 - change into a short slider and a circle reversible

02:12:051 (2) - make the slider prettier Im ugly x3
02:13:688 (1) -

try this

oh no
02:26:779 (3) - change into a shorter reversible slider reversible and weird xD
02:30:870 - add note oh no
02:39:324~02:46:961 - try 0.75x x.x
02:41:506 (2) -

try this

cant see xD


Try to have more changes in mapping type. Some parts look similar It calls patterns :3

Star. Still have a lot to work on tired~ =w=
Good Luck yup thanks

ikari_kyon wrote:

Megurine Luka wrote:

[i_k's insane]
It's best for you to share the same start point with the other 2 diff really? =O
00:13:688 (3) -

this way

that way
00:36:052 (1) - spacing respaced
00:07:006 (2) - put it in the same line with the slider why =o
00:40:142 (3) - put it at the end of last slider ah? it is at the end, I think
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - sudden noise.. don't use that sound effect. or you can control the volume from lower to higher, so does 01:54:870 (1,2,3) :(
01:27:052 (11) - 2 grid left lefty
02:09:324 - change into a short slider and a circle reversible

02:12:051 (2) - make the slider prettier Im ugly x3
02:13:688 (1) -

try this

oh no
02:26:779 (3) - change into a shorter reversible slider reversible and weird xD
02:30:870 - add note oh no
02:39:324~02:46:961 - try 0.75x x.x
02:41:506 (2) -

try this

cant see xD


Try to have more changes in mapping type. Some parts look similar It calls patterns :3

Star. Still have a lot to work on tired~ =w=
Good Luck yup thanks

Megurine Luka wrote:

Come back to shoot a pink star to support Gakupo.



Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Esupanitix wrote:

Oh hi.

Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds. I like how it looks D:

That's all.

Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant. Ok

01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly. Ok

01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.Ok
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark. Fixed. Just don't kill me o.ò

01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still) Ok

02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad. Ok

02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all. Ok

02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right. I like it in this way .-.

02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.

(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)

I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.

i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.


The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work. Fixed most of things. Thanks for your mod c:

Vortex wrote:

Hey there Hi /

Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo Uhmm.. I don't know :c If I remove that combo then the combo goes to 10 and I think that is a high combo number x.x I'll remove it if someone mentions it again.

I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good but I think this diff had enough improvement. Don't worry. It's ok c:

Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something... Really? ? Woohoo! That makes me happy c:

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least Don't worry n.n we all have a start :3 Good luck with your modding and thanks for checking my map~ ^u^

Vortex

Cirno wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here? Added.
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players Added.

[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better Ok
others fine for me

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ Thanks!! *-*

Vortex wrote:

Guest Diff you mean me right? =o
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^ fffffffffff
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me sound worst without it for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses fk yeah
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5 hmmmm iòmg
00:54:324 (1) Same like above asdfasdfasdfasdf
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle? why??
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2) where?
02:56:233 (6) New combo nope >w<
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo ^

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least =OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Vortex

Cirno wrote:

Hi hi :3~

[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles? ohmygodmyslidersareveryveryuglyx.x
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ? god no x3
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo fffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuu
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here? Im not symetrical but anyway
00:44:642 - add note? yeah
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo almost the same :/
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._. 1,0x spacing
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here. poison-chan :/
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly... ohmygodmyslidershapesareuglyasiam

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ ;w;

pieguy1372 wrote:

i_k's Insane: pieguy :3~

00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes? ok
00:18:188 (6) - ^ ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2) already fixed
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC wwwwwww
00:50:233 (3) - add NC uuuuuuu
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider cant remember when I put this O_o
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651 vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future Im sorry T^T
01:30:052 - reinsert this break somebody's fault
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs? nope =o
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC yup
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs? wwerwer
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4) =OOO
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~ .,.,.,.
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3) closer
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs? xvzvzxv
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)? hope maked it right T^T

Nice map~ thanks for you :3

GLF09 wrote:

Tengo el presentimiento de que te diste muchas stars
xD Y en cuanto a tí... El nuevo sistema de stars requiere que moddees maps de otras personas para dar prioridad a tu map, con el propósito de aprender de los demás maps de la gente. Ya no se pueden dar stars porque sí como antes, ahora valen Kudosu.. y si querés que tu map no quede ignorado vas a tener que usar los Kudosus en tu propio map ya que ahora gran mayoría las usará para sus propios maps.. si te dan una star ahora, a esa persona si que le gusto el map, o le interesó la canción. Es obvio que iba a tener muchas estrellitas mias ._. What's the point?

