Esupanitix wrote:

Oh hi.

Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds. I like how it looks D:

That's all.

Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant. Ok

01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly. Ok

01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.Ok
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark. Fixed. Just don't kill me o.ò

01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still) Ok

02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad. Ok

02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all. Ok

02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right. I like it in this way .-.

02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.

(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)

I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.

i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.


The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work. Fixed most of things. Thanks for your mod c:

Vortex wrote:

Hey there Hi /

Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo Uhmm.. I don't know :c If I remove that combo then the combo goes to 10 and I think that is a high combo number x.x I'll remove it if someone mentions it again.

I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good but I think this diff had enough improvement. Don't worry. It's ok c:

Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something... Really? ? Woohoo! That makes me happy c:

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least Don't worry n.n we all have a start :3 Good luck with your modding and thanks for checking my map~ ^u^

Vortex

Cirno wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here? Added.
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players Added.

[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better Ok
others fine for me

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ Thanks!! *-*

Vortex wrote:

Guest Diff you mean me right? =o
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^ fffffffffff
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me sound worst without it for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses fk yeah
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5 hmmmm iòmg
00:54:324 (1) Same like above asdfasdfasdfasdf
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle? why??
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2) where?
02:56:233 (6) New combo nope >w<
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo ^

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least =OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Vortex

Cirno wrote:

Hi hi :3~

[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles? ohmygodmyslidersareveryveryuglyx.x
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ? god no x3
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo fffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuu
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here? Im not symetrical but anyway
00:44:642 - add note? yeah
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo almost the same :/
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._. 1,0x spacing
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here. poison-chan :/
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly... ohmygodmyslidershapesareuglyasiam

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ ;w;

pieguy1372 wrote:

i_k's Insane: pieguy :3~

00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes? ok
00:18:188 (6) - ^ ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2) already fixed
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC wwwwwww
00:50:233 (3) - add NC uuuuuuu
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider cant remember when I put this O_o
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651 vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future Im sorry T^T
01:30:052 - reinsert this break somebody's fault
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs? nope =o
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC yup
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs? wwerwer
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4) =OOO
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~ .,.,.,.
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3) closer
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs? xvzvzxv
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)? hope maked it right T^T

Nice map~ thanks for you :3

GLF09 wrote:

Tengo el presentimiento de que te diste muchas stars
xD Y en cuanto a tí... El nuevo sistema de stars requiere que moddees maps de otras personas para dar prioridad a tu map, con el propósito de aprender de los demás maps de la gente. Ya no se pueden dar stars porque sí como antes, ahora valen Kudosu.. y si querés que tu map no quede ignorado vas a tener que usar los Kudosus en tu propio map ya que ahora gran mayoría las usará para sus propios maps.. si te dan una star ahora, a esa persona si que le gusto el map, o le interesó la canción. Es obvio que iba a tener muchas estrellitas mias ._. What's the point?

Keilara wrote:

._. What's the point?

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Ok~
00:12:597- Spacing cuz far Fixed
01:30:052- why break drag here ? Good question xDU Fixed

Hard
00:12:597- Remove new combo Uh no :c sorry.
00:13:142- New combo ^

Thanks!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja xDD

General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo Haha al rato lo converso con Kyon aver si cambia su tick rate o no.

Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo No.. pero en vez de ponerle New Combo a (5) se lo puse a (4).
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor Uh.. no :c lo siento ;u;''

Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien Ok
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo Hmm D: Lo dejaré como está y si alguien más lo menciona lo quito.
02:04:961 (2): New Combo ^

Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!! Jaja~ Gracias por todo! ya que hasta me moddeaste sin que yo te haya pedido c:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja



unrequested mod \o/

i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges queda vacio x3
01:26:233 (7): New Combo el nuevo combo tendria solo 3 objects
01:57:597 (5): New Combo nope o/
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH =o
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish?? suena bien sin el finish
02:53:501 (7): New Combo sadfasdfasdf
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle asfdaerwer

