1. Hard (4.42 stars, 401 notes)
2. Lunatic (4.75 stars, 581 notes)
3. Normal (2.68 stars, 234 notes)

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Hard 0%. you....
well make it at about 4m~7m score. you read my mind o.o though I might get someone else to make one because I'm lazy
Is there a need to have the 1st offset (70BPM one)? if not remove it plz. That's there just because when timing it I did that first. I'll leave it so that the metronome is correct in that part, though.
Maybe add a mute sliderslide? Because this song is so slow at first part and last part, the sliderslide sound could be too loud to hear imo. Done

[Normal]
01:09:703 (4) - whistle at the beginning? Added
01:16:103 (4) - ^ ^
01:28:903 (4) - this is ugly.... Fixed
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02:18:503 (1) - wow is that good or bad?
02:23:753 (3,4,1) - do you think it's a bit too much for a easiest diff? i think a 1/2 repeat slider start from 02:23:753 is already enough. Fixed
02:32:753 (4,1) - this is a little unexpected because you're mainly follow 1/1 beats, a slider suddenly follow the vocal here seems out of space. I think it's fine, I used a few of those sliders before it and it fits IMO
03:11:003 (1) - in Normal it sounds not that good, maybe just use a spinner instead? Done
03:24:503 (2) - i suggest you still could use whistle in this part, here's my suggestion (o=normal, x=whistle) Done
oxxoxoo oxxoxxo oxo oxoox o x ox o x ox o x

[darkness...]
00:58:203 - what about add a 1/8 repeat (twice) slider here? Done
01:04:103 (2) - i suggest make it left and down somewhere... i'll read this and next (1) a 1/2 note. Moved a bit
02:11:503 (3,4,5) - this triple sounds not so good to me... I like it as is
02:23:846 (4,6) - remove these 2 beats sounds better to me IMO, it sounds better as is
02:54:315 (4) - this notes is really in a place i didn't expect.... the flow seems strange here, try a simple placement? (make (1) up a bit if you think it's needed) Changed
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03:24:503 (1) - seems you didn't add hitsounds at this part on purpose...whatever. But in Normal the hitsound change is really not obvious (because not enough beats there) That's correct, but what you suggested sounds nice, so added
04:03:074 (7) - whistle at the beginning? Done

• 
  Your mp3 file is 320 kbps.
  Re-encode please.

1. 00:35:303 (3) - It's far from (2). Down 1 grid.
2. 03:47:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm...it's beatiful formation like star, but I think newbie can't read it.
3. 03:59:703 (4) - Extend it to 04:00:103?

• 
  Great diff!
  There is only one thing I can suggest you.

1. 01:49:503 (6) - Remove a finish-sound.
2. 01:49:703 (1) - Add a finish-sound.

• 
  How about renaming this diff to "Darkness..."?
  
  There are many x1.0 sliders...
  For example, 01:28:503 (3,1,2,3,4).
  These patterns are hard to read and prevente the flow of play.
  Please do something such as add a new combo.

1. 01:23:103 (1,2,3,4) - Remove a new combo at (1), and add at (2)?
2. 01:45:703 (1,2) - The players wii be confused by this narrow spacing imo. How about moving (2) to x:472,y:176?
3. 02:32:753 (1,2,3) - ^ So make 02:32:565 (11,1) closer.
4. 02:35:753 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - OMG these notes don't follow drum's sound. Put them like this.
   
5. 04:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wow cool formation!

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request~ thanks for accepting it~

[General]

• 
  Your mp3 file is 320 kbps.
  Re-encode please. Oops. I'll fix it later

[Normal]

1. 00:35:303 (3) - It's far from (2). Down 1 grid. Fixed
2. 03:47:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm...it's beatiful formation like star, but I think newbie can't read it. I'm not sure about this, I've kept it as is but if more people complain I'll fix it
3. 03:59:703 (4) - Extend it to 04:00:103? I like it as is

[Hard]

• 
  Great diff! thanks~
  There is only one thing I can suggest you.

1. 01:49:503 (6) - Remove a finish-sound. done, and added a whistle~
2. 01:49:703 (1) - Add a finish-sound. Done

[darkness...]