Keilara wrote:

._. What's the point?

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Ok~
00:12:597- Spacing cuz far Fixed
01:30:052- why break drag here ? Good question xDU Fixed

Hard
00:12:597- Remove new combo Uh no :c sorry.
00:13:142- New combo ^

Thanks!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja xDD

General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo Haha al rato lo converso con Kyon aver si cambia su tick rate o no.

Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo No.. pero en vez de ponerle New Combo a (5) se lo puse a (4).
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor Uh.. no :c lo siento ;u;''

Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien Ok
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo Hmm D: Lo dejaré como está y si alguien más lo menciona lo quito.
02:04:961 (2): New Combo ^

Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!! Jaja~ Gracias por todo! ya que hasta me moddeaste sin que yo te haya pedido c:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja



unrequested mod \o/

i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges queda vacio x3
01:26:233 (7): New Combo el nuevo combo tendria solo 3 objects
01:57:597 (5): New Combo nope o/
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH =o
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish?? suena bien sin el finish
02:53:501 (7): New Combo sadfasdfasdf
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle asfdaerwer

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

i_K's Insane
Fine~

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

Easy
01:18:052 (5) - New combo ? Ok
01:22:415 (5) - ^ Ok!
02:09:870 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1) w/o reverse slider Yeah
02:52:142 (1) - Move it somewhere to prevent overlap with (3) ^
02:55:688 (6) - One grid down Done

Hard
00:40:145 (7) - Align this with (5 and 6) ? Done

i_K's Insane
Fine~ Yay!
_______________________________________________-
That's all~ Thanks!

qilliam wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section

[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful Omg! Thanks a lot >//<
03:17:506 - useless timing section

poisonedblood wrote:

[Insane]

[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.

poisonedblood wrote:

[Hard]

[00:03:597] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[00:12:324] ^ I do (Again).
[00:37:688] Is this note necessary? Sounds weird without that note.
[01:09:733] Maybe start the spinner here? I think that's unrankeable.
[01:13:415] I don't find this note necessary. If I delete that note it would cut the rhythm.
[01:56:233] ^ Same as above. I put these notes to keep the player clicking something instead of waiting Gackpoid to sing again.
[02:05:370] Maybe move the circle on [02:05:506] here? I agree here~
[02:18:461] If you keep just a circle here you could start the spinner on [02:18:870]. Uhm no, I like how it is.
[02:22:279] Start the reverse arrow slider here, add a an arrow so it still ends where it did at first. D: I'll change this if someone mentions it again.
[02:24:324] Maybe start the spinner here. I think it sound less weird like this. Same as above about spinner.
[02:26:915] Add a circle? or add a slider from [02:26:915] - [02:27:052]. Sounds weird .-.
[02:27:188] Start the slider from [02:27:324] here. Make it longer so it ends where it originally ended. Why?
[02:30:324] Maybe extend the spinner so it ends here. I think it sounds better. Same thing I said about spinners.
[02:49:415] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Well i'm not really sure about changing this, so i'll leave as it is till someone else mentions it.
[02:55:688] ^ ^
[02:58:415] Maybe remove the slider and just keep a circle here? That ruins the rhytm imo.
[03:02:506] I don't find this note necessary. But I do! Yes, again.
[03:06:870] ^ ^
[03:08:370] - [03:08:779] Maybe make a slider, or just move the circle from [03:08:506] to [03:08:370]. o_o
[03:17:097] Maybe end the slider here? No, sorry .-.
[03:21:733] Maybe move the circle from [03:21:870] here? That doesn't sound good o_o
[03:24:324] I don't find this note necessary. I do.

poisonedblood wrote:

I looked at the New Combos,
everything are small suggestions.
Feel free to ignore anything I said for insane though.
Star~ because I want to see this map ranked. Thanks *-* I'll do my best!

