[General]
Hard 0%. you....
well make it at about 4m~7m score.
Is there a need to have the 1st offset (70BPM one)? if not remove it plz.
Maybe add a mute sliderslide? Because this song is so slow at first part and last part, the sliderslide sound could be too loud to hear imo.
[Normal]
01:09:703 (4) - whistle at the beginning?
01:16:103 (4) - ^
01:28:903 (4) - this is ugly....
02:18:503 (1) - wow
02:23:753 (3,4,1) - do you think it's a bit too much for a easiest diff? i think a 1/2 repeat slider start from 02:23:753 is already enough.
02:32:753 (4,1) - this is a little unexpected because you're mainly follow 1/1 beats, a slider suddenly follow the vocal here seems out of space.
03:11:003 (1) - in Normal it sounds not that good, maybe just use a spinner instead?
03:24:503 (2) - i suggest you still could use whistle in this part, here's my suggestion (o=normal, x=whistle)
oxxoxoo oxxoxxo oxo oxoox o x ox o x ox o x
[darkness...]
00:58:203 - what about add a 1/8 repeat (twice) slider here?
01:04:103 (2) - i suggest make it left and down somewhere... i'll read this and next (1) a 1/2 note.
02:11:503 (3,4,5) - this triple sounds not so good to me...
02:23:846 (4,6) - remove these 2 beats sounds better to me
02:54:315 (4) - this notes is really in a place i didn't expect.... the flow seems strange here, try a simple placement? (make (1) up a bit if you think it's needed)
03:24:503 (1) - seems you didn't add hitsounds at this part on purpose...whatever. But in Normal the hitsound change is really not obvious (because not enough beats there)
04:03:074 (7) - whistle at the beginning?
Hard 0%. you....
well make it at about 4m~7m score.
Is there a need to have the 1st offset (70BPM one)? if not remove it plz.
Maybe add a mute sliderslide? Because this song is so slow at first part and last part, the sliderslide sound could be too loud to hear imo.
[Normal]
01:09:703 (4) - whistle at the beginning?
01:16:103 (4) - ^
01:28:903 (4) - this is ugly....
02:18:503 (1) - wow
02:23:753 (3,4,1) - do you think it's a bit too much for a easiest diff? i think a 1/2 repeat slider start from 02:23:753 is already enough.
02:32:753 (4,1) - this is a little unexpected because you're mainly follow 1/1 beats, a slider suddenly follow the vocal here seems out of space.
03:11:003 (1) - in Normal it sounds not that good, maybe just use a spinner instead?
03:24:503 (2) - i suggest you still could use whistle in this part, here's my suggestion (o=normal, x=whistle)
oxxoxoo oxxoxxo oxo oxoox o x ox o x ox o x
[darkness...]
00:58:203 - what about add a 1/8 repeat (twice) slider here?
01:04:103 (2) - i suggest make it left and down somewhere... i'll read this and next (1) a 1/2 note.
02:11:503 (3,4,5) - this triple sounds not so good to me...
02:23:846 (4,6) - remove these 2 beats sounds better to me
02:54:315 (4) - this notes is really in a place i didn't expect.... the flow seems strange here, try a simple placement? (make (1) up a bit if you think it's needed)
03:24:503 (1) - seems you didn't add hitsounds at this part on purpose...whatever. But in Normal the hitsound change is really not obvious (because not enough beats there)
04:03:074 (7) - whistle at the beginning?