Aya Sakamoto & Ruka Kawada - Oshichau Zo!!‬ · forum‬

hoLysoup

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

kokoroanime wrote:
Hello, I'll just go for the snapping/spacing.
Hi

On Normal

00:12:172 (1): Space this please... done
00:52:862 (2), 00:53:206 (3), and 00:53:551 (1): Don't you think that has to be spaced...? Done
01:04:586 (1): Spacing...^
02:12:862 (1): Spacing..^
02:15:620 (2): ^ ^
02:24:931 until 02:27:000 (1,2,3, and 4): Could you space them right? These are jumps....

00:07:862 (3): Three grids down. I have no clue what this is...
00:08:551 (4): Your snapping... ^

To be honest, most of the beats needs snapping sometimes.
I'm gonna guess that by snapping you mean Distance snapping because otherwise, all the beats are definitely snapped. and even if it's distance snapping you're talking about, the whole normal diff is distance snapped... :\

Thank you and star.

Thank you so much for time to mod and star and kusosu!

Mara

4,906 posts

Joined November 2009

Mara 14 years ago

I see you really work hard. I am not going to mod because my mod would be really awful. Instead, take this star.

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 14 years ago

LunaticMara wrote:
I see you really work hard. I am not going to mod because my mod would be really awful. Instead, take this star.

Thank you so much

S o r d a

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Joined July 2009

S o r d a 14 years ago

♯modreqs

hi>A<

Insane
[*]OD-1?
[*]00:38:034 - Add Note
[*]00:47:172 (3) - delete note?
[*]00:56:310 (4) - Newcombo?
[*]02:30:448 (6) - Newcombo?
[*]02:30:620 (1) - Remove Newcombo
[*]03:24:586 (5) - Newcombo
[*]03:56:828 (6) http://puu.sh/1AMB suggestion~

Hard
[*]00:56:310 (3) - Newcombo
[*]01:46:655 (1) - Remove Newcombo
[*]02:16:310 (3) - New combo
[*]03:25:276 (9) - ^

Normal
Fine>w<

I can not taiko mod sorry
star~

hoLysoup

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Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

S o r d a wrote:
♯modreqs

hi>A<
HellO!
Insane
[*]OD-1? Is it still too high? I think 7 is good.
[*]00:38:034 - Add Note mm, I think it's alright
[*]00:47:172 (3) - delete note? ^
[*]00:56:310 (4) - Newcombo? ^
[*]02:30:448 (6) - Newcombo? Sure
[*]02:30:620 (1) - Remove Newcombo ^
[*]03:24:586 (5) - Newcombo Actually I removed NC at 7
[*]03:56:828 (6) http://puu.sh/1AMB suggestion~ oh~ sure sounds good

Hard
[*]00:56:310 (3) - Newcombo This is fine
[*]01:46:655 (1) - Remove Newcombo sure
[*]02:16:310 (3) - New combo This is fine
[*]03:25:276 (9) - ^ I changed it at 7

Normal
Fine>w<
>w<
I can not taiko mod sorry that's alright
star~

THank you for your time to mod!

winber1

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Joined February 2010

winber1 14 years ago

sorry for the 10 day mod lolololol. (i guess for compensation is that even tho this is over the time limit i set, i will still mod it

accept it plz :3)

Insane

00:49:931(3) - you probably meant to make this S:C1, but the timing section is a little behind.
01:01:138(x) - add note
01:01:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this
01:15:448(1,2,3) - idk if it's the skin or what, but something makes me want this not to be under the previous slider
01:20:448(3) - delete note
01:55:103(4) - failed to read this correctly lol. it's probably just me failing, so you can keep it if you want
02:21:138(x) - add note
02:21:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this note
03:20:276(1) - i would make a jump here and remove combo
03:30:103(x,2) - same as above
04:06:138(x) - add note
04:17:172(4) - nazi D: 1 grid up

some of the anti-spacing stuff i actually have to stare at the approach circles to understand. It's mostly due to the fact that you are combining both the vocals and the drums together, so i feel like stopping when the vocals end, but then 1/2 beat later the drums are playing something, and i just don't expect that (until later, when i started somewhat understand)

Hard

Any reason why stack leniency is completely different than insane?

00:20:448(1) - a little far of a jump for hard?
00:28:896(x) - add note
00:29:586(x) - ^
00:29:931(5) - slider here
00:30:275(x) - add note
01:15:965(2) - i guess it's fine, but i wouldn't anti-space this, or you can add a note at 01:15:793
01:48:724(1..8) - i would just follow vocals more, but it's perfectly readable the way it is
03:47:344(1..5) - ^

seems a bit hard for "hard" (lol, wording sounds ironic). i wouldn't use so much anti-spacing-like things in this difficulty.