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

i_K's Insane
Fine~

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

Easy
01:18:052 (5) - New combo ? Ok
01:22:415 (5) - ^ Ok!
02:09:870 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1) w/o reverse slider Yeah
02:52:142 (1) - Move it somewhere to prevent overlap with (3) ^
02:55:688 (6) - One grid down Done

Hard
00:40:145 (7) - Align this with (5 and 6) ? Done

i_K's Insane
Fine~ Yay!
_______________________________________________-
That's all~ Thanks!

qilliam wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section

[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful Omg! Thanks a lot >//<
03:17:506 - useless timing section

poisonedblood wrote:

[Insane]

[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.

poisonedblood wrote:

[Hard]

[00:03:597] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[00:12:324] ^ I do (Again).
[00:37:688] Is this note necessary? Sounds weird without that note.
[01:09:733] Maybe start the spinner here? I think that's unrankeable.
[01:13:415] I don't find this note necessary. If I delete that note it would cut the rhythm.
[01:56:233] ^ Same as above. I put these notes to keep the player clicking something instead of waiting Gackpoid to sing again.
[02:05:370] Maybe move the circle on [02:05:506] here? I agree here~
[02:18:461] If you keep just a circle here you could start the spinner on [02:18:870]. Uhm no, I like how it is.
[02:22:279] Start the reverse arrow slider here, add a an arrow so it still ends where it did at first. D: I'll change this if someone mentions it again.
[02:24:324] Maybe start the spinner here. I think it sound less weird like this. Same as above about spinner.
[02:26:915] Add a circle? or add a slider from [02:26:915] - [02:27:052]. Sounds weird .-.
[02:27:188] Start the slider from [02:27:324] here. Make it longer so it ends where it originally ended. Why?
[02:30:324] Maybe extend the spinner so it ends here. I think it sounds better. Same thing I said about spinners.
[02:49:415] I don't find this note necessary. I do.
[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Well i'm not really sure about changing this, so i'll leave as it is till someone else mentions it.
[02:55:688] ^ ^
[02:58:415] Maybe remove the slider and just keep a circle here? That ruins the rhytm imo.
[03:02:506] I don't find this note necessary. But I do! Yes, again.
[03:06:870] ^ ^
[03:08:370] - [03:08:779] Maybe make a slider, or just move the circle from [03:08:506] to [03:08:370]. o_o
[03:17:097] Maybe end the slider here? No, sorry .-.
[03:21:733] Maybe move the circle from [03:21:870] here? That doesn't sound good o_o
[03:24:324] I don't find this note necessary. I do.

poisonedblood wrote:

I looked at the New Combos,
everything are small suggestions.
Feel free to ignore anything I said for insane though.
Star~ because I want to see this map ranked. Thanks *-* I'll do my best!

[Easy]

[02:07:142] Is this New Combo necessary? Uhmm I'm not sure about this. >o<


[Hard]

[02:52:415] Is this New Combo necessary? Again >o< Not sure.
[02:53:097] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:53:506]? Sorry but no ;u;
[02:54:188] Start the New combo here instead of on [02:54:597]? No >o<
[02:55:688] Is this New Combo necessary? Not sure about removing it.
[03:10:961] Maybe add a New Combo? Yeah :'D
[03:28:415] ^ Yes C:!

Thanks again for your help >o< I'll do my best to get this map ranked.

qilliam wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section

Removed

poisonedblood wrote:

Edit: For Insane the only problem I found that in some places the beats weren't on some lyric parts.
The note already placed go well with the beat, so I wanted to leave it up to you if you wanted to add something on those notes.

Teru21 wrote:

[i k's insane]
01:10:142 - http://puu.sh/7b93 - huh?
01:12:324 (1,2) - grid : 1 time to the right - time what?????.... just say 1 grid right <.<
01:25:961 (6) - grid: one time down b
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (only suggestion)http://puu.sh/7b9M ?
01:45:324 (5) - http://puu.sh/7bao - :/
02:39:052 (1) - 4 times up http://puu.sh/7baU b
02:40:142 (3) - 3 times down b