[Easy]

[02:07:142] Is this New Combo necessary? Uhmm I'm not sure about this. >o<


[Hard]

[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Again >o< Not sure.
[02:53:097] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:53:506]? Sorry but no ;u;
[02:54:188] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:54:597]? No >o<
[02:55:688] Is this New Combo necessary? Not sure about removing it.
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo? Yeah :'D
[03:28:415] ^ Yes C:!

Thanks again for your help >o< I'll do my best to get this map ranked.

qilliam wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section

Removed

poisonedblood wrote:

Edit: For Insane the only problem I found that in some places the beats weren't on some lyric parts.
The note already placed go well with the beat, so I wanted to leave it up to you if you wanted to add something on those notes.

Teru21 wrote:

[i k's insane]
01:10:142 - http://puu.sh/7b93 - huh?
01:12:324 (1,2) - grid : 1 time to the right - time what?????.... just say 1 grid right <.<
01:25:961 (6) - grid: one time down b
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (only suggestion)http://puu.sh/7b9M ?
01:45:324 (5) - http://puu.sh/7bao - :/
02:39:052 (1) - 4 times up http://puu.sh/7baU b
02:40:142 (3) - 3 times down b

Takos wrote:

i_k's Insane[/color]
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a neat triangle? http://puu.sh/7JXZ
01:03:324 (1) - This slider can have a beter shape~ yeah it can...
01:12:324 (1,2) - 1 grid right ↑
01:15:597 (6) - 1 grid left ffff
01:19:279 (4) - Ctrl+R? rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
01:22:415 (5) - Overlapping with previous notes doesn't look pretty ;w; overlap????
01:22:961 (1,2,3,4) - Position Suggestion~ http://puu.sh/7JZ2
02:02:506 (4,5,6) - Maybe place this in the middle of the triangle(1,2,3)? http://puu.sh/7JZA its on the base
02:39:052 (1,2,3,4) - Place this in the center~
02:46:688 (5) - 2 grids left

Neptunus wrote:

Genaral: i_k's insane: I suggest a Slider Tick Rate of 2 - no, thank you!!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey vaga no lo dejes morir please!!

Kei wrote:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey vaga no lo dejes morir please!!

ASDF! Es que estaba ocupada con el liceo D: Ya lo actualizo

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

♪Hihi~!
♪Here's my modding~!

♪General

SPOILER

♪delete .osb then fullsub again. Done
♪nothing else~! such a purple skin~!

♪【Hard】diff

SPOILER

00:43:688 (5) - left 1 grid? Uhm.. okay.
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking? I like how it is
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect. Ok.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid? Uh.. ok.
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7 Done.
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable Sorry but I'll keep the jump.
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~! Done.
02:49:415 (1) - remove? Nope, sorry.
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail ^
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ I think that the current one is okay.
This diff is a lot better than the insane... Well.. I didn't mapped the Insane. It's a guest difficulty.

and nice hit sound~! Thanks :3

♪【Normal】diff

SPOILER

00:19:142 00:19:688 actually u can add 2 notes.. Ok!
00:57:051 (4) - spacing Fixed.
00:58:142 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round? Nah, that's unnecesary. Doing that little change would ruin all the next note's spacing.
02:18:870spinner start at here? No ;-;
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break Nope again, sorry.
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star.. Done
Good~!

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

Thanks a lot for your mod!

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

♪【i_k's Insane】diff

SPOILER

OD 6 or 7 plz, or people will get annoyed with a very low acc and this is a long song. 7
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO it is the same design with a different shape =v= so no
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot what?
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else? where?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5? what blocking?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half. =v= what copy?

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
... ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

IRC Mod Bla Bla Caca xD.