Normal

Stack leniency? doesn't really matter tho, at least i don't think it does.

01:04:586(section) - why not just stick with your custom sounds?
01:20:965(1) - move further away from previous note
01:55:620(2) - perhaps you could move this 1/2 beat back and add a note at 01:56:310 with whistle
01:55:655(x) - add note with whistle
02:16:310(1,2,3) - i would unstack these to make it easier to read for a beginner
02:19:069(1,2,3) - ^
02:20:448(x) - add spinner that ends at 02:21:827, and delete the already existing note there
02:35:620(1) - move closer to the end of the slider. you shouldn't use a jump like this here, even one as tiny as this
03:24:586(2,3) - you may want to space the same way you did with 03:19:758(1,2,3)
04:09:413(1) - no jumps plz.
04:19:586(1) - end slider here

There seems to be a pretty big difficulty gap between normal and hard.

nice map! :3
Star~

hoLysoup

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Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

winber1 wrote:
sorry for the 10 day mod lolololol. (i guess for compensation is that even tho this is over the time limit i set, i will still mod it accept it plz :3)
Yes mods are always welcome thank yoU!

Insane

00:49:931(3) - you probably meant to make this S:C1, but the timing section is a little behind. You're right thanks!
01:01:138(x) - add note I'm leaving a space there because it'll be too overmapped there.
01:01:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this Nah I think it's good
01:15:448(1,2,3) - idk if it's the skin or what, but something makes me want this not to be under the previous slider Maybe it's the colour then? Cause I stacked it since it's clustered with beats
01:20:448(3) - delete note Nah
01:55:103(4) - failed to read this correctly lol. it's probably just me failing, so you can keep it if you want LOl ok..
02:21:138(x) - add note ^ same as before
02:21:483(2) - i would just follow vocals more and delete this note ^
03:20:276(1) - i would make a jump here and remove combo I rearranged the sliders so it's easier to read and removed NC
03:30:103(x,2) - same as above This part is fine
04:06:138(x) - add note Nah
04:17:172(4) - nazi D: 1 grid up True. LOL fixed.

some of the anti-spacing stuff i actually have to stare at the approach circles to understand. It's mostly due to the fact that you are combining both the vocals and the drums together, so i feel like stopping when the vocals end, but then 1/2 beat later the drums are playing something, and i just don't expect that (until later, when i started somewhat understand)
haha... yea...
Hard

Any reason why stack leniency is completely different than insane?
No... you're right. I've made them all the same now.
00:20:448(1) - a little far of a jump for hard? Yes, I've switched up the 3 now
00:28:896(x) - add note mm, I think there will be too many beats.
00:29:586(x) - ^ ^
00:29:931(5) - slider here ?
00:30:275(x) - add note ^
01:15:965(2) - i guess it's fine, but i wouldn't anti-space this, or you can add a note at 01:15:793 Yea.. I've spaced it now
01:48:724(1..8) - i would just follow vocals more, but it's perfectly readable the way it is Ok
03:47:344(1..5) - ^ ^

seems a bit hard for "hard" (lol, wording sounds ironic). i wouldn't use so much anti-spacing-like things in this difficulty.
Yea you're right, I've shortened some of the long jumps that I put. I Think I wasn't thinking properly.
Normal

Stack leniency? doesn't really matter tho, at least i don't think it does.
Yea I'mma leave this one.
01:04:586(section) - why not just stick with your custom sounds? Oh... since there are less beats on Normal diff.
01:20:965(1) - move further away from previous note Fixed.
01:55:620(2) - perhaps you could move this 1/2 beat back and add a note at 01:56:310 with whistle Too many beats
01:55:655(x) - add note with whistle ^
02:16:310(1,2,3) - i would unstack these to make it easier to read for a beginner k combined into slider
02:19:069(1,2,3) - ^ ^
02:20:448(x) - add spinner that ends at 02:21:827, and delete the already existing note there ok
02:35:620(1) - move closer to the end of the slider. you shouldn't use a jump like this here, even one as tiny as this Ok.
03:24:586(2,3) - you may want to space the same way you did with 03:19:758(1,2,3) k
04:09:413(1) - no jumps plz. Ok
04:19:586(1) - end slider here Ok

There seems to be a pretty big difficulty gap between normal and hard.
Yes because I didn't make an Easy Diff that's why there's such a gap

nice map! :3
THank you for your time to mod.
Star~

Kudosu!