• 
  How about renaming this diff to "Darkness..."? I think "darkness..." looks nicer. oAo If more people want, I'll change it
  
  There are many x1.0 sliders...
  For example, 01:28:503 (3,1,2,3,4).
  These patterns are hard to read and prevente the flow of play.
  Please do something such as add a new combo. Most of them already have a new combo, but I've added new combos on the ones that don't. I didn't change the x1.0 though, because I think it fits and the people I asked to test thought it played fine. If more people want me to, I'll change it though~

1. 01:23:103 (1,2,3,4) - Remove a new combo at (1), and add at (2)? Fixed
2. 01:45:703 (1,2) - The players wii be confused by this narrow spacing imo. How about moving (2) to x:472,y:176? Fixed~
3. 02:32:753 (1,2,3) - ^ So make 02:32:565 (11,1) closer. this one IMO is a bit easier to read, but I've changed it a little~
4. 02:35:753 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - OMG these notes don't follow drum's sound. Put them like this. Fixed
   
5. 04:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wow cool formation! thanks~

That's all.
Nice song and mapset!
I think [darkness] is kinda easy for Insane/Lunatic
Good luck~ thanks a lot for mod+star~

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

Nooooo Suzully took my line of: mp3 file is 320 bps hehe

darkness.....

00:58:203 (1) - This should start at 00:58:303 and end at 00:58:503? I know that it would make it have 3 repeats, and you can clearly hear an extra note, but tha extra note is located on a 1/16'th using current bpm. Oh great, I can't decide whether to do this or leave it as is. I've left it as is, but I might change it if more people want
01:07:703 (5) - It's better using normal-hitnormal for this slider rather than the soft whistles (check your hard difficulty) Changed
02:40:253 (5) - I thought that this note was in a 1/4 tick, it might be because of spacing lol Hm, I think it should be fine (but if more people want I'll change it)
04:03:074 (7) - Are you aware that this slider is currently unrankable? Although I would let it pass because of the absence of slider ticks, thus making combo break because of this slider almost impossible, although other people may disagree with me. it is? o.o I think it fits and the people I asked to test had no problem reading it, so it shouldn't be a problem


Hard:

02:18:503 - Consider adding a circle here, and start spinner 1/4 later Added

Rest is fine.

Nice map, really enjoyed playing darknessssssssssssssssssssssssss thanks for mod+star~

Cheer-no wrote:

[General]

Oh no, high bitrate! That's been pointed out twice by now, though, ummm...
Your MP3 file is more than 10 MB, that's bad! (Except shrinking the bitrate will bring it under so uhhh... never mind!)

[Normal]

01:50:503 (2) - I dunno, it feels a bit odd having the slider end under the hitburst from a previous note. You don't have to change it if you don't want! I think it's fine as is
03:30:903 (1) - Sounds to me like it should start at 03:31:103 and repeat one less time. I mapped it this way because if I started it on a 1/2 tick it might be a bit confusing, but if more people want I'll change it~

[Hard]
01:28:903 (1) - remove new combo here, I think it's fine as is, I put a new combo every 4 beats
01:30:103 (3) - add one here and ^
01:30:503 (1) - take out this one? Up to you though, really. ^

Nothing really wrong here! Well, I could do some nazi modding with some sliders that aren't the exact same shape as other ones, but I'll spare you that.

[darkness...]

02:20:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can't read this combo very well, it suddenly changes patterns in the middle of it. Maybe move 5 out from 3's hitburst and give it a new combo? I think it's fine as is
03:54:903 (8,9,10) - This doesn't feel like it should be a triplet, up to you though I think it's fine as is
04:03:074 (7) - This slider plays better than you'd think it would! Don't change it! thanks~

Bah, I can't mod Insanes good... so much stuff that looks confusing in the editor but actually plays well ingame! I guess it's subjective.

Best of luck getting this ranked! Star~ thanks for mod+star~

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Just to be cool like the rest, I will mention mp3 too
Just curious why do you have two uninherited timing section if you didn't map the first part :L Maybe remove it? I put it there because I timed it first~ Anyway, I will keep it because it makes the metronome correct
Use tickrate 2 for all diff. It sounds better. no, it sounds wrong IMO
I would probably remove "to" and "the" in the tags since it's too general. it's the name of the original theme
Normal:
01:28:903 (4) - It looks like you were being aiming for symmetry for this slider. Maybe make the slider first then rotate it so it will be easier? Changed a bit
03:25:703 (2,1,2,1) - I didn't know what they were following till I lowered volume. Lower volume to 30%? Although I think it would be better to map to the vocals because you were following that. (I don't think normal player might realize you were following the "tingjinglysoundwhateverit'scalled" thing in the background. I prefer to keep it at 50%, because that part of the song is loud enough. Also, I like how I mapped it there~
03:47:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Star looks crunched up and doesn't look nice with lots of approach circles too. Maybe this one. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130392 or another choice. okay, I changed it

Hard:
02:11:503 (3,4,5) - Can't exactly agree with this since it follows nothing and the sliders after it doesn't have this triple too. I would say remove it. Or just keep the 4 if you want it consistent. Kept it as is, it follows the violin in the background

Darkness:
Kinda grammar nazing, but capitalize D in Darkness? :L as said before I think "darkness..." looks nicer oAo I'll change it if more people want me to, though
02:11:503 (3,4,5,6) - Yea same thing, kinda follows nothing for me :L same as Hard

Nothing much to add. D: (or that I can find that bothers me) thanks for mod+star~

wcx19911123 wrote:

sorry for the huge delay that's fine
from my que

[General]
your mp3 file is 320 kbps , make it 128-192kbps plz , don't forget to change timing all right I finally reencoded it...also the timing appears to be the same o.o
I suggest you to use a silenced sliderside.wav I already have a silenced soft-sliderslide.wav, and I'm not sure about adding a normal one

[Normal]
00:59:303 (1) - start at 00:58:903 ? I dunno, it's hard to say I've kept it as is for now, but I'll change it if more people want
01:20:903 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/4nsU (beat snap=1/3) I think it's fine as is, for the easiest diff I'd rather not have the player hit on a 1/8 (1/3 seems off, so it would go 3/8, 6/8, then 8/8)
01:32:103 (4,2) - stack better Fixed~
01:33:703 (2,3,4) - same ^
02:18:503 (1) - cool slider thanks owo
03:06:503 (1,2,3) - same ^
03:34:103 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/4ntt http://puu.sh/4ntz Changed
03:59:703 (4) - I do know that you want to follow the music , but it is not good to play , end at 04:00:103 ? I think it's fine as is

[Hard]
02:33:034 (3) - move to 02:32:940 The vocal here is somewhat off time, so I'm keeping it where it is
02:45:034 (4) - same ^
03:11:003 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4nup I think it's fine as is
03:34:103 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/4nuu Changed

[darkness...] ← rename to Darkness I think it looks nicer as is, though I'll change it if more people want
01:17:703 (2) - back arrow hidden by hit300.png It should be fine, it's mostly visible~
02:33:034 (2) - same Same as hard
02:45:034 (4) - ^ ^
03:09:034 (2) - ^ ^

nice map thanks for mod~

Weezy wrote:

General
- Try a silent normal-slider.wav added~

Normal
inb4unrankablenoEasy if I made an Easy it'd be too similar to the Normal D: plus Normal is easy enough~

03:25:703 (2) - I'm not sure about this, too much repeats for a pretty simple diff and could be considered hard. Try this maybe? I think it's fine as is
03:28:103 (1) - ^same ^
03:59:703 (4) - Extend it to the red tick I like this how it is

darkness... <--capital D here? ...renamed >.<

That is all thanks for mod~ (ノﾟωﾟ)ノ

pieguy1372 wrote:

wow, amazing! >w< Added, thanks a lot for making it~

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Already pointed it out on IRC but remove Komeji Yuki from tags because all they provided was a SB, tags are to find maps from the user, not SBs, and the user can credit him/herself on the SB if they do want, since they made it, they could easily put that somewhere. done~

[Timing]
After sitting at it for an hour i got this:

timing is really weird here anyways that's the best i could get, please remember to realign timing section specially kiai and hitsounds. sorry, but I think this timing is really off at some parts, and I think my timing is fine

[Darkness...]
Why is this the only diff with a custom name? make more sense across all your diffs, or rename this to Lunatic. I like this diff name >.<

[b][Normal]/b]
03:25:703 (2) and all others. - Def remove these sliders or change into something else, newbies wont know how long to hold (or if they should hold at all) fixed >_<

Pretty good, when fixes are done i can come back and bubble check this~
Good Luck! thanks for mod

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