Takos wrote:

i_k's Insane[/color]
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - Make a neat triangle? http://puu.sh/7JXZ
01:03:324 (1) - This slider can have a beter shape~ yeah it can...
01:12:324 (1,2) - 1 grid right ↑
01:15:597 (6) - 1 grid left ffff
01:19:279 (4) - Ctrl+R? rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
01:22:415 (5) - Overlapping with previous notes doesn't look pretty ;w; overlap????
01:22:961 (1,2,3,4) - Position Suggestion~ http://puu.sh/7JZ2
02:02:506 (4,5,6) - Maybe place this in the middle of the triangle(1,2,3)? http://puu.sh/7JZA its on the base
02:39:052 (1,2,3,4) - Place this in the center~
02:46:688 (5) - 2 grids left

Neptunus wrote:

Genaral: i_k's insane: I suggest a Slider Tick Rate of 2 - no, thank you!!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey vaga no lo dejes morir please!!

Kei wrote:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey vaga no lo dejes morir please!!

ASDF! Es que estaba ocupada con el liceo D: Ya lo actualizo

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

♪Hihi~!
♪Here's my modding~!

♪General

SPOILER

♪delete .osb then fullsub again. Done
♪nothing else~! such a purple skin~!

♪【Hard】diff

SPOILER

00:43:688 (5) - left 1 grid? Uhm.. okay.
00:47:233 (2) - can u make it not blocking? I like how it is
00:51:052 (3,4,5) - these 3 can use a same symmetric shape and it will give u a better effect. Ok.
01:21:597 (4) - up 1 grid? Uh.. ok.
01:29:506 break right after the spinner http://puu.sh/adz7 Done.
02:34:142 (10,1) - i don't think a jump is suitable Sorry but I'll keep the jump.
02:37:142 (1,2,3,4) - jump~! Done.
02:49:415 (1) - remove? Nope, sorry.
02:58:142 (5) - remove finish at tail ^
03:18:597 (2) - just a suggestion:http://puu.sh/adzZ I think that the current one is okay.
This diff is a lot better than the insane... Well.. I didn't mapped the Insane. It's a guest difficulty.

and nice hit sound~! Thanks :3

♪【Normal】diff

SPOILER

00:19:142 00:19:688 actually u can add 2 notes.. Ok!
00:57:051 (4) - spacing Fixed.
00:58:142 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:506 (1,2,3) - make these more round? Nah, that's unnecesary. Doing that little change would ruin all the next note's spacing.
02:18:870spinner start at here? No ;-;
02:52:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about make this part like this?http://puu.sh/adBt this sound better to me, and u dont have a break, these slow notes can also be regarded as the break Nope again, sorry.
03:10:961 (3) - move this to form a better star.. Done
Good~!

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
Good luck~!
Since i am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

Thanks a lot for your mod!

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

♪【i_k's Insane】diff

SPOILER

OD 6 or 7 plz, or people will get annoyed with a very low acc and this is a long song. 7
00:27:597 (2) - up 1 grid?
00:33:597 (7) - better shape plz.. http://puu.sh/aduO it is the same design with a different shape =v= so no
01:00:052 (8) - better shape..
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump?
01:12:733 (3) - left 1 grid
01:24:052 (5) - better shape
01:45:324 (5) - ^
01:50:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust the note with the DS off, make the note on the same spot what?
01:57:597 (5) - NC
02:02:779 (5) - put it some where else? where?
02:03:870 (7) - not a good time for a jump.
02:05:506 (4) - may be like this?http://puu.sh/advP
02:06:597 (7) - NC
02:07:142 (1) - remove NC
02:08:779 (7) - NC
02:09:870 (1) - remove nc
02:11:233 (4) - NC
02:11:779 (1) - remove nc
02:12:733 (3) - NC
02:13:142 (6) - better shape
02:13:688 (1) - remove NC
02:15:051 (1) - remove NC
02:15:324 (2) - NC
02:20:506 (8) - NC?
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4) - can u make them not blocking 5? what blocking?
02:37:415 (1,2,3) - jump?
02:43:142 (6) - NC
02:54:597 (1) - better shape http://puu.sh/adwX
02:56:915Form here the NC was weird for me again...
03:29:506 (1,2,3,4) - move not blocking 5
in fact, this diff is like a rough copy in my view, everything is not that neat especially for the sliders. so plz make them better looking if possible. Also, add a break at the second half. =v= what copy?