HakuNoKaemi

3,828 posts

Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 14 years ago

[SB]
Transform "01.png", "0111.png" and "2010-01-25-238287.png" to jpg to make them occupy less space
[Normal]
00:26:310 (1,2,3) - uhm ... confusive watched the previous and after notes... try:

SPOILER

00:26:138 (x) - Add a Hit Circle here
00:26:655 (x) - ^
00:26:827 (x) - ^
00:27:172 (x) - ^
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)

hmmm, you sticked too much to 1/1 - 3/2 rhythmn, you can use 1/2 a little... ( for doublets,triplets,quadruplets )

You should play & control and see where the pattern is confusive for you in [Hard] & [Insane].

hoLysoup

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Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[SB]
Transform "01.png", "0111.png" and "2010-01-25-238287.png" to jpg to make them occupy less space
yup I've changed them.
[Normal]
00:26:310 (1,2,3) - uhm ... confusive watched the previous and after notes... try:
SPOILER
00:26:138 (x) - Add a Hit Circle here
00:26:655 (x) - ^
00:26:827 (x) - ^
00:27:172 (x) - ^
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)
I think it's perfectly fine... the spacing is correct as well and those notes aren't stacked so I don't see why it's causing confusion.

hmmm, you sticked too much to 1/1 - 3/2 rhythmn, you can use 1/2 a little... ( for doublets,triplets,quadruplets )
well it's an Easy/Normal diff so I try not to use stacks, triplets too much. Double stacks I do use.

You should play & control and see where the pattern is confusive for you in [Hard] & [Insane].

... Hard and Insane are fine imo. and confusing you mean?
how come the mod was half in spoilbox? LOL thank you though. I'm guessing you didn't like the map?

HakuNoKaemi

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Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 14 years ago

I do use a spoilbox when it's a mod you should see in group like proposing a pattern or changing a pattern
i did like the map,
for the [Normal], that pattern was confusive at that point, means when played it seemed strange, rereplayed and it seemed strange.. The rhythmn you created with the earlier note did broke there, and i did use a doublet-quadruplet plus moved the slider and it felt good ( see the spoiler ).
Something similiar happened in the other 2, but, as i'm not sure in modding harder Hard or Harder diff's, i said to try to AutoMod, as i found something strange in some parts, but could sense them much.

(didn't remembered to give the star at the end >.<)

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 14 years ago

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
I do use a spoilbox when it's a mod you should see in group like proposing a pattern or changing a pattern
i did like the map,
for the [Normal], that pattern was confusive at that point, means when played it seemed strange, rereplayed and it seemed strange.. The rhythmn you created with the earlier note did broke there, and i did use a doublet-quadruplet plus moved the slider and it felt good ( see the spoiler ).
Something similiar happened in the other 2, but, as i'm not sure in modding harder Hard or Harder diff's, i said to try to AutoMod, as i found something strange in some parts, but could sense them much.

(didn't remembered to give the star at the end >.<)

Ohh, that's what you meant ok. Yeah but still, I think I'm gonna pass on that because I think that's too many consecutive beats for Easy/Normal diff. That's why I didn't want to put that thanks a lot though!

HakuNoKaemi

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Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 14 years ago

oki, then do this only

[Normal]
00:27:689 (6) - Move it to 00:27:517 (6)

it will feel more correct and follow voice
No Kudosu for this >.<

Colin Hou

osu! Alumni

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Joined November 2009

Colin Hou 14 years ago

slow for being slow :P

[General]:

403899.jpg, 800x600 or smaller plz

[Insane]:

00:09:414 (4,5) - spacing
00:10:103 (5,1) - ^
00:11:827 (5) - new combo
00:14:069 (4,5) - spacing
00:38:207 (3,1) - ^
01:23:724 (1,2) - too close, at least use x1.2 for this
01:58:896 (3,1) - spacing, keep x1.2 plz
02:10:103 (1,2) - spacing, use x1.6
02:23:896 (3,1) - spacing, too close
03:47:000 (1,2) - exchange new combo
03:54:069 (1,2) - ^
03:59:586 (1,2,3) - spacing
04:09:069 (1,2) - exchange new combo
04:19:931 (1) - ctrl+r?
03:55:448 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]:

00:39:240 (7) - new combo
00:40:102 (2,3,4) - spacing
02:36:482 (4,5,6) - ^
02:42:689 (2,3,4) - ^
02:44:931 (5,6,1) - ^
03:56:310 (4,5,6) - ^
04:14:758 (1,2) - exchange new combo
04:16:138 (1,2) - ^
04:17:517 (1,2) - ^
04:28:551 (3,1,2) - spacing

star~ very great one as a first map ^^

hoLysoup

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Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