Mod

00:36 *mancusojuanmattos is editing (Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33143]
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : fuck que duda que me agarre
01:00 <Kei> : weee decime :3
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : en la Normal
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:56:779
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas entre un New Combo pero no se
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : porque despues me viene la duda mas adelante
01:01 <Kei> : ah
01:01 <Kei> : mm..
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:02:779 quizas remover el New Combo
01:02 <Kei> : bueno ese combo lo agrego
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : y agregarlo en 01:04:415
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : duda duda
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:02 <Kei> : fuuuu xD
01:03 <Kei> : mm
01:03 <Kei> : ami me parece que esta bien como esta
01:03 <Kei> : pero el primer combo que me dijiste
01:03 <Kei> : si es mejor
01:03 <Kei> : mm..
01:03 <Kei> : si c:
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : kei estas?
01:28 <Kei> : ah si
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : t hago el mod por aca nomas?
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : es poco
01:30 <Kei> : ok
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : bien
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : empiezo?
01:30 <Kei> : Si
01:30 <Kei> : que dificultad primero?
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : General
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : esto es re bobo pero ta
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : borra el .osb file de la carpeta y luego full submit
01:31 <Kei> : ah cierto o:
01:31 <Kei> : ok!
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : en Normal y Hard
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : Audio Lead-In 500 creo que esta bien
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : tarda mucho en empezar con 1004
01:33 <Kei> : listo
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : Normal y Hard de vuelta
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : desde 00:01:688-00:19:688
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : no escucho los soft hitnormal
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : suenan bajo
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : recien empiezo a escuchar los hitsound cuando agregas Hitfinishes y Hitwhistles
01:35 <Kei> : osea
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias subir el sample a 90%
01:35 <Kei> : 00:01:688 (1) -
01:35 <Kei> : desde ahi
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : siip
01:35 <Kei> : o.o hasta el break?
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : si
01:35 <Kei> : bien
01:35 <Kei> : voy :3
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : osea mapea toda la cancion con 90%
01:36 <Kei> : listo
01:36 <mancusojuanmattos> : ahora la Normal
01:37 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:19:142 (5)-
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : Suena fuera de lugar ese (5)
01:38 <Kei> : que tiene :3?
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : es raro
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : como que no me va en el tick blanco
01:39 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias moverlo 1/2 adelante
01:41 <Kei> : o.o
01:41 <Kei> : y y
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:41 <Kei> : pero pero pero
01:41 <Kei> : si le pongo eso
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : capaz que soy yo
01:41 <Kei> : no queda mejor si le pongo una nota
01:41 <Kei> : en
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:415 (6) -
01:42 <Kei> : digo
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:142 (5) -
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : no habia visto eso
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : buena idea
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:42 <Kei> : weeee :B
01:42 <Kei> : lo pongo xD
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : sigo
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:51:052 (3)-
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo por cambio de voz
01:45 <Kei> : agregado
01:45 <Kei> : o:
01:45 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:26:779 (6)-
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo de vuelta
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:48 <Kei> : O:
01:48 <Kei> : aver
01:48 <Kei> : cierto
01:48 <Kei> : listo :B
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:25:688 (x)-
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : Una Nota aqui + New Combo en esta nota
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : ya que la voz empieza aca
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : puedes apilarla con 02:26:233
01:50 <Kei> : si
01:50 <Kei> : eso iba a hacer xD
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : jaja
01:51 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que por el New Combo que hablamos hoy
01:52 <mancusojuanmattos> : deberia ir uno en 02:58:415 (3)-
01:52 <Kei> : o:!
01:52 <Kei> : agregado
01:53 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que en Normal nada mas
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : Hard
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:18:597 (1,1,1,1)-
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : No soy muy amante de este (1,1,1,1) usualmente no siguen la song
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que (1,2,3,4) juega mejor
01:57 <Kei> : voy
01:57 <Kei> : arreglaba una cosita
01:58 <Kei> : en cuanto a
01:58 <Kei> : eso de 1,1,1,1
01:58 <Kei> : podria sacar el new combo de la nota que esta en 00:19:006 -
01:58 <Kei> : y la siguiente
01:58 <Kei> : y dejar new combo en la ultima
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : si puede ser
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : queda mejor que 1,1,1,1
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> :
01:59 <Kei> : y
01:59 <Kei> : aver lo otro que me dijiste
02:00 <Kei> : ah nada
02:00 <Kei> : xD
02:00 <mancusojuanmattos> :
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:18:324 (5)-
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:01 <Kei> : o: cierto
02:01 <Kei> : xD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : al igual que en 01:22:688 (6)-
02:02 <Kei> : agregado tambien
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
02:02 <Kei> : cuantos errores se me pasan
02:02 <Kei> : XD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : son pequeñas cosas
02:03 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver creo que me queda una cosa
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:31:961 (7)-
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : encontre solo esas cosas
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : asdsasa
02:05 <Kei> : O:
02:05 <Kei> : listo! Gracias
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : ups creo que se me paso algo
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : te acordas del 1,1,1,1
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : que quedo en 1,2,3,1
02:06 <Kei> : si
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:37:142 usaste casi lo mismo con 1,2,3,4
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas al (4) debes agregrle un NC
02:08 <Kei> : cierto
02:08 <Kei> : para que quede igual o:

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* spinner-approachcircle is blend from spinner, try make it darker? Done.
* Inconsistent kiai time (Source : AIBat) puu.sh/cmbg Fixed.


Normal
00:42:597 (1) - Remove new combo? Like others? Ok!
00:46:415 (1,2,3) - This pattern is doesn't following the vocal, try make this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212572 ^
01:23:506 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for good rhythm? ^
02:07:142 (1) - Remove new combo for pattern? ^
02:25:688 (1) - Add whistle, since it's downbeat? ^
02:28:961 (7,8,1) - This stacks is makes boring for beginner, try making a good pattern? Now It's better, I guess.
02:30:324 (2) - This slider is kinda make sense if the slider is follow the vocal. Try move to 02:30:597, end at 02:31:142 and add note at 02:30:324. You should end up like this http://puu.sh/clYQ Done.
02:52:142 (1) - Would be nice if this move to 02:52:415, since the slider is fit to the vocal ^
03:21:324 (5) - Spacing error here Oh you're right. Fixed.

I've improved a bit this difficulty with your suggestions. Now it looks and sounds better.

Hard
* I like the blanket combo <3 Yay! c:

00:36:597 ~ 01:10:961 - This sections is lacks of hitsound, try adding whistle, like other diff Added whistles.
00:47:233 (2) - I don't like if this slider overlapper by previous slider (Nazi) It seems like noone likes it so I changed it.
01:20:233 (1) - Add whistle? Ok
01:54:052 (7,8) - I think these pattern is good for following vocal http://puu.sh/cm3u Sounds nice c:
02:05:370 (4) - Perhaps, replace this into a slider that end at 02:05:642 for following vocal? ^
02:18:461 (4) - Whistle at head slider is doesn't fit, IMO I like how it sounds there.
02:21:324 (1) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hard to understand for players, look at test mode Fixed.
02:26:233 (2) - ^ ^
02:29:097 (1) - Add whistle? Yeah.


Not bad for me, PM me for reheck (since this map is too old) Ok. I'm waiting for Kyon's update. Thank you~

Santa Claw wrote:

The creator is No.D, you should put the name in the Source/Tags. I added it to Source, since most of the Vocaloid songs have Creator Name in Source.
In i_k's insane, 01:24:052 (5) - LOL.
Besides the name of the creator, everything (diffs, hitsounds, etc.) is awesome and should be ranked Thanks for your help and support

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

i_k's Insane
* I agree with Lucifer, this diff is overmapped. If you have a stream (e.g. 00:04:415 (1,2,3,4,5)) or triplets (00:28:688 (3,4,5)), try ask yourself with one question : "Is this streams and triplets are fit to music?". If you say no, then you have to remove the notes inside the stream/triplets and change a new pattern - ok Ill change many stuff :3

00:30:324 (2,3) - Try make a same slider as 00:29:779 (1) to avoiding players for confusing
00:49:006 (4) - I feel this object is overlapped by hitbursts
00:56:506 (1) - End this slider at 00:56:779 and add note at 00:57:052 for following vocal?
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This finish hitsound are not fit, IMO
02:43:688 (8) - New combo for stanza? Like others?