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pay more effort to the insane diff~!
... ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

IRC Mod Bla Bla Caca xD.

Mod

00:36 *mancusojuanmattos is editing (Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33143]
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : fuck que duda que me agarre
01:00 <Kei> : weee decime :3
01:00 <mancusojuanmattos> : en la Normal
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:56:779
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas entre un New Combo pero no se
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : porque despues me viene la duda mas adelante
01:01 <Kei> : ah
01:01 <Kei> : mm..
01:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:02:779 quizas remover el New Combo
01:02 <Kei> : bueno ese combo lo agrego
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : y agregarlo en 01:04:415
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : duda duda
01:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:02 <Kei> : fuuuu xD
01:03 <Kei> : mm
01:03 <Kei> : ami me parece que esta bien como esta
01:03 <Kei> : pero el primer combo que me dijiste
01:03 <Kei> : si es mejor
01:03 <Kei> : mm..
01:03 <Kei> : si c:
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : kei estas?
01:28 <Kei> : ah si
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : t hago el mod por aca nomas?
01:28 <mancusojuanmattos> : es poco
01:30 <Kei> : ok
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : bien
01:30 <mancusojuanmattos> : empiezo?
01:30 <Kei> : Si
01:30 <Kei> : que dificultad primero?
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : General
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : esto es re bobo pero ta
01:31 <mancusojuanmattos> : borra el .osb file de la carpeta y luego full submit
01:31 <Kei> : ah cierto o:
01:31 <Kei> : ok!
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : en Normal y Hard
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : Audio Lead-In 500 creo que esta bien
01:32 <mancusojuanmattos> : tarda mucho en empezar con 1004
01:33 <Kei> : listo
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : Normal y Hard de vuelta
01:33 <mancusojuanmattos> : desde 00:01:688-00:19:688
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : no escucho los soft hitnormal
01:34 <mancusojuanmattos> : suenan bajo
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : recien empiezo a escuchar los hitsound cuando agregas Hitfinishes y Hitwhistles
01:35 <Kei> : osea
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias subir el sample a 90%
01:35 <Kei> : 00:01:688 (1) -
01:35 <Kei> : desde ahi
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : siip
01:35 <Kei> : o.o hasta el break?
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : si
01:35 <Kei> : bien
01:35 <Kei> : voy :3
01:35 <mancusojuanmattos> : osea mapea toda la cancion con 90%
01:36 <Kei> : listo
01:36 <mancusojuanmattos> : ahora la Normal
01:37 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:19:142 (5)-
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : Suena fuera de lugar ese (5)
01:38 <Kei> : que tiene :3?
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : es raro
01:38 <mancusojuanmattos> : como que no me va en el tick blanco
01:39 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que deberias moverlo 1/2 adelante
01:41 <Kei> : o.o
01:41 <Kei> : y y
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:41 <Kei> : pero pero pero
01:41 <Kei> : si le pongo eso
01:41 <mancusojuanmattos> : capaz que soy yo
01:41 <Kei> : no queda mejor si le pongo una nota
01:41 <Kei> : en
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:415 (6) -
01:42 <Kei> : digo
01:42 <Kei> : 00:19:142 (5) -
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : no habia visto eso
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : buena idea
01:42 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:42 <Kei> : weeee :B
01:42 <Kei> : lo pongo xD
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : sigo
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:51:052 (3)-
01:43 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo por cambio de voz
01:45 <Kei> : agregado
01:45 <Kei> : o:
01:45 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:26:779 (6)-
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo de vuelta
01:46 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
01:48 <Kei> : O:
01:48 <Kei> : aver
01:48 <Kei> : cierto
01:48 <Kei> : listo :B
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:25:688 (x)-
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : Una Nota aqui + New Combo en esta nota
01:49 <mancusojuanmattos> : ya que la voz empieza aca
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : puedes apilarla con 02:26:233
01:50 <Kei> : si
01:50 <Kei> : eso iba a hacer xD
01:50 <mancusojuanmattos> : jaja
01:51 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que por el New Combo que hablamos hoy
01:52 <mancusojuanmattos> : deberia ir uno en 02:58:415 (3)-
01:52 <Kei> : o:!
01:52 <Kei> : agregado
01:53 <mancusojuanmattos> : Creo que en Normal nada mas
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : Hard
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:54 <mancusojuanmattos> : 00:18:597 (1,1,1,1)-
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : No soy muy amante de este (1,1,1,1) usualmente no siguen la song
01:55 <mancusojuanmattos> : creo que (1,2,3,4) juega mejor
01:57 <Kei> : voy
01:57 <Kei> : arreglaba una cosita
01:58 <Kei> : en cuanto a
01:58 <Kei> : eso de 1,1,1,1
01:58 <Kei> : podria sacar el new combo de la nota que esta en 00:19:006 -
01:58 <Kei> : y la siguiente
01:58 <Kei> : y dejar new combo en la ultima
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : si puede ser
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> : queda mejor que 1,1,1,1
01:59 <mancusojuanmattos> :
01:59 <Kei> : y
01:59 <Kei> : aver lo otro que me dijiste
02:00 <Kei> : ah nada
02:00 <Kei> : xD
02:00 <mancusojuanmattos> :
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : 01:18:324 (5)-
02:01 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:01 <Kei> : o: cierto
02:01 <Kei> : xD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : al igual que en 01:22:688 (6)-
02:02 <Kei> : agregado tambien
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : xD
02:02 <Kei> : cuantos errores se me pasan
02:02 <Kei> : XD
02:02 <mancusojuanmattos> : son pequeñas cosas
02:03 <mancusojuanmattos> : dejame ver creo que me queda una cosa
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:31:961 (7)-
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : New Combo
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : encontre solo esas cosas
02:04 <mancusojuanmattos> : asdsasa
02:05 <Kei> : O:
02:05 <Kei> : listo! Gracias
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : ups creo que se me paso algo
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : te acordas del 1,1,1,1
02:06 <mancusojuanmattos> : que quedo en 1,2,3,1
02:06 <Kei> : si
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : 02:37:142 usaste casi lo mismo con 1,2,3,4
02:07 <mancusojuanmattos> : quizas al (4) debes agregrle un NC
02:08 <Kei> : cierto
02:08 <Kei> : para que quede igual o:

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

General
* spinner-approachcircle is blend from spinner, try make it darker? Done.
* Inconsistent kiai time (Source : AIBat) puu.sh/cmbg Fixed.


Normal
00:42:597 (1) - Remove new combo? Like others? Ok!
00:46:415 (1,2,3) - This pattern is doesn't following the vocal, try make this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212572 ^
01:23:506 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider for good rhythm? ^
02:07:142 (1) - Remove new combo for pattern? ^
02:25:688 (1) - Add whistle, since it's downbeat? ^
02:28:961 (7,8,1) - This stacks is makes boring for beginner, try making a good pattern? Now It's better, I guess.
02:30:324 (2) - This slider is kinda make sense if the slider is follow the vocal. Try move to 02:30:597, end at 02:31:142 and add note at 02:30:324. You should end up like this http://puu.sh/clYQ Done.
02:52:142 (1) - Would be nice if this move to 02:52:415, since the slider is fit to the vocal ^
03:21:324 (5) - Spacing error here Oh you're right. Fixed.

I've improved a bit this difficulty with your suggestions. Now it looks and sounds better.

Hard
* I like the blanket combo <3 Yay! c:

00:36:597 ~ 01:10:961 - This sections is lacks of hitsound, try adding whistle, like other diff Added whistles.
00:47:233 (2) - I don't like if this slider overlapper by previous slider (Nazi) It seems like noone likes it so I changed it.
01:20:233 (1) - Add whistle? Ok
01:54:052 (7,8) - I think these pattern is good for following vocal http://puu.sh/cm3u Sounds nice c:
02:05:370 (4) - Perhaps, replace this into a slider that end at 02:05:642 for following vocal? ^
02:18:461 (4) - Whistle at head slider is doesn't fit, IMO I like how it sounds there.
02:21:324 (1) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hard to understand for players, look at test mode Fixed.
02:26:233 (2) - ^ ^
02:29:097 (1) - Add whistle? Yeah.