Colin Hou wrote:
slow for being slow
or stylish
[General]:
403899.jpg, 800x600 or smaller plz
done
[Insane]:
00:09:414 (4,5) - spacing Fixed
00:10:103 (5,1) - ^ ^
00:11:827 (5) - new combo I think this is ok
00:14:069 (4,5) - spacing fixed
00:38:207 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:23:724 (1,2) - too close, at least use x1.2 for this ^
01:58:896 (3,1) - spacing, keep x1.2 plz ^
02:10:103 (1,2) - spacing, use x1.6 ^
02:23:896 (3,1) - spacing, too close ^
03:47:000 (1,2) - exchange new combo ^
03:54:069 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:59:586 (1,2,3) - spacing ^
04:09:069 (1,2) - exchange new combo ^
04:19:931 (1) - ctrl+r? mm sure
03:55:448 (1,2) - ^
^

[Hard]:
00:39:240 (7) - new combo fixed
00:40:102 (2,3,4) - spacing ^
02:36:482 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:42:689 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:44:931 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
03:56:310 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
04:14:758 (1,2) - exchange new combo I think these are fine
04:16:138 (1,2) - ^ ^
04:17:517 (1,2) - ^ ^
04:28:551 (3,1,2) - spacing
^

star~ very great one as a first map ^^

Thank you for time to mod

kudOsu! <- see what I did there?

lkp

270 posts

Joined May 2010

lkp 14 years ago

Hiiii

[Normal]

02:12:862 (1) - You add new combo here,is ok.But why you don't add new combo in 02:15:620 (2)?
02:23:206 (1) - End of spinner in 02:24:241,since the next note is too far.
02:32:862 (4) - New combo?
03:41:827 (7) - New combo and 03:42:172 (1) - remove new combo.
03:56:655 (1) - End of spinner in 03:58:034
04:06:655 (4) - New combo and 04:07:344 (1) - remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:17:689 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 4 drid left (lv.4)
00:17:862 (1) - Move 1 grid up (lv.4)
00:18:034 (2) - Move 2 drid up (lv.4)
00:18:034 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:46:655 (4) - New combo.
00:53:551 (7) - ^
00:59:586 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:068 (1) - ^
04:16:483 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.

[Insane]

00:56:310 (4) - New combo and 00:56:828 (1) - remove it.
fine.

Sorry for my poor eng..t^t
Nice map

hoLysoup

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Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

lkp wrote:
Hiiii
hello!!!
[Normal]

02:12:862 (1) - You add new combo here,is ok.But why you don't add new combo in 02:15:620 (2)? ok
02:23:206 (1) - End of spinner in 02:24:241,since the next note is too far. I changed it to slider
02:32:862 (4) - New combo? nah
03:41:827 (7) - New combo and 03:42:172 (1) - remove new combo.^
03:56:655 (1) - End of spinner in 03:58:034 ^
04:06:655 (4) - New combo and 04:07:344 (1) - remove new combo. ^

[Hard]

00:17:689 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 4 drid left (lv.4) ok
00:17:862 (1) - Move 1 grid up (lv.4) ^
00:18:034 (2) - Move 2 drid up (lv.4) ^
00:18:034 (2,3) - Spacing. fixed
00:46:655 (4) - New combo.^
00:53:551 (7) - ^ ^
00:59:586 (1) - Remove new combo.this one is nono
01:19:068 (1) - ^ ^
04:16:483 (2,3) - Spacing,too far.fixeD

[Insane]

00:56:310 (4) - New combo and 00:56:828 (1) - remove it. nah
fine.

Sorry for my poor eng..t^t your english is perfectly fine
Nice map
thank you!!

Thank you for your time to mod

kudOsu!

banvi

1,793 posts

Joined June 2009

banvi 14 years ago

hihi~

[All diff(except for taiko)]
01:20:965 - resnap kiai end here
02:40:965 - ^
03:52:689 - ^
04:14:758 - ^

[Normal]
OD is too high for normal. OD -2 please
01:47:172 (4) remove whistle to silder's body
01:48:724 ~ 01:51:138 add hitsound more??
02:16:310 (1) remove whistle to silder's body
02:19:069 (1) ^
02:35:965 (2,3,4,5) remove whistle or clap
04:09:758 (2,3,4,5) ^
04:27:344 (1) add whistle at the end?
04:30:103 (1) ^

[Hard]
00:10:965 (3,4,5,6,7) adjust spacing
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) ^
01:07:344 (4) move 2 grid down and 2 grid right?(grid lv4)
01:18:379 (5) new combo
01:19:068 (1) remove new combo
01:25:793 (8,1) confused a bit for me because spacing is far comparing with 01:25:103 (6,7).
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) ^
02:23:206 (1) adjust symmetry
02:23:896 (3) ^
03:05:792 (1,2) spacing is close
03:20:620 (4) move 1 grid up & 1 grid right
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) ^

[Insane]
00:17:690 ~ 00:26:138 add soft-default whistle like [Hard]??
00:28:034 (4,5) add soft-default whistle by 1/2 beat??
00:33:896 (6) move 1 grid down & 1 grid right
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) ^
01:20:103 (1,2,3,4) adjust spacing
01:46:138 (1) move 2 grid left & 3 grid up?
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) ^
03:20:276 (3) adjust symmetry
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) ^
04:12:172 (5) adjust symmetry
04:15:793 (4,1) move 1 grid up?
04:21:827 (3) move upward making the triangle with (1,2,3)??

