Just go through a quick check and no main problems found.
/me shoot a star.
/me shoot a star.
fixakrolsmir wrote:
You posted on my queue a long time ago orz.... here's my mod.
General:
The center circle for the spinner is very hard to see, maybe color it black or something so it's visible?
You do know that there are different colors throughout different difficulties, right? (in case this was an oversight).
Rinko:
00:30:165 (1,3) - A bit too square to be wrapping around (2), fix by adding more nodes.
00:32:458 (5) - Not symmetric
01:39:337 (1) - Move up to fit against (5), don't forget to adjust rest of combo accordingly.
01:53:859 (1) - Curve is a bit too sharp to wrap against a circle.
Manaka:
00:55:770 (1) - Don't think this needs to be a new combo
01:08:381 (4) - Not symmetrical, and doesn't wrap around (1) properly.
01:50:228 (4) - placement feels awkward, would have expected it to continue the flow from the arc at (3).
01:55:006 (3) - Asymmetrical
02:00:356 (1) - move endpoint up one grid so it points into (2).
02:23:668 (5) - Too flat against (4)
Nene:
All notes before 00:07:426 - I think the combos are placed kinda randomly, maybe reset the combos before here, then place them at:
00:00:356 (1) -
00:03:031 (1) -
00:06:088 (1) -
If you want shorter combos, then you can also place them on:
00:01:884 (1) -
00:04:941 (1) -
00:29:591 (1) - not NC
Love Plus:
00:03:413 (1) - Looks ugly scrunched up like that, try making symmetric and with more arc.
00:26:916 (3) - Symmetry- raise endpoint by one grid, right 1 grid.
01:14:305 (5) - A bit too sharp
02:58:827 (1,2,3) - Not quite rotationally symmetrical; it'd be best to pick on slider, copy twice more, and rotate those by 120 and 240 degrees to achieve perfection.
Pretty song, TBH I was enjoying Love Plus too much to mod it very thoroughly. Star + Kudostar!
FIX~abalee wrote:
Love Plus:
02:24:814 (1) - end at 02:26:152 (x) - ?
nene:
00:29:591 (3) - seems a bit far from previous.
01:38:572 (9) - ^
02:21:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果你是想要弄小jump的話這裡的spacing最好保持一致,和後面的也一樣.
可以的話把manaka和rinko做到和其他的一樣長.
title & artist的話,我個人建議是譯成 [Valentine no Ai Kotoba](バレンタインの愛言葉), 人名的話把名字在前面 (Saori Hayami, Sakura Tange, Yuko Minaguchi),符合西方習慣.
對了,也許也會有人叫你把topic title也改掉讓整個title能完整顯示(例:S.Hayami, S.Tange, Y.Minaguchi - Valentine no Ai Kotoba),到時改就是了,其實我也不太關心這個.
abalee wrote:
唔..再提點小意見.
Nene:
很多地方都用10%的音量來消slidertick的聲音,其實倒不如把 slider tick rate 改成 0.5,那樣其實可以少加很多綠線,分也不會少很多.現在的話也可以pass只是看起來蛋疼了點.
00:08:381 (4,5) - & 00:11:820 (3,4) -同為 1/1 sapcing不一致,大概是因為一段是0.5x另外一段是0.75x吧,改動一下好點.
whymeman wrote:
I'm seeing the SB objects in the list, but I don't actually see the object itself.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99786 . Also, the pokie.png doesn't look right. the "p" looks more like an uppercase "D". Make sure to check into that as well.
[Nene]
01:57:299 (1,2) - Honestly, this doesn't look very neat. You can try stacking (2) under the slider and moving 01:57:872 (3,1) down a bit.
what? sorry i will reuploadwhymeman wrote:
Where did the Pokie.png go?