Not bad for me, PM me for reheck (since this map is too old) Ok. I'm waiting for Kyon's update. Thank you~

Santa Claw wrote:

The creator is No.D, you should put the name in the Source/Tags. I added it to Source, since most of the Vocaloid songs have Creator Name in Source.
In i_k's insane, 01:24:052 (5) - LOL.
Besides the name of the creator, everything (diffs, hitsounds, etc.) is awesome and should be ranked Thanks for your help and support

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

i_k's Insane
* I agree with Lucifer, this diff is overmapped. If you have a stream (e.g. 00:04:415 (1,2,3,4,5)) or triplets (00:28:688 (3,4,5)), try ask yourself with one question : "Is this streams and triplets are fit to music?". If you say no, then you have to remove the notes inside the stream/triplets and change a new pattern - ok Ill change many stuff :3

00:30:324 (2,3) - Try make a same slider as 00:29:779 (1) to avoiding players for confusing
00:49:006 (4) - I feel this object is overlapped by hitbursts
00:56:506 (1) - End this slider at 00:56:779 and add note at 00:57:052 for following vocal?
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This finish hitsound are not fit, IMO
02:43:688 (8) - New combo for stanza? Like others?

Leorda wrote:

@ikari_kyon - hm? ovo

I still found the unnecessary stream/triplets on this diff. Here the list of unncessary stream/triplets. You can agree/disagree the stuff but you must have a reason

00:21:870 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)
00:26:233 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)
00:30:870 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
01:04:961 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:14:779 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:16:415 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
01:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
02:29:506 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
02:36:052 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary
02:46:415 (3,4,5,6,7) <- Not fit to the song in calm part
03:12:052 (1,2,3,4,5) <- Not sure if this unnecessary

Correct me if I am wrong, also sorry for point out the stream, ikari_kyon. Also, I really sorry for modder if my mod is stupid

ikari_kyon wrote:

yey after irc stuff with Leorda x3

Edit: pag. 9 <3

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hitcircle.png
 hitcircleoverlay.png
 approachcircle.png

Katsuri wrote:

General

hitcircle.png
 hitcircleoverlay.png
 approachcircle.png

You need to add these 3 skin elements and then full-submit.
I will mod later when I get back home..
I hope to help you improve your map.

In the morning I pop bubbles and then mod them at night if they are popped.

Garven wrote:

[General]
Actually, since you have the reverse arrow skinned, you -do- need to add the rest of the hitcircle-specific elements. I deleted the reverse arrow because I don't know how to skin hitcircle elements and I neither know which hitcircle would fit with the map current skin and song.
Also, set your hitburst dimensions to 256x256 while you're there. Done

[Normal]
00:46:688 (2,3) - Was kind of weird having this stacked considering your other 3 1/2 rhythms' patterns... Unstacked
02:21:324 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. Try to give at least two beats for recovery. I replaced the slider (1) with a circle, and placed it at 02:21:870.
02:36:597 (5,1,1) - Kind of wary of this spacing here. Uhm I tried another spacing now. It's better now, I guess.

[Hard]
00:54:324 (3,1) - This is a pretty big jump for this level of difficulty. Reduced jump.
00:57:733 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:26:915 (7,8) - Strange that these weren't stacked considering the pattern earlier... You're right. I stacked them now.
02:48:597 (2) - I can understand the first one just being a long slider due to the pace of the song, but this one? Why another long slider? I replaced that slider with circles that follow the vocals. Now it's way better <3
03:04:961 (1,2,3) - Quite the large spacing there. Feels a bit too much considering the rest of the map goes back to the close spacing distance snap. Removed jump between these 3 notes.

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
HP Drain -1
Tick rate 2
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit what's going on in the music. :/
01:25:824 (5,6) - misaligned
01:38:233 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can't see anything here. Please try a different pattern.