Sorry for my poor english. orz
Nice map for your 1st map!
star~

hoLysoup

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Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

banvi wrote:
hihi~
Hi~~
[All diff(except for taiko)]
01:20:965 - resnap kiai end here fixed
02:40:965 - ^ ^
03:52:689 - ^ ^
04:14:758 - ^ ^

[Normal]
OD is too high for normal. OD -2 please fixed
01:47:172 (4) remove whistle to silder's body ok
01:48:724 ~ 01:51:138 add hitsound more?? ehh think it will be too much
02:16:310 (1) remove whistle to silder's body this is ok I think
02:19:069 (1) ^ ^
02:35:965 (2,3,4,5) remove whistle or clap oh sure
04:09:758 (2,3,4,5) ^ ^
04:27:344 (1) add whistle at the end? sure
04:30:103 (1) ^ ^

[Hard]
00:10:965 (3,4,5,6,7) adjust spacing fixed
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo I think this is alright..
00:59:586 (1) ^ ^
01:07:344 (4) move 2 grid down and 2 grid right?(grid lv4) k i've made it symmetric
01:18:379 (5) new combo ok
01:19:068 (1) remove new combo ok
01:25:793 (8,1) confused a bit for me because spacing is far comparing with 01:25:103 (6,7). oh.. ok I've fixed this
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo this is alright I think
02:19:586 (1) ^ ^
02:23:206 (1) adjust symmetry ok
02:23:896 (3) ^ ^
03:05:792 (1,2) spacing is close fixed
03:20:620 (4) move 1 grid up & 1 grid right done
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo same as before~
03:28:551 (1) ^ ^

[Insane]
00:17:690 ~ 00:26:138 add soft-default whistle like [Hard]?? mm~ I think it's alright with the silentness
00:28:034 (4,5) add soft-default whistle by 1/2 beat?? sure
00:33:896 (6) move 1 grid down & 1 grid right fixed
00:56:827 (1) remove new combo same as before~
00:59:586 (1) ^ ^
01:20:103 (1,2,3,4) adjust spacing fixed
01:46:138 (1) move 2 grid left & 3 grid up? ok
02:16:827 (1) remove new combo ^same as before
02:19:586 (1) ^ ^
03:20:276 (3) adjust symmetry ok
03:25:793 (1) remove new combo same as before
03:28:551 (1) ^ ^
04:12:172 (5) adjust symmetry lol I don't know how.. cuase this slider is super long :O
04:15:793 (4,1) move 1 grid up? done
04:21:827 (3) move upward making the triangle with (1,2,3)?? Sure

Sorry for my poor english. orz Your english is perfect :>
Nice map for your 1st map! Thank you !
star~

Thank you for your time to mod

al2e10

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al2e10 14 years ago

*by AL2 mod queue.

[Insane]
00:35:620 (7) - I think remove it and change 00:35:793 (8) - to be a new combo. After. remove 00:35:965 (1) new combo. Is much better.
00:48:034 (5,6) - Spacing problem.
01:22:345 (1) - Remove clap
01:23:724 (1) - ^
01:24:586 (5) - Clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - clap
Or
01:24:931 (7) - Remove clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - Finish
02:44:414 (3-2nd) - Finish
03:24:586 (5) - New comob
03:54:069 (1) - Remove clap
03:55:448 (1) - ^
03:56:310 (3,4,5,6) - Red solution is much better than adding clap like this.

[All]
Well, STAR.

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

KingsAL2 wrote:
*by AL2 mod queue.

[Insane]
00:35:620 (7) - I think remove it and change 00:35:793 (8) - to be a new combo. After. remove 00:35:965 (1) new combo. Is much better. fixed
00:48:034 (5,6) - Spacing problem. fixed
01:22:345 (1) - Remove clap ok
01:23:724 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:586 (5) - Clap ^
01:25:103 (8-1st) - clap ^
Or
01:24:931 (7) - Remove clap
01:25:103 (8-1st) - Finish
02:44:414 (3-2nd) - Finish ok
03:24:586 (5) - New comob ok
03:54:069 (1) - Remove clap fixed
03:55:448 (1) - ^ ^
03:56:310 (3,4,5,6) - Red solution is much better than adding clap like this. k I've fixed it to make it sound better

[All]
Well, STAR.
Thank you!

