JauiPlaY wrote:

hello~
一些建议

[General]
怎么难度名全都有加号lol
hard我觉得不用加号了,其实挺简单

[Easy+]
HDAROD全部-2应该更像个easy吧...如果不愿意的话起码全部-1,现在这个真的略难
map没什么大问题ww

[Normal+]
00:35:407(1) - 多折返一次 Fixed
00:42:074(1) - 这个变速对normal而言稍微有点慢...0.65会好一点0.75X =w=

[Hard+]
00:08:074(6) - 美观起见,稍微往左一点好眼神 <_<
00:51:907(2) - 折返和尾clap 其实这clap本身不是很合...找不到好的...于是不想加太多ww
01:13:241(2) - 美观起见,移到x106y188?当然如果要改的话记得后面的也要移动 fixed

[Axanael+]
00:56:741(3,4) - 真不如一条slider拉到白线...没这一个就少了2w分啊 XSK...(其实真正原因是没地方拉+难度)

抱歉我找不出什么别的问题了XD
so
star~

kanpakyin wrote:

Here I'm (Sorry if I naiz too much lol

[General]

1. Set AudioLeadIn to 1000?Just get a integer.I'll fix this later
2. Unify the Kiai Time if possible.

xD

[Easy+]

1. 00:36:740(3)-How about add a reverse here?However you need to adjust the spacing after do it.It looks better if you add it.
2. 00:51:407(1.2.3)-Little rhythm suggestuin here:Remove (2.3)- Then increse the length of (1)- to 00:51:907- also add a reverse then.Lastly add a note at 00:52:740.
3. 01:35:740(x)-Probably add something here,because it has drum sound here.
4. 01:39:407(x)-This place is extremely not appropriate for a spinner ,it doesn't have any kind of macron

[Normal+]

1. 00:10:907(4)-How about remove whistle?Feel weird if you add a whistle here.fixed
2. 00:34:074,00:34:240(x,x)-Better to add a note there due to accent point,also it may make it fitter then pervious.fixed
3. 00:35:407(1)-Add a reverse here?I feel more comfortable with that.added
4. 00:42:074(1)-I'm really afraid with this,Slider speed change is not a good choice in Normal,However x0.75 is more acceptable then x0.5,I'm sure the best way is dpn't make any change of it.0.75x now
5. 01:04:740(1)-I have few suggestion of this~1,Remove New combo,it will make better to play flow,2.Make a spinner whisch start from 01:03:240- then stop at 01:04:740,3.Remove (1)- and keep the break start from 01:04:740.

Don't like spinner much...so remove new combo

[Hard+]

1. 00:14:074(1-11)-Please consistent the new combo!This combo is obvious longer the others,so I prefer add a new combo at (7)-Added <_<..I just forgot this..lol
2. 00:27:074(1)-How about add a clap at the end of the slider?It sounds great.Just do it if you want.I really prefer to sectioning the song for different hitsound style, so...not changing
3. 00:32:407(1)-^ Same. (Won't mention it again).^
4. 01:02:574(2)-How about make a jump on it?I think it would be fun during gameplay :3 I uses a cross slider instead, nice suggestion though.
   
   【color=#FF0000]01:25:407(1.2)-[/color]I don't know why you use normal hitsound on it but soft hitsound is more suitable than normal hitsound.Fixed~

[Axanael+]

1. 00:20:740(1.2.3.4.1)-In Insane diff,I prefer making a jump than reduce spacing.^^
2. 00:26:074(x)-Maybe add a note here?triplet is more comfortable,I guess..Fixed in another way
3. 01:04:740(1)-Remove new combo due to this note is in a stream,so this note doesn't need a new combo.kk

That's it

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Normal+]
这明显和Easy难度差距有点大了...打算怎么破 做出来就这样了
00:19:407 (1) - 虽然说是加强但感觉没必要加这么高音量 (其他难度倒似乎没这感觉) 虽然没什么感觉还是降了点
01:00:574 (4,1) - 和前面对应的话是不是这俩合到一个slider就好fixed
01:32:574 (2) - 感觉多余删了太空 ;_;

[Hard+]
00:26:907 (1) - 这个以及其他几个,在我的感觉里并不用0.5x这么慢,0.75x甚至原速都无不可 恩...于是改了
00:43:074 - 我觉得这里可以加个音,2也拉出来直接一路斜着下去到下个1,如果这样做,下个1和2可以换new combo...改了...
01:23:907 (5) - 我觉得应该是全节奏点whistle去对音...试了试 还是算了 >_> 空出来似乎比较有感觉

[Axanael+]
00:24:407 (1,2,3) - 这不科学...我的意思是2和3未免有点远了,而且slider到circle会比circle到slider容易些,12小间距23大间距未免有些不合,稍微缩一点?
[attachment=0:be1c3]139.png[/attachment:be1c3]
00:31:740 (8,9) - 实在没有叠的感觉,况且也不好看 改了..当时是懒着想排版 lol
00:35:074 (9) - 建议往上去一点,和下个1容易读成1/2 xD
01:23:907 (5) - 同Hard+^

Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Why so many +s? You might as well raise them all to just Normal, Hard, Insane, Axanael. lol, okay...it was a joke though

[Easy+]

I recommend adding an extra kiai fountain in the middle of the first kiai section like you have on other diffs.

00:21:407 - Add a note? Sounds a bit empty here.

Looks good, spinners are a bit short.

[Normal+]

00:39:740 - Adding a note here will help with the timing of the next slider since it starts on a red tick. fixed~
00:42:907 (2) - Put the new combo here instead of the next note? It makes the 0.75x slider stand out by itself. fixed~
01:23:907 (2) - Lower the volume a bit in this section? fixed

No spinners here means the score is easily maxed out; add one somewhere? ;_; I didn't find anywhere fits spinner..also it isn't that easy to have 4 mod SS due to its difficulty...

[Hard+]

00:42:907 (2) - Add a new combo here for the same reason as Normal+? k fixed
00:50:574 (2,3,4) - Move the 4 a bit farther from the 2; these notes appear while a hitburst is covering them, so it looks like 2-4 is in a doublet. though it's an intentional trick...increased space between 4 and 2

Snapping error here too. oops...fixed

[Axanael+]

01:39:407 (1) - The pattern for the ending is quite hard to read.it's fine >_>

Pretty crazy stuff here. Get an experienced MAT or BAT that's better at the game than I am to testplay this last difficulty and give some comments, since I can't. XD appreciated

人生は一度だ！一度の人生なので遣り直せばいい

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. mp3质量感觉不是很高,还是这歌本来就是这种感觉的?

[Timing]

1. 我总感觉中间独白那段有些off,我觉得中间需要个红线来微调OFFSET:70062, 然后86073再一条红线回到原来的节奏上

[Easy]

1. 00:43:407 (1) - 这里还是去掉whistle音吧, 这音和finish混一起实在感觉不好听. 高潮开始的finish音完全被哨音盖住了, 并没有高潮来的感觉,custom normal finish的音不够强, 建议这里用default finish, 音量70%会更好,个人感觉
2. 00:54:074 (1) - ^
3. 01:26:074 (1) - ^
4. 00:56:407 (3) - 按照你加whistle的模式,这里是不是多加了一个?
5. 01:41:240 spinner - 在这儿结束spinner,然后用70%音量的default finish吧, custom的力道太不足了

[Normal]

1. 00:19:407 (1) - 为什么这里要加个finish? 听着不顺 :/
2. 00:43:407 (2) - 同easy
3. 00:54:074 (1) - ^
4. 01:26:074 (1) - ^
5. 01:04:740 (4) - 用custom normal finish挺好的,干嘛用soft finish,听着反而更怪
6. 01:41:240 (1) - 用70%音量的default finish吧, custom的力道太不足了

[Hard]

1. 00:10:907 (1) - 这里干嘛加whistle
2. 00:19:407 (1) - 感觉音量太大,60%我觉得合适了,另外soft finish和whistle配合实在不好听,去掉finish音吧
3. 00:43:407 (1) - 同easy
4. 00:54:074 (1) - ^
5. 01:26:074 (1) - ^
6. 00:50:574 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列也太无序了吧,不能摆的稍微有造型点么?像这样?或者摆个其他你喜欢的造型
   ATTACH[1.jpg]
7. 01:41:240 (1) - 用70%音量的default finish吧

[Axanael]

1. 00:11:240 (4) - 这里没必要加whistle吧
2. 00:19:407 (1) - 感觉音量太大,60%我觉得合适了,另外soft finish和whistle配合实在不好听,去掉finish音吧
3. 00:43:407 (1) - 同easy
4. 00:54:074 (1) - ^
5. 01:26:073 (1) - ^
6. 01:41:239 (1) - 用70%音量的default finish吧

nice map
star

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. mp3质量感觉不是很高,还是这歌本来就是这种感觉的?file it's from official OP...so...I guess it's fine

[Timing]

1. 我总感觉中间独白那段有些off,我觉得中间需要个红线来微调OFFSET:70062, 然后86073再一条红线回到原来的节奏上

Due to some test play results, I decided not to add these lines...


[Normal]

1. 00:19:407 (1) - 为什么这里要加个finish? 听着不顺 :/ 现在改了下 应该好一些
2. 00:43:407 (2) - 同easy S-finish声音太短了 /.\ 加自定义的原因就是这样
3. 00:54:074 (1) - ^
4. 01:26:074 (1) - ^
5. 01:04:740 (4) - 用custom normal finish挺好的,干嘛用soft finish,听着反而更怪 还是同上的原因...试了很多次 这样结尾个人感觉比较舒服 >_>
6. 01:41:240 (1) - 用70%音量的default finish吧, custom的力道太不足了 抱歉 /.\ 还是一样的原因 配音乐用..默认的太短imo..

[Hard]

1. 00:10:907 (1) - 这里干嘛加whistle fixed
2. 00:19:407 (1) - 感觉音量太大,60%我觉得合适了,另外soft finish和whistle配合实在不好听,去掉finish音吧 fixed
3. 00:43:407 (1) - 同easy 同理由 /.\ ...不是很想改
4. 00:54:074 (1) - ^
5. 01:26:074 (1) - ^
6. 00:50:574 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列也太无序了吧,不能摆的稍微有造型点么?像这样?或者摆个其他你喜欢的造型
   [attachment=0:18d16]1.jpg[/attachment:18d16] 多谢 <_< 原来的想法似乎不是很合适H..
7. 01:41:240 (1) - 用70%音量的default finish吧同理...抱歉

[Axanael]

1. 00:11:240 (4) - 这里没必要加whistle吧 fixed
2. 00:19:407 (1) - 感觉音量太大,60%我觉得合适了,另外soft finish和whistle配合实在不好听,去掉finish音吧fixed
3. 00:43:407 (1) - 同easy同理
4. 00:54:074 (1) - ^
5. 01:26:073 (1) - ^
6. 01:41:239 (1) - 用70%音量的default finish吧同理

nice map
star

Suzully wrote:

I came to mod as random modding (as my criteria).

[General]

• 
  "Easy" has different KIAI (end of 2nd/3rd one). Please make it same as other diffs. Fixed
  
  Tick rate 0.5 is now unrankable. Set it at least 1.0. What? New rules?...alright~ fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:51:407 (1,2,3) - Try the pattern below. That fits the music more for me. Fixed
   [attachment=0:3759d]screenshot291.jpg[/attachment:3759d]
2. 01:34:074 (1,2,3) - ^Fixed

[Normal]

• 
  AR-1. AR6 is kinda high.Sure

1. 00:35:407 (1) - It's kinda hard to read this number of repeat. I recommend you to use one-repeat-slider.Fixed
   [attachment=2:3759d]screenshot289.jpg[/attachment:3759d]
2. 01:04:740 (4) - Add new combo because the spacing changed? lol, I kept changing this for 10 times...fixed
3. 01:23:074 (1) - I feel it doesn't follow the music. Try the pattern below. Nice idea, really. Fixed
   [attachment=1:3759d]screenshot290.jpg[/attachment:3759d]

[Hard]

• 
  OD +2 please because current one is too low as hard difficulty. The main problem with this diff is that ... I can't add OD/HP, if I increase any of them, the star rating would be higher than axanael, which isn't expected....Maybe I just make my Insane too easy? lol...sigh HP+1 in Axanael diff...so fixed
  And also HP+1? On normal, HP is 5 too. ^

1. 00:42:074 (1) - You can make the shape more beautiful, try to use one below. Actually that was intentional, err..fixed anyway
   
   SPOILER

   

   269,88,42074,6,0,B|224:48|148:72|140:128,1,160,4|0

2. 00:56:241 (7,8) - Try Ctrl+R to make the flow better. (That's like drawing a triangle.)Fixed
3. 01:21:740 (3) - Add whistle to the top of slider? That sounds better for me.Sorry, whistle here doesn't appeal to me

[Axanael]

1. 00:59:074 (3,4) - The flow is kinda bad...how about the formation below? Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:00:407 (10) - ^ due to same reason, how about trying Ctrl+R? I guess it will make good flow.^

Good map!
There are many wide spacing overall, but it's able to be played and fun.
Please call me back to recheck after fix.

btw, inb4 I was taught mapping by you.
So, it's my turn for returning the favor to you


EDIT:Oh I forgot to write.
The quality of sound is too low. If you can, please try to find better one.Hmm, I really not sure about this...
maybe you can compare mine to this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26356?
Or is it because of the bass? It might sound like noise/interference, but it's part of music...

kanpakyin wrote:

o__o 好多mat阿...看來我不用來recheck了

歡迎回來