Lalarun wrote:

Bubbled

val0108 wrote:

Ranked

ykcarrot wrote:

[Mercurius]
03:02:586 (1) - too far from center. you have two more same pattern before this, but they are on the spinner's border line.
03:24:186 (1) - this is fine. bcuz previous spinner is pretty long.

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there~

[General]
Offset : 1225 (+10ms from current. current offset is too early to me.) fixed

[Insane]
00:36:529 (1) - this 0.5x slider doesn't fit at music IMO. fixed
01:19:386 (8) - new combo fixed
01:20:072 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:20:586 (3,1) - weird feeling to me. change it to like second chorus? 02:15:443 (6,1) fixed
01:53:672 ~ 02:18:357 - copy
02:59:500 ~ 03:23:500 - paste. people may look you are lazy. The change and notes of a part of arrangement were added

_LRJ_ wrote:

I was mapping this ;_;

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3-4 months ago

ykcarrot wrote:

[Lalarun]
00:50:586 (1,2,3,4) - eh... overmap? D:
03:10:129 (1) - remove new combo. symmetry note was there.
03:10:986 (1,1) - remove new combo

Kite wrote:

[Timing]
Offset is a bit early, try adding ~+12 ms It changes with MOD of ykcarrot ><

[General]
Raise volume on all diffs please! 60% is so quiet for this song... can barely hear the hitsounds ok. It has raised it a little

[Insane]
00:27:110 (1) - end spinner here 00:28:139? fixed
00:28:482 - Begin combo here? Also try remapping the part after the first spinner a bit to follow music a bit more, atm its kind of a hassle and random imo >< It makes it as it is though it tried variously because it is not suitable for the following hitting repeatedly
01:15:625 - Add beat? fixed

Everything seems okay to me
_____________

We talked about the other diff on irc, well sorry for the delay of this mod orz.. got quite busy yesterday and I couldnt finish checking the mapset. Quite solid and fun.

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00:46:139 - she just farted ... (lol lyrics)

Kite wrote:

[Normal]
00:52:824 (4,6) - remove those imo, breaking the flow from the rest of the map and makes it unneccessarily harder
01:47:682 (4,6) - ^

val0108 wrote:

modreqsで見付けた

[ちょこさん]
00:27:110 (1) - スピン最後00:28:482 - にもってこよう
00:43:053 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/4cJA　こんな感じで綺麗に囲もう
00:46:482 (4) - 00:45:624 (2) - の最後に重ねて置く？綺麗にはなるよ。ｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞ調整忘れずに
00:48:882 (7) - new combo
01:13:053 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/4cJN　だんだん上に向かっていくように置くと綺麗になる。
02:37:396 (1) - 02:37:567 - スピンスタート
03:04:653 (6) - ３gridくらい右

[すぎさん]
AR-1
スピンの後のノートが遠くにあることが多かったです。ノーマルプレイ者にはとても難しいです。スピンの後のノートを真ん中周辺に移動させるかスピンのタイミングを変えてください。
00:40:996 (3) - スライダーの最後を00:41:510 - へ
00:46:482 (3) - スライダーの最後を00:46:996 - へ
00:47:510 (4) - ^を動かした後に00:47:339 - へ（動かしたらｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞ調整を忘れずに）
00:49:224 (3) - 00:49:053 - ここへ。その後スライダーの最後を00:49:910 -
01:09:796 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/4cHO　お勧め。ｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞ調整をを忘れずに
01:35:853 (3) - 00:40:996と同じ。
01:41:339 (3,4) - 同じく
01:44:082 (3) - 同じく
02:04:653 (1,2,3) - 同じく
03:10:482 (1,2,3) - ^

1. I still like OD5 XD
2. 01:05:682 (2) - just my opinion , I will prefer notes here , slider feels discouraged here.
3. 01:06:539 (x) - Add a note here?
4. 01:15:539 (x) - ^ Add a Don here? O ooo O ooo Sounds better for me
5. 01:16:053 (6) - ^ Yeah, you know =w=
6. 01:16:482 (2) - Don? i prefer X o X
7. Nice job.

KanaRin wrote:

As per Ono's request.
天子! like this song <3
Btw.Some modding info.

Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.

Let's go.

[Ono's Taiko Oni]

1. I still like OD5 XD oh you.... xD
2. 01:05:682 (2) - just my opinion , I will prefer notes here , slider feels discouraged here. I agree, changed to ddk kkd k
3. 01:06:539 (x) - Add a note here? done
4. 01:15:539 (x) - ^ Add a Don here? O ooo O ooo Sounds better for me yes sir~!
5. 01:16:053 (6) - ^ Yeah, you know =w=
6. 01:16:482 (2) - Don? i prefer X o X Wow, you are good. @@ changed~
7. Nice job. Thx~

just few problem I can find.
That's all suggestion =w=
Good job~

Ok, star for this.

kokoroanime wrote:

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Open up.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Insane]

02:46:053 (4) - Move this up one grid, it just makes the rest of the combo look strange ?_? fixed!!
Other than that, no real problems here.

I apologize profusely for taking so long to mod this beast; hopefully this gets you one step closer to ranked/approved Status =D

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Lalarun's Hard]

00:31:482 (1) - I advise people not to place Spinners 1/4 after a note, as the Spinner will appear while there are still active notes on the screen, causing confusion. Move forward by 1/4, then shorten by 1/4 to compensate. OK
00:36:967 (1) - Same story here. Move forward 1/4, Shorten by 1/4. OK
01:04:824 (7,8) - I'd suggest moving 7 and 8 out from under each other, as Notes over any part of a Slider is discouraged.
01:06:882 (4,5) - Same here for 4 and 5.
01:35:510 (3,4,5) - Move 3 and 4 out from above 5, please.
02:01:053 (2) - Move this from under 3, maybe something more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/139637
02:09:282 (4) - This just looks messy being partially hidden under the previous slider. Please move out from under (3). I'd also suggest vertically flipping this, so it looks more like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/139639
02:54:882 (2) - The other sliders under sliders were borderline fine, but this slider is virtually hidden. Please rearrange this part of the combo so 2 is visible

1. 01:20:596 (T) - how about 1 more note on the starting circle of 01:20:082 (3)?
2. 01:20:596 (1) - of course, start this at 01:20:682 if you choose to apply the upper one.
3. uhh, you're using some soft-C2 hitsounds, but I didn't find any in the folder o.o

1. ehh, you're using normal-hitnormal.wav as normal-hitclap, that's quite weired to hear an 'echoed' normalhit when hitting the clap-note. you shoud really find another normal-hitclap for this diff.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Normal]:

1. ehh, you're using normal-hitnormal.wav as normal-hitclap, that's quite weired to hear an 'echoed' normalhit when hitting the clap-note. you shoud really find another normal-hitclap for this diff.

1. 01:20:596 (T) - how about 1 more note on the starting circle of 01:20:082 (3)?done!
2. 01:20:596 (1) - of course, start this at 01:20:682 if you choose to apply the upper one.done!
3. uhh, you're using some soft-C2 hitsounds, but I didn't find any in the folder o.ooops,mistake.done

Mercurius wrote:

Colin Hou wrote:

[Normal]:

1. ehh, you're using normal-hitnormal.wav as normal-hitclap, that's quite weired to hear an 'echoed' normalhit when hitting the clap-note. you shoud really find another normal-hitclap for this diff.

added normal-crap2.wav

nooodl wrote:

Sweet map.

Easy
Looks fine!

Normal
01:09:796 (1), 02:04:653 (1), 03:10:482 (1) - end one red tick earlier
01:20:767 (1,1) - two spinners?
03:04:996 (1,3) - make these sliders ending on 03:05:510 and 03:06:196, maybe

Hard
01:35:510 (3,4,5) - uglyish.
01:40:310 (2) - emptyness after this seems to break the flow a bit. Add slider to next red tick
03:07:053 (3,4) - what is this mapped to?

Not modding higher diffs; I tend to suck at doing that. (0108 style looked ugly, though. What's with the jaggy sliders at 02:56:767 (1,2)?)