Thank you for hitsound mod mostly. I needed those

Numbers 596108

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2011

773 posts

Joined November 2009

Numbers 596108 14 years ago

Mod Request from hoLysoup (From 596108's Mod Queue)

Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

00:01:137 174.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:56:129 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 00:56:129
01:04:578 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:16:129 1.0x - N - -> OK
02:16:129 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 02:16:310
02:24:578 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:46:647 1.0x - N - -> OK
03:25:095 1.5x - N - -> Currect to 03:25:275
03:34:922 1.0x - K - -> OK
04:21:819 1.0x - N - -> OK

Notes :

00:28:723 (119) -

01:00:275 (X) - Remove the Break Time
01:14:930 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) -

01:25:275 (1) - Change to Slider?
01:48:551 (46,47) -

01:53:378 (75) -

03:26:310 (19) -

03:29:068 (22) -

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 7 -> OK
Circle Size - 5 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 4 -> OK

Total Result
Song favorite degree : 9 / 10
Note Pattern : 57 / 70
Other wrong : 10 / 10
Timing wrong : 10 / 10

Score : 86 / 100

MM \:D/
the 30th mod request , and MM is friend , so Kudosu star x2
good luck :3

OzzyOzrock

5,185 posts

Joined August 2010

OzzyOzrock 14 years ago

He has shown me this. It's great.

AND MOE

net45291

net45291 14 years ago

Soup > ~ <b ~!

val0108

1,430 posts

Joined January 2010

val0108 14 years ago

hey o/

[General]
Please put just snap timing line All diff.

[Normal]
00:25:965 - add note
01:25:103 (1) - slider end here 01:25:620 -
02:24:586 - add note
04:13:206 (2,3) - small overlap

[Hard]
00:56:310 (3) - new combo
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:24:586 (3) - so near.Please put far form 2.
01:49:241 (3,4) - ^
01:49:931 (5,6) - ^
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
03:04:413 (1) - ^
03:25:276 (3) - new combo
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:49:758 (5) - Please put far from Next 1 slider.
04:02:343 (1) - remove new combo
04:28:034 (2,3,1) - Put just stack.

[Insane]
00:35:448 (6) - put just stack
00:43:724 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:310 (4) - new combo
00:56:828 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:586 (1) - ^
01:23:034 (3) - just stack end slider
01:55:103 (4) - I thought slider here...
02:16:310 (3) - new combo
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:586 (1) - ^
02:32:172 (1,2,3) - x:488 y:80
02:40:793 (5) - just stack
03:22:517 (2) - Ctl+R?
03:25:276 (3) - new combo
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:551 (1) - ^
03:35:965 (4) - new combo
03:54:758 (3) - just stuck end slider
04:32:000 (6) - new combo
04:32:172 (1) - remove new combo

+50satr

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

val0108 wrote:
hey o/
Hi~
[General]
Please put just snap timing line All diff. ok

[Normal]
00:25:965 - add note ok
01:25:103 (1) - slider end here 01:25:620 ok
02:24:586 - add note ok
04:13:206 (2,3) - small overlap fixed

[Hard]
00:56:310 (3) - new combo ok
00:56:827 (1) - Remove new combo ok
00:59:586 (1) - ^ ok
01:24:586 (3) - so near.Please put far form 2. ok
01:49:241 (3,4) - ^ ok
01:49:931 (5,6) - ^ ok
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo ok
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ok
03:04:413 (1) - ^ ok
03:25:276 (3) - new combo ok
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo ok
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ok
03:49:758 (5) - Please put far from Next 1 slider. ok
04:02:343 (1) - remove new combo ok
04:28:034 (2,3,1) - Put just stack. mm I don't understand.. :C

[Insane]
00:35:448 (6) - put just stack ok
00:43:724 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:56:310 (4) - new combo ok
00:56:828 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:59:586 (1) - ^ ok
01:23:034 (3) - just stack end slider ok
01:55:103 (4) - I thought slider here... oh haha sorry...
02:16:310 (3) - new combo ok
02:16:827 (1) - remove new combo ok
02:19:586 (1) - ^ ok
02:32:172 (1,2,3) - x:488 y:80 ok
02:40:793 (5) - just stack ok
03:22:517 (2) - Ctl+R? sure
03:25:276 (3) - new combo ok
03:25:793 (1) - remove new combo ok
03:28:551 (1) - ^ ok
03:35:965 (4) - new combo ok
03:54:758 (3) - just stuck end slider ok
04:32:000 (6) - new combo ok
04:32:172 (1) - remove new combo ok

+50star thank you so much

THanks for your time to mod

net45291 wrote:
Soup > ~ <b ~!