SPOILER

• 
  Stuff:

1. Spread could have been better, an even easier difficulty could have been very nice, since the current Normal is probably very hard for a new player.
   Skin:
2. I don't get why the slider ball has so few frames, it makes it look as if it was rolling veeery fast :C
3. On the spinner-background.png image:
   
   You know that could have gone smoother
   Also, is that "white" part transparent? And is that intentional? I mean I can see the background back there:
   
4. Well you coooouuuuld, thorically, force other skin elements so that other skins wouldn't "overlap" with yours.
   For example if a user has a skin with a custom hitcircle that has nothing to do with this map at all, he'll still get it but won't get the hitbursts, becuase you are forcing them.
   Metadata:
5. I googled, but couldn't find what the current source, No.D, is. I'd like to ask just to clear things up.
   Timing:
6. I don't agree with the place where the offset has been set, since there is no "music" until 00:01:688 -. I'd suggest the Offset to be there (1688 ms), and then I'd add another red section to fix the metronome at 00:02:233 -. You might wanna double check with somebody else, maybe Garven?

1. 00:19:142 (5) - May I suggest a new combo here? Looks good with the music
2. 00:51:051 (1) - I don't really get the point of this new combo. I get you followed the vocals but it's totally not consistent with you previous combos. At the very least, you could do something like 00:45:324 (1,2,3) - and remove the new combo at 00:51:051 (1) - , then add it at 00:50:779 (2) - :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Some combos go up to 8, that shouldn't happen in the easiest difficulties. Be more careful next time.

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi!

Well things to mention:

[General]

• 
  Stuff:

1. Spread could have been better, an even easier difficulty could have been very nice, since the current Normal is probably very hard for a new player.
   Skin:
2. I don't get why the slider ball has so few frames, it makes it look as if it was rolling veeery fast :C D: Added more slider ball frames.
3. On the spinner-background.png image:
   
   You know that could have gone smoother xD I fixed this too. Now it looks good.
   Also, is that "white" part transparent? And is that intentional? I mean I can see the background back there: Yup, that's intentional.
   
4. Well you coooouuuuld, thorically, force other skin elements so that other skins wouldn't "overlap" with yours.
   For example if a user has a skin with a custom hitcircle that has nothing to do with this map at all, he'll still get it but won't get the hitbursts, becuase you are forcing them. Asdf well I made a hitcircle and added it in this update (I added the reverse arrow, sliderborder, hitcircleoverlay and approach circle too obviously ).
   Metadata:
5. I googled, but couldn't find what the current source, No.D, is. I'd like to ask just to clear things up.Like Garven said, he's the artist.
   Timing:
6. I don't agree with the place where the offset has been set, since there is no "music" until 00:01:688 -. I'd suggest the Offset to be there (1688 ms), and then I'd add another red section to fix the metronome at 00:02:233 -. You might wanna double check with somebody else, maybe Garven?

No changes because Garven said that the metronome it's ok.

[Normal]

1. 00:19:142 (5) - May I suggest a new combo here? Looks good with the music Okay.
2. 00:51:051 (1) - I don't really get the point of this new combo. I get you followed the vocals but it's totally not consistent with you previous combos. At the very least, you could do something like 00:45:324 (1,2,3) - and remove the new combo at 00:51:051 (1) - , then add it at 00:50:779 (2) - : ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. Some combos go up to 8, that shouldn't happen in the easiest difficulties. Be more careful next time.

Ok that's all for now I guess, call me back later so I can recheck this. Ok! thank you :3

Garven wrote:

Oh, I can't believe I missed this, but in Hard: 00:54:324 (3,1) - This jump still feels pretty big. Think you can tone it down a tad more? Done.

ikari_kyon wrote:

The work of the people, not just our work, please notice that we are on the 10th page now, and send to the garbage all the people's work, mod post, star, kudostar (that was very expensive on some past time), the effort of Leorda has spent here trying to bubble us and many more stuff is something to considerate of.

Garven wrote:

I'm saddened at the tone of the replies, especially with the reasoning of having to find more MAT/BAT to mod/rank when you have two BATs offering assistance.

iMercurial wrote:

Is just a stupid idea (Like Kei said)