Thank you!

Yusu Aoi

214 posts

Joined October 2009

Yusu Aoi 14 years ago

Hi!!:)
Here's my mod:)

Easy:
Nothing found:)

Hard:
00:41:827 new combo?
01:07:689 new combo?

Insane:
00:42:517 (5) 2 grids up?

Catch a Star!

No Kudosu, pls

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

ShiroKitty wrote:
Hi!!:)
Here's my mod:)
Hi~~~!

Easy:
Nothing found:) :)

Hard:
00:41:827 new combo? ok
01:07:689 new combo? ok

Insane:
00:42:517 (5) 2 grids up? sure

Catch a Star!
No Kudosu, pls

Thank yoU~

MoodyRPG

2,754 posts

Joined August 2010

MoodyRPG 14 years ago

[Normal]

00:32:862 (7) - New combo
01:59:413 (6) - Maybe new combo?
04:00:103 (3) - Make symetric with (1)

[Hard]

01:50:448 (4) - Make symetric with (2)

[Insane]

Fine

Star~

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

MoodyRPG wrote:
[Normal]

00:32:862 (7) - New combo
01:59:413 (6) - Maybe new combo?
04:00:103 (3) - Make symetric with (1)

[Hard]

01:50:448 (4) - Make symetric with (2)

[Insane]

Fine

Star~

all fixed~

Sakura

osu! Alumni

7,979 posts

Joined March 2010

Sakura 14 years ago

Holy cow! you've improved a lot since the last time i saw this map O_O this might actually be the newbie mapper map i've had the most fun with.
[General]
Combo colors 2 and 3 are pretty similar and in a row and become quite annoying to play sometimes http://puu.sh/2EV5

[Insane]
I think AR-1 would be better to be easier to read those short sliders (specially the ones that are after a note, ending on the same spot of that note) better.
02:40:448 (3,4,5,6) - This is clearly a confusing pattern, instead of going back and forth, stack on one side, then on the next?.
02:46:655 - I recommend you make this break shorter.
03:54:758 (3) - Semi-Hidden, might be good to move it a bit.
04:05:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing inconsistence.
04:11:138 (2,3) - Not a spot for a jump.

[MM's Taiko]
01:59:757 (9) - katsu instead?

[Normal]
04:01:138 (1) - You may want to switch to a different color here (color hax) because the dark blue color is blending with the girl's hair on the storyboard picture.

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

Sakura Hana wrote:
Holy cow! you've improved a lot since the last time i saw this map O_O this might actually be the newbie mapper map i've had the most fun with. :D thank yOU!
[General]
Combo colors 2 and 3 are pretty similar and in a row and become quite annoying to play sometimes http://puu.sh/2EV5
ok I've darkened combo colour 3
[Insane]
I think AR-1 would be better to be easier to read those short sliders (specially the ones that are after a note, ending on the same spot of that note) better. Sure why not
02:40:448 (3,4,5,6) - This is clearly a confusing pattern, instead of going back and forth, stack on one side, then on the next? fixed
02:46:655 - I recommend you make this break shorter. But 16m is too much according to osuplayer111 so and I want this to be ranked
03:54:758 (3) - Semi-Hidden, might be good to move it a bit. fixed
04:05:103 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing inconsistence. fixed
04:11:138 (2,3) - Not a spot for a jump. fixed and made the slider blanket like

[MM's Taiko]
01:59:757 (9) - katsu instead? I'll pm MM

[Normal]
04:01:138 (1) - You may want to switch to a different color here (color hax) because the dark blue color is blending with the girl's hair on the storyboard picture. fixed

yAy~ thankyouthankyou~

Sakura

osu! Alumni

7,979 posts

Joined March 2010

Sakura 14 years ago

There's a couple extra things i would like you to consider before bubbling this.

[General]
Colors 2 and 3 are still very similar in gameplay because of the skin, i really recommend you change the dark blue to something else and probably lighter so it doesnt blend with the girl's blue hair in the storyboard.

[Insane]
After further consideration due to the length of the map that HP drain might be a bit too much, specially since you can barely regain HP at all unless it's during kiai, and there's a section where you even LOSE HP with that hp drain, so might consider lowering it by 1 or 2 ticks.

Edit: This is a pretty fun and enjoyable for a first map i'm amazed, and i'd like to see other players enjoy this mapset as well, and such, i can tell you that your map is now Bubbled~

whymeman

osu! Alumni

3,432 posts

Joined November 2008

whymeman 14 years ago

Alright then. To start off...

Glad you took the time to learn on working with the Storyboard yourself, but there are some things that does need to be fixed.....

dot.png doesn't exist. Delete those out.
No fade for the anime logo?
The pluses aren't doing much.... Using images smaller than the background for the pulses makes it look like the background is shrinking and reduces the effect.
Where is Booklet 01.jpg?
I see an extra 403899.jpg, but its not actually there.

[Normal]

Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)

[MM's Taiko]

02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)

(To make things worse, the short spinners actually crashed my osu!....)

[Insane]

Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)

Could try turning up the Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty to 8 (check your spinners if you do adjust the OD). Also, Combo Color #3 seems to be giving some visability problems at different parts of the map. See if you can make this color lighter or change it with another color (but the change has to be done with all difficulties as well).

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

whymeman wrote:
Alright then. To start off...
Thank you sir
Glad you took the time to learn on working with the Storyboard yourself, but there are some things that does need to be fixed.....

dot.png doesn't exist. Delete those out. fixed
No fade for the anime logo? fixed
The pluses aren't doing much.... Using images smaller than the background for the pulses makes it look like the background is shrinking and reduces the effect. omg fixed this took me a while
Where is Booklet 01.jpg? Oh.. fixed
I see an extra 403899.jpg, but its not actually there. fixed

[Normal]

Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
sorry, fixed.

[MM's Taiko] I will msg MM about this

02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)

(To make things worse, the short spinners actually crashed my osu!....)

[Insane]

Please DO NOT disable stacking. Its unrankable. (!)
fixed
Could try turning up the Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty to 8 (check your spinners if you do adjust the OD). Also, Combo Color #3 seems to be giving some visability problems at different parts of the map. See if you can make this color lighter or change it with another color (but the change has to be done with all difficulties as well). I do think AR needs to be higher so I turned it up. I left the OD at 7 however because I think it's too hard to get 300s with OD 8. I have colorhaxed the areas where approachcircles blend in with the BG.

MMzz

Elite Mapper

3,979 posts

Joined June 2009

MMzz 14 years ago

whymeman wrote:
[MM's Taiko]

02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)

Ninja spinners are used frequently inside the TnT game, (Mint Tears and Jyoubutsu 2000, have several that are even shorter than this) and this spinner isn't very "ninja". With that being said i'm not removing this.

Sander-Don

1,282 posts

Joined March 2010

Sander-Don 14 years ago

MMzz is right, those do happen to be an authentic part of taiko.
Just because some people can't hit it, doesn't make it unauthentic / unrankable.

Derekku

COOL DUDE

7,270 posts

Joined March 2009

Derekku 14 years ago

(Was asked to check the Taiko spinners)

Taiko spinners are different than osu!standard ones because they're completely visible on the scrolling bar, so I suppose these ones are fine. I really don't recommend making them that short, but they're not against any rules. :/

OzzyOzrock

5,185 posts

Joined August 2010

OzzyOzrock 14 years ago

And if those spinners actually crashed your osu!... well...

whymeman

osu! Alumni

3,432 posts

Joined November 2008

whymeman 14 years ago

MMzz wrote:
whymeman wrote:
[MM's Taiko]

02:45:275 (1) - Please, DO NOT use ninja spinners in any map. The use of those is already outdated and unrankable. Replace the spinner with some notes or a drum roll. If not, then try to make the spinner longer please. (!)
03:56:999 (1) - ^ (!)
Ninja spinners are used frequently inside the TnT game, (Mint Tears and Jyoubutsu 2000, have several that are even shorter than this) and this spinner isn't very "ninja". With that being said i'm not removing this.

So you're telling me that a really short spinner is okay to use based on something done from another game to a non-authentic map? Seriously, not everything from another game is perfect and has to be copied note for note. If this was an actual Taiko authentic map, then I would be saying otherwise. I'll let it stay this time though but seriously, there are better choices of notes to use.

OzzyOzrock

5,185 posts

Joined August 2010

OzzyOzrock 14 years ago

MMzz maps authentically. >_>

Maybe not in the same sense, but.. lol

Last edited by OzzyOzrock 14 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Sander-Don

1,282 posts

Joined March 2010

Sander-Don 14 years ago

.... ^

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 14 years ago

[General]

Title is wrong. You should change it to "Oshichau Zo!!" and do a full submission.

[MM's Taiko]

01:00:448 (x) - Remove this break.

That's all, pretty nice map ^_^

Make sure to fix both things and I'll rank this beauty.

hoLysoup

1,846 posts

Joined September 2009

Topic Starter

hoLysoup 14 years ago

osuplayer111 wrote:
[General]

Title is wrong. You should change it to "Oshichau Zo!!" and do a full submission.

[MM's Taiko]

01:00:448 (x) - Remove this break.

That's all, pretty nice map ^_^

Make sure to fix both things and I'll rank this beauty.

All fixed sir

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator